Prepare your anus, it's time to get CAVED.
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The threads always die when we're having the most interesting talks.
To carry on, the monsters in YBA's setting are unsustainable and had it coming when then tried to invade Earth. It isn't like they'd be more sustainable here with their inability to produce males and their constant breeding like rabbits.
Totally I would do the way that on anon wrote and git gud at massaging MGs and open up my own parlor that specializes in happy endings for all of my customers.
The happy endings all include me knocking them up and raising my own army of daughterus to take back the holy lands.
While I like the way the fucker draws his girls, I wish he didn't draw them crushing family jewels like water balloons most of the time.
Surely God will forgive me for fornicating with godless heathens once she sees my army of pious daughterus all screaming "DEUS VULT!" While marching over the bodies of dead Saracens.
My brothers God will not forget your honor today.
Teacher-themed hakutakus kind of are, yeah. Hair is only a step away from being the same color. Even has the whole two-tone thing going.
guys, I think I'm starting to like horse pussy
>She's got the look of a gender studies student about her face
In a way she is one.
I agree though, glasses are just a turn off, but maybe that's because I wear them. Who wants their kids to be guaranteed an annoying minor disability for life?
Ah, to be partnered up with a girl like her when the student council commandeers one as manual labor! We got to stay in the school for several hours after the faculty had gone home, and while Anubis-chan and the others were in the art classroom, we were sent to the sports equipment shed to pick up some things. I had installed cameras in the shed long ago in the hopes I could one day lure a girl people were willing to pay to see, and now was my chance. I had to be quick, of course, and the initial product wouldn't be very interesting, but after I had her on film, I could blackmail her to coming there again, when he had more time and I had prepared some proper equipment. In any case, all I could smell that afternoon was money.
>I regret shitting on flow kelp now.
Well they are pretty damn cute.
>barely had any time to catch up on the old thread before it died
>typed up an obligatory thread OP featuring the new girl
>couldn't make the post, realized I forgot to turn off PIA
>turn it off and can't post it again because there was a delay before the captcha could work again and allow me to post
>finally get the captcha to work
>still manage to make this OP before everyone else
/mgt/ has to learn how to thread snipe.
She's a smart Mist Continent Holstaur.
That, and she has a fair amount of mofu going on.
Happy Valentine's Day! Again!
I just finished making
and eatingcrepes, so I thought I'd post this as well.
I'm moving on from Vengeance to The Succubus Class President Won't Leave Me Alone. Lets see how this goes. So far so good. I enjoy the whole Succubus mind control thing, and just got past the saliva bit. A few typos, but its good thus far.
Exactly. You want smart? We have lich. You want big tits? We have holstaur. You want chinese dress? we have rens.
Nothing about her is that unique, other than knowing how to turn on monsters and that's as simple as having a dick to begin with anyway. On top of it her face is offensively bland.
Cute is an understatement, they're better than most girls kc made last year.
I feel bad for misinterpreting one of the lines in their profile, it gave everyone the wrong idea about kelps (floating about on the surface instead of being stuck to the floor and occasionally being carried around by currents)
I still say Satyros was his recent best. The closest thing you can get to a true lady in terms of manners in the MG ranks, loves drinking, is very playful and just looks fun all around.
I actually would enjoy spider girls more if they looked more like this, instead of a human torso pasted onto a spider.
>Going out to do yard work with a Flok backpack; Mowing the lawn, pulling weeds, etc.
>She keeps you hydrated and absorbs your sweat as you work.
>She loses some moisture and shrinks a little so she wants to have sex when you finish and head back inside.
Nor is there about being part snake, or tentacles, or part spider, or centipede, or cow, or wolf.
Basically, you're being a retard. This is the monstergirl thread, the girls are part monster. Why are you here?
Were you not there for the last 1000 posts of last thread. At least two people love her enough to spend hours discussing her. one guy has her in his top ten, and then there's that writefag.
There's literally enough of us who like gnome to fill a small car.
Bipedal spidergirls are fine too.
The man got you down? The law breathing down your neck? Better call Sally!
>So you want to be tied up in a web and have a scary spider force your future children into her womb?
