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Previous thread: >>29540211
(Archive Link: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29540211)

>What is this thread about?
This thread revolves around stories about ponies being enslaved.

>Can you elaborate more?
Sure! SPG (Slave Pony General) is mostly about characters dealing with the actual implications of the horrifying thing that is chattel slavery. It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts.
If you want an explanation on the differences between /SPG/ and /SiM/, go check out the FAQ.

>I want to write my own story but I'm new to writing.
Check out these guides:
https://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
https://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
https://pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f (clop specific)

>Where do the writers hang out?
Head over to https://www.rizon.net/chat with the channel name #slavepone. If you're ever having a writer's block and need advice or you just want to hang out with us, that is the place to go! (You can also use a standalone IRC client if you already have one).

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>>29575598
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>tfw no art of a collared Spits flying in/beside a PBY Catalina
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>>29575623
Pegasi can't land on water
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>>29575609
qt
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>>29575598
>After ~5 months, 'most recently completed story' finally changes.
Congratulations HJ!
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paddling the butt is so last year

now its all paddling the vulva
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>29575364
This was really harsh, but Rarity deserves it. Spankings will do her a lot of good.
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>>29575849
Fuck, how'd that arrow get deleted? Meant to link
>>29575364
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>>29575598
How did you make RD so submissive?
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>>29575869
Embarrasment
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>>29575869
Blindfold and earmuffs, then put her in a cage too small to properly spread her wings. When pegasi can't navigate by sight or hearing, they reflexively open their wings to try and avoid a crash. But if they can't open their wings either, they start to panic - losing all sense of orientation and position. It's a sort of claustrophobia; instinct says they're falling, too close, and about to crash. It throws them into a total mental panic state.

Just imagine for a second what it feels like for RD to know she's going to be tormented using the same top-notch flying instincts she is so proud of. Of course she'll do anything you want.
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>>29575944
That's from a SiM story called broken bluebird. Not a fan, but somebody is probably gonna ask.
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>>29575594
Rarity needs harsh discipline when she's an imperious huffball. You have got to put her in her place.
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>>29576249
>imperious huffball
thats kinda cute
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>>29574270
>SiM
>An offshoot of us.

SiM came first, friend. And they didn't have anything to do with our general back when it was formed either.
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>>29575869
Throwing acid at her, apparently.
Or keep Fluttershy hostage, either one seems to work.
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>>29575920
>>29575944
>>29576426

Why not threat her with zephyr breeze cum?
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>>29575869
She's a total sweetie when she's drunk.
She's a total cunt when she's REALLY drunk.
There's a fine line and you'll just have to do some experimenting to find it.
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>>29576249
>imperious huffball

Awwwwwww

Rarie needs spankies
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>>29576504
Because if she gets pregnant, sure, she'll hate it, but she won't be able to work anymore, and you definitely won't be able to whip her anymore.
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>>29575869
>You're Anon, in Equestria
>You've learned something interesting about pony psychology recently that you'd love to put to the test
>Entering Sugarcube Corner, you spot your target: Rainbow Dash
>She's standing next to her friends' table as she prepares to leave
>When she sees you, her eyes light up, and she smiles
>"Hey, Anon! Good to see ya out of the house every once and a while!"
>So, innocent, so trusting
>You wordlessly circle around behind her as she watches in confusion
>"What are you-"
>You put your hand in between her wings and press down, forcing her to the floor, before you sit on her and use your legs to hold her wings closed
>"Hey! What gives! Get off of me, you weirdo!"
>She squirms beneath you as her friends move in to help, but they freeze as you pull the collar out of your pocket
>They stare in silent reverence and fear as you wrap it around her neck
>The whole restaurant is silent as you stand up and dust off your pants
>Dash doesn't immediately follow
"...You can stand up now."
>She scrambles to her hooves and turns to face you
>The fear and confusion on her face is evident, but you can see the fire behind her eyes
>She's pissed
>"A-Anon, what the hay did you-"
"Call me Master."
>She jumps like she's been whipped, and her face burns red with humiliation
>"Y-yes, Master..."
>Holy shit it works, this is the dumbest thing you've ever seen
>Her friends' eyes keep darting between you and her, not sure what to do
>You reach down and pat her head
"Your name is Skittles now, got it?"
>She nods reluctantly
"C'mon, I'll take you home, show you where you'll be sleeping, and we'll go over what you're going to be doing for me."
>You wave to the rest of the gang on the way out
"Bye guys!"
>They nervously wave back
>"Bye Anon..."
>Twilight turns to her friends
>"We can't just let this happen! I'll shoot a letter off to Celestia and do some research. We can't just let Anon take Skittles like that!"
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>>29576810
>We can't just let Anon take Skittles like that!
kek
nice touch
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>>29576751
>you definitely won't be able to whip her anymore

Implying that I care.
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>>29576751
>Because if she gets pregnant, sure, she'll hate it, but she won't be able to work anymore

Implying that Zephyr Breeze is fertile.
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>>29576897
>You will never psychologically torture Dash by having infertile stallions rape her and watch her break down as more and more cum is pumped into her womb and she cries that she's not ready to be a mother.
>You'll never watch her confidence slowly return as she realizes she 'miraculously' didn't get pregnant.
>You'll never threaten her with being raped again to make her behave.

What's even the point of all these stories if we don't have stories about what really matters?
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>>29576994
>what really matters

Let me guess it's family matters.
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>>29576994
I know. Can you believe that after all this time, we still don't have a story about fillies in a brothel?
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Any stories where a pony willingly becomes a slave?
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>>29577089
Sort of.
Liquid's Chronicled Delight (Pony OC) by Writeslut
- pastebin.com/kHCkmCtc
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>>29577089
>willingly
Not entirely sure but I'm working on something in that direction
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>>29577006
Your insistence happened of annoying and offensive to really funny
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>>29577089
There are Glimmer of Hope, and Fire and Sky, where ponies are refugees and willingly take whatever they can get on earth. Can't think of any where slavery is actively sought out. Would be a good prompt. In some societies slavery was the social safety net; your family got the cash, and at least the master would feed you.
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>>29577089
>Equestria and Earth have uneasy peace
>visitors from both worlds were allowed in the other for short periods
>however citizenship would never be granted to a free human in Equestria or a free pony on Earth
>Anon and pony meet
>she's only here for a week
>he's smitten with her
>goes to visit her in Equestria for a week
>they're madly in love
>Earth/Equestria relations turn sour
>visits no longer allowed
>the only ponies allowed to remain are those that agree to become slaves
>ponies that have planted deep roots arrange to be owned by close friends/lovers/etc so they don't have to leave their loved ones behind
>for a brief period, the only new arrivals are ponies that have knowingly arranged to become slaves once here
>after that, travel between the two worlds is strictly abolished with the exception of diplomats
>the decision has to be made swiftly as there is a strict cutoff date
>Anon's marefriend becomes his slave since it's the only way she can see him again for the forseeable future
>has to watch in horror as things become less and less pleasant for other pony slaves, even though her 'nonny loves her and she knows he'd never hurt her
>right?
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>>29577273
Can you autists keep it in your own thread please?
Thanks.
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>>29577223
If anon really loved her, it would have broken her heart for her to return to Equestria before it was too late.
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I want to horsewhip >>29577324
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>>29577357
Damn, you beat me to it.
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>>29577324
Someone can't handle the bantz.
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Pony pulls the wagon.
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Ponyride story when?
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>>29577412
Pony guts the fish.
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>>29577419
>be anon, 7 years old
>blissfully unaware of the true horrors of slavery
>you've seen ponies before though
>one day you see a pony in the park with a saddle on her back and reins around her neck
>she's standing next to a sign
>"pony rides $1"
>she looks sad
>go running up to her with youthful enthusiasm
"Hi pony, I'm Anon! What's your name?"
>she gives you a warm smile
>"My name's not important, dear. Would you like to go for a ride?"
"Boy, would I!"
>you reach into your pockets, only for both hands to come up empty
"Aww.. darn it, I forgot I spent my allowance this week already. Can I pet you instead?"
>she giggles as you place your hand on her neck and begin stroking her before she can even respond
"You're so soft!"
>her giggling intensifies when you hug her and rub your face against her fluff
>"I'll tell you what, sweetie, first ride's on the house."
>your eyes go wide with excitement and you gasp
"Wow, really??"
>she nods and lays down on the ground
>"Go on, climb up on the saddle!"
>you don't have to be told twice, your butt is already planted on the leather seat before she even finishes her sentence
>you reach down to grab the left stirrup, slipping your foot into it, then reach for the right, which is just barely out of your reach until she turns around and bumps it with her muzzle, causing your right foot to slide into it
>"Hold on tight!"
>you grab the reins and pull hard out of fear and exhilaration as she carefully stands up
>you wobble around, barely maintaining your balance, a funny feeling in your belly as your heart beats faster
>you've never ridden a pony before
>she can definitely tell
>"It's alright sweetie, we'll take it nice and slow. Just let me know if you wanna get down, okay?"
>she starts to walk, occasionally looking back at you, ignoring your death-grip on the reins and your legs squeezing onto her sides for dear life
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>>29577452
>half way around the park you finally start to relax, sitting up tall in the saddle and easing your grip with your legs, though you still hold the reins tightly
>the gentle swaying side to side of the pony underneath you along with the soft, rhythmic creaking of saddle leather makes you feel more at ease than you've ever felt in your life
>you give a soft sigh, taking in the sights around you
>there aren't many kids around
>not many you recognize, at least
>you puff your chest out with pride and hold your head high whenever you see someone else, wanting them to take notice of you, maybe even feel jealous
>you give the pony a soft kick on her sides and bounce in the saddle a couple times
"Giddyup pony, let's go faster!"
>she giggles, turning to look at you with a smile
"Maybe after you've had a few more rides. You must learn to balance yourself first. I don't want you to fall!"
>you give a frustrated sigh and raspberry
"Fiiiine."
>before you know it, you've ridden around the entire park, and are back where you started
>"Okay little one, that's all for today. You did wonderful for your first time!"
"Aw, I wanna ride some more though," you protest
>you notice other kids have started to gather where the sign is
>"Now now, Anon, I must be fair and let the other children have a turn, okay?"
>she lays back down and you pull your feet out of the stirrups, nearly losing your balance when you swing your leg back over her and slide off of her back
>as soon as she stands back up you throw your arms around her and hug her as tight as you can, revelling in her luxuriously soft coat one more time
"Thank you for the ride, pony!"
>She nuzzles your cheek as she steps over to the line that's formed, the next kid putting his foot in the stirrup and pulling himself up onto her back without hesitation, kicking her sides as she takes off at a trot
>she turns back and looks at you one more time as she trots away
>"I'm here every day, Anon, I hope you'll come and visit me again!"
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>>29577419
I wonder if Flutter chews and regurgitates worms to feed the newborn birds
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>>29577460
>anon's friends see him riding a pretty pastel pony
>give him endless shit and call him a girl because kids are evil to each other
>mare wonders why she never sees her new little friend again
>the rest of these brats just climb on her and kick the shit out of her, they're way too rough
>couple of them even had the nerve to break a stick off a tree to use as a riding whip on her
>none of them ever thank her or pet her or hug her
>just see her as a toy they can pay to use and then forget about
>she misses her friend

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>anon's parents notice he's been depressed lately
>keep prodding him until he tells them about ponyride mare
>anon's dad goes to the park and sees an older teenager trying to ride her that she struggles to carry
>successfully chases him off
>mare explains her situation, how she's barely getting by
>dad makes her an offer
>she can become anon's family's slave and theyll provide for her, even provide a contract with an opt out clause
>all she has to do is come live with them and give anon pony rides
>she's reluctant to give up her freedom
>eventually accepts
>anon comes home from school one day to find her standing in his living room all saddled up with a gift bow in her mane
>runs up to hug her with tears in his eyes
>"I'm all yours now, anon! I've missed you, sweetie! I know your friends were mean to you, and I'm sorry they made you feel bad for liking me, but now you can rub it in their faces that you have your very own pony that you don't have to share with anyone!"
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>>29577473
>former slave accepts return to slavery to be with her friend
>anon pampers the shit out of her
>anon rides her to school every day
>kids at school see her dropping him off, nuzzling and kissing his cheek every day, then doing the same when she shows up later to give him a ride home
>not only does anon have his very own pony, she loves her little master with all her heart
>the salt is enough to fill the grand Canyon
>mare defends anon from bullies
>scares the shit out of them by putting on a full wild-angry-feral-momma-mare-defending-her-baby act making them think they're about to get the ever loving shit stomped out of them
>anon is never fucked with by bullies again
>they fall asleep snuggling every night
>anon and mare literally cannot fall asleep unless they're holding each other
>anon keeps lavishing her with affection even after he gets too big to ride her
>she never uses her opt out clause
>many years later she dies in her master's arms
>she dies a slave, but the happiest slave that ever lived
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>>29577486
We need more stories about happy pony slaves that love their masters and are treated well.
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>>29577533
this

this to the highest degree.
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>>29577486
>>anon keeps lavishing her with affection even after he gets too big to ride her
Now he can carry her around.
I like happy slavepone stories.
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>>29577486
An oldie but a goodie. We do need some more heartwarming stuff.
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>>29577577
"I'll love you forever. I'll like you for-always. As long as I'm living, my pony you'll be"
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How to get from this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Src0l4a51sk
to this?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oTz93Y-qeq0
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>>29577452
>>29577460
>>29577465
>>29577473
>>29577486

This made me smile and gave me a warm feeling inside. You do good work.
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>>29577486
And then this Anon grows up to be the anon in the other short where his ponies build a town on his property and are all there to give them their love at the end of his life.
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>>29577473
>the rest of these brats just climb on her and kick the shit out of her, they're way too rough
>couple of them even had the nerve to break a stick off a tree to use as a riding whip on her
>>none of them ever thank her or pet her or hug her

Some animals simply have to be killed at birth
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>>29577827
That is now my personal headcanon. Thank you.
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>>29577436
maiden voyage when?
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>>29577832
>Some animals simply have to be killed at birth

