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Respost of the last pic, since it was the last one in the thread and I'd still like some feedback if possible.
The view on the screen is the one on the phone, so yeah, the one she sees is the exact same pic we see. I hope you are trolling, cause if you are not then I'm very stupid and I don't even realize it.
I'm having problems with her pose, making her feel like she's actually in leaning on the floor.
This is a bit hard to explain, but I think it's because her back is arched too far back and her hands aren't going low enough for her to be leaning on the floor that she looks like she's standing. Doesn't help that you didn't draw the legs.
Gonna need to include upper thigh, and with the perspective they will have to splay. Will look oogy and un-natural if they're not at the right angle. Freeze frame some POV stuff and you'll get the arch and angles
Why do so many porn artists have a tumblr? How does tumblr help spread your artwork?
i dont really like drawing porn cause im bad at it but i saw a panel in a Doxy comic i really liked and wanted to try doing something similar for fun
this is a wip but can someone give me advice on how to draw the human's foot/shoe?? to me it looks like the ankle is broken and ive been stuck on it for twenty minutes
Well, it looks like the side of the foot and the side of the leg are on different planes
This is what I mean. If the lef was bound inside a cube, and the foot was bound inside a cube, the sides should be resting on the same plane
Maybe try searching up images of people tying up shoes? Some results look like they could help since they sort of have the same foot pose as that right foot. If not maybe change the foot to be laying flat, that might be a bit easier to illustrate. Or draw the foot first so you can get a better idea how the shoe will fit around it. Hope that helps.
the draw thread didnt like this so ill post it here too. boobs. do the nipples look sexy enough? i feel like there's something I'm missing with making them arousing.
Well, you're so much better than me, because i can't even draw something that looks like a human, but i don't know why this was deformed.
Well, i liked it, it have a hentai look on it, different from stuff I normally do, c&c plox
Fixed most of the stuff you people mentioned (at least I think so), thanks for that, and started coloring. See anything that rustles your jimmies?
Is this pose dynamic enough?
You don't have enough experience and thus skill to do confident poses from memory. You have to internalize anatomy and refine your gesture, to be able to do that. And no, telling you what you did wrong with this single pic, won't help you achieve that. You have to grind, and based on your current level I'd say you'll need lots of that. 1000 more studies from references is an example.
Yeah, I believe so too. Each of these threads should have such a disclaimer.
Nah, I'm simply speaking reason. I understand that beginners might be unwilling to listen to someone saying they should simply practice more, but that's the best fucking advice anyone can get. If someone posts a picture that is so fundamentally flawed, that the only way to make it good is to start from scratch, giving specific advice about parts of it only shows that the person who is giving such advice is a beginner too.
The pic we are talking about falls in that category, and that's it. If I wanted to do a redline of it, I would have to redo the complete pose. And even then that person simply wouldn't have enough knowledge to understand what did I actually correct.
I might sound snobbish, but my advice is simply a better one if this guy wants to improve his drawing skills.
People should realize that being a good artist isn't something easy, and good illustrations aren't born from playing around and having fun while learning. Nope, sorry guys, it doesn't work like that.
>People should realize that being a good artist isn't something easy, and good illustrations aren't born from playing around and having fun while learning. Nope, sorry guys, it doesn't work like that.
I might sound like that, but I'm saying the truth. Sorry for making averyone's butts ache in pain or something.
I'm trying to help anon and maybe also anyone else here that is starting art. I'm not trying to make people stop doing art. Spoon feeding and hugboxes are simply counterproductive when it comes to improving in any given field, so I rather make it harsh. You want to do great art one day, son? Then get ready for some pain, and not the kind of one I might have caused to the more feint of heart in this thread. Some actual excruciating fucking pain.
>Art is PAIN
>NO FUN ALLOWED IN HERE SON
Who let this try hard in here?
No one needs you spouting common knowledge bullshit. If you aren't going to show the guy what he did wrong and point him in the right direction via redline or suggesting books and study material, shut up and draw. Your input is worthless.
Art per se is not pain. Drawing per se is not pain. Getting gud at it is pain.
Please guys, try not to be so butthurt. It might help you realize I'm not the one talking bullshit here.
I gave him better advice than these people:
>I would mover her ear down and to the right a bit.
No shit f.am. When you are at it move it down-right enough that it slides out of the frame alongside the rest of the body. Then they'll have an empty canvas to start over.
>Push the squash, s-curve
Yeah, that's the main problem. Let's break the anatomy some more. Then they'll be able to sell it as cubism.
