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>What is this thread about?
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>Can you elaborate more?
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Tuner
Gib me Skittles
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>>30223004
>Let it happen? Painful, but he is determined - and they did maybe earn it, unlike Corona.

Although perhaps deserving the most important thing is to obtain genuine confessions and information about the other operatives active rebels, torture and brutality will only serve to fuel the fire of rebellion, first of all must be punished to the extent of the crime, not repeat the mistakes of the past prevent what happened to Mocha again

>Demand that you be there to make sure he doesn't go too far? Also rough on you, but maybe needed...
Protect Anon from yourself? Because no, he will eventually appreciate your value and recognize your importance how an good ally in place and only be a triple agent

>Ask for some time to work on them yourself? If you can't get the names, it'll be a serious mark against you.
I doubt that Thunderlane receive anything more from them than insults and ridicule for his betrayal, but what if they say something that could compromise Vapor Trail? It is better to be prepared to be able to separate the truth from the lies

>Plead for him to wait to find another way?
Another raid may be made after completing the first "interview", perhaps reporting to Candance of the capture, she could assist in the interrogation and obtain better results than the "methods" of Anon

Anonymous cannot order the use of magic to take a confession? I doubt that some pony wants to collaborate in something so drastic or unethical but I would like to explore the option
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Reminder, mares are the worst slave and you will spend more time cuddle fucking than working as you would with a stallion.
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>>30226277
Cuddle fucking is part of her job description.
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Corona getting spayed when?
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>>30226307
This anon gets it.
> don't forget pets and kisses too
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>>30226307
This just proves you are a white knight and only able to get affection from a flesh light.
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>>30226277
What if I'm a gaynigga
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>>30226661
Make your slaves crossdress in genital imprinting clothes.
Let them fidget and squirm as the rubbing keeps them always on edge.
The constant cock drool, the constant puffied arousal, your slaves just being driven with lust until the day you let them finally go naked and orgy.
One stallion shall be chosen then to be your house slave.
Whether for his endowment or his manners, he will your cock sleeve, your prostrate warmer, a fluffer.
His life lived in labor now lavishing you in love.
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I'm getting myself a mare and stallion at the least.

We have no idea of how long a pone would live in relation to a human, especially when factoring in earth being a far from idea environment for them. Pones might only last as long as a dog or cat. And they will be expensive until supply meets demand.

Thus I want a breeding pair, two snugly poners to warm my bed and foals later to carry on the snuggles should the parents be short lived.
Also allows you to train/imprint the lil ones from birth
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Born slaves from birth are best slaves.
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>>30226277
>implying this isn't the entire point of buying one in the first place

priorities anon
1. cuddle / fucking
2.anything else
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>>30219310

Seems I get to christen the new thread with some of my green.

> You're glad the ponies can perform their evening ablutions on their own. It almost feels.. normal.
> Somehow you understand that routine is key for getting past the trauma.
> You will still need help. Professional, if possible. But someone kind. Probably a woman.
> The ponies have a hard time accepting you.
> There's not much choice in that, not if you want to be absolutely certain they're okay. But 'subjecting' them to multiple men doesn't sound right.
> Internet probably has your back.
> You do your own evening stuff - shower, teeth, quick wash. Well, sometimes it's midnight stuff, or early morning stuff.
> Programmer's schedule. Your excuse.
> Then you quickly check on your guests. They are in bed. You still can't understand how they handle blankets and such, but they're covered up.
> Twilight is already asleep. Rarity glances at you, but doesn't say anything.
"Sleep well." Simple and it does the job.
> You leave the lights on, but dim them some more. You hope that's relaxing.
> Gotta remember to ask them.
> And now you're back at your screens. You've got a ton of articles bookmarked, but you ignore those and look for pony-friendly websites.
> There have to be some, right? PETA, if no one else, though you don't quite trust them. Too many rumors around.
> There are a few big hits way up on the Google results.
> "Pony Protection Society"
> You like the design of their webpage.
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>>30227195

> You decide you like what you've read. These people steal or buy ponies from abusive owners and provide living facilities.
> Law says nothing yet about owning the creatures, so it's similarly vague on stealing them.
> They also have initiatives to introduce legislature. Pressuring government to ban pony slavery and give them rights.
> It will probably go through, but not quite that soon.
> Whatever, they list vets on their staff, so you fire off an email, explaining your situation and asking for advice.
> Hopefully, your guests' fame will net you some assistance.
> That done, you go back to reading.
> There's a lot about pony physiology. You briefly wonder how they got that info.
> Don't want to go too far down that line of thinking. At least the information might be useful.
> You also get some news from the office. Apparently, the takeover is going well and you should have your money on schedule.
> A lot of people are unhappy with the sale. Some of the best ones even resigned on the spot.
> You write back with strict instructions that they are to be given their departure bonuses anyway.
> You try to be a good boss, even while you stab them in the back.
> But you ignore their personal emails, asking you what the fuck is wrong. You don't have the energy to go into that.
> Most people don't care about the ponies other than a curiosity.
> You didn't, until you saw what was happening.
*Yawn*
> This time, you manage to drag yourself to the couch before falling asleep.
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>>30227199

> You wake up and almost jump off the couch.
> Rarity is sitting on the floor, her face not five inches from yours.
> "You can make everything alright, can't you?" she pleads as soon as you open your eyes.
> "You can get all my friends back. They'll be fine?"
> You're not awake enough for this, but you sit up and instinctively reach out your hand.
> She shies away a little, but lets you touch her face.
"I'll do everything I can."
> Best promise you can make.
> She chooses to understand it her way - as an absolute oath that everything will be okay at the end.
> Maybe not a smart idea, but the way her eyes are glistening, you don't have the heart to disabuse her of the notion.
> Change the topic, quick!
"Would you like some breakfast?"
> She thinks about it.
> "An omelette would be lovely, now that I think about it."
> The change in her is.. surprising. But welcome.
> "In fact, I know *the* perfect recipe for an omelette. I can do it myself-"
> She remembers her horn and falls silent.
> "At least, I *used* to be able to do it myself."
> You pointedly don't mention how Earth ponies can work their tools without levitation magic.
"Okay, how about you tell me what to do and I'll make it?"
> You were afraid she would get depressed again, but that seems to have done the trick.
> "Oh, yes, I suppose that could work!"
"Okay, go and check in the fridge if we have everything we need. I'll just go wash quickly."
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I wish to use slave ponies as toilets
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>>30227205

> She trots off toward the kitchen. You wonder what had caused her mood shift. It doesn't seem plausible.
> You go and run the water in the bathroom, then quietly sneak back.
> Rarity is sitting in the middle of the kitchen, head bowed. You even hear a sniffle.
> Why would she pretend?
> "M-master?"
> Second jump scare of the day. You didn't notice Twilight standing just inside the bedroom. She was probably wondering why you were spying on her friend.
> There's no good explanation, so you don't even try.
"Good morning, Twilight. We were just about to cook an omelette."
> She looks like she wants to press the question, but then closes her mouth and looks down.
> "That sounds good, s-" she stops. "Anonymous."
> You guess the slavers had beaten that lesson quite deeply into her. But Rarity doesn't seem to be so deferent.
> Damn, you need a psychiatrist!
> Twilight seems embarrassed about her slip. You make sure to give her your most disarming smile.
> You walk up to Rarity and crouch down. A few more days around the ponies and you could be an honorary Slav.
"What's wrong? You can tell me, I won't mind."
> She thinks about it.
> "No, I'm fine, really. I just have to keep a positive attitude, that's all. Everything will be just fine."
> Really sounds as if she's desperate to convince herself.
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>>30227213

> She takes several deep breaths.
> "Okay, let's see about that omelette!"
> ...
> You've made.. something. Well, mostly, you made a mess, but Rarity assures you it's edible.
> You manage not to burn it too badly.
> Why did you even bother to furnish the kitchen? Was it just habit? All you really need is a microwave and a fridge.
> Blender comes in handy at times.
> You've used the induction stove for the first time. Still has that new-induction-stove smell.
> Omelette is a little crunchy, but ponies don't seem to mind. You don't either, floating on a high of pride and accomplishment.
> Why did you even order eggs the previous day?
> After breakfast, Twilight seems to have something on her mind.
> "Anonymous?" she asks, using the more formal full name.
"Yes?"
> "I was wondering- do you have any books about your world? History, or something that would tell me more about your people?"
"Huh, I don't have anything like that. Why are you asking?"
> Horse looks sheepish. It's almost her normal self. Well, 'normal' from what you've seen in cartoons. You don't know how accurate those were.
> "I was hoping I could learn more about your people. I still want to complete my mission. The other..." she falls silent and glances at her back.
> She's remembering what she lost.
> But she forces herself to continue. "Other princesses are still relying on me."
> "I want to speak with your leaders and present our plea."
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>>30227220

> She's thinking about politics and the wellbeing of her people, after what she's been through?
> Seems your instinct was right - when she's worrying about others, she doesn't focus on her own pain.
"Well, I don't have any books, but you can use the Internet."
> Twilight looks hopeful. "I've heard about that. What is it?"
> You grin. Might not know a lot about psychology, but this is your home turf!
"Come, let me show you."
> You lead her to your work desk. Rarity follows too, but she doesn't seem curious. Maybe she just doesn't want to be alone.
> Hooves and keyboard won't mix very well, but you've got a brilliant idea.
> Speech to text. What the world has, is mostly garbage. A few months ago you saw an ad for some charity - people who've lost their arms.
> Gotten a few of your best interested and drastically improved the tech.
> It's still not ready for release. And, technically, Sam now owns it.
> But you can use it at home.
> Shit works almost like in Star Trek. Just say what you want to look for and off goes Google.
> It takes Twilight all of ten minutes to get the idea. She can somehow scroll with a hoof.
> You watch closely, trying to figure it out. But you don't know how she does it. Precision legwork, that.
> She seems to like Wikipedia, though.
> "Thank you!" she says with a genuine smile. "This will do perfectly!"
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>>30227227

> You leave her to it. Don't know how therapeutic it is, but anything that takes her mind off is good, right?
> Rarity looks at her friend then opts to follow you.
> Outside is nice. Not too hot with a gentle breeze.
> The way white pony is just sitting on the floor and staring at you is a little disconcerting.
> You return the look, trying to figure out what she's thinking.
> "They aren't really going to be all right, are they?"
> Ho, boy. Mood swings.
> "None of us are ever going to be all right. Not after this."
> Starting to get that faraway look in her eyes again.
> Shit. You do your most comforting smile.
"Don't say that. There's always hope."
> "Look at me!" she demands, tears already pouring down. "Here I am, comfortable and fed, while my friends are still suffering at *that* place!"
> What do you say to that?
> She seems almost to be collapsing in on herself. Now she's staring at the floor.
> "Why did you choose me? Why didn't you save Fluttershy instead?"
"I- I tried."
> It's not nice to admit something like this, but you really wanted to bring the yellow pegasus out first.
> Dave wouldn't hear any of it. She was his best earner.
> You know why. He told you. They didn't have to make her act like her cartoon self. She did it naturally.
> Apparently, her 'clients' enjoyed breaking her in various ways.
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>>30227236

> You hate your own kind.
> "Please send me back," Rarity continues, quietly. "I'd gladly take her place. I'll act however they want me to act. I'll say those stupid, inane things."
"I'm sorry, I can't. Not until I have the money. It will be fine, just stay strong."
> She rounds up on you. "Strong?! I can be strong!"
> There's a dangerous glint in her eye.
> "I'll *SMILE* while I suck their cocks!" she says, making you flinch at the words.
> "I'll *BEG* them to shove it up my ass! I'll squeal. I'll giggle. I'll moan. Just save *her*!"
> You can't even reply.
> "Please, I beg of you! Would you like some? Right now!"
> She turns around and waves her hindquarters in the air.
"No, don't do that, Rarity."
> She doesn't hear as she backs up, bringing herself closer. "Go on! Anything you like. Just promise you'll take me back and trade me for someone who deserves to be saved!"
"Stop it!"
> With a small jump, she's in your lap. She's facing away, but you can hear her gritting her teeth.
> "Well, what are you waiting for, *dear*? I'm all yours!"
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>>30227241

"ENOUGH!"
> That came out rougher than you intended. The pony freezes.
> She glances back at you and just bursts into tears.
> She sags, but doesn't want to go away. She even leans into your chest.
> Time for some hug therapy. At least you can't fuck that up.
> You spot Twilight in the door, watching you with wide eyes.
> Fuck, how much of that has she seen?
"Twilight, wait!"
> When she noticed you looking, she vanished back inside.
> You can't follow, not without dropping Rarity. She seems to need you more.
> You really need help with this.
> You decide to call the Pony Protection Society as soon as you calm them both down.
> How you ever thought you could handle six is beyond you.
> But what else could you do?


There we go. That's today's bit.
Stay tuned, more tomorrow. Meanwhile, some other nice people will post their own greens *hint hint*, which I am very much looking forward to reading.
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>>30227081
>>30226872
>ywn raise a colt from birth go be your fucktoy
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>>30227206
toiletslave green when
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>>30227250
Kee it up my dude, you got a good read going on.

Personally I worry for Anon somewhat. If things go his way he'll have multiple psychologically damaged mares all of which hate humans living with him. I'd sleep with one eye open for sure.
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>>30220822
He smiled a little, looking approving and content as he watched me.
"By learning how much pleasure you need to counter-act your pain. It's a balancing act, and I was probably a little rough on you earlier. However, you don't seem to be the kind of pony to be discouraged if you don't immediately grasp something. You're smart as well as persistent, and I like that in a person."
I couldn't help but smile myself, feeling oddly complimented. I didn't realize until that moment how much I sought his approval. Maybe a little too much for just my manager, but..
>"Tell you what: Since I don't know your limits yet, we'll do something a little different."
I tilted my head, and something about my expression must've stirred something within him. His eyes went from content and relaxed back to shining with that hungry glint.
>"You know your body better than me. You control the pleasure, and I control the pain. Deal..?"
He wanted me to touch myself in front of him. I could feel heat blossom in between my legs once more, it slowly creeping up into my chest and flushing my face. The glint in his eyes only took on a sharper appearance, and his lips split into a grin just as wicked to match. Something he saw, he must've liked.
>"Oh you are precious."
I shuffled my hooves nervously, avoiding his gaze out of a mix of arousal and submission. The nervous pawing at the ground made the stinging imprints on my back leg and flank twinge painfully.
"C-can we just get on with this?"
>"If you say so."
He laughed, spreading his legs where he perched on the edge of the crate. Waving his ungloved hand towards himself, I caught sight of a swollen, thick bulge in his cargo pants resting in between his legs.
>"Back your ass up."
Well, time to man up or nut up... That is how the saying goes, right? I turned my ass end to face him, backing up to him tentatively. I felt my tail's bun bump into his waist, and his bare fingers lightly trace over flank. He gave it a squeeze.
>"Go on, then."
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>>30227236
>It's not nice to admit something like this, but you really wanted to bring the yellow pegasus out first.
>> Dave wouldn't hear any of it. She was his best earner.


Fuck, fuck, fuck fucking Dave!!!!
I hope you get some incurable Equestrian disease and die in agony!
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>>30225409
>forced sterilization isn't anywhere near what you are describing nor does it have anything to do with removing overies.
Yeah sure, but have you considered that you're wrong? Forced sterilisation is any act that renders a person(poner) incapable of reproducing. Spaying involves pic related, and as in the story Rarity's insurance apparently requires mares she owns to be spayed and she has been trying to buy Twilight, there is real danger which Twilight recognizes.

As a side note this shit has fucked me up all day today. My mind keeps getting drawn back to that scenario, Twilight's fear and shock and the revulsion I feel for the idea is visceral.
Killing someone is less vile than this, at least there is the potential for it to be justified. Irreversibly ending someone's bloodline and leaving them alive with that knowledge is so much worse.
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>>30228413
As a double sidenote, every animal I've ever owned has been fixed. The difference here is that none of them were sapient, which prevents me from applying the same level of morality that I would to a human (or sapient talking alien horse) in the same situation.
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>>30228413
You are an idiot ovaries are not just lol egg sacks, reproduction is not being targeted. There are easier ways of halfing reproduction. Ovaries perform vital production of sex hormones. Not having them will fuck you up. Focusing on the baby potential is like argueing over gay marriage contributions of chick fil a when the money also goes towards killing gays abroad and getting creationism taught in science class
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>>30228451
Halting rather
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>>30227250
>> But what else could you do?

Start by asking for help.

Consult with those who have experience in these matters, contact the help groups, the volunteers, shit, even ask for spiritual advice if necessary I can not believe that there is some cult that defends the abuse of sentient beings.

Do not forget to expand the information on the other mane six, if there are other ponies in captivity with them, if we have an idea of who sold to Applejack ect, ect, the most important thing is to keep them busy so they do not give up to despair while passing The time and prepare for the acquisition
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If your pony slave isn't smart enough to use a condom, make her carry the foal to term so she can look her little mistake in the face as she disposes of it.
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>>30227250
This is probably now my second favorite story right behind CYOS. Looking forward to more
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>>30228465
>ywn make a mare continuously give birth and kill her own foals in extremely degenerate ways
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>>30227195
>> You will still need help. Professional, if possible. But someone kind. Probably a woman.
lmaoooo
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>>30228451
Are you trying to say that the removal of ovaries doesn't render a female incapable of reproduction? Or are you saying that spaying does not refer to the removal of ovaries?
Either way you would be wrong.
If you're having some sort of autism fit and you're trying to make a point that the hormone reduction aspect of spaying is in some way more relevant to a sapient faced with the prospect of having this unqillingly forced upon them, then I don't know what to tell you. In any case tone it down and reconsider your position champ.
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>>30227241
>> You hate your own kind.
get that misanthropic shit outta here
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>>30228451
Just like a male not having their nuts fucks them up. Doesn't stop it from happening though, does it?
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>>30227866
I kneeled down, scooting my ass closer to his waist. I was prone before him, and for the first time since this had begun, I was worried we'd get caught. He must've noticed me tense before him, because he slid his hand between my legs, gently grasping at my sack and kneading it.
>"Relax... We have all day."
I moaned and leaned into his hands.
"It'll take all day, I'm not good at... it's hard to.." I could barely think when his hands were on me. He trailed a fleeting gloved finger over my flank, it tickling more than scratching. His voice was a soft, heady purr.
>"What do you need?"
My legs tend to get weak whenever I would get myself off. I knew I wouldn't be able to stand and easily do so. I could feel them trembling slightly just from his kneading.
"Is there something I can.. a pillow... I need padding.." I could hear him hum consideringly, and I looked over my shoulder to see him look over his shoulder into the open crate he was perched on. He leaned and reached down into it, grasping something and staring at it a moment before lifting it into view. It was a jacket, a drab dark brown with patches on it. He folded it around itsself, and flopped it down at my hooves.
>"That should work."
I looked at the jacket, and back at him, uncertain about using something that would surely have sentimental attachment for something so lewd.
>"Go on and use it. When I didn't have a pillow in the field, it was the best I could get."
I lightly scooped up the folded jacket and slid it below my chest. Lowering my face into it, I sent my ass upward, shifting to get comfortable. He lightly grasped me with both hands on my waist and slid me so towards his crotch. I held still and tried to muffle a cry of pain into the stiff fabric. His ungloved hand did most of the pulling, but the gloved one sent a searing pain through my side, and I could feel the adrenaline kick up again. I was suddenly intensely aware of my ass pressed tightly against the warm, soft bulge in his pants.
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>>30227250
A few days rest sure helped Rarity. They must have not given her hardly any rest.

Poor Fluttershy. I can imagine her being just totally robotic if she survives at all, and Pinkie may never honestly smile again, but being an earth pony she could probably handle the beatings better than the rest... or maybe they just beat her more.
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>>30227250
I keep wondering if Anon is ever going to tell them about how he sold his company just to save the rest of them. However now that Twilight can use the internet, I feel like one of the first things she would do is see if she can find any information on Anon. I'm sure she wants to trust him but there's no way she does at this point, at least not fully. It would be interesting if she found out through her secret internet research that Anon basically sold his life away just to save her friends. It would probably help with the trust issues
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What race is weld pone?
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>>30228711
Hasn't been stated yet. Hasn't mentioned wings or magic yet so probably mud.
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Shiny should be punished by being made to wear sexy skintight lingerie around the house as he finds out what its like to be not naked all the time.
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>>30228756
Shiny should be punished by being made to wear a saddle and being ridden hard until he's sweaty and exhausted, panting and whimpering under his master's ass.
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>>30228879
I want riding fetish fags to leave.
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>>30228485
>ywn you a gaynigga
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>>30228879
Shining's punishment will not play with Grace for a week
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>>30229147
but that wouldn't be fair to grace
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>>30229354
It really affected me too. Good stories do that. Wondering why Rarity would go to the trouble, aside from the serious ethical issue. Is it just about the mood changes during heat? Are her stallions castrated too?
>shudder
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>>30229412
Honestly, it's probably just her lying to herself that this is for the best. From the look of things she's gone full quisling. She couldn't fight, couldn't escape, couldn't fix everything, so she became one of them.

Also,
>using greentext to emote
Is it summer already? Shit.
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>>30228553
Man, this anon really strikes me as a top-level psychopath. He's not just hit with depression and suicidal thoughts, he's a species-traitor, works for an apparently scumbag Equestria, and his first reaction on seeing a mildly flustered pone is to straight-up molest him.

That's not bad, mind you. We just don't happen to have a lot of genuinely negative protagonists here.

>>30215049
Daww. Sunhorse a toppest cute, especially when she's trying to pretend everything is okay. Now that you're regularly writing again, I'm definitely look up to see where this goes. The setting is interesting, and of course both are well-written.

>>30214106
Scruffy weldpone is damn cute too. Also I'm now imagining a pony with hilariously oversized goggles - mask unneeded, since her coat probably protects against most of the arcing and burn effects anyhow.

>>30216233
>"You want Anon to see you as a mate? You gotta act the part. You keep up the boot-licking, he's never going to be able to look at you as anything more than a pet."
I kind of like this line in particular. It makes the point that Shiny is still aware of Anon viewing him as less than an equal in some respects, and he isn't going to forget it.

>"That's... that's not appropriate..."
>"In that case, neither is a human mating with a pony," you say flatly
And sometime's Shiny a dumbass. It's not what she feels is appropriate, it's that Anon made it clear their relationship is master-slave.

>Shiny steals the towel and opens all the windows
Aaaand there's the rebellious stallion we all know. Incredibly stupid thing he did there, and yet I can entirely see why - it's not just giving Corona what she "wants", but that now that he's got his magic back he has to prove to himself that he isn't a broken pony who'll always obey. This was kind of inevitable from the moment he got his magic back, though I wasn't expecting him to try and force Corona and Anon together.
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>>30229891
>We just don't happen to have a lot of genuinely negative protagonists here.
I miss Jacob.
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>>30221593

>Okkkkay that's not dramatic in the least.
"I wasn't really planning on it. Is it really that bad here?"
>Finally rolling upright the mare scratches her chin with a spare hoof.
>"I guess it depends. Mistress isn't outright cruel or sadistic like so many humans can be. But the trouble for most starts when they expect her to be a pony first and a master second."
>That's pretty inline with your experience so far.
>You'd expected your friend, and that wasn't totally gone. But what you'd found was much much more.
>Does she feel she has to earn her place among the humans by displaying a firm hoof?
>Is this simply what she experienced herself in the past so she's emulating it? From what you knew of her last master he seemed kind. Must be since he freed her at the end; but for all you knew she had others masters before him that were different.
"I'll try to remember that. We already had a slight uh disagreement..."
>That gets Azalea's ears perked and eyes grow wide.
>"Oh crap I hope it wasn't bad!"
"I'm just not so good with doctors..."
>"Wait she went with you for your exam?"
>Oh yeah that's probably not the norm for any random new hire.
>No real way to explaining that away without just telling her your past relationship with Rarity. What would it really hurt anyway?
"Yeah I actually kinda know her from back in equestria. We were pretty close."
>No need to make it a big deal, don't want to paint a target on your back.
>"Oh well maybe she'll cut you some slack then, you said you were just here temporarily right?"
"Yeah she said something about some high end horn ring testing?"
>The wince and ears flattening she gives you is not very encouraging.
"Oh gosh don't do that? Is it bad?"
>Shit now you're worried! She can't get you hurt, you aren't hers to put at risk. Right?
>"Well I'm no unicorn but they say it's exhausting. They keep going through the powerful ones because it wears them out sooner or later..."
>Ok a little ominous.
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>>30229953
>Trying to push lesser unicorns beyond their safe limit for too long would do that though. Not to brag but it's probably something you don't have to worry about with your excess of power.
"I see. I think it's just a day or two though so I should be fine."
>"Oh for that little yeah. That's really really short for a rental though."
"To be fair she's trying to buy me. I think it's just a babysteps kind of thing. Speaking of which what about the whole 'don't stay here' thing?"
>"What they didn't mention it at your medical check up? Unless you've had it done already."
>Oh. That.
>Must have suppressed that. It's got that whole 'being too horrible too imagine' thing going on for it.
"I was kinda hoping I'd imagined that..."
>"No it's way way too real. Everypony that works here has it. It's supposed to make us more manageable; less hormones or something and no down time for estrus. But in the end it's just the icing on the cake, taking away any chance for future happiness..."
>Fuck how could anyone do that another thinking living being?
>Because it wasn't enough to take your present freedom, we have to take your future freedoms as well.
>You're sure there some rationale about your future belonging to your owner too but still.
"I... I'm really sorry to hear that. I can't even imagine."
>"Thanks but I never wanted foals anyway, it hits some a lot worse. Life here isn't bad if you stay in line but for most your future foals is a horrible price to pay."
>Well shit now you're even more depressed just imagining the anguish that must have caused so many.
>Rarity had insisted she didn't want to do it, that it was the price of keeping them 'safe'.
>You knew there were worse places than this. Some places were allowed to work ponies in insanely dangerous conditions, by comparison here the risk was minimal. Despite all that it just didn't seem right.
>A beep on Azalea's hoof phone interrupts the conversation.
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>>30229961
>"Sorry duty calls. I hate to leave you when you're just getting settled in but no choice."
>Trotting up to you she throws a hoof over your shoulder and starts pointing around the room.
>Bathroom there.
>Kitchen there, help yourself.
>TV there, plenty of channels.
>And your bed there.
>Simple enough. The room is basically a mini condo with fairly nice furnishings.
>It's got nothing on Rarity's immaculate interior decorating on the other side of the building but it was nice nonetheless.
>You offer Azalea your thanks and she flies out the door. Literally
>Some owners are strict on pegasus but you guess the high end collar she wore made it ok.
>You poke around the room for a bit checking everything out.
>You know what that bed looks great actually.
>Further testing proves you were correct and the bed is in fact great.
>Despite the crazy early hour you find yourself unable to get up out of the soft bed.
>Still a little tired from the fight you put up at the check up, and a little sore, you soon pass out into a graceful pile of limbs.
>ZZZZZZ...
>BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Holy shit turn that off.
>Commence wild limb waving around.
>at least until you remember you don't have an alarm that isn't named Anon and that this alarm is in fact across the room at another ponies bed.
>She finally turns it off and rolls out of her bed towards the bathroom, one shower later and she's poking you.
>Why does everyone feel the need to poke you to wake you up? Can't they use words or something?
"mup emup i'm up..."
>"Sorry but mistress usually gets an early start so you should get ready too."
>Hearing ponies call Rarity that is weird but she's right. You manage to drag yourself to the shower soon enough.
>To your surprise when you get out Azalea is already gone and instead Rarity is sitting on the couch watching TV.
>"It seems your sleeping habits haven't changed much hmm? At least Azalea already got you up, I expected to have to come in here and shake you awake myself."
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>>30229966
"I'm sorry we aren't late are we?"
>"Oh no no I came to wake you up so we're actually early. Come along, we have time for an extra long breakfast now."
>You both head out the door and back into the fantastic luxury that was Rarity's loft.
>The modern decor theme extends to the dining area as well where the two of you take a seat.
>Already covering the glass table is a wide selection of food mostly consisting of fruits, pastries and strudels.
>Compared to your usual bowl of cereal it looks absolutely amazing!
>Floating an apple strudel (that would make Applejack jealous) to your mouth, you open your muzzle wide for a much needed bite.
>Only to catch Rarity watching you with a raised eyebrow.
>Shit it's a trap!
"I mean, may I? Mistress?"
>She pinches your cheek with magic as she smiles at you.
>"There's a good girl! You may!"
>Always with the patronizing. Do you have a 'treat me like a foal' sign on your back?
>Whatever, foods good.
>You've only managed to stuff one and a half apple based confectioneries in your muzzle, what you didn't have dinner last night, before a middle aged earth pony mare appears from the kitchen.
>Holy crap is that pancakes?!?!
>Your eyes must be shining because Rarity snickers at you.
>"Yes darling I remembered how much you love pancakes so I had Cherry Sweets whip you up a few."
>The mare slides the plate off her back and in front of you with practised ease.
"Ohhh thank you both!"
>You were hungry so you're sure no one judged you as you crammed your face like crazy.
>You heard Rarity thank the mare as well but otherwise she was silent as you inhaled the food.
>How long had it been since you'd had a good pancake? You're way too lazy to cook them yourselves so basically forever.
>Leaning back in your seat after you'd finished you notice Rarity trying to hide her smirk behind her half eaten peach.
>"I'm glad you enjoyed it, Cherry really is a marvelous cook."
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>>30229975
"I haven't had pancakes that good since, well since spike..."
>Great there goes the good mood, hers too by the look of it.
>"Yes I figured as much... The truth is I wanted to make yesterday up to you. I have high expectations but it's not fair for me to push those on you so soon."
>'So soon' so not 'at all'.
>"I usually don't get involved with new hires so I suppose I had forgotten how jarring things can be for the untrained.
>untrained...
>that along gave you the shivers.
>"But no harm was done. You passed your exam so we can get you started today as planned. I do apologize for yelling at you though."
"I'm sorry too I didn't mean to be difficult It's just I really don't like humans touching me there."
>"You are a truly lucky filly then Twilight. Many mares never got much of a choice in that matter."
"I guess I have been... But um just one question. Spaying?"
>Rarity visibly winces and looks the other way.
>"Yes I expected you'd pick up on that. The insurance insists on it. It's cost saving in the long run when you run the numbers vs the price of prenatal care combined with other contraceptive methods; and it has the added benefit of making the workforce more manageable. It's not... It's not pretty though."
"Rarity that's still monstrous come on! You can't just let them take away ponies future joy!"
>Her head snaps back towards you in an instant and you can tell she's not happy with the backtalk.
>"You think I don't know that?! But a more expensive insurance plan reduce the number of ponies I could keep here by a severe amount! You don't know how bad it is out there in the seeder areas Twilight! Ever seen a breeder's facilities? Or worse yet a filly brothel's? We try to pick up ponies that have already had it done as a cost saving measure on paper, but the reality is I am trying to protect them Twilight!"
>Every voice in your head says to back away and bow your head but you have to remain strong this time!
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>>30229983
"But but what about the others? I can't even imagine how it must feel?"
>"Oh you can't imagine?! I've worked here from the ground up Twilight! I wasn't always in charge, I started here as seamstress and let me promise you the policy hasn't changed since then!"
>Policy hasn't changed?
>Fuck.
"Rarity did... did they...?"
>She'd turned away from you to pace around the room during her speech but now her eyes snap back to yours.
>She's crying.
>"Yes Twilight! Do you want to see the scars? They're hard to see but they are there I assure you!"
>What can you do?
>What can you do but hug your crying friend.