You're saying that like it was a bad thing. Especially that they aren't the only MGs to do these things.
And I will beg her not to tickle the soles of my feet as punishment because that would be too much for me to handle.
Pick your poison.
7 to 8 ft is a s big as I'll go, and I wouldn't have it any other way.
Stop acting like an Alp anon.
Arachnes are pure and just want love like all other MGs.
I bet Valentine's day would be a one huge fuckfest in MGC
Reporter is clearly jewnuki
I want to live with a shortstack and a tall girl with a flat chest! I want them both to argue about which kind of body I prefer!
I want them both to turn into blushing messes when I tell them that they're both perfect in their own way!
It gets much worse.
The writing or me posting that? The writer themselves aren't much better than what I posted at all and I'm surprised they haven't just committed a much needed bullet eating yet.
They're spiders! They're nice and cute!
You can't escape their hugs!
Most of them just hang out in their webs, don't bother anyone what don't bother them.
Scary is relative. Wasp-family creatures are, in my COMPLETELY OBJECTIVE estimation, scarier.
Get a cute and a fluffy rape machine spider.
Wizards are always in fashion. It just takes the universe aligning in a certain way every once in a while for our puny minds to understand that.
A wizard summons/creates a familiar waifu. They never actually dick her, though. They just reward the magical loli with max level pleasure spells while they sit back and shitpost in their crystal ball.
Then there's no need for doors opening to different towns, you keep your Familiar about so they can lift things for you, and cook and do the laundry.
Wait. Wizards need Kikis, don't they?
Are you a bad enough dude to take back your heart from the evil red dragon on Valentine's Day?
In the literal sense. You'll probably* have to kill her to get it back.
I'm afraid so. And you can't corrupt a wizzard, last time a bunch of amazons offered carnal pleasures to Rincewind he asked them for potatoes.
Memes, duh. Who cares about MGE?
Yo! You might wanna keep your head down for the next five-to-ten minutes.
>disliking the new MG means I hate everything
Nice assumptions, anon. I assume there's a reason why you think I hate everything? Perhaps you've mistaken me for some shitposter simply for having a different opinion to you?
It wasn't just the content, it was the way they wrote about five minutes worth of stuff, barely proofread it then threw it at us like it was all fine and dandy.
It's like the guy has no standards whatsoever.
I want to cheer up a depressed cupid who's helped so many people yet hasn't found a man for herself.
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY, ANON!
YOU CAN'T DENY ME A HUG THIS TIME!
Discussing the flow of a story, and actually analysing it to improve yourself can be a tricky thing. The reason is, "story flow" can mean quite a few things. But there are a few factors which can contribute towards a person saying that a story's flow is off.
Firstly, narration and dialogue. If it feels stilted, or forced, then that can negatively impact a story. Now, this might seem like a rather unintuitive concept, what I'm about to say, but when you're writing a story normally, you don't want the reader to notice the words. Obviously, you want them to read the words, but think about how you read a book. You don't get hung up on every word, is the point I'm making. Your eyes flow over the sentences and paragraphs, taking in a steady flow (hey, there's that word) of information.
If your writing is bad, or off, your readers aren't going to be able to do that. They'll be too busy "untangling" and trying to extract the intended meaning from your sentences to actually read smoothly. Same for when it doesn't quite seem natural, like if you don't vary your sentence structure enough, or if you're using too much punctuation, or if it seems like your grammar is just a little off. It doesn't even need to be wrong, necessarily, but it just needs to look unnaturally when read inside your mind to interrupt that flow.
Another factor is story pacing. Now, this won't be such an issue in shorter stories, like something under 10,000 words, because hey, it's short. This is really for stories where you'll be thinking a decent amount about character interaction and development, and where splitting it into parts or chapters might not be a bad idea.
Well, how do you improve pacing? If you ask me, I'd say direction and purpose. When you're writing a scene, it needs to have a goal of some point, even if that goal isn't contributing towards the main plot line and the eventual conclusion. Hell, it can be something as simple as getting a laugh out of the reader and leaving it at that, if it doesn't look out of place in your story. Obviously something like that won't mesh well in some grim, post-apocalyptic fight for bitter survival, but I'm getting off topic there.