Seriously guys. STOP GIVING BEGINNERS BAD ADVICE.
>Getting this mad at some guy's rough sketch
Ok, Illustrator fag, we get it. You're the best.
>You're the best.
That's the main cancer that afflicts your heads. You always start feeling endangered by other people. I got out of my way to give the guy some advice. I wanted to help the guy.
But nooooo, I'm here just to have a trip. I'm here to make everyone realize how good and knowledgeable I am.
Yeah, that must be it. I am trying to have a trip on an anonymous board.
Can you be any more dumb?
>I got out of my way to give the guy some advice. I wanted to help the guy.
All youve done is belittle him and say that he has a long road of "pain and no fun" ahead of him. Yeah you're really helping him, such a hero
>You don't have enough experience and thus skill to do confident poses from memory.
>based on your current level I'd say you'll need lots of grinding
Yeah, I literally raped them. All my keks.
If they're not able to take such a critique, then it probably is better for them to stop doing art as soon as possible. And I guess the same applies to you and all other anons that might have identified with the guy.
>I gave him better advice than these people
No, you didn't. You just said "it's wrong". You didn't say how. You didn't provide examples. You didn't even reference books or artists for study material since you wanted to be a lazy shit and not red line. Your input was just as worthless as the rest. No one needed it, You just spouted common knowledge shit as if that would make you look intelligent. You're an idiot.
>then it probably is better for them to stop doing art as soon as possible. And I guess the same applies to you and all other anons that might have identified with the guy.
>My advice is clearly the end all be all
>Lol, if you cant even handle it, you should quit drawing all together.
>All you anons are just assmad
See anons. That's what I was talking about. This person actually thinks this are the main problems with his pic
>Boobs were in the wrong place and the raised arm was at the wrong height, as well as the belly button
I am over with giving advice to beginners. It's just a waste of time.
That is supposed to be a lip bite. Some other people already mentioned that part was unclear, so I changed it. Pic related.
Art is a process dumbfuck. Even with that knowledge, which is common sense, you don't go from stick figures to Kim Jung Gi level of construction and confidence over night or even in a year. You have to study and grind for multiple years. People work at different paces and are at different stages of their development. All of this should go without saying though, that's why that comment was worthless and why people were making fun of him.
So you are basically saying that any kind of advice here given to a beginner is worthless? You seem like someone who knows what they are saying, so you probably realize that a redline of that pic, which would have to be drawn from scratch, or detailed explanation of all the mistakes are just a waste of time on someone who needs to practice fundamentals instead of drawing porn? You do, do you?
I am trying to get more into rendering and for now I'm not able to see the mistakes here, or the ones I can, don't know how to fix them.
What I'm saying is if you're not trying to lead someone in the right direction in their learning process, be it specific comments, a red line, or suggesting relevant reference material for study, you're useless. Studying and practicing fundamentals should be done in tandem with whatever the hell else you're drawing. It doesn't matter what the subject matter is.
So you are saying what I said is true. This thread is basically pointless for beginners. It actually makes a lot of sense, since you have to be at least at an intermediate level to be able to draw porn.
My drawings are pretty shitty atm. Do you think it is worth it to go ahead and try to actually render and colour an image like this or should I keep practicing to get basic construction right?
Bro you need to grind like, 1000000 gestures. You don't have enough experience and thus skill to do confident poses from memory. You have to internalize anatomy and refine your gesture, to be able to do that. And no, telling you what you did wrong with this single pic, won't help you achieve that. You have to grind, and based on your current level I'd say you'll need lots of that.
You want to do great art one day, son? Then get ready for some pain, and not the kind of one I might have caused to the more feint of heart in this thread. Some actual excruciating fucking pain.
Sorry I ruined your delusions about becoming a good artist without having to learn how to draw.
Do what people like you always do. Close your browser and forget about all my posts. That's the best way to cure your butt irritation.
Now I'm talking to you. Before I was talking to that other guy?
The question is, who are YOU talking to.
What's wrong, kid? You need your little lazy artists wannabe buddies that you are right and you are all gonna make it without practice. You are so fucking afraid I might be right, that you need a support group. Man up and stop being so damn pathetic.
I'm not sure what the connection is. I figure if it's shameful it would be equally shameful for someone who's not that good to beg as it would be for someone who is good to beg. Both are still beggars. The quality of art probably only changes the likelihood of actually getting some takers.
That arrogant critique guy is the best and worst thing to appear in this thread I've ever seen. He rivals even the you_suck anon in useless posting. But at least you_suck anon is more charming to read though.
