Writer anon reporting in with my cute 7753/Mana smut. The nasty Pukin/Wedin is still on its way so keep a look out. For now, please enjoy.
Oooh just saw the board. Will get right to work then.lol
You can't even make the excuse that he "identifies as female" because he doesn't. He gets off spying on girls bathing and makes the excuse that he "can't help it he's a guy"
Literally the worst. Snow White x Ripple or nothing
But I thought ripple was taken. Or was. I hope she gets taken again.
Oh course I read, hater
i was also who typeset the cd drama
Thank you! I appreciate the kind words, they really keep me going strong.
The Pfle/Gale one was very fun to write too, I can only imagine Pfle being quite the bad girl in their relationship.
There is nothing wrong with a girl just loving her loli.
One of the best ships in this whole series.
How hard did Deluge have to beg Bluebell to make love with her during her time recovering?
Who was taking the lead between them at first?
The only thing Deluge was begging her for was her sweet, sweet candies.
Bluebell, of course. Lovingly and full of care. The spicier stuff comes after the betrayal!
Poor Deluge will always be the bottom no matter how hard she tries.
I just can't find a way to see Deluge topping for any girl, no matter how fussy of a personality she has. I want Bluebell
or Laz III, ratherto tie her up and for Deluge to begrudgingly enjoy it.
marika and mimi are fantastic.
almost as good as shadowgale and pfle.
Why do so many lolis in this series have incriminating powers?
Dunno. Makes for some good /ll/ content though.
Now that's going too far. Leave the poor pup alone.
No, sorry. TLanon's been MIA for a while now, hasn't she? Hope she comes back soon. Pretty worried.
Oh hey I've seen your stuff on Ao3 before. Never would have thought you go here. I like your writing a lot, I wish I could leave more kudos but for now I'm excited for your new update.
Writer anon reporting in with explicit Pukin/Wedin for everyone.
Thank you for the compliments and kudos thus far. I'm thankful that our /u/ threads have been so nice to be in, it really makes me feel happy to post my content here. I hope you enjoy and look forward to more.
There's also a tumblr link at the end to contact me, so check that out if it interests you.
My panties are flying off at the speed of light! Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Need F2P to be translated so I can see more of them. They seem so cute from the RAWS.
My pleasure anon!
I'm not very sure yet, although Bluebell/Deluge and Pity/Ripple are high on my list.
I'm so glad to hear it neesan!
I'm glad you noticed, I was heavily inspired by the Pukin/Pity strap-on fanart that we've seen posted around. The toy fit her character perfectly.
And yes, send future requests to my blog! I have some prompts listed already.
I wish Lady Puk appeared older so I could ship her with a few of the other girls without shame.
Not that it really stops me though.
I want her to have a threesome with a love-stricken Lethe and Tenshi Hamuel!
I want Pity to indulge herself in Ripple's young, toned body every night for the next two years.
oneesans, tell me why you like Nana and Winterprison.
Here's some Marimimi to stay on topic. You can tell me why you like Marimimi if you'd prefer.
>explicit gay couple
that's pretty much it desu. pretty boring otherwise and nana a shit.
The other pairings are way better even if not explicit. lapisbell is a best
Lapis x Bellsie is insanely cute. I hope they're doing this in Nemurinland.
I also want Bellsie to see Lazuline's human form and think she's a gyaru slut in person, only to find out she's a pure maiden who wears white panties instead. Pure gals can conquer the world.
Bellsie already saw lazuline's human form though, and she was ashamed of suspecting such a pure and innocent and genki girl.
I don't like them, not much. Sister Nana was my initial favorite character because I love nuns, and I liked her even more after finding out she and Winterprison were explicitly in a relationship when I was first getting into the series. Too bad besides being cute design wise and having a great voice, she failed me in every way and ended up being as plain as stale bread. Winterprison too. She's only appealing as Shizuku, and that's me being generous. Their relationship in general bores me to tears.
Marimimi a cute but Pukisoni an absolute best.
To be fair nana and winterprison's relationship gets glossed over quite a bit in the main story. Learning more about them afterwards does make their dynamic and actions a bit more interesting.
If Marika didn't exist Lapis would be best Mahoiku. Even then she was basically tied with Marika on my sorter.
