Game thread

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>>7299725
Lets get us some games up in here, boys.

>>7299725
>Beef
Rude!

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>>7299752
Yeah sorry, I don't keep many NSFW ones. No point to have them when I can't post em on /tg/.

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>>7299764
Page 2/2.

>>7299725
I suppose we can start off the thread by asking: What, if anything, are you working on? And what's the ETA?

>>7299767
>What, if anything, are you working on?
A thing where a deity wants to spread the glory of deviance by making your life lewder and/or weirder, and offers various boons in exchange for letting her do so.
>And what's the ETA?
There isn't one.

I don't know what's the point of this thread, there's another already going:

>>7292668

>>7299777
Thats a faggot namefag blog thread.

>>7299765
I always hated this one because the person that made it was clearly incompetent as every image is destroyed, he didnt come up with a single interesting thing to do with the images and going by the top left image doesnt understand what perspective is.

>>7299777
That's a blog-thread, not a CYOA/game thread
>>7299776
>no ETA
I'm not allowed to complain when I ain't making one of my own but that is a shame. Could always use more stuffs.

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>>7299767
>whatcha workin on?
A reformatted version of this, to fit the commonfolk's screens.
>ETA?
Whenever I get off my ass. I got the first 3 done, but I've been putting it off because I have to rewrite all the text and it's just tedious

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>>7299810
The revamp will also have bigger pictures of the girls, since I'm having only 3 per row, so you can actually tell what they look like.

And here's the mystery box, which I'll probably just recycle as-is

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>>7299816

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>>7299822

>>7299804
>I'm not allowed to complain when I ain't making one of my own but that is a shame. Could always use more stuffs.
That's just because I can't into estimating how long it takes for me to make stuff with any particular level of accuracy. Especially not with a project as large as this.

>>7299810
>Lover: Dust
>Guardian: Mercury
>Heads: EMR, Cadmium, Mycezotoa, Hydrochloric Acid, Caffine, Atropa Belladona, Sulfuric Acid
>Mastermind: Liquid Nitrogen
>Destroyer: Vermin
>Tails: Virus, Carbon Monoxide, Poison, Oxygen, Nitric Acid

>>7299822
>>7299823
I love this but I've already made so many builds already.

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I come bearing gifts: the long-missing Lactofork version of the Enchante/d/ Rings CYOA!

BUILD:

**Ring of Endless Life** 0

Powers:
-Immortal
-Painless
-Invulnerability
-No Sustenance
-Immunity

Drawbacks:
-High Output ==> Splooge
-Addictive Semen
-Ready ==> Horny
-Pleasurer (Physical Reflex)
-Faithful (Physical Reflex)
-Lewd Aura ==> Large Aura
-Tattoo
-Pro-Life
-Piercings ==> Both Sets
-Permanent ==> Full-Time
**Ring of Wiz-Dom** 0
>Pun very much intended
Master Powers:
-Magic ==> Magus ==> Archmage
-Ring of Domination

Slave Powers:
+Sharing is Caring (free)
-Immortal
-Invulnerability
-Painless
-No Sustenance
-Immunity
-Vanilla

Slave Drawbacks:
-Occupation (Local Idol ==> Model + Gravure & Seiyuu + H-hentai! + Fluid Selling
-Ready ==> Horny
-Erogenous
-Egg Laying (Vaginal) ==> Chicken ==> Battery
-Submissive ==> They Know ==> General ==> In Need ==> Sanguine Debauchery
-Forget
-Milking
-Lewd Aura ==> Large Aura
-Lust Trigger ("Serpent") ==> Cum Trigger ("Eden")
-Obey Trigger ("Angel", or "Rest now, my angel")
-Lactation ==> Cowgirl ==> Cow ==> Orgasmic Milking
-Collar ==> Leash
-Love (target = wearer of Master Ring)
-Multiple (total breasts = 4)
-Large Breasts
-Pro Life
-Piercings ==> Both Sets
-Tattoo
-Dirty Talk
-Forced Orgasm

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>>7299865
Here, have another CYOA while I'm at it.

BUILD, CONTINUED:

**Ring of Boundless Wealth**

Powers: 0
-Welfare Leech ==> Loadsamoney
-Gifted x2 (Math and Physics)

Drawbacks:
-Erogenous
-Animal Act: Parrot (talkative, sociable, openly affectionate, whistles a lot, grooms self in public, poofs up when angry)
-Egg Laying (Anal) ==> Chicken (it'll be weird, but at least I'll enjoy it)
-Truthful (Physical Reflex)
-Forced Orgasm
-Milking
-Permanent ==> Full Time
-Exposed: Nipples (Physical Reflex)

>>7299767
>Working On: Bloodborne Beast/Kin CYOA
Hard to find good fuckin images thought, most of the monster/alien hentai if find doesn't really fit
>ETA: IDK
Like I said, lot's of crap to sift through

>>7299810
>>7299813
It's okay as a simple CYOA but it's little beside that. Especially for a /d/ thread I see no lewds, not even preferences.

It's completely SFW and that's some bullshit that needs to be improved ASAP.

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Exalted "DLC" for Slut Life. Pic (possibly) related.

https://img.4plebs.org/boards/tg/image/1442/47/1442474142446.pdf

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>>7299822
>>7299823

Quite excellent, but the initial boost is a bit too much. I ended up with eight points, and that was with choosing a fair number of gifts I wasn't terribly interested in.

Yandere CYOA (+15)
Body: Average OR Muscular
Breast: Big OR Ridiculous
Butt: Average
Type: Obsessive - Worshipping (+1)
Pers.: Confident
Optimist
Tomboy
Submissive
Wealthy
Relaxed
Gifted
Filthy
Short
Gifts: Great Cook (-2)
Fetish (-2)
Youthful (-3)
Perfect hair (-1)
Talented (-3)
Good Natured (-4)
Protective (-5)
Together (-7)
Forever (-9)
Quirks: Closer (+2)
Secret Ingredient (+3)
Religious (+2)
Decorator (+2)
Genetic (+3), siblings x4 (+4)
True Friends (+3)
Connections (+3)
Tech Savvy (+4)
Feeding (+2)
Origin: Simply insane
Dream: Your undying love

>>7299925
>Quite excellent, but the initial boost is a bit too much.
There's a newer version where you start out with 5 points. It also has more gifts/quirks to choose from.

>>7299766
>Big dick
>Waifu
>Well connected

>>7299930
You got a link, or are you content to make us sad by teasing us like that?

>>7299933
Screw links, I'll just post the-
>Error: Maximum file size allowed is 4 MB
...ah. I'll go ahead and post them in /tg/ and return with cross-board links.

>>7299933
>>7299938
And here you go:
>>>/tg/52109182
>>>/tg/52109197

class sorcerer
spells erase memory, immortality, summon familiar, time stop, charm and normality

artifacts grimoire and familiar

familiar cat girl, toad girl and homunculus

>>7299788
You gonna be a sissyboy, or you gonna prove you can do better? Hmm?

>>7299816
You should consider changing the summoner upgrade to get mana each time they fuck their familiar instead of having to spend an hour having sex to get a measly two points of mana.

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Anybody got Gentle Femdom and Anon's Imouto? We already got Cowgirl and Yandere so I'd like to try and do all four at once.
>may or may not count as lewd.

>>7300218

>>>/tg/52108473
>>>/tg/52108380
>>>/tg/52100096

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>>7299922
>Exalted dlc for Slut Life

>>7300229
I think he was talking about the Gentle Femdom CYOA that was made by the same person who made the Imouto one.

>>7300230
It's less of a DLC and more just Slut Life reworked to fit in the Exalted setting.

>>7300231
That isn't up, and I don't have it saved. I only knew where those were because I was looking at them in another tab.

>>7300233
Why in the name of the Unconquered Sun himself did you think it was a good idea to combine a game where you're a living sex toy with a setting where you're a literal god king?

>>7300237
Because the game where you are a literal god king has canonical living sex toys?

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>>7299889
It was never really intended to be a /d/ specific thing, but I figured they were disfigured enough to count. Most of them are technically amputees after all. I can't really make the art lewd either, as I'm not the artist.

[spoiler]plus science is my fetish[/spoiler]

I'm not sure what I'd do for an inherently lewd cyoa. I'll think about it.

>>7300218
I have them, but my connection sucks so much ass. I've been trying to post the Trap Queen CYOA for like the past three hours now, but I lose my verification at 40% or so.

And if it's not that, my connection is suddenly lost.

Sorry anon.

>>7300237
>Why in the name of the Unconquered Sun himself did you
I didn't, I'm not the anon who made it. Just explaining the content in more detail.

Also, I'm pretty sure you start as a random schmuck in Slut Life Exalted (who is being made into a living sex toy or something for whatever reason by some force or another).

>>7300241
Yes, and the literal god kings were not those canonical living sex toys

>>7300252
>Yes, and the literal god kings were not those canonical living sex toys
What makes you think you are one of the literal god kings at the start of Slut Life Exalted?

>>7300254
because it's literally the first option you're presented with

>>7300256
The first categry from which you actually make your choices is the Source, i.e. "what is causing you to become a carnal plaything". Or were you referring to the very first paragraph in which it suggests a few potential background stories for you?

i hate that im doing this

>>7299788
Let me come in and justify myself.

A. begginer gallery was a damn good name for it.
B. I made it because there was a lack of content, never claimed to be good.

I would like to know more on the whole perspective thing, of course i'd do things differently now. I'd make the borders better, add titles, have 8 instead of 9, etc

Basically whoever did number 2 was spot on while i was a mile away.

>>7299922
>40 pages

the fuck, bro

>>7300364
I know, right? It should be at least sixty.

I wish to be a king, a super hero and some muscles

cowboy
friends cornelius midlington and mikey hikaru

what i've got egyptian magic tome

>>7300218
finally a CYOA that doesn't try to make all characters look perfect or pure or anime stereotypes

>>7299865
I still don't get what happens if you take off a ring with New World on it. Do you teleport back to earth as if nothing happened? what if you put it back on, do you pick up where you left off?

>>7300646
Yes, it sends you back to earth, and putting it on returns you to where you were in the other world. Time passes even with the ring off.

Anyone got the html version of lactofork? I wanna do a full random run, but rolling 80+ times to get 200 points is a PITA.

>>7300250
I think that's how it works, yes. You chose the Source of your Durance at the beginning, which will be your owner for the duration. After this is up, you can do whatever (up to and including becoming a literal god king).

>>7300647
>full random
>200 points
What, are you choosing every single power?!

>>7300703
.... pretty much.
Why not? I need godlike power to make the drawbacks work.

>>7300704
you know you can't use powers to stop the effects of drawbacks right?

>>7300717
Not directly, no. But you CAN use powers to make the drawbacks less of a problem. Rape touch is a nuisance? Mind control the person to have sex with you and not remember it. Submissive tree would cramp your freedom? Not if you take ideal match, sanguine debauchery and ring of devotion. Must blow is too shameful? Use mind reading to find the people that look down on you for it, and then make an example out of them- nobody would dare look down on you now. Truthful makes it impossible to lie? Tell the king truthfully that you can and will wipe out the entire royal line if he messes with you. For all the perks that happen in "public", just create a secluded village full of beautiful women trained on how to make your other drawbacks as easy as possible.

People won't insult you, call you a slut or abuse you if they know you can destroy them, their family and their country with a few words.

>>7300647
... you really don't get the whole rolling for points. If you want to cheat and give yourself points just do that instead. No one cares you cheat.

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>>7299725
It's not really a /d/ game thread until this is posted.

Here, I'll start.