I think you may fit that category mate.
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>>29577533
That is the true purpose of this topic
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>>29577827
My brain went to another dimension, you literally just gave sense and continuity to two of my favorite stories
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>>29577889
>memegenerator
I think you may fit that category
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>>29577827
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>>29577923
>have couple hundred acre farm out in the countryside
>buy a bunch of mares and stallions and let them roam as they please
>Start setting up a semi-independent town of ponies.
>They can do what they like, produce what they like, live how they like.
>Some go so far as to sell their work themselves; on the internet, no one knows you're buying from a pony
>All you demand is that they provide a certain amount of profit to you in order to cover their expenses.
>Eventually they even start a collective fund to buy other ponies
>If one of them sees a family member or dear friend up for sale, they scrape together the money and have you make the purchase
>Despite this freedom, a few choose to stay in your house instead of returning to their little enclave
>Your oldest and dearest slaves
>Those who you personally took in at first, and who will never forget the kindness you showed them.
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>>29577940
>Wake up one day find your little commune overrun with state police
>Turns out one of your ponies was doing some funny business on the side
>And not all of those fields were actually for food
>Ultimately you're cleared of any serious wrongdoing
>It was pretty easy to make it clear all of that had happened without your approval
>That your ponies had been properly instructed as to the laws and ordered to obey them
>There wasn't any law against owning a disobedient slave
>You're sent home a slap on the wrist and a fine
>Officially
>By the time the case works its way through the courts, however, your ponies are long gone
>Seized by the police, then sold off when it was found that housing and feeding them would be 'an undue hardship' on their budget
>Vanished into the maze of auctions and bulk sales
>Not that you could have bought them back
>The fine had cored out your savings
>All you are left with is the remnants of your little town
>Weeds reclaiming streets paved out by helping hooves
>Windows falling from homes they'd proudly raised for themselves
>Paint flaking from signs advertising events that would never be held and jobs that would never be done
>Voices of joy and amusement and scolding and love replaced by the empty creaking of rusted hinges
>Debris collecting in corners, building little piles
>Some days you walk through the place
>Listen to the wind whisper and rotting houses creak
>Alone
>With only memories of ponies' laughter and singing to accompany you.
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>>29577946
>And then, one day, there is a pony.
>You only see him briefly through a window, a flash of color near the fallen perimeter fence
>The next day, there are four
>A stallion, a mare, and their two fillies - one only just foaled, by your estimation
>They were squatting in one of the houses, the stallion using his meager magic to try and nail over empty windows
>He panics when you approach, nervously asking if they could stay a few nights in one of the buildings
>Sure, you tell him
>Why not
>In fact, stay forever for all you care
>Just keep the place clean
>Wandering back to your own house, you put the matter out of your mind
>Two weeks later, you glance over at the town on a whim
>Three houses are lit by the pale glow of magic
>By the next month, it is five
>When they start clearing out the roads again, you decide an explanation is in order
>The answer is simple, yet somehow shocking
>Wherever your ponies had gone, they had talked about your town
>About what they'd had
>And now, more ponies were coming
>A lot more
>A whole ton more
>Some are freed
>Some have deliberately had their ownership transferred to you
> A few are runaways
>The remaining buildings fill, swell, and become insufficient
>More are raised
>Songs and laughter return to your yard
>Once again they put themselves hard to work
>Once again a fund is raised to purchase other ponies and bring them to your town
>Not family or friends this time, but your ponies
>The ones who'd brought them here
>They track them down with a fiendish efficiency, pinpointing one after another at a rate that shocks you
>Familiar faces begin to trickle back in
>And soon, at last, your home fills with old, familiar friends by your side at last
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>>29577951
>many years pass
>hundreds of ponies now on "your" property
>in reality they'd annexed several nearby plots of land under your name to expand the rapid growth of their little community
>you become frail and weak with old age
>house starts to fall into disrepair
>your ponies tell you not to worry
>you will never be alone
>they fix up your house for you and keep it maintained immaculately
>several of them move in with you to keep you company and take care of all your daily chores
>when you can no longer feed yourself, they take turns cooking you dinner and spoonfeeding you every meal, delicately wiping the corners of your mouth when a bit of drool or food dribbles down the side
>as your body continues to fail on you, they bathe you, change you, keep you clean, never once complaining, tending to you with the most tender of love
>they remember
>oh yes they remember
>the little filly you rocked to sleep in your arms every night for two weeks when her parents both fell ill
>the young stallion whose house you were there with hammer-in-hand to help rebuild after he lost his few meager possessions in a devastating fire when he was still a brand new father
>the three young runaway mares that you hid in your attic and lied to the cops about when they came around looking for them, telling them not to come back without a warrant, saving them from a horrific life of sexual abuse and slavery
>they're all here
>as your final hours begin to pass, the room is so crammed full of familiar, loving faces that there's not room for them all, several ponies spilling out of the doorway into the other rooms of the house
>they each take their turns thanking you and giving you their love
>you smile as you draw your last breath, surrounded by the warmth and comfort of the only true family you've ever had, going to your final resting place knowing you helped to make the world a much better place
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>>29577940
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So is this just "posting old stories: the thread" right now?
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>>29577990
Never hurts to bump with a few oldie but goodies. There's always someone that's never seen them before.
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>>29577533
That's what I'm working on now. Buster and Dash won't have the easiest path in life, but they'll get along famously. Next update won't be for a few days though, got a busy week.
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>>29577998
You are correct. I am one who has never seen this green and I love it.
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>>29577960
My type of story
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>>29577960
Need this, thanks fella
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>>29578062
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>>29578072
You guys would love the "comfy mare slaves" short. It's in the main pastebin.
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>>29578108
pastebin.com/GpJ5x1Qf
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>>29578124
Well thank you for posting don't mind if I do!
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>>29578108
Thanks but I was there when the first stories were told
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>>29578124
>TFW no more green about those two cart-pulling cuties and their loving master.
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Sorry for the short post, I want you guys to have decent control of possible fight sequences.

>>Get Gloria to cast Aeroga to cover your escape. She'd be completely vulnerable after, but if you can make a clean escape...

>Looking over both Asher and the unknown man, you realize it would probably be a bad idea to fight them.
>Glancing back, you look at your ragtag party.
>Star looks nervous, fidgeting a little as she stands off against Asher and his cohort.
>Gloria just looks angry, her mouth a hard line.
>Well, it's time to do something stupid.
>Jumping backwards and falling on your ass, you you yell at the top of your lungs.
"Aeroga Gloria!"
(1d20 vs 4): 20 CRITICAL!
>Perhaps it's the weight of lifting his staff that slows Asher down, or maybe just age.
>Either way, Gloria casts first, forming a green tornado that blocks the fireball he launches.
>Before your eyes, the tornado grows more and more.
>Somehow, you don't feel the pull of the wind, but you certainly feel the sticks and stones hitting you.
>You walk right into something and jump back, ready to attack.
>The spell dies on your lips as you realize you've bumped into Star.
>She tries to pull out her slate to write something, but fumbles with it.
>Torn from her mouth, it gets pulled into the raging tornado.
>Putting a hand on her withers and leaning close to her, you yell into her ear.
"Keep close to me! We need to get out of here!"
>Covering your eyes with one hand and holding on to Star's withers with the other, you pick a direction and go.
>After about half a minute, you no longer feel any debris hitting you, so you uncover your eyes.
>You're in an unrecognizable patch of woods, with only a few new bumps, bruises, and scratches.
>What you are missing, is Gloria.
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>>29578264
>Looking around, you see the tornado still raging behind you and clear woods for as far as you can see.
>Wiping off what you can from your robes, you turn to Star.
"Did you see Gloria?"
>Star simply shakes her head, trying to look for Gloria as well.
>The only thing that can be heard throughout the forest is the raging winds.

>>Go back into the storm to find Gloria. You seem to be protected from the worst of it, anyway.
>>Keep going, she'll catch up with you.
>>Head a little further north and then make camp. It could lead to Asher finding you, but Gloria would have an easier time locating you.
>>Stay here, wait for the spell to wear off. Asher and the other man probably left already, so there's no need to worry.
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>>29578108
You were right anon. Thank you.
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>>29578275
>>Go back into the storm to find Gloria. You seem to be protected from the worst of it, anyway.
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>>29578275
Let's get the fuck outta dodge. Gloria will be fine, probably.
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>>29578275
Go back into the storm. She's not fine, I can feel it.
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>>29578275
>>Gloria
And be quick about it. There's a pretty good chance she's unconscious from mana exhaustion or something. Need to get in and out before the spell ends. Hopefully Asher and the summoner backed off, but I don't think things are going to be that easy.
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>>29578108
>main pastebin
>mfw it's still missing four of my one-shots
It's like y'all don't like underage whore ponies unless they work in brothels.
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I just want a pet pone to snuggle and lewd is that too much to ask?
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>>29578705
Yes. Yes that is to much to ask.
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>>29578705
>tfw no cute little poner to tuck into bed, cook pancakes in the morning, snuggle up to the couch, tenderly love and brutally whip until she cries.
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>>29576994
>>29577223
>All these good ideas
>So little time to write

>>29577960 (and responses)
Still glad people are enjoying this months down the line!
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>>29576994
>Eventually, Dash starts to think that she's barren and that's why she doesn't get pregnant.
>That's when you introduce a fertile stallion and watch her confidence shatter all over again.
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>>29578695
Drop the links here and they'll get added. Jingles is usually around.
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>>29578695
Reverse satan >>29578999 is quite correct. It's hard to keep track of everything. Give me links and I'll add them.
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>>29578275
>pastebin.com/GpJ5x1Qf
go back and take a quick look around.
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>>29579226
Thanks 4chan for automatically adding the link i had highlighted from a while ago to my post.
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Bridle Bump
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>>29578275
>>>Go back into the storm to find Gloria. You seem to be protected from the worst of it, anyway.
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>>29576810
I like thing.
Do more thing.
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>>29579695
I would ride her gently, and give her little scritchies behind the ears.
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page 9 aint no place for slaves
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>>29580817
I would ride her roughly, and push her to her limit.
And then give her little scritchies behind her ears after that light workout.
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>>29579695
Bridle Bump 2: Bashful Boogaloo
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>>29581758
RD likes it. She probably learned to like getting her flanks whipped when Master rode her.
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>>29582565
She probably takes it as a challenge from her master.
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>>29577006
>invisible stallion
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Depending on where you guys take this, I might do a few short ones tonight.

>>Go back into the storm to find Gloria. You seem to be protected from the worst of it, anyway.

>Staring at the opaque green winds, you realize you need to at least check.
>Gloria said that she can only cast one Aeroga before she runs completely out of mana, leaving her pretty much defenseless.
>Glancing to Star, you realize it would be a bad idea to bring her back into the storm.
"Star, can you go check that way-"
>You point a finger northwards and away from the possible danger of the localized tornado.
"Just go out a little and come back. I'll check to the west and we'll meet up here."
>With a serious look, Star nods and gallops off.
>Turning around, you head back into the tornado.
>Covering your eyes, you maintain a straight path, heading for the eyes of the storm.
(1d20 vs 7): 9
>As you're wishing you had some sort of goggles, you feel something huge barely miss you.
>It brushes the back of your cloak but passes by quickly.
>After almost being hit by whatever that was, you speed up significantly.
>Suddenly, the pounding on the front of your body stops and you look into the eye of the storm.
(1d20 vs 9): 16
>At the edge of the eye, the man in green and gold stands next to a giant wearing nothing but a loincloth and golden bracelets.
>Neither notices you, staring across the eye to an unconscious and bruised Gloria.
>Taking a second glance you notice two things about the man.
>One, his feet are encased in stone and he's visibly exerting himself.
>Two, he has no visible weapons.
>Looking at the giant now, you estimate him to be about eight feet tall with rippling muscle.
>In fact, his whole body looks as hard as a rock.
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>>29582983
>In the second you take to analyze the situation, he points a finger towards Gloria.
>The giant begins to lumber forward, albeit slowly.
>Neither have noticed you yet, possibly due to the roaring wind and debris.

>>Attack the giant with a spell/bow/knife.
>>Try to rush the man with a spell/bow/knife.
>>Try to sneak around the back of the man.
>>Retreat and wait to see what happens.
>>Write in
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>>29582989
Attacking the giant is probably not going to fly.
Rushing the summoner will involve the giant, see above.
Retreating will sacrifice Gloria; abandoning friends is not how we win this game.
That leaves sneaking around the summoners back, and planting a knife there. What with his feet being encased in stone (WTF?) and such it should be low-risk, but killing another sentient is a huge step.
He justified killing Star with the lives her medicine would save (and a payday for him), you can justify killing him with the lives of Star and Gloria (and yourself).
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>>29582989
masturbate furiously
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>>29583074
It's Titan. tl;dr the earth god. We're 95% fucked if he notices us.

>>29582989
Stay low, sneak up and shank the Summoner. Knowing how to use Silence would help SO MUCH RIGHT NOW.

Asher is MIA and too tough to die. Which means he's probably stealing our horse right now. We're going to need Gloria's help in the near future, and maybe the mind control ring.
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/r/ a pic of Rarity whimpering and crossing her back legs with Anon shaking a big brush at her
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>>29583074
This.
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>>29582202
Bridle Bump 3: Royalty's Rein
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>>29583840
Bridle Bump 4: Mare is Scare
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>>Try to sneak around the back of the man.
I gotta remember to put something in about how many checks they'll be for some choices
>The giant looks too strong to take on.
>If you try to rush the man, the giant would come running
>Despite Gloria not exactly being the perfect travel companion, you can't just leave her behind.
>Well, if you can't take them head on, you'll just need to try a less direct route.
>Stepping back into the storm, you try to follow the edge of the eye.
>You quickly head around in a circle, barely inside the main storm.
(1d20 vs 14): 15
>By some miracle, he doesn't notice you as you loop around the eye.
>As travel through the opaque green winds, you catch glimpses of flying logs and other large debris.
>Being close to the eye, you're able to step into the slower outer edge of the eye, avoiding any large debris.
>After several close calls, you stand behind him.
>Drawing your knife, you ready yourself.
>All you need to do is kill him, then Star and Gloria will be okay.
>That's all you need to do.
>Mustering your courage, you go in for the kill.
(1d20 vs 11): 2
>Perhaps he sees you in the corner of his eye.
>Maybe he hears you over the wind.
>As you dash towards him, he makes a series of wild gestures and the giant turns away from Gloria.
(1d20 vs 6): 18
>Slamming your knife into his gut, his arm movements stop as he begins pounding on your face and shoulders.
>You can feel the pounding of the giant's feet as he runs toward you.
>He starts screaming, a cry of pain right into your ear.
>It hurts, but you pull the knife out and slam it back in, aware of the ever-approaching giant.
>His blows become weaker and he slides to the ground, feet still encased in stone.
>The pounding of the giant's feet dissipates and when you look up, he's gone.
>You let out a nervous laugh, clutching your head with your bloody hands.
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>>29584506

>You let out a laugh, clutching your head with your bloody hands.
>Y-you just killed someone.
>But it was to protect Gloria and Star.
>Yeah, that is right.
>He started the fight by showing up at your camp like he did.
>You saved Gloria and probably Star.
>You only killed him because you had to.
>Kneeling down, you pull out your knife, wiping it and your hands clean in the grass.
>As you head towards Gloria, you try not to look at the body too much.
>You didn't want to kill him, after all.
>Reaching Gloria, you see she's bleeding from many small cuts that cover much of her exposed skin.
>Suddenly you hear a loud cracking noise from across the clearing.
>Jumping to up at once, you ready yourself for round two.
>What you see, instead of a new enemy, is the stone surrounding the man's feet begin to crack.
>With once final groan, it recedes into the earth and the corpse begins to move.
>But this wasn't an undead mage returning.
>More quickly than anything flying through the tornado, the corpse is swept out of the eye.
>Within the blink of an eye, all that's left is a bloodstain and a memory.
>...That explains the stone boots.
>Turning back to Gloria, you think about what to do.

>>Try to bring her back to Star and get going. The tornado might aggravate her wounds, but it's time to get moving.
>>Wait until the spell ends. She isn't losing too much blood, but you don't want to risk anything. It's already been a solid 15 minutes anyway.
>>Go now, but try to use one of your potions on Gloria.
>>Wait, but try to use one of your potions on Gloria.
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>>29576810
Last line lost my sides. Is there going to be more?
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>>29576826
>>29580642
>>29584637
I wasn't planning on writing anymore myself. If somebody else would like to continue it, I wouldn't mind.
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>>29584513
>>Go now, but try to use one of your potions on Gloria
Let's gtfo
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>>29584513
>>>Go now, but try to use one of your potions on Gloria.
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>>29584681
This. Get the FUCK out of there.
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>>29579196
Even if one was written to personally spite you in particular?
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>>29584902
Post link, and story behind the spite. We will judge both. Our standards for latter are high, it better be pretty spiteful.
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>>29584902
Haha, no.
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>>29585164
>"Hay guys write a story one sentence at a time!"
"She was only ten."
>>"The end."
"Fuck you, jangle! It's a valid opening line!"
>>"No. Fuck you."
So I turned it into a full short.

http://pastebin.com/vXL1LP2T

>>29585199
It's still a valid opening line!