Not sure what hairstyle I want to give her yet.
>posting barefoot waifu
Will probably take a hike to the beginner thread now that I've been torn a new asshole, being that there are quite a few issues with my art. Posting this now because its about as good as ill be assed to do right now.
what do you tell your mom if she ever asks to see your art. Or literally anyone,
"oh I draw furry dicks it's my passion"
Never understood porn art. Gotta have absolutely no fucking shame or dignity.
Alright I'm just gonna fucking do it. I spent all day screwing with picarto and other shit to set it all up so I might as well. Is it better to have people pay some set amount for a sketch or better to just draw whatever people are suggesting freely and encourage people to donate whatever they feel like?
Kamui from the new FE fates game coming out soon. I referenced her concept art and stole the rendering style for her.
this isnt very sexy but its a naked lady so im posting it in the porn thread. how do i digital
I figure this thread is most appropriate for this pic. My goal was to have a piece that was stylized with lineart and somewhat rendered. But I couldn't get my background elements up to the same finish as the bear, which I spent most time on. After two weeks I just ran out of steam. Anyway, critique is appreciated.
hello here i have confidant pose. Is the gesture internalized enough to have 1000 anatomy? I hope my current level is refined.
Listen to the Anon that explained to you about the squash and stretch to help you show a dynamic form.
Just posted this in the self promotion thread.
Thanks man. I wish I did more work on the trashbags and rats.
Yeah! I'm glad you like the story. I tried going for small reads within the big read. I'm not that great at the technical stuff so I try doing well in the storytelling at least. Even if it is just cheesecake/smut drawing.
Do you guys ever use reference from porn videos?
Sometimes when I'm whacking it, I have to stop and analyze a video because there's a great position or gesture in it that i want to draw later. Kinda ruins the boner, but it's good reference for sexy poses.
Here's an example of someone who knows his fundamentals, but is still reaching perfection. This guy could use some critique, and will probably be able to apply it, to make his art look better, even though it already is solid.
Do you get it now, suckers?
Sorry for using you as an example anon. I am just fed up with people who don't understand the simple concept that beginners shouldn't even be in this thread.
I really like your pics and I think I am seeing lots of progress just from the last thread already.
One advice I could give you is to try to use more variation in your line weight.
The contour lines are already stronger than some construction lines, but I'd suggest you ditch the construction lines entirely and try to use more variation on the contours alone. For example apply heavier lines on the objects that are closer, to achieve better depth, and try to give more tension to round objects by thinning the middle part of those lines. See the redline addendum for that.
As for anatomy and perspective you did a great job with this one. There are small errors but they aren't big deal breakers. Check the quick redline regarding those.
Keep it up anon, you are doing great.
You messed up senpai. The left arm of the white female is very long now.
Also, nice critique. This is my first time in these threads, but it's nice to see people aren't intoxicated with sex appeal and actually do care about the art itself.
>You messed up senpai. The left arm of the white female is very long now.
You are right, I see it too now. Demon futas anon, just keep your arm, but make it rest on the futa demon's thigh a bit better.
>butt frustrated by an actual critt.
there is nothing try hard about someone with superior knowledge deciding to put in
FREE work and help out other peeps.
you sir are a rude faggot.
>tries to redline
>claims critique on /ic/ are for intermediates only
>implying if a beginner isn't able to use and apply critique right at the moment he gets it, he can't save it for notes for later use.
This is literally what you're saying and you're the only truly toxic one here. You're trying to treat this thread as a special boys club. You might as well slap on a trip to your posts. What's funny is any truly solid intermediate worth his lick of salt wouldn't be on /ic/ looking for critique in the first place because pros, the people above their level, don't waste their time browsing this place. You really don't seem to understand how much of a fool you're making yourself out to be.
He was probably referring to all my bitching from yesterday. I am aware my attitude may rustle a lot of people's jimmies, especially the beginner's, but I really don't give a shit anymore. The sooner these beginners will understand they need to practice a lot more than they actually do and that spoon feeding isn't going to help them to get good, the better it will be for them.
>You're trying to treat this thread as a special boys club.
Here's where you are wrong. I am not saying THIS thread alone is for at least intermediate users. I am saying PORN is too hard for beginners, and that they should first get their fundamentals in order if they want to achieve better, but most importantly FASTER results.
I don't care if I sound rude or arrogant. That's just a way to wake up people.
Also, I didn't try to redline. I did redline. That fuckup is not a big deal since the guy has enough knowledge to understand where I did fuck up and where I helped him with the perspective. Which is everything else.
