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Can't get enough of this
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>>5854719
WOW! Maybe there's already a FUCKN THREAD about this exact thing, asshole.

>>5786187

Learn to use the damn catalog.
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>>5854795
Except that thread has been archived now so...
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That's all I have unfortunately, any lurkers?
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Well after reading every caption I can say that this thread was certainly interesting.
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Is there more?
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I think the original people behind the idea of futadom world stopped producing content. I mean sure it's only a month old trend but damn is it hot if the guy is forced into it
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>>5858231
doesn't seem very hard to make this kind of content tbh. Maybe I'll give it a go myself, but another day.
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translation
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>>5859595
according to the translation it says:
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Hey, didn't your penis grow or anything? I just heard it from Misa, but you are desperately training it, right? But it's still not getting bigger. lol I even though I didn't do anything for it, mine grew big. The head grew too. Ahaha, it's vexing, huuuh? Your feelings of inevitable inferiority are arousing you, right? I'm sorry for being born with a giant dick.

Come to think of it, don't you have a girlfriend? That you'd be able to find romance even with your pathetic dick... Ah! Then, here's an addition to your punishment game, okay? Fix this shameful phimosis within the next three days. If you can't do it, I'll teach your girlfriend the taste of my giant headed dick! What? You don't want that? You're complaining, even though your useless dick is smaller than mine? With that genetic level of your inferior, pathetic dick, you don't have the right to talk opinions, you know? Just try hard and do your best, okay? Pathetic-dick-kun.
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>>5856389
Finals are coming up so Ive been busy. I could probably finish a few tonight though.

>>5858351
Go for it.
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Can't we ever get something nice? It's always being a slave, sissy, faggot or a tiny dicked loser

C'mon.
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>>5861246
you, sir, don't quite seem to know where you are. we'll give you some time, though
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>>5861366
Doesn't he, though? I mean, don't get me wrong, I love the futadom world captions more anyone, but this thread is titled "Futa on Male Caption" and nobody has made any new captions in continuity with the old ones for a while, not even on the subreddit.
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I wish there were more that involved anal
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>>5862709
This whole set... I must find it...
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ITT: tl;dr
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>>5859849
Amazon one almost done?
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>>5855747
You know, I seriously believe everyone that has a sister incest fetish has never had a sister. I just don't understand how you can have any attraction for her. Anyway, any chance we can have more captions from the male's pov? I just find the resistance-acceptance-love storyline really hot from the male's point of view
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Love Futa on Male and captions, but, man, these novel-sized ones are just too much for be.

I'm surprised shorter ones like Elzi does aren't more popular.
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>>5861444
Ignoring the fact I'm super slow, fantasy seems to be requested more (at least for me). I still have another Amazon request and then a hell request. The hell request could be considered cannon though.

>>5863344
search potato house

>>5864556
Here you go

>>5864564
Makes sense. What about mothers though?
If you provide a pic with a a reminder to make it males pov i can try. If you have a general synopsis in mind I can try for that too.

>>5865377
Not sure these are more popular.
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>>5864564
Yeah I don't have a sister and I like the idea.
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>>5865389

I have a mother one. http://i.imgur.com/8t4XCw0.jpg

Imgur link because it is not 100% in the rules.
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>>5864564
My mother on the other hand, Unf.
what a milf.
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Look, I don't know if I'm the odd man out here but as much as I love futa on male pics and especially captions, I hate this male binding MREA stuff. And don't even get me started about the dental torture. My boner could not die any quicker.

Any chance you will ever do more vanilla futa on male captions without dental torture? Something more along the lines of what Elzi sometimes produces because I feel like there is so much wasted potential here.
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>>5865389
Shouldn't you have a name, if you make captions and take request?
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>>5865560
I dont think mine are to harsh. But if you have a more specific request let me know

>>5865764
That's odd. Must of forgot to use it
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Does this count?
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>>5865560
Some of these are nice.
>>5865476
>>5855703
>>5855690
>>5854726
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>>5865560
Doood what, you don't enjoy reading about having your teeth dissolved and having only floppy gums to suck at a cock with so there's no chance of accidentally biting and making her mad? This is like super convenient sounding. Dentures exist if you really want a teeth for a smile or something

it doesnt seem so bad
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>>5866102
*cringe*
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>>5865560

The teeth thing is rare. I don't talk about that anymore. Now it's just institutionalized slavery and lovingness.
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>>5866925
>institutionalized slavery
>lovingness
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>>5867205

You love your cat right?