>Immortality LGE
For one point more I'll choose the age of 19
>Magical equipment
I want a collar that any time I wear grants me the ability of mind control (Similar to Kilgrave's)
>Gifted
>Money

Be kind to me anons

I've got a major request, and I'm really sorry about this, but I've pretty much given up.

Could someone please post the Trap Queen CYOA? I got a build and subsequent world-building I want to share, I would do it myself but: >>7300245

Like I mentioned before, my connection sucks so much ass.

>>7300868
I'm not saying taking the DRAWBACKS is a pain in the ass, but the act of getting a random number, scrolling through an utterly massive list, then doing (admittedly easy) math is a pain in the ass when you have to do it one or two hundred times.

Theres an older html version of enchanted rings that does all of that for you- rolls the random number, highlights the drawback, then you just choose to accept or deny the drawback (or move up/down the tree as needed), and then adds or subtracts from your total. It also tracks which drawbacks you already have, which is pretty damn useful when you're taking 30 or 40 different drawbacks.

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>>7300883

>Immortality LGE
Your appearance is pic related. Your task is to bathe in a public body of water at least once a week for at least an hour, while in an extremely revealing swimsuit. (naked is also acceptable) Both natural and artificial bodies of water are allowed, including pools, hottubs and bathouses, but it's gotta be a place open to the general public. The water will have a fountain of youth type effect that will keep you young, heal all disease and injury, and keep your skin completely flawless with the effectiveness scaling with the amount of other people that have also bathed in that water recently. (It'll also restore the chub if you attempt to lose weight)

>Magical equipment
Sorry for you, but have no idea who Kilgrave is. If you were expecting a subby backlash for the collar, then nope, it's a shock collar. Your mind control gives perfectly irresistible commands, but doesn't actually effect personality/thought processes and it zaps you relative to how much your victim dislikes the order. If it's something they'd easily willingly do, no effect. Most things on a level like "give me your wallet" give you a painful zap. If it's something your victim would truly rather die than commit (or if you order a non-suicidal person to kill themselves) the resulting shock will be powerful enough to kill you.

>Gifted
Wrestling. You can break out of just about any grapple, or pin just about anyone, or anything.

>Money
An enchanted stripper's thong. While you are wearing it, people will be compelled to stuff money into your clothes, especially into your bra, usually groping you in the process. mostly singles and the occasional fiver. This works regardless of occasion and location and the compulsion scales with how attractive they find you. Has a strong enough normality aura that nobody involved will get in trouble for indecency but onlookers may find it distasteful.

>>7300983
>Kilgrave
JEEEESSSICAAAAAA

>>7300883
">Immortality LGE"
One more point to be 22
">Gifted"
">Magical Equipment"
Anything that helps me learn much, much faster--long-term boosting int and memory would also be wonderful.
">Wish"
To be a stunning beauty at Oxbridge+ tier.

First time doing this, wish me luck!

>>7301027
Whoops, greentext fail. The life of a perma-lurker, alas. Apologies.

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>>7300888

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>>7301027
>LGE
You look like this girl - a beautiful, fair maiden with a delicate complexion and an innocent smile on her face.
The rules are simple: You must ingest cum, at least one full load, per week. However, you must do it in front of at least one person, the cum must be mixed into something else (food or drinks), and you must pretend/genuinely not know that it is cum you're eating.
>Gifted
You're the best at combining ingredients to change the flavor of any food.
>Wish
Granted. You were accepted at Oxbridge because knowledge of your exceptional fellatio skills are known all throughout the country. The headmaster is an old, perverted fat man who expects you to personally thank him for this opportunity daily. He is more than happy to help you out with your immortality, and invites you to the teacher's dinner each night.
While all teachers eat a buffet, your meal comes preprepared.
>Magical equipment
Since you didn't specify what it is, I'll say it's a tongue-ring. When cum touches the ring (and the ring is in your mouth), you temporarily become smarter. To maintain the boost you must ingest cum in copious amounts and regularly.
Mixing cum from multiple sources is more effective, and saving up cum does not work. It must be fresh from the source.

>>7300883
LGE
Realm
Combine
Equip Black Rock Shooter's clothing that summons her weapon

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>>7301041
Thank you so much!

> Build Time:
> Trap Queen
Ashley
Maria
Nima
Jess
Rin

> Adjustments
> Behaviour
Harem [On the assumption that each one comes with three]
Royal Marriage Bonus

> Body [Traps]
Breasts Bonus [A-Cups: Maria, Rin][B-Cups: Ashley, Nima][C-Cup: Jess]
Vagina
Womb

> Body [Me]
Athleticism

> Current Family Layout
Married to five really powerful political figures now, each one represents a new phase in the history of their Families, or indeed, the start of a dynasty.

Each of them also come with three of the most beautiful women of their kingdoms, these three were meant to make me favour one of my spouses over others, but I managed to turn that around and had them become Attendants to their leader. Oh certainly, I could use them for sexual purposes as well, and with all of them having been sterilized, there was no risk of any...complications.

I also slowly got the Attendants to start learning how to politic and soon after they slowly began speaking up during meetings, their views from the perspective of a citizen proved to be a valuable source of reality checks for the Princes and other Diplomats.

Moving on to that, I figured that one child per Queen would be enough, especially with what I have planned for the planet. These kids will be receive small amounts of gene-therapy until they are 10 to make sure their masculine features and those of their "mother" are expressed well and without defect. It will the same therapy that my descendants from here on will go through as well to instill a sense of Permanence.
[01 / ??]

Terrible world building ho!

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>>7301227
> New Members of the Ruling Council
Heirs are born to Queens, only one Heir for each Queen. These Heirs are educated in the highest quality of education from the moment they learn how to talk as they subjected to genetherapy. When the Heirs turn 5, that is when the Queens are raised.

Queens are the sons of noble families, chosen to be the Heir's wife, are usually one to three years younger than them. Each noble family is given a chance to produce a Queen to be introduced to the Heir on his birthday, the honour is transferred from family to family at random, with the Royals in the Capital keeping track.

Ten years later, the Queen will choose three of the most beautiful women in the Kingdom to become his Attendants.
[02 / ??]

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>>7301229
> The World Plan
Assuming that I land in one of their Nations, Union of Penzance as my choice, I sit Ashley down to explain to him the Reality of my showing up, the basically it was an accident but, sooner or later, my organization (and home) is going to figure out where I ended up. Not all of my people are nice or understanding, so his world needs to show a United Front for when they do come knocking, whether in my life time or the future. So I dangle an option before him, that I marry him and the four others interested in me so that their nations can unify the world and begin developing the shit out of their technologies and society.

So that should, hopefully, set things up for a meeting between the five's diplomats and myself behind closed doors, I lay what I told Ashley before everyone there, and even point out that a union between the five of them should give them enough economic, military, and political power to slowly take on their world and other nations (these five aren't the only Kingdoms on their planet, they can't be). That's what I offer by marrying their leaders, a chance for each of them to gain enough power to almost by default become the true major powers in their regions or kingdoms if they weren't already, AND the guarantee that there won't be any official backstabbing going on. Add to that my ftl tech and any other peices of technology that came with me depending whether or not my mission was exploration or military, and the threat that I could easily disable it whenever I want should get them to treat this and my warning seriously.
[03 / ??]

...I think I may have wrote too much.

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>>7301233
> The World Plan (cont.)

Sometime later after some hemming and hawwing, I'd imagine that the world is treated to some surprising news one day, the top leaders of five nations/kingdoms/empires are all getting married to signify an alliance between the five, and they are all getting married to the man who from the stars. There was also a new tradition to be done in the ceremony, as a way to show their commitment to the Alliance and the one who made it possible, they would recieve their breasts and vagina+womb in a private ceremony the next day, they could bare him the heirs of the new Alliance.

After everything is said and done, the hardwork begins as Maria and Jess, using the influence they gathered from the others, take over their respective nations and go on to add them to the Alliance properly. The wheeling and dealing after that continued with diplomats being to sovereign territories to let themselves become subordinate to their nearest Alliance Nation, all but becoming another province or colony. In return, their cultural identity remains intact, they gain the wealth and security offered by the parent nation. Where peaceful discussion failed, the nation was simply isolated as others joined, any military action on their part was met and crushed with ours, but the Nation's borders would remain involable until the nation surrenders and is subsequently dismantled, its people split apart to be relocated within other nations that had long since been absorbed into the Alliance.

As soon as all of that is done, the World will be divided into five regions, each Region bearing the name of the Alliance Member it will be administered by.
[04 / ??]

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>>7301235
> The New Political Landscape
Starting from the smallest scale, the Provences that make up a Region, is administered by the local Noble and his Family, they preside over the local parliament of representatives voted by the residents of each county in that Provence.

These Provinces then report to the Royal Family ruling that particular Region, a member of the Noble Family back in the Provence lives in the Region Capital where they work hard to represent the Provence in the Parliamentary Meetings once a month, the Heir and his Spouse sometimes sit in on these meetings.

When the Council meets, the Heirs, their Queens, and Attendants discuss matters that involve the Planet as a whole. The agreed upon direct is then announced at Regions' Parliaments.
[05 / 05]

The only thing I'm missing is a world map so I can show the ideal territory distribution between the Regions.

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>>7299941
Wunderbar.

BODY TYPE: Curvy
BREAST SIZE: Big
HIPS/ASS: Thicc

TYPE: Harmless, Worshiping, Stalking

PERSONALITY/TRAITS: Optimist, Submissive, Poor, Relaxed, Gifted, Filthy, Short (6' shorter), Foreign (German, speaks fluent English)

GIFTS: Income + Bonus, Good Taste, Good People, Comedian, Good Natured, Motherly, Fetish + Bonus, Great Cook, Beautiful

QUIRKS: Closer, Decorator, Romantic Trip, Drugging, Her's Forever, Love Bites, Addict, Diary, Demanding

Origin: Abuse

Dream: A Family

>>7301239
Swap origin for Lonely

>>7299816
Class:
Sorcerer
Spells:
Charm 2
Immortality 2
Transform 1
Time stop 1
>>7299817
Artifacts:
2 Familiars: Homunculus, Angel

>>7299816
>Class - Summoner+
With the way I'm planning to go about it, I'd have the same mana regen speed as a Mage, similar casting-readiness as a Sorcerer, and one more permanent familiar than I could get from the artifacts.
>Spells
> - Alter World+
For large scale changes, which can be anything from fun and profit (e.g. applying something akin to a permanent version of Normality+, or even a global Porn Physics) to the betterment of mankind (e.g. making everyone healthy and stuff).
> - Summon Toy+
Mainly for the fun and profit of acquiring practically whatever item I desire (as long as I can imagine a version of it that also functions as a sex toy). Could also come in handy for training certain familiars (possibly even people) into adopting a mindset more to my liking.
> - Time Stop
Key to the Sorcerer-like casting-readiness. Basically stop time, recharge mana, cast the spell I was going to, recharge mana, start time again.
> - Transform+
First thing I'd do with this would be making it so I can keep one of my familiars inside me at all times, have sex with 'em constantly if I so desire, and making it so that the aforementioned potentially-constant sex wouldn't get in the way of doing anything else.
> - Immortality+
Because not everyone wants to be immortal, so this way I can pick and choose who to bestow it upon.
>>7299817
>Artifacts - Familiar x2
Two of them will be a Homunculus (because smartypants personal assistant and such, might get training to reduce/remove the "acting cold" thing) and a Centaur (housewife, transformed into a humanoid shape that better fits inside a regular house).
The last one (who'd basically act as a full-time manabattery, more-or-less) would be either Homunculus (another personal assistant, this one carried with me), Slime Girl (clones could be handy for communicating over long distances), Cat Girl (luck boost might be nice), Arachne (spider silk clothing might be cool), or Half-Dragon (money magnet could come in handy).

