Choose Your Own A/d/venture General

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Might as well post this while I'm at it.
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>>7416748
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>>7416749
Page 3/3.

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>>7416750
And the DLC (for real this time), which is stuck on v1.0 (most likely due to not having anything changed unlike the rest of the CYOA).

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Method- Familiar (-2)

Types- Happy, Conditioned (-2)

Boons- Normalize, Stretchy, Induce Fetish, Fertility, Sensitivity, Lactation, Triggers, Cum Production, Shared Senses (-9)
Immortality (-2)
Monsterification (-3)

Powers- Flesh Sculptor (-5)
Hive Mind (-3)

Drawbacks-
Laura (+2)
Rapey Slaves (+1)
Eldritch Horror (+2)
Sign of Influence, heart pupils (+1)
Unnatural Aura (+1)
Star Guardians & The Abyss (+4)

Pact- Slaanesh (+2)

Slaves- Fukawa Miyo, Jamie Smith (-2)


So, I'll nab my two slaves and then dig in somewhere. Find a nice deep hole to hide in, build up some defenses and traps for anyone who comes after me. From there, with Familiar and Hive Mind I should be able to keep myself hidden while sending my slaves out to do my dirty work, with backup from my familiar (who looks like Evangeline Athanasia Katherine MacDowell, plus a fat, knotty dog cock) to build my army. Once Fukawa-chan brings her family to me, and Jamie nabs a few guys with his hot new body, the fleshcrafting will begin in earnest. The extra slaves will be set to 'Happy' until they're in my lair, so I can take my time conditioning them one by one. The Happy state should also get them to tell me all their existing fetishes, worries, hopes, dreams, etc. to better manipulate them- ideally, I'll be able to not only condition them with pleasure but get them whatever it is they want out of life, doubling my mundane control.

All of them will be monster-ized once fully under my control, evenly split between combat models and infiltrators (monster types that can blend in naturally or use some form of illusion) and then the real work begins.

(cont.)

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Hopefully, at this point, the Star Guardians and creatures of The Abyss haven't found my lair yet. Ideally, they will have mostly been occupied fighting each-other. My monster girl teams will move out on them now, attempting to capture and control each as they go- and sending back more mundane slaves to add to my army. The Abyssal creatures will have to be dealt with one by one until the world is taken for Slaanesh (at which point I assume they'll come to pay me homage instead of attempting to kidnap me) but the magical girls- well, as soon as one pops up with some kind of Purification technique, my plan will go into action. My head infiltrator (probably Fukawa-chan) will pretend to be caught off guard by it, and be returned to her mortal form... but still loyal to me, for I have given her all her hearts desires. From there, she can give the Star Guardians a sob story about not having a life apart from me anymore and of course she doesn't know where my lair is, so they have to take her in. From there, assisted by my familiar, she should be able to take them over from the inside, one by one- and, if we're lucky, we can fake their 'loss' so the others never knew they were taken before I captured them, allowing her to do it over and over and over again. By the time they cotton on and she has to escape back to me, my immortal monstergirl army should be more than five magical girls can handle. If I'm very, very lucky, one or more of my new slaves can point me to Star Guardian Command and we can work out how to take it for ourselves.

(Oh, and this is for the Mindslaver CYOA in the last thread)

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Despite building an army, my plans for the alteration of the Earth would be more subtle- infiltrators in key positions, taking over political parties one by one, capturing popstar talents to slowly encourage the youth to indulge their urges more, slowly altering the law and perceptions until sex is no longer shameful, then futher, until it is celebrated. The army is for backup in case we're made, of course, and the option of just eventually controlling everyone on the planet is also open.

And should I ever lose? Well, as far as I can tell, my slaves won't lose their boons- including Immortality. By making them loyal without my control, they will likely come after me, no matter how deep I am buried.

Side Notes: My appearance would be of an Eldritch Succubus, built like an amazoness and a fertility goddess all in one, smooth purple flesh, wicked horns, inhuman eyes, powerful muscles. Three heaving, titanic breasts with fat, milky nipples, a wide, spankable ass, long, powerful legs ending in sharp hooves. A brace of varied tentacle-cocks, coming in all shapes and sizes, over three huge, constantly churning nuts. Pussy and asshole ridiculously tiny but infinitely stretchy, capable of enjoying cocks of any size. A belly either showing a powerful six pack of heavily gravid, depending on whether I've been knocked up with a new futa monstergirl recently or not.

Fukawa-chan will have her appearance changed at my whim... or hers. She will likely look different every day, and may even change monstergirl types often. The head of my Infiltrators, the Left Hand.

(cont. again. One last bit.)

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Jasmine, formerly Jamie- When he leaves me for the first time, he will look to be a beautiful woman... but under his skirt, his huge horsecock will be tied down and restrained, and his ass-pussy filled with a plug or my Familiar's cock, whenever she feels like it. He'll be training that ass-pussy for years, until it's more sensitive than any real pussy could ever be, without aid of the Sensitivity Boon... that'll be a special reward. And his cock will be able to feel pleasure, but only from his anal penetration. As the Right Hand, head of the combat division, it will be his job to protect me, and one day lead my army. On the day Slaanesh gifts me the Earth, I will grant him his desire, and his pussy will take its first breath- before I fill it with cock and knock him up with my children. He may or may not still want his cock at that point, and I shall leave it up to him.

(Aaaand done.)

>>7416782

Aaaand I just realized I fucked up. Slaves are 1pt/2, not -1 each. I think the totals even out anyway.

>>7416843
>>7416844
You really ought to do that thing with IrfanView that I told you about over on /tg/.
Or if you'd rather see how well it works first, upload the combined third-and-fourth page to your Google Drive and I'll upload it here with the filesize reduced.

>>7416850
ok sure I uploaded it to my google drive, work your magic.

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>>7416855
And here you go.

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>>7416861
Nice, looks so much better and its easier to post!

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>>7416864

>>7416865
Third page here --->>>7416861

Familiar
Conditioned Slave
Unaware Slave

Powers&Boons
Summoning
Telekinesis
Flesh Sculptor
Tireless Servant
Immortality
Combat Training

Drawbacks
Star Guardians
Cosmic Alignment
Sign of Influence - blood eyes

Pact
Holy Grail Pact - she looks like Saber (Arturia Pendragon) from Fate/stay night.

Slaves
Fukawa Miyo
Jamie Smith

With Fukawa's help, will enslave her friends to become my undying warriors. Her family will be my fucktoys, while Jamie will be my favorite Trap.

>>7416864
Anchor (collar)
Happy Slaves and Conditioned Slaves

>Boons
Libido
Personality Rewrite
Memory Rewrite
Normalize
Cum Addiction
Tireless Servant
Self Hypnosis

>Powers
Pocket Dimension (inter-dimensional whorehouse)
Alchemy (to make and sell drugs in my inter-dimensional whorehouse)

>Drawbacks
Mind Fucked
Vampirism

The idea is I'd be offering the premiere destination for earthly delights well outside of Earth's jurisdiction. Men and women of all ages would be drawn to my house and fuck and cum to their hearts' content, with a variety of stimulants and aphrodisiacs on sale to enhance to experience even more. The most beautiful guests will be "encouraged" to work as Slaves themselves.

The initial collaring process will take a few days to a week. During this time, the slave is placed in a state of constant confusion, as memories of their selves and their past lives are gradually dissolved. In its place, a powerful nymphomania will develop, and the girls will be placed under intense hypnotic suggestion in order to completely remove they last shreds of inhibitions of independent thought.

For most of the girls, it will be the most glamorous and hedonistic life they'll ever know. They may wonder how they got there, who they were before--they might even vaguely recognize themselves and their families in old photos. But every single one of them will agree they they are happier in slavery, and all the government officials who could shut me down are already addicted to my products.

>>7416864
So the siren song has to engage control in person right, not through a recording?

Because if it can be done via recording you can spread it through youtube and other sites, then expand to car radios and mobile stereos and takeover every mind on the planet in pretty short order while being far cheaper than the dedicated mass control + hive mind option.

>>7416861
>Familiar (12)
I want her to look like a spectral succubus.
>Unaware slave (11)
>Conditioned slave (10)
>Sensitivity (9)
>Normalize (8)
>Cum addiction (7)
>Mass control (4)
>Orgasm control (3)
>Fertility (2)
>Monsterfication (-1)
>Flesh sculptor (-6)

>Rapet slaves (-5)
>Power of chaos (-2)

>Pact of ascension (0)

>Fukawa Miyo

Okay . Someone tell me how I look due to Power of chaos.

>>7416861
I just relized a thing on Pact of ascenstion
>"Then I shall be born into your reality and claim the starts of your universe"
>starts

>>7416913
Kinda like a chicken fetus crossed with horse vomit.

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>>7416913
Here you go.

>>7416917
You're supposed to post a picture, dummy.

Are there any NTR cyoas?

Because there should be.

>>7416712
>Large
Gender Bender
>Were-Hog
become the were-futa

>>7416922
Your picture is worse than what I suggested.

>>7416865
>Hivemind
>Dollmaker
oh god thats a recipe for a horror story

>>7416930
Then why didn't you post a picture?

>>7416934
>Googling chicken fetus + horse vomit

>>7416924
There are. I just don't have them.

>>7416979
Where's that mystery box senpaitachi

>>7417017
If there was one I don't have it. It wasn't presented with a mystery box as far as I know, the last line seemed to just be saying you could reject playing.

>>7417043
Shame, the second page is the best one.

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>>7417017
>>7417043
Here you go.

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>>7417050
>read options
>no option to go to other side with broken waifu

>>7416979
>>7417050
Refuse the offer then NTR some medieval nobles and peasants with my godly powers.

Oh, wait .. what was the moral again?

>>7416861
still taping into abyssal energy.

>>7417050
>perfect restful existence
>everyone happy
>you are assured a happy life free of tragedy
>the other inhabitants aren't
>time to NTR this realm

>>7417133
>can't combine loli with well endowed to be the supreme oppai loli
It's fucking shit.

Any ideas on how to make an actual game like this?

>>7417157
Slap up a bit of write faggotry and cram it into a Twine or Ren'py game
Stolen art from a booru optional

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>>7417133
Starting with 20 alcohol

Race:
>Kitsune -6
Body:
>Jacked -1
>Feminine -1
>Lifetime (free) + I ain't dying yet! -3
Special:
>Sweet -1
>Mechanic -2
>Weaponmaster + greatness -4
Hero:
>Catgirl -2

>>7416866
Question about the "High Libido" quirk in >>7416748. Does the "have sex at least X times" basically boil down to making her orgasm that many times? If not, what counts as having sex once (as far as this quirk is concerned)?

>>7416913
>>7416922
I suppose I'll make a Villainy build and try Chaos Russian Roulette too...

>>7417157
There are a two examples, and even /d/ Pill's CYOA author made a small twine game.

As-is, both are submissive games presented as stages where choosing a path advances stats with some special effects onto your appearance screen.

>>7417115
>>7417128
The only acceptable answers.

>>7417133
Starting with 20 alcohol.

Race:
>Succubus -5

Body:
>Well-endowed -2

Special:
>Sweet -1

Hero:
>Succubus -3

>>7416924
>NTR
Only acceptable if you're the bull

>>7417289
Why do you care about what other people jack off to?

>>7417296
Because making absolute statements that are totally unenforcible but that provide me with a sense of superiority is my fetish.

>>7416864
>means of control
Telephaty 11
>Slave Types
unaware 10
>boons
Libido 9
rewrite memory 8
rewrite personality 7
normalize 6
induce fetish 5
immortality 3
tireless servant 2
self hypnosis 1
charm 0
cum production -1
cum addiction -2
sensitivity -3
stretchy -4
>powers
planeswalker -10
telekinesis -13
illusionist -14
>Drawbacks
Eldritch horror -12
mind fucked -10
Slave limit -8
rapey slaves -7
short leash -6
sign of influence -5
vampyrism -3
slavers pact 0

Time to ravage the multiverse as a totally normal eldritch horror

>>7417310
maybe you should turn that fetish into a CYOA

>>7416865
For monsterization can we create new types of monster girls? I want a dark magical girl monster girl type.

>>7417219
Figure 3 for the ability to be a god among men l.
Pregnancy 2 in order to ensure my ability as a super-bull.
Legal Department 1 so I can literally choose a couple, rape a kid into the wife, and leave them a broken wreck.

I can literally ruin anyone I want through a good hard dicking.

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>>7417484
3

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>>7417490
5 - final

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>>7417417
>>7417419
But why post a two-page version of a CYOA when a single-page one exists?

