Dragon Transformation General #9

https://pastebin.com/dbJ3Mnny Continuing Tonic.

>T: "If you ever need someone to talk to, i'm always around. Spike is a great listener too, and even Discord has his moments...but I'll leave you alone so you can think some more."
>She turns to leave but you hold out a hand and stop her.
"Wait...I need to tell you something."
>She turns back and hops up on your bed to sit next to you.
>She smells like lavender. It's like these ponies all have scents to match their color palettes.
"I know how you feel about me. I figured it out a little too late, and I didn't know how to handle it."
>You don't know why you told her, you didn't have to. Maybe you thought that if she knew that /you/ knew, she would understand how complex your situation is.
>Or maybe you just wanted to to tell her...
>You glance at her briefly to gauge her reaction, and you turn away when you see that she's smiling softly.
>T: "How do you feel about it? Do you feel...the same?"
"Nothing is clear right now, but I do really like you."
>Both of you are silent for a long moment, then you hear a sniffle from Twilight.
>T: "I'm really confused, Tonic."
>You look over at her, surprised. Her small smile is gone, and she's on the verge of tears.
>T: "Girls don't usually feel this way about other girls, is there something wrong with me?!"
>You open your mouth to protest, but she keeps going.
>T: "Friendship came along recently in my life, I never had anything like it before, but this is so different! Nothing that Celestia taught me prepared me for the things that I'm feeling!"
>She finally turns to look at you, tears welling up in her glistening eyes, and her voice barely above a whisper.
>T: "I hoped that you could teach me about love."

Authors:
Finished:
Buggernon's "Anon the Dragon": http://pastebin.com/u/Buggernon
Punki's "Hangin'": https://pastebin.com/As6YwYpx
Punki's "Discord vs. Daze": https://pastebin.com/bNLBq5N1
Dragonlord Kolaghan's "The Gold Standard": http://pastebin.com/10Tytn1J

Work In Progress:
Sergeant Nonymous's "Anonymous the Wise Dragon": http://pastebin.com/CY698CQ0
Clarissa's "No Fury at All": http://pastebin.com/U5q2gcBr
Alcrowholic's "Mountainous": http://pastebin.com/7iJzrFDt
Harmonyrla's "Dragula": http://pastebin.com/m0i4tGEK
BizarreCoyote's "Rukodiora's Romp Around Equestria": http://pastebin.com/rYB3Agh6
Tambourine's My Tiny Ponies: http://pastebin.com/sBQrS8ZR
Bubblewolf's Crystal Draganon: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8dlbvjaz3emxv2h/Bubblewolf%20Crystalanon.txt?dl=0
(hosted on dropbox as a notepad file)
Dracononymous' "Deceitful (Not a) Dragon": http://pastebin.com/GQiUeKe7
Woofr's "Reflection": http://pastebin.com/YUgjpmUL
Dragonlord Kolaghan's "The Universal Solvent": https://pastebin.com/8LmMiVjm
Punki's "Dazed": http://pastebin.com/ZStRTpMn
Treasure Mage's "Tonic the Dragon": http://pastebin.com/dbJ3Mnny
Treasure Mage's "Equestria Five-0": https://pastebin.com/DZ48KDMQ
Treasure Mage's "Wanderer"; no pastebin yet
Rat's "Lady of the Mountain": https://pastebin.com/tTCDh4s7
Purple-Blep's "Scylla": https://pastebin.com/bGwKSz0E
Ice-Beam's "Anon the dragon": https://pastebin.com/jRDJMTPQ
Hope's "Hope": http://pastebin.com/bRPwtEFq
Primusings' "Unplugged": https://pastebin.com/8JKLWBg0
Roman's "Thunderstruck": https://pastebin.com/0j6QkqGe
Octave's "Dreamtime Dragon": https://pastebin.com/wt9jHL9B

Previous Thread:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29940464/

>You don't know when it happened, but at some point, you slowly leaned over toward Twilight.
>Before you knew it, your faces were inches away from each other.
>Once you sober up, you just sit there looking into her eyes. Both of you begin breathing heavier the longer you stay there.
>Twilight is the first to act. She shuts her eyes and leans in the final few inches for a kiss.
>In an instant you realize just how cold blooded you are. This is nothing like kissing Spike, She feels so much warmer to you.
>Twilight seems drunk on the moment, and she presses harder into the kiss as her tongue gets more adventurous.
>You remain sober however, despite your inner desires. You would love nothing more than to lose yourself in this, to drown out all of your problems in her warmth, but you can't be so hasty when you're so unsure.
>You grab the sides of her face and savor the kiss for a few more seconds before you pull yourself away.
>She stares at you, still dreamy eyed and waiting for you to say something.
"There's nothing wrong with you, you'll find that love has strange ways of expressing itself...and I feel like we could learn a lot from each other."
>Her eyes brighten, and you see hints of a smile returning to her.
"But we can talk about this later, I'm kind of a mess right now."
>She jumps off of your bed and turns around, eyeing you with cautious excitement.
>T: "So...when is 'later?' Like, /tomorrow/ or-"
"Later."
>You answer flatly, and her ears droop. Her hopeful smile still remains however.
>T: "O-ok, I'll see you.../later/ then!"
>She shuffles awkwardly out of your room and down the hall, and you close the door after her.