>>7299822
15 Points
Muscular
Big Breasts
Thicc Ass
Worshipping +1 (16)
Stalking +4 (20)
Monopolizing +4 (24)
>>7299823
Confident, Optimist, Dominant, Wealthy, Gifted, Total Fucking Bitch, Tall.
Gifts:
Youthful -3 (21), Perfect Hair -1 (20), Talented -3 (17), Together -7 (10), Forever -9 (1), Beautiful -5 (-4), Protective -5 (-9), Fetish -2 (-11), Motherly -2 (-13).
"Quirks":
Romantic Trip +3 (-10), Closer +2 (-8), Consent not required +3 (-5) Genetic +7 (Mother and four siblings, 2 points), Connections +3 (5), True Friends +3 (8), Tech Savvy +4 (12), Collar +4 (16), Teasing +3 (19)
Simply Insane
Undying Love

Went with more quirks than needed for the Yandere Experience. Things start with a Romantic Trip.

Still looking for that multipage dungeon/boss killing cyoa. Each page described a different room type with each room being different monsters that you could fight and if you lost you had to do certain sexual things based on rolls. While trying to earn enough xp from fights to challenge the boss and win.

>>7301332
Not a CYOA as the term is used in these threads, just a rollchart and/or masturbation game. Someone (I think it might be Bedlam) made a RAGS game out of / based on it.

>>7299867
Leather, High Fashion, Accessories
Defense, Resistance, Eternal, Regenerating, Enviromental, Sustaining,Youth, Prestidigation.

>>7301337
Bedlam made such a thing, and it was actually a bit interesting (If buggy and obnoxious as shit in a lot of ways). He started working on making it less buggy and obnoxious, but stopped in favor of working on RNG Simulator 2008 instead

>>7301041
Emperor Rin (Landing in Space Japan Trapland explains EVERYTHING)
8 Points
Behaviour:
Royal Marrriage (6) (All)
Yes Master (5)
Body:
Curves (4)
Breasts (2) (Lactation)
Vagina (1)
Womb (0)
Athleticism (0)

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>>7299816
>>7299817
>New Gender = Futnari
livingthedream.jpg
>Class - Mage+
GIMME THEM MAGIC TITTIES.
>Spells:
> - Alter World
End world hunger, unite humanity, solve inequality, poverty, and disease, then top it all off with a massive orgy? All in a day's work!
> -Summon Sex Toy+
Even without the obvious kinky applications, just IMAGINE how effective this would be on slowly retraining/reforming/reprogramming my enemies. The toys don't explicitly disappear when I'm done with them, either, so I can keep them for later. Resource management!
> - Time Stop
Did I say "slowly"? Not anymore, now that we're capable of delivering 200+ hours of brainwashing in under a minute!
> -Transform
Cures genetic defects as well as being GREAT for my reeducation programs.
> -Porn Physics
We can keep this up for as long as we want...
> -Immortality+
... and by that, I mean functionally forever.

>Artifacts: Familiar + Scrying Orb
Transform my adoring centauress housewife into a human to take up less space, and use the Scrying Orb to use my powers on recalcitrant individuals (like greedy CEOs or world leaders.)

>>7301511
This is 4chan, dude. Whether or not someone is new is irrelevant--EVERYONE is a faggot.

>>7300883
>Immortality LGE
>Money
>Wish
Make me a big dicked catgirl
>Any Other Option x2

>>>/tg/52124305

Pervy Super-Person CYOA

>>7301646
Dammit, wrong one. Still hot, though.

HERE'S the right one.

>>>/tg/52124244

I recall someone asking for the Gentle Femdom CYOA: >>>/tg/52125230

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>>7301700
Done.

1/2

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>>7301705
2/2

>>7301705
>>7301707
Someone need to do a new versión of this

>>7301786
What needs to be changed? Or do you just mean it needs to be further expanded upon?

>>7301786
>Someone

I think we found him :)

>>7301786
I'd do a new version but can't replicate the god tier design

>>7299859
Post it anon, i'd like to see it.

>>7300883
> Immortality LGE

> Magical Equipment
Set of clothes that will always fit, and always match the occasion. Fancy dinner party? Cocktail dress. Adventuring through the woods? Traveling clothes, boots. Etc.

> Gifted
plz be nice.

>Money

Here goes nothing I suppose.

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>>7302119
>Immortality LGE
You look like pic related. Exhibitionism is the source of your powers. Walking around in a semi-revealing outfit and showing some skin allow you to considerably slow your aging, but other acts can boost that effect. Bending down to pick something and giving some bystanders a show counts for a few hours, or even a few days if you didn't wear any panties at that time. Getting caught masturbating in a public place will give you more than a week of peace.

>Magical Equipment
Granted. This is really the perfect set of clothes : comfortable, always fitting, and feels really good against your skin. Maybe too good actually. Especially when it decides to grope you out of nowhere, slowly caress your sensitive parts or rub against you down there. Try to keep your voice down, but it'll not be easy with your sensitivity increased tenfold.

>Gifted
You're really good at lying, and you have the best pokerface in the world. People are unable to read you if you don't want them to, and you can make yourself appear calm in any situation. You could lie straight to the face of the most perceptive of men, and get away with it. It'll probably come in handy when your suit suddenly forces you to cum in the middle of a crowd. They'll even believe that your blush is actually due to a cold.

>Money
Didn't specify the item, so I'll go with a simple earring. As long as you wear it, you'll find twentys lying on the ground or suddenly receive inheritances from unknown members of your family. However, it slowly alters your perception of what is proper and push you to give into your desires. It'll not be a real problem at first - you'll just feel more adventurous and teasing - but keep it too long and you might end up on your knees in a dark alley, begging strangers to fuck you with a smile on your face.

>>7301786
It came out last month, why does it need a new version

>>7301041
Jess
Bow down
Nymphomaniac
Cock enhancement plus bonus

>>7301705
High school
Amazonian
Muscular
Mammoth
Child bearing
Sexy
Long and straight
Bronze
Dionysian nymph
Mostly equal
Possesive, smugtacular, charismatic, cool, pervert, idealistic, motherly, neat freak, aggresive, bant-master
Cuddling, CFNM, smothering, frottage, being on top, milking dry, territorial, sweaty sex, public sex, rapeplay
Travelling, running, lifting, cooking, sports
Piercings, tattoos, futa

>>7300883
>gifted

>magical realm

>true love
She's reasonably attractive, with no major physical or mental defects, loves me back and won't cheat on me or try to hurt me

>wish
Mental time travel on command, keeping my current personality intact.

(In case it's unclear, by mental time travel I'm referring to being able to send my consciousness back into my past body, instead of physically being transported there/then)

Be kind, anons

>>7299752
I've seen that bulge on dick cat somewhere before.

>>7301646
>>7301650
Thanks for the cross link!
Author here if anyone has any requests for the next update.
Next update should have a lot of minor tweaks, plus a couple of new companions, side kicks, and powers. Big new addition will be global threats for additional points.

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>>7301705
>Fresh Graduate
>Shorty
>Scrawny
>Bee Stings
>Average Behind
>Gloomy
>Long and Straight
>Pale
>Receptive
>Mostly Equal
>Possessive, Stoic, Charismatic, Feminine, Lightweight, Cool, Pure, Pragmatic, Kind-Hearted
>Cunning, Needy
>Cuddling, Frottage, Being on Top
>Movies, Video Games, Anime, Computer, Cooking
>Sickly, Addict (good kush)
She seems cool to everyone, but she's helplessly inept, yet she refuses to admit it. She'll rely on you heavily, whenever she forgets her medication, leaves her flash drive at home, or gets ill, you'll be expected to be a dutiful attendant; however, in return she will do her best to be there for you, which doesn't count for much, given her uselessness, but she can cook well, she's an attentive lover, and she shares many of your (my) interests.
I'd have chosen albino, but they're weird looking irl

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>>7302379
>Gifted
You are the best in the world at BDSM and any related activities.
>Magical Realm
Your magical realm is a Magical Forest filled with attractive Nymphs who find you attractive. The land is rich with Fruits with various NSFW Magic Effects and Water that invigorates the drinker. Sadly, you can only come during weekends or Holidays.
>True Love
She's your therapist and looks, Pic Related. Why do you need a therapist? Why, look below
>Wish
The issues with your power are twofold: For one, nobody will believe you if you ever try to tell them about the future, outside of your true love. The second, for every day you go back you lose a memory, working your way forward from Birth, and all records are deleted. While you will never forget your true love or be radically altered, you should get used to forgetting old stories, and who knows what would happen if you ever caught up to the present.
Now for Me:
Immortality, LGE. Paying for 18 Years old.
Gifted x 2
Magical Equipment: A Book that will let me have access to anything that has ever been written.
Wish: I wish to become more intelligent forevermore.

>>7302488
*I wish to grow more intelligent forevermore.

>>7302491
Changing the wording won't help you there. You're talking about D&D style int, right? Sure, no problem. Every day, your head randomly acquires new facts, and eventually they add up, making you able to do a great many things. However, your wisdom stat isn't going up any, so you may not realize that your large hadron collider is going to blow up the planet you just so happen to live on until after you flip the switch.

>>7300883
>Immortality LGE
Age 19 for one point more
> Wish
"I wish to be a goddess"
> gifted
> magical equipment
A cute choker that gives me the ability to charm people with a high level of influence on them

Please be kind anons

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>>7302585

>Immortality
to maintain your new body you must get at least one male to masturbate to the thought of you a month, alternatively you can have them masturbate while alone in a room with you. You however are not allowed to help out and if you have any carnal activity with that male for the next five years the affect is void. Each time must be with someone who is not under these conditions, You could use the same male in five years if you so desired and have a string of 60 men. If you miss a month you will age a year that will be irreversible. Eventually you getting men to masturbate for you and blueballing them will get around.

>Wish
You are a goddess, you are the Goddess of gushing, you can make yourself and other females extra wet and squirt, you can also make male fluids much stronger and flow easier, this can not be used to fulfill your immortality requirement.

>Gifted
You are the best gymnast in the world, you are incredibly flexible. (I'm not a bad guy)

>Magical Item
Your magical choker can not be used for large scale personal gain, the people you charm will do anything you say as long as it doesn't harm them physically or financially, they will not do anything sexual for you unless it is a form of sex involving you pleasuring them equally (No using this to fulfill your requirements!)

For Me:
> Immortality LGE I'll pay the extra point for the age of 21.
>Gifted (I'll roll the dice)
>Magical Realm
>Wish
"I want to be a cute Naga girl" (More girl than snake perferably.)

Well I will probably regret that last one

>>7299766
Aphrodisiac Cum
Waifu
Well-Connected

>>7300883
Immortality LGE
Gifted x4

>>7302095
Ok. I switch between two builds, either taking "I know something is wrong with me" or not.
>>7299822
>>7299822
>Be yandere
>Curvy
>Average breasts
>Thicc butt

>Worshipping +1
>Stalking +4
>Delusional +4
Would like Dependent too but not allowed to. Worshipping is pretty much the same anyway.
9+15 = 24

>Girly girl, submissive, wealthy, paranoid, gifted, filthy, classical romantic

>Great cook -2
>Fetish -2
>Perfect hair -1
>Talented -3
>Beautiful -5
-13 = 11

>Closer +2
>Secret ingredient (bonus) +5
>Religious +2
>Decorator +2
>Marking +4
Except only for me
>Love bites +2
+17 = 28

>Origin: Childhood friend
Miracle is cute too
>Dream: To please you

I remember having a lot less points.