Anon, it is time to stop being butthurt and start getting better at drawing.
>I am aware my attitude may rustle a lot of people's jimmies
Your attitude only shines light on your own frustrations and incompetence as an artist. It's pretty common among intermediate level artists who aren't pro level, like you. So you take out on people worse than you. You're shit.
That's not my intention, plus I am doing perfectly fine atm and I'm not frustrated about my art at all.
I'm not posting these comments to feel better about myself. I do art to feel better about myself.
But yeah, I am sure you'd be very happy if I left this thread, so you could keep sucking each other's beginner dicks off and keep peacefully living in denial thinking you can actually draw porn. Sorry matey, not gonna happen.
>That's not my intention
I have no reason to believe this based on your showcase in this thread. You displayed the opposite.
>I am doing perfectly fine atm and I'm not frustrated about my art at all.
So you've stagnated and don't intend on improving past intermediate status. Got it.
>I'm not posting these comments to feel better about myself.
Kek, you aren't fooling anyone with this lie.
>I am sure you'd be very happy if I left this thread
You're free to waste your time here, which is what you're doing based on your own logic. I'm just called a spade a spade.
>Odd way to type "Faggot"
Looks like I goofed.
Those are all your assumptions. Just as my assumptions are that you are butthurt, because you are a total beginner and me being here lowers the value of your "work".
Let's just keep assuming and having fun, or wasting our time as you like to say.
here's the finished version, wish i had time to revise and ink this drawing. oh well, moving on
Good decision. Polishing something that has evident fundamental flaws is a waste of time. You'll get better a lot quicker if you either try to draw something else or draw this one from scratch trying to think about what you did wrong in your first attempt.
I suggest you also spend more time in the construction phase of your sketches. The end result will be less flat.
isnt that hard, i only scratch the shit as guide, then i just paint over fixing shit.
>Those are all your assumptions.
None of those were assumptions. You exposed it yourself with your posts in this thread. It's funny that you're trying to save face though. Get a trip. You deserve it.
>I am saying PORN is too hard for beginners
Explain why it is that novice and dead end intermediate artists always end up there can call it a wrap after they get a degenerate fanbase? There are a multitude of subject matter too hard for beginners, porn is hardly one of them.
Line art done, have to color. Also realized I need to practice hands. Anything else stick out as well? Probably won't fix it current picture but it give me an idea on what I need to focus on and study harder.
Don't listen to him he's just ass blasted from the shitstorm before.
The girl resting up against the fireplace is fine.
The other girl behind her with the strapon/dragoncock/whatever is not.
What the hell are you doing with that girl's leg? It looks like you're got her hooking her left leg around the other girl's leg/thigh. Why? If the dragon lady is gonna do some fucking, both feet should be planted on the ground. How is she gonna move. The best she can do is balance on her one leg.
Change up the pose.
I think I'm gonna take a break since I can tell I'm trying to rush it. Need to fix skin/redo skin. (I hate when you finally notice what's wrong and it isn't till you're coloring.)
Yea I noticed that upon coloring. Someone noted the head looked small but I didn't realize just how badly it looked until coloring. Or maybe you're right and it's the torso. It's probably all of the above. Shhhiiit. About the face being squished do you mean too close together or something else? Later when I have more energy. I'll see if I can fix it.
Nah, sorry, I like the interaction the way it is now. So does the client. Plus if you think such a pose is not good for having sex in that position, I must say you don't have a lot of experience. If Anything maybe the anatomy is still a bit broken, but the pose per se is completely functional.
Does really no one of you guys see how broken that left hand is?
Please man, fix that thing.
Same here. How do you manage not to see how broken that foreshortening of the torso and hand is? Need glasses, or maybe some better artist eyes?
>i really need to find out a good way of rendering shit without struggling.
Dude, first of all you need to get better at foreshortening, not rendering. Trying to hide turds by polishing them is not gonna help you in the long run.
Not finished of course. Still have a lot of work to do.
I have one. The perspective throughout the entire pic is not well defined. Their faces and heads suggest that the horizon is slightly above their heads, but their bodies aren't affected by this. And vice versa, the bodies suggest that the horizon is somewhere at waist level, which should affect more the upper part of the bodies, especially their heads and faces. Otherwise I don't see any major errors. Maybe just the foreshortening of the right girl's arm, which could be pushed more in the foreground, but that's a nit pick imo. Well, for the standards of these threads, my entire post is nitpicking probably. Just keep doing what you are doing and you'll start seeing all these perspective anomalies on your own very soon.