>You chuckle to yourself when you're finally alone.
>Why do you keep doing this shit to yourself?
>The more uncomplicated you try to make things, the more complicated they get!
>You gingerly take off your new dress and find a place in your room to hang it up with your other one.
>It's starting to feel strange to be naked again. When you got here, it almost felt natural, even more so when you saw that everyone else was.
>But now dresses are normal for you, something you vowed never to let happen.
>One day at a time, you might just get used to this new life yet...
>You walk back to your bed, shooting a passing glance at your new book.
>You could stay up a bit later and read, but fuck that, you have enough on your mind right now.
>You flop onto your bed and close your eyes, you just want this day to be over.
>It isn't long before your mental exhaustion takes its toll on you, and you quickly drift off to sleep.
>Your dreams aren't vivid this night, they're more akin to fever dreams.
>You see images and encounters rapidly flickering as you toss and turn fitfully.
>You see Spike looking up at you in wonder back when he was smaller, then you see him underneath you, trying to push you off.
>You see Twilight blushing as she steals glances at you out of the corner of her eye, then you see her alone in her room talking to herself, trying to make sense of her new feelings.
>Despite all of your visions, there's one constant that keeps replaying in your dreams.
>You keep seeing your Ogres and Oubliettes counter part, The Alchemist, being freed by you and claiming victory.
>Another constant is the moon. Each vision takes place at night, the full moon clearly visible in each one, growing brighter and brighter.
>You finally take notice to the moon when its brightness is undeniable, and you see the mare in the moon begin to move...

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>>30063601
cannot wait for more

>>30064530
t. An Immense Faggot

http://www.strawpoll.me/12945589

There's autistic screeching going on on the Discord right now, so here's a quick rundown for anyone who's not up-to-date:

YFA wants Mage to change the Tonic story to a /ss/ story, when Mage has already expressed the direction in which he wants to take things. YFA won't accept this, and is REEEEEing and shitposting the fucking Discord to death, and we're all pretty confident that he's the same guy who quelled our migration attempts to /scaly/ and /ptfg/.

Regardless of the results of this, I want Mage to take the story in the direction HE wants to take it, but here you go lads, cast your fucking votes: http://www.strawpoll.me/12945589
>>30064738
t. YFA

>>30064928
>write YOUR story my dude
>implying it' only for him

>>30064896
>implying it's me

>>30064896
>YFA
literally who? Mage don't listen to this fucking poll bullshit, write YOUR story my dude, it's good, if the guy doesn't like where you take it he can read the other green

>>30064976
*it's

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>>30064928
This. Mage is doing the story how he wants to do it regardless. Spoke to him about this on Discord, and he's not going to bend over for the autism.

YFA is some Anon who is in the Discord, and likes to talk to the writers as though they're his houseniggers. None of us take him seriously, and the fact that he's votefucking the Strawpoll just further makes us less likely to cave to what he wants us to do.

In an unrelated (and slightly less autistic) note. Pic related is a sort of teaser for a story I'm going to be writing shortly. Was hoping to get something up by tonight, but there's a few things I want to plan out better before getting into it.

>>30064990
I am legitimately hurt by all this. I just want what I was promised. I'm THIS close to begging. This "teaser" better not be shit.

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>>30064990
>more new green

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>>30065013
This is the last (You) you're getting. Nobody else reply to this guy.

Just so you know, you're the faggot that singlehandedly killed this general.

>>30065013
>I just want what I was promised
if you are the Tonic /ss/ fag when the fuck did Mage promise to do that, I know he asked us how we wanted to see it turn out but he never made any promises on which way he would go

Anybody got the discord invite link?

Hello?

Where the fuck IS everybody?

>>30065089
Yup, here you go fella. YFA has been banned, so we're back to our usual comfy-tier status: https://discord.gg/t6S6HhQ

Mage, you have me genuinely interested in the world you are building. I love seeing that each character has room to grow and has an arc. I love that you're going to give Spike the time to grow. At this point, he lacks self esteem and maturity, and it will be satisfying to see him grow into a dragon worthy of love, and I am glad to hear you have plans for him down the line. I'm glad that Twilight is so conflicted, as it shows that she is outside her element and has much more to learn about life. Your Discord is kind but still a trickster, and you manage what interactions Tonic has with side characters fluidly. Go at your pace, doing what you want for the characters and hoping where the characters take you. Hype for Luna showing up.

Octave, great start, I love it so far, and look forward to seeing where you take things.

Prism, as always the robot dragon is super fucking cool and out will be nice to see this confrontation with Twilight play out.

Punki, thank you for being a voice of reason, and I'd love to see what you have in store for us next.

>>30065437
Mage, I'm a little bit annoyed because you deviated from the original path. The "romance" feels forced.

Octave, your story is interesting. Can't wait for more.

Primusings, I eagerly await every update of Unplugged.

Punki, Dazed is one of the funniest stories I've ever read. Keep it up, lad.

Why is the thread empty?

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>>30065495
Thanks dude.
>>30065535
Writers writin', artists drawin', people not discussin'
>>30065437
Thanks Anon, I don't think I'm the voice of reason though. I'm just some dickhead on the internet.

>>30065572
M8, you're almost /dtfg/'s version of RiggyRag.

Octave is feeling a bit sick lads. I'll try and get more done later tonight but no promises. Going to have to sleeo it out until it passes.

Il try to push something tonight prolly be some more sketches,, kinda struggling with scyllas update

>>30065928
I'm diggin' the story so far. Has to be one of the funniest reactions to transforming I've seen. Get well soon.

>>30066295
Your sketches make my day, let us know if we can help with Scylla.

Also, I'm still looking for potion ideas for later. Tonic needs practice.
>Inb4 futa potion

>>30066998
Could maybe make her first atemps abit off a mishap,, with them changing the drinkers colour/voice or body changes that weren't ment to happen at all

So maybe trying to make stuff with plants but getting some if the discriptions wrong and uses jokeplant instead of something else,, then trying to figure out what and how to fix it

>>30066998
One brew knocks out her sense of taste and smell in a disorienting fashion and food and coffee tastes like garbage for a few days until she figures out how to fix it?

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>>30066295