>>7416864
>>7416865
>>7416861
Just wondering, Is there any consequences for failing to fulfill pacts?

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>>7417538

>>7417525
I haven't seen the single page version before this; thanks.

>>7417540
One would think loosing access to the extra points and the traits associated with it.
Other than that, given the theme, braking a contract with literal demons would mean the forfeiture for your soul and you becoming the slave.

>>7417541
>>7417538
Cute.

>>7417050

Medieval adventure if it has monsters like dragons and such.

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>>7417580

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>>7417589

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>>7417592

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>>7417580
>>7417582
Here, have another single-page version.

>>7417219
>Pregnancy 1
Free money and no responsibility YAY
>Role-taking 2
Secure access to any target I want, celebrities too
>Drain 3
stealing traits and abilities is just too good to pass and living with the target i'll have easy access to something they hold dear

Still, legal department and charm are really good options too.

Any news from pervy super person anon?

Mainly just want to know if the cyoa is abandoned or if it is still in development

>>7417633
Still working on it, last I heard.

>>7416864
I mean, the obvious solution to having two really short pages is to just add more stuff to fill them out. Theres no vore based drawback yet!

Also, since you die if you have vampire and don't eat someone's soul every week, aren't you almost certainly going to die if you ever wind up in super prison? Soul devouring is a power that would be suppressed, after all.

And in Star Guardians/The abyss, change "taping" to "tapping".

>>7417633
I'm here!
Still working on it and coming along steadily! Crossing my fingers I'll have the update out this month.

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>>7416864
Method: Sigil -2

Slave Types: Happy and conditioned -2

Boons: Sensitivity, Lactation, Normalize, Stretchy, Induce Fetish, Cum Addiction, Immortality, Cum Production, and Monsterification. -12

Powers: Planeswalker, Fleshsculpter, and Alchemy. -12

Drawbacks: Cosmic Alignment, Laura, Rapey Slaves, Signs of Influence (dark red heart pupils), Power of Chaos, Unnatural Aura, Star Gaurdians, and The Abyss. +14

Pact: Pact of Hell +2

Slaves: Jamie Smith

Total: 0 +Someone in the thread picks my form. I'd like a feminine form.

Pic related - First slave after Jamie.

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>>7417525
>Dark Elf
>Conquered
>Teenager
>Terrified
>Submissive
Elf slave captured by me in the war, fairly standard stuff
>Metal Shackles
>Adore Rune
>Excited Rune
>Maid Outfit
This is where the appeal lies; she's knows she's a slave that I've taken from her life and forced to serve me, but every now and then I'll praise her for a job well done, or order her to kneel before me while I sit and just stroke her ears for a little while, and it just feels so GOOD for her.
>Master Bedroom (on a blanket at the foot of the bed)
She knows I could just order her into bed, but I won't.
>Cold
>Firm
She knows she needs to do a good job, and then when she does she'll be treated accordingly. And when she doesn't...
>Pillories
>Spanking
>Isolation
No permanent damage, and even the physical pain I dish out is something she can probably equate with pleasure. But punishment means no words or praise or gentle touches and that means no magically reinforced pleasure.
>Literature
>Mathematics
>History
To give her something to converse with me when the mood takes me. I'll probably have her explain a topic to me as best she can while I run my finger along her ears or down her spine and see how long before she loses focus, and then see what she does to avoid punishment when she realizes she's erred.
>No employment
Being emotionally manipulated is a full time job!
>Journal
>Free Time
>Furniture
Time and comfort for her to think on what her life used to be, what it is now, and oh god why does masters touch and voice feel so good when she should hate me.

The goal of the exercise is to see how long it takes before she cracks and begs for more attention, or tries crawling into my bed at night, or generally humps my leg, at which point all restraint goes out the window and she gets the brunt of however long its been worth of pent up elflust.

[spoiler]Of course realistically I wouldn't have the patience for any of that and I'd be way too soft hearted anyway, but its fun to pretend.[/spoiler]

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>>7417768

Here ya go.

>>7416748
How does Let Go! interact with Futanari? Or if you take a waifu in Be The Girl mode?

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>>7417417

Dark Elf who is a family inheritance maid added a conquest from centuries ago, so she'd already be an Elder and quite Submissive, but also Friendly. Given that she's served for so long, she's since long ago acquired an Intricate Choker, I'll have a Fertility Rune added on.

She's a maid so she wears a Maid Outfit, alternatively she will be given a Harem Dress.

She'll be treated with Respect for her age and service, and since she has no will left to fight after so many years, she should be treated with Firmness, which means light punishments like Spanking and being Reprimanded.

She'll have been well taught in the ways of being a Courtesan and a Craftsman, but will also be Literate. This would mean a Management position due to her seniority, being the Head Elf Maid.

She'll have a journal, fine jewelry, elven trinkets, a warm cloak (best for that harem outfit), free time, outings, and furniture. She's given a lot of autonomy. She can Cleanse and Heal, and is learning Treatment.

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In case any of you fucks like lesbians, I'm making a yuri CYOA at the moment and have a design document that has a suggestion box:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jEIhgnDAVtiKR60HMK8smKhecnq5N9BmTyPaD_2LYeQ/edit?usp=sharing

Very early stages, so there's not much there besides a portion of the first section, flavor text, the meta options, and the basic outline of the rest of the sections

>>7416902

From the sound of it, they need to hear it in person for initially capturing them, but recordings can be used to maintain it.

>>7417999
>>7417525

Used the split part not the one picture, missed the living arrangements.


She'd have her own room for storage of her possessions and alone time, but I prefer she sleep in the master bedroom with me.

>>7416861
>>7416864
>>7416865
>MEANS OF CONTROL
Contract (0) [14]
>SLAVE TYPES
Unaware slave (-1) [13]
>BOONS
Sensitivity (-1) [12]
Libido (-1) [11]
Rewrite Memory (-1) [10]
Rewrite Personality (-1) [9]
Normalize (-1) [8]
Stretchy (-1) [7]
Induce Fetish (-1) [6]
Immortality (-2) [4]
Orgasm Control (-1) [3]
Tireless Servant (-1) [2]
Self-Hypnosis (-1) [1]
Shared Senses (-1) [0]
Hive Mind (-3) [-3]
Cum Production (-1) [-4]
Maid Training (-1) [-5]
Fertility (-1) [-6]
Objectification (-1) [-7]
>POWERS
Flesh Sculptor (-5) [-2]
Alchemy (-1) [-13]
>DRAWBACKS
Cosmic Alignment (+2) [-11]
Laura (+2) [-9]
Rapey Slaves (+1) [-8]
Sign Of Influence (+1) [-7]
Star Guardians (+2) [-5]
The Abyss (+2) [-3]
Unnatural Aura (+1) [-2]
>PACTS
Ascension (+2) [0]
>SLAVES
Fukawa Miyo

The plan is to use alchemy by giving people inducing fetish, rewrite personality/memory, orgasm control, libido or any combination that only the guy that shows up once per month can solve.

for example, it should be easy enough to add orgasm control on someone by potion with the added increased libido should drive people crazy enough to sell their soul.

All failure options are acceptable to me, either i get send to super prison, get tentacle fucked for eternity or submit to another Herald. I prefer being submissive or being fucked more anyway.)

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>>7418001
See: >>>/tg/53205498 >>>/tg/53205630

>>7418008
and how would you fight star guardians? first fight and you go to super jail, lol

>>7418022
Ask to be allowed to reform, manipulate/MC your way into a deal with them, then slowly corrupt them from the inside.

You're a mastermind, not some retarded punch hero. Why would you stoop to their game?

>>7418029
you can't manipulate or control them(it's written in the rules), you need fighters on your side. Immortal maid is good but not enough...

>>7418034
You can manipulate them, but you can't MC them. There's nothing in the rules that says you can't just outthink and manipulate them.

>>7417999

Also fucked up on gifts: she'll have a journal, warm cloak, free time, and outings.

>>7417525
How many runes can you put on the collars?

>>7417525

Dark Elf
Inherited
Adult
Submissive and friendly
Intricate choker
Possess Rune
Cordial Rune
Casual Clothing
Servant's Quarter
Respectful
Firm
Reprimand, Pillories and Isolation
Literature, History and Combat
Guard
Journal, Free Time, Furniture and Warm Cloak
No magic

>>7417791
This is a good plan & I support it.

>>7416864
>>7416865
>>7416861

I have a build idea!
Telepathy- really because it's pretty much the only one that can be done subtly and the lack of real drawbacks is well worth the extra point or two over picking anything else. (and it plays much more nicely with the other drawbacks I intend to pick)

Type: Conditioned- Really this is the one that requires the least mental gymnastics to make sense to me and makes it easier to understand how the powers work. Obeying orders gives a rush of dopamine.

Boons: Sensitivity, Libido, Stretchy, Orgasm Control, Immortality, Self-Hypnosis, Cum production, Monsterfication, fertility, Induce fetish, fuckable urethra

Powers: Expanded mind, Flesh Sculptor,

Drawbacks: Slave Limit, Laura, Short Leash, Rapey Slaves, Superstition,

Comfy pact

Free Slave: Gwedillth

But anyway I have no intention of keeping a massive harem or anything (That sounds like work) but I can basically give commands to anyone in eyesight, up to 3-4 at a time. As far as they can tell, I'm simply unusually charismatic with excellent leadership skills. The trick to using my powers with superstition isn't to convince people to believe in magic, but to convince them it's all science. If I wanna transform someone just put them under while I perform the "surgery". Give someone a sugar pill and tell them it increases cum production, etc. Being a super genius that produces some genuine scientific breakthroughs will make it all the more believable. Hopefully Susie gives me slight leeway in ambitions that are in the pursuit of further comfiness. Because inventing stuff is pushing it, but if I make comfy inventions like say... a food replicator or a self-driving car with a bed for an interior, she'd probably be on board.

>>7418087
why you don't just take familiar? It's like telepathy but costs 2 points and give you free self-gypnosis?

So I was messing around with an html copy of
>>7414983
(technically an older version).

Anyway I've got a working one but I cannot post it, it converts to an image with 17K pixels and the site hates it. Anyone now a good converter that might do a better job (or shrink it)?

>>7417538
>>7417541
>We don't get to choose how big his ass is, on a scale from "normal for a dude" to "What the fuck, is he on hormones or something?"
What even is this.

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Another unreasonable bady standard for women.

>>7418200
The neck freaks me out

>>7418200
what the fuck

>>7418203
>>7418204
>>7418205
Wow

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does anyone have a condensed version of "branching heart"? My version is 19 pictures long. If people want it and no one has a shorter version I'll absolutely post it since it's so good

>>7418222
Are you missing some? Branching Heart is 28 pages, I believe.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0Bxbrh3Q2CTiydDVRZHZROF96ODA

>>7418001
Godspeed, anon.

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>>7418228
yeah i am, i'm missing half of page 3, and all of page 4 and the detailed version of those girls. I wonder if I just have an old version. Thanks man!

You are a bunch of horny assholes, and thats why I stay part of this.
Still, this is pretty weak if you want to offend people. And fuck yes I can do better.

>>7418247
offend people? do better at what?

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>>7417133
Start 20

Race
Brown elf -5

Body
Feminine -1
Lustful -2
Well-endowed -2
+insanity edition -2
Lifetime -3
+not dying yet -3

Special
General magic FREE

Hero
Niilo -1


TOTAL 1

>>7417085
>No option to fuck her completely aheago in front of her divine boyfriend

>>7418299
Go back to your containment thread.

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>>7417133
20
succubus -5
lustful - free
well-endowed -2
lifetime + upgrade -6
chaos magic -4
wells -3

0 points left

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>>7418142
scratch that, I fiddled with some settings and scaled it down a bit (hopefully its still legible). I'll need to find a better solution to this at some point if I'm going to post bigger ones here without splitting it into multiple pages (which I'll probably have to do anyway)

anyway

I'm interested in doing more work on this one in terms of adding new things and rebalancing, any feedback (including simple typos and whatnot) would be appreciated.

>>7417892
Very feminine, very pretty. Good choice.

>>7418325
someone needs to make a site where this is interactive

>>7418357
it has a built in calculator in the html, which I obviously can't post. Once I get a next version with some more things I'll be looking for a place to upload that

>>7418325
note that lactofork version is a .png, which is a better compressive format for files with text and no pictures (specifically, its good when you don't have subtle color differences, or 51 different shades of grey).

I would say first focus on updating your version to the lactofork, since its the most up-to-date version, then add to it from there. Branching from older versions is bad form.

The number ranges on each tile are unreadable, png should fix that. Your current point bonuses arent in the right position in the blocks, is that intentional to show they're new?