The point is, and I think I've said this before rather recently, when writing a story, it really pays off to have at least a general idea of where you're going with it. To look at it in terms of a single scene, you should know why you're writing that scene, even if you don't quite know what could happen in it yet.
I should probably mention that that's just my personal take on things, and how I approach storytelling, but I hope it helps you more than not at all. I know it can be frustrating when someone tells you to improve something abstract like "story flow" without actually going into some technical detail about what they mean.
How common can it be to see someone pointing out a post and claiming it's this one guy who supposedly hates everything? It's like the post shows up word for word every thread or so the moment the guy sees an opinion he doesn't like.
I want to trick two lonely yetis into hugging each other when blindfolded thinking that the other one is me.
And then get a good head start before they get hold of me.
>Wizard summons a Succubus to bully and cunttease
>He wants to get some challenge, so he conjures the ultimate Succuslut
>The cosmos has a different interpretation than he had, so instead of a perfect porn star he gets a nerdy, chuuni, bespectacled nerdubutt
>The flat and plain girl doesn't really even try to rape him, and instead wants to learn about magic as well as fantastic creatures and locations
>Spending time portaling around the world with her turns out to be a lot of fun
>After a particularly grueling battle against a ravenous bugblatter beast they both collapse, sitting, leaning against the broken rock
>The fresh sweat and her hair smell so nice
>The tiny bust heaving with her ragged breath is actually quite attractive under that sweater
>The Wizard has to will himself to snap out of it, but it's too late to put the ember out
>In the next few weeks the Wizard finds himself staring at the Succubutt as she darts around the library with her arms full of books
>The three months that she's summoned for are about to run out
>He doesn't like that thought
>He wishes she would stay
>There's only one way, though, and that would mean losing the challenge
>He tries to banish the thought, but every time he sees her eyes flash behind her freckles and glasses, it knocks at the gates of his mind
>If he just put it in, she would stay
>He only has to put his dick inside her
>He cannot, he'd never betray his code
>Finally it's the last day of the challenge
>The Succubutt has packed all the mementos of their adventures to take with her when she's desummoned
>The luggage is already in the magic circle
>She stands on the edge of the ring and turns to face him with an almost melancholic face
>She hugs the Wizard
>When she breaks the embrace, he doesn't
>He whispers his secret desire into her ear
>She can't stay
>He's won, and she'll be sent to the next victim
>She's just glad her first summoning was something this nice
>She'll never forget him
>Energy crackles in the air
>Her hair stands on end
>Suddenly her body becomes weightless
>Her yelp of surprise is cut short as the Wizard kisses her
>A sharp pain stabs at her
>Closely followed by a blunt pain as she slams into the stone floor and the Wizard slams onto her
>Through the haze of pain she can see the final speck of sand fall through her hourglass
No, in the last thread the guy claiming he was several maledom posters being boogeymanned as one guy actually turned out to be the same person and was banned for the usual weekend shitflinging.
At any rate, the guy you're defending is also claiming from one single post that this anon is some angry anon who apparently hates everything. Although considering how it once again turned out our weekend warrior was pretending to be multiple people (as always) who the fuck knows anymore.
Oh, I certainly didn't say it was because of you, but when you wrote a similarly long criticism of my work early on it did put into perspective just how awful it was. I kept writing for a considerable time after that, but the wound never fully healed.
Don't stop doing what you're doing, though. My main reason for quitting was sloth. Being too lazy to keep writing and planning shit out and checking what I'd written for inconsistencies and errors and on top of that trying to improve was just too much of a pain.
Yes, anon. I am Murloc, I am death.
A couple of anons were dragged into it, but I was there and a lot of the posts claiming to be different people yet still desperately trying to continue the shitfest vanished, along with the guy's normal posts throughout the thread on his banning.
At this point it should be well known that he pulls the silent majority card and samefags to look like he has support.
Maybe you should try to deduce from that statement something about me. If those two were never popular and I never reached their popularity, that means?
Yeah. I'm done with this now.
Fair enough. It didn't help that they wanted to discuss maledom at the exact point our shitposting friend was trying to monopolize the subject as his own personal focus. Sometimes I wonder if he does it as a false flag against the subject, he certainly seems angry about it.
