So, what makes a good story /lit/?
What makes a bad story?
Can we agree that execution > concept?
What would you say are the fundamentals to bear in mind when attempting to write a story?
How do you write a good hook? And I mean a really good one?
>>7608132
IF YOUR BOOK HAS A FUCKING VILLAIN I IT IS FUCKING GARBAGE, GET WITH THE TIMES YOU FUCKING COMIC BOOK READING ANIME WATCHING SCUMBAG PLEB ANUS SNIFFING SLAVE MORALIZED FAGGOT.
>>7608132
YOU EVEN MISUNDERSTOOD FUCKING HANNIBAL, JESUS FUCKING HIS MOTHER.
>>7608132
Let's try and redeem OP incompetence.
GR's Blicero: too comical to be taken seriously? Or sinister and convincing?
Think of his treatment of Franz, sinister right?
But then his introduction, balls deep in Gottfried, pretty blatant right?
>>7608168
Blicero is the hero. as Enzian says – he's the only one who actually achieves transcendence.
>>7608168
Blicero acts out of fear and has secret fantasies of being murdered so he does not have to go on. Perhaps comical, but not comically evil.
That image is stupid. Ganondorf did what he did because he felt anguished by hyrule's destruction and the death of his people and their culture so by that images logic he should be elder god tier.