Reading about how Pukin called out Sonia's name in the house when she heard something made my heart ache. Hearing Pukin call Pity's name after that made it ache a little more. I mean, for all her flaws, Pukin was just incredibly vulnerable back then and my heart went out to her.
The previous neesan was right. I was excited too upon discovering the series and finding out there was a confirmed yuri couple, but Nana and Weiss were so bland it was hard to be excited after getting deeper in. I did enjoy learning that the two of them were kinky privately though. If things were spicier (or generally more interesting) perhaps I'd have liked them more.
Well I'm also putting them into context of the first book where most the characters lacked a lot of characterization.
>alice sole purpose is to fuck snow white because she gave her a key. also gurololi
>mary is just a crazy bitch who likes beating up on people
>la putz "I'm a boy!!!!"
>peaky angels are just cunty bitches
It doesn't hurt that Pukin's MG model is literally a prince (sword, noble theme, etc)
Those outfits look so stupid though.
On that topic how do outfits work for magical girls? If they change does the outfit stay changed? Or does it go back each time. Because gear taken off stays off.
>she doesn't know the joy of tabards
Pukin makes it work, though. Also it seems the outfits are part of the girls, since apparently eating sufficiently repairs them too.
Also, where is writer-oneesan's blog? I have a request to submit...
They're explicitly canon.
They complement each other.
They lived together and spent all their time together.
They made no effort to hide their relationship.
They'd die for each other.
Nana made an effort to keep their relationship strong.
I like their personalities.
They also died entirely due to their personalities; rather than due to some physical weakness or getting randomly ambushed or whatever. I like that.
Thanks, this is fantastic! I've only watched the anime, so I never cared much for Sister Nana and Winterprison who barely had any screentime before dying pointlessly. Never realised that they had backstory in the LN, much less a detailed account of how absolutely dense Nana was while Winterprison was doing her best to court her. Is there more of them in the LNs?
Also, I was quite surprised by how coherent this chapter was compared to the writing in many other LNs I've read. It practically seems to have been written in English rather than translated from Japanese, so props to you if the natural-sounding prose was your doing.
Are the rest of the Mahoiku LNs like this too? I've been holding off on reading them because I figured they'd be kind of a pain to get through.
Unfortunately there has been a bit of drama regarding translations for this series. They were originally translated by a guy named PlatFleece until we found out how shoddy a lot of translations were, thus having a group of anons come forward in his stead. The OP of the thread linked the novels that have been translated well and similarly to the Weiss/Nana you've just read. I'd definitely recommend checking out all of the links listed there!
Since the renewed translations aren't all the way caught up, here is Plat's if you wanted to look further in: https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/0BwUphuy8AsxEVDJfaXJrcHdMVU0. Take it with a grain of salt though. They're not as detailed but he is trying to "revise" them of mistakes now.
I genuinely hope you decide to get into the light novels, neesan. The girls and assortment of never-ending yuri ships are completely worth it.
Nana and WP are present in the background of a couple of stories in Episodes (Nemurin's Adventure, The Robot and the Nun) and briefly mentioned in others. However, this is the one story that is exclusively for them.
In general, they suffer from insufficient characterization since Unmarked was pretty much the only 1-volume arc (Jokers was twice the length of the average MGRP LN and Aces and Queens are technically part of the same meta-arc).
I'm glad you liked it; in general I'll do my best to TL whatever the baidu people put out.
Villains are sexier so my gay ass doesn't mind. Also you forgot Clamberry.
I genuinely cannot tell if you're upset with this or not. There are many kind lesbians in this series along with villainous ones, so it's not as if Asari is implying lesbianism is evil or some bullshit.
As a woman, the evil lesbians in the story are sexy and not discriminatory at all, but that's my personal take.
Best lesbians. It's no wonder they're all my favorite girls.
Hey, neechans, what's your favorite Ripple pairing?
Snow White, it's my OTP for both of them. But
Pityis good too.
Writer anon coming in with a Pity/Ripple fill. Whoever out there sent the request, thank you, it was very fun and I love Pity. I hope you enjoy!
Apparently Maruino is leaving twitter. I'm so sad.
I love this guy's art and the way he draws boobs, they always look so soft and delicious.