>>5865547
I can do something with that. Anything specific?
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>>5867219
My cat is not a sapient being. Slavery is wrong, as is tampering with someones mind.
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>>5865560
I'm glad someone else said it. I don't want to not have any rights and be a second class citizen or any of that. That's not hot, that fucking sucks.
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>>5867225
>>5867293
People take this fetish seriously. Why?
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>>5865560
I agree, I like FutaxMale stuff but this stuff is just boner killing with the bonding, slavery and the teeth removal shit

Worst of all the captions are mostly written in a dry informative tone like it's a science textbook and the description of the sex itself is so unimaginative and vague it's totally unappealing
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>>5865560
Same
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>>5867767
>Worst of all the captions are mostly written in a dry informative tone like it's a science textbook and the description of the sex itself is so unimaginative and vague it's totally unappealing

Awww I try. What can I do to improve?


Wow there is some real negitivity here.
>>5867225
Slavery is wrong in the real world but not futadom world.
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And why do people keep bring up the teeth? I rarely do that anymore.

>>5865547
I am going to do the one that was requested last thread then this one. She is a strict mistress who adopts an abandoned male from a MREA facility.
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>>5867940
>>5867930

You've made an impression.
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Ok I just want to ask. What can I do to improve without sacrificing the setting too much?
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>>5868956
Don't change anything. Your writing is perfect!
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>>5865560
Nah the only thing I dislike is the teeth removal. I like the cum addiction thing though.
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The literal only thing I do not enjoy about this fad is the teeth removal, and that there are so low amounts of captions. My favorite ones are when the guy is forced right off the bat to be a cock-slave.
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>>5868956
With there being some rare men who are immune to the bindings, I think the setting is fine as is. I would just like to see more captions/stories with these men. Anything from how the government and puplic deals/thinks of them to more personal levels.

The setting itself doesn't really need any changes. Some people won't like it and that's fine. It is impossible to please everyone.
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>>5868956
Focus less on the setting, more on the sex/lust. Possibly focus more on purely dialogue/actions from the futa - the more detail you give to the individual being fucked, the less likely the audience is to identify with (as) them.

I think the setting not a bad idea at all as a backdrop, but when it becomes the majority of the text, it's definitely a boner killer. Length can probably be cut down a bit as well.

Perhaps some dialogue as larger/colored text? I love stuff that feels as if it's aimed at the reader, especially when it's aggressive/rapey.
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I'm not gonna worry to much about it. Just put what you want in the request.
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>>5865560
Couldn't agree more, I'm even fine with rather dom futa stuff but the whole binding shit is dumb.
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I find it interesting that you can have threads with forced sissy usually including torture, forced TG horror stories, rape, "islamification" and the rest of the bad ends and mind fucks and yet teeth crosses the lines.

Don't get me wrong I don't like the teeth stuff at all. I find it sad. But its no worse then a lot of the stuff here.
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>>5854719
great image, terrible and barley relatable caption..
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>>5867767
That's your boner and your tastes, mate. Bonding, slavery and teeth removal is the best part for me so kindly fuck off.
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>>5866769
Baby
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>>5867225
It's imaginary you stupid cunt, stop crying about it.
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>>5868956
Don't change the setting. People can get ''men getting fucked by shemales'' captions anywhere, but the setting, the intricate details, the continuity, that's what makes these captions special. Don't get hung up on boring descriptions of dicks being shoved in mouths and assholes, focus on how the characters are affected by it. Don't write about how the sex happens, write about why it happens. The things that aren't specific to this thread are all secondary. Plus, don't get rid of the 'teeth removal' thing. If people get uncomfortable, tone it down, but definitely keep it in.
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>>5871670
>The things that aren't specific to this thread are all secondary
This thread is
>Futa on Male Caption Thread
not
>my setting OC Thread
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>>5872349

Good point. New rule everyone. If you want to make a futadom world thread call it that.


All right thanks for the feedback. I have some ideas.

What do you all think of the idea of a male owned by a futa who has run of the house. Like he is the slave but won't let her leave until she combs her hair, or changes her socks. Sort of like a butler/nanny who also sucks her dick.
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>>5872649
Slavery is a turn off but just a normal overbearing butler is good.
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can someone help me out with >>>/r/12865321?
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>>5872917
Don't you mean... slutler?
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>>5872349

>>5872917
>>5873118

Yeah. I mean he is still a "slave" but in a butlery kinda of way. Have you seen the show rome? Caesar's slave mixed with a nanny who sucks dick is my thought.
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>>5874247

That is the best pic for the butler one. It will be mostly story/setting/characters with a few sex scene because that is what I like writing. That cool? I'm working on it now. With my cold it should be done in a day or so.
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>>5873257
Meh, I just don't see why the slave part is needed.
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>>5874865