You can stop with the shilling now, it's getting pathetically obvious. 3rd day in a row someone has asked about YBA and that story out of nowhere and he conveniently popped out of the woodwork yesterday too.
I'm sure those two things aren't related though.
She'll attempt to kill you.
You'll have to make a deal in order to do that. A hefty deal.
Like sacrifice your waifu heavy deal.
Fuck right in the feels.
Fuck off already, nobody cares.
She's built to breed. Literally a baby factory
Awesome! Glad to see he's still at it.
Legitimately wasn't me. This is the first time I've come to 4chan in quite awhile let alone posting. But I guess it's good that I came back when I did what with him being "back"
Oh, well shit, I didn't know. Sorry I put you off writing. When I try to criticise and analyse like that, I do it with the intent of helping the writer to keep on writing. Now I feel kind of bad about it.
Don't stop doing it just because one autistic faggot got triggered. It probably WAS Alp, and even if it wasn't, if constructive criticism makes you quit writing you might as well not start at all.
Only the best and most refined for my beloved kikimora.
Я люблю вас, моя дорогая любимчик.
Where did her abs go? The deal is broken
I'm gonna marry the legendary White Jinko and have her get back my heart in my stead
That picture would look so much better if it wasn't for that off-putting demon in the background
>yetis hug each other as they hear loud footsteps running off
>they take off their blindfolds after the hug is more fur than skin
>they both have heart pupils at the idea of chasing down their prey to hug
Now you have 2 high speed yetis after you and your scent is on the blindfolds you gave them
Don't sweat it if you're actually giving constructive criticisms in the hope to help people like >>14765758 says. I don't write anymore because honestly when you get people repeatedly telling you that you don't know how to write X MG or that you should fuck off I really don't see the point in doing it even though it's nice to try and get a better grasp of storytelling as a whole.
May just have to turn into a mare and let Surtr's horse fuck me for three days straight to get my humours back.
I wouldn't doubt it either, wouldn't be the first time a writer has posted as anon to drum up interest in his work.
No one's gave a flying fuck about vengeance for months until someone started asking about it a little too often and now YBA comes back. I don't trust people enough not to suspect something.
>Teen Kejourou using brightly colored hair dyes
>Teen Kikimoras making a mess
>Teen Cockatrice walking at a casual pace
>Teen Hakutaku not wanting to be a teacher or not feeling like studying
Exactly what I want, the best hugs are the ones earned through a good chase.
Ever since nyanners was outed for the mausposting stuff a year ago it's been hard to trust discussion on writefaggotry. It just feels like the bigger conversations about it are being stoked by the author themselves, and as paranoid and stupid as it seems there is a precedent for it. You know,
>Good, I like it, please continue.
>Teen Hakutaku not wanting to be a teacher or not feeling like studying
>Her mother brings her a crystal filled with knowledge
>"Come on sweetie, just touch the crystal please"
>"No mom! I'm gonna become a dairy cow, I don't need your stupid knowledge!"
Speaking of writefaggotry, does anyone else randomly browse the list and feel a bit deflated when a story just ends half way and the last update was in 2013?
Fucking finish your shit, writefags.
I read that as flat-bottomed at first and was about to slap your shit.
I want to have Monstergirl City's top four CEO's consolidate their companies so that can force me to become all of their husband by forcing the creation of TanukiBucks, an entire new currency that is preferable at all tanuki-owned (read: all) businesses, and that is required to leave the city!
I just want MachineAnon and the guy who did Spider and the Fly to come back and do more. Those were my first two writeanons that I read from, and I would atleast like to say how much I enjoyed their shit.
I think the biggest issue with the new girl is that she's just a Holst teacher with different horns. You don't need a new lamia for a clothing change and different coloured scales, do you? Same way this new MG is redundant.
Machine got a big ego and looks down on other writefags/the thread. It's hard to like him when you know this shit. PeterDNZL was the shit though and I also want him back. The guy said he was going to do a Black Lagoon style sequel to Spider, I wish he followed up on it.
>the guy who did Spider and the Fly
He's actually still around, and laments how he can't find a way to do a proper epilogue. He's also one of the fellows that posts about Jinkos.