I would appreciate it if he stopped drawing weird POV het sex of the girls though. It throws me off each time.
Neesan, I tried to submit a request through tumblr but I don't think it went through... Could you do Marika having wet dream about Mimi? Or Clantail having a wet dream about Pechika?
This is the last chapter of MGRP Circle of Life, and with that it's complete.
thank you i love you.
you're the best, please don't leave us
>Sanae's ideal man is a woman
Ruler deserves a nice dependable onee-sama as well.
desu recently i've started to think asari is kind of weird about writing lesbians. it seems in every side story that comes out he casually slides in that a girl is interested in men. even in that prince of the club story with nana and wp, it has that stupid "but we're both girls!" shit and nana wants male attention.
it makes me nervous for future side stories and other lesbians.
with nana it skeeved me and seemed out of nowhere unlike wp who's already bi. we knew wp is bi but nana in the main story there was no indication and asari's bonus side stories (not even rly the ones from episodes) are packed with fanservice. i don't want him for the sake of fanservice to sell out EXPLICIT lesbians. idc otherwise but for nana it was weird
"but we're both girls" is over done and i'm sick to death of it, i didn't expect it from asari. the whole thing was off imo.
idk i'm high and blogging at this point, sorry to offend if i did neesan
I understand now and completely agree! No problems at all, I was worried for a minute there that we'd have a strong difference in mind. I'm quite fond of you and enjoy reading your posts here. Take care of yourself.
daaaamn i guess that means all the lesbians in this series really ARE evil (because nana wasn't evil even if she did questionable shit)
that's fine though i always felt pukin and frederica were the gayest anyways
its more that despite what /u/ says lesbians are the minority.
nana wasn't a lesbian or straight really. she was just desperate for attention. and beta males were the easiest target for that. but turned full gay due to wp.
most the girls are probably straight, the few subtext ones are questionable but probably not aware of their sexuality due to age.
then the blatantly gay ones are still basically always blatantly gay.
There are explicitly straight ones and explicitly gay ones. The rest are undetermined, so anyone can interpret them as straight (thus platonic friendship) or gay (thus romantic crush but unaware) as they like, no use arguing about it.
The explicitly "straight" and "gay" ones can also be actually bisexual; there's nothing wrong with them having an interest in different genders at different point in time. It's silly to dismiss their bisexuality just because you can't wrap your head around that concept.
good for you anon you're bi, it doesn't fucking matter and has nothing to do with what i said.
you're not a special fucking snowflake.
the not gay magical girls stay not gay and the gay ones stay gay.
>b-but what if they're bi
good for them, so long as it pertains to girl on girl yuri its gay. so long as it pertains to girl on guy het its straight.
>The explicitly gay ones can also actually be bisexual
Uhhh. No? A lesbian is a lesbian, there's nothing "woke" about saying they could be bisexual when they're blatantly lesbian. Bisexuality is certainly a real thing but there's nothing good about calling a lesbian bi because you want them to be or because they "could" be. No.
Personally I don't include the elves in blatant, i put them under pairs like rain pou/postair and shadowgale/pfle
they're almost undeniably gay, but there's no explicit mentioning of their romantic/sexual preferences.
Sonia is gay. She had an angry glaring contest with Wedin out of jealousy when Wedin was rubbing up against Pukin.
Can you tell me why you think the Clamberry is blatantly gay though? Smelly Melly is a given. I'd say Pfle and Shadowgale are the blatant ones, especially with SG admited she started breathing harder when she saw Pfle's bare thighs.
Oh no, you're right and I agree, Sonia is. I was too focused on Pukin at the time I posted and was more thinking of Pukin and Sonia and their relationship with each other. Individually they're both undeniably and blatantly gay.
Clamberry I thought to include because she specifically says Winterprison - another woman - made her feel like a maiden in love. Which is a pretty gay thing to think, especially since the same sentiment wasn't shared when she fought La Pucelle.
that was more a combat thing.
especially since la pucelle was a girl at the time.
was more just winterprison got her fighting blood going at the time, and she has a fighting fetish.
was probably less of a gay thing and more of just a adrenaline junky thing.
Now that I've finished my main project, I can start working on MGRP again.
First up, Twin Daikaiju - Showdown in Dreamland. It apparently came with the Nemurinland CD.
