Translation Thread

>>1903390
It's just these two pages that need translation? Couldn't read a couple of the lines but-
http://pastebin.com/yZL0tAm4

Thanks for including the YKA stuff in the OP post, Goggled Anon.

I would like to add that we need another translator to look over the translations we have so far, so please help out you moonspeakers!

>>1913995

Little trick cos of the scribbles but something like this maybe?

>Ah<3
>Hahn
>Ah
>Nya<3

>Ah...

>You're wrong! I don't usually
>make those kinds of noises!
>That?
>She made an excuse!

>Is that so?
>Her knowledge of weird stuff increased!!

RizeSyaro (incomplete, small RAWs)
http://pastebin.com/LjwGcxw9
http://exhentai.org/g/872597/819e2bc4c4/

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Pls this.

>>1914242
I just did that man. >>1914085

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If anyone is interested in Idolmaster, this one has been untranslated for a long time.

http://exhentai.org/s/14ab1ef2be/709998-1

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>>1914256
It even has a sequel, but it's in chinese.

http://exhentai.org/g/658880/bdc9f5c34e/

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Anyone interested in cleaning Sweet Bitter Kiss 1 by Chaos2nd? It's a love triangle story featuring Ran, Yurika and Kaede.

We got the translator ready, but we need a capable cleaner. Sadly I won't toss the raws around, so you need to directly contact me: [email protected]

I need credentials like your experience and relationships/connection with other groups.

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>>1914299
Forgot tripcode for identification.

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>>1914141
Thanks! BTW the source is http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51748805

Translation please:
http://exhentai.org/g/867982/502912bd16/

>>1914085
Lel, thanks bro. You saved my life.

Figure I should post here as well. I'm here if you guys need any Thai <-> English translation. Apologies for going MIA earlier, I was quite busy.

Can I request translation for a certain short yuri VN? Will give details if anyone is interested.

Chapter 12 cleaned:
https://mega.nz/#!pR4CCIzL!4GxoYDnU3kw39Bo6XbBHBkBuhdpWLO8dPQFLm-ht-l4

Still could use someone to look over Goggled Anon's translations. The lines surrounded by "[" and "]" are ones that he/she's really not sure about.

Glorious KyoAya with a hint of ChinaAka (some uncertain bits do to thick kanji)
http://pastebin.com/R8YkmdFX
http://exhentai.org/g/873588/04af74b1dc/

http://nhentai.net/g/148604/
The only doujin of Galilei Donna and is Yuri!

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Is anybody going to finish translating and scanning this manga?

Bumping thread for more views.

Someone please look over Goggled Anon's translations of YKA.

I'm already nearly half done the cleaning.

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>>1917072
To clarify, this bit is the only thing that really need double-checking before ch9 is ready for typeset.

>[Even if someone in this world would deny Ginko]
>We will never deny her

>>1917104
It wouldn't hurt for someone to check the unsure translations for all the chapters at one time so we wouldn't have to find someone for every chapter.

>>1914041
Are yurika's campus life translations kill?

>>1917104
Would something like this work?
>"Even if everyone in the world were to reject Ginko"
>"We would never reject her"
It's mainly just the phrasing I got stuck on.

Checked 9 chapter of YKA. Here're some suggestions:
p11
>Ever since she hugged that stuffed bear, Ginko has had the scent of lilies.
The stuffed bear Ginko hugged had the scent of lilies
>This bear given to Ginko as a substitute...
Ginko's scent is as this bear's...
>It has my mom's scent.
It was my mom's scent.

p14
>Ugh... It feels like I'm on the Away team.
Ugh... I feel so out of place. Just because I'm not sure what "Away team" is.
>But if I keep training like this, I may one day become a splendid bear!
>But if I keep training like this, I may look like I become a splendid bear!

p15
>I feel a little more comfortable now.
I feel a bit relieved now.
>No, those aren't bears. They're just things the bears use.
No, those aren't bears. They're just things the bears made.
>Frogs and butterflies?
Frogs and insects?
>Hmm... I dunno about all types of plants...
Hmm... It depends on the types of plants...

1/2

p16
>I wonder if I'll be able to read it if it's too difficult...
They're all so difficult. I wonder which one should I read.
>I love how genuinely straightforward you are Ginko.
She's so straightforward in her love for Ginko.
>Though you can be a little too straightforward sometimes.
Though a little too straightforward sometimes.

p17
>The apple pie'll get burnt
I baked apple pie

2/2

>>1917334
Yeah, it's good.

>>1917349
>>1917351
Cool. Here's an updated version. Kept in the "Away team" bit since they do use "away" in katakana in the original.
http://pastebin.com/RiLpXkLS

>>1917349
>>1917351
Please continue with the next chapters when you have time.

So page 24 has Kureha's mother with a rifle.
In volume 1 Goggled Anon initally translated that her mother was a Matagi, which was then translated to her father.

This make sit seem like her mother was the Matagi after all...

Can anyone confirm? I'll pull out the volume 1 stuff to change it if I need to.

Ah, I didn't know this thread existed. I'm translating Virgin's Empire as of chapter 30 and since I'm not a native English speaker, it would be awesome if someone could proofread my scripts. Chapter 30-38 have already been released but everything after that can still be rewritten.
All the scripts can be found in this folder: https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0By0BSYQDRyUXbnh5MFlNbldIbG8&usp=sharing

>>1918128
And if it helps for context, the raws are here: https://manga.madokami.com/Raws/Otome%20No%20Teikoku

>>1918128
I'd like to help, but I'm busy. You probably only need someone to skim through and check for awkward English, I imagine?

>>1917673
I wouldn't read too much into it. After all, Kureha's in a laser rifle club so it's likely her mother was too (or at least its ten-year-old equivelant)

>>1918457
So should I go back an change that?
Maybe they were both Matagi?

>>1918459
Nah. The kanji did say "father" (I had looked over it in my initial run do to mere assumption)

>>1918494
Alright then.

Also, here's chapter 9. Look it over to see if it looks good to you.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!YABiALBT!Qnr5jhNgcHNDzBtDfrV2OOPS7OhR3yD6sXqmvGxLzRg

>>1918573
p10
>That's what I thought the most
Maybe replace with "That was my strongest thought"?

p16
>a little to straightforward
a little too straightforward

Also maybe change the first "complex" to something like "difficult" to lessen repetition.

p26
>untranslated hiragana
This is...

On a side note, there's an odd fuzziness on all your bolded text for some reason. Might wanna tinker with that a bit.

>>1918428
That would help.