The world of Spider is what I kind of based my story in. I definitely put some ties. Loose ties. I kind of felt like making it a leap frog thing with his world. I'll do something in it, then maybe someone else would do something in it, and it just be a big collaboration thing going on.
The world is big. If we're talking about his world, the monsters come from another realm anyways. So thats a whole other world. I'd hope he'd understand. Just write it, mang. I'd read it.
Feels like a decent salary and a strong benefits package to me, complete with workmates that don't think I can do it and so they do all the work for me. I fill out a TPS report once a week.
On a technical level Machine as nice, a little formulaic to the point he thought it was the only way of doing a MG story, but still alright.
I still don't think he was the best we've ever had, and certainly not deserving of his hilariously inflated ego near the end. I mean Peny's undead stories run rings around machine's and the guy is yet to go on an insane rant about his superiority.
Well, his succubutt story was the first ever writefag shit I read, so it holds a dear place in my heart. But yeah, Peny is great. His ghoul is goat and I wish shed sit on my face.
No, I sometimes use the setting from another writefag I like, I just never make it too obvious because I feel like it'd be plagiarizing their awesome work or something.
A new monstergirl, but it's basically a plain looking holst with glasses and chinese clothes.
Warren, please. You're so rich the Tanuki can't hope to accomplish what you've accomplished. You feel like there's a problem, you sell your stocks while they're still worth a damn, and then those bushy-tailed harlots are left with nothing but the taste of your jizz in their mouths.
Yep. Its gotten so bad about Vengeance that people are swearing that YBA is in here shilling, when it was in fact I who began the conversation. All I said was I was reading it and getting mad at the MC, which started all sorts of civil discussions. I was very happy that there was a minimal amount of shitslinging.
Oh, now there would be something interesting. I doubt we'll have any mutants like these, though, mamono mana "mutates" people already, it's just not good ol' radiation.
Oh well, perhaps if the Tarrasque by .less that's reference is made into an official MGE and it happens to looks similar to the artist's, we'll have out Deathclaw MG look-alike.
That file name though...
>Name of super arousing form of rock made by MGs
>Fear, but also arousal... through your ears.
An Alp wouldn't have a clue what to do when it comes to a blowjob.
They'd just awkwardly try to force it into their mouth. Then stuttering that it's their first time doing this.
Wanna lay on top of a soft wock
Gonna lay on top of a soft wock
Considering that the brain alteration is making you feel literally nothing but pleasure for the rest of your life with her, I'm going to come right out and say that's really not right at all.
Look at it this way. If you're not with a matango, then being with a matango probably isn't that favourable.
But if you're with a matango, it's the absolute best thing ever, to the point where you don't desire anything else.
Examination Question #22:
Given the average height of a tanuki is around 5 foot 4 and their average weight is around 130 lbs, how big of an oven do you need to burn at least 5 of them alive at once, provided you have sufficient coal and draft ?
It was from a thread where people were wondering what Alp's female alternate self would yell during sex.
Now that I typed that I realize just how fucking insane that conversation was.
Is that an actual place?
Found uncensored art. Not sure how to feel. On the other hand whoever censored it put more thought than necessary into it.
I'd put a bun in her oven if you know what I mean, Ser Edgelord.
You're right, Wicks are bad. Thankfully Wocks are clean, beautiful, and make great sisters.
I like how the casually mention how she lost her tail at a young age, but never elaborate on how.
Would it bother you if you dated/married an MG that lost her tail in combat?
Jabberwockys are clean, beautiful, and make great sisters.
Wocks are a mistake of nature.
Also god help you when you get to Moose's saga.
It's not that it's terrible, it isn't great but it has it's moments, it's more that it's fucking massive and will take you forever to read.
Just one or two if we go by numbers of Auschwitz in its time and use one identical to those present there.
School is holding me up, as well as not having a clue how to write my epilogue
I need to go over it again and fix stuff, I just don't know when I'll have time to really get into it.
that black lagoon story is still floating around in my head
JInkos are olev
I had a few pages written, but I think I just need to start over, it's been too long since I've written anything for it, my head's in a different place.