I would recommend leaving out the point values for new additions, as a reminder to do a proper balance pass later. For balance rubric, I recommend (minor inconvenience -> major inconvenience -> significantly life altering)

To address your new additions:
Dismembered should suppress invulnerable or else its free points. Honestly speaking, gurochan is a straight power up with no real downside compared to dismembered, once dismembered properly suppresses invuln.

Hunted: "ever month" -> "every month"
Hunted: "Weakness hunters" -> "Weakness, hunters"

Contagious: "Inhuman Exposure" -> "Inhuman. Exposure"

Multiple Birth: "three time" -> "Three times"

Didn't look through the powers since I cant tell which are new additions.

>>7418092

Because I decided to play it safe and not underestimate the 'lewd and embarrassing pranks' drawback. I already have to deal with Laura for a day a week.

>>7418385
I tried several file types and that worked better for getting it below the site's file size cap, but yeah I noticed the text is a bit off now.

the older version was the only html one I found, a guy last thread also said the html lactofork ones are gone. So sadly I didn't have much choice.

I'll be fixing the typos in a minute

as to the powers, I expanded on metamorphosis, added Tooms (random thing I thought of looking at it), and I readded a bunch of lactofork ones.

I might split the dismembered and gurochan and limit them to cannot have and must have invulnerable respectively to control. I was thinking of doing that already

>>7416864
>>7416865
>>7416866
With hive minded and telepathy, my hive minded slaves can all use telepathy at the same time to enslave multiple people at the same time - even if those slaves are separated by great distances.

If I choose the familiar instead of telepathy, can the familiar do the same? If not I suppose I must take telepathy to conquer the world.

Start:
> [+14]
Drawbacks:
> Permanent Changes [+1]
> Dollmaker [+2]

> Means: Telepath [3]
> Types: Unaware [1]

Boons [12]:
> Normalize [1]
> Hive Mind [3]
> Mass Control [3]
> Tireless Servant [1]
> Self-Hypnosis [1]
> Immortality [2]

Power
> Flesh Sculptor [5]

Ta da! Saved the world. I'm a rapidly spreading mind-virus of friendship, perfect health, and immortality. And sunburn, I guess. Sure, it'll be a little weird as I become the axis around which all human civilization revolves, but it could be a lot worse, couldn't it?

Ah, but I'm three points short.
> Power of Chaos [+3]

How shall I be punished for my hubris?

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1/3

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>>7418425
2/3

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>>7418425
>>7418427
3/3

>>7418413
Manually re-add the lactofork ones? I know its a pain in the ass, but I'll appreciate it at least. Maybe if you ask around on TG someone has the old lactofork HTML code.

Try a different image program? If you want to pastebin the HTML code you have now, I'll check around for you. I guarantee that .png is ultimately better, as evidenced by how lactofork is 2MB

Tentacles:"activationYou" -> "activation, you"
Tooms: Eh... You mean you can fit through anything your head can fit through, like a rat? Or just go full slime-girl mode? Not everyone watches the X-Files, try to avoid pop-culture references (and yes, the GURPS stuff on wizard is a known existing problem, ask /tg/ about that one)
Ron Paul: I'm pretty sure this was a joke/placeholder name back in lactofork, so now is your chance to fix that and rename it.

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>>7418084
Thanks anon! Have an elf.

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>>7418325
Wow...that's illegible. Can't see shit captain!

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>>7417525
>Dark elf
>Inheritance
Owned by my late uncle, who wanted to make sure I had a friend to play with whenever I'd visit him out in the countryside.
>Adult
Four years older than me.
>Friendly, Charismatic, Obsessive
Since I used to be her best friend, my slave has no problems being friendly with me. Years of conversing with my uncle has made her inherit some of his charisma. She still views me as her little brother to some extent, so she acts extremely protective towards me.
>Intricate Choker
>Clear Rune
Much of her work requires concentration instead of physical labor.
>Fertility Rune
While she would never say it to my face, she desperately wants to bear my children, and wouldn't mind having a nicer ass as well.
>Casual Clothing, Formal Dress
Normal clothes for running basic errands. A wide variety of formal dresses, with many coming from the Orient.
>Master bedroom
She can snuggle up next to me every night.
>Respectful
>Appeasing
>Reprimand
Rarely needed.
>Literature, Mathematics, History
My uncle decided to teach her how to read, so these tasks will be much easier for her.
>Management
Despite being a greeter in the past, my slave is well-suited towards management. She's in charge at a textile factory owned by my family.
>Journal, Fine Jewelry, Free Time, Outings

>>7418385
>note that lactofork version is a .png, which is a better compressive format for files with text and no pictures (specifically, its good when you don't have subtle color differences, or 51 different shades of grey).
Ok you don't know what you're talking about. PNG is an uncompressed format used for lossless saving of images, similar to TGA, TIFF and BMP. The good thing about PNG is that it has an easy transparency option unlike TGA etc which have to use the alpha channel to make something transparent and something that supports that.

JPG is a viariable compressed image format where you can choose just how much you want to compress the image. The more compression the worse the image will start to look with strange splotches and colors, this is called a JPG artifact and you can see it easily on red with medium compression. There are plenty of programs that can take a file like a PNG and control the JPG compression during conversion (such as save as...jpg) allowing you control

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>>7418422
a MIND VIRUS
that NEVER dies
and theres no escape?

There can be only one body for this punishment.

>>7418431
It has two separate star gate references, and the xfiles is more mainstream, its a more realistic Mr Fantastic, he fits through a vent opening that's like 8x12 inches in the beginning of the first episode he's in. I was okay with the quoted wizard/gurps power as a point of reference, I play D and D, but if I think of some more direct quantification, I'll switch it out. The Ron Paul one is a joke, fake campaign slogan for him on /b/ was that he would make anime real, I wasn't planning on touching it, but if it bothers people maybe I should.

I'm sure your right on the PNG, I literally threw stuff at it until I found something that would work. The issue I had with the PNGs is that reducing the physical size 80% to fit the sites range tripled the file size, using the JPG raised it only 50% and kept it within what I could post. I'm trying to avoid picking up lots of programs, I'm not the most computery and I'm a little surprised I even remembered enough html to edit that one (I took a class on it 10 years ago).

I am slowly readding the lactofork ones, its hard to recognize the missing stuff because the order isn't the same. I know there's a lot under incontinence that was flushed out (pun intended) but I was considering that low priority.

>>7418443
Ifran view and fastone are good programs to do that if you're not using photoshop. irfran? ifran? is free not sure about the other.

Lactofork is somewhat difficult to read due to being smaller then the other Dring images. Lactofork is 1274 x 9109 or so and the last dring is 1465 x 9360. Try to make this image like 1450ish.

>>7418443
.png isn't UNCOMPRESSED, its LOSSLESS compression. Which means that yes, if your image is photorealistic and has 10,000 different color shades in it, then it'll be a large filesize and jpeg's lossy compression would be better. However, if your colors are 256 bit, such as in Enchanted Rings, then it can still greatly compress it and in fact handles better than jpeg. Once again: lactofork >>7414983 is proof of that, since it is 2 megs while your version is nearly 4.

>>7418444
I deserved this.

>>7418452
His version is also nigh unreadable, same with lactofork for having smaller dimensions.

>>7418452
This anon is right. pngs are lossless compression, yet >>7418443 >>7418451 the rest is correct, so ymmv.

>>7416861
>>7416864
>>7416865
Let's get the pact with Slaanesh done first. Your perverse glory shall consume the world, until it is worthy of your perfection!

>Pact
ascension: [16]

>Control
Sigil: [14] Mark of Slaanesh, obviously.

>Slave Type
Conditioned: [13] They will all learn to enjoy their new purpose.

>Boons
Libido [12]
Rewrite memory [11]
Induce fetish [10]
Gender swap [9]
Twinning [8]
Immortality [6]
Tireless servant [5]
Combat Training [2]
Monstrification [-1]
Rewrite personality [-2]

>Powers
Summoning [-3]
Expanded mind [-6]

>Drawbacks
Deus Vult [-5]
Sign of influence [-4]
Power of Chaos [-1] I would greatly appreciate a form resembling the servants of Slaanesh but I cannot force you.
Unnatural Aura [0]

>Free slave
Fukawa Miyo: She will make a find servant of Slaanesh.

My intent is simple. Bring the entire world to hedonism. Fukawa being perverse as she is, along with her anticipated loyalty, will be more than worth of the greatest gift I can give her, the form of an immortal daemonette whom requires nothing more than something to relieve her unending lust. From here it would progress slowly at first, gradually gathering more slaves and breaking them to my will, rewriting their memories if needed. As numbers grow those that I find worthy, and have been conditioned to the point where their loyalty will never be a question, will be given the same treatment of Fukawa, becoming my guardians and personal toys.

When the nuns start coming for me I will have an elite guard that can be by my side at any moment. It will be glorious to take these nuns captive, enslave them, and rewrite their memories, replacing their faith in Catholicism with devotion to the Prince of Pleasure.

Slaves would be sent back to world to spread their hedonistic ways. It may take a long time be my daemons and I are immortal so time is on our side.
Got near character limit so at to rush at the end.

>>7418449
Forgot about the stargate references, but I think the context is clear enough there. I personally haven't seen x-files though. If its a vent 8x12 then it sounds like he's like a rat, which can fit through anything bigger than their skull by dislocating their bones and muscles.

Ron paul thing seems out of place to me, and I'd say to nix the DnD references not because they're pop-culture (they totally fit in here and on /tg/ and DnD is timeless) but rather because as /tg/ will readily point out, lactofork's upgrade Archmage when defined as lvl 20 wizard in DnD terms has effectively limitless power due to DnD spell-cheesing mechanics or something or another, invalidating most other perks.

You could say theres a DESPERATE need for the incontinence tree. I'm too tired for better puns.

As one other minor change, you could change the text color of the random ranges to make them more readable, at least that was their issue in lactofork: not enough contrast with the black background.

>>7418485
He goes into smaller spaces than that, I thought of it off the flexibility issue because it was a physical (not magic) stretching. I'll try to clean up the text for it to make that more clear or drop it if i can't get it to look nicer.

I deliberately didn't readd the archmage level, level 20 is world shattering power and it seemed too cheap at 21 points. I did things like that readding a number of his points, I didn't always keep the extent of his detail where I thought it wasn't useful (impairment for example)

I enjoy puns and I still chuckled.

I'm not planning on messing with that much technical because I know the readability issue is from converting it to an image for here, the html looks good. I'll fix that later.

I'm more curious if people want particular content in it, my interest in doing this was to make it a lot bigger.

>>7416865
>Means of control
Telepathy
>Slave types
Mindless slave
>Boons
Libido (increase to max)
Lactation (breast size G, 1/2 liter production)
Futanari (8-12 inch avg.)
Mass Control
Tireless Servant
Self-Hypnosis
Cum Production (2 liters)
>Drawbacks
Permanent Changes
Rapey Slaves
And because why not:
Power of Chaos

Truly this is the epitome of /d/.

>>7418325
Loadsamoney (-8)
Full Time (-2)
Faithful (0)
Weakness

Invulnerability (-9)
Eternal Youth (-16)
Easy Change (-19)
Occupation, Gravure Model (-15)
Both Sets of Piercings (-13)
Voyeurism, Masturbation (-11)
Bestiality (-9)
Lewd Aura, Wide Aura (-4)
Incontinence (-2)
Animally Fertile (0)

Futanari (-10)
Vanilla (-15)
Anal Plug (-13)
Humiliation (-11)
Contagious Transformation (-9)
Lactation. Public Utility (-5)
Exhibitionism (-3)
Permanent (0)

>>7418326
This one is easy as hell
>Collar
>5 irrelevant powers and bimbo
>Pick Ellen
>Remove collar from Ellen
>engage in sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of reproduction
>marry Ellen
>???
>PROFIT!!!!

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>>7418525
You're the one on the bottom. Your slaves seem to really appreciate your mouth, too.

>>7418498
Original author's instructions on how to save the cyoa as an image from html: "If you want picture versions of your modifications, I recommend doing what I do on firefox: resize the window until you get the size you want, press Shift+F2, and type "screenshot --fullpage". This can also be used to save builds as pictures."

If he got into spaces smaller than his head, then he squeezed his brain. I think that kills people or at least concusses them. Possible text: "Your bones are now rubber, and dislocating joints doesn't hurt. have fun"

I can't think of many drawbacks to add that weren't in lactofork. Maybe some gigantism stuff? "You shrink down to the size of a hummingbird, all sounds seem louder" which can have branches for vore and insertion.
Inflation drawback that makes cum multiply in volume inside you and doesnt come out as easy?
Theres no scat stuff though I think its better that way.
Punishment that makes you a fugitive for a month. If you get caught, you're sent to the cow farm or sex factory for a week?