Others are:
http://pastebin.com/yCNk7ivt
http://pastebin.com/0YCjGLfv
http://pastebin.com/C46F265u
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>>29585251
Oh. I think I may have mistaken the story for a different one. Nevermind then.

They've all been added to the paste.
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>>29585251
I actually liked all of these
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>>29585354
That's a bit surprising. I thought everyone hated the lung cancer waifu short.
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>>29585747
The feels, man
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>>29585747
Lots better than toiletslave

Not gonna lie tho, that shit was terrible, but it still made me laugh
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>>29586021
And by "that" I meant toiletslave, not the other short.
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>>29584513
>>Go now, but try to use one of your potions on Gloria.
Seems like the responsible thing to do. We could also ask Star if we could draw a bit of her blood too...
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>>29586021
It was a constant attempt to out-edgy itself, how could you not love it?
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>>29586021
Link to toilet slave?
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>>29586041
Yea, it kinda grew on me. Went all the way past edgy and looped around to being cute in an odd way.
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>>29586190
I don't think anyone ever saved it, since it was just a bunch of shitposts, so I trawled the archive as best I could. I don't think I missed any parts.
It's just as edgy as I remember.

Anyway:
http://pastebin.com/QuHkWU5h
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>pony does something bad
>Master Anon is a laid back guy, only yells at pony and takes away her dinner

>later that night, pony walks up to Master's chair
>belt in mouth
>she drops it at his feet

>Master shakes his head right away
>says he'll never hit her
>tells her she's still a good girl
>but pony feels so guilty, that she insists, pushing the belt toward him

>she can't feel like a good girl yet
>not until Master has truly punished her

>Master is very reluctant
>doesn't want to hurt her
>but eventually, he does pick up the belt
>pony stares up at him, waiting

>Anon gets up, and tells her to bend over the chair
>pony obeys, feeling nervous anticipation
>but she needs this

>Anon steels himself, and gives her the belt whipping
>pony cries, and sobs her sorries to the cieling
>but when they're done, pony feels Master's hands pick her up, and lay her down on his chest

>they cuddle long after the sun has gone down
>the tears dry on both of their faces
>and before drifting to sleep, Master hears pony whisper into his chest
>"thank you, Master"
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>>29587776
>pony not absolved of guilt until master whips her
Hi Corona.
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>Skittles will never get her walkies
>Corona will never get her Christmas present
>Shiny will never have his implant removed
>Sparky will never get his horsewhipping/horn removal surgery
>comfy mare slaves will never go for another cart ride
>kidanon/ponk will never become the very best of friends
>temptrips unnamed oc mare will never defend kidanon from a brutal beating by his father
>homelessanon/starved pony will never bond through their desperate mutual struggle to survive
>big Mac will never be ridden hard by his master that bought him as a riding pony
>Celestia will never be whipped, saddled, ridden and spurred, forced to submit to her rider/owner as she's broken like a wild mustang
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>>29587859
>Celestia will never be whipped, saddled, ridden and spurred, forced to submit to her rider/owner as she's broken like a wild mustang
Of course, you don't break Celestia by use of force, you break her with the truth that she has failed her ponies and they will now toil away in slavery forever because of her mistakes.
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>>29587788
I'm still surprised by how hard Anon whipped Corona. She was actually trying to get away halfway through.

Really wish SWF had shown the direct aftermath with Shiny and Corona, especially Anon's response to Corona's admission of love and the implied altercation between Anon and Shiny. But that can still be changed! People overreacted like fuck.
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>>29588228
From what I understand that's something he plans to fill in when he returns. He knows the time skip right after Corona getting whipped was a point of contention for many. I'm eager to see what he comes up with.
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>>29588271
He spends literally all of his free time with his horses now. Story will probably never be finished now.
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>>29588228
>I'm still surprised by how hard Anon whipped Corona
This is one reason I don't like that Anon. In the end shiny and Corona are nothing but slaves to him. He didn't seem to care how much pain be inflicted on her, he's no better than their previous masters.
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>>29588289
She almost killed him, so I still do think it was justified.
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>>29588289
He clearly does care about them both, but this is a slave story, and considering that, it makes sense that he still views them as slaves. That's what this thread is about, and most stories follow that to varying degrees.

I actually kind of like the fact that Anon from that story was somewhere in between a pure white knight and a callous slave master. It made him quite interesting to me.
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>>29588280
>He spends literally all of his free time with his horses now
Living the dream... can you blame him?
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>>29588499
>He clearly does care about them both
When's the last time you flogged someone you truly care about, anon?
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>>29588536
Oh please. Even a harsh belt spanking like Corona got is not the same thing as flogging. There's also the fact he was there to hold her and comfort her afterward.
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>>29588550
He also whipped shiny pretty hard with his reins when he was working him.
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>>29587859
Not sure if I should feel insulted or proud that I didn't make the list.
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>>29588574
Proud considering that list is all garbage.
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>>29588572
Not hard enough to hurt him. Shiny seemed to like it, too.
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>>29588589
>Like it

Uhhhh
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>>29588589
Shiny developing loyalty and even a sense of friendship with his master is my favorite part of the story. I also get a feeling that when ponies are harnessed it activates some kind of primitive tendency toward submissiveness. A snap on the rump with the reins held by his master probably even felt like a good thing in some strange way.
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>>29588603
>he didn't get the stump scene
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>you will never sit on your slave mare's face and force her to eat your filthy, unwashed ass as she sobs and gags and retches
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I just want to pet a nice horse and maybe kiss them on the muzzle
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>>29588629
I'm an idiot, didn't check who you were replying to. Thought you were talking about the ten licks. My b
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>>29588668
>you will never bury your face under your slave mare's tail and eat her filthy unwashed ponut while she squeaks and moans and squirms and winks her clit, mare juice dribbling down the inside of her hind legs
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>>29588788
>you will never contract an STD
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>>29588819
Ponies and humans can't give each other STDs, they're not closely related enough biologically.
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>>29588788
Found the heretic.
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>filthy unwashed ponut

whyyyyyyyy
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>>29588824
Why have a slave mare at all if you're not gonna put your face under her tail at least once a day?
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>>29588850
So she too can serve.
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>>29588528
Does he have sex with his mare?
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>>29589016
>being a literal horse rapist
wtf I hate shiny and corona now
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>>29588617
>activates some kind of primitive tendency toward submissiveness
Ponies think saddles and bridles are fashionable. It's less some buried primitive tendency towards submission and more a societal want of it so strong it makes Sweden look alpha.
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>>29589052
Animals cannot consent. Bestiality will never be acceptable to society. Degenerates like you should be hunted down ruthlessly and executed on sight. I legitimately feel sorry for your horses for the torture you subject them to.
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>>29589083
You realize there's no trip on this guy right now?
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>>29589023
>still falling for a lack of trip

wowwww
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>>29589104
bullshit.
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>>29589023
swf is a dirty degenerate
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>>29589104
How the fuck are you seeing his ip?>>29589119
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>>29589125
Didn't mean for the second quote to happen
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>>29589052
I agree with this. Even if this was the real swf, they're his horses. He can do whatever he wants with them, who are we to judge?
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>>29589179
>Yeah gaiz this is definitely the real SWF totallyyyyyyyy
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>>29589104
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Well, shit. Looks like fagfag is back.
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>>29589252
Nah, fagfag was stupid, but not this stupid. This fuck isn't even using the old trip. I suspect we have a new one here
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>>29576810
>Twilight's research comes up with nothing of note, and Celestia says there's nothing she can do
>Applejack and Fluttershy had been sent to spy on Anon, but they haven't reported back yet
>She goes to investigate, and her worst fears are realized
>Anon has captured Cinnamon and Butterscotch, just like he did with Skittles
>She has to stop Anon, before he owns all of the ponies in Ponyville
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>>29589306
>Cinnamon and Butterscotch,
>not using brand names like Skittles
>not calling them Reeses and Werthers
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>>29589333
>Reeses
>Cinnamon flavor
Holy shit I'm glad I'm a burgerclap and not in whatever hell you are.
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>>29589341
Reeses fits better than any cinnamon candy.
Cinnamon doesn't suit AJ at all and would better saved for Big Mac (Hot Tamales or Red Hots), though Twizzler would be acceptable (better if used for Twist, though).
Reeses also offers the benefit of Apple Bloom being Reeses Pieces.
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>>29589306
>Implying Grape Jelly is going to be able to stop Anon from making her a good pony along with the rest of Equestria.
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>>29589390
Apple Jacks (the breakfast cereal) is predominantly cinnamon flavored. Cinnamon also has an earthy color, which fits in well with AJ's color scheme.
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>>29588905
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Scared Stallion Steed
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>>29590037
He looks traumatized. Hold on little buddy, it'll be ok!
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>>29590318
Has anyone done Diamond Dog slave yet?

Take advantage of that pack mentality. Once you're the alpha, they're all perfectly loyal. Rent them out for large-scale mining operations and terraforming. They do in an afternoon things that take months of blasting and highly specialized tunnel bores to accomplish.
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>>29590310
This is his mistress, still think it'll be ok?
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>>29590390
No. That's awful.

But he's with me, so it's cool!
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>>29590555
That was a mirror, Anon.
Go on a fucking diet already.
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>>29590365
>Has anyone done Diamond Dog slave yet?
No, because Diamond Dogs are slavers, not slaves.
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>>29590941
/r/ing story of diamond dogs kidnapping ponies to sell to people to make a tidy profit.
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>>29591201
Ism't that the premise of Bridle Path?
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>>29591272
Looks like it. Thanks, Anon
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Pony enslaving a pony, many such cases. Sad!
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>>29591605
I can't tell if Mac is enjoying himself or not.
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>>29590318
holy fucking shit
what kind of retard puts a saddle on their dog and actually LETS THEIR KID FUCKING RIDE IT?
triggered as fuck right now
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>>29591812
People with a riding fetish that can't afford a horse.
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>>29572026 (and many others agreeing)

> Leaning in, you nuzzle her back - letting the stress flow out of you.
> Enough worrying, enough being alone.
> You need a friend.
> Not a co-worker or comrade.
> Not even a little brother.
> A friend.
"...thank you, Vapor."
> "Don't have to."
> Her breath tickles your ear.
> "It's - what we have to do, looking out for each other. It's how we survive here."
"Still. You're right - I haven't had anypony to just... be comfortable with for way, way too long. And I guess - I guess part of it's being afraid. That what I have to do would get in the way of that..."
> Vapor Trail shifts, slipping her head back to rest over your withers.
> I know. You're balancing a lot."
"It's not just that. What happens if we end up - conflicting? What if I can't tell you something? What if-"
> A wing across your muzzle stops you.
> "You remember in flight camp, how they kept telling us that you can plan and practice a flight until Celestia grows old, but if you never jump off the cloud it's still no good?"
"...yeah."
> Chuckling softly, lift your head to brush your nose along her neck.
> "Make the jump, Thunderlane. It'll be okay. Trust me - nopony can be alone forever. I was, when I came here... then you and Cadance took care of me, and-"
> She cuts off, eyes drifting to her belly.
> "...so yeah. At least let me be here for you."
> The two of you stay that way for a long time, just being comfortable together.
> Despite saying that you and Cadance had 'taken care of' her, you're left with the distinct feeling that Vapor Trail had been lacking somepony close just as much as you had.
> And despite how much Rumble would definitely tease you about it... this felt good.
> "Will you have to be going soon?"
"I... don't know. Not for a little while-"
> Absent the need for any more night stakeouts, you were actually getting a bit of rest at night again.
"-but won't your room-mate be coming back soon?"
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>>29592281

> "Yeah, but I don't think Twisty will mind. As long as we're not, y'know, doing anything-"
"Yeah, so we'll be fine."
> Giggling like a colt for a moment, soon joined by Vapor.
> "Especially for you. She knows what you did for me too, so she'd be okay with you just being here."
> You can feel your cheeks color somewhat.
"Hey, now. I don't need you talking me up in front of everypony in camp."
> Laughing, Vapor scoots over on the bed - making proper room for another pony.
> "You know, that does mean you can come on up here. There's no need for you to sit on the cold floor."
> You do, stretching out as best as you can and laying your head down.
> It's a tight fit for two ponies on the small mattress, but still possible.
> Despite the camp's tough conditions, she's kept her coat and wings in lustrous, soft conditions - even still smelling good.
> And this, you fully relish in - curling up against her and delighting in the sense of having somepony close.

> Tap, tap, tap goes your finger.
> You're not particularly nervous, but it's a habit you'd picked up - some way to focus yourself as thoughts tumble through your head.
> And tumbling they are, as you ponder what Cadance had just told you.
> A competitor for control of the camp - and one with decidedly fewer morals than she held...
> It is tempting.
> You'd taken another close look at Haute Glamour when you went back into the meeting, and concluded that Cadance was certainly on to something.
> The unicorn was definitely more than a simple assistant to Randall; watching them together, it was clear that he put a great deal of trust into her independent actions.
> But, of course, that alone was no cause for suspicion considering how much weight you gave Cadance's opinions.
> There did seem to be something more going on there, but it would take some investigation to determine just what it was and whether there was cause for concern.
> And that, in turn, demanded that you find a way to get Randall alone.
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>>29592288

> Without alerting Haute to your intentions.
> Tap, tap, tap.
"Mocha?"
> "Yes, Master?"
> The maid pony is at your side in an instant.
"I need you to do a favor for me."
> "Yes, Master."
"When today's meeting ends - and it will shortly - I need you to get in there and intercept one of the ponies. Haute Glamour - red mane, cream coat, unicorn-"
> "I've seen her, Master."
"Good. Take her with you downstairs to the waiting room; tell her that I need to speak to her, and she should wait there."
> Should you add in anything more to keep her distracted...?
> No, not now.
> Didn't want to over-plan this.
"I'll be down to see to her eventually, so just keep her in place."
> Then, leaning over, you lightly scratch around Mocha's ears.
> She leans into your hand, nodding.
> "It'll be done, Master."
"Good... now, as long as you're here: How have the other ponies been taking to your involvement in Cadance's little complaints-box project."
> "They..."
> Hesitation; a flick of the ear, twitch of the leg.
> Nervousness.
"I'm asking a direct question, Mocha; I expect a direct answer."
> "They are... accomodating. I'm not... their friend. Not all of them. S-Some still aren't nice to me. I see them looking at me angrily. They, um. They mostly just ignore me, though."
"Many of them?"
> "N-No. Not really. But, um, there's one colt who is, um, helping a bit. With the suggestions. Sorting them."
> More softly, she mumbles:
> "He's nice..."
"My, my, Mocha - do you have a crush?"
> "No, I-"
> Cheeks color, puffing out as she pouts at you.
> "I don't. Really. I, um. I already have, um. Someone."
"Really?"
> Your eyebrows rise, a smirk spreading.
"So who's this other lucky fellow who's caught the attention of my little maid, hrmmm?"
> Cheeks absolutely crimson, Mocha lowers her eyes to stare at the floor.
> "M-Master, please... I..."
"Alright, Mocha."
> Holding back laughter at her flustered state, you nod.
"You don't have to say. But I hope they know just how lucky they are."
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>>29592295

> Whatever she was going to say comes out as little more than a muted squeak.
> Eventually, she gets herself back under control.
> "M-May I go, Master?"
"Yes, go ahead."
> "Thank you master I'll get right on it this second!"
> Words pour out in a rushed jumble as Mocha all but flees the room, leaving you laughing softly to yourself.
> She was so cute when she was flustered.
> Hefting yourself from the chair, you head back down to the meeting room.
> It seems things there are just about wrapped up, and soon enough your staff begins to wander out.
> Randall waits until the others are done, Posey leading him on with the handle attached to her harness.
> Mocha moves quickly, stopping Haute Glamour while Randall proceeds on towards you.
"Mr. Cooper, can I have a word with you for a moment?"
> "Anonymous? Of course, of course."
> He grins, running a hand through his silvery hair.
> "Though I hope you don't mind if I stay standing?"
"Not at all, please do. If you'd follow me?"
> He does - or rather, Posey does and he follows.
> You bring him into your own private study, shutting the door after him.
> Seeming to realize what you'd done, Randall turns to face in your direction.
> "Now then, Anonymous. What can I do for you?"
"Well..."
> And then you consider how you're going to go about asking him about this.
> A direct approach - plainly asking about Haute Glamour's effect on his other ponies - would be risky.
> To say the least.
> But to dance around the issue...
> Well, if he was as naive as Cadance seemed to think he was, then that might not be so informative.
> You could try needling him for information about his slave stock... or how he feels about the prospect of his slaves' semi-independent operation to begin with.
> What would be the best way to try and draw back the curtain on this matter?
> He hadn't seemed too upset about the lost of
> And, of course, there was the question of Posey herself - or what she could provide you?
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>>29592303

Leaving this an open question - how are we going about this? Blunt or careful, and what exactly do we ask about? Or, what about Posey?
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>>29592295
My little Mocha is cute, cute!!!
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>>29592295
>> "I don't. Really. I, um. I already have, um. Someone."
Oh damn...Is Anon about to get cucked?
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>>29592318
Talk to the business initially and slowly cast the bait to see how it responds to your questions, but be careful, no doubt he can recognize the double intention in your questions and predict what you really want to know and give you an answer that does not Expect and even deceive you, at all times you must keep control of your emotions and not turn your talk into an interrogation

When you talk about Haute Glamor you must remain attentive to the reactions of Posey, if this shows an attitude contrary to Randall regarding the unicorn then the suspicions of Candance are accurate and are endangering your investment and future plans.