Drama.
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>>30229992
I m not sure if it was told already, but is Twi a unicorn or alicorn in this?
Wonder if rarara managed to buy Sweetie Belle and if the filly had to go thru hell like the rest..
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>>30230097
No mention of wings yet.
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>>30230097
>>30230119
Unicorn mostly because it's awkward to explain why some random chum owns something so rare.
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>>30229992
>Save money on insurance
Why do they need contraceptive measures if it appears she only hires mares? I feel like that is just a shitty attempt to justify it and she knows it.

And the company is apparently doing very well so "I wouldn't be able to afford more ponies" is like Comcast saying "we can't afford to not fuck you in the ass", a lie. If Rarity really believed it was as bad as she is making it out to be the "old Rarity" would take the hit to profit margins and keep the same amount of workforce.

Seems to me that she is only distraught that she got snipped. Couldn't care less about the others even if in her mind she thinks she does.
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>>30229961
I wonder if the reason why Rarity is so insistent about birth control is because she herself had foals or suffered from the same procedure and now she is no longer able to conceive
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>>30229992
This is fantastic news. Now the bitch can't reproduce. All we need to do is off her like we should have done in season 1.
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>>30227206
I was disappointed when upon my second glance at this it didn't say
>I wish to use slave ponies as toilet paper
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>>30227435
Look, it's been a fucking long time since I wrote the last post of Toiletslave, I don't even remember how I was planning to make things worse.
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>>30230423
I kinda miss it. It was... endearing.
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>>30230139
>Why do they need contraceptive measures if it appears she only hires mares?
Her personal slaves are only mares, the company owns dozens of ponies that include mares and stallions.

>"I wouldn't be able to afford more ponies"
The insurance hike is really really bad and the company is doing well but it doesn't exactly print money. She could do it but she'd have to cut the workforce in half and that's not just cutting into cushy profits. It's a call between selling off half the workforce to possibly worse situations or 'helping' as many as she can.

>>30230242
Hmm yeah maybe her own foal was taken from her and she doesn't want other to experience that pain.

>>30230320
=( she's good pony.
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>>30230460
Rarara redemption arc minor success.
This is still making me sick.
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>>30230460
Does Dimond In The Rough own, or make, any geldings?
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>>30228553
He reached around my waist with his ungloved hand, fingers trailing over my cock. It never fully went back into it's sheath, and with his deft touch it was quickly back to it's full length. I moaned softly in protest to his hand leaving.
>"You hold up your end of the bargain, now."
He pressed a single gloved finger into my flank, just firm enough that I could feel a sting. In response to the pressure and sting, I leaned away and his ungloved hand grabbed my other flank and pushed me back against the spiny gloved finger. I yelped rapidly, squirming to escape but he held me tighter.
>"What was our deeeeaaaalll...?"
He crooned as he pressed the points into my body. I continued to squirm, blind with pain.
>"Come on, you can remember. What was our deal?"
My eyes popped open as I tried to force myself to stop trying to crawl away from him. I frantically reached a hoof back, hooking it around my cock and rapidly tugging on it. I shut my eyes, squirming backwards until I felt my anus press tightly against the warm bulge in his pants. Soft, high whimpers of pain escaped my lips as he maintained steady pressure with the gloved finger on my flank. I managed to subdue my previous thrashing to writhing in place, but I was having trouble feeling anything but that gloved finger.
>"Don't slow down, focus on the pleasure. Follow it with your mind through your body, feel where it spreads and stays."
I pressed my face into the jacket, squeezing my eyes tight. He wanted me to focus. I felt a warm, rushing sensation with each stroke of my cock. In my mind's eye, I could almost see little trails of light in the darkness running through my skin and muscles where the pleasure was building and traveling. Focusing on where the pleasure was situated and the mental image of my cock being stroked in time with the pleasure only seemed to intensify it. My hips began to quiver and I could tell I wouldn't last very long. "F-fuck this is nice!" Anon pet my flank with his ungloved hand.
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>>30230429
Thanks, I tried my hardest.
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>>30230460
>maybe her own foal was taken from her
What happened to Swibble? You'd think Rarara's first goal would be to track her down.

It's a little dumb, but I've always liked the idea that Rarity's boycrazy phase ended with her getting teenpregnant and having her parents raise the baby as her little sister.
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>>30229891
Yeah as far as Anons go, Visceral's Anon is definitely on the psychopathy spectrum. The Equestrian government where he resides enabled him to act out pretty much any fantasy he would have desired. He is straight up sadistic, and I have a strong head cannon that during the war he definitely got off on interrogating & torturing people. He sided with Equestria in the end because as he saw it "The pony monarchs are brutal, but people in this society seems to suffer and go without less than where I come from." That and the humans struck first. They started the war, but Equestria ended it. Both sides walked away badly beaten and it was pretty much a tie, but Anon ended up fervently supporting the ponies in the end. He has his negative, but I also sympathize with him a tad in that he has lived in Equestria over 25 years and has been largely isolated from other humans. There are only about a couple hundred who live in all of Equestria after the war, but he doesn't interact with them much. He has rather poor social skills, and doesn't like his own kind much in the first place. Couple his sadistic nature, social isolation, post-traumatic stress, and chemical depression with him not having an outlet anymore due to the war being over, and you get an individual desperate for relief, however that may be found. I'm hoping to slowly develop some more redeeming qualities in him over time, as well as have him help Visceral slowly conquer his naturally anxious personality. However, this will probably be because he will hero-worship Anon over time and model himself after him.
I reckon Anon needed to be hugged more as a kid, but that's just the tip of the iceberg. I could come up with lots of likely scenarios that turned him into who he is today. At the risk of sounding like an edge-lord, I was raised by some of the worst humanity has to offer. There is a reason I can write Anon's character so nonchalantly yet vividly.
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>>30230612
filly. brothel.

>>30230537
yes to both.

>>30230506
mission accomplished.
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>>30230576
>"Good. See? I told you, you'd get the hang of it."
He continued to pet me with his ungloved hand, and my attention was brought back to the gloved one. Somehow without my noticing, he had gone from one finger pressed into my side to three. The stinging seemed milder than before, even if it covered a broader area now.
"I feel like I could cum, but I don't wanna stop." I moaned. He lightly ran his ungloved fingers down the leg he'd previously grabbed, his soft skin sensitizing each little neat pink indent he passed over. I could feel goosebumps raise all over my body.
>"You could make it last longer, but you'll have to challenge yourself."
I looked back over my shoulder at him, a few sweaty strands of my mane stuck to my forehead.
"How?" I breathed.
>"You increase the pain, your threshold for pleasure will get higher and you might last longer."
I slowed down stroking myself, shutting my eyes and leveling out my breathing so I didn't accidentally cum too soon. However in doing so, the pain began to regain it's sharpness.
>"Would you want me to increase the pain?"
"Wouldn't I need more pleasure?
He nodded, continuing to trail his fingertips up and down my leg. He watched the muscles in my leg shudder with a soft, fascinated gaze.
>"You're in charge of your pleasure. Whatever you like, go ahead and do. Until you ask for it, I won't get rough with you."

(holy shit I need sleep. any thoughts, requests, etc?)
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>>30219032
“Into the discard.”
>”Man, have I lost again?”
”Yes. Shuffle the deck.”
>”Trixie, you grasped the rules quickly.”
>”Of course. The Great and Powerful Trixie knows her ways-“
>”Is it them?”
>A truck showed up on the horizon.
“Yeah. Jeweler coming with our boys, right?”
>”Yup. His stuff must be in luggage boot.”
“Okay, games can wait then. I’ll go catch my piece.”
>My rifle silently waited for me in driver’s cabin, while glovebox opened by itself and papers were all over passenger seat.
>Better shove them somewhere else, who knows who can see them.
>Not like this information is touchy, but I don’t want it on display.
>When I came back, Roller were jumping off the cargo box, where his piece were lying.
>He prefers handgun, which is understandable for man who rolls around.
>”Is there gonna be fight?”
>Oh, Trixie, you still have a lot to learn.
“No, and that is the way to ensure it.”
>She raises her… eyebrow?
>I haven’t thought about it, but why they have eyebrows?
>As truck droved closer, our boys in van showed up, pulling ahead of them and stopping nearby us.
>Six gentlemen went out of the car already prepared, in vests and helmets and, obviously, with rifles.
>Truck, in meantime drove nearby and stopped too.
>It looks like client is newbie, having only two man accompany him.
>He even had office suit on him and glasses for reading.
>Would Vasiliy act like this, if he were operating in such business?
>At least those two guards have normal clothing and handguns.
>Deal is in power, I guess, so no preying on them.
>At least in the start.
>”So, is it presentation or what?”
>Client have a sense of humour.
“Yes, but we wouldn’t like to elaborate it.”
>As he stumbled a little, he continued.
>”Who are you? I was dealing with Roller.”
“I’m his God and Savior, and you better respect his beliefs. Call me Sticher.”
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>>30231711
>”I’m Sergey. Does it mean that deal was changed?”
“It depends.”
>So, now it is the hard part.
“You are trading gold for our shipment, right?”
>”Yes, and it was checked with Roller supervision.”
“Don’t you mind if it would be checked again?”
>”It would take precious time, but of course.”
>As I nod to my boys, they call Jeweler out.
>One of client’s men and Roller accompanied him to cargo box.
>”Is that your pony?”
“Yes, she is mine.”
>”What is her name?”
“None of your business.”
>It took like half an hour, and my patience were starting to run out.
“Mind if I take a look too?”
>”Sure, no one is holding you.”
>He is clearly newbie. Is it hard to understand for him, that some things people say to each other are for others to hear?
>One my another boy taken place where I was standing, and I walked to the doors of their cargo box.
>Jeweler were sitting with his stuff, measuring some coin.
>”As far as I can tell, they are not fucking with us, boss.”
>There was huge box with coins in them, standing before him.
“Wait, why so many?”
>”It is not clear gold, boss. But its price of all of them is good one.”
>Roller showed up from the corner, where he was smoking.
>”Sticher, it costs thrice the price of our shipment. I’m telling you, this is good deal.”
>Well, we have some needed connections, so clearly we can profit from that.
“Can you hand me one of those, Jeweler?”
>”Sure, boss”
>Without stopping his work, he handed me one of the coins from the top.
>It looks a bit off, for some reason.
>Maybe it is about size that is not common.
>Or unicorn with wings in regalia, that is pictured on it.
>As I flip the coin, everything becomes clear.
>Made in Canterlot Princesses Bank, 1007.
>What the hell, Roller?
“So, why you haven’t told me the most important thing, Roller?”
>”What are you tal-”
“You know what I am talking about!”
>Fuck this guy.
>No, this is some serious shit.
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>>30231716
>As I walk back to client, I raise my gun.
“You fucked up. Gentelmen!”
>I love my boys.
>They carried out my orders before I even gave them.
>Before those two “guards” could react.
>They are on the point of five men, ready to practice a little.
>”What are you doing? I thought we ag-”
“Trixie, you wanna hear a good joke?”
>All that time she was just standing near our truck, nervously watching all of this.
“Nobody speak, nobody get choked.”
>Client went from wondering to suppressing his anger.
“It is Equestrian gold.”
>My boys were a little amazed. Trixie, in mean time, was shocked. Third time a day.
>”A-a-nd so? Does it changes anything in our deal?”
>Stop playing the dumb one. I know what you are doing.
“Roller!”
>He only noticed what is happening and ran to me.
>”What?”
“Was the perimeter checked?”
>”O-o-of course. Sticher, what are you doing? We would be interested in client like this.”
“Oh, I’m more than interested. How did you get it, Sergey?”
>”I wouldn’t tell secrets of how I run the business, even with guns pointed at me.”
“Too bad. Wanna know why?”
>Now he doesn’t even suppresses his anger.
“Getting shit like that… There are only two groups who could manage that. First one are those who operate under the same “krisha” as me. Second one is officials.”
“And I know everyone who operates under the same “krisha” as me.”
>Now, my boys are not just threatening. They are waiting for the order.
“So, if you want to buy at least three more minutes of your lives, you better start talking.”
>Probably, client is now regretting going there. But at least he starts.
>”Trixie, Thorax sends you his best wishes.”
>What the fuck is he talking?
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>>30231724
>This is not the right moment.
“Wait!”
>Think, Trixie, think.
>“What?”
>Anon is waiting, waiting for answer.
“You don’t need to kill him! He is not what you think!”
>To the Tartarus. It is not persuasive in a bit.
“For me, this is exactly reason to kill him.”
>Shit, shit, shit.
>I finally managed to contact someone from Equestria, and he is about to get killed.
>How can I avoid that.
>It is not like I can just tell the truth…
>Wait. Who said that?
“It is changeling!”
>”Cha-What?”
“He is from Equestria. His species can take many forms and masquerade anyone.”
>”Are you serious?”
>As Anon started laughing, all these people in the vests joined him.
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>>30231738
>”Why do you try to defend him with such bullshit? You are working for them too, am I right?”
>One of the man in vests pointed gun at me after these words.
“Believe me! Serge- I don’t know your real name, but show them!”
>As “Sergey” turned his head, he raised his eyebrows.
>”Show them what?”
>Of course. He is masquerading for some mission, and its safety must be more important to him then survival.
>When we started to use them as spies, it was one of the rules for them, obviously.
>He must secure secret from enemy, which is government of thi-
>Wait.
“They work against officials too, Changeling. Your secret will be secure.”
>”Sergey” turned back and pointed his glance to Anon.
>”I hope that you will really save this secret.”
>As his silhouette started to change, everyone backed off a little, even two of his guys.
>Now, there were colorful changeling standing before everyone.
>”What are you, a rainbow vomit?”
>Now, that comment was inappropriate one, Anon. Even if you are on the edge.
>”Are these two like you, ehh…”
>”Elirax. No, these two haven’t known this either.”
>I think it was dumb question, since faces of these two say it all.
>”Now, can you pull down weapons and talk like civilized people.”
>Anon raised the hand, and everyone relaxed.
>Bloodbath was avoided.
>What have you done, Trixie?
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>>30231745
>After Elirax finished his private talk with Anon, I ran to him.
“Can I talk for a moment? Is everything okay?
>”Yes, we reached agreement. He will make sure that my secret is safe.”
>As he told it, his two guys walked nearby us with boxes of coins. Looks, like everything is almost done for Anon.
“I… Does one important mare contacts you?”
>”Yes, of course. She is communicating lots of us in this world.”
“I want to talk with some other ponies. And your kind too, of-”
>”Not possible. We operate alone, communicating only through our common acquaintance.”
“Well, do you know how to contact someone else?”
>”No, and don’t wish too.”
“Why?”
>He smirked and blunted out.
>”As these “humans” saying goes: the less I know – the less I could confess in interrogation.”
>Clearly, he quickly adapted their ways.
>After all, he is changeling.
>”Thanks again, and good luck.”
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>>30231761
>Anyway, now, when we changed our cargo, almost everything is done.
>That rainbow vomit stands before me, while my boys chat with these two and stand around me.
”So, deal is done, how about drink for it, Elirax?”
>He is nice person, but nevertheless slick one.
>”Sorry, but we still need to ship it.”
”Heh, anyway, you know how to contact me. You owe me a favor, remember?”
>Man, what can I do with aid of shapeshifter?
>It is even difficult to imagine such shit.
>”Yeah.”
”Can I shake your hoof at last?”
>”Of course.”
>I like my boys.
>They understand orders without words.
>While with right hand I’m shaking rainbow hoof, my other hand behind my back is in fist, with pointed out thumb and pinky finger.
>I never specified what my gestures mean, but my boys understand them nevertheless.
>Maybe because I adapted them from Somov.
>God may rest his soul.
>Two “guards” in a moment were shot down to the ground. It took like 10 or 11 shots of my boys.
>It deafened me a little.
“As we agreed, I will save your secret. I’ll lend you Roller for a day, just return him in one piece.”
>“O-of course. As we agreed.”
>And now, everything is done.
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>>30231775
>He casually ordered to hide bodies.
>He casually ordered to get him a car.
>And now, he was casually driving it.
>”Sorry for that slap, I was a little off at that moment. You started shouting, cursing us, and I reacted somewhat instinctive.”
>He doesn’t even sorry for what he have done.
>”So, are you going to talk, or what?”
“Why have you killed them?”
>”Well, now, without additional ears, I can explain it. Thanks for waiting patiently and not bitching out.”
>Is he really judging me for opposing something that cruel?
>”You see, this rainbow fuck was worried that those two will give out his secret to guys he is working with.”
“It was his idea?”
>”No, idea was mine, but problem was his. He agreed on that solution. And now he owes me.”
“Who is he working with?”
>”He have not said it, but what is clear is that it is neither competitors nor officials. And that is all what is important to me.”
>Does he really thinks it is okay?
>”And again, you are war prisoner yourself. Don’t you think that bitching about killing is something hypocritical from your side?”
“I… I protected my homeland.”
>”And I’m protecting my business.”
“But I still mourn everyone I killed.”
>”How many have you killed?”
“Ten. Ten humans.”
>”You see? You can afford mourning every one you killed. I have no bad feelings to them, but still, it is hard to mourn every one if it is more than fifty.”
>I decided to help him, because I wanted to see how their shadow economics work.
>I was prepared, that things like that can happen in human world.
>But to the fact that this is casual? Absolutely normal?
>Maybe, that “overpopulation” I heard about before has something to do with that.
>Who knows?
>I’m afraid to understand them.
>And still I need to.
>If I ever return to Equestria, my knowledge should help.
“What does “krisha” mean?”
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>>30231782
>”Eh, it is hard to explain. Basically, it is protection racketeers. They protect you for money or favors. But is not just that. They also offer additional services for additional payment, like “sending someone a message”, disrupting deals of your rivals, and a lot of different stuff.”
>”You can say that “Krisha” is justice you hired for your needs.”
>Justice?
“So, “krisha” are cops?”
>”Heh, yeah, very often, but not mine. I work under the protection of Marinovsky, successor of Somov. I can protect my business from small threats, but there is a lot of big fish, and Marinovsky is the biggest in Russia.”
>He is reckless. Brute. Slick.
>Honest. Adventurous. Brave.
>Just type of stallion I wanted in sixtee-
>Wait a little, Trixie, what was that?
>What the fuck am I thinking right now?
>I’m just confused. It will go away.
>He is murderer. And monkey.
>He is beast, and I am his proper-
>HOLD ON, TRIXIE.
“Maybe some music? Vasiliy somehow had it in his car.”
>”Yeah, sure. I’ll turn on some radio.”
>He attached his phone with some cord to front panel, touched the screen a little, and music started.
--Ah, Sharik, I was chained up before like you…--
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>>30231787
That is all update. Pastebin https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u
Also, don't forget to check SlaveDriver dump a little before mine. I don't want steal his (You)'s.
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Apologies on the lack of an update.
I have some ideas I decided to redo to add depth.
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Also apologies on the lack of an update.
I've been busy with friends for the last week.
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Does this mean you'll write crossdressing stallions being tricked into slavery by a coniving mare?
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>>30226257
Tuner, I summon you
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>>30232924
He is currently hog tied and has Skiitles vodka soaked and cum in panties tying his mouth shut.
Its a good inspiration you can imagine.
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>>30227250

> You untangle yourself from the still-crying Rarity. She barely glances at you.
> "I'm sorry!" she sobs. "I don't know why-"
"It's okay, I understand," you say, even though you really don't.
> She's bawling quite loudly now.
> You enter the flat and hear Twilight sobbing in the bedroom.
> Of course that is the perfect time for the doorbell.
> You want to ignore it, but your visitor starts hammering on the door.
> "Hey, what's going on in there?"
> You don't recognize the voice - it's a woman, but probably not one of your neighbors.
> That's just perfect. All you need now is noise complaints.
> The racket is making both ponies cry louder.
> You go and crack open the door.
"What?!"
> Your eyes fall on the Pony Protection Society badge.
> "Anonymous? You sent us an email..."
> You nod.
> "Is everything okay in there? Do you need some help?"
> You quickly step back and open the door wide.
"Oh, god, yes!"
> Maybe you shouldn't trust her so quickly, but you're at your wits' end.
> "Sally, by the way," she introduces herself. You quickly shake her hand while closing the door.
> "What happened?"
> You spread your arms. "Hell if I know, really. Rarity started going on about how I should take her back and save one of the others, then she just... threw herself at me."
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>>30233574

> Sally nods, expertly. You dare to hope she's a vet or something.
> "And the other one?" she asks and looks toward the bedroom.
"Oh, Twilight walked in on the last part."
> "Ouch. Okay, I think you should see to Twilight. I'll go see what I can do - may I?"
> She paused for your nod before entering the apartment proper.
> You check the bedroom. Purple pony is hiding behind the bed. You walk into her line of sight, but stop well out of reach.
> "S-stay away!"
> You just sit yourself down. At least she's not screaming anymore. And by the sound of it, Rarity is winding down, too.
"Look, I know it seemed bad, but it wasn't what you think."
> "I know what I saw. You were trying to-" she can't even say it.
> You quickly shake your head.
"I wasn't! I swear. Rarity- she wanted me to take her back and save one of the others, but I said no. I don't know why she did... that. Maybe she thought I wanted something in return?"
> You sigh.
"She's terrified and sad and confused. Hell, we all are!"
> You see she desperately wants to believe you. But she's afraid.
"I don't know how I can prove it," you admit. "But I'm really trying to help. I just don't know how."
> You can't hear anything from the terrace anymore and decide it's a good sign.
"That's why I asked for some help. There are people who rescue ponies from bad situations and keep them safe. They're called the 'Pony Protection Society'."
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>>30233581

> There's a tiny spark of hope in those purple eyes.
> "Is that- is that the lady with Rarity?"
> You guess her hearing or smell is far better than yours.
"Exactly. I specifically asked for a lady, because I knew you probably wouldn't like more men around the place."
> You watch each other in silence. Twilight transfers her gaze to the door and you hear Sally come in.
> She's carrying Rarity and humming some sort of lullaby. She makes it look so easy. Are you really that out of shape?
> Sight of her friend makes Twilight forget about you. In an instant she's on the bed, where Sally has put down her friend.
> "Oh, I'm sorry I wasn't there, Rare, I'm so sorry,"
> They hug and Sally tussles both their manes. Then she looks at you.
> "Let's give them a minute. We need to talk."
> Rarity is quiet, withdrawn, but not as badly as before. She's returning Twilight's affections, at least.
> You lead the woman to the living room. You remember to offer her a drink, but she refuses.
> "Okay, let's start at the beginning. How did you come to have these two in your-" she stops and looks at you for a second. "Under your care?"
> Seems like you don't look as an abuser. You suppose you should feel proud.
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>>30233591

> You relate the story as best you can. But you don't go into all the details, especially about your company. You don't want this woman to think you're crazy.
> Besides, it will hit the news soon enough.
"And here we are, basically," you finish.
> She seems impressed. "That is very generous, Mr. Anonymous-"
"Anon," you interrupt.
> "Okay, Anon. We've been looking for these six ever since we heard rumours that they are in our world. I can't imagine why they would come, though."
> You know that - Twilight has told you.
"I think they're supposed to be the embassy to negotiate peace and try to get their people released."
> "Yeah, that does sound like them."
> Another ten seconds of uncomfortable silence as Sally sizes you up.
> "Well, they seem to trust you, but if you want, we can take them in, at one of our rehab facilities. There's a plan in place to get ponies home, but for the moment it's unworkable."
> You remember the news articles. Military has clamped down on all portals and declared them active war zones. No one is permitted in or out.
> The good news is that Dave won't get new victims quite as easily.
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>>30233599

> The thought of giving the two ponies away makes you uncomfortable.
"If you don't mind, I'd prefer if they stay here. I think another change of environment would be too much of a shock, just now."
> You almost miss the slight frown.
"But," you add, quickly, "I really could use help. Anyone who's willing to give me a hand, especially once I get the others. Preferably someone with experience."
> "Of course, that can be arranged."
"I'll pay. The best vets you have. Psychiatrists, if you have any. I don't care about the money. I'm just worried my fumbling in the dark will do more damage than good."
> Sally looks at you strangely. "How do you intend to get the other four?"
"Money," you say with a shrug. "I'll just throw money at the bastard who has them until I get all three."
> "Three?" The sudden fear in her eyes makes you trust this woman. She obviously cares for the creatures.
"Yeah, Applejack wasn't with the lot. She was sold earlier. I intend to track her down, but right now I have to focus on the ones in immediate danger. I'll have the money soon."
> It's Sally's turn to distrust you.
> "Why are you doing this - all this money and effort?" She doesn't say it, but the question hangs in the air. Are you buying yourself a harem?
> You shrug.
"Because, what was done to them is wrong. It's horrible and if I didn't do anything I couldn't live with myself anymore.
> Finally, you earn a small smile.
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>>30233608

> "Well, I had veterinary training. The ponies are quite close to the equines of Earth, so the skills are mostly transferable."
> "At first glance, these two seem okay. A little malnourished, but that's to be expected."
> You just nod. It's a relief to have someone here who knows what they are doing.
> "I would still like to take a look at them. I have the basic kit in my car."
> It sounded as if she was asking your permission.
"Oh, okay. But I need to talk to them about that, first."
> Another nod of approval. You realize the woman was testing you. She excuses herself and goes to fetch her bag.
> You take the chance to check up on the ponies. They haven't moved.
> Slowly, you approach and sit on the bed, close to them. They watch you, but don't try to move away.
> Twilight seems worried. "I'm sorry, sir," she says quickly. "I may have overacted. Rarity has told me what happened. I'm sorry."
> You wave your hand dismissively.
"Don't worry, I'm not mad. I understand how it looked."
> She just nods.
"Anyway, Sally is here from the Pony Society. She's a doctor and wants to take a look at you. You know, make sure you're fine."
> Just in time you catch yourself and add quickly:
"Physically, I mean."
> They look at each other, then Twilight bobs her head again.
> "If you think that's best," she says with a hint of fear.
"Don't worry, she's a good person. It's just a quick check, nothing painful or unpleasant."
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>>30233619

> ...
> Sally makes her goodbyes and promises to return the next day with more help, so your two guests can begin to get used to the Pony Society members.
> Looks like you'll be having a lot of people at your place in the future. But you're adamant that you don't want ponies to go elsewhere.
> You feel personally responsible for them.
> But you can already see how much the vet has helped. She obviously has experience with traumatized Equestrians.
> Twilight is back on your computer, exploring the wonders of the Internet.
> Of course, you made sure a family-friendly filter is in place.
> Rarity is outside, looking at the skyline. She's quiet, but present.
> You opt for your lawn chair and the laptop. There are still things you need to do, to finalize before you can get the money.
> It's almost... peaceful.
> Finally, the date is confirmed. You know exactly when you will get your payout.
> Excited, you quickly call Dave.
> "What the fuck is with you and these hours?" he seems upset, not that you care.
"I've got the money. Wednesday. I want the others." That's only two days away.
> "Well, I got bad news for ya. Got rid of the yellow one, fat neckbeard gave me his life savings. Idiot even mortgaged his house!"
> He laughs nastily, while your stomach sinks.
"Give me his contact details!"
> Turns out that Dave doesn't give out his customer's information for less than ten grand.
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>>30233632