So that's build 1. Build 2 loses the more extreme things that I want to do, like the shrine and putting your pictures on my walls, and I take Self Controlled. Because I know this isn't a healthy way to want a relationship to me but I still want it..

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>>7302665
> Immortality LGE I'll pay the extra point for the age of 21.
You are now pic related, your task is to keep a cock in you for a hour straight once a week. After your task has been fulfilled you earn a day of wiggle room per load blown in you by said cock.

>Gifted (I'll roll the dice)
Your belly dancing makes Shantae's look like a beached fish having a seizure.

>Magical Realm
Your realm's theme is harsh but beautiful desert landscapes. You'll always spawn in an oasis town.

>Wish
"I want to be a cute Naga girl" (More girl than snake perferably.)
Done, you're still warm-blooded even. The catch is that your tail is pretty vulnerable. You can't clothe it while still being able to move comfortably, and if you're not fast crossing the streets it could get run over.

>Immortality LGE: I'm shelling out for no task.
>True Form
>Magical Realm

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>>7300883
Immortality LGE
Money
Magical Realm
Gifted

Pic related

>>7300883
Immortality
Wish: I wish to be an attractive young woman
Wish: I wish for a loving family
Money
Gifted

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>>7300274
Not him, but I commend you for actually trying to make more content.

Sure it's not the best CYOA ever made, plenty of things that could be improved, but the best way to improve is practice and getting feedback where needed/desired.
"Beginner's gallery" as name disclaimed any expectation of flawless quality in my opinion, I'd use a similar name if I'd ever get enough inspiration to make content myself.

Please do keep on making more content when you can.

>>7302973
>Wish can only be taken once

>>7303004
then make the second wish a true love: make me a great husbando and make the mexican pay for it

>>7300883
> Immortality LGE

>magical equipment
preferably something that helps one of the other three.

>Money
enough to not have to work.

>gifted

>>7302963
>Immortality LGE
Alright, you get to be the little girl of your choosing. Unfortunately, you're gonna get bullied. You're a princess in your magical realm (we'll come back to it), and government is the servant of the people. As such, you must comply for 24 hours a week with any sexually humiliating task requested by your subjects. You will be collared and chained to a post in the center of town for those 24 hours, and anyone can use you in any way that wouldn't cause permanent damage. You will separately have to give a speech in front of your kingdom once per month. You'll be in some revealing outfit or fetishwear and forced to put on a show.

>Money
You have a circle that can be stuck to surfaces. This can only be done in public place (city square, public bathroom, etc.). When placed, it generates a gloryhole that people will be drawn to use. Satisfying someone through the hole gives you access to the royal treasury for a small amount of spending money. The weirder you get with it, the more money.

>Magical Realm
Your kingdom is a traditional high-fantasy setting. Your subjects are all either monster men, or monster futas. You are both the only regular human, and the only regular girl in the kingdom. As such, you are highly sought after. People make a game of sullying your purity and degrading you. They all have huge dicks too.

>Gifted
Mastery of the mouth: You have a silver tongue, in more ways than one. You're the best at orating, and at oral. Your speeches are just as legendary as your blowjobs, and you can talk your way through almost anything. Anything you can't talk your way out of, I'm sure you could find another way for your tongue to have everyone walk away satisfied. Your mouth is also now an erogenous zone.

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>>7303155
As for me, I'm gonna do this:
Immortality LGE (Pic unrelated, can be anything)
Wish: I wish to be a cute monstergirl! (Can be any type you want, surprise me)
Magical Realm
Gifted
Magical Equipment

>>7300883
>Wish
Replacement of my body with polyalloy one (like T-1000)
>True love
My tulpa in real body.
She's disabled and I have to be around quite a plenty of my time, dealing with her needs and desires.
>Magic realm
Copy of Earth in its current moment, however the time is stopped there. I can interact with anything like before.
>Gifted
Photographic memory.

>>7303180
You don't get to decide the flaw of your True Love, the theme of your Magical Realm, or the skill you gain from Gifted. All that is up to whoever decides to complete your build.

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>>7303163
>Immortality LGE
15, Pic Related, your task is to eat at least seven pounds of human flesh.
>I wish to be a cute monstergirl!
You're a Shoggoth Girl, able to become a massive creature of black slime that can take any form physically possible with the amount of mass at your disposal at will. You are also incredibly durable and resistant to pain. Note that using more of your abilities will lead to greater hunger.
>Magical Realm
Your magical realm is a beach, filled with cute aquatic monstergirls. Sadly, they do not count for your immortality, because that would be cheap.
>Gifted
You are the best violinist in the world.
>Magical Equipment
A Small Straightrazor. Upon cutting someone, nothing they do can make any noise for six minutes and twelve seconds.
My Turn
>Immortality LGE, Pay for 18 Years Old.
>Magical Realm
>Money
>Wish: To have power over life and death.

>>7303211
Aw, shit....
But, I see your concern in it, mb you can do that then :^)?

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>>7303220
>beach, filled with cute aquatic monstergirls
>shoggoth
The monster girls are all giant penguins

>>7303228
lolno

>>7301705
>>7301707
Christmas Cake
Amazonian
Muscular
Washrack or Busty, can't decide
Child Bearing
Sexy
Pixie Cut
Ebony
Sexual Predator
Fulltime Dom

Charismatic
Tomboy
Cool
Pervert
Kind-Hearted
Idealistic
Cunning
Aggressive
Motherly
Neat Freak

Orgasm Denial
Bondage
Toys
Pet-Play
Cross-Dressing
Oral
Rape-Play
Smothering
Sweaty Sex

Videogames
Computer
Travelling
Lifting
Television

Futanari
Piercings
Tattoos

>>7302996
>Option to take it up the add to hit human peak

So this was made by a /fit/izen, then?

>>7301705
FAGE: Fresh Graduate
SIZE: Amazonian
BUILD: High-end Athletic or low end Muscular, whatever results in clearly defined muscles and doesn't turn her into a roid tumor lord
BREASTS: Busty
HIPS: Child Bearing
FACE: Noble
HAIR: Sex hair
SKIN: Bronze
SEX DRIVE: Sexual Predator
ATTITUDE: Private Submissive
PERSONALITY: Generous, Smugtacular, Tomboy, Cool
FETISHES: Cuddling, Sweaty Sex (3x), Impregnation, Oral (x3), Milking Dry, Territorial (would be interesting to see how this mixes with Generous personality)
HOBBIES: Lifting, Vidya, Cooking, Hunting
EXTRA/INHUMAN FEATURES: Tattoos, Great Horns, Pointy Ears, Extra Arms, Strange Skin

Essentially an Oni Girl

>>7302943
You're a good person.

>>7302943
>warm-blooded
This fucking nigger... It's called "endothermic" you high school dropout.

>>7299865
there are some interesting combos in this.
for example:
ring of simultaneous, lasting orgasms (+4 total):
pleasurer +2 with physical reflex trigger
forced orgasm +2

>>7299865
I'm just curious, how do you believe "convince" people to put on a slave ring? I'm just trying to think how you can conceivably convince someone to put on a ring of drawbacks

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>>7303220
>Immortality LGE, Pay for 18 Years Old.

Your form will be a terrifying, alien sort of monster, as shown in the pic. Your task will be that any non-human that asks you to can breed with you, and you must spend one day a week meeting all the requests that have piled up. Sometimes this day will instead be spent birthing the monsters. On the upside, you have the physical capacity to breed with any of them, and this makes you absurdly popular as some of these species have few females.

>Magical Realm

Your realm's theme is gothic horror; there are vampires, zombies, and all sorts of eldritch horrors around, and human lives tend to be short and painful. Not an issue for you of course, since you're a member of the monster aristocracy.

>Money

Your gain a knife with a constantly dull blade that cannot ever be sharpened. If you use it to torture someone, then each time they scream the knife will create gemstones that are extremely valuable out of the victim's screams, thus silencing them. Possibly worse is that the knife also steals the victim's memories, so they can't know that you did it either.

>Wish: To have power over life and death.

You may bring anyone back to life by killing another person (with or without your powers), and can kill anyone by allowing another random person who you do not choose to be killed as well. Thus, bringing someone back to life using only your powers would require the death of one person you choose, and one person you don't.

>>7303463
Give the ring enticing powers, like how I put all of the immortality abilities on it.

>>7299867
first, the best armor type:
auxiliary limb

then the required enchantments:
sustaining, so you can replace internal organs without killing the host
self fitting, so said organs can surgically implant themselves
eternal, so they don't rust out
immutable, so the damn priests cant disenchant your internal organs

then for actual effects:
youth because you need a long time to make these things.
alteration + transformation, these are ridiculously versatile even if inefficient.
aura, so you can effect others
affinity, so you can be a GREAT WIZARD
regenerating, so you can make organs removable without being fatal

example applications:
dozens of writhing tentacles sprouting from your back that let you cast spells
an artificial heart that grants eternal life and health
a functional robotic dick that attaches itself to a woman turning her into a futa and makes everyone nearby really horny

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>>7303446

>berating people for not using a fancy word that means the same thing
>engaging in Latinate vs Germanic word-snobbery
>being so much of a brainlet that you need to perpetuate linguistic inequities that go back to 1066 just so you can feel superior to other people

fucking pleb

>>7302458
Be carefull with the sickly, because it's usually a very big source of anxiety, and sometimes she's more sick than you would think...

>>7299816
>>7299817
>Class
Summoner+
>Spells
Summon Toy+ (7)
Time Stop+ (5)
Transform (4)
Porn Physics (3)
Normality (2)
Enslave+ (0)
>Artifacts
Grimoire (Immortality)
Wand
>Familiar
Kitsune

2 Questions
If I stop time and have an hour's worth of timestop sex with my Familiar do I still gain Mana?

Would everyone else think it's normal if I were to rape someone after the 10 hours are up, or would I be accused of Rape afterwards?

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>>7300883
Pic unrelated
>Immortality LGE
>Magical Realm
>Money
>Any other option

>>7300883
>Immortality
>Gifted
>Magical Realm
>Money

>>7303760
>>>7300883
>>Immortality
You will age normally until the age of 100
You can still get an erection and your sex drive won't change but the rest of your body will
Once your body reaches 100 you get a reset and your body will become that of a twenty year old again
This cycle will repeat endlessly
>>Gifted
Master of chess (naturally high intelligence comes with this)
>>Magical Realm
Typical fantasy kingdom where you are a corrupt king
Most of the population hates you and will regularly try to revolt
The army stays loyal and will enforce your word as law without question
>>Money
Midas touch but it ONLY works on people
You can turn it off at will though

>>7303722
This one's mine so for my extra point I'll choose
>Gifted

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Anybody have any similar to this?

>>7303794
Similar how, exactly?

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>>7300883
>Immortality (LGE)
>Magical Realm
>Gifted
>Money

Pic is just whatever. Figured I should post some porn since I don't have anything to actually contribute as far as other CYOAs go

>>7303814
The structure. I really like how you have the points that affect an ending. The femdoms nice too.

>>7303785
>>7303722
ooh, neat.
>ILGE
You are an adorable little girl forever. Your cuteness is positively heart-melting.
Task: You must get someone to cuddle and headpat you at least once every week, or you will begin aging rapidly by a year per week. Once the headpats resume, you will snap back to little girl mode.
>Magical Realm
Your realm is a depraved, endless dungeon. It stretches on forever, is randomly generated, and is populated by invariably lewd monsters and demi-human races. They see purity and handholding as deviant and profoundly offensive, and will attempt to "corrupt" any innocent and cute little girl they find. This generally involves your usual /d/ lewd shenanigans. You won't actually be harmed or affected, but that won't stop the inhabitants from trying to lewd you up.
>Money
The source item is a teddy bear backpack. Very fluffy. Maximum cute.
>Gifted
You have the world's most vile tongue. You are unparalleled in the art of crafting elaborate, scathing, and extremely eloquent insults. The horrifying vulgarities you can spill forth can cause the most stonefaced stoic types of people crumple and weep. No matter how much you use this talent, you never really gain any notoriety for it, as people just think "who, that? naw, she probably doesn't know any words worse than 'stupid.'"
And that's all 5 points.