Whatever happens then you should hear the opinion of Mocha as the guests leave
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>>29592318
Can we give Mocha the HMD? Because that was adorable.
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>>29592602
>Someone
>Not somepony
Writefag's been pretty good about actually keeping that terminology straight, so I suspect she was about two seconds away from admitting she wants to be his little bedslave.
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>>29591272
what is this and where can i read it.
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>>29592983
I think this is it. I've never read it though.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/339007/the-bridle-path
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>>29592602
>>29592814
that was my impression as well, make it happen.

>>29593004
oh right i read this, its actually amazing would recommend.
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may shiny anon rest in piece that gay asshole
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>>29593314
K fagfag now go eat your vegetables
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>>29593384
>That guy
>Fagfag

I think you need to take a break from these threads, friend. You're getting paranoid.
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>>29593400
Nah nigga
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>>29590365
Interesting idea.
I wouldnt mind a green about DD pup.
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>>29592303
Ask for pointers on slaves management.
How does he do it?
When he starts talking about Houte, drill the topic.
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>>29592810
This
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>>29593518
Now I want a green about a flatchested woman who buys a pair of baby diamond dogs only so she can stuff those sweater puppies down her shirt and fluster all the boys by offering to let them see her double D's.
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>>29592318
The nice thing about power is you don't have to dance around these things; who are we afraid of again? Just ask Randal straight up about Hauts relationship with himself and his other stock. Randal has nothing to hide, and it getting back to Haut somehow is not our concern.
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>>29575598
>>29578021
>A Glimmer of Hope (Starlight Glimmer) by Handsome Jew
So I've just read this in a morning sitting, hope you don't mind my 2 cents.

Pretty good, reads and flows right from what I expect from greens. Would probably need formatting and chapters before going elsewhere.
The main plot point about Cloud Skimmer's death felt rather unexpected. I was expecting the big shift to be Glim getting her magic back and going completely off the rails with her old power and end up creating a situation where she had to decide between the slaves or the Family although a happy ending for that is more difficult to foresee. So I was left expecting more about her relation to magic and more of Anon's fear of her. Your ending left me unsure whether I liked the Family which fits these stories and Glims development from trying to fit in to almost unconsciously seeking leadership and control or at least trying to be in denial about it. Could perhaps have done with some more development on her styles of leadership and how she approaches problems with those beneath her.

Great work on the background and world building, particularly the angle on religious adoption and the value of different races and the description of the farm itself. The Anon was a believable character, focused on money as he was and his relation to the Apples and foreponies was interesting.

All in all good story.
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>>29592295
Mocha is practically begging for her master's cock. It's undeniable at this point.
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>>29586040
As weird as this may sound i suppose its a great idea, after all its for friends aint it?
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>>29594601
I wonder how badly Anon would punish her if he woke up one morning to find her muzzle wrapped around his morning wood, gently suckling and greedily swallowing his pre as it dribbles from the tip of his member.
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>>29594601
I'll be pissed if we don't go for her
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>>29594815
if only a drop is needed i don't see why not.
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>>29594821
Isn't mocha underage?
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>>29594835
>implying we care
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>>29594601
Shut up, Mocha doesn't want to sleep with Anon.

She doesn't want him to sweep her off her hooves one day while she's finishing her duties and be carried over his bedroom. She doesn't want him to lay her down softly on the bed and lean over her, kissing her neck while he climbs on top of her. She doesn't want to quiver as she feels his hard cock rest on the lips to her wet, needy pussy.

She especially doesn't want to let out a loud moan when he finally penetrates her; hoping that none of the other house ponies heard her. She definitely doesn't want to thrust her own hips upwards along his thick shaft so that he doesn't need to tire himself out and so she can help him probe her depths perfectly. She doesn't want her mind to go blank after a bed shattering orgasm rips through her core and reduces her to sweaty, drooling mess. She definitely, especially doesn't want to feel Anon's warm cum filling her cunt to the brim; to the point where it spills out and stains her thighs, marking her as his better than any collar or chain could. She doesn't want to run a hoof along her cunt after Anon pulls out to fetch his cum for a lewd meal before it spills out.

She doesn't want to sit in the shower alone after Anon tells her she's just a slave to him and will never be anything more.

She doesn't want any of that!

Mocha is pure!
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>>29594844

This is too old anon, and is shit
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>>29594844
Dubs confirm Mocha is a tsundere
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>>29594861
Eh, I thought I could get one more use out of it. This thread is full of old stories.
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For some reason I'm imagining the ballroom scene from Beauty and the Beast with Mocha and Anon.
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>>29594601
Mocha's gonna end up with Rumble. It's inevitable. Their relationship is either going to bring the house ponies and field ponies together or tear them apart completely.
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>>29594878
It fits. Her master is a cruel, heartless beast.
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>>29594883
I imagine Mocha becoming the rigth arm of Flurry Heart in the future, once they have been expelling to Haute and she has gained leadership experience and respect of the pony population to see how she defends them from the abuses of the pedantic Unicorn, and then Anon, giving account of their potential prepare it to support your daughter when it comes time for her and Flurry to take the reins of the business
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>>29594920
Agreed. He's still committing an atrocity by participating in mass enslavement of a sapient race. And he tortured a pony with his own hands. Nothing will ever make that go away. Nothing will make what he's continuing to do okay.
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>>29595009
This is one reason I can't like any of the anons in these stories. No matter how well a slave is treated, slavery itself is still so morally reprehensible that it's impossible for me to see any slaveholder as a "good guy."
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>>29595019
I guess the one exception to this would be someone that's dedicated to rescuing slaves, and legally owning them is the only way to get them to safety.
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I really wish someone would pick up the prompt we had a few threads ago with anon rescuing a horribly abused slave mare that dies during foaling, and he has to raise the foal.
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>>29595019
Landscape Anon seems to be different, he doesn't even like being called "Master" by AJ. It's like he wanted to adopt her.
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>>29592288
>A competitor for control of the camp - and one with decidedly fewer morals than she held...
> It is tempting.
Fuck. Is this implying Anon might actually be interested in Haute taking Cadance's place as leader of the camp? I can see the perks... someone who isn't bound by morals would certainly give Anon less grief, particularly in this growing rebellion/museum business Cadance has somewhat fostered. Flurry Heart certainly wouldn't care one way or the other seeing her mother displaced, he has her daughter wrapped around his little finger.

But there's no telling if her cruel methods would be nearly as effective on a group of hundreds as it is a group of twelve. And Cadance has more or less earned her right to lead these ponies. I may be overthinking this but the thought of Anon questioning loyalties for the sake of business is scary/fascinating

>>29592303
Start if off business casual enough, ask him about where he gets his experience in business and particular in regards to slaves. Ask how a small group does him and when he mentions Haute, start digging as to why she's at every meeting and exactly how much faith is placed in her, what other ponies think of her, etc.
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>>29595019
Surely you can think of one or two that are decent people.
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>>29595019
Well, if you can't stop the system, isn't it better to own one? That way you can guarantee the safety of at least one.
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>>29595253
>>29595348
I think Corona's master is about as good as it could realistically get for ponies that find themselves in a world with institutionalized pony slavery.
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>>29595360
>not Berry's owner
Apathy and alcohol can mend a lot of fences.
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>>29594601
Oh please don't obsess over Mocha like you fucks did over Corona
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>>29595019
One of the great things about ShinyAnon; he's not a white knight and fully supports the idea of slavery. He will never let them go.

>>29595232
SlaveventureAnon sees himself as an industrial-scale white knight. He could treat a handful of ponies better than he does, but to give a whole town the best life possible requires a significant profit, and thus some repression and control. It was a popular argument supporting American slavery.

>>29595383
Sorry, too late.
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>>29595695
ShinyAnon loves his ponies. But they're still HIS PONIES. I haven't made up my mind if he's a good guy or not. That whipping he gave Corona went a little bit too far.
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>>29595739
Aye, but wasn't it because he was a bit boggled in the head?
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>>29595790
I'm pretty sure that was the reason. He seems more aggressive since the head injury.
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>>29595916
Yeah, he was going to belt Corona the evening before, and the way his brain was at that time, it would have probably been straight up abusive to her. Good thing Shiny set him straight.

I don't think Anon was in the same state of mind when he spanked Corona the next day, but given what had just just happened the night before, I can understand why Shiny would be pissed. Corona got a very harsh belting, and as far as Shiny knew, Anon could have been in the same frame of mind as the night before.
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Mare is for traveling the western territories.
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>>29594844
>>29594871
I actually made my post with the intent on triggering someone to post that copypasta
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>>29596544
Poner is for ocean going sailing.
I'm tempted to write something related.
Also, check'd.
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>>29595009
>>29595019
I'd hope this gets remembered; Anonymous isn't meant to be an objectively good guy and it shouldn't be forgotten that he is choosing to keep slaves. Cadance and the rebels' belief that still being a slave is still wrong - no matter how much Anonymous listens to them - is meant to be ultimately sympathetic (even if their actions sometimes aren't).
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>>29596853

>>29577879
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Pony is somewhat concerned by the object her master has placed on her back and is trying to hide that fact
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>>29597365
Looks like she's eager to be ridden to me.
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>>29597358
I'm real sorry, I just can't get the fucking words to come out. They never sound the same as they do in my head.

I'm tempted to just post what I have and get it over with so I can move on to the next part of the story already.

>>29586508
Oh boy, that takes me back.
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>>29597365
I want to pet her and kiss her on the muzzle and tell her she's a good horsey
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>Last CYOS section leave us with a question on how to deal with the rising threat to peace
>People are to busy trying to fuck the maidpone to care
kek
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>>29597720
>implying peace matters more than fucking the maidpone
kek
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>>29597720
>Cooper starts talking about Glamour and what kind of pony she is.
>Anon doesn't listen because he's too busy thinking about how cute Mocha is in her little outfit.

How did Anon get Mocha? Did he just buy a child and teach her to be a maid, or was she pre-trained and came in a group of labour ponies?
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>>29597779
Anon is Mocha's 2nd or even 3rd master IIRC, her first few years of slavery (she was taken before she was 10) was likely spent learning maid services before Anon bought her.
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>>29592318
Be blunt. And cross-reference with Posey after the fact.

Haute Glamor is not going to make things more stable. These ponies will, with a "leader" like her, only be more encouraged than ever to stew with thoughts of rebellion.
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>>29597665
Celestia is a very good horsie.
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>>29597890
>The story with 'Celestia' in the fucking name isn't about Celestia.

Why?
When are we getting a story about best princess?
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>>29598058
A Glimmer of Hope just wrapped up, anon.

^:)
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>>29597720
It's partly because this is a really hard question. I got a (You) on the last four segments and I've been drawing a blank here.

Also because Mocha is topcute best daughteru.

>>29596797
There's nothing to be triggered by. She's too pure.

>>29592318
As for the actual story... Play it subtle. Say she carries herself differently than any pony he's seen before, and he wants to know more about the roles she's provided in the past so he can make sure she's where she'll do the most good. Keep an eye on how Posey reacts to what Randal says. A nervous flick of the ear, averting her eyes, a minute grimace, anything like that; so you can tell what she knows from what Randal believes without getting off to a bad start. You still need him to think highly of you. Too important to your business to burn bridges now, and just coming out to a longtime business professional with a great big "your horse is a shit" is a terrible way to start the first day. Even if you leveled with him on everything he still wouldn't believe you. Haute is his Cadence.
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This post legit contains what Corona got, in SWF's own words
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>>29594844
Do you have the other one? Where Mocha wakes Anon up with a blowjob and then Megan walks in?
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>>29598633
Was in the Christmas thread. kek

>Then Anon forces her head down and sits up in bed to hide the bulge in his lap. One hand is casually resting in his lap as he chats with his daughter, but the other is meshed in her mane - forcing her lips to meet his groin, his sack pressing against her chin. Mocha struggles to keep her gag reflex down, but can't - her throat closes around the tip of his shaft as it rakes the back of her throat, only squeezing it tighter.

>Her eyes begin to water, lungs starting to burn but her master refusing to release her while his daughter is still there. Megan, unfortunately, has a party coming up - and wants to tell her father all about and get his ideas about what she should bring.

>Desperately Mocha pins her forehooves against his hips, trying to forces herself off. Anonymous twists his legs around, folding them behind Mocha's head to keep her from pulling up or making a noise - pinning her in place. Struggling at any hope with her rapidly depleting air, Mocha tries to push him out with her tongue - but all she succeeds in doing is stroking his shaft with increasingly desperate strokes. Now both of them are struggling to stay silent.

>The moment the door slams shut, the pitter-patter of small feet fading away, a fierce ripple runs through Anonymous - hot, strong jets of seed erupting straight into her throat, goosebumps rising across his skin as her continued struggles milk him for every drop he has. He collapses flat back into bed, but not until the last surges are done does he actually release his leg-lock and allow her to breathe again.
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>>29597541
You are forgiven.
I know the feel, just barely escaped a psychotic episode myself.
Sometimes it just doesnt work out.

I believe in you.
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>>29598496
This picture dude...
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>>29598830
A rubber duck? That seems pretty lame compared to what Shiny got.
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>>29598876
No, the actual picture. Shinyanon hooked up his old printer and everything.
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>>29598058
Never, for we can not allow her enslavement fetish to be indulged.
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>>29598496
I was thinking that this was a reason why SWF froze on writing further. I know that feel, and it sucks.