> You hope you're not too late.
> You're about to hang up and call the buyer, but Dave has more bad news. He seems to enjoy doing this.
> "Oh, and by the way, the blue one tried to kill herself."
> Shit, shit shit shit!
> You remember that Rarity is right there with you.
> You remember that she can hear way better than you.
> She is staring, unmoving. You imagine you see her trembling.
> "Vet says she'll make it, but she's crippled from the neck down."
> Oh, god.
> "She's not much fun anymore, so you can have her. Ten grand off, because I'm a nice guy."
> You've never worked so hard to keep your voice steady.
"Fine."
> You hang up and drop the phone on the floor.
"Rarity..."
> You don't know what to say. Fucking idiot - you should never have done this in front of her.
> She walks up to you, blue eyes already brimming with fresh tears.
"I'm so sorry."
> You spread your arms a little, hoping she would accept a hug, at least.
> "Rainbow Dash- she tried to kill herself," she says in a broken voice. "She told me and I said nothing. I- I wished her dead, so she wouldn't have to suffer that place anymore."
> Rarity takes a step backward. "It's my fault! I should have talked her out of it."
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>>30233642

> "And- oh, sweet Celestia, Fluttershy."
> Tears are flowing unimpeded now. The look of betrayal on her face hits you home.
> "You- you said you will save them. You promised!"
"Rarity, I-"
> "YOU PROMISED!"
"I'm sorry. I'll get Fluttershy back, somehow."
> She hears the unspoken: But there's nothing we can do about Dash. She'll be crippled for life.
> "Twilight said we could trust you. She said you were a good person."
> You have nothing to say to that. You wish Sally had stayed.
> All energy seems to leave the pony. Her head hangs down and she forces herself to draw breath.
> "This world is shit," she says, defeated. "This is hell and everyone here is a monster."
> "There never was any hope, from the moment we stepped through that cursed portal."
"Rarity, don't talk like that. There's always hope. Maybe Dash will-"
> "-die, so she doesn't have to live like this anymore! Maybe that's what we should all do."
> You feel something is very wrong and tense up. You can feel the rush of blood as your heart beats faster.
> She focuses those large eyes on yours. You can't help but notice her mutilated horn.
> "No more, please," she begs. "I can't take any more."
> She looks at the sky, points of light barely visible in the city's glow.
> "Even your stars are dead..."
> When she looks back, that ice-cold stare sends a shock through you.
> "Tell Twilight-" she starts to say, but stops to close her eyes and take a deep breath.
> "Tell her I'm sorry."
> She suddenly bolts for the railing, a blur of white.
> You don't even feel yourself move. You'll be too late.
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>>30230410
>ywn force a slave mare to eat your shit then use her mane as toilet paper
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>>30233648

> Out of the corner of your eye, you see Twilight in the terrace door.
> "Noooo!" she screams with all her might.
> The desperation in her voice gives you a burst of speed.
> All you can see ahead of you is a white blur.
> She jumps impossibly high.
> You lunge.
> A finger brushes fur.
> ...
> You're almost knocked out as time rushes back into the world.
> The railing slams into your abdomen, driving all the air out of your lungs and sending pain shooting through your body.
> Your arm is nearly pulled out of its socket.
> Somehow, you keep your grip, both on the pony leg and on the metal bar of the balcony fence.
> But it feels like you're being split in half.
> It's all you can do to keep your grip as Rarity looks back.
> Her eyes are crazy and she tries to kick.
> "Let me go! I DON'T WANT THIS! LET ME GO!"
> You ignore her. Ten seconds in and you're already slipping.
> Doesn't matter. Either you both get back up or you both go over together.
> Maybe you can get her above you, cushion her fall.
> The thought vanishes as you feel a tug on your pants.
> Twilight has her teeth on your belt and is dragging you back.
> You quickly release the railing and bring your other arm down.
> You manage to grip a leg with both hands.
> You pull with all your might.
> You fall backward, catching the white mare in your arms.
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>>30233659

We'll deal with the aftermath next time. I feel things have been getting a bit slow - I'll pick up the pace a little in the future.
Also, I briefly considered leaving it a cliffhanger at the ellipsis after 'A finger brushes fur'. But then I decided that would be entirely too evil of me...
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>>30233670
>cliffhanger
(You) should have done it. The dark side is more powerful and has better insurance.
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>>30233670
Ya, cliffhanger updates are kinda bullshit. It's not like you're here to sell us to advertisers. Also great update, of course! Was waiting for that balcony suicide attempt.
But getting kinda grimderp, missing body parts everywhere and now with Quadriplegic Dash. Twilight is immortal and will presumably regenerate over the next thousand years if she lives them, but ya. Any more would be skirting Toiletslave territory.
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>>30233670
On the one hand, Anon owns Rarity. Her life or death decisions are his to make alone. He can enforce those decisions on her, as he just did.

On the other, the whole idea of owning a person is kinda bullshit. Enforcing life or death decisions on other people is arrogant and immoral.
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>>30233795
>grimderp
Eh, I disagree. With the situation they've been in for however long, they're reacting to it in a realistic way. Rarity shut down and gave in to the complete hopelessness of it, Twilight is keeping herself together by focusing on others, Dash fighting to the point of suicide out of spite. This world doesn't seem to have magic restriction rings or anything of the sort, so removing the horn is the best option for someone with no morals, and unicorn Twilight > Princess Twilycorn.

Hunting down Fluttershy should be interesting. Maybe that neckbeard also had a heart and just wanted to get the most fragile one out of that life. Would be more interesting than just another waifufag.

Meanwhile, AJ's breeding hips are being put to good use in a pony mill.
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>>30233670
Man that was intense. I never really was into grimdark stuff but I feel a morbid curiosity as to what horrible things happened to the others and what damage Anon will be able to heal and what not.

>>30233795
Maybe Dash will get better again, the healing chances for paraplegia are around 2% fuck

>>30233854
Whether or not Anon owns Rarity and regardless of how these two perceive the ownership, wouldn't you try to keep someone that you care for from killing himself anyways?
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>>30231805
Could you make it a little easier to so when you change characters?
When you switch between them without warning it gets a little confusing.
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>>30230945
My thoughts raced indecisively. I honestly couldn't tell how much more pain I could handle, but I didn't want to stop, either. My cock twitched under my hoof as I shifted side to side, my ass rubbing against him.
"I.. I don't know how much pain I can take, but I don't want to quit. I want more.." I heard him hum consideringly.
>"I could slowly up the intensity of the pain and you could try to outpace it if you want."
I shuddered as an ungloved finger slid down my spine, ending in tracing lazy circles around the base of my tail. His finger would get close, but never touch that sensitive ring of nerves. He rolled his three gloved fingers against my flank, causing me to groan and bury my face into his jacket.
"Sure."
>"You need to signal me if you need to stop immediately. What is a word you'll remember?"
I paused in stroking my cock to think before wincing and continuing to pleasure myself. I looked up, trying to think of a word, but I all I saw around me was..
"Crate." He uttered a single word as he pressed his entire spine-covered palm into my flank.
>"Good."
My head reeled backwards in reaction to the sudden, intrusive pain. He spoke softly as he pet me with his ungloved hand.
>"Focus, now.."
I shut my eyes and buried my face into his jacket. As I retreated into my mind, I caught the scent of what must have been Anon in the fabric. It smelled like cedarwood and old leather, and I picked up faint notes of his sweat and what was probably smoke from a campfire. He lightly kneaded at my side with those spine-covered fingers of his, and I bit the jacket and muffled my groans of pain with it. I could see behind my eyes the pinpricks of pink-red light that must've been my pain. I needed balance. I focused on the pleasure welling between my legs, feeding it by imagining the soft skin of my cock sliding up and down as I pumped it. A shuddering breath escaped my lips as I felt some precum ooze past the slightly flared head of my cock onto my hoof.
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Corona when?
>Anons getting chilly
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>>30234861
Corona needs a good long time alone in a closet, eyes covered and limbs duck taped to the ceiling as a cat toy flicks a feather across her vulnerable belly.
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>>30233951
I heard Anon let out a soft, pleasured groan. I had been unaware that I was rocking my waist side to side under his hand, teasing over his crotch with my ass. I shivered as he gently pulled me closer, pressing his cock against me. I stroked myself harder, feeling the waves of pleasure spreading from my cock meld with the searing pain of his gloved hand grasping my flank. I was glad my unbidden moans were hid by the thick fabric caught in my mouth, my tongue running over the rough, cross-hatched texture. I began to thrust into my own hoof, breathing heavily. It felt like that searing patch on my flank was just an extension of my existing erogenous zones, the pleasure radiating in pulsing waves through the abraised skin. The pounding of my heart, the adrenaline, it just made the sensations all the more intense. Anon's voice raised in a breathy groan.
>"You feel close?"
I nodded. "Y-yeah."
>"Watch your screams."
Red light flashed behind my eyes and I bucked in place, my back arching. A long, wavering scream escaped my lips, muffled by Anon's jacket as I writhed under his hands. He had managed to slip the second vampire glove on without me noticing. He had grabbed both sides of my ass, holding me still in a stinging death-grip. My tongue thrashed wildly against the fabric of his jacket and I pumped my cock as hard as I could, desperate for something to fixate on besides the maddening pain. Despite the sudden introduction in pain, I could feel my body spasming pleasurably, my anus clenching and my cock bouncing. All I could focus on was his hands, my stroking and the fevered huffing of my breath through the soaked fabric. Every few seconds he'd squeeze a little harder, and I could hear his heavy, pleasured breathing. His voice came out in a husky groan.
>"Fuck, you're a sight.."
His obvious arousal only fed mine, but I was afraid the pain was getting too intense.
"N-need more..!" I cried. He held my ass end easily, rocking my feeble form back and forth.
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>ywn beat little ponies
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>>30235261
>"More what?"
He panted. My mind felt blurry from the overload of conflicting sensations.
"Fuck me, more!" I cried. I kept stroking myself as one of his hands let go, the sudden absence of pressure causing the imprints to pang. As I rocked my waist back and forth, I could hear one of his hands rifling through the crate he was perched on. I heard him let out a muffled curse as he searched until he paused, letting out a satisfied
>"There you are..."
I looked over my shoulder at him, and he was holding in his spiky fingers a short, silver rod about as long as his hand. It had a series of smooth, gently sloping ridges ending in a blunt, round tip.
"Wh.. What's that?" I squeezed my eyes shut as he gave my ass a squeeze, but I could hear the grin in his voice.
>"Kubotan."
"What's it fo-" I jumped in place, feeling warm, slick wetness pressed against my opening. I held perfectly still as the back of one of his fingers massaged in the moisture, too nervous to move should the spines errantly knick the thin, sensitive skin. He gave me another squeeze as I stroked my cock and I looked over my shoulder. He met my eyes, staring me down as he languidly ran his tongue over the shining metal. My eyes watched his lips pass over the rod, rapt at how his tongue teased along it's length. I could tell he was doing this display more for the benefit of watching my reaction than building my pleasure. It was working regardless. I squirmed under his dark, unyielding gaze. He lowered the slick, glimmering rod from his lips.
>"Better relax, now.."
I felt the tip of the rod press into my anus. He applied steady pressure, but didn't immediately push it in.
"O-oh gods.." I moaned breathlessly. It had been a long time since I had played that way, thankfully that stick wasn't any bigger than it was. I felt him give my ass another squeeze and I let out a startled, eager moan. My hips quivered as I stroked myself.
>"You'd better not cum until this is all the way in your ass, soldier."
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>>30235450
Why, boner?
Why?
>not supposed to be gay...
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>>30233599
>> The good news is that Dave won't get new victims quite as easily.

Do not get me wrong but Dave's bastard was able to put his fucking claws into ponies so important means that he maintains good influences with key elements of the militia, be it the army, the administrative area, logistics or private companies with military contracts That profit from the conflict, so it is possible that it fills with fresh remittances of slaves when the last ones become useless, besides the one that from the beginning had the mane six seems a military and political strategy authorized by the high commandos, if the representatives of the nation in conflict do not contribute emissaries to initiate talks is understood that they reject the dialogue and therefore justify the military action of the nation, which means more soldiers, more equipment, more weapons and juicy military contracts
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>>30233632
>Well, I got bad news for ya. Got rid of the yellow one, fat neckbeard gave me his life savings. Idiot even mortgaged his house!"
>> He laughs nastily, while your stomach sinks.
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>>30233648
Oh fuck AWF...
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>>30233670
And Pinkie? What happened to Pinkie ???

Poor Rainbow, I hope to the Dave's shit doctor is wrong and some of it can be saved and Flutter ..... who knows, maybe AWF can surprise us

A tip, when a person goes through a suicide episode due to depression, it is best to give sedatives and antidepressants, but since we talk about a pony and its physiology is different it is not possible to know the adverse effects, what if you need now is Do not let her go for a while, keep her close to you and do not stop making you feel your presence at all times, tell her that everything will be fine even if you do not believe it yourself, the important thing is to give her something to hold on to even When it is a lie, maybe impose your mentality on it and make it dependent on you (an extremist idea and in many cases terrible) give you something to live for, be it your friends or a better future, it is exhausting but if you have friends and help Close to help you eventually overcome it.


Good and ....edgy update AWF
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>>30233873
>Meanwhile, AJ's breeding hips are being put to good use in a pony mill.

What makes you think that anon?
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>>30235512
Don't gotta be gay to like stuff up your ass, pain or to get dominated. Hell, some men will cause pain to eachother and get off their sadistic urges because they view giving pain as something separate from their sexual urges. If you want to analyze your feelings, try to distinguish whether you like the thought of the bodily sensations Visceral is enjoying, Visceral's subjugation and the aspect of domination and control, the fact that Anon (a male) is doing it, and/or if you want to do to someone what Anon is doing. I personally enjoy all of the above, but then again when I interact with people in regards to BDSM, I introduce myself as a sadomasochist first, and a switch second. I am incredibly hedonistic, and I'm willing to try anything twice.

On a side note, bellydancing is believed to have started in Turkey and was originally done by men, not women. Who else would teach their slave erotic dance? I like pole and tribal bellydance myself.
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I want to rut my little slave stallion hard every night and cuddle him afterward, tell him he's a good boy and how much I love him.
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>>30236247
>anthro

Why
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>>30233670
Fluttershy need love, caring and one little of kindness
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This general is shit. It's not even a slave pony general, its more of 'Anon rescues abused animal in every story' general.
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>>30237408
Sounds like you didn't even read half the stories.
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>>30237408
That is a common theme, along with our mandatory bath scenes, but we do other stuff too. Slaveventure is certainly an exception to both rules.
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>>30237408
>>30237423
>rescue
When someone just posted a story with spaying.
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>>30237408
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>>30229983
>Or better yet a filly brothel's?
ftfy
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>>30237408
You say that now, but in time you will be one of us
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>>30237508
>not spaying your mares
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>>30235918

Very good point. I done some thinking on it and, while you're right, I also have an idea how to solve it. Don't worry, bastard will get his comeuppance.

>>30237253
Yes. Yes she does. More than a little. It's already in the plan.

>>30237408
I also noticed that problem in my own story. I'll do my best to return it on topic somewhat.
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>>30237727
>noticed that problem
Don't worry about it too much. He's just salty that his own general is dead. This kind of thing happens every so often in threads that actually produce content.
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>>30237408
Hey there friend. So, bait and (You)s aside, if this thread isn't doing it for you, check out the other slave thread: >>30152979

Might be more of your thing.
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>bump
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I need more Landscape please.
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What would these slave camps actually be like in most settings?
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I want a diamond dog to capture a pony and force her to piss herself in a tiny locked cage.
Only when she has her rump diapered will she be let out to be ridden.
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>>30239228
Say YES to forcing a mare to breed and abusing her offspring
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>>30237224
Because the upper appendages are hidden so there won't be a
>hooves
>no hooves
argument.

That, and Shining Armor being rented out as a slave by the Equestrian monarchy is a very appealing thought. What if the Equestrian monarchy does something where if a pony's family or business struggles due to an unpredictable event destroying property like a bugbear attack, the Equestrian monarchy gives them food, coin, supplies and a pair of slaves from the upper class to help rebuild? Two ponies are picked by lottery to accompany the relief effort, and are there to satisfy the desires of the people who need help. I could see them doing it to genuinely help, as well try to mitigate any perceived superiority of the upper class to the lower class. After all, how else to instill a sense of humility in the upper class than to force them to serve?
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>>30239228
The image is related with this NO Pony movie?
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>>30239459
Get out
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>>30237408
yea we tried to rename it to white knight general but the uprising failed
multiple times
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>>30237408
Making me feel like I have a legitimately fucked up protagonist. I am oddly happy inside.
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>>30239825
Yeah, the pony should havea diaper diamond dog slave.
Can't trust him to be housebroken after all.
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>>30239228
>YWN tie your trembling little freshly-purchased slavemare to the whipping frame
>YWN lash her back until it resembles a map of criss-crossing red welts, leaving her sagging in her bindings and soaked with sweat
>YWN feel her tense and struggle as you approach to slip a hand around beneath her belly, tracing down to cup her marehood
>YWN slip yourself into her, silencing her pleading with the handle of the whip jammed between her teeth
>YWN have her convulse and go limp again as you climax, seed exploding into her and filling her passage
>YWN cut your slavemare down and gently carry her to bed, cuddling and calming her now that she is broken in to being yours
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>>30240730
You should check out the other thread >>30152979

You'd probably enjoy it quite a bit.
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>>30238651
AJ needs to see her best girl in the hospital.
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>>30240730
>>30240730
That's one stallion nor one mare anon
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>>30241472
and thats irrelevant
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>Give your slavemare piercings through both cheeks
>Put plastic loops through both piercings and her mouth
>Use like reins to guide her around
>Unzip dick
>Attach loops to belt
>Leave her unable to pull back from your dick
>Go all day with slavemare's muzzle anchored to your crotch
>Gently nuzzling and suckling as you sit at your desk and work
>She can't pull away
>Even when you relieve herself into her waiting mouth
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Time since green: 28hr
And WTF with all these creepy fetish trolls from SiM? That has its very own thread; when I want that I go there.
>Slaveventure: we need you now
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>>30242293
I'm writing stuff, but I wish to know.

Comedic marshmallow fluff falling from a mail mare's cart, or something that is sinister on reflection?
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>>30223608
>>30223687
>>30223963

> Have to be careful now, Thunderlane.
> Convincing Anonymous when he's in a mood like this is only mildly less dangerous than flying through a thunderstorm at night.
> One wrong wingbeat, and not only would it get away from you but leave you bruised and aching as well.
"An- Master, give me a chance to work on them. I know they're not going to be cooperative right to start, but if it's me or the whip... and we've already got their names; it's not like they can go anywhere. What's a day or two more waiting?"
> The flat look that Anonymous gives you suggests that he doesn't quite believe they're going to give you anything less than bile and fury.
"Then at least let me be there with you! I - I can offer them an out, when you're -"
> It takes a moment to find the right words.
"- pressing them; they'll see it as better than giving in to you. And, I can-"
> "You can keep me from going berserk on them if they don't give in to me, is what you're really saying."
> Swallowing hard, you look away.
> Anonymous had cut to the heart of the matter, saying everything that you'd been dancing around admitting.
> His hand flexes, curling in and out of a fist several times before he seems to deflate.
> "Alright. You're in, and if they don't crack you can go talk to them on your own time too."
"Thank you, Sir."
> "There's no need for me to let go on them now. This is just an interrogation, after all. There'll be time for a proper sentence to be carried out on them later."
> The way he says that sends an unwelcome prickling through your coat.
> "And for that matter, Thunderlane... if I do start going overboard, step in and stop me. That's an order."
> You hadn't been expecting that command, and it clearly shows in your expression.
> Anonymous shoots you a bitter smirk.
> "Hey, maybe it'll make you a more palatable negotiating partner to them. That's what you want, isn't it?"
> Yes, but not like that.
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>>30242574

> Nonetheless you remain silent as he continues the rest of the way down, pausing collect a plastic bucket along the way, consumed by your own thoughts.
> Surprisingly, rather than Autumn Frost he instead turns to the other cell.
> "None of the files say anything about these ponies having family or anyone else close. Maybe that's why they moved together. Either way, we'll heave to break them apart from each other."
"I understand."
> Comet Tail turns out to be an older unicorn stallion with a bright yellow coat - that had unfortunately already become smeared with dirt.
> Compared to your take-down, he must have fought viciously:
> In addition to the heavy restricter on his horn a harsh, tight bridle, muzzle, and bit had been fastened around his face; you could see the furrows in his coat where their straps dug into his flesh.
> Furthermore, his shackles had been used not merely to hobble him but had been attached to the wall bolt with a far-too-short chain, leaving Comet Tail sprawled on his back unable to lower his legs.
> From the moment Anonymous enters Comet Tail keeps his eyes fixed on the man - leaving you relatively unseen.
> His flicking ears, though, betray his awareness of your presence as well.
> "Comet Tail..."
> The bucket Anonymous had collected is set down behind his tail, leaving him unable to see what is in it.
> You can, though, and your blood runs cold at the collection of implements of misery stacked in that bucket.
> He'd promised...
> ...this had to be part of the bluff.
> You had to believe that.
> Squatting down by Comet Tail's side, Anonymous reaches out to brush a few strands of his mane back.
> Comet angrily flicks his muzzle away, but cannot do anything more.
> "You're in a pretty bad spot, aren't you?"
> An angry snort, and the stallion pulls on his chains.
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>>30242583

> "You've managed to piss me off in perhaps one of the worst ways possible. Now that you're in here - well, I'm not expecting a sudden rising-up to break you out of here, y'know? After all, it was those ponies who gave you up to me."
> This does provoke a rather angrier snarl; this time, Comet actually tries to heave himself upright in his chains to face Anonymous directly.
> Instead he falls back to the cold concrete floor, air driven from his lungs by the boot Anonymous had planted in his chest.
> You wince, but that wasn't too far... yet.
> Still holding him down, Anonymous leans in - fury dancing in his eyes.
> "You've been given up by everyone, Comet. No other pony here cares about you. None of them came to your rescue when the guards came. They've left you out to hang. You might hate me, but I'm literally your only hope right now."
> For a moment Comet actually seems to be pondering this.
> Then he turns his head and - around the bit - spits against Anonymous' boot.
> "Fu' off."
> Being unable to properly open his mouth distorts his words, but the meaning remains clear.
> "Y'gonna 'orture me, jus' do i'. No games. 'm done."
> Despite the brave face being put on, you can smell the rank fear rolling off the stallion - a bitter, stinging scent that betrays just how terrified he is.
> He knows what happened to Corona.
> He saw the bucket Anonymous brought in, even if not what was in it.
> And he's perfectly aware of what lays in the future for him.
"We don't want to torture you, Comet Tail."
> Head snapping around, Comet fixes you with an equally hateful glare.
> "Y'wan' wha'ever 'elps you, traitor."
> "You should listen to Thunderlane, Comet Tail. He's about the only reason I didn't just walk in here and start in on you."
> Sorting in both anger and disbelief, the stallion swings his head back around to look at Anonymous.
> "Why? M'not goin' t'beg."
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>>30242595

> "You should. You think the rest of your little group is going to spare you? If you hold out, you're just going to find yourself at the back of the line."
> "...liar..."
> Comet's voice wavers with uncertainty, though.
"He isn't. You think you're the most popular pony around? Remember that you got sold out to us. I break one of you, the rest of you are sunk. It's a first-or-not-at-all deal."
> "I..."
> "Look, Comet."
> Anonymous' face twists into a very unpleasant grin.
> "Right now I'd be much, much rather putting a cattle prod into your balls. And we both know you're not staying here."
> Comet Tail seizes up.
> "Not - no' stayin'?"
> Shrugging, Anonymous chuckles.
> "Of course not. What, did you think I'd have my fun torturing you and then let you back out?"
> Comet twists in place, and you have to wonder if that was exactly what he'd been expecting.
> That was, after all, what had happened to Cadance and Corona.
> "There's three futures for you, Comet Tail: One, you get sold off on the open market tagged as violent and hostile. Two, the same... but with your horn's nerves cut."
> Both yourself and Comet stiffen at that; a unicorn with no horn would only be wanted for the simplest, hardest labor and have little hope.
> A pegasus' clipped feathers could grow back, but the horn's nerves...
> "...three?"
> "Euthanasia."
> Comet blanches, his already-pale yellow coat losing even more color.
> Anonymous only grins wider - an ugly, unpleasant grin.
> "I have my fun with you, then make the case you're still a completely unsalvageable threat. Too dangerous for any work. Only solution is to have you destroyed."
> "Y'can' do tha'. Not jus' b'cause I beat your house whore."
> A smarter stallion would have known not to use those words.
> Seen the warning signs of barely-held-back fury in Anonymous' posture and expression.
> Comet did not.
> Driving a boot into his stomach hard enough to leave the stallion curled and gasping in pain,
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>>30242613

> "Alright, suit yourself. Thunderlane, I'll be right back."
> The cell door slams shut, leaving alone with the moaning stallion.
"...Comet Tail, please. He's telling the truth. I can try to hold him back a while, but I can't stop him. You've put him on the warpath. He will have you killed!"
> Despite the desperation in your voice, the other stallion only laughs - a pained, wheezing sob of a laugh.
> "Liar. Y'say tha', bu' you've been on 'is side since y'joined th'guards. You jus' want another pat on th'head from him."
"Damn it, Comet! I'm not lying! I can't save you entirely, but you don't have to get yourself killed or dehorned!"
> He laughs bitterly still, but there's a new element in it now.
> Fear, terror, the kind of awesome horror you cannot stand up to but only laugh at or break.
> "Keep lyin', Thunderlane. Lie t'me, lie t'your brother, lie t'yourself..."
> Laughter breaks down to real crying.
> In the distance, you can hear water running.
> "...maybe we shoulda gone after y'runt brother as well as tha' house whore."
> Your mind immediately snaps to the two missing ponies.
"You wouldn't dare."
> "Why wouldn' we? He was a good pony once. Helped us, then turned tail after y'got flogged. Woul' send a message t'all you traitors. We were watchin' him."
> Before you can answer, Anonymous returns - now struggling with a full bucket, water spilling over the sides.
> This bucket is set beside Comet Tail's head.
> Comet stares up at Anonymous from his spot inverted on the floor as the man kneels, a knee to either side of his head locking it in place and a black cloth spread out over the stallion's face.
> Barely a squeal emerges from the stallion before the bucket is tipped, water splashing out onto his face and rendering it a muted, gurgling scream instead.
> He twitches and writhes, suspended hooves heaving and pulling as his chest spasms.
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>>30242633

But his head is firmly locked between Anonymous' knees, and there's no escape from the stream of water pouring over his covered face.
> ...you should stop this.
> It was what you'd come here to do - even what Anonymous had asked you to do.
> But he'd threatened Rumble.
> And you had to keep your little brother safe too.
> If those ponies weren't found, if they hurt him...

What do we do? Stop Anonymous as we promised, or is this too much?
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>>30242646
Join Anon in this. Threats against family can't and won't fly.
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>>30242646
Conflicted. Waterboarding seems kinda tame as a torture device considering the other alternatives.

Should probably stop him anyways. Maaaaybe let it go on for like 5-10 more seconds, but insist that he stops ultimately.
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>>30242646
A little water boarding never hurt anyone.
Just leave it be.
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>>30242646
Let it go on a bit longer, he needs to feel like we're really holding Anon back from fucking him up.
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>>30242646
>>30242756
This.

Though, Does Thunderlane, or hell any of the other ponies even know that this is a tame torture method compared to what humans can do?
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>>30242646
>Wut do?
Nothing.

We have already decided there is no amount of suffering other ponies cannot endure to protect Rumble from the slightest punishment. Let alone a possibly fatal beating! We came here to play 'good cop', but Comet Tails threat just turned us into 'worse cop'. When Anon gets tired, we can take over. Lets have another look at that first bucket...
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>>30242613
>"Y'can' do tha'. Not jus' b'cause I beat your house whore."

Famous last words fucking fillies walloper
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>>30242646

>I should stop it, Anonymous asked me, order me, for that I am here !!

>Then I remember the last words of Comet Trail; threatening my baby brother, wanting to repeat in him what they did in the poor Mocha Cream, that will prevent them from extending that threat to Vapor too? In his still unborn foal?

>Then I stand there, watching as a pony is torturing, helpless and powerless

>Just as it Corona was once
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>>30242646
If you don't let Anon torture him like he really wants to, you'll actually likely be helping Rumble rather than harming him. This guy is horrible, but you told him you were here to keep Anon from going crazy, and you are going to do it.
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>>30242835
But like, what is killing him going to do to protect Rumble?

He isn't getting released back into the camp. Anon has made that perfectly clear, he is gone regardless. They can either lead him out of the camp alive (make a spectacle) or attempt to hide the disposal of the body. The latter option is what causes rumors which causes more resistance cells and how they got into this problem in the first place. Everyone assumed Corona was killed because noone ever actually saw her escape the camp.