>>7303622
>means the same thing
You inbred mongrel. Lizards can easily have internal temperatures that exceed humans, yet they are somehow "cold blooded".

>>7303622
>endothermic
>fancy
>means the same thing
wot
do you even words?

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>>7303815
>Immortality (LGE)
You have been selected as a wife by the queen of Hell. As long as you stay in Hell, you will not age, but whenever you leave you will age at a rate of year per hour, and once you come back you will age backwards by a year a day until you have reached the pictured age. While you can't die or suffer mental issues due to age, it still won't be pleaseant.
>Magical Realm
Hell. You are considered the co-ruler of hell, and can tell any demon to do anything non sexual. After all, The Devil wouldn't want you to cheat on her, would she?
>Gifted
You have become the Best at Torture and BDSM. The Devil isn't interested in you for no reason, after all.
>Money
You have access to the unlimited coffers of hell. No drawbacks, other than that it will he hard to spend it when you're bound to hell.
For me:
Immortality, LGE: 18
True Form
Money
To be able to move between & control many bodies.

Anybody got Serene Serenity? Or is it too pure for /d/?

>>7301646
>>7301650
>>7302395
***LAVENDER BUILD***
PEDIGREE: 8
STATUS: 8
ALLURE: 7
===FORM===
>Genitalia: Vagina
-Embellishments
-Lubrication
-Musculature
-Cilia
-Lumen
-Plush x3
>Shape: Enticing
>Chest: Gifted
>INFLUENCES:
-Pseudodevascent (combined aesthetic with Xenosubstantial and Quasicosmic, see below)
-Xenosubstantial (combined with Pseudodevascent and Quasicosmic, see below)
-Quasicosmic (combined with Pseudodevascent and Xenosubstantial. My form shall appear as a human-shaped patch of purest night, replete with stars, galaxies, nebulae, and the like. My gaze will burn with the light of a thousand supernovae, searing the minds of those who dare meet it.)
-Multiplexive (I'll take six arms, two more brains, and redundant vital organs like hearts and the like. Gonna come in handy.)
>FACE:
-Seductive Visage
-Chakra Eye
-Elder Gaze
>FLOURISHES:
-Ouroboros Metabolism
-Lactation (chocolate) ==> Bountiful ==> Nurturing ==> Addictive ==> Aphrodisiac ==> Dependent
-Aesthetic Mutations (retractable 16" long prehensile tongue, 4 nipples per breast, 6 fingers on each hand)
-Commanding Mien
>PROGENERATION:
-Brooding ==> Conditional Emergence
>SPECIALTY
-Multitudinous ==> Monarch (only hatches during the longest night of the year)
===DOWRY===
>TREASURE:
-Nuptial Torc
-Lavender Grimoire
-Crimson Manual
-Primordial Woad
-Abyssal Ink
-Celestial Charms
-Argent Spark ==> Argent Blaze
-Seductive Array
>BONDS:
-Sensual Ritualists
-Sans-Serviteurs
-Lithar, the Siren
-Prime Mate
-The Eunuch
>URGES:
-Nightmare Cycle
>STIGMATA: Stigma of the Rising Star
>AMBITION: Gardener of Devotion

>>7303831
>>7303840

>implying compound words need to be a strict literal reading of their constituent parts

Come on. For all intents and purposes in colloquial usage "warm-blooded" is synonymous with "endothermic". If compound words have to mean exactly what they say on the tin, then you should also be getting your panties in a bunch about all the Greek and Latin words that you like so much. You just don't because you can easily pick apart native English compounds and have bought into the elitism about those words inherited from the Norman conquest.

>>7303996
>/d/ - Cunning Linguists

>>7303996
>For all intents and purposes
For many intents and purposes, perhaps. Not all.
Also, which latin and greek words? We've only been discussing English so far (though to be fair, english is an atrocious mishmash of pretty much everything).
Furthermore, who are you to tell me what I do and do not twist my panties over?

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These CYOAs are more lewd than /d/ but eh

>>7304087
Actually ignore "these", the other one I was going to post is too big and it isn't good enough to bother uploading it elsewhere

>>7304094
You could tell us the name of the CYOA you're referring to, and people could try searching for it in one of the collections listed here: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

>>7300883

>immortality (LGE)
I'll start at 16 for 1 point
>wish
wish to be a cute monstergirl(at least 50% girl)
>gifted
>money

>>7303794
no but I wish, this is my favorite one.

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>>7304144
>immortality (LGE)
You are undying, as long as a certain tree somewhere in the world survives. It is immortal and abnormally durable/fireproof, but if it ever died you will be pulled into the earth by brambles and rot away instantly.
>wish to be a cute monstergirl(at least 50% girl)
You are a Nymph, complete with plant control powers and improved healing as long as your tree is there. But they don't call them Nymphomaniacs for nothing though.
>Gifted
You are the best at gardening. You could grow Carrot Trees or Natural Cures to Cancer, and with some effort you could even grow something like Golden Apples that cause wounds to close eventually.
>Money
You own a Apothecary/ Bordello, located in the nearest settlement to your tree.
Sweet, I get an Extra Point.
>Wish: To be the most powerful witch in the world.
>True Love: A Cute Witch.
>Magical Equipment: A Book of Magic
>Immortality, LGE: Set to 17 Years.
>Money

>>7299725
Here are my rolls for this one:
5(SCIENCE!)
4 - 2(Breeding and Milking)
2(Yearling)
3(Europe)
1(pale)
6(random color generator used - Purple)
5(Curls)
8, 6(Loving and submissive)
6(Free will)
2(Basement)
6(Cow seifuku)
2(High heels)
1(All natural)
(Rolling 3)8, 5, 8(Weight, ears, weight)
2(Ear tag)
1(By machine)
(Rolling 2)2, 1(Spanking, restraints)
(Rolling 3)3, 2, 3(Food, affection, and food)

Wow, I made a basement dwelling fatty cow teen, who might be a weeaboo.

I likes.

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>Immortality LGE, 19 years old
>Magical Realm
>Wish "let me live as Noble in Russian Empire without revolutions"
Okay, fuck me up famalam
pic kinda unreleated

>>7299865
I love this one but god damn, it's a hell of a long one. Would be very nice if someone put together a website version

>>7304038

OK yes, "hot-blooded" can mean something else, but it was perfectly clear from the context what they meant. I understand the impulse to use technical words so that you're as unambiguous as possible, but overdoing it will only hurt you when trying to communicate with people who aren't as familiar with this jargon as you are. A lot of people are not going to remember to use precise words they only ever had to trot out for high school biology and will resort to colloquialisms that effectively mean the same thing. Ambiguity in language is unavoidable, but if someone gets their meaning across clearly, as was the case in this situation, why get angry about it?

By Greek and Latin I was referring to technical terminology in general, but in this particular case it was "endothermic". Admittedly that word taken literally (within-heat) is a better description than "hot-blooded", but there are plenty of other such words that aren't.

And you're free to get your panties twisted about whatever you like, but I also reserve the right to do the same over people attacking others for not being autistic about using exact nomenclature for everything.

By the way, I'm quite fond of English's mongrel nature. All these influences from different sources give it an expressive power that can be harder to achieve in more homogeneous languages.

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>Immortality LGE
Spending extra point for being 20 years old
>Gifted
>Magical Equipment
A corset that lets me stay in perfect shape at all times
>Money
Pic Unrelated, just go wild with mine

>>7304494
Fair enough. Though I think there is some confusion as it is multiple pedant-anons here. I'm not the first one who seemed actually angry. The panties twisty thing was just a joke.
You do raise an interesting point about English's patchwork nature. I can see where you are coming from, but it just feels inelegant and unwieldy. Maybe that's just because English is my second language, but I would take several homogenous languages over this labyrinthian nightmare of vagueries and exceptions.

Welcome to /d/, where all the porn is made up and the (discussion) points don't matter.

>>7300883

>Immortality (LGE) - 3
No Task
Age: 18

>Combine - 1

>Wish - 1
I wish to be a goddess of beauty and intelligence.

>>7303667
She doesn't get anxious, she's always level headed, even when it would make sense to have anxiety. Maybe she's born with it, maybe its autism.

>>7304094
Just split it up

>>7303794
>>7303797
>>7303800
>>7303804
>>7303812
>Mistress: Sapriina Serpentis, -3 Influence

>Quarters: Cocooned, +3 Influence, +3 Sub Pts

>Food: Sludge

>Clothes: Loincloth, -4 Influence, -4 Sub Pts

>Boons:
>Blessing, -3 Inlfuence
>Immortality, -4 Inlfuence

>Predicaments:
>Aphrodesiac+, +2 Inlfuence
>Milking+, +3 Inlfuence
>Public Use, +1 Inlfuence
>Sharing (Alystin Abaeir the Drider), 0 Inlfuence
>National Service, +1 Inlfuence
>Drider Eggs, +2 Inlfuence
>Liquid Production, +1 Inlfuence
>Favorite Toy, +2 Inlfuence, +2 Sub Pts

>+1 Influence, +1 Sub Pts
>Choose Be Loyal
>1d20 roll--> 16
>16 + 1 Sub Pts = 17
>Fate Number = Freedom Pts (0) - (Sub Pts + 1d20) = -17
>Get the "It's not like I like you or anything" ending. Over time affection will only grow. Good thing I got immortality.

>>7303794
Mistress: Saphrina Serpentis
-Wealth: 8
-Lust: 8
-Affection: 5
-Bitchiness: 2
-Strictness: 2
-Attendance: all waking hours
+Wants to make babies to ensure the continuance of her line

Sleeping Quarters: Mistress Bedroom (mmmm...)

Food: Slave Rations (not ideal, but I can get spices later)

Clothes: Fine Clothes (I feel so fancy!)

+++BOONS+++
-Blessing (with Saphrina's libido, this will DEFINITELY come in handy)
-Immortality (living forever is its own reward, but see Fate)
-Courtesan Training (bow-chicka-wow-wow)
-Dark Elf Servants (I have one job around here, and it ain't housework.)
-Romantic Gift x12 (What can I say? I'm a sucker for strong women.)

+++PREDICAMENTS+++
-Be the Girl ==> Upgrade
-Aphrodesiac ==> Upgrade (gotta keep up somehow)
-Cursed ==> Upgrade (sounds kinky, especially with my Trigger Word)
-Sorceress (sounds even kinkier)
-Favorite Toy ==> Upgrade (I am a-okay with waiting on Saphrina's whims)
-Mistress Nectar ==> Upgrade (I fail to see how this is negative)
-Futanari (now we can BOTH get knocked up! Hooray for efficiency!)
-Bondage (hnnngg...)
-Trigger Word ("Shatter")
-Sharing is Caring (Miz'ri Telenna, the cuddly one)
-Milking ==> Upgrade (if she wants that many kids, I need ammunition)
-Liquid Production ==> Upgrade (and I mean PLENTY of ammunition)
-Milk Leech (keeps my tits drained, which will help immensely)
-Drider ==> Upgrade (I hardly need more points--this just sounds hot)

Fate Number: (0 Freedom Points)-(40 Submission Points)-(7)=-33

Final Fate: Mai Waifu!

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Don't hold back, now.

