This is where the translation and edited pages for this doujin will be posted.
Original Raw: https://myreadingmanga.info/club-z-hinata-yagaki-kaitou-ga-gatai-no-ii-keibuho-san-ni-nokkaru-hon-persona-5-dj-jp/
Rough Draft's done, Octagon. Here's my go.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k68JvggAgKsjxefDsOO58iOPDsBz7yofXL8cOTlf_NE/edit?usp=sharing
>>2421420
Great, thanks!
I'll edit the pages as soon as I can.
>>2421420
Hey, so I'm going through the translation and I'm noticing some lines are missing. Like on pages 12 and 13.
If you could do a quick double check of everything on the document that'd be great, thanks!
Alright, I figured it out. I'll post the edited pages tomorrow.
>>2421811
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And that's the final page, sorry for the spam.
I know this character was inspired by Cat Noir, but I swear the author mixed some Lupin the III in there.
Once again though, let me know if there are any grammar mistakes I missed, and thanks again for the translation Shinobu.
>>2421999
Seriously though, look at that small guy take that horse cock like a pro!
Fuckkkk yesss thank u so much i jerked off to this
Damn i wanna ride inspector too mmmm
This is probably my favorite doujin so far. Thanks for doing this Octagon. Sorry that I didn't have more time to double check my translations, I am in a bit of a time crunch this week.
Loved it!
I do hope the artist picks this back up for another encounter.
And yes! It did feel and sound like Lupin screwing with Zenegata! Even Akigawa's declaration at the end sounded like the guy!
Thanks for doing this one, guys!