>>7418543
These fools keep choosing power of chaos. They must be masochists.

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>>7416748
>>7416749
>>7416750
>Be the Randomly Comparable Girl mode
In return for picking quirks first and compensation second, I'm taking 10 for sure regardless of the reward.
3, 13, 22, 28, 29, 38, 48, 51, 62, 64,
>Delusional +1
This'll be a little bit more trouble than usual but not all That new for me.
>Magical Girl +1
Is this the real life or is this fantasy? Because delusions.
>Cuckquean
Misspellings and all. Guess I am kind of a bitch but I suppose dragging innocent souls into threesomes to dom them all can work out off this.
>Weapon Obsession
Probably comes with the magical girl thing. Tier 99 though; worth the points and bet make sure I don't pull the trigger while riding the barrel or something.
>Yandere
I think I have a problem. The problem is loving too much.
>Super Masochist
This will probably explain the magical girl profession details. Damn, take it outside, pull the trigger and burn my nips.
>Serial Killer
The problem might be disposing of bodies more than loving too much now. At least assassination pays well.....
Supernatural side-job that results in me getting roughed up and gives me a body-count. I think I might be turning into a fucked up kind of homicidal honeypot killer.
>Emasculation
I like both sides of the coin really so this'll be fun.
>Crybaby
This is entirely out of place and I'll bet some dead people paid more for it.
>Non-Sensitive
Getting off to weapon-induced pain has probably dulled the normal stuff. And my nerve endings. This isn't slaneshi at all.

Compatability mode means no bonuses here, but that's 8 points after the -2 for Tier99, and Shallow As Fuck brings it to 6 since the next bit didn't really have a good fit.

+3 points though, that's nice.

I'll just take my build from yesterday >>7412063 and add those three points into Power Magic.

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>>7418556

>>7418546
I think there was a cum volume increase I forgot to put back in. I'll see what I can come up with for for the rest of that. There was a cow farm bit that was awkwardly set up attached to lactation, I didn't put it back in when I rebuilt that section. Having it as a punishment makes a lot of sense though.

oh yeah, so the main structural thing I added was the dedicated drawbacks to a couple of the open-ended powers (metamorphosis and magical realm). I'm curious what people think of those sets

>>7416864
So do people ever stop being slaves if theyre controled by Familiar telepathy? It doesnt realy say if theyre slaves forever or if it ends when you stop focusing or leave them.

What would happen if you take Familiar and Hivemind? Could the slaves have their own familiar or just use its telepathy like normal? Couldn't I potentialy do that with mass control and have my hivemind telepathicly spread itself to everyone a slave can see and through them and have it grow at an increadible rate?

I'm not trying to be a little cheeser here, just want to know what the limits are.

14

contract 14
unaware slave 13

boons:
rewrite personality 12
body swap 11
tireless servent 10
combat training 7
charm 6
fertility 5
monstrification 2

powers:
pocket dimension -1
expanded mind -4
telekinesis -7

drawbacks:
cosmic alignment -5
sign of influence -4 (violet iris with heart shaped pupils)
unnatural aura -3

nemesis pact 0 (choosing you man >>7418480 )

Slave: Jamie Smith

I am the antithesis of you and I will do everything in my power to stop the world from falling into chaos and debauchery, and away from the light of the Emperor.

Using the monster transformation boon I will turn my most trusted slaves into living saints capable of hunting down and killing your daemons.

Jamie will be the first one, willingly signing a contract with me to turn him into a female living saint. I will use him as my right hand man and example when recruiting others. The potential recruits will be rigorously tested to make sure that I can trust them to hunt the daemonic scourge and not fall victim to it.

All recruits are made into slaves, serving as an elite military corps roaming the world to hunt and exterminate chaos. Those who prove themselves loyal and competent will be rewarded with a powerful and hungry new body.

My pocket dimension serves as a central hub. A safe space to sleep, train, fraternize, and redeploy once ground slaves locate a daemon cult.

>>7416866
Can we get a merge power or boon so we can merge or slaves with other slaves either fully or partially? Really want to throw some conjoined or FTP changes into my slave mix.

>>7418568
Regarding magical realm uh... I prefer lactofork one. Low-fantasy is poo, High-fantasy is best laifu. I do like the trees you added, although magical realm is set in "medieval" time, so the people wouldn't have a modern mentality in the first place.

Rape beasts is probably more of a +2, maybe only +1 when you consider the alternative to being raped is being eaten. But thats a balance pass issue.

Still should fix the benefits to lactofork ones before you make trees for them. I will point out that lactofork is the official, sanctioned successor to enchanted rings, so its canon.

>>7418588
I was a little surprised this version specified a modern mentality, but the more I thought about it, the more I realized that them having a medieval mentality was legitimately awful, that's actually what gave me the idea to build that tree. Basically I figured I was better off letting people keep the sane people as a base and gain points if they want no toilets and people trying to treat diseases with leaches. I was thinking of restructure the magical realm to be closer to the lactofork version, what's in that is what this older copy had and I kind of wanted the high fantasy option. I honestly had just gotten lazy with that one, but I'll do that

I was thinking with the rape beast that they were more active in hunting people than the baseline as justification for the 3, but I think you're right, I'll drop it to 2

>>7417133
>Kitsune
>Lustful
>Weaponmaster [Greatness]
>Gen Magic [spec]
>Power Magic
>Niilo

>>7418584
Oh we will have some glorious fun Sabathiel...

>>7418480
Also I still need someone to send me a picture. May I be blessed with a form befitting of a devoted disciple of She who Thirsts.

>>7418598
Oh shit, you're right, this one does specify modern mentality... you added that, didn't you? Honestly a modern mentality makes 0 sense for a low fantasy medieval realm. We believe in science only because we have universal basic education and books. We don't distrust strangers and foreigners (as much) only because we can literally cross the globe in 14 hours. You would need some sort of magitech society that emulates modern advances like the printing press, education, long-distance travel etc. in order for the modern mentality to not royally screw over a medieval society. Labor rights and capitalism cannot exist under a feudal government where serfs are poor as dirt.

Solution: High fantasy magic-based technology.

DO ITTTTT

>>7418613
male or female?
- your mortal enemy <3

also if you want you can choose my form

>>7418620
naw it was in this copy I found, I did actively decide to keep it though. I'm aware of the institutional issues in that, but I figured it was safer to not open that box because most sci fi and fantasy tropes make no sense for similar reasons. Right now I'm leaning toward attaching a power to it for higher magic or sci fi, because it needs that but making it more like the lactofork one would require grafting more of the new identity structure his had, that I honestly didn't care for.

>>7417589
>Prison Design

Well there's a clear best choice: The magical prison. Hehe, it's gonna be awesome! The place will be an enormous maze with a sort of cult-dungeon theme. The whole place will be alive, and obey my whims. It'll be able to redirect prisoners to any part of the facility under my command, so even if they break out they won't be able to get anywhere ^w^. And the place will be staffed by only the cutest monsters girls and monster boys! Of course, they won't be nearly as nice to the prisoners as they will be to me ;). Plus, I get to learn some basic magic as a bonus! Anyway, that'll cost me ten points, but it'll be well worth it. That leaves me with 290.

>Prison size

Well, the heroes are being kind enough to awaken my powers, so I should pay them back in kind by being as helpful as possible! I'll pick the large size, so my prison can hold literally infinite prisoners, from all across the multiverse! Thankfully, the maze-like, reality warping structure means that I won't have to walk for eternity to get around. That'll cost me thirty points, but I don't mind it! Still leaves me with 260, so no problem there.

>Prison type

When I said every criminal, I meant it! Sure, a co-ed prison means that there might be some nastiness that goes on between prisoners, but I'm sure the staff can handle it just fine... Or maybe encourage it ;) Plus, picking one gender would've cost me points, so... Not really worth it.

Cont. below

>>7418663


>Vice Warden

So I don't have to run everything myself?! Sweet! I can kick back and relax while... Let me see... Ooo, Olivia Archibald! She's a mage, so she can help me learn magic! According to this, she's also lustful and kicks ass at combat but... Huh, what's this about a tendency to use enchantments? "Olivia will regularly put perverted enchantments on the prisoners... The enchantments can be anything from shrinking to turning them into mind controlled slaves?!" Holy shit! "The enchantments usually take between one week and one month to wear off," Well that's fucking awesome! I get to see her use all the fun magic, reap the naughty benefits with her, and then eventually learn it!

Now, do I need another one...? This looks promising, T.A.Y 7W3375, she's a robot Warden, designed to be perfect for the job, so she can do all the administrative shit. She's very professional. She does have feelings though, which can be nice, particularly since it mentioned they can often be naughty ones~ Ooo, and because of her ruthless efficiency, all treatments will cost me five points less! Can't argue with that, that's gonna be pure profit. 230 now

>Prison Uniform

Lots of good options here, but I'm actually gonna say no uniform. There's gonna be lots of people in this prison, I want to see what their styles are! It ought to be fun :3 It will cost me 10 points though, which is a bummer and brings me down to 220.

>Power disruption mechanism

I'm going with drugs, always a good choice. Once a week, everybody gets an injection that blocks their powers for the next week. Of course, I'll give the injection slightly more frequently as a failsafe, every five days in particular. That means that if the prison riots, we'll know how long it'll be before the powers pop back on. Security is well worth five points! And now I'm at 215.

Cont. below

>>7418668
>Prison Upgrades

Oh man, lots to choose from here...

Well, I've gotta have elite guards , who'd want anything else? With infinite prisoners, I don't want any fuck ups. (210)

Ditto the armory, we've gotta be ready to fight if the worst happens (205)

And again, ditto the safe room. My safety is very important to me, and I don't want anything nasty happening to the vice-wardens. (200)

Hmm... I should probably have a surveillance room, a well-staffed one of course. Ooo, I can get psychics to run the place, and use scrying magic so that I can see things! (190)

Heh, well, an assistant would be nice. Someone to keep my personal prison-running affairs sorted... And blow me under the desk when the mood hits me ;) (185)

Oh, holy shit, I have got to have a clone factory! That means I can magically make more guards to replace ones that quit or die, and I can make more of myself, and I can duplicate naughty prisoners and then do horrible things to them without having to kill the original, hehe! (170)

Can't say no to a luxury office! It'll be incredible, really huge, lots of magical texts lining the walls, and every luxury I could ask for at my magical beck and call. (160)

Mind reading magic. Fuck. Yes. (150)

Hehe, this DTF thing seems nice... It means all the prison staff, including vice wardens, are always happy to have sex with me! Totally worth it! (140)

Whew, that was expensive... I hope I have enough for everything else I want!

>>7418673
>Prison Rules

You looked at me wrong is a no-brainer. Sure it costs 40, but it means I can inflict any of my punishments on anyone at any time~ (100)

Ooo, I like hold it in~ That means prisoners only get to pee and poop on a schedule I decide, and anyone who breaks the rule or wets themselves or whatever gets punished. I think once every 24 hours seems fair, hehe! (90)

Roleplay? How meta! That means that I can force the prisoners and guards to engage in any sort of roleplay I want, maybe we could all act like kids in school for a day, or suddenly treat all the prisoners like cattle~ Either way, anyone who breaks character gets a punishment! I think my default one will be, er... Well, actually, I think I'll keep that in my pocket as a possible punishment for the entire prison if someone pisses me off enough. (70)

That'll be plenty of rules, now let's get to the most fun part....

Punishments and treatments:

I haven't got much left, so I'll need to make these really count. Thankfully, I have got discounted treatments, so that ought to help.

First, punishments:

Shameful outfit - Anybody who gets this punishment will have to wear a pleasure-inducing parasitic suit which will ruthlessly milk them and feed on their energy for 2 weeks~ (60)

Monster menagerie - Anyone who gets this will have to be the fuck toy of some monsters handpicked by little old me for two weeks! Handpicking them cost me the upgrade, but it means I can stock up our pens with some really kickass and nasty things... Dragons that eat only refuse and are the gassiest, filthiest things in the universe, giant plant monsters that love you so much that they'll fuck you constantly, but will horribly rape you if you try to leave or make them stop, leviathans that will barely notice you exist but have tiny monsters crawling on them that live only to protect their master, and see you as a threat to be pounded into oblivion, and those are just three of the countless ones I picked out! (45)

>>7418678
>7418678
Treatments:

I can only afford a few, even with the discount... Um... Let me see...