>>1918597
Here's the updated version.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!AYpDWR7Z!kwORmsj74_kmTtTsUZn-kZ-ojpkmBIoeHd_efuIV4Lk

>>1918611
S'all good as far as I can tell

If there's anyone interested in translating this >>1919053 , the publisher is open for translations.
>Inquiries about the translation of this work may be sent to here mailto:[email protected]?subject=【ぽこぽこ】とある結婚 翻訳出版について(English)

>>1919541
That's about official translations.

>>1919541
Actually, I was translating it the other day and thought I'd make a thread and dump it there. I'm not native in English though.

More glorious Yuyushiki catgirl lewds (and without any futa pages this time too)
http://exhentai.org/g/875451/b1a74a340d/
http://pastebin.com/9exV1Umi

And more KyoAya? Why not.
http://pastebin.com/v6PjHTa2
http://exhentai.org/g/875835/4b0174cea6/

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This arrived in the mail and, well, we got the translator covered, but we do need a cleaner for this.

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I am totally not in favor of keeping honorifics in English translations. However, Otome's usage of the -tan honorific is one of her defining traits, so I guess I'll consider keeping it.

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Can you g/u/ys help me a bit?

First SFX (right beside Ran on top right)
> しーん・・・ (silence SFX)
Grimace?

Second SFX (door knob)
>ガチャ (sound of turning door knob)
???

Third SFX (bottom right, door knob area)
>キィ・・・ (creeping door sound?)
???

>>1921188
>First SFX (right beside Ran on top left)*

>>1921188
You could go the literal way.
>silence
>turn
>creak
Because any onomatopoeia from doorknob turning will sound weird as fuck.

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>>1921190
That got resolved quickly. Thanks!

>>1921136
Oh.. I like honorifics..

>>1921136
I think it's an easy way to show that Otome's talking, so in her case I'd keep it. Otherwise, I completely agree with dropping English-style honorifics.

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Secret x Secret PREVIEW ONLY is out by yours truly
http://lazylily.moe/cute-secret-x-secret-preview-is-out/

TL;DR Artist found out, distribution is restricted.

>>1921235
I changed it by using "Rantan", but it's not on the preview.

Lil bit of Mira
http://pastebin.com/cqucrZZZ
http://exhentai.org/g/876073/b017e51ec7/

>>1921339
Is it just me or is there loads of new Mira about lately?

Oh, Mirei, you big perv
http://pastebin.com/p3sFnKxh
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=53724160

Had a try at the manga bits in this Yuyushiki Official Fanbook
http://exhentai.org/s/05b4c89e55/876182-85
http://pastebin.com/bD8k4k39

>>1921348
It's not a new staff from Mira, but thanks to digital distribution we can naw get them all fast.

>>1921261
I thought you had another one killing you off.
Anyway... Aren't we all your friends? kek

>>1920040
Please dump.

Ekhm, Anywone is interested in scanlating 2DK, G Pen, Mezamashidokei? After Vol 1 I was afraid, this will become another Stretch. But in Vol 2 there is finally love development and start of the romance.

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>>1921521
I'm not really sure I should, Anon. I don't want this to accidentally spread to the internet.

>>1921525
I'll probably translate it, though I'm not especially enthusiastic about doing so. Admittedly I've only seen the first chapter, but... my confidence in Yuri Hime doing anything I like is not very high right now.

>>1921261

More Ran x Yurika please

>>1921595
see >>1914299

>>1921556
If I email you, can I read it?

>>1921910
If we're mutually acquainted.

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>>1921355
Had a go at this - never typeset (or indeed used Photoshop) before though.

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Can you guys figure out what word Ran said in this sentence after the ashita kanji, and the last kanji? I don't think the last kanji is Neru since they look differently, I guess.

>>1924013
収録
戻る

>>1924014
Ah, I see. Thanks. The last kanji after 収録 is 早い.

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Working on handwritten stuff is really difficult. I can't make out the last one at the left.

何も
??て(?)ないよ

>>1924024
It looks like 何も見てないよ

>>1924026
Reading the scene and the word fits in their conversation. Thanks again!

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So... Anyone interested in cleaning a short RanAo lewd? Yes, I'm desperate.

Anyone here got the heart to translate Nisekano? The raw's been out for quite a while though.

YKA Chapter 13 Cleaned

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!gY5VDKpK!ZQUWwI-qoJsbIl6le-D0j6dkvz8XYuEtrtY-h4NBJk0

Can anyone please translate the last 2 chapters of this fanfic? You will have my eternal gratitude.

http://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=4548098#chapter_6_0

It's smut, but nothing too extreme, it seems (according to google translate).

YKA Chapter 14 Cleaned

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!RJo2yJID!zyBgGu781xWeA9ag5_wh_dYqyxfYfdr_Fq71A-wJDqM

What's the typical manga font's name?

like the one used on the Mirei short
>>1923996

>>1928612
Googling 'manga fonts' on image search should give you some examples on what fonts to use.

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I'm dying with the lack of progress on Kase-san. Anyone want to translate this stuff, all from this year, to keep me alive?

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Could someone so kindly send me a link of the translated version of this, please I've been wanting to read this ever since.

>>1928686
I'm not sure what's going on here, but it's adorable.

>>1928702
Considering you're not even providing the name of said 'this', probably not.

To everyone who watches Aikatsu:

Do you have an idea what 空白のくうはく一年間 (Year of Emptiness) is? It's supposed to be connected to Ichigo going to America in S1. Here's an excerpt from the author's afterword:

蘭あお好きとしは描かずにはいられない空白の一年間について
色々考えてみてこんなだったらいいなあと思って描きました。
As a fan of RanAo, I just couldn’t help drawing something about the Year of Emptiness. I gave it a lot of thought, and drew it according to how I would ideally like things to go.

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We're trying to imitate the font style of this extra. Can you g/u/ys read this page with no problem?

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>>1928965
I increased the font size a bit.

>>1928931
It's more or less just explaining that he wanted to draw a story set in the year Ichigo was in America (which of course was completely skipped inbetween S1 and S2). Year of Emptiness seems to fit well (maybe "quote" it if you're not sure it'll flow well)

>>1928991
Oh I see. Thanks. And the author's a she. Can confirm. We went to her booth on three separate occasions.

>>1928965
Not a particularly readable font regardless of the size. Faded text is pretty much a no-no unless the author's using it on purpose (eg. fading conciousness) so you should probably stick with a clearer font.

>>1929009
See >>1924013
The font is like that. Using a 'sterile' font like Astro feels out of place.

>>1929013
Come to think of it, ours a bit too transparent...

