I made this music video thing. it's only about two minutes long. care to critique?
https://vimeo.com/154692522
is anyone else having trouble with vimeo? the videos don't even start anymore
i love the tones of black and white in this. like a lot
I would probably slow the clips down and make fading transitions to make the video more interesting and give it a better flow along with the music. Also I think you forgot to remove the sound on the second to last clip
a bit pretentious, no narrative, forgot to take the background sound out from one clip, a couple of nice shots though.
even with artsy abstract films, if you don't have any idea of what your making, and your just doing it for #aesthetic , the audience will see through it. especially when fuck all happens. same with drawings, as soon as there's story in an image, it's 1000x more interesting