Sissification - Gotta go with that. Everyone in the prison, gender notwithstanding, will be turned into a girly little weakling~ (30)

Sex Arcade - Everyone has to spend some time as a ride in the sex arcade~ That might just mean that people can fuck you at will while you're tied down in a sexy position, or it might be something more clever like letting people circumvent the pissing rule if they do it into a tube the leads right down into your mouth~ It'll keep morale up for those that aren't selected, since they can "Play" if they're behaving well, and I, of course, get VIP access. (15)

Slave training - 3 hours per day will be spent on it to give the prisoners, ah, job skills. I'll get to choose whether the people that finish their sentence go free, or get sold~ That should give them incentive to stay on my good side! Plus, it means that I can personally get some free labor and fun out of them~ (0)

Riots:

Lots of math later, I'm at 46 points.

Frequency:

Let's say the riots happen Seldom, just three times a year on average. (36)

Cont below...

>>7418683
Riot Scenarios:

I've gotta buy enough of these to get me down to the correct points number, and a random one of them will happen during every riot.

Oh, well play nice doesn't seem that bad, it just means that they riot, surrender, and then I stop all punishments and treatments for a month and treat the prisoners with common decency... Oh. And me and the guards have to... Satisfy them whenever they ask. Still, not bad, and I won't be hurt too badly! They will lose their powers again after all, and they've all been sissified... Er, though that may revert pretty quickly once we stop giving them the treatment... Oh my... Anyway, if I break the terms of the truce before its over, they'll be pissed, and the next scenario with a duration will be doubled.

Oh, and it's more economical to combine things, so I'm just gonna spend 10 points and add on one more thing to this scenario, which will now happen during each riot... Let me see... Oh gosh, well, I might as well... *sigh* During the riot, the power negation drugs will fail for one prisoner with transformative powers, and... I'll be turned into a bimbo for a month. I guess if I'm getting fucked anyway, I may as well be in a body that's good for it.

Well, that's it then! My prison's done, and I've just created it, all I need now are some prisoners!

>>7418687
hey man i think you did your math wrong on the riot section (ps loved the super in detail responses you gave)

below is my math for your prison

total negative points (points spent on special rules, punishments, and treatments) = 104

vice wardens
olivia archibald combat: 9 points - 18
tay combat: 8 points - 16

drugs - 5x3 = 15
elite guards - 10x2 = 20
armory - 5x2 = 10
safe room - 10x2 = 20
mind reading - 10x2 = 20

total points you must spend: 104-18-16-15-20-10-20-20 = -15 (round to 0?)

your prison is safe enough that no rioting will occur.

>>7418753
>math

>>7418850
what word would you use?

>>7418852
dicks

>>7417589
>prison warden AI made by microsoft
yeah best idea

>>7416748
Compatibility mode lets do this!!!

>>7418753
Thank you! But are you quite sure about those numbers? The way I count it, I had 140 points after purchasing DTF, and 0 after finishing up with treatments, which leaves special rules, punishments, and treatments in between. That should mean I have 140 points to reduce. However, you are absolutely right that I did forget to double the bonuses from my safeguards (the armory and guards and so forth). That leaves me with twenty-one points to spend. Which is... Unfortunate. I actually liked play nice, but ironically I now can't afford, and I actually can't go below zero. So, let's just make riots rare, and make mind control the only scenario. I get stuck as a slave for one day (which sucks ass but is certainly fair) and then I can use You Looked at me Wrong! to make the poor fucker that did its stay at my little facility a living hell ;)

>>7417892

You don't lose the game for having 0 or less life.

What a strange source to get an image from, but what do I know?

>>7418906
In case you anons don't know, what this fellow is referencing is the fact that the image is taken from a magic card called "Phyrexian unlife," which has the text he mentioned.

>>7418871
Appearance: 2 (+1)
Quirks:
Twin Sister: +2
Clingy +2
Yandere +1
Super Masochist +1
Quiet +1
Favorite Hole: Asshole +1

Alice's Quirks:
Desserts: +1 Breast Milk
Milking +1
Always By Your Side +2

Heather's Quirks:
Cum Plugged +2
Fertility +1
Sexist +1

Eight Points for next CYOA

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>>7418326
>780x3780

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>>7418325
Here, have the latest (AFAIK) lactofork - both as an image and a pastebin with the HTML code: https://pastebin.com/19sAK2AD

>>7417482
So if you gain influence points from a blue/green choice, do you lose or gain freedom/submission points, seeing that the cost is negative?

>>7419050
>Freedom Points and Submission Points cannot be spent on anything.

>>7418142
>>7418325
I lost interest in this when the last guy nerfed shit to hell and back. What's happened since?

>>7419038
I have spent days searching for that html and never succeeded. You are a beautiful person.

No more excuses now, The Slug Guy.

>>7419055
I don't see how they're "spent" on anything, since if this is the case, the mechanics imply that they can theoretically go into the negatives if need be, and having the property of being able to be "spent" implies that they can't go into the negative, which Influence points can't. It's like saying that for a quiz where you get points deducted for wrong answers (usually for this kind of quiz no points are awarded or deducted if the question is left blank), you can "spend" points from your final score by deliberately filling in the wrong answers.

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>>7417589
Let's Make Magical Girl Prison edition
>Warden
>Design
Virtual(Type:Magical Girl)+Medieval+Bio+HighTech -35
>Size:Large
>Type:Female
>Vice Warden
Hilda Krieger -10
>Outfit
Nude -10 Humiliate them is my goal
>Power Supression Collar -10
>Upgrade
Elite Guard -10
Armory-5
"Costum"rooms -15 (Concert Stage Since many of them are idols)
Surveilance -10 Broadcast they live to further humiliate them
Assistant -5
Special Request -15
>Hinamori Amu (Pic related)
>Cure Melody
>Illyasviel von Einzbern
Favourite Pet -15
Amuchan will know how evil i am
Additional Vicewarden -20
Alexandra (For Breaking Them)
>Special Rules
Fighting -15
Greeting -15
Minimum Orgasm Y=10 -10
Hold It In -10
Bullying -20
>Punishment
Torture -10
Rape+Treatment -20
Impregnation-10
Cont. below

>>7419038
How to change how old I look
>Unaging -3 points -> Grow up -3 points -> Ageless -3 points
>Total -9 points, works only for the New Identity

>Shapeshifting -3 points
>"You can now shapeshift at will. You may look as if you have different ages"
>Works everywhere

????

>>7419072
The amount of influence points you have can increase/decrease (based on what options you pick), but you must end up with 0 or more.
The amount of Submission/Freedom points can only increase, at least until you get into the fate number calculation part of page 4.

>>7416861
Holy hell! This is the best day of my fuckin' life! So many possibilities to run through... Controlling other people is just about the best power I can imagine... Heh, no further questions, I'm in, let's get to the powers~

Drawbacks:

Why start with drawbacks? Because I want a hard spending limit and I prefer to count down from it.

Eldritch Abomination (1) - I'm taking it at one point. This means I'll become a little girl, but I don't particularly mind that. Sure I'll regress a decade or two age wise, but that's just more time I've got to live my awesome life. Plus, any minor issues with this can be solved with the things I was gonna get anyway.

Deus Vault (1) - So what if I get hunted by some ancient holy order of magic bimbos? I don't care how many hulks (or whatever else) those nuns bring: I'll have an army. I'm happy to fight, it's good to have a challenge.

Sign of influence (1) - Fuck it, I'm not the subtle type. All my slaves will have their pupils replaced with a tiny insignia: A globe within a brain. Obvious, I know, but sometimes it's good to send a message.

Whew, okay, so that's 3 extra points, giving me 17 total. Now to buy the good shit!

Means of control:

Sigil (2) - Anyone I can touch, I can put my sigil on, and anyone I put my sigil on, I control. Fuck yeah, nice and simple. Obviously I'll have to make sure that nobody can break their sigils, but, y'know, I control them, so it can't be too hard. Also, I can put it on myself, which will be rather important.

15 left

Slave types:

Happy Slave (1) - People deserve to be happy, and I'll sleep a lot better at night knowing that the folks under my control are, in many ways, better off than they otherwise would be. Plus, it'll be hilarious to see someone smiling and sighing while getting fucked or eating their own shit or something ridiculous like that.

Unaware Slave (1) - These guys will act totally normal unless given a command; I'll get to these ones in a minute.

13 left

Cont. below

>>7419077
Riot Point 110-30-14-12-20-10-20=6

My Prison have 3 sector
High-Tech for Hilda,Bio For Alexandra And Medieval for me inmate that behave badly will be sent to Alexandra and any Inmate i want will be in my section (other will be in hightech)

My goal for this prison is yo break them so they have to be nude all the time.They also need to perform on stage to boost morale for other villain.Fighting and Greeting are there to degrade them with Bully and minimun orgasm to corupt them further more.Since their sufferings are my delight anyone who break my rule will be torture(Alexandra will do) with no way to fightback i have nothing to fear
And that is prison if any of you caught magical girl please send them to me.

>>7419087

Boons:

Body swap (1) - I expect to have a lot of slaves, and it might benefit me to be able to give out nicer bodies as rewards. Plus, it means that I can put my own body into someone younger to basically achieve immortality! Haha!

Triggers (1) - Ah good old conditioning, but now much quicker! Some things that are probably gonna be common: If you see my sigil, forget that you saw my sigil. If I tell you that you've done a good job, be happy for the next hour. If I give you a command, obey it and be glad that you are doing it. If you are about to kill me, fall asleep. Useful stuff like that, y'know?

Self-hypnosis (1) - Well, gotta have that, as I've mentioned with other boons.

Hive mind (3) - How could I not pick this? It means that all my slaves can think as one, becoming super-inteligent, and vitally, it means that I can share my powers! This means that anyone I control can themselves control more people! With any luck, this means my number of slaves will grow exponentially, since I can give all new slaves the triggered command, "Forget that you've just been touched, become an unaware slave, forget this message, and try to touch people and inscribe the sigil on them without realizing that you're doing it." It should spread like a pandemic. By the time people realize it, the majority of people will have me in their heads without even realizing it. Then I can put that hive mind to work doing some useful shit, like GOING TO SPACE. And, y'know, building some monuments and solving the Earth's problems and stuff. Oh, and I can probably infect those damn nuns, or at least use the combined knowledge of a bunch of people to fight them off. Somebody's gotta know kung-fu...

Objectification (1) - Um, I can turn slaves into any object? Fuck yeah! Aside from all the obvious perverse shit (turning people into literal sex toys, wearing my slaves as clothes, etc.), that means I can finally become a Popsicle with self hypnosis! Lifelong dream realized.

>>7419085
>The amount of Submission/Freedom points can only increase
Then that should be clarified, and whether the number of Submission/Freedom points gained is equal to the absolute value of the cost (which is the most logical conclusion), should also be clarified.

Is the author around to fix it?

>>7419090

Whew, only eight points left after all that, let's make 'em count!

Expanded mind (3) - Well, I'm gonna have a bunch of shit to deal with, I have an entire hive mind to control, so extra intelligence will help quite a bit.

Flesh sculptor (5) - Man, I'm just gonna be honest, I love size play. There's no deep reason to this, I just want to be able to live out some fantasies by shrinking down myself and others. I mean, if you had the power to become tiny and live in an obedient giantess's boobs, how and why could you ever choose not to? Also, Turning slaves into Monster girls. No further explanation needed. Flesh sculptor lets me turn any of my slaves into whatever I want, and how can you argue with that?


Aaaaand that's all my points spent. Time to start spreading the virus! :D

>>7419091
It says in the intro paragraph that "if you purchase a [green/blue] option, you will gain [Freedom/Submission] Points equal to the cost".
Changes to the CYOA seem unlikely at this point.

What should I do after I spent all my points?

>>7419072
You never "lose" submission points, its abs(o)lut value.

>>7419094
Yes, and from its wording, if you gain Influence points from buying a choice, then obviously the cost is negative, and if it's a green/blue option, then the equivalent gain must also be negative.

>>7419097
Like I said, that ought to be clarified in the CYOA.

>>7416864
Point Count 14
>Means of Control
Telepathy 11
>Slave Type
Unaware 10
>Boons
Mass Control 7
Immortality 5
Hive Mind 2
Combat Training -1
>Powers
Alchemy -2
Expanded Mind -5
Telekinesis -8
>Drawbacks
Cosmic alignment -7
Doll Maker -5
Sign of influenece -4
unnatural aura -3
>Pacts
Nemesis Pact 0
>Starting Slave
Victoria (start up capital to outfit army)

This is not what I would pick, but I thought I should share this. Be aware that if this was real someone would pick something like this. It is entirely designed to fulfill the Nemesis Pact. How would you protect yourself?