>>7303794
>>7303797
>>7303800
>>7303804
>>7303812

> Mistress:
[14] Nendra Nightweaver: The Supreme Sorceress

> Sleeping Quarters:
Cocooned

> Food:
All You Can Eat Meat!

> Clothes:
Fine Clothes

> Boons:
Blessing
Free Time
Personal Slave
More Free Time?
Immortality
Courtesan Training
Dark Elf Servants
Drug Stash
Safeword
Escape Tools [x3]

> Predicaments:
Be the Girl! + Upgrade
Aphrodisiac + Upgrade
Sorceress
Trigger Word
Sexual Harassment + Upgrade
Sharing is Caring + Upgrade [3 – Sapriina Serpentis]
Milking + Upgrade
Sucubuss
Liquid Production + Upgrade
Nightmares + Upgrade [Nightmare Waifus]
Milk Leech
Drider
Orc + Upgrade
Light Predicament + Upgrade [Eldritch Throne, Slave Suit][1 per month]
Dark Elf Maid + Upgrade
Forced Incest + Upgrade [Older Sister]

> Fate (Escape):
Freedom Points - 28
Submission Points - 15
Fate Number - 13
Roll - 19
Result - 32 [King of the Underdark]

>>7303155
Hmm, not what I was expecting but I suppose this can work. Only problem is no humans in the realm except me.
I can probably just set up the circle while I'm doing the 24 hour thing and get boatloads of money desu

>>7304795
Holy shit some of that is completely illegible.

>>7303794
Why do everyone keep picking Sapriina Serpentis?

>>7304795
>>7304796
>>7304800
>>7304801
>>7304811
You might wanna find another colour for your font and background or at least have the gradient be more gentle.

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>>7304871
She's relatively cheap, not super demanding, and is DTF. Now why you'd pick her over Nizana at the same cost, or even springing for Miz'ri for 2 more? I dunno. Shit taste.

>>7304795
Can I use a service multiple times in one day?
ie day one: 4x gym?

>>7304906
>Now why you'd pick her over Nizana at the same cost
I don't think I could handle her being literally drenched in blood when we have sex.

>or even springing for Miz'ri for 2 more
Lowest lust stat by far, and I don't care for the "young and innocent" type. I want a mistress who is kind and affectionate, but also very, very lustful, who will fuck me into submission as well as gently caress and pet me. And I need to feel like she's older and superior.

If not for the blood thing, Nizana would probably be perfect, especially with Favorite Toy and its upgrade.

>>7304795
I am sad that I can't read the text at the bottom :/

>>7304795
I want to express my gratitude. This is a well done gameplay and a very exciting cyoa. The selection of pictures is great as well.

>>7301204
>Power Source: Contact + Sex (thelimitdoesnotexist.jpg)

>Spells:
-Charisma
-Thrall
-Ghost in the Shell
-Domination
-Distribution

>Coven: Salem (I need somewhere to start and a consistent source of power. Plus, her skills will complement mine quite nicely.)
>Complications:
+Numb (minimum 1, or what I get per act anyway. Basically free points.)
+Slow Starter (My spells are all remarkably subtle in nature, and would need time to build regardless.)

Using my newfound awesome powers, I will become an endlessly expanding hive mind, each host willingly serving my interests and needs. All shall be One.

>>7304795
I would like more options like masseuse 1 and 2!

>>7304795
An interesting game it is, the only bad point is that by scrolling through the images to get to the second part (i.e. the pool) I tend to spoil myself and it affects my choices...

>>7305180
I mostly managed to avoid spoilers, but it's hard to do. The mediocre readability actually helps here.
Putting 2 chapters on one page is really an issue here.

A question about the Exxxalted version of Slut Life.

In the Sources option with the Celestial Gods, could one choose one of the Maidens (Venus) as the source of the Spell? I suddenly had an idea.

>>7305253
I'm not sure if the author visits (or even knows of) these /d/ threads, so you might want to go to /tg/ to post the question (and the CYOA if it hasn't been posted in that particular thread yet).

>>7304364
>>Immortal LGE, 19
>>Wish
Congratulations, you've traveled back in time to the year 1748, replacing the woman who would later become known as Catherine the Great, Empress Consort of Russia. Play your cards right and you could become a true empress.
>task
Your task is to make everyone believe that you are the single greatest pervert in existence. You age normally while less than half of the population of your empire can think of someone more perverted than you, and age in reverse down to 19 when more than half believes as such. They must believe, or at least give serious consideration to the rumor, that you would indeed fuck a horse (it doesn't have to be true, though). As you live longer and humans know more, the requirement will change to be whatever is the animal most known for having an incredibly large penis, so it may help if you can invent tentacle monsters.

>Magical Realm
Your realm has a perverse theme- all furnature and structures will incorporate dicks and pussies into their design. Tabletops will rest on four phallic legs, while you will often see flowers in the shapes of vaginas. The inhabitants of the realm do not really notice this, but it is impossible for you not to, you will never get used to it. The air also contains light aphrodisiac, effective only on you.

As an added bonus, somewhere in your magical realm there is a fruit (which resembles a penis) that grows once a century and rots away after a month. Finding the fruit, bringing it to the real world, and then eating it in public will allow you to shapeshift once. It is the only thing you can take out of your realm, and its power is directly proportional to the amount of lewd thoughts it inspires in your audience.

>>7304548

Ah, if you're not the person who attacked the original anon than I don't have much beef with you. I'm not even a hardcore anti-prescriptivist, but man does that kind of elitism annoy me. And I kind of figured the panties thing was a joke, but as someone who's not very funny, I just played my response straight.

And yeah, I'm certainly aware that my fondness for English might be a sentimental attachment because it's my native tongue, although I don't really think English is any more vague than other languages. Then again English is the only language I speak fluently (though I have conversational understanding of a couple others), so I suppose you're coming from a more informed position there.

Anyway, all this arguing, combined with the topic of the thread we're supposed to be discussing, gives me the seed of an idea for a lewd shitposting CYOA. Maybe I'll go work on that instead of arguing linguistics on the pervert section of a Tuvan body painting forum.

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>>7303794
You want a CYOA similar to Enslaved? How about my latest CYOA?

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>>7305763

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>>7305765

>>7304811
Where is the rest of it?

>>7305772
>everything is temporary
completely ruined cyoa

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>>7305932
Did you read about treatments? Punishments are temporary, but Treatments are permanent, they happen every day. And body transformation options can always be made permanent by upgrading them.

>>7305932
Some of them can be upgraded to become permanent, plus you can make others occur daily by making them into treatments.

>>7305772
For Futafication/Sissification, can you also choose the size of their balls (and whether they have any for Futafication)?

>>7305961
Yeah, sure why not?

>>7304871
I'm (>>7304582)
It was a tough choice choosing between Serpentis and the Drider as a mistress, but I had the idea of siring tons of offspring, and she's a sexy warlord.

>>7305763
Page One Typos and Grammatical Mistakes:
Bioengineered Prison: "sci fi" -> "sci-fi"
Female Prison "males in -> "males in" (note the space)
Male Prison "prison, but" -> "prison, but"
Male Prison "females in -> "females in"
Sil T'Loak "is a alien" -> "is an alien"
Sil T'Loak "specialize" -> "specializes"
Perverted Scientist "alians" -> "aliens"
Hilda Krieger "way to nice" -> "way too nice"
Sister Purity "a orgasm" -> "an orgasm"
Purity "Limit, for free" -> "Limit for free"
Moira "a archdemon" -> "an archdemon"
Moira "tenancy" -> "tendency"
Aura of Lust "desire," -> "desire;"
Alexandra Stukov "a infamous" -> "an infamous"
Cock Tease "fucker" -> "fuck"
T.A.Y. "However Tay do" -> "However, Tay does"
T.A.Y. "a anatomically" -> "an anatomically"
Lily Lovett "But if they do she" -> "If they do, she"
Gwendolyn Bouvier "have always" -> "has always"
Gwendolyn Bouvier "Be warned she" -> "Be warned, she" or "Be warned: she"
Olivia Archibald "she claim to" -> "she claims to"
As a note, you generally missed up "a" vs "an". You can fix that by using find-replace can changing the letter combos " a a" to " an a", " a e" to " an e", and so forth for all vowels a, e, i, o, and u. English doesn't really have pairs of pronounced vowel syllables; it sounds awkward. We mostly seperate vowel sounds with consonant sounds.
Also, You should avoid starting sentences with the conjunction "But". Its not explicitly wrong, but it is bad form; most of those sentences work perfectly if you just remove the word "But" and start the sentence with the next word.

Looks good though.

>>7305763
>>7305765
>>7305772
>Warden (300)
I AM THE LAW
>High Tech Prison (290)
Only Humans/Humanoids
>Medium (275)
>Female Prison (270)
>Rolled 11 - T.A.Y. 7W3375
>Skimpy Uniform (265)
Nude is no fun
>Power Disabling Field (265)
If there's no threat of a breakout then it wouldn't be any fun
>Medical Facility (260)
>Armory (255)
>Surveillance Room (245)
>Assistant (240)
>Clone Factory (225)
>Warden's Office (215)
>Mind Reader (205)
>Elite Bodyguard (190)
Ephraim from Fire Emblem 8

>Lottery X=1% (185)
>"Fighting" (170)
>Minimum Orgasm Y=5 (165)
Lets not get too crazy

>Sex Machine, Punishment (155)
>Slave Training, Treatment (140)
>Pleasure Harness, Punishment (130)
>Public Use, Punishment (120)
>Sex Arcade, Punishment, Upgrade (105)
>Shameful Outfit, Punishment, Bodysuit (95)
>Orgasm Denial, Punishment (85)
>Rape, Punishment, Upgrade (70)
>Tentacle Pit, Punishment (60)
>Monster Menagerie, Punishment (50)
>Glory Hole, Treatment (35)

>Favorite Pet (20)
>A-Listers Only (0)

Pretty good CYOA, Favorite Pet is misspelled btw
[spoiler]Yay I get this CYOA's virginity[/spoiler]

>>7305991
Note that for that find-replace combo, the first space is important so you don't mess with all words ending in the letter 'a'
You can also fix any weird double spaces by first replacing " " with " ", then replacing ". " with ". "
>>7305765
Page Two Typos and Grammatical Mistakes:
Prison Uniform "inmates needs" -> "inmates need"
Power Disabling "destroy it chaos" -> "destroy it, chaos" (sentences starting with "If" need a comma after the dependent clause. I did not point out these mistakes in the first page and will ignore it from here on out.)
Power Suppression "electricity all" -> "electricity. All"
Armory "a armory -> "an armory" (I'll start ignoring these too, just use that find-replace trick)
Rapey Guards "guards loves" -> "guards love"
Surveillance Room "But with this" -> "With this" (Special note: "But" does not make since here, because the sentence it starts does not contradict the previous sentence.)
Assistant "assistant which will" -> "assistant who will" (Not certain if this is explicitly wrong, but "which" is for objects, "who" is for people. This is extra notable because you use the pronoun "her" to refer to the assistant rather than "it")
Assistant "prisoners which" -> "prisoners that"
"Favorit Pet" -> "Favorite Pet"
Favorit[sic] Pet "If Lilith is ... prisoner she ... sex, if" -> "If Lilith is ... prisoner, she ... sex if" (Sentences ending in an "if" clause don't have a comma before that dependent clause.)
D-Rank Villain "Since you are... prisoners you get" -> "Since you are ... prisoners, you get" ("Since" starts a dependent clause, follows the same rules as "If". I think I ignored previous infractions of this, so use control F to find them.)
Elite Bodyguard "wardens" -> "warden's"
Word of the Day "inmates will be forbidden to say" -> mixes tenses, possible fix is "forbidden from saying"
Lottery "X of the" sounds a bit awkward, try "X percent of the" perhaps?
Lottery "which number is X" -> "which number[value?] X is"

>>7305991
>>7306016
I appreciate your help and effort, I really do, but all my CYOAs are made in Paint and changing text is extremely tedious and time consuming. So I won't do it, since people will still get what Im trying to say.