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The doujin is complete. However its distribution is limited. I'm gonna send the author a copy of the translation and ask her to reconsider.

I'm going all this trouble just to get permission from someone who will never notice. But I like her and her RanAo, so...

>>1929099
I pray for your success.
Also, maybe you could try offering the translation for her usage. If she's interested in selling it online or something.

>>1929316
It didn't go well. I provided her a copy and she said... Here's her reply. Admittedly I don't understand what she meant by NG (No go?) and I don't fully understand the 2nd to the last paragraph.

こんにちは。

翻訳のデータ、ありがとうございます。
確認しました。私の漫画には問題ないと思います。
ですが、32ページから35ページは、私の描いた漫画ではありません。
翻訳許可を出したのは私の描いた漫画だけなので、取り除いてください。

公開については、友達のみOKです。
友達以外の海外のファンに見せるのはNGです。

本当は翻訳そのものを不可にするつもりでしたが、今回は友達への公開のみという条件で、特別に許可をしました。
誰でも見られるように公開するというのであれば、私は今後一切の翻訳を不可にします。

私はこの考えを変えるつもりはありません。
どうか、ご理解をお願いします。

なえ

>>1929326
>NG
As in the opposite of OK. Don't do it.

>本当は翻訳そのもの…
I had actually planned on disallowing any translation at all at first, but in this case of showing it only to your friends, I provide special permission. In the case that you start sharing it with just anybody, I will recede to flat refusal of any future requests.

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>>1929340
Thought so. Quite frankly, I really want to ignore her and make a story like "I shared the doujin with a friend and friend shared it without permission". I'm fed up with this restriction shit. It's not like she'll find out, right? I don't think she knows the existence of online readers like Dynasty, right?

>>1929348
Maybe she won't find out? Are they very savvy, in terms of knowing what English sites are up to?

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>>1929350
She wrote "Contents" as "Conteants" so I doubt she can easily google these English websites without someone tipping her off. She knows my website though (credits page linking to LL).

This is Nae's first Aikatsu book, so she's kinda attached and protective of it. She was an Index/Railgun fag and for a yuri artist, she made a lewd het doujin of the show's popular couple.

What I truly fear though is I may emotionally hurt her and may stop making more doujins and fan art of Ran and Aoi. Her art are fucking great.

>>1929352
If you've always deferred to artists before, I would remain consistent about it. If you've ignored their response previously, then do what you want.

>>1929352
not publishing it in english and still not allowing a public translation to be released is just a big "fuck you" to the aikatsu fans who can't read moon but want to read this.

but do whatever you think is right

>>1929362
>>1929375
Normally I didn't give a shit and when an artist found out I was translating her "Rainy Day" and "Chocolatier", she was happy they got western attention. Heck, she ended up following me on Twitter. If Shinoasa found out I translated her "Allegro Break," I would have probably ignored her.. or him.

Nae is just, I dunno, I think she's my favorite artist by far and kinda special. I was rather hurt when she found out and sent a C&D letter.

After thinking this through, I will stop giving a shit and share the book... but not now. I need things to cool down first.

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But... I will let you read it... but you gotta promise me not to share it (for now).

>>1929378
Chocolatier is one of my favorite doujins! Pleased to hear the author seems to be a cool kind of person.

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You know what, I don't give a shit any more. Yeah, I made a promise, but I translated this book for the purpose letting fans read it and see the beauty of RanAo. Nae's book is a good introduction to the pair.

A lot of people's work ended up on the internet and there's no mass protest or something. This artist is no special snowflake. I understand her concerns very well, but this sort of thing will eventually happen. If I don't do it, someone else will.

tl;dr


https://mega.nz/#!CQRVnAwa!qburndN5VQBQCCkqUCOFBIHyDH_BW5xXojH40DtWxac

Enjoy.

>>1929897
I guess I shouldn't expect much out of a bunch of filthy pirates, but going back on your own word seems pretty low.

>>1929961
They wouldn't be very good pirates if they kept their word, would they?

>>1929897

The link has died.

>>1929897
Now might be a good time to get away from Aikatsu. Maybe, perhaps, absolutely anything else?

>>1930009
booo, damn you internet you had my hopes up.

>>1930009
https://mega.nz/#!aNpGzaTa!rj2oXx48M-9a1pX046Q5R0kOl6OppXlg0m8BMUMosb8

>>1930278
Booooo. I missed it the first time then I thought I'd get a secret link inside here.

>>1930284
I take it you like the story?

So, any progress on getting Yurikuma ch10 ready?

>>1931339
I've been slowly working on cleaning. I haven't even tried to typeset Chapter 10 yet. I still wouldn't mind someone else looking over your translations, no offense intended.

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>>1931500
None taken. Aside from some lines that could do with a little tweaking, the only notable query is how to translate this "shara" sound effect, since I don't think "shiny object falling out of an envelope" is gonna fit.

>>1931533
>Aside from some lines that could do with a little tweaking
I hope you mean those blatant mistakes. Seriously, reread it.

>>1932052
Made some tweaks to ch10's script, but feel free to point out what these blatant mistakes are. That's why we have this thread after all.
http://pastebin.com/v5dmYpXP

>>1932052
Why don't you help instead of being an ass to someone doing something productive?

Here's YKA Chapter 15 cleaned.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!cURAibIB!txgYwyLTjgzv_NYTlqiLhQh9DxN7GpFL__6JT9L6wc8

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>>1914041

Is this where you go to request translations? If so, I'd like someone to give me one for this Fate Stay/Night Doujin. It's one of the very few Yuri ones out there, and I'd like to know what's going on in it.

http://g.e-hentai.org/g/23278/2e8084faca/

>>1932070
p28
>And I ate her
she

>31
>Born in a forest before disappearing.
disappear refers to bear
>The happy yet sad love story
beautiful

p33
>If you keep telling her not to open it, she's gonna want to open it~~
>she
you

p35
>Mama, who's Reia?
where

p37
>I thought you had become a hibernating bear!
Why making obvious reference less obvious

p39
>Hey, Ginko, we've got Culture Festival stuff after school toda...
>we've got
about

p41
>Ever since you collapsed, it's like you've turned evil and become weird~~
>turned evil
Stop making things up. Ever since you collapsed and fell badly you've become weird~

>Is it really weird?
Am I

p42
>Is that why you wanna stop being friends with Kure-chin?
Just because of that

>I guess I wanna cry
she

p43
>We've always been together after all.
no past tense

>No matter what I am, I believe that me and Ginko are friends.
where

>What was that!?
Is "was that" really that necessary?

You haven't reread it, have you?