Thunder has to put aside his thirst for petty vengeance at a mostly empty threat and stop Anon. If this pony dies or is too physically tortured to walk out of the camp they are F.U.C.K.E.D.
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>>30242646
really hope this anon gets what he deserves in the end

fucker should fry when the ponies finally have enough of his bullshit and full-scale revolt
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>>30228528
Youre the one whos having an autism fit thinking your fucking fertility is more important than hormonal imbalance that could even cause mares to masculinize and give them a whole slew of health issues. You clearly know fucking nothing about endocryn systems and how important sex hormones even are in every day mental and physical health. Kill yourself
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Daily reminder to to force a mare to continuously give birth and kill her foals in extremely degenerate ways
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>>30242646
Just ask anon if he knows what he's doing. Waterboarding is safe and effective enough compared to alternative methods of extraction if done right, and anon likely knows this.
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>>30243665
So what you're saying is that things are even worse for all the ponies that this has been done to than previously stated. Duly noted, friend.
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>>30242695
>>30242718
>>30242835
What the actual fuck? When did we become okay with torturing ponies? No! No, we cannot be okay with this! Yes, he threatened Rumble - but that doesn't mean we get medieval on him. Especially in addition to whatever Anonymous is going to hit these poor fuckers with later!
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>>30244199
Thiiiiis
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>>30242633
Have to agree with >>30244199
We're here to stop excessive torture and that doesn't change when he threatens our family with bald, desperate threats. Security is tighter than ever around the camp. Their numbers have been cut from 4 to 2, and Rumble is hardier than Mocha. No pony in the camp is going to step up and help him. He has nothing on us. And he doesn't want us to know that.
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>>30244199

>Only now realizing SiM has been here for a long time sucking off the choa writefag.
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>>30244607
Fuck you bitch.
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>>30242646
>What do we do?
Check on Autumn Frost.

We let Comet Trail feel abandoned for a moment, like he just lost his last chance. At the same time, we put pressure on Autumn Frost to help us save her friend. "We're going to catch Chrysocolla and Windy anyway, Can't you hear what Anons doing to Comet Trail right now?!" Then we storm back, kick Anon out of Comet Trails cell, and make the same pitch again. "Comet Trail, help us save Autumn Frost! We're going to catch Windy and Chrysocolla anyway, do you want her tortured like you just were?"
All this assumes they give a shit about each other in the first place, but they probably do.
And Cadance is already having much better success with Windy Winters, so this is not going much further anyway

>as mentioned above, the threat to Rumble is not a serious one
>it's us playing the head games here, not them
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>>30244199
>When did we become okay with torturing ponies?

It was quite a while ago, well before the start of this story. When we told Anon about the first escape plan, we understood that some fairly medieval things would happen to Sunburst, Lyra, Derpy, Bon Bon, and especially Cadance. We were a bit surprised she came out of that with her mind and magic intact... As long as Rumble doesn't face any consequences whatsoever, nopony else matters. In the end only Corona really suffered, but we don't care about her either. Only Rumble.
>Thunderlane is not quite rational on the subject. Slavery is not good for sanity.
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>>30244199
Dont be a pussy, faggot
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>>30245385
Sounds neat
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Sane slaves sound stallions.
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>>30246289
Slave sausages supply stallion soup.
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>>30245385
This is a good idea too
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If your Spitfire kept escaping, would you:
Break her wings
Cut her flight feathers
Cut off her wings
Tie her wings to her sides
Stake her to the ground
Tie weights to her
Lock her in the rape dungeon
Tie her face to ass with your favorite stallion butt slave
Install true Nazi 88m flak tower and prove the inferiority of Tommies
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>>30233659

It took me a bit until I was satisfied with the next part. Plus, a 12-hour work day didn't help yesterday. Anyway, moving this thing along...

> You got the ponies inside and bundled them up in a blanket on the couch.
> Doesn't look like Twilight will ever let go of her friend, so you quickly go fetch your laptop and phone.
> Then you lock the terrace door.
> You take a seat next to Rarity, who is looking at you angrily.
> "You shouldn't have pulled me back!" she snaps.
"No, *you* shouldn't have jumped."
> She turns away, pressing her face into a cushion.
> "I don't want to do this. Leave me alone!"
> The events of the past day catch up to you and you can't help but feel angry at her attitude.
> You can understand it. You don't blame her. But it's frustrating.
"Twilight, could you give us a minute?"
> The pony seems unsure, but after seeing your expression she untangles herself from the blanket.
> "I'll just- I'll go and read some more of your Internet."
> You watch her go, but Rarity doesn't seem to care.
> You take her head and force her to look at you. Gently, but firmly.
"Now, you're going to listen to me."
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>>30247392

> She struggles briefly to free herself, but her heart isn't really in it.
> All fight seems to have gone out of her.
"Look, Rarity. I know you've been through hell and back. I get that. It sucks. I'm sorry, if that helps any."
> She's glaring now, but doesn't say anything to interrupt.
"I'm sorry you met the worst people you possibly could have. And what they did to you is inexcusable."
> Her eyes are getting wet, but she maintains the glare.
"But killing yourself will just make it worse. You're supposed to be generosity, right? Well, that's one of the most selfish things you could do."
> She doesn't like to be reminded and struggles to free herself again. But you manage to maintain your grip.
> Finally, she speaks up: "You don't get to say that! You don't get to tell me what I should do! You're a- a *human*!"
> She said it like it's a curse.
"Maybe. So go on - tell me how much you hate us and our world. Tell me you hate me and want to see me dead. I don't care, I can take it."
> She doesn't say it, but you can tell she's thinking it very loudly.
"Go on, take a stab at me. But don't do it to your friends!"
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>>30247401

> For a second, you're afraid she might actually try to murder you.
> But then she sags in your hands and closes her eyes.
> "I hate this place," she says quietly. "And I hate the monsters who did this to us. And I hate that I can't help my friends."
> She looks up at you again. "But I don't hate you."
> "I just wanted it to be over. I didn't- I never wanted my friends to hurt. So I made myself not think about it."
> You release her, but she keeps staring up at you.
"I know, Rarity. I understand."
> "How can you? You're just a-"
"Human."
> She's immediately sorry. "I didn't mean-"
"Yes you did. But I don't blame you."
> Pony looks like she's about to cry. "This whole thing is like a nightmare, Anon."
> You feel like it's time for a hug. She doesn't resist or shy away, which you take as a good sign.
"I know. We'll figure it out. It's going to be okay."
> "But my friends..."
"We'll get them."
> You stay like that for a long while, but finally the mare is pushing you away.
> "T-thanks, Anon," she says, back on the defensive. "I would like some time alone to think, please."
"Nope. You saw where that led you."
> You keep hold of her.
> "So what? Now you'll be watching me sleep, too?"
"If I have to."
> She gives in. Is that relief you think you see in her expression? Or just resignation?
"Okay, if you don't want to talk, let's watch a movie."
> Netflix has got you covered. You choose a Disney animated something at random. It seems like a safe bet.
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>>30247408

> You wake up sore all over. Everything hurts and you need to take a leak, badly.
> But on the plus side, pony is still here, leaning against you and snoring softly.
> Actually, Twilight is the one snoring, leaning on Rarity from the other side. You haven't even heard her join you.
> The scene seems adorable, but you can't fight your bladder anymore. Both of them wake up when you move.
> It takes you a minute to stand up fully. That railing had hit you pretty hard last night.
> You almost make it to the bathroom when the doorbell rings.
> Goddamn hippies and their impossible early hours. You glance at your watch.
> 10 A.M.
> Oh.
> It's going to be a fun day.
> ...
> Zoe. You do your best to commit the name to memory. It's the new girl who came with Sally to help out.
> She seems nice enough, if a little fiery. Definitely cares about the ponies.
> But for the moment, she's awestruck.
> "You're *the* Anon? The hacker?"
> You've never claimed that. Funny how the media like to exaggerate.
> "Dude, why don't get get that bastard thrown in jail? Hack into the police database or something?"
> It's not quite that easy. Movies tend to give people entirely wrong ideas about hacking.
> Then, memory hits you like a train and your hand comes up to meet your forehead in a resounding slap.
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>>30247417

> Idiot! You *have* hacked into Dave's piss-poor network.
> How the fuck do you forget something like that?
> You all but run into your work room. Sally is talking to the ponies, but Zoe is right behind you.
> It takes you all of five minutes to get back on the brothel's network.
> This time, you stay away from the video feeds and look instead for computers.
> Bingo.
> Zoe is grinning like an idiot. She's quick on the uptake.
> "Is that what I think it is?"
"Yes. Everything on Dave's computer. We'll have it all in about forty minutes."
> "Can I- Can I get a copy of that?" the girl asks with a gleam in her eye.
> You feel the excitement too. There's probably a lot of damning evidence in there. The police won't be able to ignore it if someone 'accidentally' sends copies to the press.
> Law isn't clear about ponies yet, but the public outrage could help speed things along.
> Besides, you're willing to bet the bastard is doing illegal crap.
> Justice boner engage.
"Just - make sure the ponies don't suffer because of this."
> She nods, thoughtfully. You believe she really will keep it in mind.
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>>30247424

> You're almost glad when the Pony Society says goodbye. Sally has brought in even more people, to help you prepare the place.
> You've got simple cots in the living room and your fridge is stocked with pony cuisine.
> Apparently, they're partial to oats. You could have guessed that, if you had tried.
> All the activity seems to have done wonders for your two existing guests.
> Finally, they feel like they're doing something. Even Rarity seems happier.
> You haven't seen that pony hopeful yet, but this is the closest she's ever been.
> Twilight is nerding it out on your computer again.
> instantinternetiaddiction.exe
> Tomorrow is D-Day. You're as ready as you'll ever be.
> Which means not at all. But you're sure you can deal with it, especially with the new friends you've made.
> Those are some *driven* people.
> Rarity is on the couch beside you, almost completely relaxed, which feels like good progress.
> She doesn't talk much, not unless you ask specific questions. But for now, it's enough that she's focusing on the movie.
> Lady and the Tramp. A classic.
> Distraction, remember?
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>>30247432

> Your phone buzzes and you take a look.
> It's from Zoe: "Docs had address of bastard's shady vet. We broke in - got Dash out."
> Holy fuck, these people are crazy! But in a good way.
> The bad guys probably have guns.
> You reply to the message, saying as much.
> "Don't worry, no one was there. Got 3 poners. They're on way to hq, doc is waiting."
> A few seconds later, you get another text.
> "Idea: I'll take R and T to visit tomorrow, so you can get P settled in peace. Happy reunion in the evening?"
> It sounds like a good idea.
> Things are looking up.
> You suppress a twinge of worry that Dave might do something stupid when he learns about the 'theft'. You decide you can rely on his greed.
> You see that Rarity is watching you strangely. Oh, you're grinning at your phone.
"Good news. The Pony Society just rescued Dash and two others."
> That's the first smile you're seen on that pony. It's a beautiful sight.
> She all but falls on you in a hug. "Oh, that's wonderful. Simply wonderful, Anon."
"Zoe will take you and Twilight to see her tomorrow."
> You should stop talking. Any happier and she'll squeeze you in twain.
> So you just return the hug for a while.
"Okay, let me go now. I want to go tell Twi."
> She reluctantly releases her grip and you walk over to the computer room.
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>>30247446

> Twilight is sleeping, curled up in the chair. You see over thirty tabs open on a variety of topics.
> Total nerd.
> It's kind of cute, though.
> She looks comfortable enough, so you decide you'll let her sleep and break the news in the morning.
> You take stock of the situation. One pony on the couch, sleepily watching a Disney movie.
> Another on your computer chair, having fallen asleep at the screen.
> Remind you of someone?
> You're about to head to the bedroom, but you remember that you shouldn't leave Rarity alone.
> She seems better, but she has had mood swings before.
> The couch it is. You carefully sit yourself next to the pony.
> "Anon?"
"Hmm?"
> "Thank you," she says, sweetly. It might be the drowsiness, but it sounded heartfelt.
> You just ruffle her mane.
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>>30247458
You is an ork now lad
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>>30247417
>>30247424

Me like the new girl.

For a moment I thought of a kind of punk hipster girl
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>>30247458
Thanks for the green, friend.
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>>30247458
Those guys are pretty bold going in like that. they must be really well organized. almost militaristic. Though i guess it could have been more like a smash and grab.

I wonder what Dave is going to do at the meeting now. Anon should take some back up. and maybe an empty briefcase in case they try to fuck him.
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>>30247458

really nice after that cliffhanger
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>>30247458
so cute
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>>30238818
Well in my mind, I like to think of 1800's slavery. Knowing this general, It'd be called Cuddle Camps where Anon consoles all the mares.
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>>30242293
>Anyone who dislikes the misleading title of SLAVE pony should leave
It's slavery, not Anon saves pony from horrible slavery clichés .
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>>30244199
Literal fucking cuckold. You seem like the type of person who'd let a dude wail on you and while you're being put into an ambulance, you mutter "A-Atleast he didn't get h-hurt"
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>>30247458
This is the kind of stories to like to me!
Good green AWF!

>>>30248320
Simply Adorable
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Would a Japanese slave pone have it better or worse than a USM pony?
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>>30235450
"O-okay." I received a slap to the ass, the spines laying me open. I got halfway through the keening, resultant cry of pain before I muffled it.
>"Okay, what?"
"Okay sir!" I yelped.
Anon let out a hearty, satisfied chortle.
>"That's fucking better."
I felt him push on the kubotan, it slowly sliding inside a just little before meeting resistance. Saliva isn't the best lubricant. I shuddered, bumping my hip into his gloved hand, hoping for a different kind of pain to overwhelm my senses before the kubotan became too distracting. I heard Anon let out a dark chuckle.
>"Eager, are we..?"
He gave me a gentle squeeze with the gloved hand and my breath went out in a gasp. I felt him begin to rhythmically push on the kubotan, making my body bounce with the movement. It was meeting resistance, so my whole body was just rocking with the steady pushing he made. The pressure sent my eyeballs rolling backwards as I slowly pumped my cock. I could feel myself teetering on the edge, and I was in no hurry to find out what was in store if I disobeyed his orders.
>Someone's practiced."
I couldn't help but prickle defensively, but something told me my indignant facial expression wasn't any more convincing than my wavering voice.
"What's that supposed to mean?"
He laughed, and I could feel him toying with the metal rod.
>"I'll say that someone doesn't know how to get off by getting fucked up the ass if they've never done it before and leave it at that."
I moaned as he lightly traced his gloved hand up and down my spine, feeling my body tense in expectation of pain. I looked over my shoulder at his smug expression, trying to sneer back but failing.
"Y-yeah well for someone who's such a big-shot you *sure* have a way of subduing me."
I realized the mistake of my words the moment they left my lips. Anon's face split into a menacing grin, and he seized my ass with a gloved hand as pushed on the kubotan roughly. My body jerked in pain as it refused to accept the intrusion.
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>>30248928
Given all the nasty shit japs eat I would think pones in Nippone would have trouble keeping all their parts attached.
But if there was ever going to be a filly brothel it would be there
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>anon takes shiny over to Gracie's house for a whole day so he can simmer down
>he drives back and fucks coronas pussy raw without the risk of shiny finding out
>corona looses her voice being such a good girl and screaming for her master
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>>30247279
force her airborn until she gets sick of flying.
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>>30249972
>nasty shit
are you implying my waifu is nasty?
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>>30247279
>Clip her flight feathers. There's no need to be permanently cripple her
>Just put her on a chain locked to a concrete block in the ground works too
>Lock her in the dungeon, but consider one with totally clear walls so she can see everything but not reach it
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>>30250484
>implying implying
She IS.
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>>30247279
First I would talk about why she is unhappy under my care. Perhaps there is some compromise she and I can come to that avoids the whole issue. Not saying it's likely, slavery itself is a terrible thing and I probably have her doing something terrible, but no sense ignoring the easy win.
Next I would consider what she does for me. If it doesn't involve flying than clipping her feathers is obvious. If I need her to fly than some sort of shock collar. Modern ones can be quite sophisticated, like a cellphone with a very unfriendly user interface!
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>The racks, the stands, the display cases, even the live models all offered a tease or taste of what you could use in your potential slave capture.
>Fine silks and thin gold chain held a mare ever so gently to a platform.
>The disdain for everyone from her was palpable and you could see that she was lavished upon, not a mar on her fluffed coat, her hooves looking like the princesses themselves could bow before them.
>You couldn’t believe any of it was good beyond the willing.
>You certainly would love it if someone tied you up like that and left you alone back at the camp though.
>You would have escaped and been gone before the click of the door lock had stopped.
>Still, it would be nice to have that much attention given, but the price wasn’t worth it.
>The pain in your ear was your eternal reward, but one that was infinite.
>Such an interesting thing to muse on as you carouse the very mechanisms to rob a never was slave of their freedom.
>You always were wondering if someone in your family had made it out of the Crystal Empire and given you their musings on life.
>Hoof cuffs made of wooden boards, clasped irons that left you recoiling from the essence of shitty Chinese pot metal, thick layers of leather holding tight to flesh.
>The earth stallion had been made to wear them long enough to get bare fetlocks.
>Such a thing was common, but something got to you about it.
>You lit your horn, picking up a little bit of leather manacles that seemed sturdy for a closer look.
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>>30251778
>Well it would have been a look if your eyes weren’t screwed shut as your horn put on a second shimmering coat of yellow.
>The stallion’s legs gave a faint glow, then it dispersed, burgundy fur replacing weltered skin.
>Tools only ever were useful for long if well maintained.
>The leather manacles looked sturdy, resilient, and felt flexible enough.
>They didn’t come with a restraint of their own, but looked good enough for you to keep a set.
>More ponies were arranged as you went, showing everything from silicone gel holds, to the familiar chain get up.
>You were still coasting on the high of being a human to let that get to you.
>In fact, you were so happy you just simply popped past that unicorn you had so much energy.
>Fortunately right into a stand of magic suppression rings.
>Your head buzzed.
>Not with excitement, but with stabs of dread.
>The phantom pains were there, the feeling of your magic sealed in an instance.
>You hadn’t been wearing one long when it had been taken off to let you help, only a few months.
>It was a few months of learning to live like an earth pony, and served well in life.
>But it had been several months you couldn’t walk straight, could stay right, and you couldn’t even pull your mane out into strands and pluck them like a harp to feel better.
>You knew just which ring to get, all too well.
>Magic didn’t work to pick it up obviously, but even that simple bit of contact as you tangled it with the price tag on the manacle left you feeling feverish.
>Your hoof felt numb and tingled where you had held it, your horn felt like soft slippered spiders were crawling on it.
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>>30251792
>But you knew more than anything, it was something that would be needed on this trip, no matter how much it hurt you.
>You just had to be sure of one thing and flipped the ring over so you could look inside.
>It was blank, oh thank Celestia it was blank.
>There was some small part of you screaming at how stupid this all was, some bit of rationality that said there was no way for it to have been from the camp, that part was nowhere near as loud as it needed to be.
>You really should have gone to a therapist, your therapist before this, but you didn’t think it would have been this bad.
>No remorse, no guilt, what you did was what everypone else should have.
>A clerk tapped your withers and plucked the ring from your grasp.
“Well, I can guess it works well then. I’ll see if I don’t have a box to stop that from happening again miss.”
>He turned and started walking away, the rings in his hand.
“Hey, Andy, we need to move the rings behind some glass. Unicorns don’t react well to them on the floor.”
>You turned away, purchases still to be made and faced yet another horror, one that spelled doom for your world, or had before the humans showed up.
>A leather mask with green eyes on a pony.
>No chains, no bonds held it down, none were needed.
>Sombra’s will made sure of it.
>The most terrifying part was the nondescript pencil drawn price tag on it.
>Humans had so little clue with such world ending magic they couldn’t even bother to sell it properly.
>You backed away slowly, heart hammering.
>You just needed to get some restraints and you could leave this madness, these memories.
>You missed the smirk, the dark crystalline shine from the automaton.
>You didn’t need to see it to know the dread it would have given you.
>Deeper into the store you pushed, ignoring everything for what you sought, some wing binders and some chain.
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>>30251801
>The chain was easy enough to find, but all too heavily overpriced.
>You’d get some cheaper from TruValue on the way home.
>Wingbinders were more difficult, you needed three sets.
>One to replace the crappy ropes on the slave, two for future captures.
>There were many options, from meshes made of plastic that looked like reused pop can pack connectors, to hemp nets that prickled through your fetlocks as you weighed them, on out to elaborate foam rubber pieces with zippers.
>You set about finding some good for slaving work, something that looked effective.
>You chose some simple steel wire net designs that looked almost like what superheroes wore in the comics from the US capitol.
>Easy on, and they had a locking ring to go over at the base of the wing.
>All in all, an effective set of lightweight slaving kit.
>Rings
>Rings to take the magic.
>Manacles and tethers to keep them from running.
>Some light nets to keep them from flying.
>All nice and easy to carry with you, in fact you forgot the stuff you were carrying when you turned to it.
>The smack on the nose was unintentional, but not forgettable.
>You just shrugged at the scrunched nose and light sniffle.
>Not enough to worry about anyways.
>A light blue coat, but the mane was difficult to coordinate with.
>Why was the mane a rainbow?
>Dash had been the only pegasus to look like that, not even her father looked like that the one time you saw him at a concert.
>You did know what you wanted though, some nice light zip up foam pods for its wings.
>Easy on, easy off, and you could clean them of the hairs that would get stuck easily enough.
>But frankly, the idea was a bit odd, you didn’t want to trust it with being able to manipulate things with the wings.
>You were clever when you had no magic, no reason it couldn’t be.
>Walking through you found what you wanted.
>A black spongey rubbery sleeveless shirt that was sure to keep the wings tight while looking presentable.
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>>30251807
>The locking D ring at the top of the zippers made it all the more clear how effective it would be.
>Easy to slip on and off as well, it was a one piece throw over that even came with a second stop for the zippers to free the wings when needed.
>Nifty, and practical in the rain.
>You look further, it looked pretty good as well, enough that you should
>Your mind caught up with where this was going and bucked back.
>You set the outfit down as you tried to cool your cheeks.
>You really needed to find a way to have some time with that stallion again.
>You definitely wanted to buyed, ride him more.
>You pulled taut on the lead and headed to the counter before a grumble left you realizing you forgot something.
>A gag for it.
>It had been so quiet you had nearly forgotten, but then tools don’t talk.
>You beat it over to a large rack of gags, muzzles, and assorted items.
>Something pliant was needed, it would have to communicate after all.
>But not too much, speech is a privilege for tools, just the batteries couldn’t be pulled and inserted at will on this one.
>Flipping over the assembly before you, you ignore the fetish options, far too many looking like somebody hit the novelty store than for a long term option.
>You spied a very ornate head piece, gem studded and wreathed with gold.
>Filigree flowed in vines and thorns that crested down to the throat.
>A particularly large gem sat there, and you could guess why.
>Flipping its price tag over, you flipped it back just as fast.
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>>30251817
>Some things were quite a bit too expensive still.
>Even if allowing a command mute would be nice.
>You choose to go for a simple piece of black elastic material with a small silence gem in a detachable choker.
>Much cheaper than the helm, probably just as effective.
>It also goes quite well with the wing restraints, in the end looking like a giant turtle neck rather than your sign of ownership.
>Well, looks count and you were still unsure who was doing it still.
>Besides, that just meant a chance to go shopping later.
>Paying, you found the two rings had been placed in a safe acrylic case with a clasp.
>Just enough to make sure they could end up touching you by accident.
>The last of the shopping you could do here done, it was finally time to leave.
>Fishing out your claim ticket you headed to the front, looking forward to getting home and dressing up the slave.
>Lo and expected, there was the intern, always there to help you.
>You added getting a card to the list of things for Equestria, it would only be fair for when he showed up at your homecoming party after all.
>”At this point, I’m going to start discussing dating options given you aren’t on fire and there hasn’t been any commotions.”
“Err, right, no fires and commotions, dating. I can go for dating.”
>”Well then, why not fetch me my things then,” you handed over the claim chit, wondering if you needed to sacrifice a goat to get better pickup lines from Discord.
>He came back with a small cart of goods, your purchases just having been left in cellophane bags.
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>>30251847
>You set about loading your new hauling slave up with its provisions, good practice for the trip.
>You did however discard the rubber band on its muzzle in favor of the new gag.
>Communication was key, and grunts weren’t very communicative outside of happy hour at the bar.
>Now it looked, well it looked like you needed to take it back to the Tactical Transaction frankly.
>Tactical ninja came to mind more than slave.
>Oh well, ninjas were quiet, and that is what it was to be.
>You choose to carry the explosives yourself, no reason in seeing how well its been broken.
>First though, you get back your precious, your defender.
>A holstered Colt Walker and bandoleer goes over your neck.
>You were an American, and you were damn proud of it, even though it had only been an official thing the last few hours.
>Everything set, you head out of the slave show and into the muggy Los Angeles air.
>Your fur kind of poofed at the change from AC to Pacific breeze, and you felt the change in gate from your slave as it suffered the same fate.
>The roundabout was packed with people pushing to get in, some took photos of you in passing, others called out offering sums for your slave.
>You ignored them, it was your slave and yours alone.
>An impact to your side sent you rolling into the fountain at the center of the traffic circle, head rolling up and over into the water.
>You turned to see what hit you and saw your slave floored on the ground, glass shards and a white paste coating her side.
>Pained moans came from it as you caught a whiff of yellow speeding into the distance.
>Bucking mail mares losing cargo all the time.
>You walk over a little unsteady from the tumble and check the damages.
>Nothing major or worth a spell on, but you weren’t sure what the paste was.
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>>30251851
>The slave got up before you could find out, and promptly spazzed out more than you thought a hobbled pegasus with both wings tied could.
>Your attempts to figure out what had happened were stymied by trying to keep your belongings from being thrown about as the pegasus started rolling in the dirt trying to clean the stuff off.
>You ignored it beyond making sure to keep a good hold on the leash as you settled for some of the remains in the glass.
>Off white, puffy, slimy and very sticky.
>Yeah whatever it was, you didn’t want to get closer.
>The fits of “ew, ew, ew” had died down by now as the gag did its job and made talking too much effort.
>The pegasus still lay there rolling and rubbing trying to get the white crap off itself.
>Instead it looked like the bird side had won over the pony and built a nest of it.
>”Alright, let’s go, you were going to get a bath before, but now you definitely will.”
>A pleading whine came from the gag, and you just met it with a yank on the lead.
>No sense in punishing it now, it did at least do a good job of getting you out of the way.
>Home wasn’t that far away, but mostly you were just annoyed that you now had to carry everything yourself.
>You just hoped that Drunk Gull had been doing what his protection money was supposed to be doing.
>Conniving pegasus, you wished the LAPD went after him already, but they kept saying it was for animal control to take care of.

Walk or take the wonderful bits of mass transit home?
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>>30251691
>wingpone escapes into the air
>notonmywatch.jpg
>activate shock collar
>great success
>wingpone is temporarily disabled
>oh look, wingpone being a good girl and coming back to you
>splat
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>>30252116
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ravens_of_the_Tower_of_London
>much like the ravens, anon clips the flight feathers off his pegasus
>all she can do is helplessly struggle off about 6ft before exhausting herself
>anon fucks her raw while massaging the nubs at the base of her wings to remind her that she's forever his cock sleeve
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>>30251860
I'd walk. It asserts your position over them better as the one pulling the rope and flaunts the slave in front of everyone else.
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>reading the end to Regards, Anon
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>>30252481
I know that feel, feelnon
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>>30252481
There's an alternate ending. It helped me continue living.
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>>30252683
I don't know, the original ending had a lot of weight to it and the alternate ending lacks that.
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>>30253391
>weight
If you say so. It just made me pissed at the writers decisions.
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>>30252683
>>30253391
Both of them lack something, in my opinion.

The original is a double bait and switch: After repeatedly touching through the entire story about how Vinyl can't feel at ease, even with a caring owner, because of constant reminders of her servitude and even the stars different, she finally snaps and goes running off to do something stupid... haha, you thought she was going to die, didn't you? Nope, he gets there in time to save her and she goes back with him. Oh, wait, fooled you! Actually, she gets taken away and is probably going to be tortured to death.

The alternate promptly slams to the exact opposite end of the spectrum: She goes back, attacks him - and everything turns out okay. Suddenly there's this rebel movement, and all the heroes are hardcore operators who doesn't afraid of anything, and of course she's busted out and they all make up and go home and live happily ever after... except the whole story has been about how Vinyl can't let go of the past, and so this "resolution" feels hollow and forced.