>>7418325
Cool someone is finally modding this. I considered doing some mods for this myself but am to busy/lazy to do this. here are a few of the ideas I had if you want to try to incorporate them though.

Something like this though the wording, name and the point values may need tweaking.

Power: Disable Effects, -3
once per week you can choose to disable (lose access to) up to 9 points worth of Powers [not sure if it should be just the ring this power is on or across any worn rings], If you do so you may also ignore/disable drawbacks with points equal to the disabled powers for the week. You may not disable this power, or the drawbacks permanent or full time.

Some other changes that could be made to make things a bit more flexible could be things like making the requirement that "Anal plug" must always be worn in public a separate option. "Busy schedule" could be applied separately to "anal plug" and "Bondage".
and some effects seem like they don't really need the prerequisites they have to work, or could be reworded to work with out them
"Helpless" and "Liar" for example seems like they could work on there own. "Communism" Could probably work without "Free Market"

>>7418325
Eternal Youth works really weirdly since you need to wear it only half of the time to get the full benefits.

I understand that part of this is not having to wear all the rings all the time but this seems more like something that requires annoying fiddling to get to work optimally.

I have trouble envisioning a scenario where Quick Change would be useful and Easy Changer for -3 points is somewhat terrible when Metamorphosis -> Shapeshifting costs -6 points.

>>7419130
Scratch that criticism of Easy Changer, I managed to miss that Metamorphosis requires you to look your age.

>>7418630
So I fell asleep shortly after that post.

Someone else already sent me a picture but I would enjoy what you had in store for me. A female form would be preferable.

>also if you want you can choose my form
With reference with Sabathiel I think you can take a guess at what I would pick for you. I ensure you, despite your armor and flesh being one you still have full sensation as though it were your skin, and "access" to all the most important locations.

>>7416865
TokHaar, does Mindslave Zynthia have all the personality traits from Messed up Waifu >>7416754 ?

>>7419195
Of course! BuffaloCenkUygur.jpg

>>7419092
Planeswalker is godmode man. Gotta exploit that for max benefit.

Telepathy
Unaware Slave
Planeswalker
Expanded Mind
Summoning

Your slaves don't even know they are slaves, you can travel to any fictional universe you can think up and capture anyone whose powers meet your needs, you can summon them to you at will, and your expanded mind means you are smart enough to not fuck it up.

You can acquire all the powers from the CYOA and more with this power combo.

>>7419203
And what, dear anon, about the original universe I came from? I do kinda like that place, plus, if I did it your way I would have to search through endless realities to find what I need, and I could be killed at any moment, ending things forever! My way is far safer, and I would argue more fulfilling. If I would die, I can notice that I'm about to and use my super-brain to swap bodies or just vanish into the hive mind for a sec.

>>7419209
You seem to be under the impression that planeswalking is random.

It is not.

So what about your original universe? You go back whenever you want. And no, you wouldn't have to search through endless realities.

>>7416864
>>7416865

1/12

First I want to say this is a really great CYOA, very flexible, imaginative and good at setting the right mood. It's not quite perfect as far as balance, consistency and thoroughness of the rules go, so I want to offer some suggestions in case you ever feel like updating this. It should go without saying that you don't need to change anything at all if you don't want to, I'm saying it anyway to hopefully avoid seeming to be demanding or entitled.

Global change: Split boons into two sections, one that contains all modifications to your slaves (called Boons), and one that contains enhancements to your mind control powers (called Enhancements).
Of course you can pick different names, but these are the names I will use to refer to them below. What separates Enhancements from Powers would be that Powers are independent of your mind control power.
Rationale: Currently all boons count for the Slavers Pact requirement and allow for brewing potions, but for many that makes no sense. After the change the Boons section would only contain things that make sense for both. There are several additional advantages that will be mentioned in the entries for the various items that should be moved to Enhancements.

Possible additional change:
Remove the powers section, moving some powers to boons/enhancements and removing others entirely (in particular Planeswalker)
Rationale: Avoids Planeswalker overshadowing the actual mind control (can instead be mitigated by giving more points).

>>7419213
2/12

Heading:

Typo: This will aslo make your body fit -> This will also make your body fit
Typo: That wasn't as bad as you though now was it? -> That wasn't as bad as you thought, now was it?

Suggested change: Increase points to 15, possibly 20 (only if not removing powers section).

Rationale: There are up to 84 points of benefits available (84 with telepathy, less with other methods), probably more with your next update if you decide to do one, and while theoretically there are up to 34 points from drawbacks and pacts available none of them are freebies (except Deus Vult if pick the right powers/control method and some that only affect slaves if you give up on mindcontrolling in the first place, see below). You are also making a SFW version so you presumably also want the CYOA played by a wider audience than just /d/, and many people being a mindcontroller appeals to aren't going to be comfortable with being forced to have sex without any control over it. People typically only seem to get something between 3 and 12 points from pacts and drawbacks, and even with 20 base points that wouldn't be anywhere close to doing away with the need to make interesting choices.
With the current point total it becomes somewhat tempting for a more squeamish person to pick Contract, no slave types, no boons (or perhaps only boons you want for yourself or for Alchemy), all of the slave related drawbacks (11 points), Planeswalker and a bunch of other powers, no slaves, and then never try to enslave anyone and just treat this as a planar traveler CYOA instead, perhaps even if mind control actually appeals to you, just not enough to give up on the other things you could pick with your very limited powers.

Means of Control:
Typo: victims mind -> victim's mind (singular)/ victims' minds (plural)
Possible change: Allow multiple methods of control, with increased cost (perhaps +1 point per method of control you already have).

>>7419213


3/12

Telepathy:
Suggested clarifications: State range (e. g. 50m radius), state whether you can detect minds and read surface thoughts (it would be rather odd to call this power telepathy if you can't).

Familiar:
Suggested wording change: Your familiar will be able to mind control people for you, it will use Telepathy to mind control people and it can even use it on you. -> Your familiar will be able to use Telepathy to mind control people for you and can even use it on you.


Parasite:
Suggested wording change/clarification: To gain more parasites you will need to insert a parasite a woman's vagina and command it to breed, the parasite will crawl into the woman's womb and turn it into a breeding ground and it will take 2 months for the parasite to breed and it will yield 10 new parasites. -> To gain more parasites you will need to insert a parasite a woman's vagina (which counts for the purpose of gaining command over her) and command it to breed. The parasite will crawl into the woman's womb and turn it into a breeding ground. It will take 2 months for the parasite to breed, which will yield 10 new parasites.

Suggested change: Decrease cost to 0, start out with a batch of 10 parasites.
Rationale: This is the slowest mind control method and the only one you can permanently lose access to (by all parasites being destroyed). Even after removing the additional downside of needing to wait 2 months before being able to acquire additional slaves it's still weaker than most other methods, and arguably weaker than Contract.

Contract:
Typo: You must also keep the contract safe, if it they are destroyed your victims would be freed from your influence. -> You must also keep the contracts safe, if it they are destroyed your victims would be freed from your influence.

>>7419213
4/12

Slave Types:
Clarification: What happens if no slave types are chosen? I suggest either requiring at least 1 slave type (in which case the first one should probably be free), or explicitly stating that you may have slaves without any slave type applied to them, but you can only grant them boons, not control them.

Happy Slave:
Typo: They will want nothing more then to serve you -> They will want nothing more than to serve you

Pet Slave:
Typo: Choose a animal for each pet slave. -> Choose an animal for each pet slave.

Conditioned Slave:
Clarification: Do you actually have any control over them in the beginning?

Boons:
Typo: In almost every entry: slaves -> slave's (singular possessive) or slaves' (plural possessive)

Cum Addiction:
Suggested change: You can make any slave addicted to cum in general, the cum of a specific person or the cum of a group of people.
Rationale: Slaves addicted to only your cum wouldn't be useful for the Slavers Pact. Also would allow for things like making a very large number of slaves addicted to cum even though you couldn't feed them all yourself.

Mass Control:
Suggested Changes: Move to Enhancements section. State how it affects Telepathy range (perhaps 50m -> 1km?).
Rationale: Doesn't make sense for Slavers Pact or as a potion.

Triggers:
Suggested Change: Split into two different boons, Trigger (cost 2), which can Trigger any other boon under certain conditions, and emotional control (costs 1, perhaps merge with Orgasm Control). Trigger + Emotional Control would allow for the things currently listed.
Rationale: Triggering other boons would allow for near infinite fun combinations like making a slave shrink when they feel embarrassed, their breasts swelling when they are aroused, switching between sub/dom when they hear a fingersnap...

>>7419213
5/12

Self-Hypnosis:
Suggested Change: Move to Enhancements.
Rationale: Doesn't make sense for Slavers Pact or as a potion.
Clarification: If you have Familiar this allows the Familiar to apply boons to itself.

Hive-Mind:
Suggested Change: Move to Enhancements.
Rationale: Questionable for Slavers Pact, potions that add people to a hive-mind dominated by you would be overpowered as mind control method.
Suggested Change: Sharply limit usability of Telepathy for hive-mind participants, perhaps limiting range to 2 m and requiring 1 minute to establish control.
Rationale: Otherwise it's to easy to take over the world through exponential hive-mind growth.

Combat-Training:
Typo: preform -> perform

Charm:
Suggested Change: will make them fall in love with a person of your choice.
Rationale: Slaves in love with you in particular don't make sense for the Slavers Pact requirement, and love potions that automatically make someone fall in love with you are a bit overpowered (see suggested changes to Alchemy for why this change would fix that).

Fertility:
Clarification: You can make them anything in between infertile and making a single drop of semen enough for impregnation. -> You can make them anything in between infertile and constantly at peak fertility, with a single drop of semen enough for reliable impregnation.

Objectification:
Typos: You will be able to turn slaves into inanimate objects, like a onahole, sex doll for example. They will still remain conscious and be to feel any sensations their bodies experience, they will also be able to see if they have any eyes. -> You will be able to turn slaves into inanimate objects, like a onahole or a sex doll, for example. They will still remain conscious and be able to feel any sensations their bodies experience, they will also be able to see if they have any eyes.

>>7419213
6/12

Monstrification:
Possible change: Their magical abilities may at most be as powerful as a 3 point power.

Powers:
If you don't want to remove this section some powers that you could add and that should fit in thematically (typical mental powers) would be teleportation, future sight/remote viewing or phasing.

Illusionist:
Suggested change: Either move to Enhancements or change to allow affecting non-slaves and increase cost to 3 points.
Rationale: Affects only slaves, so strongly dependent on mind control power.

Pocket Dimension:
Clarifications: State size of the area inside the pocket dimension (e. g. 1 square kilometer). Clarify means of entry. Clarify interior (rooms, furniture), clarify time-based events (preferably a rule that makes more sense than "just because").
Possible new wording: You can store a massive harem of slaves in a pocket dimension of your own with up to 1 square kilometer in size with rooms and gardens in a layout of your choosing and pleasant weather outside. You access your pocket dimension by opening a door-sized portal at your current location which you can close and reopen from the other side at will. You can also set the rate of time flow relative to your home universe, but note that extra-dimensional entities interested in you are synched to your local time flow. Comes with an unlimited supply of food and drink as well as basic furniture.
Possible change: Could be moved to enhancements if removing the powers section.

Summoning:
Suggested change: Move to enhancements.
Rationale: Affects only slaves (and familiar), so strongly dependent on mind control power.

>>7419213
7/12

Expanded Mind:
Possible change: Move to boons, rename to Modify Intelligence or the like, also allow reducing intelligence, possibly increase cost to 4.
Rationale: Would be a bit more consistent (a one-time change without ongoing control and no overt ongoing supernatural effects is more like being granted a boon than the other powers), also would allow your slaves to do the hard work of inventing new tech for you which better fits the theme, and some people like bimbofication and/or intelligence reduction.

Telekinesis:
Possible Change: If removing the powers section this could be moved to enhancements, with Telepathy as requirement.

Flesh Sculptor:
Clarification: It allows for physical changes, but it doesn't change physical properties -> It allows for physical changes, but it doesn't grant any supernatural properties.
Suggested Change: Move to boons, reduce cost to 4 (perhaps just 3).
Rationale: It doesn't make any sense that being able to change a slave's gender with the boon counts toward the Slavers Pact requirement, but being able to do so with Flesh Sculptor doesn't. The other permanent modifications of slaves are boons. Also closes the loophole of picking the Permanent Changes drawback but then only using Flesh Sculptor instead of buying any boons that would actually be affected. The cost reduction because it would now require auto-hypnosis or similar to affect yourself, and also because compared to Monstrification (which does grant supernatural abilities) it would be very overpriced at 5 points.