>>7306016
continued
100 meter "run 100 meter" -> "run 100 meters" (In this case, English is just weird, the title is fine because it is a proper noun, but this instance is not)
No Orgasm! "forbidden to reach" -> "forbidden from reaching" (As a note, I think the only time its okay to use the wording "forbidden to reach" is as "It is forbidden to reach", though I'm not sure why exactly.)
No Orgasm! "ring wearers will" -> "ring wearer will" to fit the other cases of plurality in the paragraph.
"will never go down, unless" -> "will never go down unless" (same as the "if" thing)
No Orgasm! "amounts of orgasms" -> "amount of orgasms", or just simply "double the orgasms"
No Orgasm! "that was prevented" -> "that were prevented"
Orgasm Limit "number is X" -> "number X is"
Minimum Orgasm "is Y" -> "Y is"

Don't have time to do page 3 right now, sorry.

>>7299766
Conquer the world build
Amphrodeisiac cum
Milky
Connections
Turn the world's leaders into your cowgirl slaves

>>7301041
>Maria
>He said, she said (bonus)
>Harem (bonus)
>Nymphomaniac
>Feminine curves
>Breasts (bonus)
>Vagina (Bonus)
>Womb

Self
>Cock enhancement
>Breasts

>>7305763
Prisoner Build:

Design: 25
Virtual, High Tech, Magical Prison (The virtual world is like a magitech castle)

Large 30
Mixed

Futa Lilly Lovett (15)

No uniform 10

Power Disabling Field
Elite Guards, Medical Facility, Armory, Prison Gym, Safe Room, Surveillance room, Mind Reader,

Special Rules: 20
Minimum Orgasm 100

Treatments: 90
Upgraded Futafication (Let's be real, I'd pick a futa body from the intro offer anyways)
Heightened Libido
Upgraded Increased Sensitivity
Nightmares (A result of the VR prison)

Punishments: 75
Upgraded Milking
Sex Machine
Shameful Outfit: Parasite Suit
Tentacle Pit
Monster Menagerie Upgraded

Basically the train of thought here is that Lilly is twisted enough to think 100 orgasms a day is a perfectly normal and healthy number and that maintaining it is the right path towards proper rehabilitation. All the punishments are geared not so much as 'punishments' in her eyes but merely helping along those who aren't diligent in maintaining their mental health and well-being. The powers that be allow all this because the prisoners are too damn busy to cause trouble this way.

>>7305763
It's here! It's really here!

>>7305763
>>7305765
>>7305772

There seems to be hints at a missing page? Something about choosing heros and villains?

>>7306119
There is no missing page, you can choose any hero or villain you want if a option says that. Like Harley Quinn, Catwoman, Supergirl, Saber, Chun-Li basicly any character that can be categorized as a villain or a hero,

>>7306027
Thats unfortunate... I guess thats a good reason to switch to Gimp in the future (What more /d/ program could there be than something called "Gimp"?)
Guess I'll skip the balance questions and make a build then.
>Prisoner [300]
That one time TF is far more valuable to me than some silly pocket dimension, even if I had to stay the full 1000 years.
>Prison Design
High-Tech [290]
Magical [280] Maybe I can learn magic from a villain.
Large [250] Why are the heroes punishing a warden for taking this?
>Prison Type
Female Prison [245]
>Warden
Alexandra Stukov [235] Punish me, mistress.
(I'd take Niadra, but she's hideous.)
>Uniform
Parasite suit [225]
School Uniform [220] for when I'm good.
>Negation
Power Disabling Field [220] Eh, doesn't effect me.
>Upgrades Why do these cost points, when they're neither lewd (the reason for the warden's point cap), nor do they harm the prisoner (the reason for their points)?
Medical [215] Don't wanna die here
Prison Gym [210] Might as well stay in shape
D-Rank [190] Eh, why not?
>Special Rules
Word of the Day [200] Sounds fun
100 Meter Dash [185] More fun!
Hold It In! [175] Desperation never felt so good.
Orgasm Limit X=11 [165] Prisoners can force each other to have orgasms and get punished.
Minimum Orgasm Y=10 [155] Don't lose count!
>Punishments
Combo Futafication, Heightened Libido [130] 2 months where horny futas have to count their orgasms or risk even more punishments
Combo Milking, Sex Machine [105] Where I'll spend most of my time.
Combo Spanking, Lolification [80] If you piss yourself like a child, we'll treat you like one.
Upgrade combo pleasure harness, increased sensitivity [45] If you cum more than once per activation, then you'll have yet another punishment by the end of the day!
Combo Cum Plugged, Baby-Bot [20] Cum makes you pregnant... with robots. Seems legit.
Treatment Parasites [0] with the parasite suit, you'll now learn to live harmoniously with others very quickly.

Sign me up!

>>7305772
>Prison cyoa
>No cavity searches
TokHaar why?

>>7306027
Shame, makes you look like an uneducated person.

>>7305763
>300
Prison layout - high tech (10)
Guards: monstergirls (from the magical prison)
Prisoner type - high tech(see above) , magical and modern (15) (275)

(small, too small. Medium, alright, little bigger. Large, jesus fucking christ, infinity? I just wanted like 10k or something)

Large (245)
Mixed prison (245)
(rolled a 13) lily lovett
classic uniform and no uniform for good behavior (10) (235)

Power negation: power disabling field

Elite guards (10) (225)
Medical facility (5) (220)
prison gym (5) (215)
Surveillance room (10) (205)
mind reader (10) (195)
Special request (15) (180) (hm. drawing a blank, I'll come back to this)

Lottery (20) (160)
You looked at me wrong (40) (120)

Futafication (punishment) (10) (110)
Public use (punishment) (10) (100)
body writing (punishment) (combine with public use 5) (10) (85)
Gender bending (10) (75)
Wall decoration (10) (65)
Rape (punishment) (10) (55)

Please, someone, list popular villians, i'm drawing a blank.

>>7300883
I want to become a super hero.

>Immortality: LGE
>Magical equipment
A bracelet that lets me control flames!
>Gifted
>True Form

>>7305763
Warden

Modern Prison -5
High Tech Prison -10
Medieval Prison -10
Magical Prison -10
Large -30
Male Prison -5
(10)T.A.Y.7W3375 -10 Amy Armstrong, Sister Purity

Classic Uniform
School Uniform(Non Punished Female) -5
Power Suppression Collar -10

Elite Guards -10
Armory -5
Prison Gym -5
Rapey Guards -10
Safe Room -10
Surveillance Room -10
Assistant -5
Additional Vice Warden 2 -40
Warden's Office -10
Favorite Pet -10
D.T.F -10
Special Request -15
Elite Body Guard -15

Word of the Day -10
Fighting -15
Orgasm Limit 1
Minimum Orgasm 1 -10

Upgraded Slave Training -15
Upgraded Shameful Outfit (Bikini) -10
Upgraded Gender Bending -15

If someone breaks a rule while they are still a man they get TG'd for the upgraded time limit, which becomes permanent if they get punished again in the four months. As noted above this will require them to wear the schoolgirl uniform

If they get punished after being permanently changed, then they they will be forced to wear the bikini uniform for 4 months. And if they get punished while wearing the bikini uniform it's off to slave training.

If they get punished while in slave training then they get the bikini punishment if it's worn off, or whichever one is going to wear off sooner removed

The combination of choices I've made will get people TG'd as quickly as possible, and then be perpetually stuck in bikini's and slave training.

And then I'll be free to take the best looking one as my pet while I live in the lap of luxury.

>>7304887
What happened here?

>>7306557
3D is not allowed on /d/.

>>7306564
Ah. Now I'm curious. Do we know if it migrated anywhere?

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>>7306545
>Immortality LGE:
You're now a magical girl (pic related)! Your task is to save 3 people every week. Since there isn't much life-threatening danger in the world, you can also give three people a "happy ending" instead. They must feel entirely satisfied from the bottom of their heart if you choose that route- you basically can't turn down any of their requests during sex for that person to count.
>Magical Equipment
Your bracelet lets you control fires, but gets itspower from emotional heat. To stoke some flames from nothing, you'll have to arouse a crowd of people, and to control the same amount of flames you'll have to keep the people entertained. Panty flashes are now your best weapon. Additionally, you're more bark than bite- if you actually burn someone, you'll feel like hot candle wax was just dripped on the same area of you. Don't worry, it won't cause any real damage.
>Gifted
Your gift is teasing and arousing. You could get a stiffy from a 90 year old eunuch in thirty seconds flat, and have him jizzing his pants (don't ask how) within a minute, all without raising your T.V. rating to R.
>True Form
If the shit ever hits the fan, you'll turn into a large breasted fire elemental. Not only does this have the obvious effect of arousing your fans even more, but it'll make you feel proportionate arousal. On the bright side, just you thinking about sex gives you enough energy to maintain your form, making your practically invulnerable. Have sex with the baddies and they'll die no problem.

>>7306534
Poison Ivy
Harley Quinn
Catwoman
Emma Frost
Elektra
Scarlet Witch
Mystique

>>7305763
I literally cannot stop masturbating long enough to finish this one. Well done TokHaar.

>>7305763
It's so crazy great to have you back TokHaar. Too late tonight for me to make a build but I'll post one after work tomorrow.

>>7300883

Immortality LGE
True Form
Gifted
Magical Equipment
- A ring that allows the wearer to change the size of the ass or breasts at will.

>>7305763
Yay thank you so much for finishing this. You did a good job covering a good number of fetish's.

That said there are 2 things I think could be improved if you ever make another version.
1. The text and costs for many options seems focused on being the warden, some things that a warden would have to spend points on probably should be things a prisoner gains points for selecting. for example the no uniform option. Also the point gain for a prisoner selecting elite bodyguard seems to imply the prisoner gets a body guard but the text only mentions the warden getting one.
2. Would love to have some male warden options, although a option to just make the existing wardens male instead of futa would probably be easier to add.

All together a great cyoa though.

Comment and Critique? This is my first time. It's definitely not done. I just want to see if people are interested before I continue. It's been a lot more work than I expected getting just this done. .

It's too large for 4chan. Just the first image. It's not even done lol.

I haven't gotten any of the mechanics done yet. I haven't gotten images for the benefits, drawbacks, or anything else. It will feature random roll numbers naturally since I'm a fan of those, but I also suspect a point system.

http://imgur.com/a/lnwS3

>>7306771
Theoretically, the prisoner WANTS to lose points as quickly as possible, since they're supposed to spend all 300. Its just that we're massive fucking perverts who think that being thrown in a tentacle pit is a reward rather than a punishment. It makes sense that the prisoner has to "suffer" being nude in order to spend some of his 300 points, and being clothed (0 points) means they have to spend points elsewhere and take on other punishments.

>>7306780
Honestly you need to flesh it out a bit more. All I can really say about what you've done is that the flavor text seems a bit long- it would be the right amount of intro if your cyoa is 3 pages or so.

>>7306805
Oh I'm planning around... 5 or more pages if I can. We'll see if I can actually manage that. Your not even looking at a finished page 1.

I might even do a split branch. One page for those who obey and one for those who futilely resist. Then the next scene is the downsides.