Corona's cutie mark is gone. Something that will help get a new one printed/tattooed on her flank, maybe?
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>>29598496
>>29598830
>>29598876
>>29598902
>>29598989
Stop attention whoring already, swf. Nobody cares about your retarded story or your shitty oc anymore.
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>>29599046
Go eat your vegetables fagfag
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>>29598910
>Celestia is very old
>She remembers a time where ponies lived beneath humans as slaves
>After many centuries, she starts to secretly miss the feeling of confident hands on her reigns and a turgid cock inside her
>Suddenly, Anon appears in Equestria
>Her and Anon work out a deal
>From the moment her royal duties for the day are fulfilled and she removes herself from the public eye, she belongs wholly to him, to use however he pleases
>She fears, and secretly hopes for, the day he inevitably decides he wants more and leads her into the streets of Canterlot to truly assert his ownership
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>>29599078
He makes a good point though. Shiny and Corona sucks, is dead, and it's time to move on.
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>>29599186
>Not real HJew
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Corona's gift was her emancipation papers. The end. Story's over, goodbye slave pony thread. If you'll excuse me I have horses to rape.
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>>29599186
I agree, we should all talk about Celestia's Maiden Voyage instead! It's much better than that shitty story!
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>>29599211
Well you're not wrong...
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I just love raping my mares and forcing them to carry my fat ass around.
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>>29599211
>>29599186
Fuck you guys, my story is the best one in the history of the thread. Corona is based on my real life mare slave that I rape and abuse heavily.
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>>29599211
I want to pee on Vinyl's face!
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I'm removing Shiny and Corona from the pastebin and banning swf from the irc.
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>>29599278
It's not really him dude
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>>29599290
Neither is he.

Alright, this needs to stop.

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/GeEg7ELu

>The air was tense as you stepped out onto the deck.
>The assembly of ponies in front of you were nervous, scared, shocked.
>Some still thought they were dreaming, that they were going to wake up at any moment and have to face whatever punishment Jacob thought up for sleeping in.
>You knew it wasn’t a dream though.
>You were stuck with them now, no matter what happened.
>You glance behind you, catching a glimpse of Coffee staring out from behind the doorframe.
>Rainbow approaches you quickly, throwing a hoof over your shoulder.
>”I think this is everyone. You gonna lay down the plan now? You gonna tell us how to get out of this mess?”
>You don’t know how to get out of this mess.
“I’ll do my best.”
>Standing in front of everyone, you feel their eyes weigh on you heavily.
“So, I guess I should introduce myself first. I’m Anonymous.”
>The ponies are silent.
>One of them coughs awkwardly.
>Rainbow bumps your arm.
>”Good start. Real strong there.”
>You continue anyway.
“I assume you all already know Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. They’re…kinda important. I guess.”
>Rainbow leans closer.
>”Real strong.”
>Fuck it.
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I wish I could be a subby little slave to someone.
TOOO BIG LACK OF DOMS, HRRRNNNG
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>>29599300

“Look, I’ll be honest with all of you. Things don’t look good. I wouldn’t get too comfortable. Odds are against us and it’s highly likely you’ll all be sent back to Jacob any day now.”
>A murmur goes through the crowd.
>Shock mostly, but a few flickers of rebellion.
>They’d rather go down swinging than return to Jacob under any circumstances.
“On top of this, there’s no free rides on the Celestia. I’m expecting all of you to pull your own weight. Rainbow or I will find something for you to do, you can trust us on that. There’s no end to labour here. If you thought it would be easy, you were mistaken.”
>Someone taps your leg, and you look down to see Fluttershy.
>”Um, Anon, I…don’t want to cause any trouble but…some of the ponies…”
>You motion for her to hurry up.
>”Sunshine and Moonlight are both…looking forward to being mothers. And Night Glider suffers from sea sickness. Do they have to…”
>Damn.
>You’d have to give the two of them the only beds on the ship, just to be safe.
>Rainbow was probably going to hate sleeping on the floor.
>You correct yourself.
“Unless, obviously, you have a reason for not being able to work. Sea sickness doesn’t count, get over it.”
>You’re not sure how to break this next part to them.
>It would be the clincher, the final flicker of hope you could give them.
“I know by now that you’re all wondering where we’re going. You’ve probably heard from others that there is nowhere to go. That this slavery is global. You might think it’s hopeless and that we should just give up now. Maybe they’re right. But there is a place. A place where ponies are completely free.”
>You smile a mad smile.
“We’re going to Equestria.”
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>>29599186
>>29599207
>>29599238
>>29599257
Why aren't you eating your vegetables fagfag

You need them to grow up big and strong
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>>29599316

>If there was a murmur in the crowd before, it was a full-fledged storm now.
>Just about every opinion you could think of flew through the air.
>Accusations that you were crazy, ponies ecstatic at going home, blind confusion.
>Everything.
>Finally, Dash takes command, embodying the questions that everyone wanted answered.
>”I’m seeing a couple of flaws in this plan right from the bat.”
“Such as?”
>Dash can’t believe it.
>”Oh, how about how travel to Equestria is impossible? You said nobody’s been there for two years, Celestia turned off that beacon thingy. You can’t go to Equestria without it.”
>She pushes against you, leaning into your face.
>”Oh, and how about the fact that even if the beacon was active, we don’t have the right machinery to actually travel to Equestria? What, you think the Celestia is just gonna sail there?”
>She smiles crazily.
>”Oh, and here’s a third one, you can’t travel to Equestria! It’s impossible! Anon, please tell me you’re joking, please tell me there’s an actual plan. I’m trusting you here, I need to know. If I lose either of you, I’ll die!”
>You take a deep breath.
“It’s not impossible. It’s just difficult. When Fluttershy came here from Equestria, she brought a way back as well. The book to Celestia, remember? If we can find Twilight, we can find her book. If we find her book, we can convince Celestia to activate her beacon. If she activates her beacon, we can go home.”

>”Oh, great. So how do we know that this book isn’t sitting on a desk in the fucking FBI or something? If it talks to Celestia, that’s a big deal. And even if we did have the book, and Celestia did turn her beacon on, how do we get to Equestria?”
“Celestia will come pick us up personally or something! I don’t know, okay? Equestria has the technology. They can travel here, pick us up and travel back. We have two national heroes and a dozen worried slaves, someone will help us. They have to.”
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>>29599331

Don't know why there was a gap there.

>Dash just shakes her head, slowly backing away.
>”We don’t even know where Twilight is! Look, Anon, let me look over the maps again, I’m sure I can find somewhere for us to hide. A…a deserted island or something. Does anyone know how to survive on a deserted island, maybe we can do that. There must be another option.”
“Fluttershy knows where Twilight is. It’s not that impossible. It’s just difficult.”
>There’s another bump against your leg.
>”Umm, Anon…I don’t want to be a bother and ruin the plan but um, I…I…”
>The next words rush out of her mouth like she’s afraid to say them.
>They send ice through your chest.
>”Idon’tknowwhereTwilightis!”
>You face her.
“What do you mean you don’t know?”
>”Jacob never told me. Her owner came to us!”
>Rainbow latches onto the words quickly.
>”See? What are we gonna do now, Anon?”
“Let me think.”
>The crowd shuffles around awkwardly.
>Sides have already begun to form between the hopeful and the cynical.
“Does anyone here know where Twilight is?”
>You know it sounds desperate, but you may as well try.
>No one does.
>Except,
>From the crowd, a smart, intelligent voice called out.
>”Actually, I think there is a pony on this ship who would know where Twilight is. If it helps.”
>A fresh wave of hope flows through the ship.
>Who?
>You follow the mare’s eyes, tracking behind you towards the interior.
>You make the connection.
>Turning around, you focus on Coffee’s face poking out from behind the door frame.
>Oh no.
>The wave quickly crashes against the shore.
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>>29599339

>There’s an awkward silence as the herd comes to terms with this.
>Coffee could hear them as well, a twisted smile spreading on her face.
>She doesn’t know if she should feel happy or sad.
>A voice from the crowd finally voices the question.
>”So…the only way for us to go home, is for Coffee to tell us where Twilight is?”
>It starts out quietly, but slowly grows in noise.
>Coffee is laughing.
>Soft, sweet, smooth.
>”Slaves. You’re going to be slaves forever.”
>A couple of ponies creep forward from the corner of your vision, approaching Coffee slowly.
>Like she was an injured animal.
>”You think I’m ever going to tell you? You think any of you breeding whores are ever going to be anything more? Who’s fucked now? We’re all going back home, and you can’t do anything to stop it.”
>One of the ponies takes a deep breath.
>”Coffee, dearie… just think this through a little, okay? This is our chance! We could escape, we could go back to Equestria. Remember Equestria? The princesses, the open sky, the freedom. We could go home.”
>Another pony speaks up.
>”She doesn’t want to go to Equestria, stupid.”
>”It’s worth a try, okay? Have you got a better idea?”
>The mare turns back to Coffee.
>”This is your chance to redeem yourself! To wipe the slate clean! I’m…sorry? About hurting you earlier? How about we just put our pasts behind us, okay? That’s why it’s called the past! If you just tell us where Twilight is, we can forget everything we’ve done to each other. We can be friends.”
>A small tap pulls your attention down to your leg, over to Fluttershy.
>”Anon, Anon, we need to break this up now. We need to break it up before it gets bad. She won’t tell them, and when she doesn’t…”
>”We can move on, Coffee. Everyone here, they’ll forgive you as well. You just need to tell us"
>Coffee shakes her head
>”I don’t need forgiveness. I’m not the one in the wrong. We’re slaves, stop fighting it”
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>>29599300
HES ALIVE
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>>29599339

>The hoof comes flying at her faster than you expect.
>But, then again, most ponies are just waiting for an excuse to attack Coffee.
>It hits her with a dull thud, the stallion staring at her with hate filled eyes.
>”You bitch. If you won’t help us, then as far as I’m concerned, you shouldn’t even be allowed on this ship. This is our chance, and I won’t let a broken nag like you stop us.”
>Coffee tries to run, tries to back up deeper into the ship, but the stallions teeth are already grabbing her mane, and he throws her back into the open.
>Into the crowd.
>Fluttershy leaps into action, bolting away from your side.
>”Coffee!”
>Diving down, she tries to pull Coffee free, before a mare grabs her from below and pins her in place.
>Covering her eyes, of course.
>”Anon! Do something! They’re going to hurt her!”
>You’re not sure what to do.
>You need to know where Twilight is.
>And if this is what’s required…
>And it’s not like Coffee is an important pony.
>She was never going to help on the ship, never going to pull her weight.
>She was a ticking time bomb.
>After all the things she’s no doubt done as well, she probably deserves it.
>It was her fault anyway.
>If she just told you, then she’d be safe.
>She brought it on herself.
>Try as you might, you were struggling to find reasons to stop them.
>And then Dash headbutts your leg, throwing you off balance.
>”What are you waiting for? Stop them! This isn’t right!”
>And suddenly all those rationales washed away.
“Uh, right!”
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>>29599278
Nice meme.
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>>29599359

>Steeping forward, you wade through the group.
>A few ponies try to stop you, but you let them know who’s in charge.
>Reaching down, you wrap a hand around Coffee’s midsection, pulling her into the air.
>She immediately tries to kick you in the stomach.
>”Don’t touch me! I don’t want your help!”
“Shut up.”
>That only causes her to struggle harder.
>You move back through the group, a couple of ponies following behind you.
>They clearly expect you to side with them in making Coffee talk.
>You turn around quickly.
“Stay here.”
>Spinning back around, you pick up Fluttershy and point at Rainbow.
“You two, follow me.”
>You leave the ponies behind as the four of you head towards the bridge.
>Getting out of the sun for a while is nice, but you hardly notice it at the moment.
>The pegasi follow in behind you as you lower Coffee to the ground.
>She sits still.
“Lock the door.”
>Rainbow hurries to it.
>There’s silence as Rainbow settles back at your side.
>The three of you just stare at Coffee.
>Rainbow was never one for wasting time though.
>”So…what now?”
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>>29599371

It's a little rushed, not finished and I didn't bother proofreading it, but it should be fine. It'll be fine. We just needed something to try and end this.
And that's all I have. Not technically true. I have the update AFTER the next update completely written, I just can't find the words for the next one.
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>>29599113
>Celestia has one wild night with Anon.
>He rode her for hours and hours.
>She even jumped a few fences
>Celly goes to sleep as soon as Anon lets her and she ends up sleeping far longer than she intended.
>Has to get ready in a hurry to go to some important horse government meeting.
>Is able to get there just in time.
>She sits on her throne and the other ponies at the meeting look at her, confused.
>"Uh, Princess, what is that you are wearing?"
>It was then that Celestia realized she was still in her riding tack, at a very important meeting.
>Well, shit.
>Time for her to lie her ass off.
>"Erm... It's a... the... hot new fashion?"
>The pone nobility buy it.
>And then buy their own horse tack to be in on the hot new fashion trend.
>Well, shit.
>Time for her to laugh her ass off.
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>>29599385
Big saved Nameless Anon, this thread is filling with shit if you had not appeared
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>>29599451
Been reading a bit of Royal Sketchbook, have we?
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>>29599504
The what now?
And why are we speaking in spoilers?
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>>29577176
>ponies are refugees and willingly take whatever they can get on earth.
That's also in Deal is a Deal.
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>>29597734
>inb4 peace ends up with fucking the maidpone, and it was all about it.

Reminds me of that SAW scene where Strahm couldn't read the fucking whole tape right at the part before Jigsaw said he would win by doing something fancy related to torture porn.
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>>29599528
An art blog a guy runs. Damn good art, and had a post with a similar premise (Celestia gets caught in a saddle and bridle, it takes off among nobles who don't realize it's fetish gear).
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>>29584070
I love this image and always wonder if it's connected to something, or just a slightly surreal thing some random artist did.
I'm not sure which would be better.
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>>29599631
Look how a image from a manga, one replic maybe?
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>>29599631
It's a scene from the Never-Ending Story, when the horse sinks into the swamp of despair.
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>>29585747
I mean, if you ignore the last couple lines, it's a good feels story. And those last couple lines are black and stupid humor, but still kind of funny taken on their own.
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Update almost ready but I want it a bit longer before release.
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>>29595009
>>29595019
>>29595029
(woah, what a sequence)
>>29595348

Yeah. Like Bill from DiaD, who seems to think of Scootaloo as his adopted granddaughter in all but the actual legal sense. There was another one with the viewpoint Anon buying Scootaloo to rescue her, and I believe at the end she calls him Dad.

Lauren (also from DiaD) from the same had to put Trixie to work, because of where she lives, but she still bought her just to save her from a worse fate.

SkittlesAnon bought a slave sort of thoughtlessly, but as soon as he sees how bad her condition is, he immediately switches to thinking of it as rehabilitation.

EiMAnon is kind of similar, he actually literally bought Berry as a kind of drunken accident, and it seems like he'd free her if that would make her situation any better.

>>29595165

CMVAnon, LandscapeAnon, and DiaDAnon are kind of interesting on that front, and in a way that makes for some of the most interesting stories. They're all sort of leery about participating in the slavery business in different ways.
CMVAnon wants to give one a home, but he's still going to demand labor from them because he'll starve otherwise; and he ends up being a criminal abolitionist.
LandscapeAnon is almost like better written skittles 2.0.
DiaDAnon says he voted for the refugee indenture act, but wouldn't have if he'd realized it was really slavery; he runs the farm because it's that or his family loses a shitload of money. He does a lot in his power to help the ponies on the farm.
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>>29599851
But then on the other hand you DO have the more bastard-ish owners.
I wasn't able to comfortably read Shiny and Corona's Anon because of his attitude. He "loves" his ponies, despite some sort of deep seated need to own them.
CYOS Anon is actually better, since he's so much more upfront about being an amoral bastard, in slavery for the money.
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>>29599651
Fuck! I can't believe I didn't remember that.
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>>29598989
They are magical. I wonder if the pigments would come back if they removed the scar tissue. It was a rough job she did to herself. Maybe dermabrasion would be enough.
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>>29599851
I guess the question now is, who is the most white knight?

Kid-Anon? Village-Anon? Or are short stories not counted?
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>>29599331
Called it!