Thank you so, so much! I was looking forward to this story the most and it didn't disappoint! Fuck, Sonia is so fucking cute.
And a particularly /u/worthy entry: The Wall Between You And Me. It's also a Nemurinland CD extra, apparently.
One last thing before I sleep because I like the art and /u/. That said my nip isn't amazing, so take it with a pinch of salt.
Lady Proud: Umbrain
Are you there, Umbrain!
Umbrain: What's wrong, Proud?
LP: What do you mean, what's wrong? There's work to do!
U: We're off today, right?
LP: I... I'm sorry... I woke you up, huh?
U: Yup, you did, Proud!
I mean, I was going to take a walk, but...
LP: I see...
U: Eh? Hm...
U: Proud's been acting strange lately...
I mean, I'm relieved, but at the same time I'm kind of concerned.
U: If Proud were acting normal this morning...
(LP: There's been a lot of suspicious people around recently! Let me walk with you!
LP: If you're free after this, shall we eat together?
I'll buy the juice you like!
Are... are you angry?)
U: ...She'd do her best to make me feel good...
U: And she's not caressing my cheeks as often too...
(background kanji reads "Usually"
LP: Just 2 more seconds...)
U: Usually she touches them 10 times a day for about 5 seconds each time, but recently she's only touched them 3 times a day, and for just a moment...
...And just now, she didn't even touch them at all...
U: No, I can't be worrying about Proud!
Besides, I hate it when Proud gets all overprotective of me and treats me like a kid.
U: Bueh! There's no sugar in this coffee milk! Proud, get me something else to drink...
(Tumbleweed noises intensify)
U: Proud, you piece of crap!
Rippuru: Are you hurt, Master?
Pity: I expected nothing less of you, Ripple
(background SFX: yay~)
U: I'm very sorry about this...
(SFX: licky licky licky licky licky licky licky licky)
P: Oh, don't mind it at all
If it's only this much, you can fix it up with simple licking.
R: Haaaah ~<3
P: Okay, you licked it aaaall clean~
R: How was it?
P: Well, it was your first time using your tongue, so it was a little inexperienced, so you need to absorb more experience ...
Next time, just be a bit more bold and it'll be fine.
R: Yes, I'll do my best.
U: Are these people in a superior-subordinate relationship of some kind?
P: However, it's nice to be the one who's licked from time to time~
R: I like licking Master too.
P: Honestly, you're so spoilt, Ripple.
U: They're really close to each other...
P: Now then, time for your reward and a present...
R: Yes, Master...
P: Now then, open your mouth~
R: Okay, ahhh~
(TL Note: Jojo fans will get this)
Bluebell: Oya...? The lewd mood in the air's gone...
(What an amazing color)
If you want to get it on, I'd like you to do so somewhere other than in a public place...
BBC: Doesn't that make me look like a pervert's partner?
P: Isn't that the case?
BBC: I'm normal, you know.
P: I heard the Lazulines enjoy getting ladies drunk and taking them home, don't they?
Laz 2: When you drink while singing, the alcohol takes effect really fast ~su
BBC: No, look, that's only for girls I'm interested in, you know?
P: But I'm interested in Ripple~
BBC: Uuu~ Still, you can't do it outdoors...
BBC: And is this girl your new interest?
P: No... that girl-
R: Master~ This girl looks to be in difficulty...
R: A proper Magical Girl ought to help others~
P: That's right, very true
(SFX: twitch, squeezing, very lewd implications here)
P: Nhoo~ You've become a wonderful Magical Girl, Ripple...)
(BBC: Ah, what a pain)
Aaaand more Ruler stuff.
It's writer anon here with the next smut fill! The ship this time is Snow/Marika (or Mariko, rather). I took a small break from writing but I'm feeling good and in the groove again. I hope you enjoy!
Do you neesans have any unpopular/crack ships you like? I feel like there's a lot of potential for them since the cast is so huge.
And I personally have quite a few of these.
Pic related is one of mine.
And Breakdown Part 4.
Thank you so much for this, it's much appreciated.