>>1932231
>being an ass
If I was I'd stay silent about mistakes. The one being unproductive here is you.

>>1932954
Some valid points (putting the attitude aside) though a couple of notes

>she
>you
That does not make sense. The point is that Lulu's telling the judgebears that telling Ginko not to open it is just gonna make her want to open it.

>Why making obvious reference less obvious
It literally says "hibernating bear". I'm not sure what this "obvious reference" is supposed to be.

>Is "was that" really that necessary?
It's a 'nandatte' instead of a 'nani' so a simple "what" probably wouldn't be enough.

Another revision: http://pastebin.com/z7SPBngx

>>1933226
d/a, adding a few comments/corrections of my own.

p33
>The point is that Lulu's telling the judgebears that telling Ginko not to open it is just gonna make her want to open it.
I'm not sure what the other anon intended, but Lulu is making a general statement, like "when someone tells you not to open something, it just makes you want to open it even more doesn't it?"

p34
>Don't worry. I'm right her with you.
Typo: "her" should be "here"

p39
>*glance*
glare

>do it yourself
do whatever you want

p42
>She said she's finished packing
>and is about to return to the dorms
Packing
She says she'll return to the dorm for now

p43
>I'll have the driver come to pick up the boxes in the room later.
I think 業者 is more likely referring to movers than a driver, unless you have a reason to think otherwise.

>>1933269
Another update. Kept Lulu's line as is as it feels more like she's interrupting the judgebears.
http://pastebin.com/KpB5JamK

>>1933283
Sure, do whatever. I just wanted to clarify what the jp was.

I also meant to try and explain what >>1932954 probably meant by
>Why making obvious reference less obvious
眠りグマ would be a play on 眠り姫 (sleeping beauty). Not sure how you'd include both meanings in English.

And I just noticed another typo.

p37
>You were unconcious for three days
unconscious

>>1933384
Ah I see. I'm not caught up on the Japanese fairytale names outside Shiroyuki-hime. I'm guessing "Sleeping Bear-ty" is the obvious pun in question?

Included both options in this revision so TS anon can pick
http://pastebin.com/AurLQJYJ

>>1933395
>I'm guessing "Sleeping Bear-ty" is the obvious pun in question?
Yes, I just couldn't quite bring myself to type it out. You could also just go for something like Hibernating Beauty, people will still get that there's a reference being made.

>>1933399
Yeh, that sounds like the one to go for.
If there's no further complaints, you're up, TS Anon

>>1933395
>Born in a forest, then disappearing
Born and disappeared in a forest

I tried to give you a fishing pole but all you want is fish. Don't rely on kanjitomo+rikai so much and actually google things you don't understand.

>>1933587
>Born and disappeared in a forest.
You do remember we're translating this into English right?

>>1933590
Ok, the meaning is that their love story born and disappeared in the forest. I wasn't sure if disappearing was a good way to put it.

>>1933593
Individually, those words would be written as "It was born." and "It disappeared".
However, combining the two in the sentence you gave turns it into "It was born and was disappeared", which obviously makes no sense. It's describing a story anyway so the tense I used is perfectly fine.

>>1933596
Fine then. I'll proofread the next chapter of your shitty Japanese with my shitty English at the weekend. No one else bothers anyway.

>>1933604
Thanks for proofreading! I'll start placing text for chapter 10.

YKA Chapter 10

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!9Io2VaZY!uBEn_cr7ZV3106-TPvfjg0N_v9IZxq5ZAqD33e7knTE

Have you heard of a recent(?) type of book called sukebooks?

Basically they're very short books usually 6-8 pages involving a pair fucking with little to no story.

So far I encountered two sukebooks and I'm working on one right now. I'm not sure this type of book is widely used or considered a thing in the doujinshi community though.

>>1933768
p28
>I have no idea
I had no idea

>were al friends
were all friends

p31
>you can still pick up the phone
you could at least pick up the phone

p37
>you were unconcious
unconscious

>I thought you had turned into Sleeping Bear-ty
I think "Hibernating Beauty" works better

p40
>You're my friend, Lulu, you can stay
You're my friend, Lulu, so you can stay

p41
>the Ginko from when you were young
from when we were young

p46
>She collapsed again!
She's collapsed again!?

>>1933895
That might be a better question for the general thread.

>>1933910
YKA 10 Revised

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!RNIT3bSB!MmKJAgIufbaBN29ppUgsx7r1XJ2ZXAJd5cm6LQPi7i4

>>1933895
スケッチブック?

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>>1934040
Yes

>>1934040
no. that says sketchbook

>>1934087
oh god i need this

>>1934040
or maybe it's すけべ + ブック = スケブック since they are all(?) R-18
it could be both too

>>1934091
スケ(ッチ)ブック was the idea.

>>1934163
Anyway seeing the book now, I check the author site and it says スケベコピー本です

Here is proofread 11 chapter of YKA:
http://pastebin.com/yeFnkwxb

Correcting goggled's translations should be classified as penal labour.

Anyone for Kase-san? Anyone?
>>1928670

>>1934943
Thanks tsun-chan! Please keep going even if I can't keep up the same pace with typesetting.

>>1934943
New revision: http://pastebin.com/2WQKMntX

I'm not sure what you got against the term 'delivered'. It feels more romantic.

>>1935108
I think "reach" would be the best of them all but I couldn't make the translation sound right.

Why do you think these lines don't need a correction:
>That was gross, but it totally saved me.
>One wouldn't normally ask a normal high-school student to investigate a past incident.
>It would be better for me to just give up and forget about everything
>It's okay. I want to help you out because I love you.
>That's why I held back my courage

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I...think I'm gonna start shipping those 2.

>>1935341
1. Honestly just missed it
2. Katyusha seems to be remarking that you wouldn't normally ask a student to investigate things, rather than stating she can't do it (particularly since it follows a remark about Yurika's behavior).
3. Pretty much what you put in your correction, just with grammar fixes.
4. Vague 'sukis' can be hard to properly localize to English, but I don't think Sumika using "it" would be appropriate.
5. Again, I just missed it.

Another revision fixing points 1 and 5: http://pastebin.com/uYNTZQen

>>1935722
>2
Yurika is ill-tempered because she knows Kureha wouldn't be able to find anything but still tells her to. That's why she thinks Kureha will eventually give up and forget.

>3
Yurika talks about Kureha there not herself

>4
Kureha wouldn't ask about the meaning then. You can use 'I love helping you out' if not 'it'.

>>1935735
Another slight tweak: http://pastebin.com/jUgnhJ75
Decided to use 'because of love' because 'love helping you out' completely destroys the implication.