All right I'll downplay the slave angle.
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And for those who want a nicer romance here.
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>>5875300
Nah, don't do that. A slave that comes to love his masters is way hotter than an employee (with or without pay) who likes his boss.
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With all this stuff people don't want to see, does anyone have something they do wish to see? IE a specific picture/idea.
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Almost done. I think I've met a balance.
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>>5876726


Ok I need some help.
http://pastebin.com/AzynehFG


It is not done but I need to go to bed. How is it? What can I do to improve it? Aside from the typos and unfinished sex scean and unfinished ending.
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>http://futanari-fakes.tumblr.com/
>Just found this site with lame pics naked real girls with cocks potoshopped on them. If someone were to change some of the best captioned ones for actual futa pics it would be really nice.
posted that in the other thread, but it seemed like this is the most appropriate place.
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>>5875404
I like the amazon ones. More?
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>>5877839
sure, any specifics? Also there are only so many amazon pics
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>>5877847
>>5877847
How about some more where the guy's just caught by them wandering around and fucked into being a cumslut?
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>>5871670
The setting sucks, deal with it kid
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>>5878134
Some of us like it.
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>>5878481
Personally, I think the sudden switch to subservient man-slut is a bit heavy-handed. I like it, but it is too quick, especially when the male was strongly resistant before. As for the teeth thing... It's literally the stuff of nightmares for me.
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>>5878803

I'm done with the teeth. No more teeth unless SPECIFICALLY asked for. Should I make another one with a more resistant? Or just make his transition take longer?
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>>5879135
Longer with tastes of denial.
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>>5879322

I can do that. For the currant one right? I've been working on it and my thought was that after she fed him he became loyal to her. Should it be longer? Like "Thanks for the cum bye" And then he plays that game for awhile until it's like "Now don't get the wrong idea, it's not like I like you or anything!" And he keeps sucking away until he realizes what he is and just resides he needs to help her? Or she does something amazing for him to earn his loyalty?
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>>5879135
you're never not gonna be known as that teeth guy
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>>5879331
Nah you had it down with the former. Honestly most of what you make is ok, and you should just go with what gets you off. If you just do without worrying then you'll make plenty of ok stuff, man.
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>>5880148
Anyone have the next one?
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>>5880187

Glad you like it!

Alright today was the last day of finals so tomorrow I'll be able to post the final version. Thank's for the feedback on everything, I'm working on it now and will be going to bed soon.
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>>5881837
>anyone know/have the original source for this?
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>>5865560
I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks this. I like futa dom male captions, but the literal slavery is just depressing.
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>>5865560

I agree with you, but I don't think it's fair to just tell people to stop making a flavour of sandwich just because you don't like it.
There's nothing stopping you from creating your own captions.
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>>5882156
Yeah, it ruined the fap for me too.
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>>5882156
>>5882233

Got a better pic for that then?
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Man I suck. I am a peice of shit.

http://pastebin.com/049vAhFb

Here is what i have.>>5874247 Thinking it is for that one. I think I need one last blowjob scean. What do you guys think. Any last suggestions? Any clunky stuff I could fix?

If that pic does not work does anyone have a better one?
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>>5882554
Aside from the typos, I don't see anything wrong with it. You might want to describe the second and/or third bj with a bit more detail, but then it might get too long, and it doesn't look like there's anything to trim down as is. But as it stands now it's good, but nothing too hot.

By the by, you (or someone) might want to make a "Futadom world" thread separate from the "futa on male caption" thread, after this one goes down. Cause it seems like you've been getting a lot more hate on this thread than on the last three or four.
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>>5882687
Anything I can do to improve it's hotness? I was thinking of describing him in that getup all the time. Like its his uniform. Does anyone have a better picture for it? That's for the feedback. It really helps. I can describe he second Beej.
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This mrea crap is getting really annoying

It's the same thing every picture
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>>5883024

Any suggestions? I've been thinking about messing with the Religion of the world. I've got a cool idea of how prayer works. Should I lay off thee MREA for a little while? What would you like to see?
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>>5883033
Well, the MREA have gotten a bit too humanized, so giving them a break might do well. And, yeah, the religion has whole realms of possibility for expansion. I'd imagine it like that of nomadic, hunter-gatherer cultures, like with old legends of the goddess walking in the fields and giving gifts of beauty and submissiveness to males (not men, never men) and offering gifts of strength and intelligence to futas, which they would refuse thereby showing them as at least equal to the goddess. Kinda like Norse or African mythology; the kinds that show the gods as very physical beings who often interact directly with mortals.
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>>5883069
All right. Is humanizing bad? I have a few ideas. If anyone has futa priestess/nun or at least nun that you can't see her junk so you can pretend it's futa could you post it?