I skimmed it real quick since I'm going to sit down and read it another time, but 7753 and Mana are the cutest girlfriends. Them and Mei all together make reading each new Breakdown chapter fun!
honestly if someone suggested any unusual combo to me i'd probably be into it to some degree.
i like pity/tot pop a lot. it's a shame it's not popular or even really acknowledged since their interactions are cute and genuine af.
they were so cute in that drama cd story. especially when sonia blushed because swim swim complimented her. i wish there was more art than this doodle i found on twitter.
Pity and Tot Pop is one of my favorites, mainly because you can tell they really love each other even beyond the master/student bond.
I find it amusing that Lazuline was the only one Melly tried to reach out to. It probably helped that Lazuline was the only one who really understood what she was saying.
I wish Deluge and Inferno got more screentime.
Oh! I liked Pity/Tot too! I'm glad there are others into the series that liked it.
>Cuteness and beauty were a common feature of all Magical Girls so those went without saying, but her brilliant, unreserved smile fit Frederica’s tastes. What pleased Frederica most was her bangs, and not just because her hair was lustrous and glossy, but because each strand of that short hair was filled with vitality. Frederica put her hand on Tot Pop’s head and caressed it like she was soothing a child, and the petted Tot Pop turned down the corners of her eyes and had a very pleased expression on her face, like a spoiled kitten playing with her mistress.
I also felt happy that
Pity ended up feeling actual raw anger when Tot was killed, showing she genuinely cared for Tot beyond being her disciple.
This is Sketchnon here. First time editing but have started doing this one. Platfleece help translate the whole thing for me. If you have any suggestions or corrections let me know here, twitter or discord. I wont have the rest of this story until my order comes in.
Good lord, this was fantastic. I'm happy I ended up writing a Pity/Ripple request already, although reading the translation makes me want to all over again. Thank you for dumping, sketchnon!
I erased the top of whatever it said above Lazuline. Thought it was translated...
If anyone knows what it suppose to say let me know and I'll add it.
Thank you again! Also
>That part where 7753 learns about Nephilia's magic
this one actually answers a lot of questions i previously had. thanks!
Ultra cute! Are you the anon who last thread said they were wanting to draw some stuff for this series?
This isn't much, but I'll be doing SWRP next.
naisu. been looking forward to swrp.
not the translator but
tlnon is fine and still around i think, just left us. can't blame them after the whole shitshow that was the translation drama, they probably didn't want to deal with it any more
i wish she would say hi too, i really appreciated her translations and presence in the fandom.
i feel bad you're handling translations all by yourself now but i really do appreciate it so thank you again for all you do. i'm still mistrustful of plat so your tls are all i have.
That would be so cute. A fairytale romance between two serial killers.
I noticed the other day that Pukin's pumpkin motif is also really fittingly adorable for the two of them, especially since pumpkins are a huge thing in Cinderella. I love that they were designed to be each other's prince and princess.
Neru managed to take clearer pictures of their work. Here's that ClamMelly!
SWRP's coming along, in the meantime take this with a pinch of salt.
Pity: What do you think?
Bluebell: Huh~ She's a completely different person...
P: Cute, isn't she... the difference is really important...
(P: ...But that's why I'm worried...)
P: She's SO cute that evil people might do all sorts of things to her...
BBC: Is it time for me to cut in now?
P: In any case, let's take some pictures~
P: This is goooood~ Okay okay okaaayyy~ Act more like a clown!
(BBC: This really makes you think about human rights issues...)
You'll like this then.
Also, I have to issue a caveat; the CN translation was patchy and while I tried to be as faithful to the JP as possible, I'm not as good at it as I am in CN, so please excuse any mistakes. Better yet, let me know, so I can get better.
Hello, mahoik/u/! It's writer anon here with another fill. The request was for Pukin/Wedin and takes place during chapter eight. The prompt was "in a car/vehicle." I hope you enjoy it!
You're the love of my life, writer anon. Thank you for another sexy fill as always!
Even sexier that it's Pukin.I love this ship so much.
For sure. Here is hoping that you will write Swim/Ruler, Ripple/Snow, Deluge/Bluebell, Clammy/Melly, Daisy/Nokko and Proud/Umbrain.
Thanks Madokami this series is full of nice couples.
I do requests anon! I like all of those pairings and would be happy to write them. I'm currently doing fills based off a writing prompt to make things easier. Feel free to drop a pairing and number!