>>1935770
>One wouldn't normally tell a normal high-school student to investigate a past incident.
Why are you insisting on it so much?

>It would be better to just give up and forget about everything
Isn't it misleading about who she talks this way?

Also, what about sfxs?

>>1935782
>Why are you insisting on it so much?
It's pretty much the same thing anyway, and it seems to fit Katyusha's style of formality a little better.

>Isn't it misleading about who she talks this way?
I think I've gotten a little confused since I assumed you proofred the whole sentence rather than just a part of it. Should it be "It would be better to give up and forget about everything for her sake"?

As for sfxs, I tend to not bother TLing, mostly cos it's a pain to translate every shlick and gasp when translating smut, not to mention how much of an extra pain it is for the typesetter.

>>1935821
It should be better for her to give up and forget about everything.

>>1935823
*would

>>1935823
K, hopefully final one. http://pastebin.com/nZ9L1kM6
>would seems a better fit than should

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>>1935782
>Also, what about sfxs?

Goggled doesn't translate a lot of the random sound effects that don't have bubbles, which I think is just fine; see how I typset chapter 10 for details.

A lot of the time it's obvious what's going on without them and they are more there to be art than for dialogue purposes, but if you want to translate them I'll put them alongside the original Japanese ones.

I'll see about working on chapter 11 sometime after you and Goggled finish deciding on the translations.

So I don't know Japanese, but maybe "realized" or actualized" for that 'delivered vs reached' debate earlier?

>>1935832
I'd say it's at a good enough point. Anything else would just be back-and-forth nitpicking.

>>1935722
>2. Katyusha seems to be remarking that you wouldn't normally ask a student to investigate things, rather than stating she can't do it (particularly since it follows a remark about Yurika's behavior).

She isn't saying that you wouldn't normally ask a student, she's saying that it's clearly impossible for an ordinary student. It should be parsed as [普通の高校生に] not [普通の][高校生に] (I also think the latter would usually be 普通は and would not be combined with something like 無理にきまってる).

In calling Yurika 意地悪, Katyusha is just saying it was nasty of her to ask the impossible of Kureha. It doesn't imply that Yurika is necessarily acting out of character, only that the action itself was bullyish.


>>1935840
I don't think realized or actualized would work, since that would imply mutual feelings. This doesn't, necessarily.

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Can someone translate what this picture says?

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>>1914041

Does anybody know something about "After Hours" by Nishio Yuhta?

>>1936278
Scanlations were stopped at the author's request.

>>1936293
Author's? Wasn't it the publisher?

>>1936301
Meh, same diff.

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Are the first and third line correct? I don't really get what they're trying to say.

>>1936534
The first line is following on from Yurika telling Kureha to find the truth herself, Kureha's conundrum being she doesn't know where to start. Maybe lost the period.

The third line is basically Sumika adding 'kuma' to the end of a line in typical Japanese mascot fashion, so I took the ol' Persona route with that line.

>>1936537
What is Sumika supposed to be saying anyway? Kureha was thinking to herself that whole page.

>>1936540
>そうだわクマ
Considering their collision on the next page, I assume she was just talking amongst her bears.

>>1936542
Maybe she was addressing the bear, like, "That right, beary!" or something?

>>1936544
I kinda doubt it, since she doesn't look like the kind of person to name one of her many teddies "bear".

YKA Chapter 11

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!JFgjARAK!2hLA1fMmAvd2OilVuD1CJafEoNbaXgTbs8RWpFmzEY4

>>1936555

p49
>and shines it's light.
and shines its light (no period)

Also oddly bolded on one bubble

p51
>Wait for me, ginko!
Wait for me, Ginko!
Also, would it be possible to make the "Shabba da doo" bit stand out a bit more (ie. larger with all caps and a different font)?

p56
>unnecesary things
unnecessary

p57
>It's impractical to tell a high-school student
One wouldn't normally tell a normal high-school student to investigate a past incident.
>It's because it's the real thing that it's so bad.
so sad

p62
If you want the bits on the picture TL'd, they read "Tiara", "Ribbon" and "White eyes"

>so I don't thin
>think

p63
Bit of a dialogue mix-up on those last few panels. "they're still warm too" goes next to Lulu's bubble on the second to last panel, then in the last panel Lulu talks about the sexy president while Life Sexy says "shabba da doo"

p65
>If, one day you find a love for your own
If, one day, you find a love of your own (use this correction on p48 too so the dialgoue remains consistent).

>>1936569
>p57

I tried to formulate something from both of your comments that could get across that Yurika doesn't really want Kureha to succeed at all, but I'll defer to this.

>>1936569
>p65 "love

More than just p65 and p48 use "love" (in quotations like that. Do you want me to remove all instances of those quotations?

>>1936576
Ah no, keep "love", since it's bracketed in the original. I just forgot about that for purposes of pointing out the punctuation.

>>1936578
Alright, well here's the revised YKA 11.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!kRRHFDwY!7SzizSh7zGnA6dClGdm2UIMAeyg8Q27Qp9C10_1GyLs

>>1936615
Looks good to me.

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>>1936615
>wory
worry

What are some yuri manga that has yet to be scanned/bought by raw providers? In Japan right now and close to a store that sells manga. There's a homo section and I might get the courage to look for it there and scan it for you when I get home.

Pic unrelated, some shit from Kabukichou.

>>1937110
Check the buyfag thread >>1928292

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>>1937092
Here's the fixed page, as well as the fixed .zip of the chapter.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!MIJi2LyD!c_gBWIhC-JQrSI3wQ0c1aoehPuHFeA5LHfVlpJtyzY4

Quick Idolmaster smut
http://pastebin.com/HcdJ3Qu9
http://exhentai.org/g/883612/b5223efec8/

YKA chapter 12:
p73
>You don't have to force yourself to keep coming to school if it bothers you so much.
>bothers you so much
painful for you

>Come to think of it, you used to have to change schools because of your physical condition.
You're saying that, but

>You cut it out too, Yurika.
Maybe you should stop coming yourself, Yurika

>Oh my, it's not like I'm neglecting my work as a board chairman or anything.
Oh my, but doing chairman's work isn't painful for me

>In the place of my late brother... your father... I...
In place of your father...and my dead brother...I (means Ginko's father is Yurika's brother)

>[It's got nothing to do with the school]
>I'm not talking about your school's job

p74
>It's about how Yurika had so much love for my Mama, but could not deliver it.
I'm talking about how no matter how much Yurika loved my mother it won't reach her

>She does that of her own will so she can forget her problems and live freely.
Forget that selfish woman already and live freely

p76
>I won't become a mother like that.
like mother

>I'll throw aside my "love" for Kureha.
I threw away

>Even though it's supposed to be spring.
clear weather

p77
>I've been here since the beginning.
refers to storm maybe needs to clarify

>I'm glad you could come today too
I hope it opens today at least

p81
>I know! We should do some stalking together!
I got it! We'll stalk them from here

p82
>Looks like they haven't locked the windows.
I wonder is there a window that hasn't been locked

>I can't help being impatient. I need to calm down.
It won't help being impatient.

p86
>It's kinda lonely
When I'm lonely
>and makes me crave some warmth
I want to crave some warmth

>[I know I'm just spoiling her feelings...]
Even if I know I'm taking advantage of her feelings
>[Even if it's just that]
>[It's somewhat mutual in that regard]
Even if it's just a temporary touch.