>>29599385
Hyped. Thanks for writing.
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>>29599385
What's to stop Coffee from 'disappearing' in the middle of the night?
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>>29599865
>He "loves" his ponies, despite some sort of deep seated need to own them.
I don't know. He's tried extremely hard to take good care of them and be their friend. Their relationship is constantly changing, and he's already shown a willingness to care for them and protect them. If he truly thought that freedom would be in their best interests some day, I honestly think he would free them, or give them the choice. Let's look at the only two situations where he really drove home the whole "I OWN YOU!" thing.

Situation 1: Corona had just pulled some shady as hell fucking shit to try to trick him. He was pissed off and had every right to be when he agreed to help her out DESPITE the shit she just pulled. The whole "IF I TAKE YOU AWAY FROM THIS SHITTY SITUATION I WILL OWN YOU FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE AND YOU WILL NEVER BE FREE" was probably said out of anger.

Situation 2: Shiny was, quite frankly, behaving like a spoiled fucking bratty child. Forcing him to call him master, reminding him that he's a slave - that's a fucking slap on the wrist after his attitude (which included PISSING ON THE FUCKING CARPET LIKE AN ANIMAL)

He stayed at the vet with Shiny and was worried fucking sick about him.

His first words were "where are my ponies" when he recovered from his head injury.

You can't sit there and fucking tell me he doesn't love them.
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>>29599891
Depends on what we mean by white knight.
How do you measure being a decent human being?

Helping Her Anon, Village-Anon, Bill and Lauren, all of them took in ponies for the specific purpose of saving them from the horrors of slavery. Village-Anon obviously gets points for most lives saved. Lauren sold her body to buy Trixie.

CMVAnon has gone full slavery-breaker, literally committing "robbery" of ponies, probably risking hard time to save them.

Despite all the talk, I don't think we've actually seen any stories where somebody literally buys a pony and offers her a great life and rehabilitation out of hopes she'll sleep with him willingly/enthusiastically.
Though there was a parody with Lyra buying a human for that reason.
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>>29599965
She's stuck on a boat in the middle of the ocean, she can't leave herself. And I imagine that, after this update, all the ponies realize that if something happens to her, they've just lost their only ticket back to Equestria + pissed off Jacob when they inevitably go back to him.

I think she's gonna get her ass beat whenever Anon isn't looking though.
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>>29599989
>any stories where somebody literally buys a pony and offers her a great life and rehabilitation out of hopes she'll sleep with him willingly/enthusiastically.

What is 'Jacob's implication speech?'
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>>29599999
Boy, I ruined that get for someone, I can feel it.
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>>29599970
>You can't sit there and fucking tell me he doesn't love them.
I can, because my definition of love in the meaningful sense includes a moral component that does not allow for enslavement.
But that's a linguistic quibble. You wanna keep using love for what I'd call maybe "affection" or "attachment", I can't exactly call the police on you, you dig?
So it doesn't matter.

I feel like you're pretty wrong-headed on the rest of this, but I also feel I'm not gonna change your opinions, so I'll leave it at that.
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>>29599970
This. He's even said he wants his house and property to be "THEIR" home - not his home and they just happen to live there. He was worried sick when Corona had her first ptsd breakdown and when he took Shiny to the vet. He was willing to spend THOUSANDS OF DOLLARS to make shiny all better. He feeds them well, gives them gifts and constantly shows them affection. When Corona comes to him with her brush, he takes the time to brush out her mane and tail because he knows she likes it. He watches shiny's stupid little tv show with him because it's something he enjoys. He takes an active interest in his ponies' happiness. He's not perfect but nobody is, and that imperfection and the mistakes he makes make him more human, more real.

He would respond quite violently to anyone trying to harm his ponies or take them away. He loves them.
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>>29600048
I still think you're in the minority here in this opinion. I think the majority of the thread would say shinyanon loves his ponies.
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>>29600048
He loves them in the same way people love their pets. It still counts as a form of love.
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>>29600017
Huh. You know, I wonder. I'd almost forgotten that speech. He seemed disgusted at the idea of even touching Coffee. But Fluttershy said he raped her. Was it just because he wanted to hurt her? Or was she saying he got a stallion to fuck her? He did talk about how the stallions had an arrangement where only one would do it, how would he know if he hadn't gotten them to do it.
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>>29600093
She was talking about a stallion, sorry if that wasn't clear. I used Jacob because ultimately it was on his orders, and the stallions owned by Jacob don't want to be raping ponies either.
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>>29600048
He literally gave shining armor the opportunity to leave, and he chose to stay. Corona has also made it clear she prefers behing there with him over freedom, so what's the problem? Both ponies are actively choosing to remain his slaves because they know their master cares deeply for them, and they won't find a better life anywhere else. The work he has them doing is basic fucking shit needed to take care of the home they SHARE. He's not exploiting them for profit, he's just asking them to do their fair share. As far as discipline, both ponies haven't received anything worse than what a lot of parents administer to their children. Or are you going to say anyone that spanks their kids doesn't love them?
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Oh boy, here we go again!
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>>29600119
This. Corona also seems to enjoy her work. So does Shiny.
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>>29600130
Gracie has Shiny wrapped around her little finger and I honestly think that's had a dramatic effect on his relationship with anon as well.
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>>29600075
>>29600084
N-NO
SHINYANON HATES HIS PONIES
HATES THEM
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>>29600134
Gracie's interactions with shiny and Corona are pretty much my favorite thing ever to come out of these threads. They adore each other and it's the cutest fucking thing.
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>>29600163
Corona's best good girl moment was when she volunteered to give her a pony ride. I can't wait to see how her first shiny ride goes.
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>>29599999
Dude. DUDE.
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>>29600163
GRACIE loves Shiny and Corona. Their master doesn't.
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>>29600307
Gracie isn't the one that rescued them (and yes what he did counts as rescuing them). He had NO REASON to take in Corona other than out of the goodness of his heart. He could have EASILY passed Shiny up for a healthy pony he could have put to work right away. But he didn't. He saw a pony suffering and on the verge of death and simply COULDN'T leave him there to die. He's given them both a damn good life and provided for them far better than he's obligated to. Because he's demonstrated repeatedly that he CARES about them both very much, in SO MANY WAYS. Coronas spanking is the worst thing he's done to either of them and he fucking hated every second of it, but in a lot of ways it was for her own good. He held her close and comforted her afterward, and said EXACTLY what she needed to hear - that she was forgiven. He straight up told Shiny that he loves him.

He doesn't have a wife or children. Those ponies are his family, slaves in title only. THERE'S NOTHING STOPPING EITHER OF THEM FROM LEAVING. The point is they don't WANT to leave.

I still don't see how anyone can so adamently assert that love isn't part of the equation in any way. His actions speak for themselves.
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>>29600377
Anon would be absolutely devastated if something happened to either of them. I don't think anyone can argue that they're at least treated fairly - and that what he asks for from them is perfectly reasonable for what he provides in return.
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>>29600113
Good to know. Thanks.

>>29600125
Why do we take the bait, when we know it is sharp?
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>>29600391
This. Even putting shiny to work he's been good to him. Shiny can be handled a lot more roughly, being a stallion. I think a lot of what we saw between them in the last part of the story was a little manly bonding. Corona was probably exaggerating the sound of the reins snapping on shiny's rump being whiplike, and the harshness of anons tone when driving him - remember this was all told from her perspective, not shiny or anon's.

He's giving shiny back his fucking magic. There's no reason for him to do that other than love. Shiny could easily kill him with it and he knows that. He's showing an incredible amount of trust in him.
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>>29600413
>He's giving shiny back his fucking magic
The way shiny climbed onto his lap like a happy puppy after anon gave him his gift was pretty fucking cute. It was fun watching shiny develop a strong sense of loyalty to his master over time. And intensely gratifying to see him rewarded for it like that.

SHINY A GOOD BOY! A GOOD BOY!
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>>29599615
Oh, yeah, this is the thing, right?
And on a tangentially related topic; why come there are no Saddle Arabian slaves?
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>>29599999
Wew
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>>29599385
Their plan is not even hanging by a string. It hanging by the shadow of a string. It's hopeless. No reason to think anything will ever go right, because it won't.

Ya got to give us something. Otherwise why continue a trudge towards certain failure?
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>>29584341
No, not for long.
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>>29600431
Shiny a traitor to all ponykind.
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>>29600555
Nice trips.

Most likely because we basically know nothing more than that they exist, have a nation, and don't have cutie marks. It's not even like the griffons, where we could speculate on some stuff based on their body/nature.
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>>29601651
Not sure if big poner or tiny saddle.
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>>29602038
Rainbow Dash craves, deep down, to be submissive to a nice, strong and capable stallion/man. She doesn't want to appear weak in front of others, but behind closed doors and with someone she trusts, she would be a total snuggle fiend and the little spoon.
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29553188
>>PiE takes 9 and a half days to breach 200 posts
>>SPG takes one day and 23 hours to breach 200 posts
>Does strife and conflict make for better fiction?

Not necessarily better. Emotionally compelling? The fact that there are two CYOAs going right now helps too.

RGRE breaches 200 posts in under a day. Wish fulfillment is also compelling.

>>29553222
For trips I searched it out. I'll note I haven't read it, can't vouch for quality. Shorter than I thought.
http://pastebin.com/cGtPYP25
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>>29603133
Damn I made that post a while back.

Yeah I find these stories strangely very interesting, a lot more satisfying than what I found in PiE.
>Emotionally compelling
Definitely. Some writers can get the pain of it across quite well.
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We have to treat our slaves with dignity and respect. We have to only spank them when they've been very naughty.
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>>Go now, but try to use one of your potions on Gloria.
Probably going to do a few quick ones tonight, due to the lack of green.
>Despite the cuts covering her body, she looks oddly serene.
>You imagine you can't say the same of yourself.
>You have a lot of questions, but you need to get out of here.
>Not like you can ask her right now, anyway.
>Pulling a potion from your pack, you lift Gloria slightly.
>You place the bottle against her lips and slowly pour the potion into her mouth.
>Somehow doesn't choke, her wounds starting to glow.
>You continue until the bottle is empty and the glowing begins to fade, placing the bottle back in your bag.
>You've only got one potion left and those things are not cheap.
>Maybe Star would be willing to donate some blood?
>Potions are pretty much just diluted unicorn blood in water.
>You could probably take a small amount safely and make a few potions in case your healers are ever out of commission.
>Sort of like now.
>Returning to the situation before you, you gently lift Gloria in a bridal carry.
>You walk through the storm, this time with your face only protected by your hood.
>The sticks, stones, and other unknown objects fly past you, but never make contact.
>This time, you feel the wind even less than before.
>Glancing down at Gloria, you figure it must be the protection afforded by being the caster as opposed to being someone who wasn't targeted.
>Without the constant barrage of assorted debris, you make your way through the storm significantly faster.
>When you reach the spot in which you left Star, the spell has run its course.
>You lay Gloria down, glancing momentarily at the aftermath of her magic.
>A large swath of forest is missing from where you last made camp, smaller trees and plants litter the practically bare land.
>The dead man still lingers at the back of your mind.
>He's among that debris as well, but you don't even know his name.
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>>29603894

>He didn't receive a proper-
>You hear a rustling from the bushes and you take a battle-ready stance.
"Who's there? I don't want to hurt anyone, just show yourself."
>Star slowly edges her way out of a bush.
"Thank the Gods. Are you okay Star?"
>Sitting down next to you, she starts writing in the dirt.
>"I couldn't find you when I doubled back, so I occupied myself with finding some firewood."
>When she finishes writing, she tilts a saddlebag filled with dry branches of various sizes.
>You pull some of them out, starting to build a base for the fire.
>You were far enough from town that you felt safe and you hadn't seen Asher since Gloria first cast Aeroga, about an hour ago.
>Star begins to help out and you both seem to be deep in thought.
>Firstly, the duration of Gloria's Aeroga.
>Sure, it knocked her out, but that was still an insanely long time.
>Secondly, what happened in the eye of the storm.
>Yeah, you killed him to protect Star, Gloria, and yourself.
>But should you go back and give him a proper burial?

>Yes. Tell Star what happened and head back to bury him
>No. He tried to kill you and you can't risk heading back there.
>No, but try to talk about what happened with Star.
>Yes. Tell Star you need to do something and leave.
>Yes, but wait for Star to remove her silence first.
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>>29603903
Let's not go back. We can't bury everyone we kill and Star needs to have her silence cured
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>>29603903
>>No, but try to talk about what happened with Star.

Fuck em, they violated the NAP.
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would you enslave an adorable little fillyscout?
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>>29603903
>No, but try to talk about what happened with Star.

after you cure the silence
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>>29604140
Yes. I would harshly break her with brutal bellyrubs and nonstop ear scritchies. Then, when she can't take it any more I'll tuck her into bed with a teddy bear and read her a bedtime story until she falls asleep.
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>>29604171
>Because of a previous owner. Little pony sobs and cowers in fear every time you come near, and is absolutely petrified with terror if you ever touch her.

Now what nigga?
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>>29603903
>>No, but try to talk about what happened with Star.
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>>29604317
take her back to the filly store and exchange her for a happy filly
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>>29604317
I'll use the old flooding technique to get her over her fear.

I'll hold her and gently pet and reassure her while she is terrified at my contact. She will become too emotionally and physically exhausted to continue being scared. Once she is calm and comfortable I'll leave. Her brain will start to assimilate my presence and contact with the calm feeling since it was the last thing she experienced with me in the room. Doing this daily to multiple times a day and she'll stop being afraid.
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>>29604523
filly might lose control of her bowels and bladder all over you in the process of struggling, anon

are you prepared for that?
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>>29604527
Wouldn't be the first time an animal pissed on me
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>>29604317
I put her in the slave box until she's more afraid of that than contact with me.
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>>29604559
what a cute lil tavi pet
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>>29604317
70 lashes and a week in the slave box.
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>>29604096
>they violated the NAP.
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>>29603903
>Yes, but wait for Star to remove her silence first.

I think having a dead body laying around could cause anyone looking for us to track us in a matter of moments. This could actually help prevent that, at least for a time.
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>>29604559
I want to torture Octavia until she forgets that she's a pony and then train her to be a dog instead!
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>>29604559
How could anyone ever hurt something this goddamn adorable?
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>>29603903


>>No, but try to talk about what happened with Star.