>>7419213

8/12

Planeswalker:
Clarification: How much control do you have over where and when you arrive? Can you take all your slaves with you by default (e. g. by traveling through a portal that stays open as long as you want) or does that require Pocket Dimension or Summoning? Can you travel to worlds matching any arbitrary description ("somewhere where I can easily ascend to godhood")?
Possible change: As said before you might want to seriously consider removing this.

Dream Weaving:
Possible change: If removing the powers section this could be moved to enhancement, or to boons and limited to slaves?

Alchemy:
Suggested change/clarification: If a boon allows you to make decisions about what form it takes all those decisions must be made at the time of brewing the potion. You can't brew potions specific to one person, so you can't brew potions of falling in love with you, remembering you as their father, or swapping bodies with a particular slave. If the effect of the potion involves a specific other person by default that person is the first person the drinker sees, but if you have the Trigger boon you may select another trigger.
Rationale: Closes loopholes that allow for easy effective enslavement by feeding someone a potion. It's still possible, but difficult enough to be reasonable.
Possible change: Could be moved to enhancements if removing the Powers section.

Drawbacks:
Suggested wording change: relocate the lost power -> redivert the freed up power.

Permanent Changes:
Clarified wording: All applications of boons, whether granted to a slave, yourself, your familiar, or via alchemical potion, are permanent and cannot be removed or altered.

>>7419210
Sorry, what I meant by that was that once you get to the reality you've chosen you'd have to find shit within it and get accustomed to the rules of the place. If you popped up on Earth and were like, "Damn I'd love some pastries," Well, yeah, there are good pastries on Earth in general but what if you're in Antarctica or New Jersey? Or what if you go to the Harry Potter universe but you're a muggle in America? I'm just saying it'd be a huge hastle unless you could teleport, which you can't. And all I meant about the original universe thing is that with my build you can do a lot more good in one given universe than with yours.

>>7419213

9/12

Rapey Slaves:
Suggested change: Affects nearby people (particularly former slaves and people who are usually subordinate to you) instead if you have no slaves, your powers are disabled until they had their way with you.
Rationale: Close exploit of technically not having any slaves, just harem members with customized personality or former conditioned slaves; offers an explanation for how it makes sense for you to be powerless to stop them and an incentive to actually let it happen.

Mind Fucked:
Suggested Change: Degradation stops if the person in question hasn't been in proximity of any use of any of your powers within the last year.
Rationale: Anyone who was under your control for so much as a second being irrevocably doomed doesn't make much sense.

Sign of Influence:
Suggested Change/Clarification: Symbol shaped pupils must be visually distinct from normal pupils (you can't just choose a disc as your symbol).
Rationale: Obvious exploit.

Dollmaker:
Clarification: Does this persist when you release them?

Superstition:
Typo: none-magical -> non-magical; preforming magician -> performing magician; none believer -> non-believer

Madness:
Typo: your subconscious will create -> your subconsciousness will create / your subconscious will will create / you will subconsciously create

>>7419222
also I would like to suggest multiple pregnancy possibilities for fertility

>>7419213

10/12

Vamyrism:
Typos: You can become a vampire to increase your powers, but not just any vampire a psychic vampire. As a psychic vampire you must feed 1 time per week or you will cease to exist, you will gain fangs but to feed you will need to place your mouth close to your victims mouth and them consume their memories, personality and mental life force, you will basically turn them into vegetables. Sun light will burn you and you will gain a weakness to silver. A psychic vampire cannot alter their appearance to remove their fangs. Yeah, I almost forgot you should try some blood it will taste beyond delicious to you, because of the whole vampyrism thing. -> You can become a vampire to increase your powers, but not just any vampire, a psychic vampire. As a psychic vampire you must feed 1 time per week or you will cease to exist, you will gain fangs but to feed you will need to place your mouth close to your victims mouth and then consume their memories, personality and mental life force; you will basically turn them into vegetables. Sunlight will burn you and you will gain a weakness to silver. A psychic vampire cannot alter their appearance to remove their fangs. Yeah, I almost forgot, you should try some blood, it will taste beyond delicious to you, because of the whole vampyrism thing.

Star Guardians:
Clarification: Add: They range in power from mildly superhuman to rivaling even myself [Golthuem probably wouldn't want to admit some are actually stronger than him?] and will respond with a team they deem appropriate to the threat, so better take care.

Pacts:
Nemesis Pact:
Suggested Change: If you kill your target -> If you have dealt with your target
Rationale: Closes exploit of enslaving a target and then doing whatever you want without ever being assigned new targets.

>>7419213

11/12

Slavers Pact:
Punctuation: When you have served me for five hundred years, I will let you look through some of my more precious gifts and let you pick one and there is some really good shit I keep locked away, ever heard of a "Bride of Teitat"? -> When you have served me for five hundred years I will let you look through some of my more precious gifts and let you pick one, and there is some really good shit I keep locked away, ever heard of a "Bride of Teitat"?

Pact of Hell:
Typos: Anyways I invent tons of sexual torture devices l have a parasitic onahole make its wearer experience a none-stop orgasm hell it will milk you dry and and it's impossible to remove unless you say the password: Lucy Rulez, l have a tube like plant that swallow people whole and molests them inside of its tube like structure and l have a horny three dicked hell hound with a insatiable libido. -> Anyways I invent tons of sexual torture devices. l have a parasitic onahole that makes its wearer experience a non-stop orgasm hell; it will milk you dry and and it's impossible to remove unless you say the password: Lucy Rulez. l have a tube-like plant that swallows people whole and molests them inside of its tube-like structure and l have a horny three-dicked hell hound with an insatiable libido.

Cthu's Pact:
Typo: Illuminati -> the Illuminati

>>7419213

12/12

Melissa:
Suggested Change/Clarification: How does Golthuem expect a staring mindslaver (when they are at their weakest) to be able to take her virginity if she's too difficult to handle with her powers? If she starts out controlled enough to do that it seems she should be possible to handle with powers intact if you are careful and rewrite her personality + memories and/or make her fall in love with you? Maybe have him outright request that you remove her powers, or state he is suppressing her powers for the first day or so, or change the warning to "unless you are careful and picked the right boons and powers"?

Gwedillth Everglade:
Typos: This a collectors object, a high elven princess which is the last of her line and race. You see the universe she comes from was overrun by demons. -> This a collector's object, a high elven princess who is the last of her line and race. You see, the universe she comes from was overrun by demons.

>>7419235
>Teitat
Funny how you didn't mix his misspelling of "Teiatat".

>>7419241
>mix
...funny how I typoed "fix".

>>7419226
Oops, meant to frame as a reply to >>7419038

>>7419038
Lets do a full random run!
Powers (the great ring):
New Identity (-5)
Unaging (-8)
Grow Up (-11)
Ageless (-14)
Futanari (-17)
Rank (-22)
King (-29)
Pocket Space (-32)
New World (-35)
Strange World (-38)
Singular Space (-45)
Stargate (-52)
New Friends (-55) Don't actually care for them, just need the next perk
Ideal Match (-60)
Immortal (-67)
Strength (-72)
Shapeshifting (-75)
Invulnerability (-82)
Immunity (-87)
Empathy (-90)
Communication (-95)
Mindreader (-100)
Mcstories (-105)
Optivision (-110)
Painless (-113)
Teleport (-118)
Never Sleep (-121)
No Sustenance (-126)
Move Along (-129)
Spare The Family (-132)
Duplicator (-139)
Vanila (-144)
Polylingual (-147)
Flying (-150)
Noclip (-155)
Attracted (-160)
Refined (-163)
Magic (-170)
Pro-choice (-173)
Goa'uld (-178)
Flexible (-181)
Jolt (-184)
TK (-187)
Turtle (-190)
Limited Devotion (-193)
Ring of Devotion with:
Immortality (-200)
Immunity (-205)
Invulnerability (-212)

Drawbacks in the next post

>>7418325
>>7419038
Sweet, another fork !
I like where you're going with this, particularly with the parasite worms.

>>7418431
>>7418449
Indeed the thing is full of references, some more obscure than others.

Also the randomization thing really needs some simplification, but I'm not sure that many people even use it. And maybe the costs need some modding, or a difficulty factor. I dunno.
Sorry to make you go through the mess I've left, but thanks for keeping the CYOA alive !

>>7419261
Drawbacks (3x+1 points each), -212 points to make up
Gloryhole (-208)
Egg Laying (-201)
Battery (-194)
Bondage Capture (-184)
Temptation (-180)
Usable (-173)
Toyed (-166)
New Hymen (-162)
Submissive (-155)
They Know (-148)
Generality (-138)
Sanguine (-128)
Anal Plug (-121)
Bondage (-114)
Busy Schedule (-107)
Stimulation Device (-103)
Walking Stimulation (-96)
Helpless (-86)
Distraction (-82)
Random Stim (-75)
Peer Stim (-68)
Nightmares (-61)
Forced Orgasm (-54)
Egosim (-47)
Lewd Aura (-40)
Lust Trigger (-36)
Cum Trigger (-32)
Dirty Talk (-28)
Incontinence (-24)
Public (-17)
Diapers (-10)
No Change (-3)
Frequent (4)
Pee Orgasm (11)
Lactation (18)
Kiss (25)
Guardian (29)
Parent (36)
Inces (43)
Disciplinarian (47)
Love (51) target: master
Forget (55)
Animally Fertile (62)
Animal Love (66)
Parasite (76)
Mouth, Anal, Genital abuse (88)
Cumtastic (95)
Permanent (105)
Full-Time (115)
and 115 points were spent rerolling in order to get the above stuff. (Fuck you, amputation tree)
Punishments Reflex, edgy and no good feelings.

The plan: toss guardian into the pocket space forever, ts not unethical because time is stopped. Also carry around some maids in pocket space to handle No Change.

Sanguine debauchery latches to my ring of devotion, which I'll give to my ideal match; presumably the goddess will allow me to do that, since theres no activation time in lactofork.
Chuck the ideal match into hammerspace too, and proceed to conquer the world with god-like power.

>>7418325
You might want to remove the compounding cost on additional rings, make it static instead. I feel like there's interesting things you could do with multiple rings, like making rings with only benefits and rings with only drawbacks and switching which ones you use but the rate at which the cost of new rings rises makes this basically impossible.

I guess there should be something to prevent people from making rings with absolutely every power but I kinda wish it would be possible to not have to turbo-minmax the amount of rings you have.

Maybe start the CYOA by having the goddess make you pick which type of a ring you use and this limits how many different rings you can make, with each type having some unique drawback and bonus.

>>7419304
I will note that that full random run had particularly good luck, which was somewhat problematic. I got submissive and They Know early on, so I had to keep taking on extra benefits and rolling until I could take sanguine because I don't trust anyone other than my ideal match with power over me. Technically most problems could be bulldozed using mcstories and some murder, but I digress. It was also funny to Temptation as the first branch of bondage capture, so the only real temptation would've been boredom.

Overall, the random system heavily favors or perhaps requires you to build rings with massive numbers of benefits. If you're only trying to ear 50 points of drawbacks, either you get nothing but top of the tree level drawbacks, or you wind up refusing a lot of stuff and taking on excessive numbers of drawbacks to work your way down in a tree.

It may be necessary to add 1 to the random range of each tree node for every node that requires it, and subtract 1 from those nodes' ranges.

Only With Permission and Public should probably be made exclusive, other wise you'll either get a ruptured bladder/massive kidney stone from never feeling it, or you'll just be able to hold it indefinitely until convenient.

Similarly, custom and unnoticed collide.

Diapers should have an associated punishment since its a "have to", likewise with No Change.

>>7419038
that might improve this a bit, I'll try to have something redone in a few days

>>7419057
I'm messing with this for the first time and am not familiar with its history or whatever /tg/ has done with this stuff. This is more of a product of my unemployment boredom

>>7419293
>parasite worms
its something I like and something someone immediately requested when I mentioned working on this last thread

the randomization had some help in the html, I think it displays a count for each power and drawback so you could do it with a random number generator. Since I added things to that one, the total stated in the entry for random obviously isn't valid, I was planning on fixing that once I got an idea on what else I was adding.