The last line is a bit tricky, maybe I'll think up a better translation later.

>>1938029
Revision, with some adjustments: http://pastebin.com/P69kuag7

To make a few notes on things I didn't change:
>In place of your father...and my dead brother...I (means Ginko's father is Yurika's brother)
Saying "my brother...your father" is correct here. Using "and" would imply she was talking about two different people.

>I'm talking about how no matter how much Yurika loved my mother it won't reach her
Sticking with 'deliver' for the sake of consistency.

>>1938109
>>1938029
Thanks for continuing to work on this!

I just finished cleaning chapter 16, but not going to bother uploading since I doubt anyone looks at it anyway.

>>1938109
p76
>I won't become a mother like that.
I won't become like my mother

>I'll threw away my "love" for Kureha.
Ginko says it as if she already did

p81
>I know! We should do some stalking together!
Explain yourself.

p86
>it's only mutual for a moment...
She talks about warmth by touching, not feelings.

>>1938592
>I won't become like my mother
Ginko usually refers to her mother as "mama", but here she uses "anna hahaoya", which more or less she's talking about her "as a mother" rather than directly referring to her mother. Otherwise, she would use Mama in the same context as she does with Yurika.

>I'll threw away my "love" for Kureha
typo

>Explain yourself
"kokokara" seems to refer more to "from the point onwards" rather than "from this exact place". Also sounds more cute when Lulu calls it 'stalking'.

>She talks about warmth by touching, not feelings
Noted

Revision: http://pastebin.com/w7VKgF2B

>Ginko usually refers to her mother as "mama"
Yes, usually. But now that she remembered everything does she still call her like that? On the previous page Ginko referred to her as "that selfish woman". Your assumptions are baseless. Ginko doesn't think about motherhood at all.

"kokokara" seems to refer more to "from the point onwards"
When Lulu just told you how you can see everything from there? Lulu still remembers about tailing and observing so she thought Ginko would spy on them in such a nice place for that.

>it's only a fleeting moment of warth...
Warmth is implied, she talks about touch.

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>>1938641
> But now that she remembered everything does she still call her like that?
Yes, actually. Pic related comes from ch10 after her memories come back.

I'll concede on the other point though.
http://pastebin.com/xKuvRy0n

>>1938652
>ignoring all other points

私は I
あんな母親 that mother
の様に like
はならない won't become

私は I
あんな母親 that mother
にはならない won't become

Give up.

>>1938663
Note how the word 'my' never shows up. Heck, if the point of what you said on >>1938641 was about her being less informal, why should she call her 'my mother'?

TS Anon, feel free to make a start.

>>1938672
>Note how the word 'my' never shows up.
>私は私の母親の様にはならない

Then a mother like who?

>>1938672
>>1938676

Remember, no matter who wins the translation arguments, we all win with completed scanlations!

So don't get too angry and work together!

>>1938773
Also just my ¥2, but to me it also seems like Ginko is saying she won't become like her mother.

Kumaria damn it, Ginko. You law the smack down on Yurika then the do the the exact same thing in the very same chapter!

Anyway, chapter 12 is finished.
Link:
https://mega.nz/#!JY4mDJAb!v_8nbUuJ_sTOUIasTDsEEaEePzElHRTeJVYxbM80NrM

>>1938881
p72
>missing bubble
What about your lessons?

p84
>Even though she's supposed to be inlove with Ginko
in love

p85
>No resistance.
You can probably fit this in the bubble better.

>>1938890
I could have sworn that I had fixed the first and third originally...

Anyway, here's the revised edition.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!sMQ0kQaL!ZJqx4rhIMlulfo8avIzZ5opax4WCqxGZd7Fk0_xaam0

I'm liking Yuri Kuma manga better than the anime.
Ginko is such a better character

I'm honestly enjoying the adults' story quite a lot. It's really telling their story through the characters we know.

Some more CocoChino
http://pastebin.com/KUvEK86Z
http://exhentai.org/g/884629/766b98d7cf/

>>1940760
Might help if the first part was TL'd too
http://pastebin.com/UKU4Pqkx
http://exhentai.org/g/873779/710f591a26/

It's a follow-up to Himitsu no Natsuyasumi btw, which should be in the TL archives in the OP.

>>1940947
Did you ever do Himitsu no Toilet? This one:
http://exhentai.org/g/855613/85351ad678/

>>1939146
It's pretty much better in every way, except maybe that there's less gao gao and catchy music.

>>1914477
how can I contact with you?

Glorious Nanoha x Adult Vivio
http://pastebin.com/Xj9EbNUQ
http://exhentai.org/g/885588/6ff0e032d8/

Note: pages 32 onwards does contain that dubious grey area known as ejaculating magical strapon.

>>1941089
Sure
http://pastebin.com/VdgA3qCd

>>1942315
Ah, thanks.

Is YKA translation checker Anon still alive?

>>1943900
I am, but if you want to proofread go ahead.

>>1943928
No, I'm the typsetter wondering when the next round of translations will be ready.

Not that I'm going to be working on it tomorrow or anything.

>>1943928
Oh also, if you wanted to translate the omake for Volumes 1 and 2 that would be great. Goggles isn't confident in translating these.

Volume 1 Omake:
https://mega.nz/#!EJwhERJI!LKj5TYHsV5LxdzsMtid3BM-O43lM8al4sBKu07we0QQ

Volume 2 Omake:
https://mega.nz/#!1MJUVQpI!eq0gPl0QC5afqPZifNwZKBIkKnofcZI_XETIRsl6b1w

Okay so I finished cleaning YAKA Chapter 17.

Anyway, I also wanted to know if this is the end, as in there's only two volumes in this series.