Frankly, ILAHOY's original, then unwritten idea - that Vinyl would die attacking the auction house - was the best of the lot. It didn't give a happy ending, but this wasn't a happy ending story. What it did do is logically conclude her story and allow Vinyl the peace of a death on her own terms.
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>you thumb her collar and the heavy brass tag between your free hand as you drive
>it's custom made and custom worn in many ways and is a physical extension of your love for her
>the thick gauge brass punched and polished now tarnished with oxidation and wear
> it's face, unevenly stamped with her name, is significant
>it wasn't bought at a pet store or made of pig iron
>it was something unique and hearty that produced a wonderful cling as it swung in its stainless clip
>the collar itself was a beautiful high denier canvas, worn soft with sweat and smooth like felt
>it's triple stitch and rolled edges still solid and unfrayed
>it's once rich indigo now faded with the sun warps turquoise around the band
>her scent is well worked into it and despite the numerous trips in the wash, is still persistent
>you sigh as you thumb the tag again
>she's a good girl and deserves the best
>...
>glancing over from your day dream you watch her leaning up against the glass, watching as the country side rolls along past her with the rain
>her left ear flicks at the hot air pushing from the vent cowling, it's warmth filling the cabin of your truck making it cozy
>her tail swishes neatly beneath her blanket, her excitement still gripping her
>you focus on the road a bit before skipping a few songs on the stereo until you find something you like
>she seems lost to the song, melting into the moment as she chases the fleeting scene of the open land and it's many beauties
>if you could hug her right now you would
>...
>as you park the truck and unbuckle yourself you pull the collar around her head
>rubbing her chin and ear you lean in and nuzzle her, feeling her embrace you back
>you ruffle her hair and hop out, the storm having calmed down for a brief moment on this side of town
>as she climbs out and shuts the door you grab a flat metal cart deposited on a curb planter, agitating it with a loud clunk as you shake what water you can get off
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>entering the store you're surprised by a small female pegasus in a bright orange safety vest two sizes too big
>"w-welcome sir to north coun-"
"Howdy!"
>interrupting her seemed to fuck up her little greeting and made her nervous
>"h-heh howdy to you too sir!"
>she seems to spot your little pone now hiding behind you
>guess she's nervous too
>"-and how ya doin' ma'm? is there anything particular I can help you two find this evenin'?"
>"..f-fine"
>her accent from her horse spanish pops through a bit when she's nervous and it's pretty cute
>a problem with speaking three languages you suppose
"I think we're alright for right now, just browsing.."
>"well let me know if I can help ya in anyway, you know where to find me!"
"sure thing"
>as you coast down the main isle, your mare seems to hug your side
>shes like a kid in a candy store, her eyes captivated by all the tools and products
>your not even in the main welding section yet and you can see the gears in her head turning with new ideas and projects
>as you walk by a display of electrodes you reach a large rack of welding machines, maybe 30 feet long with displays of each machine up at chest level
>each machine has a row of boxes beneath it, along with a price and a spec sheet related to the welder
>the rack itself appears to be a product of the stores design, thick heavy walled tubing with slick welds along the joining faces
>no bolts, rivets, or paint.. just metal
>you can hear her gasp and mutter something in horse before she rears up and starts shopping
>her tail flicks to and fro as she looks at all the specs
>you stand back and watch her go to work, smiling as you watch your little pone get lost in her own little world
>glancing around the store you see a few other pets
>a much older man is buying cases of brazing rods with his stallion who upon observation, appeared to be his heavy lifter
>a few others were buying steel stock, a feminine looking griffon lifting with them in a pair of overalls
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>>30252481
Could you link this storry please
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>>30253760
top cute

>a feminine looking griffon
oh my
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>>30253760
>a small mare, undoubtedly confused and bored out of her wits by all these things, sits perched on a metal cart in her poncho with her twenties something master talking up a storm with a cashier
>you feel a tap on your leg and glance down at your little mare
>she points at a tig machine down towards the middle and asks for you to hoist her up
>leaning down on one knee you instruct her to climb up, cupping her hind hooves with your hands in a makeshift piggy back style
>leaning over, you let her give the machine a good run down, checking all the ports and buttons on the machine in detail
>as she fiddles you glance at the spec sheet
"20 minute duty cycle, that isn't bad at all"
>she seems to mirror your comment in agreement
"what about that one?"
>leaning back up and walking over you-
"or that one!"
>stepping back you-
>excited horse noises
>...
>you have a feeling you're going to be here for a while
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>>30253813
You mean "20% duty cycle", and that sucks balls.
It means you can weld 2 minutes out of every 10. The other 8 going to cooling down.

s-sorry my ocd
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>>30253890
For most hobbiests I doubt they would lay a bead for 2 minutes straight without having to stop and re-adjust/ reposition their work. For actual work and not just sculpture making I'm sure that's incredibly garbage. Don't know if anon in the story knows a lot about welding so maybe he doesn't know any better and is just making a guess off the card?
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>>30253914
Maybe they'll get a clerk to help them.
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>>30253985
>>30253890
I invite you to look at the offerings at your local hardware store(or online hardware store like home depot) and see what welding machines are available for sale.
I found one with a duty cycle of 30% at 230V. Not sure if you're gonna find anything much better than that at a local hardware store, and since that's where anon took his pony, those are the options he's working with.
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>>30254450
Professionals use pro tools. If his little pony is making real money she should go to a real welding shop and get a real welder. But that might not be the way your story is going, and ya 20% is not half bad in this context.
Liked how you described the collar, the store, and everything. She is a cutie.
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>>30254567
Its also an issue of cost.
A welder is better than none.
Its the harbor freight issue.
Lots of stuff cheap, but not all garunteed.
Still, its all cheap.
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>>30254567
>your story
>how you described
It was not my intention to deceive you.
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>>30251860
Let's walk home. Let everyONE see our new slave, in its slick new gear!

>Lyra encounters "pony rights" activist on the way
>gets berated for its condition, and her treatment of it
>human superiority implicitly assumed the whole time, activist is not even aware their doing it
>Lyra has to eat her rage again, can't wait for Equestria
>takes it out on Bat Dash later
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>>30254623
Oh no, I love everything!
Don't let us welding nerds get hung up on duty cycles, your stories great.
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>>30254793
>your stories
I am not who you think I am.
I don't know what I said that made you think I was the writefag, I'm just another welding nerd who thinks it's reasonable to expect low tier gear in a hardware store in a place so remote it only has a single mexican.
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I want weld pony to have a prision camp backstory.
She should have been made to work in scrapping the war wrecks.
But, its actually about her being used as a sex toy by the guards.
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>>30254828
>northern Alberta town
>ya, it's 'remote'
>three welding shops, two with some very heavy, very serious gear
>one mexican
>ZERO artistic welder slave ponies
Feels bad, man. At least I have 4chan.
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Maybe Welder pony can meet Landscape pony
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>>30255453
Weld pony needs a good rape from the filly brothel.
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do you think weld pone will show her gratitude and put out for master?
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>>30256200
No; Weldpone is pure!
She will show her gratitude by building him a beautiful (and durable!) sculpture, while being cute on YouTube. Perhaps when she trusts him more, and gets better with english, she will share her past, and her dreams for the future.
>slaves don't have much to give.
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>>30256468
Except their tight winking marehood
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>>30256549
That's what Applejack thought, but her master knows that's not true and that she's a good poner.
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>>30256468
Her past of rape and future of making anon brand new fences.
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>>30256549
No, that is not something a slave has to give. It belongs to her master, along with the rest of her. If she wishes to give a gift, it must be of a more spiritual nature.
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>>30256768
So, cum until a ghost comes out?
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>>30256785
The meaning of yes comes from the possibility of no. Her master can have her anytime he wants. If she wants to give him a gift it must be something he doesn't already own.
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>>30256825
Virginity?
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>>30256825
A mind numbingly explosive orgasm?
f-foals?
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>>30256877
>>30256897
No and no, something the master does not own and cannot demand. These sorts of issues are the difference between SiM and SPG. The relationship between a person and a thing.
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>>30257013
Weldpones master already owns her booty, fertility, labor, time, and life. He bought them from the mexicans, who bought them from slavers, who stole them from her in Equestria. She can still give him her artistic talent, friendship, and perhaps a few other things, but nothing so tangible as sex.
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>>30257013
So foals or no foals?
Cause a family of little poners running around fabricating in little welding helmets with their mom is the cutest thing I can imagine
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>>30257154
Also perfect for fluffy abuse with all that sharp heated metal.
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>>30253760
This too adorable and casual to same time, really love this little stories
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>>30249030
>"Yeah, and you've got a hell of a mouth on someone in such a *compromising* position."
He held me tight by the ass and raked his other hand down my back, leaving long, thin scratches in his wake. I gasped, sucking a ragged lung-full of air as if I were surfacing from drowning. I cried out, trembling under his hands from the additional burst of adrenaline and the stinging. My back felt like it was on fire. His voice lowered to a breathy hiss as he whispered.
>"You know I could just knock you out, gag you, hogtie you and toss you in a crate. Nail the fucking lid shut, too. I'd leave you in there for quite a while. Hell, even all night if I wanted. I could clock you out when your shift is over, I know your password. Noone would ever know. You would wake up, cramped and covered in your scratches alone in the dark, and you'd have to breathe reeeeaaaal slow to make sure you didn't suffocate until I found you again."
I knew he was serious. I knew I should have been terrified. He was insane. Well and truly mad. I should've tried to kick him in the shin and take off running, screaming for help in the hopes someone would hear before he closed the distance. I couldn't bring myself to. I didn't want to. The fear was making me weak, and I couldn't think of any experience I'd ever had that could compare to the pleasure I'd felt in this brief encounter. He reached around my front, poising the spine-covered gloves under my throat as he leaned down, his lips right behind my ear.
>"I have made people nastier than you break, kid. And I fucking LOVED it. Don't give me an excuse to change this from a learning experience for you to a vacation for me. It has been a *long* time, and I am not as patient as I used to be."
I nodded, feeling the spines press into me ever so slightly as I did.
>"You get one last chance. You fuck up again, and you WILL regret it."
I realized that I was shaking all over, a trembling so fine I didn't notice until both of his hands were off me.
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>>30257835
>"You being so impudent was never meant to be a part of this, and you don't show the due respect for a teacher, let alone a superior. You're going to have to atone for it. KNEEL."
I went all the way down on my knees, pushing my ass in the air. He reached in front of me and yanked his jacket away. I no longer had anything soft to lean on. It was either try to hold my balance and stroke myself standing up, or have my knees dig into the stone below me while I stroked myself. I remained on my knees, not sure I could remain standing while I stroked myself.
>"Repeat after me: 'I am a slut.'"
I looked back over my shoulder, my face reddening. He sat back on the crate, his arms crossed, tapping his foot. He stared at me, his brows in a flat line over his burning eyes. One of them slowly raised. I blinked, stunned into silence until his hand whipped out, as fast a cat and he swiped me across the ass. I jumped, startled by the sudden motion, and then the pain washed over me a few long seconds later. I could barely stifle the high cry of pain.
>"SAY IT."
"I-i'm a slut." Heat washed over my body as I uttered those words.
>"Good. Don't stop stroking yourself."
I kept stroking myself, fumbling a little from the pain in my knees. It only made me more desperate to keep stroking as I shifted and squirmed in place.
>" 'I asked for pain.' "
"I asked for pain."
>"Gooooood."
He crooned. I felt him toying with the kubotan, it jostling in place. I went to look over my shoulder and he snapped at me.
>"Eyes forward!"
My head whipped straight forward. I moaned, my body trembling eagerly as he ran an ungloved finger around the ring of my anus. He was spreading something smooth and thick around it. I stroked my cock as he massaged it in, and the sensation was heavenly juxtaposed with my entire back burning and the imprints all over my ass and leg. I heard him lean forward and he blew air onto my back in a long, continuous stream, each nerve lighting on fire.
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>>30258023
I let out a series of breathy yelps in response to my back lighting on fire all over again.
>" ' I like being touched by older men.' "
How many more wanton things was he going to make me say? I knew he had to be getting off on this, making me say all of these things..
>"What..?"
He lightly ran an ungloved finger down from the nape of my neck, trailing directly over my spine. I kept stroking, feeling my back arch into the finger as it went over patches of broken and unbroken skin.
>"You don't want my hands all over you?"
The ungloved finger went from feather light to pressing hard into my flesh, dragging painfully over the scratches that criss-crossed my lower back. I groaned, gritting my teeth and buckling my waist downward to avoid the punishing pressure.
"I like being touched by older men." I said softly.
>"Louder!"
His whole ungloved hand grabbed a handful of my ass, squeezing with unbelievable force as he wrenched my waist back up to where it had been.
"I like being touched by older men!" I moaned, desperate for him to let go. He let out a chuckle.
>"Good."
He let go of my ass, it throbbing from the bruising grip before he and gave it a smack. A yelp escaped my lips. I felt him push the kubotan in a little, hardly an inch, before pulling it back out just as far. He began to pulse it in and out, never going any deeper than when he first pushed it in. My ass lifted and wriggled, my legs buckling and shifting as I greedily stroked myself.
"F-fuck." I gasped. He pushed it in one last time and then let go of it. My cock throbbed as I stroked myself.
>" 'I like being a fuck-doll.' "
"I like being a fuck-doll." I could hear the smile in his voice.
>"Goooood, better."
I felt him push on the kubotan again, one of the round nubs stretching me a little before my anus closed around it. He let go of it again, and I felt him slap my ass, the motion causing me to totter sideways as I struggled to keep my balance.
>" 'I like getting slapped around like a bitch.' "
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>>30258185
I admire your tenacity.
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>>30253451
Well, the second ending was written by a bunch of waifu-fags who wanted everything to end happily, they've never denied that. It was never really meant to be a proper ending, just something to ease the pain of the original. Regard's has always amazed me like that, because I don't really think it's that amazing of a story, but I know of at least three other people who've stories based on it, so it must have hit the right notes somewhere.

I do agree that the biggest problem with the original ending is that I tried to have my cake and eat it too. I know it seems obvious not to do it, but when you write the entire thing in a week or two you don't really think through what you're doing though. I'll always maintain that the ending wasn't as bad as it could have been, it just wasn't the ending the story needed.
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>>30258762
Oh, it definitely hit the right notes. For one, the conflict put front and center - Vinyl slowly bonding with Anonymous, but at the same time being repeatedly slapped in the face by the cruelties of slavery and unable to let go of it - is more realistically done than 90% of stories in this thread. Furthermore, both are frankly flawed characters - she especially, who comes off as abrasive and rude even before we get into the damage done to her by slavery. They read as real people, not actors in a fantasy.

So even though they end up fucking, it doesn't come across as an idealized story about buying your waifu but as a hard look at the tough life of a slave and a well-meaning owner.

>I tried
>I
Wait... Maiden Voyage when?! You can't just run off on us like that!
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>>30258837
I am sorry about the lack of update, I know it's been a while. Personal life has gotten in the way a little and I don't have much time to write. I probably could post an update now, but I feel like what I have is missing something and I don't want to post it until I proofread find out what it is. Other than that, I just need to write out some character development for Sea Swirl and Coffee.

This section of the story is taking much longer than I imagined. I thought we'd at least be at Twilight by now. Shit, I mean, who said anything about Twilight, Anon isn't going to meet Twilight haha.
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>>30258997
CMV is really good, but you should take a break if you're stuck. Start that multiple personality albino Vinyl story instead.
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>>30242756
>>30242790
>>30245385

> You stare at Comet Tail, ears laid flat against your skull as if to block out the gurgling screams even having petered out, reduced to gurgling, retching heaves.
"He's drowning!"
> "No."
> Anonymous' tone is bizarrely flat given the struggling stallion trapped beneath him.
> "He just feels like he is because of the cloth. It'll be fine as soon as I let him up."
> That depends very much, you think, on the definition of 'fine'.
> But still you don't move, limbs frozen by Comet Tail's words echoing around your ears.
> Would they attack Rumble - or worse, threaten him to try and escape?
> It wouldn't end well, but they would be just desperate enough...
> Unbidden, your eyes stray from the spectacle to the other bucket Anonymous had brought in.
> Its nightmarish contents are enough to make your stomach twist:
> The thick, heavy whip laid coiled against one wall was the least of it; next to it rested an upright cattle prod, while a small gas torch and several metal handles leaned on the opposite side.
> A powerful shears, its long and heavy arms hinting at the great force that would be used to close its hooked jaws, hung half-over a third side.
> In between them all sat a pair of metal contraptions you didn't even recognize - or particularly want to - but whose spiked arms and screw-tightened hinges were enough to plant plenty of suggestions.
> At last Anonymous sets the bucket down, ripping the rag away and letting a gasping and spluttering Comet Tail catch his breath.
> It takes him a few moments - his eyes initially rolling in wild fear until the sensations of drowning fade.
"Celestia help me..."
> Your muttered oath goes unnoticed.
> You should stop this.
> But...
> Was it any different than when you'd turned over the ringleaders?
> You knew what would happen to them.
> Wasn't your soul already damned by that?
> Protecting Rumble had been enough reason then; wasn't it now?
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>>30260231

> "That was fifteen seconds at most, pony. I've heard of this going for two, three hours... and we're not exactly going to run out of water."
> Comet Tail's breath catches again at the threat.
> Yet it still is not enough to move him to speak.
> "Well, suit yourself. After we're done with this we can try something else."
> For a moment Comet Tail looks pleadingly to you, but you cannot muster up a response in time.
> The rag is thrown down over his face again, masking the desperate expression.
> Even with the knowledge of what is coming, the stallion is soon screaming, then gurgling, then simply writhing again.
> ...you can't watch this.
> Despite promising - it's just too much.
> To just know about it in a distant, abstract way is one thing; to be right there as it happens is another.
> It's all you can do to keep from galloping from the room.
> Instead you go to the next cell down.
> Autumn Frost looks up as you open the door, having shifted herself over just far enough to rest on the cell's thin, hard mattress.
> Initially she says nothing, meeting you with the same wordless resignation that she had when you'd arrested her.
> Instead you begin the exchange.
"Chrysocolla and Windy Winters."
> Her face tightens; clearly Autumn had been hoping that she was the only one known.
"They managed to avoid us. We need to know where they are."
> "Go rut yourself."
> The three words are spoken in a surprisingly soft tone - cool, distant rage rather than hot and immediate.
"We have to know, Autumn, or Anonymous is only going to get worse."
> Nothing comes but a small shake of her head.
> In contrast, your anger only rises.
"Damn you, Autumn - he's going to get all of you anyhow! He'll break one of you - or just turn the entire camp upside-down to find them. You heard how angry he is!"
> This finally seems to shock her into actually speaking:
> "What do you mean, one of-"
> Her ear cocks, head twisting on the mattress at a half-heard distant gasp.
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>>30260241

> When it is immediately followed up by another muted scream, Autumn's expression tightens.
> "Who is that?"
> From her tone she has guessed already anyhow, but you confirm it:
"Comet Tail."
> Autumn's ears go flat as well, she lays her head back down on mattress.
"How are you so calm?! Do you have any idea what he's doing to Comet?"
> "No."
> After a second's thought, she adds:
> "Expect I'll find out soon, though."
"You'll find out-"
> For several moments, you remain glaring at her - the silence occasionally broken by Comet Tail's distant struggles.
> "He wants us to grovel. No grovelling, he beats us until we do. I don't grovel."
> It's the most words you've gotten out of her yet.
> And enough to make your exasperation boil over; stepping forward, you reach out with your teeth to grab her mane in a twisted reversal of how she'd tried to attack you.
> Unlike then, however, you have plenty of leverage to lift her up.
> Spitting out her mane, you growl softly:
"This doesn't have to happen. He's not just taking his anger out on Comet, he's looking for something. You give him that something, it /will/ stop."
> Staring soundlessly at you, Autumn simply shakes her head.
> "Nothing. I say nothing."
> In the distance, Comet Tail's voice raises to an open scream - a howl of pain.
> Anonymous had, apparently, moved on.
"He's not just going to hurt him, Autumn! He's talking about having Comet's horn cut if those two aren't found. He might cut your wing tendons too!"
> This finally earns a real reaction from the mare, her stoicism breaking under the thought of that.
> As she thinks it over, another agonized scream issues from Comet Tail's cell.
> Swearing furiously, you spin and gallop from the cell.
> Pausing only to kick the door shut with an earsplitting bang, you charge back into the first cell - and shrink back at what you see.
> Two clearly-recognizable boot marks were already imprinted in Comet Tail's belly, black dirt marring his light yellow coat.
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>>30260253

> The soaked rag had been left in place over his muzzle - barely enough to muffle his yells.
> Even as you watch, Anonymous - a hand pulling one of Comet's hindlegs apart - draws his foot back and lets it slam forward squarely in between-
> Comet Tail spasms, back arching wildly as he screams.
> Flinching in sympathy as your own hindlegs instinctively close protectively, you snap your wings open and take a hard step forward.
"Anonymous, that's enough!"
> His head snaps up to glare at you.
> Gone is his cool and dispassionate anger from before, replaced with a hot-burning fury ready to be unleashed.
> But you meet your owner's gaze head on and refuse to back down.
"You ordered me."
> "...yeah. Right. I'll - be outside."
> Letting him go isn't what you have planned though; instead you follow him out, only speaking when out of earshot.
"What happened."
> "He opened his fucking mouth, that's what happened."
> One hand rising to rub his forhead, Anonymous sighs.
> "Maybe even deliberately provoked me. I don't know."
"You need to go and calm down somewhere."
> "Yeah. I do..."
> He sounds so... drained.
> Lost, maybe.
"There's no need to rush. We can get the names. A day or two, and it'll mean you won't do... this."
> "You're right. Thanks, Thunderlane."
> Surprisingly, he doesn't sound too sorry to admit you're right.
> Had he actually been expecting you to control him...?
> You wait until Anonymous is entirely out of sight - just to be sure - before turning back into the cell.
> Comet Tail is still moaning and curled into as tight a ball as his shackles will allow - twin fresh lines of wetness trailing from his eyes.
> It's quite a while from when you pull the soaked rag from his face that he is coherent enough to speak.
> And even then only with a breathless, pained voice.
> "You... you made him stop."
"I shouldn't have left in the first place."
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>>30260261

> Dropping onto your haunches, you belatedly remember the filthy floor was still soaked - not nearly all of the water having gone down the drain.
> "Why?"
"Because I told you the Tartarus-damned truth, Comet Tail! I don't - I don't want you to suffer! Even after you threatened my brother, I really don't!"
> "Why should I-"
> Comet tries to shift, but gives up a second later - gasping in sudden pain at a misjudged movement.
> Instead he settles for rolling his head over to stare at you with bloodshot eyes.
> "-should I care what you want?"
"Because I'm a pony trying to help you!"
> "You're a traitor, just like that whore we kicked up. Just trying to make yourself look good. Save your sorry own rear..."
"...then if you don't think about me, think about the others! Autumn Frost is in the cell right next to yours; do you want her to be tortured too?"
> Comet Tail's reaction is quite unlike hers.
> In contrast to her quiet look of anger, a look of horror and despair creeps over his face.
> "...she'll never talk. She barely talked to us. I, I talk to much. She won't say a word."
"He'll go even harder on her. You think this is bad? I can't be around to stop him forever, Comet. He'll break her. If he's willing to take your horn, he might take her flight! You have to talk - for her sake, if not for yours or mine!"
> Leaping up onto your hooves, you circle around him and kick over the bucket filled with hideous implements of torment - letting them scatter across the floor in full view of the other stallion.
> "All of these - he'll go through every one on her!"
> "If I talk, he'll spare me and cripple her."
"No. You can negotiate. I can negotiate!"
> Laughing an agonized, wheezing noise, Comet Tail shakes his head.
> "You can't force him, and you can't force me."
> A second later, he has stopped laughing - staring with eyes wide at the electrical prod gripped in your jaws.
> "...you're bluffing. You said you don't want me to be tortured. You wouldn't."
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>>30258714
Tenacity is about all I got. I'm a shitty writer but I'm hoping that I'll get better the more I write.

>tfw you know life has no meaning other than what you assign it
>tfw you question whether your career defines your meaning in life or your actions do
>tfw not sure if you would be a blank flank if you were a pony because you are caught between choosing a career that will keep your loved ones happy and well-fed, one that is environmentally responsible, and one that you have loved since you were a child
>tfw you constantly zigzag between being impressed with your own progress in life all things considered and completely disheartened
>tfw you know not caring is equal to losing your meaning in life
>tfw you almost don't want to care anymore because it is exhausting to care
>tfw you do anyways but you aren't any happier for it

tl;dr bawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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>>30260295

> All the certainty and cockyness that he's spoken with a moment earlier was gone, though.
> Speaking around the handle gripped in your jaws is hard, but you're still mostly understandable.
> And even if not, your growled tone says plenty.
"You have no idea what I would do to protect my brother."
> "...c'mon, Thunderlane, it's not me that's putting him in danger. You doing - this! That's what it is!"
"You threatened him. Before, I didn't - but I've got a reason to want you to talk now too."
> "N-No way. I don't believe you!"
> With the control switch where it was, finding it with your tongue was relatively easy.
> ...but is this right?
> It's one thing to let Anonymous do the torturing.
> Even to turn other ponies over to him for it.
> To actually hold the implement of torture in your own jaws, make use of it yourself...

Do we do this? Or is actually torturing him to far?
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>>30260337
Do it.
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>>30260337
I once again find myself curious just how far the anti-cruelty laws in this universe extend. If this Anon might actually catch some heat from the authorities if evidence were ever brought forth about some of the things he's actually done. It would be interesting to see this used as leverage against him somehow in the future.

Zap the prod in the air a few times to get his attention. Hold it to his balls. His sheath. But don't actually use it on him. This has to be a bluff. Thunderlane can't go that far.
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>>30260426
>I once again find myself curious just how far the anti-cruelty laws in this universe extend.

I would say he's definitely run afoul of the anti-cruelty laws, and would probably see some hefty fines or maybe even jail time for some of the things he's done, but it's not exactly like it's an easy thing to report to the authorities. They're not likely to listen to ponies, and anyone that works for Anon isn't going to put their paycheck on the line for a bunch of talking horses.

But yeah, I'm sick of Anon having literally all the power here. I am definitely hoping he gets put into a position that legitimately makes him squirm at some point in the future.

Even if he doesn't get in trouble with the law, his business could be made to suffer pretty badly if video evidence of him torturing ponies ever went public. People would not want to buy products from someone so cruel, created under conditions of such suffering.
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>>30260337
For the sake of your brother, of Vapor, Autum, the same Comet Trail .... DO IT.

Then Candance appears with news of the confession and surrender of one of the attackers, just in time to see Thunderlane torturing one of his ponies
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I really want to see what shiny would think about this work "camp" and the conditions there, and what his wife has become. It would completely shatter his fragile, newly born worldview that humans aren't as shit as he thought, and would undo everything gracie and his current master have done for him. Their kindness can never come close to making up for these kinds of atrocities.
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>>30260426
I think Comet Tail may have shot himself in the foot (hoof?) by threatening Rumble. Now we believe we have two violent ponies on the loose in the camp with intent to harm the equivalent of a teenager, and these two hold the only information to catching them... that's a ticking time bomb scenario if I've ever seen one.

>>30260454
> I am definitely hoping he gets put into a position that legitimately makes him squirm at some point in the future.
Imagine what happens if Haute catches wind of all this?
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>>30260337
Thunder should cool off as well as this stallion. Put it down and follow Anon to talk it out.

Leave this pony chained up in the dark, or put him in the lockbox and call it a mercy. IF we really want to torture him these things can't be rushed. We need to feign that we have all the time in the world and he doesn't.
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>>30260489
I like this idea. Put him in the slave box like Corona was. Forcing him into a stress position + sensory deprivation will probably break him with enough time, and leave no marks or permanent injury.
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>>30260500
Who originally came up with the idea of the slave box? It's a pretty devious one.
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>>30260505
Yep. Cruel but not deadly or injurious. And probably a legal method of torture as well since the pony is not physically injured.
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>>30260337
We're already an accessory to all this. To take part in it ourselves is immaterial. Every minute he's choosing not to talk is him drawing out his sentence even longer. We've told him multiple times that this will stop the moment he tells us what we need to know, and on top of that, Anon *won't* go to town on Autumn Frost.

Do we really have to take his horn and her wings? Are they seriously going to push to that point? We're trying to give them an out, and they're not even meeting us halfway. Tsk tsk.
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>>30260337
A small jolt, "Just a taste of what is to come." and then let him think about it for a while like >>30260500
says.
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>>30260337
Cattle prod with water all over the floor. Good to know Thunderlane didn't get this position with his brains.

Put the rod back in the bucket. Give him a little time to think about things and you know, not electrocute yourself. Also, probably not a line we should cross. Not saying it wouldn't get the results we need, but we're the good cop to Anon's bad cop. The reason that routine exists is because it tends to work.
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>>30260710
Pegasi have an innate electrical resistance. Not saying the rest of your suggestion isn't right, but I don't think Thunderlane is dumb enough to fry himself.
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>>30260337
>Is actually torturing him to far?

It's not too far. For us, there IS no 'too far' when it comes to Rumble. But it might not be the right thing either. Comet Tail might have a point about us putting him in danger doing this, even Anon has brought it up before. Lets just stick to the plan.

We clean up, slowly, letting him have a good long look at every implement, and take the buckets away. Then we go back to our 'good cop' script, apologize for threatening him and trot out Anons 'limited autonomy' spiel. He's heard it all before but us just saving him gives it more punch. Finally we let his forehooves down, but keep him shackled. (That bridle / muzzle thing is gone already, right?) We don't want him to look like he's being tortured off hours or something! Doing this without backup is a small risk but shows trust. We do the same for Autumn Frost, and tell her the truth about everything that just happened. The truth serves us just fine and again: trust. Nopony knows it's value better...

>And swoop over to Rumbles place and give him the most embarrassing big brother snuggle ever! He's still OK, right? Right?!
>And is Anon OK? On the one hand, there's nobody we hate more (except ourself). On the other, he's our only real friend and he might really need someone to talk to right now, especially with Mocha gone.
Anytime would be a fantastic time for Cadance to come trotting up with a talkative Windy Winters.
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>>30260261
>going for the balls
literally nigger tier
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>>30260797
This, and make sure he gets a good look at that gelder.
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>>30260917
>going for the balls
to reiterate

nigger tier
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>>30260925
If we had castrated our slaves we wouldn't have a nigger problem in the first place, only good thing the muds ever did was castrate theirs.
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>>30260940
disgusting
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>>30260940
Might as well spay all the mares while you're at it then, too.
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>>30260949
Slaves aren't people, much like communists.