Just off the top of my head. Intro Breeder > Tentacle Cave customizations/Lair Locations (this is going to be super hard to find lots of pics for so I might have to scale it back a little or even cut it > path 1 & path 2 depending on choice on page 1. Path one would have different stuff in it to buy then path 2 but some overlap but be based on random rolling of you trying to escape with the final part being how you were captured > Brood Mates paired off with you or in your vicinity > Enhancments to you/your cell provided by the breeder > then the downsides > possibly scenarios if I feel that ambitious.

Now this is getting very far ahead of myself. Since I want to finish this one, but in my head canon this island is an island of monsters and other horrible things out to fuck and impregnate everyone and everything. So perhaps there might someday be a meta cyoa that leads into one of these focused ones based on how you attempt to escape this island or why you were even sent here. For example insects or dryders being the thing that caught you. For replayability I could say that a group of you and your friends or random people were all dropped off here as punishment for whatever reason. This adds replay ability if people want to see all the kinky stuff.

This is just super meta and don't get your hopes up. I really need to see if people like this as it goes along. Page one took me about 4 hours and it's nearly done. Granted gimp sucks ass and it's hard to figure out how things work.

>>7306819
I would recommend you avoid two seperate paths, it tends to make things confusing if half the cyoa is irrelevant to the reader.

Also, proofread your text, theres quite a few typos, like a certain prison cyoa....

>>7305763
Destiny: Prisoner
(300)
Prison Design
5 Virtual Prison (it's all a simulation)
10 Magical Prison (what the simulation is, vaguely a much less fun Hogwarts where the students don't get magic)
10 High-Tech Prison (for prisoner selection)
(275)

Prison Size:
15 Medium
(260)

Prison Type
0 Mixed Prison (though not for long) (most staff is male)

Warden: Lily Lovett

Uniform
5 School Uniform. Standard uniform.
10 Nude. Punishment uniform.
10 No Uniform. Reward for good behavior (though risky, might draw attention from the staff...)
(235)

Power Negation:
10 Power Suppression Collar (redundant, since inmates will be unconscious most of the time, but safety first and all that)
(225)

Prison Upgrades
10 Elite Guards (admins trained in effectively utilizing the simulation)
5 Medical Facility
5 Prison Gym (more for the staff, since inmates won't be up and active)
20 A-listers Only!
10 Safe Room (mostly, for the servers, as hacking attempts would be disastrous)
10 Wardens Office
+20 D-Rank Villain
(185)

Special Rules:
10 Word of the Day
5 Minimum Orgasms (five per day)
(170)

Treatments
25 Gender Bending - All males become females (upgraded as permanent; inmates real bodies are molded to match their avatars while in the simulation)
20 Milking
25 Futafication + Public Use (assuming this as a treatment limits the total time for both to a single day per selection, as otherwise the entire population would be transformed and bound before the first month is over) (also assuming the futa part would be 'cheap' because it's being limited so much).
(100)

Punishments
10 Shameful Outfit (Nude)
10 Lolification
10 Spanking (hand spanked, enough to make sitting down unpleasant, with generous amounts of groping during the session)
10 Increased Sensitivity
15 Milk Diet (upgraded from Cum Diet)
10 Pleasure Harness
25 Bondage + Milking (tied up in the cafeteria for three hours each day for a month, where the milking is visible and the output can be sampled)
(10)

Good enough feedback for me to get to work on it. Expect a more fleshed out version soon.

>>7303622
>posting peter cuckchens memes

>>7305763
>Alexandra Stukov
Dude, it should be Stukova. In Russian nouns and names change depending on the gender. Stukov is clearly a male's version of that last name. Stukova is female's.

>>7305763

Wow. This is the first CYOA I've seen that actually has my fetish in it. Thanks!

>>7306805
>>Theoretically, the prisoner WANTS to lose points as quickly as possible, since they're supposed to spend all 300. Its just that we're massive fucking perverts who think that being thrown in a tentacle pit is a reward rather than a punishment. It makes sense that the prisoner has to "suffer" being nude in order to spend some of his 300 points, and being clothed (0 points) means they have to spend points elsewhere and take on other punishments.

Actually I was referring to the fact that being nude costs the same as keeping your clothes (The No Uniform Option). Geting rid of point by being nude I get, I don't understand how keeping the prisoners keeping there clothes is worth the same to the prisoner though (Unless all the other super villains keeping there clothes somehow makes them more dangerous)

>>7305763
I'd prefer more serious intros than random transformation offer, made immortal for prison, crying like a girl until you get to pick your prison, gorillion dollars, etc.

There's lots of empty space and some of the images could be larger. Two of the pics for prison size are shorter than the third. The pictures of Wardens aren't aligned with each other.

Besides those and the typos, great work!

>>7306957
You've got to tell us what your fetish is now!

>>7305772
I like the idea of combining punishments but I have a few questions about how it works.

How does combining punishments work when they have different duration's?

Can more than 2 punishments be combined together? for example Public Use + Glory Hole + Body Writing to make both sides available for use and be written on during the month.

Do many of the punishments (Such as tickling or torture) include some form of restraint even if you don't combine them with bondage?

Can you combine a punishment more than once for example have Bondage + monster menagerie as one punishment and Bondage + Rape as another?

Also unrelated to combining I'm not sure I quite understand how the sex arcade punishment works.

>>7306939
>used to be a boy

Clearly.

>>7306712
>>7306706
It's good to be back! Keep the builds coming, I love reading all of them and see what kind of perverted shit you can create based of my CYOAs.

>>7306939
>Alexandra Stukov
>Dude, it should be Stukova. In Russian nouns and names change depending on the gender.
I love making obscure references in my CYOA Stukov is one of them, its a reference to Alexei Stukov from StarCraft.

>>7306847
>Proof read your text faggot
Proof reading does nothing for me since I have dyslexia.

>>7307003
>I would like a more serious intro.
I kinda enjoy writing in a humorous lighthearted style, but I will keep that in mind.

>Some Images are bigger then others.
I make my CYOAs in Paint, it's hard to keep them all the safe size.

>Great job, but typos.
Thanks!

>>7307004
>How does combining punishments work when they have different duration's?
The punishments will expire at their individual time, alternatively you could have them both end at the shortest duration.

>Can more then 2 punishments be combined?
Nope, but if you have a warden or vice warden which gives out 2 punishments instead of 1, you could technically combine 4 punishments.

>Do many of the punishments (Such as tickling or torture) include some form of restraint even if you don't combine them with bondage?
Yes, of course. The pictures kinda show what you get.

>Can you combine a punishment more than once.
Yes

>I don't understand how sex arcade work?
What's unclear with the description? Its basically a brothel with a game arcade feel, were visitors to your prison can spend money to fuck prisoners strapped into various devices, bondage equipment or stuff like that.

>>7307069
All of your cyoas are gold my friend

>>7306578
Hot.

>>7305763
I was waiting for this since the teaser. Thankfully some anon posted it on a forum already, otherwise I would not have noticed it.

Role
\Warden
Design
\Bioenginnered Prison (10; Infested Terran' Zerg women who are turned into Futa.)
Size
\Small (0)
Type
\Female
Vice Warden
\Sil T'Leak (10+5; "Oh, I give you full permission to do whatever changes you want to prisoners." Save the two I like fucking.)
.|Moira (+5; "Carry On, Then.")
..\T.A.Y. (+5; "Just keep the place efficent.")
Prison Uniform
\Parasite Suit (10; Normal), None (10; For being good), No Uniform (10; For being very good)
Power Disruption
\Power Disrupting Drugs (5)
Prison Upgrades
\Medical Facility
.|Armory (5)
.|Rapey Guards (10)
.|Survelance Room (10)
.|Assistant (5)
.|Additional Vice Warden x2 (40)
.|Clone Factory (15)
.|Wardens Office (10)
.|Mind Reader (10)
..\D.T.F (10)
Special Rules
\Lottery 10% (20)
.|100 Meter Dash (15)
.|"Fighting" (15)
You Looked At Me Wrong! (40)
10 Minimum Orgasms (20)
Treatments
\Futafication (1%; Foot Long; 40)
.|Heightened Libido (The Other 99%; 20)
..\Increased Sensativity (Entire Body; 40)
Punishments
\Torture (10)
.|Public Use (10)
.|Orgasm Denial (10)
.|Rape (10)

CAPTCHA SEZ: MEXICO WALL

>>7307127
Too many points.

Let's try again;

Role
\Warden
Design
\Bioenginnered Prison (10; 'Infested Terran' women who are turned into Futa. [Zerg])
Size
\Small (0)
Type
\Female
Vice Warden
\Sil T'Leak (10+5; "Oh, I give you full permission to do whatever changes you want to prisoners." Save the two I like fucking.)
Prison Uniform
\Parasite Suit (10)
Power Disruption
\Power Disrupting Drugs (5)
Prison Upgrades
\Medical Facility (5)
.|Armory (5)
.|Survelance Room (10)
.|Assistant (5)
.|Clone Factory (15)
.|Wardens Office (10)
..\Mind Reader (10)
Special Rules
\You Looked At Me Wrong! (40)
..\10 Minimum Orgasms (20)
Treatments
.|Heightened Libido (100%; 20)
.|Slave Training (20)
..\Increased Sensativity (Entire Body; 40)
Punishments 40
\Torture (10)
.|Public Use (10)
.|Orgasm Denial (10)
.|Rape (10)
..\ParasItes (20)

>>7306780
Consider reducing the width to 1900 or so (so the image doesn't require horizontal scrolling at 100% zoom). And what do you mean by "too large"? The JPG is well under 4 MB filesize _and_ the 10k * 10k pixel limits.

>>7307069
>Proof reading does nothing for me since I have dyslexia.
You could, for example, put all the text in a Google Docs thing, post the link in a thread (or even in the CYOA Discord - especially if you don't want to "spoil the surprise" for most people, or want feedback in a potentially more immediate manner, or something), and let others do the proof-reading for you.

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>>7305763
>>7305765
>>7305772
New version since some shit needed hotfixes.

Changes:
>Clarified that you can be a male prisoner in a female only prison in description.
I feelt it was important to clarify this, since this is kinda the whole point of the "prisoner fantasy".
>Alexandra Stukov changed to Stukova
Since Anon pointed out In Russian nouns and names change depending on the gender and Alexandra is not a trap or anything.
>Lilith special ability "Cock Tease From Hell" changed from infinite duration to 7 months.
Lilith was suppose to be a cock tease, not a life destroyer. Before she was just plain fucking horrible, I blame sleep deprivation for my mistake.
>Elite Guard can only be purchased several times if you are the warden.
>Almost all time duration's of the punishments have been reduced from month to weeks.
The punishments where way too long and feelt like treatments and could easily pile up to and ridiculous amount of punishments. Now most punishments are around 2 weeks, except some like transformation punishments and stuff that should be long.

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>>7307168

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>>7307168
>>7307169

Also changed the description of some options in the punishment and treatment section. Drinking ridiculous amounts of cum can make you a cum addict!

>>7307171
>>7307169
>>7307168

Why can't it be real

>>7307171
Why not make getting impregnated a punishment? Definitely appealing to some.

Prisoner
Magical + Medieval + High-tech Prison
Medium Size Female only Prison
Warden Amy Armstrong Vize Olivia Archibald
Prisoners: Uniform Classic + Power Dis-Drugs

Upgrades: Elite Guards; Medical Fac; Armory; Prison Gym; Safe Room; Surveillance R; Clone Factory; Wardens Office; Favorit Pet; Elite BG;

Special Rule: Fighting; Orgasmic Limit X=11
Trearments: Milking; Body Writing;
Punishments: Futafication perma; Torture; Public Use; Cum Container; Shameful Bikini; Combi Loli + SlaveTrain;