>>1944170
There's two volumes to date, but it's pretty much clear the story hasn't ended. Dunno if there's any anons scanning Comic Birz for the more recent chapters tho.

YKA chapter 13:

p88
>So I'll do anything that you want.
So you can do

p89
>I lone you, Onee-tama!

p90
>I can't let you give up on your love, Ginko!
you can't give up

p93
>Then let's pay a visit to the library during lunch break tomorrow.
Then let's meet up in front of the library

p95
>You should really keep your distance from Izumino-san.
You shouldn't get close to Izumino-san

p96
>[And her house is filled with living bears].
She's not operating lifelike dolls but lifelike teddy bears
>She chants spells to summon the souls of the deceased
She puts curses and summons the souls of the deceased
>And performs suspicious rituals.
and she knows charming rituals

>L-Living teddy bears?
lifelike teddy bears

p97
>Is someone behind me?
Who is following me?

p98
>Her house is filled with living bears
>She chants spells to summon the souls of the deceased...

>[If we're going into a bear hole, then this cub's got the advantage!]
You could just google it:
http://kotowaza-allguide.com/ko/koketsuniirazunba.html

p100
>You must really like honey, Yurigasaki-san.
You really like honey, right

p101
>Always lying like that
Always acting bossy

p102
>I cast a spell that allows you to see the "love" that you had forgotten about.
You fell under spell
>You saw your precious person too, didn't you, Yurigasaki-san?
You met

>>1944157
I'll see what I can do about omake but someone would have to revise them in proper English.

>>1944176
Better to wait for the tank. As soon as kindle version will show up on amazon,jp I will buy it and post it on /u/.

>>1944446
Thanks!

>omake
I know English fluently, and I imagine Goggles does as well. If you can get it close enough we can probably take it from there.

>>1944446
Ch13 revision: http://pastebin.com/NA86aAvJ
Don't think replacing "living" with "lifelike" works since "lifelike bears" would just mean teddies that look like realistic bears rather than anything spooky. Same with suspicious/charming.

>>1946002
Thanks for always revising the pastebins. It makes it much easier for me by not having to flip around between lots of screens when placing text.

>>1946002
Forgot some:
p91
>If you forget about your "love", it'll become transparent.
>it
you

p97
>She even knows my name!
She even knows who I am

p102
>Not there bear!

>Don't think replacing "living" with "lifelike" works
You probably won't listen to me but the thing is lifelike dolls are spooky because you can't differ them from children. The same thing with bears. They're not plush toy but looks like scary bears.
>She chants spells and summons the souls of the deceased
She doesn't chant just spells, she curses.
>And she knows some suspicious rituals.
Did you choose suspicious because it's more spooky? Of course 妖しい has the meaning of suspicious but Morishima went out of her way to write it with 妖 which is charming, bewitching.

>>1946350
Went with lifelike dolls, but feel the other words are a little hard to work in the dialogue ("curse" is hard to work in without a subject to curse on, and "charming" seems a little too complimentary for someone you're telling people to stay away from)
http://pastebin.com/yqLfiTGR

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http://exhentai.org/g/772881/1b4074125f/
http://exhentai.org/g/730855/aeac4a9e9b/
http://exhentai.org/g/748295/8083862d95/

If any/all of these TokaHaru books by Amecyan get a TL, I'd love to edit them.

>>1946426
>"curse" is hard to work in the dialogue
Maybe "can curse"?
>"charming" seems a little too complimentary
charm binding?

Nothing beats using an electric massager on your sister for the purposes of education.
http://pastebin.com/FEfxUDAE
http://exhentai.org/g/887208/60354fe736/

>>1946445
Eh, sounds too unnatural. I don't think the specific words matter anyway, as the general point gets across either way.

For those with a nack for subbing vids, I've done rough TLs for all the YuruYuri Happy Go Lucky shorts released on YouTube (which a lot of American viewers can't see without proxies due to the YouTube Red bullshit or something).
http://pastebin.com/H4ag4PaQ

>>1946426
>>1946445
>>1946674
Well if there's no other changes I'll start placing some text.

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>>1947479
Almost done chapter 13. Need a translation for this right here though.

>>1948073
Cuuuuute

>>1948101
p92
>the smell Ginko has as a kid
had

p97
Add a TL note explaining the "Kumajo" pun, since I wasn't able to come up with a good English equivalent.

p98
>Her house is filled with living bears
lifelike bears

>She chants spells to summon the sould of the deceased
>souls

>This is bad
This sounds bad

p100
>You sure do like honey, Yurigasaki-san.
You like honey, right, Yurigasaki-san?

>So those rumors were fake.
Looks like those rumors were false.

p101
>she acts like an eight gra...
eighth

>>1948143
Fixed YKA 13.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!BcBECYSC!LiZ31XJjTWljpQ4pTjmUgXYnJB0lh-pjM4WjO40UKY8

Revision of ch14, fixing some of the more obvious mistakes before proofreader anon gives it a lookover.
http://pastebin.com/rMJ1w8Jc

>>1948220
And here's revisions for the other chapters (some still have uncertain TLs, but the spelling and grammar issues should be fixed)
ch15: http://pastebin.com/TubVMy4R
ch16: http://pastebin.com/h25CTxaA
ch17: http://pastebin.com/vFtsGGJZ

>>1948220
YKA chapter 14:

p103
>My little brother Milne was a prince.
is

p104
>We lived in a dark and gloomy room in the corner of a white castle.
I'd point out that there's no indication of castle being.

p105
>Do you like princesses, Milne?
>Yeah, I love them!
singular

>The thing I loved most in this world
>was protecting my one and only little brother.
She loved brother, not protecting

p108
>If I became an adult, it would feel like being able to cast magic.
I believed that when I became adult I would be able to use magic.

>Fly through the sky!
I want to fly too

>We could go on an adventure around the world!
We would

>And then we could build castles in all sorts of countries!
Then we'd pretend to be maids and slip into castles of different countries

p109
>Despite the hunger, we held each other's hands.
Even though we were hungry
>I'd match my pace with Milne's and walk gently
walk slowly
>while thinking happy thoughts.
a happy memory

>I thought that one day we'd be able to leave that place.
I thought we'd leave that place even by 1 day earlier

p111
>It was like a fairyland straight out of a picture book.
>A true princess, shining with light.
It's 1 sentence. Maybe you can make something better with it.

p113
>I'll just pop out for a moment.
I'll just look a bit at her secretly

>I wanna go too
I'll go too

>At that moment, I had left Milne behind.
I tried to
>Because I thought he'd be a hindrance.
Just because

p115
>Even though I had promised that I would always protect Milne
and we'd always be together
>I ended up breaking that promise
because I broke that promise
>Milne was dead.
Milne died

I was wrong to hope that your fixing was related to Japanese.