This means that there literally is never a "Too far." to go to.
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>>30260958
why not just gas them all then
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>>30260917
You know, I considered having Anon threaten to geld him when he was talking about the consequences if Comet didn't talk. But I didn't want to make it seem like I was stealing stuff from other people's stories, right after the thread had conniptions over the spaying thing.

(Besides, that would have been a bluff anyhow. I'm fairly sure that'd have been an absolute no-no under the cruelty laws. Removing the tool a unicorn used to savagely assault another pony with is one thing; giving them the snip-snip on account of vengeance is quite another.)
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>>30260968
That is neither an economically sound option nor inherently profitable, gelding the disobedient and breeding the docile and skilled is.
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>>30260981
Removing one's means of reproduction because you're a shitter is pretty fucking low.
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>>30261005
Yeah, and to be honest that was another reason I didn't run with it. I'm not sure how much the thread can determine what is bluff and what is serious threat, and if people thought Anon was actually going to geld Comet over this, it'd turn him into an irredeemable scumbag.

...I mean, not that he isn't a bit of a scumbag already.
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>>30260956
Did someone say spay?

>You squeeze Rarity as hard as you can.
>It takes a moment but she wraps her forehooves around you and return the favor, burying her chin in the crook of your neck.
"I'm so sorry Rarity. I didn't know."
>"*Sniff* It's alright. I made peace with it long ago, this just brought up some old memories."
>Pushing away from the hug she starts to wipe an eye with her hoof.
>"This isn't a world a foal should be brought into Twilight. If you'd just seen the thing's I've seen you would understand. Having a foal should be a wonderful experience full of joy, not terror as it's torn from your hooves. They deserve to group up happy and free not slaving away by day and brainwashed by night."
"But, but still it's wrong to decide that for ponies! What about when slavery ends? This isn't something you can undo!"
>Sighing Rarity turns to look out the floor to ceiling window at the city below.
>"This isn't ending darling. As much as we might want it to this is here to stay. You would know better than me how little is left of the Equestria we knew."
>She's right about that. You'd been on the run for years through ruins and forests before they'd caught you. You'd seen it all and it's not much left to see.
"Just because things can't go back doesn't mean things can't get better..."
>She turns to brush your cheek with a hoof and a sad smile.
>"You've always been an optimist Twilight but sometimes you need to be a realist as well. I don't doubt sometime in the future this might all be an ugly blotch on history, but not in our lifetime. The few humans who care about our rights don't even bother fighting for freedom yet. Right now they push for laws to ensure more human treatment, babysteps as it were."
>She's right about that too and even those groups are small and insignificant.
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>>30261191
>"You just need to find someplace safe darling. Come be mine. If we can convince Anon to give you up you'll be part of my personal stock. I've bought all my personal mares from the company so it was too late for them; but there no reason for you to be fixed if you come straight to me. I can protect you."
>You want to say yes. You really really want to be part of Rarity's 'stock' and that gave you a lot of conflicting feelings.
>You wouldn't even have to face you're new greatest fear. You'd never thought about foals in a place like this but you don't want the opportunity taken from you either.
>Would Anon give you up though? He'd said you could discuss it if you were still unhappy but only if Rarity offered a reasonable price.
>Price, if she wanted you so bad now then why had she tried so little the first time?
>You don't consider yourself prideful but it kinda hurt a little remembering how little she'd been willing to offer.
>Was that why it had upset you so much? Because it seemed she didn't care?
>Like she didn't value you.
"I... I'm not sure. It would never be like old times would it?"
>"No, no it wouldn't. I'm a different mare than the one you knew Twilight; changes both physical and mental mean things will never be quite the same."
>That's true actually. The lack of estrogen she used to possess could have considerable consequences to her personality.
>Biology was never your chosen field but you think that might also explain her lack of empathy and intense mood swings.
>"I want to help you but you are correct I will have expectations of you as well."
>Oh boy here it comes.
>"We're still friends darling I promise but if I buy you it's not going to be like Ponyville. We can still have fun when appropriate but I will expect obedience from you. Probably more than Anon ever demanded of you to be frank. No backtalk, no dilly dallying, no disrespect and no 'Rarity'. It really will have to be mistress."
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>>30261200
>Leaning into a meaningful nuzzle she breaths the last part quietly.
>"But i'll still love you like always."
>Pulling back she gives you a genuine smile.
>"I really have missed you. But I wish the choice to be yours! And now if you'll excuse me my makeup is a mess! Ugh I have a meeting in 30 minutes and I am back to square one! Azalea will be about to escort you to the labs. I'll check in on you soon, I'm confident it's nothing you can't handle! Ta ta for now!"
>You watch as your friend canters away in a panic searching for someone named Lilly to help her with her makeup disaster.
>She's still there.
>When you'd seen the element you were convinced that the the mare you knew was gone; but you were wrong.
>She's still there, battered bruised and changed but she's still Rarity.
>Damaged and twisted like her element but maybe just in need of a helping hoof.
>You still didn't agree with her on a few matters, and her new strict and explosive personality scared you a little but that was no reason to give up.
>A true true friend helps a friend in need after all.

>With Rarity gone you took a moment to poke around the penthouse.
>The views from all the floor to ceiling windows are amazing, you can only imagine waking up to the city stretched out beneath you.
>Actually it kinds of reminds you of the royal palace in canterlot, but that's something you don't need to think about right now.
>Turning another corner you find yourself snout to snout with Azalea.
>The two of you exchange the usual greetings and soon enough your riding the elevators back down to the labs.
>You were feeling much more confident about work after Rarity's assurances.
>She knew your magic better than most did so you were sure she wouldn't put you up to anything you couldn't handle.
>"So how was breakfast with the big boss?"
>Oh, makes sense she'd be curious about that.
"It was good that cherry mare is a great cook."
>"Oh yeah her food is great but the rumor is you made mistress cry!"
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>>30261191
sheeiiiit

she get her ovaries chopped out famalam
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>>30261206
>Cherry must have heard and told the others.
>You're sure Rarity wouldn't appreciate knowing rumors were spread behind her back, but should you tell her?
>She's just so 'shudder' strict.
>Either way you aren't sure how much the other mares know of Rarity's past and you don't plan on telling them without her permission.
"It was, just some personal stuff. Nothing important."
>"Aw come on we never get gossip about mistress. I can't remember ever seeing her cry!"
"I'm sorry I really don't think it's my place to talk about."
>"Fine but the rumors are gonna spread that there's finally someone that can get through her rocky exterior."
>The elevator dings for your floor and Azalea escorts you down a few halls to a lab.
>Oh sweet celestia what a lab it is! Look at all that equipment!
>Earth and equestrian tech both littered the lab, it was beautiful!
>Your enthusiasm had to be short lived however as the researchers were eager to get started.
>All in all it was even easier than you'd expected.
>They'd taken off your normal horn ring first. Anon must have transferred control from his phone to Rarity's at some point.
>After that it was a simple matter of putting on a ring and being told to try and break it.
>You'd been nervous at first but after destroying the 4th one in a row felt quite a bit more confident.
>It also made some of the researchers look a little afraid of you so that was kinda funny.
>They were probably realizing you could bust out of the testing chamber and gone on a violent magical rampage ant minute you wanted.
>Fighting and running had lost it's spark for you years ago though so you played nice.
>The time passed quickly and before you knew it the day was gone.
>With the last test complete you trotted past the blast proof glass to find not Azalea waiting for you but Rarity.
>"I told you that you would knock their socks off dear. They'll have enough data to analyze for a while. Now what do you say to some dinner hmm?"
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>>30261213
>With all the magical exertion you had worked up an appetite so you nod.
>Riding back up the elevator Rarity gives you a somewhat sad smile.
>"I do apologize, I wish we could go somewhere nice but I've found most places are a bit averse to serving a pony. Not to worry though Cherry is sure to have whipped us up something tasty"
>She wasn't wrong about that, the daffodil soup was amazing. It reminded you of simpler and happier times.
"Oh wow there's no way any human restaurant has food like that."
>"I am glad you enjoyed it Twilight. Speaking of humans though have you given any more thought to what we discussed this morning?"
"Umm, a little."
>She giggles a little.
>"You know I have to give you back soon darling. As much as I'd love to keep you forever, if you want this then you need to decide soon."
"I know, can I just sleep on it?"
>"Well I do still have you til the day after tomorrow. Even though you actually finished all the testing today, everyone was most impressed by the way."
>That makes you smile, compliments were hard to come by nowadays!
>"I tell you what why don't we just hang out tonight? just the two of us, we can watch a movie."
"I did kind of want to see that giant TV in action."
>"Wonderful I'll even let you pick it, come along."
>You ended up watching Arrival. It was kind of funny that the movie was about how humans would peacefully interact with aliens when when reality had turned out so much different.
>Nevertheless it was a good movie, you found yourself imagining how you'd have reacted in the same situation.
>Rarity was... less into sci-fi. In fact she was constantly asking you questions the entire movie but the truth was you didn't mind.
>It felt like old times, snuggled up against your friend just hanging out.
>By the time the movie ended your eyelids were heavy, work must have taken more out of you than you realized.
>"Hmm is my little pony sleepy?"
"No no I'm up I'm up..."
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>>30261216
>Poking your downed head with her muzzle she challenged the truth of the statement.
>"Yes clearly you are wide awake, come here darling."
>Picking you up. Why does everyone pick you up?
>You're too tired to protest the magical lift and instead curl in on yourself and try to drift off to sleep.
>"Did you have a good day Twilight?"
"mhmmm."
>"What about Azalea, was she nice to you?"
"mhmmm. asked about this morning... me and you..."
>"Oh gossiping about my little breakdown this morning hmm?"
"mhmmm.
>"I see..."
>Holy crap this bed is soft, and big.
>This isn't the same one as last night.
>A weight on the bed behind you gives you hint of exactly who's bed it is.
>Wrapping her forehooves around you Rarity pulls you close until you're her little spoon.
>Back when you girls had had spent the night parties somehow rarity had always ended up being the big spoon to your little.
>The few extra inches she had on you on you resulted in a good and comfy fit you had to admit.
ZZZ ponies shouldn't be made out of bananas ZZZ Discord will never fit into that dress ZZZ
smack smack smack
>Ugh. awake. no. why.
>The warm forelegs are gone, why are the warm forelegs gone?
>"Going to do that again hmmm??"
>Is someone yelling?
>"Want to spread rumors I'll give you something to girls something to gossip about!"
>"No no mistress I'm sorry!"
>Oh fuck oh shit!
>You're in Rarity's room but she's not.
>There's yelling coming from the other side of the building where Azalea and the other mares rooms are.
>Holy shit was this your fault? You'd told her about what Azalea had said in your sleep deprived state!
>Listening more careful your heart sinks.
SMACK SMACK SMACK
>You know the sound of something smacking pony flesh all too well.
>It's not frenzied or insanely loud like your lessons tend to be but it doesn't exactly sound fun either.
>"You're lucky! I'm in! a good! mood!"
>"Ow ow ow we're sorry mistress!"
>Is everyone going hate you now? No one likes a rat.
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>>30261218
>"Good, now off to bed all of you. I expect you all to remember this lesson! No spying, no gossiping and no lollygagging!"
SMACK
>"Yes mistress!"
>No wonder Rarity was glad to hear how Anon handled you. She's the exact same way!
>You wouldn't call what you'd heard a harsh beating, it sounded somewhat tame compared to what you were used too, but you still feel awful.
>You didn't want to get anyone in trouble! Now you're the favorite and the tattletale!
>Your ear twitches as hoof steps approach the bedroom.
>"Bunch of immature fillies..."
>Was she trying to hide their discipline from you?
>It seemed like she'd waited til you'd gone to bed on purpose.
>Deciding not to test your luck you do your best to pretend to be asleep as Rarity quietly slips back into the room.
>Sliding back into the bed you try to act casual as she once again claims you as her little spoon.
>You can barely hear her whisper to herself as she tucks your head beneath her chin.
>"Well at least someone is still asleep..."
>Yeah asleep, totally. Don't panic don't panic; just relax and pretend be asleep.
>If you aren't will you be in trouble too? No, that's silly but you feeling of from safety earlier is now replaced with one of fear.
>She'd just beat a pony with these hooves and now they are wrapped around you in a tight embrace.
>Just what would it take to set her off to turn those hooves on you?
>Just how safe were you? She'd promised to protect you but does that include from her self?
>It was a long and uneasy night.

More in the future sometimes idk.
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>>30261218
>>"Oh gossiping about my little breakdown this morning hmm?"
>"mhmmm.
Twiggles confirmed for worst horse.
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>>30260505
I think it was a group effort thing going from just isolation and then turning into the sex rape stress box.
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How would you run a sex slave market differently from a standard work slave mart?
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>>30262474
Same way but with more emphasis on the "goods" on "display".
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>>30262541
Would you tie the leads to a pole or use expandable buttplugs to keep them in place?
Peircings with chains?
Dildos from both ends to keep them pinned?
Gently rotated dildos to turn them into a lathe of lewdness?
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>>30262735
I think someone is putting too much thought into this...
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>>30261191
In other words somewhere in the world the Rarity fillies may be the pets of some human or they could be dead, I think that the most it hurts to her is uncertainty of its destiny
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>>30260295
>>30251860
>>30261222

Great updates, all around. Thanks! All of these were most enjoyable.
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>>30247458

> Dave sounded *pissed* on the phone. But you were right, he still wanted the money.
> You're a little surprised he told you Dash was gone. You half suspected he'd try to pull some trick and get your money anyway.
> Well, he still might do something stupid. Sally insisted you take two of the Pony Society 'operatives' along.
> You reluctantly agreed.
> Zoe has already taken the girls to see their friend and meet the other ponies they had rescued.
> Who knows, maybe there'll be some tearful reunions.
> Your phone beeps and you head down to the garage.
> ...
> You're in way over your head.
> Mike, one of the guys, has a gun. You happened to see it when he was getting in the car.
> Shit, this could turn ugly.
> You're glad you skipped breakfast as you're waiting with the car in front of the brothel.
> Feels like your stomach is twisted up in knots.
> You almost gasp when the door opens. The goons bring out the pony, followed closely by Dave.
> You can't help but stare.
> It's certainly Pinkie, but she seems changed.
> You get out of the car and take the briefcase from the back seat.
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>>30262918
> Of course Dave counts the money carefully. You try to keep an eye on his two men and the pony.
> Luckily, your own goons (face it, that's basically what they are), stay in the car.
> "Okay, we're good here," Dave proclaims. You find yourself holding Pinkie's leash.
> She barely looks at you before returning her gaze to the ground.
> Well, she seems better than the other two were. But you don't like that expression.
> Dave noticed you looking. He almost grins.
> "Because you're such a valued customer, I went to the trouble of training this one up for you."
> Those words make you afraid. And you can see they are making Pinkie tremble, too.
> You just want to get out of there, fast. You have to pull on the leash to make the pony move, but she jumps in the car by herself.
> She keeps looking down.
> You get in and drive, hoping you'll never see that place again.
> Or that bastard.
> All you want now is to get home and send these men away. You know they're there to help, but you feel uneasy around guns.
> You don't invite them upstairs and they don't ask. Pinkie seems to follow when you tug her leash, so you don't need help.
> You can't believe how empty the place feels. You've gotten used to your guests.
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>>30262922

> Well, there's Pinkie, but she just stands in the hallway, disinterested.
> You start to worry what Dave meant when he said he'd 'trained her'.
> First thing - get that damned collar off.
> You unhook the leash and reach around her neck to unclasp the leather loop.
> The pony tries to wriggle away, raising her hooves as if to protect the collar.
> "No, Master!" she whimpers.
"What's wrong?"
> You swear she has paled from fear. You let her go out of surprise.
> "M-Master - a slave is not allowed to go without her collar!"
"You don't have to do that, Pinkie. I'm not going to be your Master."
> She's shaking her head, growing increasingly panicked.
> "No, that's not right, Master. That's why you bought me. To serve you."
"I don't want a slave."
> You can't believe how wide her eyes are.
> "N-no," she whispers. "Please, Master, don't kill me! I can be a good pony, just give me a chance."
"What?! I'm not going to kill you."
> But she doesn't seem to hear. Tears start dripping from her face.
> "Master Dave said this would happen. I'm just not good enough."
> She turns that tear-filled gaze on you.
> "Please let me try, Master."
"That's nonsense, Pinkie. You're not a slave. You're free now."
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>>30262933

> It seems like she can't even grasp the concept. She's whimpering openly now.
> "No, no, please no more. Don't beat me again, I'll be good!"
> She's in a world of her own and you don't know how to bring her out.
> It doesn't look good, the way she's shaking and hyperventilating.
> It's making you scared as well.
"Hey, hey, calm down, Pinkie, everything is fine!"
> Still no touch with reality. She just continues her crying.
> "No, no more. Please no more. I'll do anything!"
> Maybe, if you play along, you can calm her down? Her world was shaped by slavery for you don't know how long, and now you've taken even that last bit of familiarity away.
> She can't make sense of anything. Maybe her friends can help, but they won't be back for a while.
"Okay, that's enough. Shut up, Pinkie!"
> You try to make your voice stern, but you can't really do it - not when you don't mean it.
> She focuses on you, so maybe you're convincing enough?
"Come with me."
> She's still shaking and crying, barely able to stand, but she follows you.
> You'd wondered what good the cots in your living room will do, when the ponies can just sleep on the couch, but Sally said it would help if they had a little space to consider their own.
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>>30262940

> You pick the one in the corner and point to it.
"That's your bed. I want you there and quiet."
> She quickly walks over to it and plops down.
> "Yes, Master," she says with a tiny voice.
> You really don't like doing this.
> It's kind of working. Pinkie has stopped shaking and now just looks miserable.
> She sniffs and wipes at her nose with her foreleg.
> You sit yourself on the cot next to hers and just look.
"This is a mess, but we'll get through it."
> You said that for yourself, really.
> "What d-do you want me to do, Master?" she asks when she doesn't understand you.
"I want you to rest a little. Are you thirsty? Hungry."
> Asking her like that seems to unsettle her.
> "I'm grateful for anything my Master gives me," she mumbles like a mantra.
> You can't go wrong with a bit of water. You go fetch a bowl. On a whim, you also grab a carrot from the fridge.
> Pinkie just looks at them when you put them down by her mattress.
"Go on. These are for you."
> "Thank you, Master," she says very carefully and dips her muzzle. She doesn't drink much and she doesn't touch the vegetable.
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>>30262947

"Don't you want it?"
> "I-" she says, looking at it, "I haven't earned it yet, Master."
> Sigh.
"You don't have to earn it. I'm giving it to you."
> She's getting scared again. "No, no, I can't, Master. I'll be good, I promise!"
> You start to think they drugged her or something. Beatings alone can't do that, can they?
> While you wait, you can see the pony lick her lips as she's looking at the carrot.
> "M-maybe Master wants me? I'm a good pony."
> It's unsettling, the way you can't help yourself but look her over.
> You finally see the bruises. They blend in too well with her color.
> You're no judge, but it looks like she's been beaten, repeatedly. And very hard.
> Carefully, you reach out to pet her. She doesn't move away.
> "Yes, Master," she says, trying to sound seductive, you guess.
> "Please touch me, Master. I want it."
> The smile is so forced that you quickly move away.
> With horror, you realize she though you were going to do it - take her up on her offer.
"Oh, no. No, Pinkie. You don't have to do that ever again."
> She's still trying. This was probably the only way she had earned food while 'working' for Dave.
> "Please, Master. I want you to rut me! Don't you like me?"
"Don't- please don't talk like that."
> "But Master, that's my purpose. I'll be your good little mare, I promise."
"Enough!"
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>>30262951

> She falls silent. You think she's about to cry again.
"Look, we'll talk about it in the morning. Right now, I want you to eat and drink some more, and then get some rest."
> You made your tone commanding and it seems to have done the trick.
> "Yes, Master," she says and takes the carrot with her mouth.
> You watch her chew in silence. Then you watch as she drinks. Once the bowl is empty, you just move it aside.
> She lies down on her side and watches you, motionless.
> You guess that's the best you can do, for now.
> Twilight and Rarity should be home soon. You take out your phone and fire off a quick message to Zoe.
> The reply isn't what you were expecting: "Decided to stay the night. Dash is really down, could use the company. I'll keep an eye on R, make sure she's not stupid."
> Apparently Sally had told her about the incident.
> That leaves you in a bind. You're not a hundred percent sure Pinkie might not try something similar.
> You will have to stay up and watch her.
> With a deep sigh you move yourself to the couch. It seems you'll spend another night there.
> But you know you won't be able to stay awake, not without help.
> Pinkie seems okay for the moment, so you go and start the coffee machine.
> It's a long afternoon. You try to distract yourself with your laptop for a while.
> When that fails, you watch a movie. Pixar stuff, nothing violent. Pinkie glances at it occasionally, but mostly she's keeping her eyes on you.
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>>30262957

> You'll have to find something for her to do, or you'll both go stir-crazy from boredom.
> Maybe you have an idea.
> You go to the bathroom and start the water.
"Pinkie, come here!"
> She trots up, obediently and looks from you to the tub and back.
"I want you to wash yourself. Here's the shampoo."
> Sally has brought you some. Apparently, the ponies don't like the smell of most soaps. Too chemical, you guess.
> You also point out the towels.
"Call me if you need anything else, okay? Or if you're done."
> She climbs in. "Yes, Master. I'll be pretty and clean for Master."
> There's about three inches of warm water, you guess that's enough so you shut it off.
> You feel pleased with your idea and leave the pony to it.
> It still sucks that you have to order her around like this. You really hope she will snap out of it.
> You loathe to imagine what Twilight or Rarity would think of you if they saw that.
> While the pony is bathing, you go make dinner for both of you. You couldn't be sure, but Pinkie seemed a bit thin.
> You make your signature: toast with cheese and a side of juice.
> She'll eat it if you command her.
> You put the plates down on the coffee table and play another movie.
> Thirty minutes later, there's still no sign of the pony.
> You go and knock on the bathroom door.
"Are you okay in there? Do you need help?"
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>>30262968

> There's a definite sound of hooves on tiles. You assume that means she's out of the tub.
> You hesitate before opening the door and then feel stupid. Ponies don't wear clothes. Why is walking into the bathroom any different than going into another room?
> You open the door.
> Pinkie is trying to lick up a puddle of vomit.
"What are you doing?"
> She's already shaking in expectation of punishment.
> "I'm so sorry, Master. I couldn't help it. I'll clean it up, I promise. Please don't punish me, I'll clean it up!"
> There's a lot of soapy water on the floor.
> You kneel down and pull her face out of the gunk.
"Tell me what happened."
> "I-I spilled some shampoo, Master. I didn't mean to, I swear!"
> You can see the bottle on the floor.
> "I knew I had to clean it up, but it made me sick. I'm so sorry, Master. I didn't mean to make your floor all dirty. I'll clean it up!"
"Don't do that, it will just make you sick again."
> "Old M-master D-dave always made me clean up with my tongue," she wails, distraught.
"Well, I'm not him!"
> You have to put on your firm voice before she starts panicking again.
"Go to the living room. There's a plate for you with food I want you to eat, and a glass of juice you'll drink. Then wait for me!"
> She hangs her head and moves immediately. "Yes, Master."
> You go and fetch a mop.
> At least the pony is somewhat cleaner than before.
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>>30262975

> By the time you're done, Pinkie had devoured her toast and emptied her glass. She's sitting on the floor, waiting.
> You take your seat and slide your plate toward her. Mopping up vomit has left you with a reduced appetite anyway.
"Are you still hungry, Pinkie?"
> You can see how she's watching the plate. Her eyes say 'yes'.
> "N-no, Master," she lies.
"Eat it anyway!"
> You can see the conflict. She's looking at you again, trying to understand what you want from her.
> She believes it's some kind of a trap, but she can't figure it out. In the end, she takes a bite and slowly chews.
> Keeps a close watch on you, but she continues. Bite by bite, until it's all gone.
> She even licks the plate clean.
"Good, now come up here."
> You pat the couch next to you.
> Her eyes go wide again. Too bad it's fear.
> "B-b-but, I-," she stutters, "I'm not allowed. Furniture is too good for filthy whores like me."
> That last part sounded like she had been quoting. You can guess who.
> "M-master D-dave said so!"
> Yep.
"Well, I'm saying get up here and get comfortable. We're watching a movie."
> She's uneasy as fuck, but obeys. You can see she's trying hard to touch the couch with as little of her body as possible.
> It's still better than the floor.
> She almost jumps off when you drape a blanket around her. She was still damp from the bath, after all.
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>>30262983

> The blanket probably smells like Twilight and Rarity. You're a genius, even if it was an accident.
> You can see how deeply the pony inhales the scent. And you can see how her eyes fill with tears.
> But you keep quiet and just play the next movie on the list. Looks like you're watching Frozen.
> You haven't been interested enough to see it before.
> No time like the present, right?
> ...
> You're having a confusing dream about ponies in the Matrix when something wakes you up.
> The TV is still going, but you don't immediately recognize the movie.
> Last thing you remember, Elsa was singing, but that probably doesn't mean much.
> You try to figure out what woke you up.
> It's not difficult. Pinkie is trying to undo your belt.
> She already managed to pull your shirt up a little and now you feel her hot breath on your exposed skin.
"Whoa, stop! Hey, what are you doing?"
> She quickly backs away. You raised your voice at her because you didn't like how good it felt.
> "Eep! I'm sorry, Master. I thought you wanted me," she says, beginning to tear up again.
> You can see how she came to that conclusion. There's an uncomfortable bulge from your sleep boner.
> You haven't said anything for a while, so the pony steps closer.
> "Just r-relax, Master. I'll do everything..."
> Dear god, you aren't actually thinking about it, are you?
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>>30262990

> "I," she starts in that same, broken tone, but falls silent. She takes a breath and tries again.
> "I want to, Master. Let me repay your kindness."
> You manage to snap out of it.
"That's what they beat into you, Pinkie. It's not right, so just stop talking."
> She swallows and her words turn more urgent.
> "P-please! You're the nicest Master I've had. I don't want to go away. Let me be a good mare for you, Master. You'll like me, I promise!"
"I'm not sending you away, Pinkie. And you don't have to repay me anything. You'll be safe here with your friends until we figure something out."
> She heaves a sigh and steps away. "I don't have any friends, Master."
"Sure you do. Rarity and Twilight will be here tomorrow. Rainbow Dash is in a hospital - you can visit her later. And we'll find AJ and Fluttershy."
> The pony is shaking her head. "No, they aren't my friends anymore. M-master D-dave said they didn't want to see me."
> Time for another cry?
> "They don't want to be friends with a worthless little whore."
> Yep.
> She doesn't resist when you pick her up bodily and drop her back on the couch. She doesn't even register your hug, but you keep it going anyway.
> Best just to let her get it all out now, and her friends can set the record straight in the morning.
> She probably wouldn't believe you anyway, not in this state.
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>>30262999

O-kay. I gots some interesting backstory and meta ready for the next part. Working on weaving it into the narrative so it reads more natural. I'll do my very best to get it ready tomorrow, but no promises.
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>>30263006
Keep up the good work senpai, really enjoying your story. Looking forward to more.
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>>30262999
>>30263006
>"No, they aren't my friends anymore. M-master D-dave said they didn't want to see me."
Clever idea, especially because I don't think that we've had this kind of manipulation in any other stories so far.
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>>30263006
I look forward to your updates, I like your story.
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>>30262999
aww

poor little pink floofball
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Ponk abuse best abuse.
Earth ponies get no love.
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>>30263006
Man. Even if the PPS means well. With that conditioning, it's going to be hard to get her away from him. Anon needs to bring up reimbursement if they expect to just take them. sure it's petty but it's still quite a bit of money.
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>>30263982
ponk is for whipping?
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>>30261218
Facts of life, if not properly supported, the victim of abuse ends up becoming abuser
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>>30264148
Cut her tail off and beat her with it until Trump is sick of borscht.
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>>30261222
If Anon is not willing to sell to Twiligth at least they can reach a kind of contract by offering their services as a voluntary under payment, Twiligth will use its magic to favor its company but will not be subject to its policies and corrective methods.

I wonder if they mention the rest of the six mane in your story

Good job Vega
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>>30263969
I want to hug this pone
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>>30263121
We already know how losing her friends effects her in the show. And all that anguish on top of the abuse hurts deeply.

I normally can't even stand PP, but I still want to do everything I can for her.
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I want to force Spitfire to do menial data entry in a cubicle for a non iso compliant company
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>>30262999

Fucking Dave I hope you devour a swarm of parasprites

The saddest part is that of all ponies is the easiest to deceive and destroy their confidence, the mere idea that others despise it is enough to burst their balloons and steal their smile, I imagine that at all times she has straight hair and fallen
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>>30263006
I'm sure it will be a good story once you've finished it.

Question: Can Anon get the information on Applejack when hack the computer of Dave as well as the data from guy who buy Fluttershy?
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>>30262735
>lathe of lewdness
Lathe is not for sexual.
Any intimacy with working lathe may result in injury and death.
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>>30264509
I like this idea.
I bet such strong unicorns are few and far between.
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>>30260337
i'm too late here but i'll throw in my two cent.