I read until Limited before the fiasco, (I dont know what happened exactly, just read that previous tl was a dissaster) so im start re reading all again. but jokers aces and queens is still untranslated by the new team, and looks like they arent focus on this, are previous TL decent enough to read it, or I should wait to the new team?
Previous TLs are dog shit. Old TLer is "fixing them" but might take awhile before that's done. New TL is dead, and I don't know if chink has plans on doing the main stories.
I read them just for the sake of at least getting the gist of what happens, but they're really really bad.
I would very much like to do JOKERS, but my skill with JP is lower than my proficiency with CN (enough to check, but doing it from scratch is very slow and not very accurate). I am actively working on sharpening up my skills and when it's ready I'll post about it, but until then, you'll have to content yourself with Plat's.
In the meantime, a story from Peaceful Days:
Sketchnon is going to TL and typeset this doujin, but in the meantime I TLed parts of it.
1/32 (the cover)
Lady Proud: UOOOOOOOOOHHHHH!
Maou Pam: Lady Proud... she's unexpectedly spirited during training...
MP: (She's usually calm, so I didn't expect this passion from her... She really is a warrior...)
MP: ...Oh no, just looking at her is getting me heated up too.)
MP: ...What kind of training is that?
Umbrain: (Say, Proud...).
U: Did you know? Mother's milk was originally made from blood...
U: So can you produce coffee milk from your breasts?
LP: Do you think I'm some kind of entertainer... and besides, I can't even produce milk in the first place...
U: I wanted to try milking you, but...
TL Note: Umbrain's drink box says Coffee Milk, Proud's drink box says Lycopene; probably a reference to the bright red component of tomato juice)
U: Proud, you let out too much!
U: And it's so thick that it's hard to get it down!
LP: I don't have any ulterior motives here, I have to meet Umbrain's expectations of me as her superior... I definitely don't have any ulterior motives...
LP: I can make it if I think I can! Feelings are everything for Magical Girls!
MP: It's not like I want to lose to her...
N: After this, Umbrain squeezed her super hard and they had to stop.
Bluebell Candy: And so, this girl is the latest one to catch your interest?
Pity: No... it's this girl.
Ripple: Master~ she looks like she's in some kind of trouble.
R: As a proper Magical Girl, I want to help her.
P: That's true
(SFX: heart pounding)
P: (Nhoo~ You're acting like a wonderful Magical Girl, Ripple...)
BBC: (Wah~ what a pain)
BBC: Hm~ So basically things didn't go well with your superior, huh...
U: I wonder if she hates me...
U: Would it be fine to leave her alone?
BBC: Eh, but...
BBC: Well, your superior came all the way to meet you in person even though she could have sent you an e-mail or called you up, right?
BBC: That can't be because she dislikes you or something like that, no?
BBC: (I ended up counselling her...)
U: I see...
U: Would it be okay to leave her alone, I wonder...
P: Ripple, what would you do if I were depressed?
R: So there are times when you feel depressed, Master?
R: Ah... Well, I'm a feeling little down now...
R: In that case, if my friend was feeling sad, I would...
R: Cook for them...?
R: I'd make food for them and force them to talk about their problems... I think it would be better to do something even though it' would be meddling with their lives.
R: Doing that would make me happy... I think I'd like to do that too.
P: That's a good answer...
P: By the way, do you have any friends?
R: No, I don't have any friends.
P: (Relaxing the mental suggestion by even a little was dangerous, huh...)
P: (Still, by peeking at her roots like this, it'll help in bringing her up...)
R: What's wrong, Master?
P: I'm thinking about your future. Incidentally, I'd like to try your cooking too, Ripple.
R: Really? I'll try my best, then.
BBC: (As I thought, I don't want to be treated as one of them~)
P: By the way, that umbrella girl seems to have disappeared...
BBC: She ran off while the two of you were flirting with each other...
LP: She was a Magical Girl of the Foreign Affairs Department, but...
(Text Box: Concerning the B-City Incident some days back)
(Now that Maou's School has grown weaker since Maou died, one could say that there's a chance for me to advance myself.The dead can't do anything, after all...)
(Leaving the ceremonial hall so soon wasn't good, huh...