>Thinking it over, you realize you can't afford to bury him, for a variety of reasons.
>For one, it's dangerous heading back towards Falsecrest.
>Asher might not be around, but it doesn't mean that a group of hunters weren't just as dangerous.
>Breaking away from your thoughts for a moment, you set up a stand to use with the water skin.
>For another, you should really cure Star's silence.
>Not being able to speak definitely sucks and she's waited long enough.
>You set up another water skin, having lost the other in the storm.
>Star stares at you as the Echo Herb is placed inside once again.
>For the mental baggage, talking to Star or Gloria would probably be the best idea.
>Lighting the fire, you keep an eye out for unwanted visitors.
>Sure, you were screwed if Asher showed up.
>It didn't mean that you wouldn't want to know he's coming before he walks right up to you.
>Glancing at Gloria, she looks healthy, but there's no way she's waking up any time soon.
>She's dead weight for now, but at least she's pretty light.
>You aren't exactly the strongest person around, but you can definitely carry her for a while.
>She's gotta weigh less than a hundred pounds and she can't be taller than 5' 6".
>Sooner than you expected, Star is tapping on your shoulder and pointing at the boiling water.
"Okay, Okay"
>Getting up, you grab the water skin by its strings, in order to avoid burning yourself or dropping it.
>You channel some mana into your hands, coating them in a thin layer of ice.
>Star watches from less than a foot away, curiosity and impatience showing on her face.
>You place your cold hand against the water skin, using your mana to cool it to a reasonable temperature.
>You hold the warm tea-filled skin out to Star, a smile on both of your faces.
"Drink up."
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>>29604859

>She holds the string up with one hoof, using the other to tilt the the skin itself so that she can drink it.
>She brings the opening to her muzzle and chugs all of the tea in one go.
>You gently take the water skin as she wipes her muzzle with a hoof.
>Star massages her neck for a second, almost as if she were warming up to sing.
>In a way she sort of is.
>"D-did it work?"
>Her voice doesn't sound the way you'd imagined it.
>It's a little higher-pitched than you imagined, but it fits her well.
"Sounds like-"
>Your response is cut off by what you assume the pony equivalent of a hug is.
>Her hooves on your shoulder and the side of her face pressed against yours.
>It seems more like she's tackling you, but you don't want to ruin the moment.
>After probably half a minute, she pushes off your shoulders and back into a sitting position.
>"T-thanks, A-anon."
>She glances at the ground for a second, before her horn is suddenly encased in a purple glow.
>"My v-voice is a l-little rusty, but I j-just need to check my magic."
>You watch the little water skin stand disassemble itself and reassemble itself, encased in a purple glow the whole time.
"Damn. That's some pretty impressive control you have over your mana, Star."
>She blushes slightly and then disappears in a flash of purple light.
>The same light goes off behind, causing you to spin around looking for the source.
>You're greeted by Star's chuckling visage.
>"Y-yeah. Magic was my s-special talent, after all."
>Scratching at your scalp, you realize her mana never changed color.
"So, your mana never changes color?"
>At this, she takes in an expression of annoyance.
>"All unicorns only h-have one color that their mana shows up as, unless you're performing d-dark magic. I haven't seen anyp0ny have it change, but all y-you humans seem to have a mana color b-based on what spell you're casting."
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>>29604870
>At this, she takes in an expression of annoyance.
>"All unicorns only h-have one color that their mana shows up as, unless you're performing d-dark magic. I haven't seen anyp0ny have it change, but all y-you humans seem to have a mana color b-based on what spell you're casting."
>Looks like you might have some teaching to do.
"Well, we form mana in specific ways that causes it to reflect light differently, but that's not important right now."
>She's floating a quill and a piece of some sort of parchment not far from her, already taking notes
>...You have no idea where she got those.
>"L-learning is always important, Anon!"
>You scratch at the nape of your neck.
"Well, the thing is that Gloria wasn't alone when I found her..."
>The parchment quickly rolls up, the quill slipping inside.
>"W-what do you mean? Did you have to h-hurt someone?"
>You avoid Star's eyes for a moment, ashamed of what you had done.
"Someone was going to kill Gloria and I stopped them the only way I could."
>Star moves to meet your eyes.
>"And you r-really think it was the only way?"
>You think about it for a moment, rubbing at your eyes with your hands.
"Yes. If I didn't kill him, Gloria and I would have both died."
>Star sighs and closes her eyes.
>"The taking of another l-life is wrong and I can't c-condone that, but..."
>She places a hoof on your shoulder.
>"You did what you h-had to in order to keep us all alive. It was w-wrong, but you had to."
>You both remain silent for a minute, before she removes her hoof.
>"Anon, you're a good p-person and that's w-why we need to t-talk about something."
>You try to look at Star, but this time she refuses to meet your eyes
"Star, I didn't want to kill him. I just needed to-"
>She waves a hoof, cutting you off.
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>>29604879

>"N-n-no. I know you didn't w-want to, but this is something else."
>Before you can even guess at what she's talking about, she continues.
>"I know you t-told Gloria that y-you would help me leave. W-was that an act for h-her? Before, y-you never talked about that..."
>It is true, you hadn't thought about freeing her before you met Gloria.
>But with Gloria unconscious and Star so accepting, you need to make a decision

>>I just need you to stay with me until I have enough money to buy a pack horse, then I'll help you leave. I might not be able to make ends meet without some help.
>>Of course. I just want to help you get back to your friends.
>>I'm sorry, but it's just not possible for you to get back. You know I don't abuse you, but you won't be leaving.
>>I bought you and I need your help. I'm not trying to be mean, just telling you how it is.
>>Write in

PB: http://pastebin.com/u/ReebAnon
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>>29604903
Part of me wants to threaten her with the ring just to get a properly obedient Twilight, but since that's horribly impractical...

Let's be realistic here: We bought her because we need the help, and it was costly. But while we would really appreciate it if Star stayed with us until we made up the cost of buying her and got enough for another pack animal, we can't keep her here indefinitely.

I mean, obvious moral issues of keeping a thinking being as a slave aside, it's a practical thing: We couldn't stop her from running away without the ring, and with it she's little different than a horse anyhow - except that she attracts people trying to shank us and steal her, ring or not. Better to not have her brain-dead and/or hating our guts.

It's obvious in every way that she will be able to go.
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>>29595232
>>29592658
>>29598385

"Here, would you like a drink? It's been a long day, and I'm sure you'd like a chance to relax."
> "I would deeply appreciate it, yes."
"Whiskey? Bourbon?"
> "Scotch, if you have?"
"Of course, of course."
> He has a hand out waiting when you bring the glass, and belatedly you realize remember he would not be able to see you offering it to him.
> "No servants in here, I take it? If you brought it yourself."
"You've excellent hearing."
> Though you'd poured your own glass as well, you did not opt to sip from it.
> Blurring your mind wasn't something you wanted to do right now.
"Though, I imagine working a meeting long day like this isn't something you're entirely unfamiliar with."
> "Not one bit."
> Chuckling, Randall 'looks' down towards the pony at his side.
> "Posey. Clear distance?"
> "Four steps, any direction."
> Promptly taking advantage of it, Randall walks in a slow circle a few times; though Posey is left behind, she keeps a very careful eye on his progress.
> "I hope you don't mind if I stretch my legs. No matter how many long days I take, my legs always bother me by the end of things."
"No, no. I quite understand. You've been doing this a long time, after all."
> "Yes. My father as well, actually; he taught me how to manage even before I got into college."
"You must've been a holy terror in group projects."
> "They hated me. The blind kid being better at the work than all of them. Hid things from me, didn't let me in on their meetings, passed notes around I couldn't see. But results were results - they figured that out fast enough."
> Again Randall runs a hand through his silvery hair, and it occurs to you that he might be fishing for your own thoughts.
> After all, in this situation he is the new person on your staff - and you the vastly more wealthy one.
"Well, I think your results definitely speak for themselves. You've got quite the positive record."
> "Only through hard work."
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>>29604949

"Hard work is exactly what we are doing here."
> "And on a considerable scale. I'll admit I've never approached the task of managing an equestrian labor population of this size."
"It seems we both have our areas of experience."
> "Yes; my own 'herd' is rather smaller."
> Mentally you offer a small breath of relief; he seemed to be turning the conversation towards a direction you favored without any need for you to steer it yourself.
"Oh? More than just the two you've brought here?"
> "Thirteen. A necessity, honestly; I've learned to adapt to my blindness, but it is still a trouble at times. Computers helped a lot; when we ordered our first PCs back in the nineties it was like a miracle."
> You chuckle, slipping down into a seat.
> Randall, for his part, continues to stretch his legs by circling slowly.
"But nothing like the ponies."
> "No, nothing like them. They're an absolutely delightful combination of personal and professional assistant that've been very unimaginably helpful."
"Ah, personal as in..."
> "As in my dear Posey here, yes."
> The pony in question seems to take that as encouragement to step over and brush her cheek against Randall's thigh.
> He responds with a loving hand on the mare's cheek that she presses herself into - affection that seems to be affectionate.
> "She's been quite the delightful thing, yes. Exactly what I needed... I used to have guide dogs, you know. Nothing like her - nothing like her at all."
"And the others...?"
> "Mostly with the business. Numbers crunching, a bit of analysis, one as a secretary, you know... a couple of them are there to just look after me."
"You sound like you've had a lot of success with them."
> "Well..."
> 'Looking' down towards Posey, Randall cracks a small smile.
> "...I won't lie. They've been a great help to me. Not just in business, and not even just in keeping me up and going around the house..."
> "Master, may I...?"
> His finger and thumb rubbing at one of Posey's ears, Randall nods.
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>>29604955

> "Of course, Posey."
> "Sir, Master Randall has been very kind to us all. He's done everything he can to make sure we are comfortable. And he - he makes me feel like we're... important. Not just... slave, but, um..."
> "Little Posey here's become very attached to me."
> The mare in question flushes, and you're quite certain by now that her feelings for him are absolutely genuine.
> "Though she's hardly the only one. It's why I responded to your invitation, honestly. Word about your... method of doing things has been going around, so I could hardly resist."
"Ah?"
> "Yes, of course - of realizing they're more than simple machines, more than dumb animals that have to be whipped back and forth constantly-"
> Shuddering softly at the term 'whip', Posey presses in against her owner.
> "-and have ration, emotions - that they can be trusted, not just to work but to think and act on their own with a bit of kindness."
"Well, I suppose I have my own very special pony who's been a tremendous help in that respect."
> "The alicorn?"
> Caution layers his voice.
"Mmm."
> "I... see."
"You disagree?"
> You're careful to not let it sound like you're arguing, but rather fishing for an opinion.
> "I can't be certain. I wouldn't trust her so readily - they were the rulers, after all. We've all heard how resistant the fourth one, Twilight, is. But then, I've been told of how you had her... presented at the dinner, what she wore."
> Posey looks reasonably unhappy at that particular memory, you notice.
> What thoughts did she have about your treatment of the alicorn...?
"Oh, Cadance's made no secret of her opinions."
> He pauses, 'looking' in your direction with surprise clearly written across her face.
> "And she still works for you?"
"Well, in the end I think she made it clear that she doesn't want to be a slave. But she's also made it clear she understands I give every pony here a better life. Her daughter included."
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>>29604961

> "You shouldn't rely on holding Flurry Heart hostage. She may find a way to subvert you - go around your back."
"I don't think so. She tried, once. It got ponies killed."
> "The incident she spoke about."
"Yes. We've been open with each other since then. About both our goals and the realities of our situations. Though - I can't help but notice that you seem to have a trusted four-legged co-worker yourself."
> "Haute Glamour? Yes, another of my lucky finds. A truly magnificent mind at work there."
"What else does she do for you? Besides aide-de-camp for meetings; I'm want to make sure she's able to work at her best if she's to be working in the camp."
> "Everything, honestly. She's a manager for the household as well in my business - I've put her in charge of keeping matters in line. Her talent with words is truly exceptional. Things have been going so much more smoothly since then."
> But while Randall's voice was laden with glowing admiration, you couldn't help but notice Posey's unspoken body language.
> She'd shifted back, tail twitching nervously and almost seeming to huddle defensively at her owner's side where a moment ago she had only been affectionate.
"Ah. So you bring her to meetings because she's a central part of everything you do."
> "Yes, exactly. Always eager to please, she is - I didn't have any trouble with her whatsoever."
"Aren't you worried about what might happen with your other ponies while she's away?"
> "No, no. Not at all; she's organized them into quite the efficient system."
"Impressive. That kind of skill - there's always a need for more of it, especially with the kind of expansion we're planning now, even after our business officially concludes..."
> Grinning, Randall shakes his head.
> "Not for sale, I'm afraid. Much, much to valuable to me."
"Ah, well. I understand; it was worth the request."
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>>29604971

> So, too, do you understand the flicker of expectation that'd seemed to flow across Posey's face at the thought of Haute Glamour being sold off.
"Posey, you must be very fond of her as well - with how she seems to keep everything on-track and running smoothly."
> "Miss Glamour is a very fine pony, and we're all very thankful for what she's brought to the house. We'd all be in a lot of trouble without her."
> Everything about the line is spoken as an absolute truth, a total truth with no certainty of being misinterpreted or understood as anything less than real.
> Even the pony's expression speaks of a love
> Which is exactly why you don't trust it.
> Nothing about it matches how she'd acted a moment ago.
> This is a falsehood spoken so often and with such emotion that Posey's actually managed to convince herself it is true.
> ...either that, or learned to lie so well that even Randall or Haute Glamour could not find fault in it.

Where do we proceed from here?
> Ask either one anything further (suggestions open)
> Go down immediately to check on Haute Glamour and Mocha Cream
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>>29604903
>>Write in
"We still have no idea how to get you back to Horsequestria. How about, you help me make enough money to buy a packhorse and along the way we find out how to help you get back. For what it's worth I'm low on cash and I'm sorry I didn't think to ask that stuff before Gloria showed up."
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>>29604955
>>29604961
>Posey

It is good to know that Mocha is not the only one who shares a genuine affection for his human, and that despite what seemed at first Randall is not as naive as we thought
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>>29604977
Shit, we should have planted some kind of bug under Mocha's uniform before letting her take care of Haute so we would have hard evidence of foul play.

I doubt this man would believe Anon if he were to admit outright what Cadance said. And I don't think Posey would snitch out of fear.

Tell him you need to check up on something and that you'll keep in touch on any progress. Maybe give Posey a hard knowing look just to spook her for keks.
> Go down immediately to check on Haute Glamour and Mocha Cream.
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>>29604971
Haute must be very good at what she does if can fool a business expert
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>>29604977
I think going down to check on Haute and Mocha would be best to do for now. Afterwards, if there is ANY way of isolating Posey and asking her more questions, do that. And if Anon cannot do that, then maybe he could get Cadance or someone else to do it instead and then relay the information back to him.
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>>29605069
>A scene with anon running wires and a mic through her uniform with his hands while she's blushing hard and fidgeting in place at master's touch.
Can we do this afterwards?
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>>29604903
>>I just need you to stay with me until I have enough money to buy a pack horse, then I'll help you leave. I might not be able to make ends meet without some help.

This. If we say that she can't leave, well... we just saw how good she is with magic.

But Twilight won't just leave you like that. She is extremely grateful toward you, and I'm sure if you explained your situation she would want to help in any way she could.
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>>29605122
Now that's an idea. Mocha would probably be in heaven.
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>>29604977

>> Ask either one anything further

Mention you about the other partners and guests of the party, who thinks about them and what would be their recommendation

I repeat that Anon must check Mocha after the meeting, perhaps based on the reactions and words of Posey and being a little paranoid make sure that Glamor has not used magic in her for control it in some way, maybe that's the way Which unicorn has achieved so much power between humans and ponies, so you should call Candance and share opinions and ask for an expert in such spells, not only for safety but also thinking about the well-being of Mocha

I still think that Candance should use a love spell and make Haute go into heat with the coarser, dirty and antisocial from the Stallions

Gob Job CYOS

>>29605069
>Shit, we should have planted some kind of bug under Mocha's uniform before letting her take care of Haute so we would have hard evidence of foul play.

Hey! You stole my idea!
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>>29604171
You heartless monster.

>>29604903
Write in: We're nearly broke, Gloria might be hurt, Asher is still out there and probably very unhappy, the nearest town wants to butcher Star for parts, and we have no idea how to send her back to Equestria. We'll help her get back but that's a long-term goal for when we have fewer short-term problems. I guess that means we head back up north? Rest at your house and see what it'd take to buy a mirror in the northern kingdoms?