Don't do it, Thunderlane weakens his position too much if he becomes the bad cop also.
hold it against him and remind him what happened to Corona.
Tell him that while you can slow Anon down you can't stop him indefinitely.
hes going to come back and hes going to start again and its only going to get worse.
remind him the only one to stop this is him talking, no-one else can help him now.
Tell him that he beat the one pony of the whole camp Anon gave any kind of shit about, he is not going to fuck about
If he refuses to talk fine, drop the prod and call Anon back.
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>>30265319
Don't be a faggot, Anon.
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>>30265319
ts not being mean.
They just don't have pockets.
Having pockets means you can store stuff close at hand.
This is a very sure sign of being human.
Its why we have everything from purses to nuclear doomsday bunkers.
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>>30259882
It's not that I'm stuck, I have the entire story planned out from here to finish, it's just that I always underestimate how long it takes to get there. I'm already cutting a bunch of pointless scenes and it's taking a while. If anything, the only part I'd get stuck on is the ending. panic.jpg

Albino Vinyl needs me to do some more research as well. Multiple Personality Disorder is a very interesting subject, and I wouldn't feel comfortable writing about it unless I could do it accurately.
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>>30265781
>Albino Vinyl
I have an anon with her from request, is there anything I should know other than she essentially should be running in a hazmat suit outside?
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https://pastebin.com/9d5xtBD5

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>surely there's no way this can end well...
>before you can say a word, Master has a handful of your mane, guiding you toward the fireplace as Shining Armor sits nearby with a triumphant smirk plastered across his muzzle
>his shivers travel down his arm and into your neck as he wriggles his fingers around, digging them deeper into your mane, searching for warmth, before sitting cross-legged in front of the fireplace
>"Just... sit behind me, girl. No need for this to get awkward."
"Yes, Master..." you reply sheepishly, hesitantly sitting on your haunches behind him as his teeth begin to chatter and he scoots closer to the fire, reaching his arms toward it and rubbing his hands together vigorously before looking over his shoulder at you
>"C'mon girl, Master needs you right now," he says almost pleadingly, patting his shoulder.
>feeling a bit of heat come to your cheeks and your heart thump hard in your chest, you glance once more over at Shining Armor, who is watching with what almost seems like some sort of disturbing voyeuristic glee, before rearing up and hooking your forelegs over Master's shoulders, pressing the warm, fuzzy winter coat of your chest and belly against his back
"Oh... m..my..." you mutter, feeling him wriggle into your chest as he pulls your hooves over his shoulders
>you give a short yelp as the ice cold skin of his back makes contact with your teats, shifting your weight on your hind legs back and forth rapidly, flicking your tail and squirming until the discomfort subsides, Master seemingly unaware of the sensitive part of your body he's touching
>his shivering causes your entire body to quake as you slowly settle in to your position on his back, pressing yourself against him a bit more to try to offer him more of your warmth, giving a nicker as you finally start to relax and let yourself enjoy the most intimate contact you've ever had with him
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>>30266160
>"Good girl, Corona... thanks..." he says to you softly, shifting his eyes over toward Shining and half-heartedly muttering, "still whipping your ass when this is over, Shiny..."
>his train of thought is interrupted when he feels your muzzle against his cheek
>"d...definitel...y.. g..etting..."
>and again as you slowly rub your cheek against his with your eyes closed, letting out a long, drawn out nicker as you release a hot breath through your nostrils which cascades over his cheek and chin
>"t...the whip..."
>the tone of his voice falls off in a rapid decrescendo, followed by a heavy silence, the only sound present the crackling of the fireplace, and the barely perceptible breathing of the room's occupants
>the silence is only broken some time later with the brief sliding of wood and creaking of glass as, one by one, the windows are all closed up tight once again, Shining Armor also somehow finding a way to slip out of the room completely unnoticed
>it doesn't take long for the air in the room to return to its former toastiness
>curiously, even though his shivering has long since ceased entirely, Master has not attempted to move away from you or push you off
>he just stares off into space with a vacant expression
>you're not sure if he's tired and numb or deep in thought
>there's no more mention of whipping the ornery stallion that forced you together
>his attention seems to be on more important matters
>at least, you think so...
>it's hard to tell what's going through his mind most of the time
>your weight rests almost entirely against him now, as he's slightly slumped forward to prevent you from falling away from him
>this is heaven - your muzzle firmly planted under his chin, cheek against his neck, listening to his rhythmic breathing, the ear that's not crumpled up under his throat giving a content little flick here and there
>you don't ever want to move from this spot
>he feels so wonderful...
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>>30266163
>all too soon though, your bliss is interrupted, as you feel him begin to tremble once again
>"Master... are you cold again?" you murmur just above a whisper as you gently lift your head, eyes just barely cracking open as you bump your muzzle up against his chin and stretch and squirm, pressing your forehooves into his chest as you pull yourself tighter against his body
>"you really love me, don'tcha girl?" he says softly, bringing a hand up to caress one of your hooves and resting it there
"yessir..." you whisper
>"even after everything you've been through... that we've been through... that I've... I've done..."
>you respond with a dreamy sigh and lazy swish of your tail
>your body bobs gently up and down as he lets out a chuckle under his breath, slowly shaking his head
>"don't suppose there's any way to change your mind on that, is there?"
"nosir..."
>"heh... fuckin' Shiny..." his voice catches in his throat for just a moment, but he seems to think better of whatever it is he's about to say, instead settling on a deep sigh before finally pulling away from you, gently guiding you off his back as he turns to the side and pulls you around to where you're sitting in front of him
>as he looks into your eyes, there's a softness in his you're seeing for the first time, the firelight glimmering and dancing in them as he lifts his hand, gently guiding a stray strand of mane away from your face, causing you to avert your gaze with a deep blush
>though you only manage to tilt your head away for a fleeting moment, as he's soon directing your gaze back to his with an index finger and thumb under your chin
>"My Corona..." he whispers to you as he begins closing the gap between the two of you
>all at once you forget how to breathe, a sharp gasp lurching deep within your lungs, heaving your entire body before it recoils immediately to its former position, the tension in every muscle soon matching the tightness in your chest
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>>30266169
>your beloved Master
>the stall-
>the MAN you worship
>the only thing you care about in this wretched world...
>when his lips meet yours, it's as though a fuse box blows in your mind, sending electricity to every nerve ending in your body, a sharp half-whinny dying the moment it leaps from your throat
>you tilt your head to match his angle, eyes rolling back into your head as he places a hand behind you and pulls you into the kiss with a soft grunt
>his tongue pokes past your velvety muzzle and lips
>tentatively prodding at first
>but soon forcefully intruding, snaking around yours as the taste of his saliva mingles with your own
>your body roils and quakes, a flood of emotions bursting forth from where you'd been forced to dam them up for so long
>as he finally pulls away, slowly breaking the kiss, you feel faint, the word "Master" hanging on your lips in a trickling whisper
"I love you, Master..." you say with a deep shudder, "Oh I love you..."
>for a few moments it feels as though you are floating on air
>though you quickly realize your Master has slipped an arm beneath your hindquarters and lifted you up off the floor
>and is soon carrying you away to bed for the night
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>>30265946
>hazmat suit

Albinoism isn't that extreme. You do sunburn easily and have a higher chance of developing skin cancer, but it's not like standing in the sun is going to melt your skin off. All it does is make you burn more easily. Yes, obviously, in the worst case scenario she could get a pretty ugly sunburn, but it's really unlikely as long as she doesn't do something stupid like run around without a hat. Which probably happened at some point, being a slave. The main problem is just that if you don't protect yourself from the sun, over years, you begin to develop non-lethal skin problems due to your lack of melanin. Such as visible blood veins or, ironically for Vinyl, turning slightly yellow. Sun protection isn't really going to be a big deal. Throw in the fact that she's also covered in fur and been living with it her whole life and knows how to deal with it, I'd say it's a non-issue.
There are a lot of horror pictures out there of Albino's absoluetly covered in burns, but remember that those are the exception and not the rule.
Other than that, remember that many Albino's develop sight problems due to a lack of melanin in the eye. This is the same reason Albino's have red iris'. Vinyl would most likely be short sighted as a result, and have trouble seeing clearly in the light, hence the sunglasses.

What does 'I have an anon with her from request' mean?
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>>30266177
I write Lyra Temple Run, somebody said the anon should have albino vinyl after confusing me with you.
I rolled with it, so now I have an anon with an albino Vinyl that I have no idea on the personality.
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>>30266160
That's a snuggley update! No big surprises, but your writing voice can be so gentle, really works here.
Can't imagine what's up next. If Anon takes being attacked with magic seriously Shinys future could be grim. If he just laughs it off it would not feel right. Really looking forward to it either way.
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>>30266292
I'm sure shiny will be dealt with. Anon's head injury introduces an unpredictable element to pretty much everything at this point.

Shiny might still get a token punishment for his behavior, but Anon might also thank him for giving him the push he needed to get over his hangups about Corona.
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>>30266246
Oh, well that's easy.

Vinyl is a bit of a tomboy who's eager to make sure that everyone is having a good time. Think Rainbow mixed with Pinkie, except lazier. She's very laid-back, easy to talk to, but not very energetic except when excited or passionate.. She's also emotional and, like all ponies, cares deeply about her friends. Stick to those points and you should be fine.

Damn, I guess I should start reading Temple Run.
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>>30266172
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>>30266160
>>30266163
>>30266169
>>30266172
is that all?
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>>30266541
For now, yes. Just a quickie to wrap up the scene.
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>>30266550
>Just a quickie to wrap up the scene
>a quickie
d...does that mean they fucked?
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>>30266172
oh yes
FUCK yes
Corona deserves this so much
SO FUCKING MUCH
CORONA A GOOD GIRL
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>>30260337
I also vote NOT to zap the poor guy, he's already been put through the ringer and we're supposed to be his way out, plus using it while the floor is so wet seems a bad idea in general.

>calling us the traitor
kindly point out that Anon has never put anyone on death's doorstep like these fucks did to Mocha, a pony who has had little to no choice in what she's done for almost half her life. They were the ones who committed an un-equine act here, and the camp agrees. It was fellow rebel ponies that sold them out, not the guards tracking them down. If Celestia and Luna were here, they'd be horrified and ashamed at what they've done.
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Would you turn your slave into a cyborg if it meant keeping them alive after an accident, or would you accept the love filled life they had with you as the end?
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>>30266750
>Paying a slave's medical bill

It's cheaper for me to just put her down and buy a new one.
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>>30266750
if their brain is intact, and they wanted to live that way, sure
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>>30266750
Even in death, they still have to serve me.
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>>30266550
Question: what thread was captain anon from? Is it going to be back after this green's end?

Dont remember if I asked or if it had been answered already soo...
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>>30266960
I think that story was from Anon in Equestria threads. Might depend on how many people there remember it and want it back.

I would honestly rather swf stay here and focus on slave pony stories myself.
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>>30266169
>>30266172

Andddddddddddd Corona is a good pony!!!

Little but great update AWF, no need more for this part, thanks y more of this in the future.

We must really leave the depressive phase and start with a new chapter, the history must advance to a next stage
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>>30266172
you guys should know this guy is a faggot that thinks he's above the rules just because he's a mod in the discord server
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>>30267254
Nobody cares.
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>>30267254
post poner or don't post at all

and stop being such a massive faggot
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>>30261414
but she didn't mean too =(

>>30262816
certainly possible.

>>30264509
No imminent plans for the rest of the girls yet but who knows later.
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>>30267254
>getting butthurt over something like this
You poor, poor dear

>>30267300
Okay
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>>30267254
>Joining discord
>Caring about discord
That s where you went wrong pham
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>>30266750
I would get the pony augmented in order to save their life, and then they would chase clues all over the world trying to unravel the conspiracy of the terrorists who attacked us
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>>30267750
>Tfw now I want to read this or write it
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>>30267750
Cyber-pony or Ponynator?
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>>30267414

>pony with super obvious belly button

This makes me uncomfortable
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>"Oh... m..my..." you mutter, feeling him wriggle into your chest as he pulls your hooves over his shoulders
kek
coronas getting a little too heated
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>>your weight rests almost entirely against him now, as he's slightly slumped forward to prevent you from falling away from him
>>this is heaven - your muzzle firmly planted under his chin, cheek against his neck, listening to his rhythmic breathing, the ear that's not crumpled up under his throat giving a content little flick here and there
Fuck that's cozy.
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>being this new
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>>30260337
Don't but at the same time remind him that he was in this exact position, looming over a defenseless pony who couldn't fight back and out of the two of them it was the "traitor" that refused to harm his own kind.
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>>30268961
This is a good idea
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>>30268961
I third this motion.
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Corona needs a spanking.
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>>30269609
But she is a good girl and took her spanking already when she was a bad girl. Corona is very sorry and will never do it again.

Corona needs kisses and snuggles.
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"Because I Choose To"

> “Starlight was visited by a Changeling agent that day when you went for the Periodic Review of Cases meeting at Falcon’s Hall… He explained to her that if she wants it, he will be able to use a magical artefact to teleport her to Harmony Village, thus making her ‘disappear’. You see, Thorax has been watching you ever since you got Starlight from the Agency shelter as she is one of his closest friends back in Equestria. He snatched the earliest opportunity that he could to make sure that she is doing well under your ownership and offer her a means of escape if necessary.”
> You freeze, stunned by what you learned. Someone broke into your house?
> The pony princess turns to look at you, giving you a warm smile.
> “As you can guess, Starlight told the Changeling everything she knew about you, and convinced him that she wanted to stay with you temporarily. She felt safe with you, and asked him to give her a chance to live under your ownership and care… I don’t know what you did exactly, but you gave her hope, Mister Anon. You have her hope for a new life, and you made her believe that you loved her.”
> You frown.
““Temporarily”, Princess? Also, was Starlight… Already in love with me at that time?”
> Princess Cadance’s smile grows even wider.
> “She asked for a week before he contacts her again. As far as I can tell, I see that Starlight believes in you, Mister Anon, but I cannot say for sure when she said that she loved you because she genuinely did, or if she was captured by the difference in the way you and her former Master treated her. We have talked about this and she insisted that it was the former, but I cannot shake my doubts, given the timeframe for that to happen… I don’t mean any offense to you, but wouldn’t you agree that 2 days is way too early for her to fall in love?”
> You shake your head, earning yourself a questioning frown from Cadance.
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Link to Part 2: https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
> Sorry for missing that.