And thanks for the feedback. I'll think of a few good myths.
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>>5863864
Not futa on male.
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>>5854747
There's an actual story to go with this. And iirc, that ain't it.
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>>5883086
Actually just disregard the humanization thing, I don't know what I was thinking with that. Maybe just have the MREA act indirectly. Like having people talk about the, characters hearing news about them and the like. Sorta having them be idolized among the people.

Anyway this pic might work for myths and the like...
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>>5884081
...And this one might work for either myth or present.
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Can we get a few without the whole lore/binding thing?
I don't mind it at all, I'd just like a little variety.
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So MERA is gone now? That's unfortunate.

Hopefully they will rise again one day.
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>>5884100
Not gone. Just out of focus for a little while.


http://pastebin.com/fGXkfrev

It's done. If an outsider could proof read it I'll post it ASAP.

>>5884081
I like that pic. It could also be a modern priestess in archaic attire. Like for a festival.
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>>5884081
Do you feel it kills the infallibility of the MREA? Over all weakens them?

>>5883069
So for other religions. I know very little of the African religions. Vaguely remember Anansi the spider. As for Norse I know them better but it has been a while since I read any of the poetic edda.

Just more human gods such as the Norse? Drama gods such as the the Greeks? Are you looking for lore or actual interaction, pr both?
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Well I FINALLY got it done. I fix typos just point them out. How is it? I am looking forward to the religious one.
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>>5884628
So how is it? I need a little feedback.

>>5884081
Next one. She is a modern priestess in an ancient getup. It is a festival. How that sound?
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I really prefer the ones with less text.. Is that the same as this, or just another category?
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>>5885079

Same, although more for me it's this "futa world" with all the "binding" and shit. I just want a futadom, is that so hard to ask?
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>>5885079
>Lick under my foreskin

...oh...oh my
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>>5885079
A lot of caption writers use it as an excuse to dump volumes of prose on you. I hated my English teachers for going on and on about what I thought were stupid and obvious ideas, but apparently the whole "show don't tell," "less is more," and "keep it simple, stupid" lessons never really stuck for most people.

To put it another way: some people like to use pictures to enhance their existing fantasies, and that's fine; however, skilled writers can enhance a picture *and* create a wider fantasy with a limited amount of text.
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>>5885240
>skilled writers can enhance a picture *and* create a wider fantasy with a limited amount of text.


I get the feeling you guys don't like my captions. Anything I can do to improve or is it just a style thing?
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>>5885257
Not him, but I get the feeling he wants you to try to write shorter captions. But this is just inference from
>"show don't tell," "less is more," and "keep it simple, stupid"
so who knows.
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>>5885257
>>5885240 here. I've never read your captions, actually, I'm just griping about a common phenomenon I've noticed. For all I know, you buck the trend.
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>>5861246
You sir are a saint.
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>>5884628
>your her problem
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>>5885511
I've read every single one of those now. The whole world you've set up just really gets me going.

Pls gib more.
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>>5881833
30 degrees cold wtf?
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>>5884628
I really like it. It turns the normal story on its head a bit, because he did still cave to the cum but he seems to be the dominant in the relationship. Sure, he bottoms, but she's not really calling shots, he's bossing her around.

Hot stuff.
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>>5885811
Thanks! Sorry about that

http://i.imgur.com/96jkXpI.png

Fixed it here.

>>5885845
I'm really glad to hear that. I work pretty hard on this world. Thanks for giving me your time and reading them! More is one the way!

>>5886202
I'm glad I was able to make a nicer one. I'm trying to keep this world rough enough for the masochists and nice enough for everyone else.
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>>5885929
Fahrenheit
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>>5882687

It's so sad

Y u do dis
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>>5886670
Still not THAT cold.
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Honestly, I don't even read the binding captions to fap. I enjoy the plots more; I love stories of loving femdom futas taking care of their males and making them feel safe and secure. Too much femdom is about putting the men down and making them feel inferior.
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>>5885511

Use better fonts. >>5855720 is an example of a pretty egregious offender of poor font face. Make sure you use anti-aliasing, too. Slightly related, don't save as compressed jpgs. >>5855736 has some pretty ugly artifacting around the text.

>>5855690 Don't use yellow text on white background.

>>5855686 >>5854728 Center alignment doesn't work that well for big blocks of text.