Inked this by taking in account your crits. Did I still miss anything important? I feel their heads are pushed too much into perspective. Is this just my imagination, or should I redraw them?
I really don't get what's going on with her vagina, it looks like a horizontal gnawing mouth. Come to think of it, that dick looks missplaced too (too low and a bit too far on the right?) angle of the stomach bulge kinda doesnt make sense either
>Trying to hide turds by polishing them is not gonna help you in the long run.
Not any of them but I disagree. Rendering is the only thing people care about. Note I'm not saying it's the only thing that matters in art, not even that it's the most important. It gets the most attention though and realistically, it's taken some pretty bad art pretty damn far.
Bad art is still bad art. Normies won't probably notice it, but people who know their shit will. The question here is only if this guy wants to create good art or just sell mediocre porn.
That is the question, isn't it? I had written a whole diatribe in that post but decided to save it. As much as I hate it, there's a Romantic Reality and a Commercial reality when it comes to art, at least as I see it. Basically, if you want to impress other artists (and if it fulfills you) become a craftsman. If you want to sell things, go for the icing and skimp on the cake. Again I don't like it but I think focusing on commercialism is a valid choice. All that matters is what your goals are in the end, you can't really live your life worrying too much about how people will judge you. I will say though, that if you come to a board specifically about craftsmanship in art you can't really expect to skate by on the excuse that you just want to make money. This place is mainly focused on critique beyond superficial goals so people are going to bring it up anyway.
Good point. Which makes me think. Is it possible to achieve both? That's what I'm aiming at, but not really sure if that's the right approach. I want to sell my porn (or keep selling it) but still create good art in the process. Is something like this even possible with a genre that relies so much on impulse and first impact? Is this just dumb thinking? Is it better to just aim for the money delivering more at a lower quality, or does good art have a bigger impact on the masses and in the long run could give you better financial stability and not just more personal satisfaction?
This is why these threads are probably the only ones where this discussion is truly relevant. Porn already has an expectation of just being a moneymaker, and I feel like it's generally thought of as being cheap and shoddy already anyway. The works that aren't cheap and shoddy always seem to either be so well crafted that they somehow aren't seen as porn anymore, even though they depict sex or nudity or what have you. I think it's because they're either more expensive or just generally rare, which is probably because it's hard to produce well made art so you just have a smaller pool anyway. Or, like Necro's stuff, well made but streamlined so it has max appeal and min production time, but that runs the risk of not satisfying the artist. I want to believe you can but it's hard to see how a solid, sustainable balance is possible.
Just in case it wasn't clear my point with this post was, since it's difficult to balance quality and quantity with porn, and quality against demand, you really have to plan which route you're going to focus on, because the audiences and options for each route are vastly different. Most other art fields I don't excuse it, but with lewd art, I can understand taking the commercial route.
Porn is and always has been commercial. If you're trying to make it "more than that" you're pretty retarded because it's not going to happen. No one gives a shit. Even other artists will look at you and consider your talent a waste on such a bottom of the barrel subject matter. Your efforts are better spent elsewhere. Stop being a horny sex deprived faggot and draw other shit than just porn.
It may sound preposterous, but I actually am aiming at becoming someone some day. And I want to achieve that with porn and erotica. Maybe not the new Milo Manara or Seriperi, but I can dream of at least coming close to them.
And no, it has nothing to do with being horny, or sex depriverd. To me erotism is most of all beauty. And making GOOD erotic and porn stories via art is more of a challenge, than something that sells easier.
Mouth/chin looks better now. Would be nice if the right-side one had a different expression, like maybe just a really dirty closed-mouth smirk.
Both of them having the same expression just looks a bit meh. Nice work though.
The perspective on the chair doesn't match the perspective on the fireplace at all.
It's like they're both from completely different pictures with completely different sets of vanishing points.
Pretty good red line.
For some reason I feel like the side-boob on the left-side character shouldn't be as large as it is. Maybe that was missed?
It sticks out to the point where I feel like the top arch of the breast could almost become parallel to the top of the shoulder. I'm not sure if that's just an optical illusion, or whether I'm straight up wrong on the matter...but something seems off.
Something about their necks seems slightly off.
Love the left ones hair and boobs though.
Also that background is sublime.
Consider adding something such as candles along the wall, to break up the repeated vertical lines?
don't waste time trying to get screentone to work when it's just going to bite you in the ass. do more studies instead.
for fast shading, you could just dump some cloudy photoshop filter shit in there, instead of covering your character in this nanotech pixel fishnet.