>>30269704
“I guess that I see the concept of ‘love’ differently from you, Princess, and maybe Starlight agrees with my definition… I told her that love is a choice, Princess, not a feeling. It is consciously and intentionally choosing the best outcome for someone, despite how it makes you feel. To me, love is a commitment and a way of living… So when I said I love Starlight, what I actually mean is that I want the very best for her as far as I can provide it, no matter the circumstance and no matter if how badly it hurts me as I pursue that outcome. Time is not a factor here, Princess; the decision to make that choice is.”
> Princess Cadance raises an eyebrow and asks that you expound on what you said.
“For example, assume that you have an aged parent or a child that is stricken with a mental condition. His or her behaviour frustrates you to no end, disrupts your daily schedule and gives you additional problems on top of your already numerous ones. Worse, he or she abuses you verbally and even physically, does things that embarrass you in front of others and even causes you to lose friends. In short, your life becomes a living hell because of said person. Sooner or later, you end up growing resentful, hating the way that he or she behaves and probably not even liking him or her, blaming them for all the misery and problems in your life… Yet, you still choose to continue providing care and attention to that person, sacrificing your time and energy to look after him or her. You do these despite how terrible you feel and how bad his or her behaviour is, simply because he or she is your family member and you love them.”
> Smiling at Cadance, you continue in your explanation.
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>>30269708
“This is the love that I am talking about, Princess, and it is an intentional choice. Time spent with a person does influence whether you make that choice to love them, but it is ultimately still a decision to make that is no different than choosing what to wear or what to eat… In this case, the feeling of ‘love’ that you are referring to is what I see as an emotional or “romantic” attachment, but it is not ‘love’ as I would define it… Like I said, love is a choice and not a feeling, and I think Starlight sees it the same way that I do especially after I explained my perspectives on it to her… Although, you are free to disagree with me on how you conceptualise ‘love’, Princess, as your life experiences are different from mine.”
> You sigh softly and raise your eyes to the ceiling.
“Starlight will always be my pony, and I am her Master. She belongs to me as a slave, but I also want her to be my lover… I want her to be the pony who is happy and willing as she serves me in every capacity that she can because she wants to, not because she feels forced to… You can say that it is selfish of me to think this way, but I want her to always be thinking of me and me alone… I want her to make me feel important and respected by obeying and serving me as her Master. I want her to give me the brilliance of her mind and the wonderful warmth of her body to sate my desires and passions, and I want her to take away my loneliness by being there for me unconditionally… I want her to give me everything she has, Princess… But most importantly… I want her to love me, Princess, and I want her to give me her heart.”
> Letting out a breath, you continue speaking, keeping your eyes on the slow revolutions of the ceiling fan above you. You are aware that you are rambling on at this point, but you just want to lay out all your innermost thoughts to a listening ear.
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>>30269713
“In return for all that, Princess, I will love Starlight and do everything in my power to give her a good life with me as her Master… A new life that is filled with joy and abundance to compensate for her going through so much undeserved hardship in her life… I will be faithful and loyal to her as her lover, and I will fight with every fibre of my being to protect, cherish and love her for the wonderful pony that she is. I will provide for her with everything that I have, and I will treat her with kindness, generosity, and gentleness because I want to be the Master that Starlight feels safe with; the Master that she can rely on to always be there for her, and one that she can put all her trust and love in without ever fearing the sting of betrayal.”
> Your thoughts drift to the times when you had sexual contact with Starlight, and you feel a small, bittersweet smile tugging at your lips.
“True, I will take and demand some things from her, but I will give her much more in return; I will make Starlight smile and laugh as much as I can, not just because I love the sound of her voice and her cute giggles, but because it makes me happy when she too is happy… I will hug her body close to mine every night before we sleep, because I want to show her that I love her and that she never has to fight loneliness by herself again… I will treat her with kindness and gentleness, because I want to see that beautiful smile of hers every morning when she wakes up by my side… And I will never compromise on her well-being and safety, as I never want to see those pretty purple eyes of hers in pain, fear or sorrow ever again… I will do all that, Princess Cadance, because Starlight is everything to me and I cannot live without her.”
> Letting your eyes travel down, you look into the pinkish lavender eyes of the pony princess before you speak again.
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>>30269715
“I promise that I will love Starlight with all my heart, Princess, for Starlight is mine and mine alone. Now, and till the day I die, she will always be my little pony.”
> Princess Cadance is practically beaming at you as she blinks her wet eyes. You are about to apologise for your long-windedness when she opens her muzzle, so you-
> “As you will always be my man, Master… I… Oh sweet Celestia, I love you so much…”
> The both of you jump at that unexpected voice. You scramble to sit up as your eyes darts towards the source. There are 3 new figures in the room. Standing near the doorway are Angela, Starlight, and Coco Pommel.
> Angela is wearing a collared tee-shirt and jeans and carrying your backpack, and she simply shakes her head at you as she rolls her eyes. Starlight has a hoof pressed against her chest, and she looks like she is on the verge of breaking down as she gazes lovingly at you with watery eyes and trembling lips. Adorning her sides is a pair of light green saddle-bags complete with a design of her cutie marks on them, and she is wearing that gold ring on her horn with its glowing teal and white jewels. Coco Pommel lets out what is clearly a longing sigh while tilting her head slightly and using a hoof to wipe her eyes. The cream coated ‘Earth’ pony with her short, light blue mane and tail is wearing what looks like a white and purple sailor collar with a red tie, and she has a frilly red and purple hair clip in her mane. She is also carrying a pair of plain red saddle-bags.
> First it was Cheerilee with her cheerleading outfit, and now it is Coco Pommel with that sailor collar; you swear that these ponies possess weapons-grade cuteness, especially when they wear clothes.
> Get Starlight to wear a French maid’s outfit, Boss. Complete it with black thigh-highs to emphasise the pair of white panties that covers her hindquarters, and you will bleed to death from your nose.
> Good idea, Brain. Holy shit.
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>>30269721
> Turning to Starlight, Coco Pommel gently places a hoof on her shoulder before nodding towards you with a smile. She speaks softly.
> “Go on, Starlight. Your Master is waiting for you.”
> “Master Anon!”
> With that, Starlight sprints towards you and jumps up on the bed, practically tackling you in a hug as she buries her tearful face into your chest. You cannot help but grin as you reach down and remove her saddle-bags, setting them down on your left before wrapping your arms around her. Holding her tightly, you blink rapidly as you lean in to kiss her repeatedly on the top of her head, telling her how much you love and missed her. The corners of your own eyes are becoming wet as you feel an immense warmth both in and on your chest as you are re-united in an embrace with your pony lover. You breathe in her scent, and this time her mane smells floral, but with that new creamy scent again; she must have used your shampoo, but you still cannot place what the new smell is.
> Nevermind that, it feels like ages since you last held her, and is way more important.
> “M-Master! Master, thank you… Thank you so much! I missed you too… I-I love you! I love you too, Master! I love you… I love you… Oh goodness, I love you, Master… Love you… I love you… I love you… I love…”
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>>30269723
> She breaks down entirely, mumbling incoherently as she nuzzles you again and again, pressing her face and eyes into your chest. You blink your wet eyes as you stroke the back of her mane with your left hand, holding her close to you with your right by pressing on her lower back. Pushing against you with her hooves, you allow Starlight to get up as you move your butt backwards, letting you rest your back in a reclining position against the slightly elevated portion of the bed. She looks up and leans in, closing her eyes as she kisses you fiercely on your lips. Starlight wraps her hooves around your neck, pressing her weight against yours as she aggressively attacks you with another passionate kiss. You can barely ‘hmmph’ in surprise when your mouth is covered by her lips, and her tongue repeatedly licks along the length of your mouth in her eagerness while she lets out a muffled moan. The teal-coloured jewel in her horn-ring pulses brightly like a heartbeat.
> How can you resist something like that?
> You open your mouth, and immediately her tongue dives right in, wrestling with your own as she ‘hmm’s loudly. Your pony is salivating a lot, and she tastes and feels as you remember; that distinct plainness intermixed with the texture of her warm tongue and mouth. You close your eyes, allowing your passions to take over as Starlight angles her head differently and leans in further, pressing her lips onto yours in another kiss whilst laying down on your chest, and you proceed to use both arms to press her body into a tight embrace.
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>>30269727
> Starlight is passionate and so wonderfully eager in her demonstrations of love. It makes you dizzy with happiness as you realise the intensity of her feelings for you, and you feel your emotional floodgates threatening to break. Starlight, on the other hand, clearly has no reservations about that; you cannot see her face, but you can feel her tears falling onto your face and neck as she cries and moans in-between each moment that your lips touches hers. Her body raises and falls in sync with each breath you take, and your heart is thumping like a drum. You can feel her own heartbeats as she presses her chest against yours, and it is strong and fast.
> She is a special pony, alright. God damn, you love her so.
> You can hear voices in the background, but you ignore them. All that matters is the lovely and beautiful mare in your arms, and you focus all of your attention on her; on kissing her over and over again, and on holding her body close to your chest. You want her to know that you need her. You want to show much you love her, and you want her to know that she is everything to you. She may have heard what you said earlier, but you want your actions to demonstrate that you meant every word.
> Eventually, you pull back gently to catch your breath, opening your eyes slowly as your vision is filled with the image of Starlight’s gorgeous smiling face. Her mane is a mess from where you held her, and you see streaks of wetness leading from her puffy eyes that cut down to her lower cheeks, but the things that captures your attention are her wide smile and the purples of her irises. Those bluish violets that you know so well and love. The soft pulsing glow of the teal jewel in her ring is beautiful as well, but you keep your focus on your pony’s face, drinking in the sight of her beauty.
“How long have you been standing there, Starlight?”
> She leans in to nuzzle the tip of her nose against yours, making you chuckle as you close your eyes.
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>>30269730
> “Long enough, Master, to hear what I wanted and needed to.”
> Opening your eyes again, you reach both hands up and wipe her cheeks gently with your thumbs, choosing to remain silent for a moment as you take in every detail of her pretty face. You want to burn this memory of her in your mind.
“I’m sorry for making you worry, Starlight, and I am very grateful for all the care that you have shown me… You are an amazing mare and a wonderful, sweet, sweet pony, and I love you so God damn much… Yet, I feel that I don’t deserve you… Especially… After knowing what has happened to you and your kind? How you perceive humans, and the magnitudes of the horrors that you have experienced? I realised how fucked up I am, and I feel just awful taking advan-”
> Starlight places a hoof on your mouth gently as she shakes her head lightly. Giving you a warm smile, she speaks in a soft voice.
> “Just knowing that you love me is sufficient, Master. You will always be my Master and my lover, and I am grateful that you chose me to be yours… Believe me when I say that I will treasure this opportunity to honour, serve, and obey you, and that I am happy to do so… I choose to give you my mind and body, and I have already given you my heart; so take them, Master, and do with them anything that you please, for you deserve it for being the man that you are… I believe that everything you told the Princess is true, and I know that you will keep those promises you made… You are my very special somepony, Master, and I’ll say it again: I trust you, and I love you… I love you so much, Master Anon… Now, and till the day I shall pass, I will always be with you.”
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>>30269731
> You give Starlight a grin. Those words she said gives you immense happiness and a sense of completeness. This beautiful girl, this amazing pony, is the one that you had dreamed of: she is the one that you prayed for on every lonely night, and now God has given her to you. He has answered your prayers, and he has added so much more on top of everything that you had asked for.
> You choke as your tears start rolling down your cheeks. The emotions you are feeling now are… Overwhelming. Gently, you hold Starlight’s hooves in your hands and look down at them, using your thumbs to brush over the tops as you sniff softly in gratitude and happiness. When Starlight leans in with a concerned look, you smile as you look into the eyes of your pony lover, telling her quietly that you are just thankful for the blessings that you had received.
> The blessing that is her: Starlight Glimmer. The pink mare with her purple mane and tail that has that adorable teal streak running through both of them, not to mention that cute little twirl at the front of her mane.
> Then, you notice that she is wearing that red collar; the one that you had put on her the first day that she became yours. Reaching a finger over, you tap it gently.
“You are still wearing it.”
> Starlight lowers her eyes for a moment before they come back up to meet yours, smiling warmly at you before she speaks.
> “I never took it off when I was at Harmony Village, Master… Even when I worked, even when I bathed, I had it on me the entire time during my stay there… I wanted to show the other ponies there that I am proud of being yours. Some of them thought I was crazy, but that’s because they didn’t get the chance to know the man that owns me... The Master, who loves me as much as I love him.”
> D’aww… Those words; they melt your heart.
“Always been a bit of a rebel, aren’t you, Starlight?”
> “Don’t you have a streak of your own as well, Master?”
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>>30269737
> Chuckling softly at her rhetorical question, you close your eyes as Starlight leans forwards, gently brushing her lips up your wet cheek before kissing you softly on your eyelids. You hear the soft ‘chu’ sound when her lips leave your right eye, and again when she does the same to your left cheek and eye. Opening your eyes slowly, you grin at her before using your hands to raise her hooves to your mouth, and you kiss the tops of them gently while keeping your eyes on hers as she smiles. When your lips touch them, the jewel in her horn-ring emits an even brighter glow.
“I love you, Starlight, and I will never tire of telling you that.”
> She giggles as she blushes softly.
> “Just as I will never tire of hearing it, Master.”
> “Jesus Christ, you two. Like fresh out of trashy romance movie.”
> Looking up at the same time that Starlight does, the both of you smile sheepishly at Angela as she shakes her head and rolls her eyes. Behind her, Coco Pommel is blushing softly, and Princess Cadance simply smiles at Starlight and you. You quickly reach a hand up to wipe your eyes.
“Sorry, Angela.”
> With a small sigh and a grin of her own, the policewoman deposits your backpack on the right bedside table before she moves over to rest her elbows on the bed frame. Nodding at the backpack, she turns her eyes to yours.
> “There’s a fresh set of clothes for you in there, and you can be discharged after the doctor clears you tomorrow.”
“Thanks Angela. You’re the best.”
> She smiles.
> “Heh, glad you know that. So, how’s your shoulder, Anon?”
> You glance down as you roll your left one, feeling barely any amount of resistance in your motion.
“Feels alright. Fully healed, I think.”
> “Good, because DSP Koh is asking if you are joining me for the day shift 3 days from now. You okay with that?”
> Smiling at your partner and best friend, you give her a nod and a salute.
“Ready to serve our Nation, Ma’am.”
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>>30269741
> “Oh stop it.”
> You let out a soft chuckle as Angela rolls her eyes again.
> “I will let him know… Oh, by the way, you have to report to the Career Centre to do a psychometric and physical re-evaluation of your Operational Readiness Status BEFORE you can start the night shift, Anon. You know how… ‘Efficient’… They are, so you better get it done the day before the shift. Starlight, can you remind him?”
> Your pony smiles as she nods.
> “I will, Angela.”
“Dammit… Is that really necessary?”
> Angela’s response is swift.
“Directive from Manpower, Anon. You got injured, so you have to.”
> Turning to Coco as you groan, Angela speaks to the cream-coated pony.
> “Coco? You wanted to see Anon right? Go ahead… And Starlight? May I have a word with you?”
> Starlight smiles at you before she nods at Angela. Giving you a quick peck on your left cheek, she gets up and jumps off the bed, just as Angela picks up Coco and deposits her on it. Angela touches Cadance’s shoulder, and the lady and the 2 pink ponies move to the door and exit the room, but not before Starlight gives you a worried glance. In that brief moment when your eyes meet hers, you see her frown and you wonder what she is thinking, but before you can do or say anything, she leaves the room before Princess Cadance does, and the door shuts quietly behind them.
> “Don’t worry, Master Anon. Angela is just keeping her occupied so I may speak to you in private.”
> Turning your attention to Coco Pommel, you see that she is smiling pleasantly at you.
> “Master Anon… I know I have asked you this before, but is it alright if I call you that? You... You forgot our conversation the last time I was here, but Angela said that your memory is back.”
> News sure spread fast, don’t they, Brain?
“Sure. How are you, Coco?”
> Coco Pommel answers you, still with that pleasant smile on her cute face.
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>>30269744
> “I’m doing well, Master Anon. I have fully healed, and I have gotten over what happened to me. Angela has gotten me a contract in the Logistics Department of your Police Force as a part-time seamstress, and it helps me to earn a little extra money for myself.”
“A seamstress in Logistics? Maintaining the ceremonial uniforms, I take it?”
> Coco nods politely.
> “And the design and creation of Unit patches and flags, Master Anon. They bring me the uniforms and materials twice a week in a van, but I do help my family in their work as well. They are designers in Requiem, and I used to work in the fashion industry back in Equestria.”
“Requiem?”
> Your blank look causes her to giggle softly.
> “A high-end fashion brand for ponies, Master Anon.”
“Ah. Forgive me… Wait, “designers in Requiem”? You aren’t living with Angela? I thought she adopted you.”
> Coco Pommel gives you a little shake of her head.
> “No, Master Anon. When I told Angela that I was stolen from my family, she managed to find them the next day and brought me back home. I was bought by Mr and Mrs Kheng because of my work experience in Manehatten’s fashion world, you see, and their bosses were looking into branching their company’s designs for high-end apparel for pony owners. I like working for them and living in their home as they really nice and generous, and they pay me for my work as well… Anyway, Angela rejected my family’s offer of a monetary reward, but they insisted on designing and creating a new gown for her for the upcoming Senior Officers’ Annual Gala in return for bringing me home.”
> Shifting her front hooves slightly, Coco Pommel smiles shyly at you as she blushes again.
> “I was talking to Starlight and Angela about how I can repay you for saving me, and… Well, they generally said that you are… Attracted to mares... So… I offered myself to you a week ago…”
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>>30269782
> Oh boy… You swallow. Is this what Starlight is worried about?
> Probably, Boss. Oh wait, Coco is still speaking.
> “… But you covered my… Privates… With my tail and told me that you only loved Starlight... I will always remember how you said that you “liked the shades in my mane and tail that complements my striking cyan eyes and my sweet demeanour”, but your “heart only desires Starlight, for she is the shimmering light of your life”, even though... Even though you would have loved “to make love to a beautiful mare like myself if the circumstances were different”.”
> You smile and cough nervously, trying to hide your burning face and embarrassment from the sheer corniness of the garbage that spews from your mouth.
> Fucking hell, Brain, I actually said those words to her?
> Believe it, Boss. Believe it.
> Coco is still blushing as she giggles cutely and covers her mouth with a hoof.
> “Starlight was really happy when I told her what happened, but I guess she was a little upset that I even dared to asked you to do… Well, ‘that’, with me… If anything, Master Anon, I can tell that she is really grateful and proud of you.”
> You give her a smile of your own, feeling a sense of accomplishment for the actions of Past You. He did well. No, YOU did well.
“Is what you wanted to talk to me about?”
> “No, Master Anon.”
> Coco turns her head and dips her muzzle under the flaps of her red saddle-bags. Using her teeth, she pulls out 2 clear, folded zip-lock bags from them and deposits them in front of you. Using the end of her snout, she gently pushes the 2 packages towards you before she straightens herself up.
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>>30269609
Corona deserves to have a fart mask strapped to her muzzle and forced to inhale master's flatulence after he eats a big pot of spicy chili.
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>>30269785
> “I got my family’s permission to make you both customised formal wear for the upcoming Gala. Yours, Master Anon, is a jacket and a pair of pants, and they are in the bag with the green rim. It is a token of my appreciation for what you did for me that day. As for the one with the yellow rim, it contains a gown, hoof wraps and a pair of shoes for Starlight, Master Anon, as a way to say “I’m sorry” to her for tempting you… I wanted it to be surprise, so I asked Angela to distract Starlight when I am giving you these.”
> Smiling warmly at her, you gently reach a hand forward and pet her short light blue mane, stroking it gently as she closes her eyes.
“You silly pony, Coco. There is no need for all this. I am merely doing my job as a Police officer, and fidelity is expected in any relationship anyway… But… Thank you, Coco Pommel. Really, I appreciate it.”
> The cream-coloured mare smiles as she dips her eyes.
> “It’s no problem. I just hope that you and Starlight like my designs.”
> Letting that hand that is stroking the top of her head fall to her to shoulders, you pet it a few times as you look into her light blue eyes.
“You said that you work in the fashion industry, so I’m sure they will be amazing. Have a little faith in yourself, Coco. By the way, and I am just guessing here, but did you make these saddle-bags as well?”
> You point to the pair on her back with a thumb before doing the same to Starlight’s.
> “I-I did.”
“I like them. The reds provide a nice contrast to your colours, as does the light green for Starlight.”
> Coco’s eyes widen.
> “R-really?!”
“I’m not familiar with apparel, but I can tell that these are very well made. They look to be the work of a skilled craftsman… Or ‘crafts-mare’ in this case, hmm?”
> You wink at her.
> “T-Thank you, M-Master Anon!”
> Coco blushes from your compliment. God, she is really adorable.
> Then, an idea comes from Brain.
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>>30269789
“Say, Coco, can I commission you to make an outfit for Starlight? I’ll pay you for your work.”
> The cream-coloured pony smiles at you as she nods. Reaching into her bags again, she pulls out a name card, which you take and give it a quick read. It has her name, address and contact number. Excellent.
> “I already have Starlight’s measurements, so just let me know what you want, Master Anon. I will do my best to make it for you.”
> Hmm… Where to start?
> Oh, of course.
> You already spent $240,000. What more is a couple of hundred dollars?
> …
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>>30269794
> When Starlight enters the room, she immediately jumps back on the bed and wraps her hooves around your chest. In that fleeting moment when you glance down at her, you notice her eyes dart to Coco Pommel and you can feel her clutching your body tighter. Her body language seems to suggest that she is offering a challenge to the cream-coloured pony, who smiles sheepishly as she moves to a corner on the bed.
> You smirk as you move your hands over to hug Starlight.
> She’s possessive of you, Boss, and she sees Coco as a threat.
“Starlight, be nice now. There is nothing between us.”
> Frowning lightly at your words, Starlight dips her head and nods.
> “I… I’m sorry, Master… And, I’m sorry, Coco Pommel, for letting my emotions get the better of me… I… I do have a tendency of doing that.”
> Letting her eyes fall back on the bed sheet after glancing at Coco, Starlight lets out a soft sigh. The other pony simply smiles warmly as she walks over to place a hoof on Starlight’s shoulder.
> “It’s my fault, really. I didn’t know that the both of you are in a relationship at that time, and I should have checked first before I did anything… I was careless, so I should be blamed instead… Starlight, I’ll forgive you if you forgive me, okay?”
> Looking up at the cream-coloured pony, Starlight gives her a smile.
> “Okay.”
> “Friends?”
> Starlight pats the top of Coco’s hoof with her own.
> “Friends.”
> With that, the cream-coloured pony gently pulls Starlight into a hug, who reciprocates with a soft smile as the both of them close their eyes.
> The sight of the 2 mares embracing each other is bloody adorable.
> Before you can say anything, Angela is back with Princess Cadance, and she is looking at her phone as she speaks.
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>>30269836
> “I have to go, Anon. Got to send Coco Pommel back and meet my boyfriend for supper later, and I don’t want to be late. Anyhow, I’ll be back tomorrow to give you a lift home, so give me a call when they release you, yeah?”
> You give your partner a nod and thank her for her offer. She smiles at you before her eyes travel back to her phone. She groans.
> “Aww shit, it’s almost 10 now. Coco, you ready to go?”
> Said pony looks up at the sound of her name, and she takes a moment to smile at Starlight one last time before she releases her. Getting on her hooves, she nods politely to Angela as she moves over to the edge of the bed.
> “I am, Angela.”
> Princess Cadance steps forward and says that she must be going as well. Walking over to the side of the bed, the Princess winks at you before she leans in to speak to the other pink pony.
> “Starlight Glimmer? Your Master wanted me to give this to you.”
> “Princess Cadance? What are you- Hmmph!”
> Cadance reaches her neck forwards and gives Starlight a kiss on her lips, and you see your pony’s eyes widen in surprise as she freezes in place. Closing her eyes, Cadance moves her head lightly as her jaw lowers; you are sure that she did that to allow her tongue to enter your pony’s mouth.
> Holy. Shit. You feel a stir below as you stare at the scene before you.
> Starlight’s eyes remain wide as the princess angles her head and kisses your pony deeper. When Cadance breaks the kiss gently, you see a trail of saliva connecting their mouths before the pony princess licks her lips, while Starlight simply pants and stares, her muzzle hanging open. Coco Pommel too, is staring open-mouthed at the Princess in shock, and Angela is rolling her eyes again, and you can practically SEE her cursing at you under her breath, obviously under the impression that you told Princess Cadance to do that.
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>>30269842
> Starlight blinks rapidly as her hoof darts to her mouth. Clearly, your pony lover is still in a state of shock at what has just happened.
> “P-P-Princess!”
> With a warm smile, Cadance nuzzles Starlight gently.
> “Take care of your Master, my subject, and live in Harmony.”
> Starlight lowers her hoof as she nods numbly.
> “I-I will, y-your Majesty.”
> Turning her eyes to you, Cadance grins.
> “I hope you liked that display, Mister Anon.”
> You give her a grin of your own as you reach your hands over and pull a still-stunned Starlight into your arms, pressing her back against your chest before you speak again.
“I did. It was really hot.”
> “God dammit Anon!”
> Laughing nervously as Angela glares at you, you take some comfort in the fact that Coco Pommel is giggling softly too. Glancing down, you see Starlight is now blushing hard as she recovers from the experience. After an exchange of pleasantries and farewells, Starlight sees the 3 girls to the door as you wave them goodbye, and you note with amusement how your pony quickly darts her eyes away when Princess Cadance mischievously grins at Starlight before stepping out. You call out to her, and Starlight goes to the left side of your bed. Reaching out your hands, you place them under her chest as she raises her front hooves, and you bring her up to the bed with you. Sitting down in front of you, Starlight gives you her thanks.
“So, how was kissing a princess, Starlight Glimmer?
> Despite her blush, she looks up at you.
> “It was… Wet.”
> Laughing again, you feel Starlight thump you on the chest with a hoof even as she grins in embarrassment.
> “You are mean for making her do that, Master, and you are a pervert...”
> You shrug in response.
“C’mon, I didn’t TELL her to do it, she just-”
> “… But I wouldn’t have you any other way.”
> L-lewd.
> Your eyes widen as you feel Little Anon rising, poking against the fabric of your pants.
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>>30269894
“Nor I you, Starlight, you beautiful, sexy mare.”
> Starlight’s eyes travel down and lingers on your erection. With a grin, she looks up at you.
> “We’ll have to do something about that, won’t we, Master?”
> You return her smile with one of your own.
“Maybe later. Come here, and lay your back against my stomach.”
> “Yes, Master.”
> You spread your legs to make room for your pony as she moves over, turning around as she follows your command. Her head comes to rest just below your chin. Leaning in, you give her a quick peck on her cheek, causing her to smile and close her eyes. Your hands move to her belly and you give it a good rub, causing her to giggle softly as she leans back into your chest and flattens her ears, smiling as she closes her eyes. Her hooves rest on the back of your wrists, and you can feel her gently guiding your hands as they move up and down her front.
> Her coat is short, fluffy and warm, and her tummy has that little pudge from the position that she is in. Extending your fingers fully, you run them from her chest to her abdomen, pressing your palms firmly down, causing Starlight to ‘hmm’ softly from the gentle massage you are giving her. She opens her eyes slowly and giggles as she watches you use your fingers to press the flesh of her tummy together before releasing it. You repeat the action a few times, and you feel like a chef that is gently kneading dough. When you tell her that, Starlight laughs at your silliness.
“So what did you guys talk about when you were outside, Starlight?”
> The pink pony in your hands smiles at you.
> “Angela wanted to check that I was feeling fine after sending Trixie back. I will miss her, but Princess Cadance says that I can always give her a video call on a computer or visit her when we get the clearance from Thorax. What about you and Coco Pommel, Master? What did the both of you talk about?”
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>>30269901
“Coco made me a suit to thank me for saving her and to apologise for what she did. She wanted some privacy as she was really embarrassed about messing up so badly.”
> Starlight nods, but you can see a slight frown on her face as she raises her eyes to yours.
> “Master, I… I don't want to share you with another…”
> Lowering her eyes, Starlight lets out a soft sigh.
> “… I know it is unreasonable to expect this, but I cannot bear the thought of you being with somepony else… It's unreasonable really, as you are my Master, but I… I want you for myself.”
> You reach a hand up to her chin, guiding her head backwards as you lean in to kiss her gently on her lips. Starlight’s eyes are practically shimmering as they look up at you, but her expression is hard to read.
> “… M-Master…”
> Shaking your head slowly, you give her a smile.
“You silly pony, Starlight. I already promised Princess Cadance that, didn’t I? I’ll stay true to you and you alone, so you don’t have to worry about that.”
> She nods as her lower lip trembles. Oh no, please don’t cry.
“Hey, Starlight. Give your Master a boop on his nose, won’t you?”
> Nodding quickly, Starlight sniffs quickly as she gets up into a sitting position and turns around, reaching a hoof up to press its soft underside on your nose.
> “Boop.”
> You chuckle as your pony smiles when you take her hoof in your hand and kiss it. Lowering it to the bed, you let out a breath and just look into her violet eyes.
“Good girl.”
> Glancing down at your hands as she smiles in response, your pony speaks softly as her eyes move up to meet yours.
> “Master, you need grooming.”
““Grooming”?”
> Smiling warmly, Starlight lights up her horn and jewel, and the both of you watch as a pair of nail-clippers float out of her saddle bags. Moving your hands out in front of her with her magic, she carefully drops the clipper into them.
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>>30269905
> “I’m sorry, Master, but your fingernails are long. Can you teach me how to cut them? I’d do it, but I have yet to learn how to.”
> That made you smile. She anticipated your needs and came prepared for them.
> You reach a hand out and stroke her mane.
“Taking initiative, huh? You’re a good girl, Starlight, and I appreciate it.”
> She returns your smile with a warm one as she magics over a piece of tissue paper for you to drop the clippings into.
> ““All my heart, all my soul, and all my mind”, Master. I promised you that.”
> This mare. God, you love her.
> Holding the clipper in your right hand, you move it on to the nail of your left thumb. Starlight peers at it; her large eyes are focused on the clipper as she watches and studies your every move.
“Clipping nails for humans is easy, Starlight. The trick is not to go too deep, or else it will hurt and bleed. See the white portion? It is a good guide for how far you should go. So, start from the corner of the nail by sliding the blade under it, and work your way across the length of it. When you reach the end, it will fall off, then, you use this portion of the clipper to file the nail down gently.”
> You demonstrate as you speak, giving Starlight a crash course in the fine art of fingernail maintenance. Done with the thumb, you go on to do the same for your index finger before you turn your attention to Starlight, seeing that she has this look of an excited filly that is itching to try out what she has just learned. Her ears are upright, and she is looking at you with eager eyes. You smile as you hold out the clipper in your palm for Starlight to pick it up with her magic.
“Be careful, okay Starlight?”
> She nods and smiles in return, floating the clipper to the nail of your left middle finger.
> “I will, Master… And if I do mess up, we ARE in a hospital, right?”
> You laugh nervously as you hear the soft ‘click’ of the clipper.
“R-right.”
> …
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Updates! 22 posts of green!

Glimmy returns, and much love was declared and shared with Insp Anon. Not gonna say anything more, so you'll have to read to know the details.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
(A SPG greentext story featuring Starlight Glimmer and Inspector Anon from the Police Force. Lots of love and feels in store.)
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
(Updates are posted in Part 2).

I am feeling much better now, even though I still miss my doggo, Jenna, something fierce. Nonetheless, I am ready to continue on this literary adventure with the lovely Glim Glam, and I hope that you guys are too. Again, I'm sorry for keeping you guys waiting, and I hope that this update makes up for it.

Thank you all so much for your kind words and condolences, as well as for showing your support for my writing. They mean a lot to me, and I am really grateful to receive them.

As always, do leave your comments, ideas, suggestions and criticisms. Be assured that I WILL read them, so don't be afraid to post them.

Stay awesome ^^
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So, what if Trixie bought Glimmer as a slave.
Who would proceed to be the better part of it?
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>>30270005
>ponies enslaving ponies
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>>30270049
Yes
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>>30269721
>Get Starlight to wear a French maid’s outfit, Boss. Complete it with black thigh-highs to emphasise the pair of white panties that covers her hindquarters, and you will bleed to death from your nose.
>> Good idea, Brain. Holy shit.

My think exactly
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>>30270049
Its the best type of enslavement, save for ponies owning humans.
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>>30269917
>Posted at 11:11:11 my time
Noic
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>>30270049
only if spaying is involved
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>>30269917
Fiuuuu!!! Large Green is large.......

Thanks Mercury for you contribution to this thread
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>>30270049
>>30271058
it's for the best, rarity told me.
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>>30266172
>they kissed

FINALLY CORONA BEST GIRL
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>>30271139
Rarity needs a spanking. Rarity is for spanking.

>RareSF where are you?
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>>30271169
vega should spank his rarity too, owning ponies is naughty.
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>>30271169
Rarity should be caned not spanked.
Spanking wouldn't have the effect you want due to the fact she is a fatty fat.
All that marshmallow is more protective than a mother's love.

Something no pone shall delight in ever again.
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>>30261222
How have you managed to make Rarity an absolute bitch, yet make me feel bad for her? Yes, she's a cunt right now - but she's also thoroughly broken from what she went through; it wasn't just like she decided to go along with it all. I wonder if hormone replacements can help deal with some of her issues...

>>30263006
For some reason Ponka isn't hitting me as hard as Rarity or Twilight is. Maybe I'm just numbed by all the suffering that has already been introduced, or maybe it's just that I don't feel that much of an attachment to Pinkie in the first place.

It's certainly not a knock against your writing; that remains excellent in terms of writing, composition, and characterization. Please, by all means do continue.

>>30266172
And he's back! A wonderfully tender scene - regardless of whether this was the right path or not, this was extremely well-written. Cozy, fuzzy, and just a little bit lewd... now, of course, they have to live with the consequences of their decisions. Corona is still very much broken from what she went through, and one way or another Shiny's going to get some punishment - even if what he did was technically right.

But first, time for them to enjoy each other.
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>>30266172
ARE YOU READY

READY FOR THE MIRACLE CHILD
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>>30271330
I want a satyre to buy mommy for daddy and make him ride her all the time.
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>>30271408
>Be satyrspawn
>Considered human enough to be a free person
>Daddy literally gives you mommy to own for your birthday
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>>30271496
mom still whips your ass when you backtalk her.
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>>30271330
I can see all three of them hilariously panicking when a trip to the vet shows Corona is pregnant.
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>>30271330
Imagine how much being a Satyr would actually suck in an /spg/-verse story, though.
>Men and women see you as an inhuman monster spawned by relations with lesser creatures
>Always treated as developmentally retarded at best, outright animalistic at worse
>Ponies can't see you as anything but a sign of their misery and captivity
>A millstone around the neck of some poor mare who was forced to bed by her master
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>>30271550
>>Men and women see you as an inhuman monster spawned by relations with lesser creatures
I somehow doubt the majority of humanity would think like that, considering the amount of bleeding hearts out there.
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>>30271550
>>A millstone around the neck of some poor mare who was forced to bed by her master
This is where M A G I C comes in. It only takes when it's TRUE LOVE read: magic.
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>>30271559
In reality, sure. But we're talking about a situation where we're ready to accept the enslavement of another intelligent species. Clearly we don't think of them as equals; at best, it'd be a cross-species version of the whole "White Man's Burden" thing, at worst a Nazi-style ubermensch/untermensch situation.
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>>30271577
I want Landscaaaaapeeeee waaahhhh
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>>30269905
>“Hey, Starlight. Give your Master a boop on his nose, won’t you?”
>> Nodding quickly, Starlight sniffs quickly as she gets up into a sitting position and turns around, reaching a hoof up to press its soft underside on your nose.
>> “Boop.”
WHAT THE FUCK!?
Such hideous crimes need to be punished!


>>30266172
Is this written by the same writer?
This is totally different than the story that led to the christmas events.
What the hell is this even?
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>>30272266
>What the hell is this even?
Relax m8. Remember the dude in the story had a head injury. Sudden, random shifts in behavior come with that. We're being set up for some quality tragedy here.

I can't wait to feel.
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>>30269917
Well, that was nice and tender!

>Rejecting getting it on with a pony princess
Man, I objectively understand why and it's absolutely the right story choice... but submissive pony princess is top unf. Still, with how Glimmy wants Inspector to himself, it's probably the better choice.

>Wanting Glimmypet in a maid's outfit
>Coco is around and not broken by her ordeal
Maid-Glim when? Pic related.

>No lewds with Glimpet right now, just some tender and gentle cuddling
Absolutely the rest choice. Helps keep the division between Brain and Dick firmly in place, and reinforce that Inspector really does love her beyond just being a pretty plaything in his bed.

>Other stuff
I'm still holding to my line that Thorax is shifty as fuck, and should be either offed or contained at the next available opportunity.

Sorry to hear about your dog, but I'm glad you've got yourself back on track and are writing once again.
>>
Pretty poner pet.
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Am I a horrible person for wanting Landscape Appul to get a whooping?
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>>30273574
Oh, man. Can you imagine the feels if Appuls legitimately screwed up and had to be whipped? How awful would Anon feel about having to do that to her?
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>>30273564
Octavia is a beatiful mare, but the collar is horrible
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So you managed to get a pony palanquin
What four ponies are stuck carting your four hundred pound hacker ass around?
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>>30273747
>TFW you will never drag cellopone along with a cruel choke collar
>Squeezing her neck in its vicelike, uncompromising grip until she gasps trying to keep up with you
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>>30273853
>Celestia
>Spitfire
>Octavia
>Twilight
Two alicorns, an earthdonk, and sportspone should be able to handle it.
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>>30273747
True, but good pictures of slavetavia are hard to find.
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So what separates a slave from an unpaid worker?
I'm not really seeing the difference in these stories.
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>>30273953
spaying.
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>>30273574
Happened to Corona, could to her too. Landscape Anon is not rich, and his little gardening business is under a bit of stress recently. If Applejack did something to endanger it, his employees safety, or offended a customer he might decide it was unavoidable. He will not be caring for any ponies if he is out on the street himself! (Whatever happened to Homeless Anon?) Applejacks old farm sometimes demanded difficult decisions from her too, she knows that tune. The trick is not to just freak out on her. Stay calm, tell her what happened and what's going to happen, and make sure she knows her place in our home and heart is still secure.
>"Oh, OK Mas... OK Anon. I'm ready."
>can already feel the feels...
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>Corona actually got a kiss from her master
I'm done with this story. I'm so done.
That whiplash and sudden change in attitude is too much for me. I'm out.
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>>30273853
>four

A single regular draft horse can do that job quicker and better.
>More than 200lb
>Clydesdale: best horse.

>>30273953
A volunteer can volunteer somewhere else. They work for intangible rewards and are a social asset. A slave is stuck with you. They work to avoid the lash and are a capital asset. Nothing alike, really.
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>>30274051
gotta agree this all kinda came out of nowhere.
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>>30274051
>>30274064
see >>30272489
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>>30274073
head injury does not excuse shitty writing
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>>30274051
I don't feel this way. Oh well
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>>30274099
It's fagfag. Just ignore him.
>>
http://www.strawpoll.me/13151489
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>>30274178
Dick

All the dick
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>>30274178
She's waited long enough. She wants it, she KNOWS she wants it, she's in LOVE with the man. Just give the poor little mare some relief already.
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>>30273953

Differences are generally:
>Slave is owned as property, unpaid worker is a free person
>Slave can be physically disciplined (sometimes extremely), unpaid worker still has basic rights
>Slave can be forced to do any job including sexual ones, worker still has basic rights
>Slave has no choice in who they belong to, worker does
>Slave often has other arbitrary restrictions placed on them - limitations of movement, wearing a collar, using extremely high titles for owner, etc.
>Worker just has to work
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>>30274126
It's not fagfag. It's someone who didn't expect things to turn around this quickly.

Let me explain for a second: In the beginning of this, Anon bought Shiny (and then later Corona) with intent to work them.

The story seemed like it was mostly going to be about them slowly getting over the incredibly high wall between each of their statuses in life. Sure, both were given an initial reprieve on account of how damaged they were, but both were still ultimately treated with the expectation that they would work. Anonymous made it clear he regards their relationship as Master-Slave, and that they are not equal.

Of course, that started changing. That's cool, character development is a thing - especially after he discovered how they'd been mistreated. The thing is, he went from barely uncovering their issues and beginning to bond with them to being cool with sleeping with Corona. That's a big jump, a huge jump. And it just got passed over. We missed the part where Shiny finally becomes okay with treating Anonymous like a brother to be pranked and not an owner, or where Corona comes to terms with the violent hand that was used against her before and reconciles it with how she feels now.
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>>30273961
remember to spay your mares
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>>30274219
You know it's entirely possible Anon's attitude rubber-bands back and he has serious, serious regrets about what he just did. Everyone has moments of weakness.

It's been clearly demonstrated he's a very lonely man. The perfect storm of circumstances happened to cause him to buckle and kiss Corona.

He's going to wake up in the morning and beat Shining within an inch of his life, just you wait.
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>>30274178
I wouldn't mind him going a bit further than makeout, teatplay would be nice, maybe giving her some finger time.
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>>30274219
He hasn't stopped working them. It's winter, they're going to have down time. And as far as his attitude, people can change their minds. He's had a week to sleep with and cuddle Corona. Who knows what thoughts have been going through his mind? Also remember he loved it when shiny and corona both had to share his bed. He enjoyed the close contact with them. He may very well have been willing to reciprocate Corona's romantic affection this entire time and was just looking for an excuse to finally make something happen. Shiny could see this, and knew Anon needed a push.

It's obvious they're more than slaves to him, he's demonstrated his affection many times. People will say one thing when they mean something else when they have an image to maintain, for whatever reason. For Anon, the image of Master has been becoming less and less important to maintain. His ponies are becoming family. Corona is becoming MUCH more.

I really see nothing wrong with the way things have developed.
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>>30274219
>It's someone who didn't expect things to turn around this quickly.

Would you prefer the story be completely predictable?
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>>30274305
yeah, kinda
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>>30274305
If anything, this was the entirely predictable route to me:
>Buy abused slave
>End up feeling bad for them
>Quickly end up treating them just like family
>Soon after that end up fucking them
What drew me to Shiny and Corona was that the conflict to be resolved seemed to revolve around that story stereotype being broken.

>>30274247
If he does do an about-face, I'll humbly retract my criticism.

>>30274278
True; he even stayed with Shiny that first night, and perhaps I'm being a bit unfair in that respect. I'm still inclined to point out that he was doing something there for his enjoyment, while this seems to be much more about her - that's something that should've been reached over time, in my personal opinion.
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>>30274219
At Christmas, Shiny got that expensive shiny magic ring and Corona got an old scarf. But it was Grandmas special scarf, it's really important. Anon said they have become much more than commodities, he thinks of them as family.
Character development is a thing, and Somewritefag is going fast-ish but not absurdly so.
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>>30274219
I mean, as far as Shiny willing to be playful/play a prank on Anon like he just did; this is pretty much the way he's always been. Defiant. He's just turned from angry-defiant to a much more playful version of it. He's seen the worst Anon can dish out when he got his belting, and it wasn't that bad compared to the floggings he's received from previous masters. He never did settle into the role of slave, no matter what Anon likes to think. And frankly, Anon is just not that intimidating to him.
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>>30274178
No D, just cuddles. If the D happens it removes an important source of tension and drama. It might be what Corona and we Anons want, but it's not where the story should go.
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>>30274382
>>30274385
He's also shown affection for Corona in the past. This is not the first time he's kissed her. He kissed her on the forehead once before. This is just the first time he's kissed her romantically.
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Don't mind me, I'm just contractually obliged to post this image once a thread and ask filly brothel when?
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>>30274465
The first time he kissed her and called her "My Corona" she had a PTSD attack.

This time, he just kissed her and called her "My Corona" again, and she didn't. I'm pretty sure this has significance, I'm surprised nobody picked up on it sooner.
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>>30274477
Doubledubs make a good point. Hadn't noticed that.
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post images or green people!
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>>30274514
Got it.
Fluttershy is a BAD PONY!
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>>30274522
Twilight is also a BAD PONY!
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>>30274522
Good pony
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>>30274514
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>>30274522
Shock collar in the next OP!
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New thread: >>30274558
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>>30274546
Save this image for the shit rebels to attack Mocha Cream
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>>30274073
>>30274082
Yeah just feels like pandering.
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