...I guess it wouldn't have mattered even if I, as a fellow colleague, had stayed there...
I wasn't her friend, nor did I expect her to look at me as a worthy rival
In the end, I was just a “mere colleague” to her.
LP: (Just like how the dead can't do anything, the living can't tell the dead anything either.)
LP: (No matter what accomplishments I achieve, Maou Pam will not know about them.)
LP: (Then how about aiming for the top?)
LP: Why did I desire that woman...
U: So you were here!
U: There's something I wanted to give you.
LP: These are...
LP: Could it be... Umbrain, you made these?
U: Mm... I know you like soft things, Proud, so...
LP: I'm sorry, my blood came out with my tears
U: Blood! Blood's getting in the marshmallows!
LP & U: So yummy~
LP: Fortunately you managed to turn the blood on the marshmallows into chocolate syrup.
U: That's because marshmallows taste good to begin with.
LP: Aw, come on, cheer up.
LP: (Because I have such a thoughtful subordinate)
LP: (I need to distinguish myself in order to pay it back to this girl)
LP: (Just what was stopping me all this time?)
LP: (Maou... you can hear about it in the next world)
LP: (About Lady Proud's achievements, and her excellent right hand woman!)
U: (She's eating with an awfully serious face...)
U: (Well, I don't think it's anything bad...)
BBC: (If you're at your wits' end, use this)
BBC: (It's a candy that'll improve your mood! There's nothing weird inside it!)
U: (There wasn't really a need for it after I obtained it...)
U: (I might as well eat it since it would be wasted otherwise...)
LP: (Huh? Who did I get it from, anyway?)
P: What's wrong?
BBC: No... I handed over the wrong candy...
BBC: I gave her the candy that I took from you.
P: Want to watch?
BBC: Ah, you got a strand of her hair.
R: Master~ This apron's too small~
P: Ahhh~ I'll take some pictures of it later~
LP: I'll do it! I'll do it!
U: It's not fair, Proud...
LP: Ah... Umbrain...san...
U: You kept it all to yourself... I like Proud too, you know
U: Your pretty and white skin...
U: I licked it <3
U: But I can do it because we're friends, right?
U: Shall we become better friends...?
LP: I... I...
LP: I'm scared!
U: And I didn't even finish eating the marshmallows!
LP: I... I'm sorry...
U: If you want me to forgive you, pat me more!
LP: Oh... ohhh...
LP: (Ah... is this supposed to be a punishment? Isn't this a reward!?)
LP: By the way, about what you did just now, Umbrain...
U: Hm? What did I do?
LP: (Did I hallucinate something because I was so happy?)
U: It's an e-mail.
LP: I got one too...
LP: Man-made Magical Girls?
Background: Concerning Man-Made Magical Girls
...I am from the Foreign Affairs Department...
P: What happens next is up to them now
BBC: Are you doing anything unnecessary?
R: I just want to help those Magical Girls as they try their best~
R: Master~ Food's ready~
BBC: (I came to talk about the future...)
R: I made pumpkin~
P: That's hideous!
R: It's in such a hard and gory state...
(TL Note: in JP it's pronounced "nani shitara konna haado de goa na arisama"... which is a play on Hardgore Alice. Guess what that resembles!)
BBC: Come to think of it, I don't recall her having any cooking skills...
BBC: Come on now... she did her best, you ought to acknowledge that.
P: Ripple, I don't feel that way, I'm just full.
BBC :(Well said, you managed to escape)
R: Is it not to your liking?
P: That's not fair, Ripple...
P: (My lovely disciple is looking at me like that...)
R: (I guess there's no way I can get out of eating this, huh...)
BBC: Here it comes!
BBC: She exploded!
R: Are you alright, Master?
P: It's okay as long as your hair's fine.
BBC: Looks like she came from a disco...
This is Kyukyutto.
This time round, I ended up making a Proud x Umbrain book, but it began with me wanting some kind of bond between the girls, be it good or bad.
I wonder if there’ll be any short stories?
Also, I wanted to dress brainwashed Ripple in frilly clothes.
And in case you can't be bothered to wade through all of them...
Also, I mainly TLed this to practice my runes, so take the content with a pinch of salt. It should be reasonably accurate, though.
i love you. my sole light on this dark day.