>>7419312
I remember thinking with that compounding that you're better off just having one ring. That said, I thought it was it as appropriate the way it was, its a price on flexibility

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>>7419201
Bueno, then let's try out this built:

Familiar
Conditioned, Unaware
Normalize, Rewrite Personality, Rewrite Memory, Charm, Age Manipulation, Planeswalker, Immortality

Rapey, Sign, Unnatural Aura

Extra Slave: Fukawa Miyo, Zynthia

My familiar is a naughty older sister (pic related), who loves her "little brother" and think I look cutest as a kid (and will turn me into one if I don't indulge her fetish often enough). She wants her little brother to go and knock up lots of other "older sisters" so she can have even more little brothers and sisters to "play" with.

Current plan is to give the Fukawa household a older brother, or was it a younger? It seems to change from time to time (and there was a social reject transfer student or something that lives with them now). In any case, after I've played around with them, I'll just drop into a world modelled like a Maron Maron h-work.

>>7418636
Your shapeshifting is crap. 1/day isnt worth the points and no upgrade changes that, unlike the other versions of dring.

>>7419427
it was in there like that when I found it, but its also more powerful that way. The later versions make shape shifting at will, but only cosmetic, that copy is actually redesigning a physical body change, which you can use at will, but only redesign once per day.

I'm going to keep the lactofork version of it doing the modding going forward though, so its a moot point

>>7419433
Lactoforks version sucks too. I suppose it's moot as you're outputting versions that are pretty much un-readable so I can just ignore your update. Lots of stuff about lactofork suck.

>>7418142
>>7418325
How are you converting the thing into a picture, anyway?

>>7419448
I'm using RJ TextEd for the html work and it had an option built in with a few file types, then I tried scaling it with a couple things, paint and some random online tools, that was the best output I got. I got a bunch of hate earlier for the file type, but the PNG copy exploded the file size (which I'm still a little thrown off by).

>>7416865
If we have Dollamker, does it prevent us from using illusions to make our slaves look like non albinos?

>>7416750
Source on #65? I keep forgetting where she's from.

>>7419518
Illusionist's illusions only affect slaves. And possibly you via self-hypnosis stuff.

>>7419535
Yeah. So can we self illusion ourselves so that our slaves look different if we have the perks for it?

>>7419457
when you finish, just put up a pastebin of the HTML code and let someone else sort out how to convert that to an image.

Also, perhaps a drawback to the King benefit, make it so the player is in line with the throne but has to fight their way to it through their siblings. Alternative drawbacks could involve a political marriage to the demon country or an ugly perverted king.

Drawback to telepathy perks - the player has to hear all of the negative thoughts people have about them.

And the cruelest upgrade to the nightmare drawback: The player dreams that they're back in their shitty life on earth, without their rings. THE HORROR.

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>>7417133
20
>half-dragon
14
>jacked
>well-endowed
>lifetime+ain't dying yet
5
>weapon master (free)
> - greatness
>general magic
1
>Niilo
0

>>7419601
I've never actually used a file upload site like pastebin before (minus downloading off them), so I'll need to spend some time figuring that out.

some of those aren't bad, not sure if they're all bad enough for points though. I'm also considering as a structure point of putting the power drawbacks into a separate section, it might add unwanted space and file size but it would make it easier for me to work with

>>7419722
It's the easiest thing in the world.

>>7419722
>file upload site like pastebin
It's not a file upload site, actually, it's a text-sharing thing. This includes source code for whatever.
Also, for the structuring thing, you could try increasing the amount of columns the tables have, as you have more leeway when it comes to image width than image height.

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>>7416864
>familiar (2) (pic related, though I would prefer to find something better)
>unaware slave (1)

>normalize (1)
>immortality (2)
>Charm (1)
>Triggers (1)
>Hive Mind (3)

>planeswalker (6)
>summoner (1)

>Rapey Slaves (+1)
>Pact: Slaver (+3)

>Hayame Yui (might as well pick someone who can fight)

My interpretation of Hive Mind with Familiar/Summoning is that my slaves basically become additional Familiars. In this way Rapey Slaves sort of merges with the pranks performed by Familiars. It' funny because even in this role, with Unaware they think they're just on an adventure travelling the multiverse with me. The sub/dom switch thing we've got going on is just what you do on such adventures, right?

I'll get my familiar(s) to deal with the Slaver's pact. I'm too lazy. I'll take the reward, though. I'm not sure what reward I'm hoping for.

I was thinking along similar lines to the other anon >>7419203 about planeswalker/summoner, but I'd say it's obvious you need immortality and some form of self-hypnosis. I might work on a list of people to pick up later.

I'll establish some kind of home dimension or kingdom while exploring the planes.

>>7419535
this made me think of using self-hypnosis with illusion to give yourself a HUD. Now I need to make an augmented reality MMRPG build.

>>7419735
I am actively debating that, Increased the powers one form 6 to 8 (drawbacks was at 7) on the old version, this one is at 7 (7 for drawbacks). 8 and 8 would give me more room to work with.

Right now I'm leaning toward just putting in a natural back in the drawback section so I can make it two pages as an image. I could do both though

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>>7419144
it was a close call between two; but this was the one I ended up with.

Sabathiel eh, I can work with that although I pictured myself more as a mephiston

Someone thread or two ago asked for Branching Hearts, it's posted in /tg/.
>>>/tg/53219242

The thread is cancer, as usual but I don't know if BH should be posted here since there's not even a nipple.

>>7419038
Survival Ring 1
Ring Cost (0)
Immortal (-7)
Invulnerable (-14)
Immunity (-19)
Drawbacks
Egg Laying (-17)
Faithful (-15)
Truthful (-13)
Slutty (-11)
Voyeurism-masturbation (-9) Wont matter much when I get a few ring slaves.
No Hinderance (-7) Dont see why I'd be wearing plugs diapers and pads anyways.
Collar (-6) not so bad to wear a thin collar.
Not by myself (-4)
Permanent + Full Time (2)
Punishments: Conditioned.
All in all nothing real bad. A few eggs, a collar, not masturbating, no lies, not cheating on a wife if I have a wife. Not so bad.

Domination Ring 1
Cost (-2) but I already have 2 spare points from the survival ring so (0)
Ring of Domination x2 (-10)
Shapeshifting (-13)
Pocket Space (-16)
Teleport (-21)
No sustenance (-26)
Move Along (-29)
Vanilla (-34)
Polylingual (-37)
Damage (-40)

Slave Ring. Lets just make both rings the same despite me using the roll for punishments.
Ring of Devotion (0)
Immortal (-7)
Shapeshifting (-10)
Welfare Leech (-13)
Pro Choice (-16)
Drawbacks:
I'm feeling Luckys:
1237: Piercings - Both sets (nipple and tongue).
(-10)
1092: Animal Love (-7)
124: Bondage Capture (-2)
9: Horny + Ready (+11)
572: Bad Group + Group Sex (23) Easy enough if its with me and one more girl ring wearer.
In addition lets take a occupation for her.
Occupation+Local Idol + Model + Gravure (27)
And a few bonus drawbacks from me
Tattoo (28)
Not by myself (30)
Collar (31)
Obey Trigger (32)
Submissive + Generality + Sanguine Debauchery (40)
Punishments Conditioned, extreme sub
I ended up with a lot more points on this ring than I expected. Thats +80 points for the 2 sub rings. Or, an extra 40 points after including my master ring. Let's add Archmage (21) to my master ring and Magic (7x2) to the 2 slave rings. (5) left over.

>>7419931

Lets make a third ring for safety, just for the use of invulnerability and immunity for them.
It will be a slave ring but the master ring wont have anything on it.
Slave ring + ring of domination (5)
Ring cost (9)
Invulnerability + Immunity (21)
Drawbacks:
Marked (20)
Enema (18)
Large Breasts (16)
Lactation (14)
Dirty Talk (13)
Milking (12)
Forced Orgasm (10)
Anal Plug (8)
Slutty (6)
New Hymen (5)
Faithful (3)
Famous (0)
And this is just in case anybody gets really hurt.

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>>7419851
Seeing as the other anon deleted there post it looks like I'm stuck with yours, and I like what I see.

Also I got a bit ahead of myself. You making an order of Sisters of Battle I made the assumption you might enjoy being one yourself, but I went a bit too far. With you making yourself to directly counter me I took it a bit as a personal challenge, so I have a burning desire to see you become corrupted. For now you'd be a normal human woman, though at the peak of what physical training can grant you, but if I were able I would make you like Sabathiel, and maybe even take it a bit further.

By chance you want to meetup in a chatroom or something? I'm compelled to write some smut based on this, and seeing as your the primary antagonist (from my perspective anyway) your input would be nice...

and I think we could have some fun.

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>>7419945

>>7419229
Negligible. Expanded mind, remember? You're basically the guy from Limitless except more than that because the ability exceeds your own physical limitations. You'd have plans and everything you needed already. Anything we could discuss here would be practically useless because our plans would be much better post-mind expansion.

I love the fact that you guys make CYOA using characters from other CYOA

it genuinely makes me happy

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>>7416864
>Anchor (1)
People can buy or rent cuffs from me. Supposedly the cuffs connect you to an AR MMRPG.
>unaware slave (1)
"I'm just sucking your dick because it's an easy 500 XP"

>Normalize (1)
it's just what kids are doing these days
>Triggers (1)
the game is addictive. They get a rush with in-game achievements, and get gloomy when they haven't played in a while. Nobody griefs or trolls maliciously because it makes them feel bad.
>Immortality (2)
mainly for self-hypnosis
>Self-hypnosis (1)
I want to play!
>Hive Mind (3)
to enable mass production of consoles and new game content
>Combat Training (3)
people actually gain their class skills while they play.

>Illusionist (1)
the thing that makes the MMRPG work.

>Victoria Valentine
Her family can handle the business side.

>>7416864
>>7416865
>>7416861
Going for chaos. Someone give me a picture

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>>7420154
You're now a loli succubus!

How do you guys feel about specific fetish themed CYOAs? I've got ideas for a piss-themed one stuck in my head.

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>>7419947
that's a body I can get behind. Turn me into another Sabathiel if you can; but she's the only corrupted sister for a reason.

Feel free to write something about it, I can offer input to my character if you need any. However, I have no interest in writing any smut, partially due to my incredible lack of creative writing skills.

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>>7420278

>>7420135
fun take on the idea

>>7420154
>>7420175
Thanks!
Drawbacks
>Power of Chaos (17)
Alright i'm a loli succubus. Gonna be a bunch of yuri going on but I'll learn to use my tail
>Superstition (20)
Well i'm already a demon so it would be a stretch to make people believe in other worldly things but i have a solution to this
>Sign of Influence (21)
Heart shaped pupils with lewd pink irises (I know it is cliche)
>Deus Vult (22)
More slaves just throwing themselves at me
>Madness (23)
Fitting for a succubus
>Vampyrism (25)
Fitting for succubus but also puts those deus vult women to good use
>Unnatural Aura (26)
Pacts
>Cthu's Pact (28)
Cthu, Me and my slaves are gonna go on an adventure to awaken the old one. She can have her big tits, i just want to rid myself of the limitation placed to where i can't modify my form.
Means of Control
>Familiar (26)
Gonna follow the loli theme. A submissive, pale blue maid loli with short hair and a quiet demeanor. She really only wants to make her master happy but also wants attention and acts out when she doesn't get it.
Boons
>Mass control (23)
>Triggers (22)
>Fertility (21)
>Immortality (19)
>Tireless Servant (18)
Powers
>Expanded Mind (15)
>Flesh Sculptor (10)
>Planeswalker (4)
>Telekinesis (1)
Slaves
>Hayami Yui
Yui will be my "best friend". She'll help me find artifacts for fun and to help "defeat monsters". She'll be blind to the fact that Cthu and I are monsters though.
>Melissa (1/2)
>Miyo (0)
These two will be helpful as well. Melissa will serve me under the promise as long as she's useful she can keep a modicum of her power while miyo will get what she wants as well for her assistance.


The overall goal is to summon the old one and remove my limitation on changing shape. Then travel the universes to spread chaos and debauchery while accumulating a lot of power

>>7420264
Depends on the fetish.

Like I don't like yours, so I feel poorly about it.

>>7418413

Hi, I'm Lactofork. I intended to continue updating my version, but I got a new job. If there's anything I can do to help you with moving it forward, please don't hesitate to ask. Personally, I think a gitlab repo would be best.

>>7420264
Do it.

>>7420300
Good god man, I thought you were dead.

>>7420300
I think most of the technical issue have been sorted out, but I appreciate the thought.

My interest is mostly in adding new fetishes to it, I like the idea of it being as comprehensive as possible. If there's anything you can think of that you'd like to see in it, that wasn't already, let me know.

the one here
>>7419038
linked a newer copy that I'm now using as a base, you know if this is at least close to the last version you did?