Her left or our left? The both look broken as fuck to me now. I think I'll just scrap it for now and try redrawing the same concept when I get a bit more study down. I fucking rusty after taking basically a year break and even then I wasn't too great.
Thanks everyone in the thread for the critiques though, I appreciate them actually.
Back to elf Jesus. I tried to fix all the stuff you mentioned and probably her pelvis is still too big, but I'm not sure if I want to fix that. Anything else you see that I don't?
Dude, first of all you need to get better at foreshortening, not rendering. Trying to hide turds by polishing them is not gonna help you in the long run.
Thanks bro, i'll work on that too.
Want to fix whatever I can before jumping too far into it.
are sure her tail should be there? why does it have to go under his/her leg? you already gave them the cat ears, believe in your audience they can connect the dots.
>...sigh inb4 getting roasted
Change the angle of the front girl's left shoulder, otherwise her arm looks really long.
Thanks! I do wish to draw doujinshi in the future, which explains i'm why I'm trying to learn screen tones, >>2356224 , but yeah, it does look rather pixelated doesn't it? i think i got the settings wrong or something. sigh
hehe yeah, that's kinda the point of an ahegao. I think it's hilarious, wish i had made her tears more watery though, kinda looks like she's dripping something else >_>
when is the best time of the day to post lewd stuff guys? i remember noticing that 19:00 CET was pretty good time to post stuff on facebooks art groups, is there a similar time for the tumblr crowd for instance?
The reason I put the tails there is because I thought the other way (as you did) would look more painful since they are both sitting exactly on their tailbones, and I think it's more natural if the tails go the other wai, and not like you have shown. The shin bone ends exactly at the crack of the butt, not as high as you have drawn imo. Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so.
Already noticed and corrected. Thanks anyway anon.
This is just a gesture right now, but which pose illicits a stronger response? Woman over the shoulder or woman kneeled on the ground next to his wang?
Trying to go for a royal self portrait painting of a conqueror.
Very nice sense of volume. I agree the vignetting of the cocks look off though, but maybe the jagged look is intentional. If they are supposed to be attached to actual people it would probably make more sense if they just faded out smoothly instead of having a outline where balls would attach to the body. I also think the pubic hair is a bit too light. I get that she hasn't got a full blown bush but it looks like transparent hair rather than, well hair. Really impressive drawing though!
Thanks anon. Here's a version with bigger boobies. Enjoy.
Right now, screentone clashes with your art. More specifically, with your brushes. Your lines and hair are still "soft" and have that sketch-like photoshop vibe to them. As suggested above, you could simply replace the screentone with a flat grey color and then slip a subtle texture onto it, so it becomes as soft as the rest of the pic.
People just want their fix of appealing art, so don't worry too much about mimicking some twenty year old doujin's style.
Appreciated, and I see your point.
Also, i've never heard of using screen tones on sketches, which is what i've been doing so far.
I've been watching some videos on inking techniques and i'll try to start inking before applying tones.
oh and yeah, my current goal is to draw an authentic looking doujinshi. you know what i mean? i dunno how else to explain it but yeah, i am trying to emulate the style.
Great job, as always. The sense of volume of the forms is really good.
Not sure if this is finished, so maybe you are still going to work on this, but I guess it's worth mentioning. I think you should add some rim lighting (like the one you used on her shoulders and tits, just a little more subtle) on the bottom of her ass and on her feet, since the light source seems to be coming slightly from the back and is not exactly above her head. Or at least make the bounce light from the ground affect that area a bit more.
The skin tone could use some more variation too. Maybe try adding some blush to her hands, feet, elbows and knees. I'm sure this will make the trick.
I don't know man. To me it does the trick. I can feel the sense of motion looking at those lines.
The perspective of the left is wrong, the belly and butt are strange.
The faces are very strange and ugly.
Colors are strange and texture and details idem.
Sorry dude, but the original pencil for this is 100% better
I said a MORE realistic approach, meaning he's not exaggerating the style so much (as other weeb artists in this thread do for example). He is keeping the proportions real, and this applies to the eyes too. I agree with you that the coloring is in too big of a contrast with the lineart, but you saying he should try more cartoonish eyes is pretty much bullshit. The eyes are in tone with the rest of this pic.
Not sure what this being a porn thread has to do with different draw styles.
Like the pose and the spontaneity of your gesture and coloring.
There are some slight perspective/anatomy issues. Check the redline.