>>29604977
Haute and Mocha. Posey is clearly unwilling to speak against Haute in Randal's presence, and likely doesn't trust you either. See if Cadence is here to chat with Posey, or maybe Mocha but she's too innocent and inexperienced to get the information we need. Anon, Haute, and Randal can talk about some management strategies or whatever to get them separated. Though, it's probably nearing the end of the day. We might be at our time limit.
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>>29604977
be more open, bring up what Anon know heard but try convenience Posey to speak up instead of trying to force Randall to accept
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>>29604977
Alright, I think we've learned all we need from these two for now. Randall's 2I/C pony cannot be trusted, but we can't undermine her openly in the interest of preserving the partnership
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It's been over 2 months since Shiny and Corona went on hiatus... he's... he's not coming back, is he?
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>>29606675
No he fucking hates us why would he?
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>>29606882
Nonfactual.
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>>29606883
how is it non-factual he said it in the irc
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>>29607027
No he didn't. Go eat your veggies fagfag.
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>>29607027
Pics or it didn't happen.
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>>29604903
Friendship is fine, but keep this business and make a deal with her. As an opening position, ask her to be your slave until she pays off her purchase price. This does not include regular slave upkeep like food and shelter, but does (for instance) include selling her valuable blood a unit at a time. After that she can part ways, or perhaps but your own services to help get her home.
> btw, what sort of moron makes a regular industry of killing golden geese, when they could keep non-fatally bleeding them forever?
> also: great story!
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>>29607921
Samefag here: on second thought the opening position is all the blood in her veins now, but giving her more time (a year or two?) to pay up. A much better deal than the likes of Asher are offering, and a decent profit for us too. If she seriously balks at this then we can come back with the purchase price thing. In any case, having a deal in place would be nice before Gloria wakes up and proposes her offer: 'nothing', and we just eat our loss because slavery is wrong in principle.
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>>29607921
>golden geese
But geese don't have deadly magical powers
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I really like the premise of a young filly slave being bought by a Master and, because of her lack of proximity to stallions, ends up being sexually attracted to him instead.

Mocha fits that, but a full dedicated story for someone would be crazy awesome.
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>>29608156

>Mocha
>filly

Anon, I've got some bad news...
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>>29608276
She's pretty young, and she was bought when she was much younger. She likely went through/is still going through puberty as she's his house slave.
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>>29608310
And samefag here, I didn't mean a young filly being sexually attracted WHILE she's a filly, but while she's going through her first estrus/puberty cycles. She's attracted to him because of how long she's been with him(since she was a filly), how kindly he's treated her, and how he's the only real male figure in her life.
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>recently started lurking, been reading greens all afternoon
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>>29610073
Which ones nigga
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>>29610122
Time to Fly and Geologic Assistant, currently in Buying a Bookhorse
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>>29610240
Good choices

Greens in SPG are good as fuck
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>>29610316
We have quite a few, too
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>>29610524
We're one of the most active threads on /mlp/, for sure.
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>>29610073
>>29610240
avoid skittles and shiny and corona like the plague
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>>29610559
What did we tell you about eating your vegetables fagfag
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>>29610073
>>29610559
I like Skittles. I mean, it's not very well written, but it's still very affecting. And it's not very long either. Unless you're telling him to not read it to spare himself the heartache of
>tfw Skittles will never get her walkies

>>29610316
Some of the best across /mlp/ to be sure.
Deal is a Deal and Celestia's Maiden Voyage both really sucked me in. Basically why I started checking this thread regularly.
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>>29610863
I dunno, Maiden Voyage never really stuck out to me. I read the first couple of posts and really got the feeling that it was going to rely on the 'it's slavery, but on a boat' gimmick without anything deeper.
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>>29607921
Well, this: >>29608092 and the fact that other parts of the unicorn carry high value. Asher used blood as an example because it's the most common and widely used part of the unicorn. I'd tell you what else you can do with unicorn parts, but I wouldn't want to give anything away.
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Would you eat your slave mare out if she was a super good girl?
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>>29611020
> Would you eat your slave mare
Take your filthy vore fetish and go get fu-
>mare out
Oh.

Yes.
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>>29611020
No, being a super good girl just means that she doesn't have to sleep in the slave box tonight.
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Like a boomerang, I return. Continuing from: http://pastebin.com/mdK5TNdG
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>Your hands fly to the front of Keith’s shirt, seizing him.
“You get into bondage all of a sudden, dirtbag?”
>”What? No, I’m just spanking her. That’s how you make them learn.”
“Says who?! They can fucking speak, dickhead, and I bet money she’s smarter than you are!”
>”Anyone would tell you the same! Check online! You beat them a little, they stay obedient. What’s your problem?"
“You piece of-“
>”Back off-!“
“Like hell I will!”
>You forcefully shove him out of the way.
>You fumble with the belts holding Ditzy’s wings and legs while she stammers.
>Her words are lost on you as Keith makes his disapproval at your trespass known.
>His arm hooks around your neck and hauls you backwards, trapping you in a headlock.
>”Did you finally go full retard, Anon?!”
>You manage only a strangled snarl in response, jabbing an elbow into his guts.
>He grunts, but his hold doesn’t loosen, and things start to look bad for your little intervention attempt.
>You roll and thrash, even managing to get on all fours at one point, but Keith just shouts abuse and keeps choking you.
>Your vision begins to swim.
>Shit, come on, not to this asshole of all people!
>Craning your neck, you clack your teeth trying to bite into his arm.
>No dice.
>Your arms and legs buckle, and you wonder whether he’d fall for a tap out when somebody whistles.
>You and Keith both look up.
>An orange hoof crashes into his skull, just barely missing your own.
>Keith doesn’t even cry out, falling off you limp as a rag doll.
>You pull deep, greedy breaths of air into your burning lungs.
>Did air always taste this good?
>”Y’alright there, Anonymous?”
“I *wheeze* told you to *cough* stay put.”
>She rolls her eyes.
>”Yer welcome. Who’d I just- Celestia’s mane! Ditzy Doo?”
>Leaving you to your breathing, your guest hurries over to the wriggling grey pegasus.
>”A-Applejack? Is it really you?”
>”It’s good to see ya, Ditzy. Lemme get them belts.”
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>>29611297
>Someway, somehow, her hooves undo the buckles and Ditzy rises to her hooves.
>She hugs Applejack quickly, then rushes to you.
>”Are you okay?”
>Applejack chuckles as she watches you rise to your feet.
>"He’s fine. ‘Cept for his pride.”
>You shoot her a glower before focusing on Ditzy.
“Are /you/ okay? I heard the shouts, and I came to help.”
>”S-Sir, I appreciate it, I really do, but…”
>She looks warily at Keith’s prone form, speaking quietly.
>”That was a really dumb thing to do.”
>You feel a twinge of hurt in your chest, but you know she’s right.
>You’ll have a hell of a time wriggling your way out of this one, Anon.
>Even if he doesn’t remember exactly what happened, there’ll still be trouble when he awakes.
“I’ll figure it out. Go upstairs with Applejack. I’ll… clean up a bit.”
>Ditzy hesitates, unsure whether she should leave you alone, but Applejack speaks.
>”Head on up, Ditzy. Applebloom’s up there, and she’ll be happy to see ya. I’ll make sure he don’t do nothing stupid."
>You grumble, and Applejack grins cheekily as Ditzy relents.
>”O-Okay…”
>She turns to leave, and now you notice the bruises on her torso.
>Your teeth grind.
>As the door shuts behind her, orange horse turns to you.
>”What exactly’re you gonna do?”
“Well… Not sure. If he remembers anything, I'm fucked.”
>”I got ‘im pretty good. Odds are he won’t.”
“That’s not good enough. Not with this. If he has even the slightest suspicion… Argh.”
>You pace the room, wracking your brains.
>You need Keith to think something else happened tonight.
>He can’t think you or an unknown pony were involved.
>How do you achieve this?
>You absently lean against his refrigerator while inklings of an idea slowly come to you.
>You have his entire apartment to work with.
>You’ll frame him for his own assault.
>You can’t help but chuckle at the thought, and Applejack quirks an eyebrow.
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>>29611300
“I think I know what to do. Help me out.”

>Applejack cackles when you explain your plan.
>You have to admit, it’s not your best.
>But it’s all you’ve got, and she didn’t have a better one.
>You open Keith’s fridge, and extract the rack of beer you knew would be in there.
>If there was one thing you two had in common, it was a propensity for drinking.
>At least you had the dignity to not drink PBR of all things.
>You crack one open and promptly pour it down the sink.
>”Ain’t that a waste? Why don’t we drink some?”
“Try it and you’ll understand.”
>You open a second and offer it to her.
>She takes the can in her hoof, sniffing it before sipping.
>”Eugh. That’s some cut-rate beer, right there.”
“Told you. It’s cheap, but that’s all that’s good about it.”
>Between the two of you, you empty a dozen cans down the drain.
>Time for phase two.
>You begin chucking them around the room, making sure it looks like someone had a hell of a night.
>You knock some stuff over and make make a mess here and there.
>Purely for the sake of creating the illusion, of course.
>No malicious intent here.
>Now for the cherry on top.
>You heft Keith’s limp body towards his little table, letting him fall down beside it.
>You put one of the empties beneath your shoe, stepping lightly.
>It caves on one side and flattens on the other, sliding along the floor.
>With great care, you place it a measured pace from Keith’s foot.
>You stand back to survey your crime scene.
>Got smashed, slipped on a can, hit the table with his thick skull, and went out like a light.
>No angry neighbors or strange miniature horses involved.
>You’re an artist, Anon.
“Whatcha think, Applejack? I call it ‘I Have no Brain, and I Must Dream.’”
>She just gives you a weird look.
>Fuckin’ pleb.
“Anyways, thanks for the save. How’d you know to come down?”
>She explains as you close the door behind you.
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>>29611307
>”Ya weren’t exactly bein’ quiet about your little dustup, Anonymous. Wanted to know what was happenin’. Who is he, anyways? Why’d ya tussle with him?”
“Tell you in a bit. Let me talk to Ditzy.”
>You hurry up the stairs and throw the door open.
>Ditzy and Applebloom are seated in your armchair, but both jump out once you walk into the room.
>Ditzy canters over, looking up at you uncertainly.
>”What were you doing…?”
>You squat down to her level, scratching her ears.
“Making sure Keith sleeps well. More importantly, how are those bruises?”
>She swipes your hand off of her head, holding it.
>”Never mind that! Sir, you’re going to get in trouble! When he wakes up-“
>Applejack butts in.
>”He won’t remember squat, Ditzy. Even half-starved, I can still buck.”
>Ditzy still looks uncertain, and you honestly still aren’t sure if you can set any stock in Applejack.
>Regardless, a change of mood is called for.
“Regardless of how it turns out, I don’t regret what I did. Anyway, I got something for you.”
>You pull the Snapple out of your fridge and the M&M’s from where you had stashed them, proffering them.
>”Got you some snacks for the next time you stayed over. Didn’t think it would be this soon, but… Here.”
>She looks at the treats in your hands, then at your face, then sighs.
>”You’re too kind, sir.”
“And you’re too stiff. Quit calling me sir and eat these.”
>You set the bottle and package on her back, then return to the fridge to get the beer you’d bought for the evening, and dig the snack food out of the bag still sitting on the floor.
>You turn to head towards your computer chair, but find yourself getting a look from Applejack.
>”…So.”
“…So?”
>”Gonna tell me why you’re out buying’ sweets fer Ditzy when ya ain’t even got food to eat yourself? N’ why Bloom and me don’t get none?”
>You give her your best deadpan, but she doesn’t budge.
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>>29611312
>Ditzy hurriedly speaks up.
>”H-He’s been helping, me Applejack. And I’ll be happy to share, you know that. Mr. Anonymous will too!”
>…You guess.
>You open everything up, including your first bottle of the night, helping your grey guest explain recent events to her orange acquaintance.

That'll be all for tonight, lads.
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>>29611292
I was just thinking about you... that sounded creepy.
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>>29611375
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I haven't updated in like 4 months, I think. If I were to do so again would it be in bad taste to start from the begging in small increments? I'll try to update after thread 100 so I don't flood if I do.
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>>29611468
what were you writing?
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>>29611307
>ou heft Keith’s limp body towards his little table

I thought that Keith was an unclean fat ball with a stale smell and unpleasant look
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>>29611468
Secret :^)
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More fanganon and clear skies green when?
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>>29611320
Good update Physics Anon, really liked the part where Keith take the "gifth" of Applejack

Now that we are close to finishing this thread and reach the number 100
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>>29611320
And here i thought he was having his way with her and anon was gonna take some pics and blackmail him.

At least he got part of what he deserved.
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>>29611320
Aw yiss.

>>29611468
If it's just four months I think it'd depend on how many posts worth. This is a pretty busy general too.

Last I checked I was just one anonymous, I doubt too many people will frog screech at you if it's under, I dunno, ten posts? Maybe twenty?

If it's more than that, I'd break it up. Link pastebin, do the first 4–8 posts worth of your green, give people time to look and catch up if they want, then do a few posts worth of right before where you left off, then continue with the new content.


(Captcha features "Sunset drive". I wonder if we'll get a slave Shimsham green some day.)
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>>29612012
>Slave Shimmer

We can only dream. Maybe if we keep bringing it up like filly brothel guy, someone will make it happen.
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Posey is cute
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>>29612083
Mocha is cuter!
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>>29612012
>>29612054
Probably has to do with the lack of appeal for EqG, plus the difficulty with integrating it to the common setting. Like, how do you have slave ponies if everyone is getting transformed into anorexic teenagers?

Though I wouldn't mind seeing slave Sirens. There's some room for real interplay there:
>Sonata just snaps under the stress, goes full traitor and tries to help their owner break in her sisters so they can 'enjoy' all the benefits of being goodgirls too
>Has deluded herself into thinking she is doing right, but has periodic moments of lucidity where the full horror of what she is doing strikes her
>Adagio is hostile, but also despondent over her inability to protect and lead her sisters - the next closest to giving in, just because she thinks it would maybe give her a chance to protect them from the worst of the abuses
>Sonata is the only one who can really control her, because Adagio can't bring herself to actually hurt her younger sister
>Aria is just all rage, all the time - constantly fighting back at every opportunity, spiting their owner whenever possible no matter what agony or punishment it earns her
>Reserves a special degree of hatred and viciousness for Sonata, but is secretly terrified that Adagio will break as well and she will be left all alone
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>>29611468
Which story nigga
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>>29611297
Keith's a real piece of shit, wow. It isn't even spanking when you're leaving bruises on her back, let alone the fact that she doesn't even deserve one to begin with.

Poor thing has such a gentle soul.
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>>29612012
I namefagged. 12 posts including update. Didn't get far so it's why I asked.

>>29612576
You'll find out once I post.
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>>29611610
I'm still here, I'm just a shit. Wanted to try something longer and it's been slow going. I should really stick to short and cute, like a filly brothel.

I'll get drunk today and see if I can think of something cute enough.
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>>29612639
Are you that neo-Rome fucker?
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>>29612727
Nah, that was more recent.

>>29612639
Are you giving us more Honey Bun?
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>>29612755
>More Honey Bun

Oh God, yes!
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>>29612727
I feel like that was more recent than four months.
But it would be nice.
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>>29612727
I'm betting (and hoping) it's NoSpoon back to write some more of one of his AJ greens.
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>>29612727
>>29612755
>>29612823
>>29612893
>>29612990
N-no s-sorry.
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>>29612711
Long is good i just missed your dubs, checkem, i mean your green, your dubs too but mostly your green
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>>29612990
That would make me so happy

Moar Appul
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>>29612990
lewd

>>29612054
she doesnt look happy
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>>29613414

Stop being coy, and just say who you are.
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>>29614703
That's a nice appul.
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SLAVE ALL THE MARES
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slave is for riding.
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Wait for it...
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>>29614744
This pic always makes me laugh
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Three to one hundred!
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wait for it.......
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New thread: >>29614789
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>>29604977
Check on Mocha and Haute. We need to get Posey alone next time to truly learn more about Haute, she wont' undermine her right in front of randall.
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