>>5855689 Try to use more line breaks, especially for dialogue-heavy paragraphs. Like in this pic, the middle paragraph is just a giant block. The colors don't even help that much because line wrap just makes it a mess. It would probably be okay to make your thinner images wider to help with this. Think the 16:9 ratio that most monitors have.
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>>5885511
And there's also some grammar problems, but that shit's a pain in the ass to work with without plain text. Here's how I'd edit the first few paragraphs of >>5884128. http://pastebin.com/AZTuFyai

Main problem outside of grammar is how you introduce quotes. Technically you don't even need it most of the time.

>“I thought you were independent and free?” I asked.

It's obvious who's saying it, especially if you color the text, so the "I asked" isn't really necessary in this case. And it doesn't even look that good because it's unclear if "I asked" is its own sentence or a continuation of "and free?"

There's also a lot of quotes that don't end in punctuation.

>“Thanks” He mumbled as he sauntered out of the room
>“Are you really going outside looking like that? People will think you're some kind of savage!” No that won’t do at all” And he proceeded to comb my hair like I was a child.

Also, you use two-dot ellipses and use two spaces after sentences, both of which are non-standard.
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>>5887698
>>5887697

Thanks man. A lot of those problems were just me being sloppy. I'll do better next time. What font would you suggest? I use calibri bold. I'll post the fixed version tomorrow. It really helps when people point this stuff out. Thanks for the feedback.
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>>5865764
>http://i.imgur.com/8t4XCw0.jpg
He may write erotica for women with penises, but he's not a fag when it comes to names.
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>>5887763
That one is mine. One of my favorite ones I've done.
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>>5887698
My mother, who often comes to me for editing assistance on her important business e-mails, works at a company where they mandate using two spaces after sentences.

Drives me up the wall.
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>>5884628
Certainly better than the others.
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>>5887814
Wait, you mean to tell me people don't use two spaces after sentences? What the fuck? It's amazing we can function as a civilization
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>>5887763
I like that one. Futamom is best mom.
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>>5887266
Not all of us are poor enough to live in cold places.
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>>5865843
Is there a full-size image w/o caption?
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Anyone have the pic/story with the redhead in leather holding a crop? says "The dick or the whip" in the picture, story's about a guy getting captured and loved tenderly on camera
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Fixed some typos. The next one is about a religious festival. Males pray by sucking off the priestess and "praying" into her cock. She then says what she thinks he SHOULD pray out loud. So might pray "please free me from this" while sucking her off but she prays "Thank you for my mistress.
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go nuts.
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Sorry for being a bit offtopic, but does anyone know what is up with captions on /d/ at the moment? I've heard caption threads are being deleted by mods, but AFAIK no official statement has been made about them.

Anyone care to enlighten me about this?
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>>5868945
can it physically go that deep? I mean it should be possible, look at swordeaters..
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>>5855706
>>5855707
>>5855702
I like these three the most
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>>5894199
You must have a thing for red heads
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Oh God! I want this to happen to me so badly!
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>>5881646
sauce?
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I don't know who started that binding thing, but it's fucked up and it's a huge turn off.
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>>5895090
You are free to leave at any time
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>>5895090
I'm sorry.

>>5892665
I'd love to but I like to keep cock realistically sized.
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>>5895152
Don't worry, dude. I personally think it's hot as hell. I was even into the teeth stuff.
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>>5894454
Well yes, they tend to be more assertive than other hair colors for whatever reason
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>>5895152
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>>5895152
Fuck that guy I love this shit. It's your world man do whatever you want.
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>>5861246
Did you see >>5855687?
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>>5895152
I wish we had desperate threads for this kind of thing, as a sidenote does anyone have the link to the general captionbourou?
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>>5897415
Seperate threads they're already desperate
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>>5897415
I don't mind doing it. What were you looking for in it? It will be a few days till I can get to a computer though. Doing it on my phone will be a pain.

Just google d caption booru. I don't rember adress.
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>>5897415
>>5897422
>>5897418

http://dcaptions.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list

Here. Sorry you don't like my stuff but I do and so do others. So This is half for me. Is there anything I can do to make you happy or is it just the setting?
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>>5897425
Many thankss
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>>5895152
This is my first time running into this, but personally I fucking love it.

That guys just a giant pussy.
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>>5863955
This, damn I'm not going to read a paragraph just to get off a Nigga wanna bust a nut quick. Sheit can't focus on the picture while readin a sea of text, ya feel me? I mean if you like it more power to ya ya dig but goddamn I wanna fap, not read a mini novel sheeiiiiit!
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Would love some critique on this. I've done storywriting, but never a story with pic like this.
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