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Do we have any Russian or Chinese speakers that might be able and willing to take a look at this?

>>1948774

YKA chapter 15:

p115
>Milne was dead.
Milne died

p118
>I heard a voice from somewhere.
I heard someone's voice from somewhere

p121
>Even though ten years have passed since then, somewhere in my heart, I still kept crying.
Probably even with 10 years passed, I'm still crying somewhere in my heart.

p123
>You can keep going y'know?
It isn't over yet, y'know
>[Your time isn't over yet.]
Because your time hasn't stoped yet

p124
>Then the tragedy of the prince would come to an end.
Then it'd end in tragedy with the death of prince

>[You can keep living and change history!]
The history keep changing as long as you live

>So with that said, let's keep going.
let's look at the continuation

>Um...which one's the the ressurection button?
playback

p127
>I'll stay by Ginko-sama's side
I want to

p128
>We're often away on trips so Ginko could use a companion.
so we can't play with Ginko

p129
>Lulu wants to be a bear too!
Lulu will become bear too

p130
>[The memories from when you were a child should be slowly coming back to you]
The child memories are so fluffy and vague

>I'm rembering them bit by bit.
I can remember

p132
>We'll go on an adventure around the world
Let's go

p133
>When an "eternal love" that became a star becomes fragmented, it becomes a falling star.
The fragment of the star that became "eternal love" turns into shooting star
>When it lands on the surface, it becomes a "promised kiss".
and lands on surface to bacome a "promised kiss"

>>1948800
>translating translations
I wonder which one actually translated from Korean.

>>1948759
By obvious misakes, I meant more along the lines of typos and grammar (plus a bit in ch17 I forgot to actually translate before)

http://pastebin.com/yzRFJ0Wg

Couple of notes:
>My little brother Milne was a prince.
>is
Lulu's talking about the past here

>singular
Kept this as is, since it seems like Milne would be a fan of princesses in general

>I thought we'd leave that place even by 1 day earlier
Yeh, I can't seem to think of a good way to phrase this part.

>I'll go too
Kept "I wanna" since it fits Milne's childish speak better

>>1948830
ch15 revision: http://pastebin.com/QdXiiRzR

>>1948856
>Lulu's talking about the past here
Lulu talks about herself in the same tense. Choose the same then.

>it seems like Milne would be a fan of princesses in general
They talk about book, doubt it has princesses.

>Kept "I wanna" since it fits Milne's childish speak better
You'd fit in with Commie really well.

>We could go on an adventure around the world!
Did you miss it? She doesn't talk hypothetically.

>>1948871
Lulu can still think of herself as a princess.
Everything else I just think flows better and isn't going to massively effect the meaning of the plot one way or another.

>>1948888
>princesses
>flows better
In other words you're just stubborn.

What about
>>We could go on an adventure around the world!
>Did you miss it? She doesn't talk hypothetically.

>>1948895
It's something that she is suggesting she can do with Milne, so could seems appropriate here.

>>1948912
>二人で世界中を冒険するの
Where is suggestion here? She says what would she do when she'd become adult.

>>1948915
If you look at the page again, you'll notice the remark about using magic as an adult is in the square box (Lulu's monologue) while the rest is her conversation with Milne.

>>1948916
Yes, which only implies future tense and doesn't have suggestion.
This
>Then I could fly through the sky and be at the convenience store before you knew it!
should be would as well.

>>1948917
Decided to just go with "we'd" since I've been using it everywhere else on the page.
http://pastebin.com/z2BrDbqy

>>1948918
Ok. No complains about 15.

>chapter 14 and 15 already TL'd

And here I thought I'd get a break.

Oh, we're back.

YKA chapter 16:
http://pastebin.com/a42Lbj1x

YKA chapter 17:
http://pastebin.com/CynUn4he

>>1948985
Have fun. Omake soon.

>>1949281
ch16 revision: http://pastebin.com/80DRzwU2
ch17 revision: http://pastebin.com/mib24BD2
Also fixed page numbering error in ch17

Couple of notes:
>showdown
>one-on-one
Pretty sure these mean the same thing

>I can feel it
>It's closing
>I'm becoming swept up in the invisible storm
>wrapping in the invisible storm
Lil uncertain how best to phrase this part. Is that closing as in 'closing in' or 'closing around'?

>>1949287
>Pretty sure these mean the same thing
I wanted to specify that she thought she'd be alone with her.

>Is that closing as in 'closing in' or 'closing around'?
closing around

>>1949290
So what should it be closing around? I don't think your phrasing works without a particular subject in mind, at least when it comes to putting it in English.

>>1949302
>what should it be closing around
the world

>ch17
>I'm just living in an empty husk.
No, she is the husk

Why did you leave Matagi as is?

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>>1949304
http://pastebin.com/WncAiGJ9

I'm keeping Matagi since it's a specific type of hunter that they went into a little of detail explaining in chapter 8 (pic related), so some consistency is in order.

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Sayuri-san no Imouto wa Tenshi (1)
http://www.mediafire.com/download/788gmp4b1slg63g

We interrupt your bears for glorious Yuyushiki smut
http://pastebin.com/fpvv3q2U
http://exhentai.org/g/888031/02d199ef1b/

YKA Omake time~

First:
http://pastebin.com/n6VxvjvJ

Second:
http://pastebin.com/DcPPEk5d

>>1949384
Cool, thanks!

>>1949384
>>1949540
Goggled, if you can, I'd appreciate if you could look over these translations to the best of your ability for correctness with regard to the English.

>>1949313
Nice find/upload anon.

>>1949384
>>1949553

Tried the first one. http://pastebin.com/ASG84xBW

It's a bit harder than comparing the main chapter TLs since I can't really check the Kanji reader to figure out what was meant to be said, so it probably sounds a bit more localized in places. PR Anon is free to clear up anything that goes a bit too far off the mark.

>>1949665
Looks pretty good, with a few fixes I can do myself. Do you want to check it over one last time translator Anon?

>>1949665
>>1949734
p5
>You've probably seen a lot of both her good and bad sides, right?
>良くも悪くも相手の色々な面が見えてきたのかな
Means it's neither good nor bad to see a lot of sides of person.

>But that just means that you're both becoming special to each other.
>でもそれはお互いが特別な存在になったという事だよね
>なった
Became.

p6
>They'll get angry and say stuff like "You watch too much porn!"
>「AVでもみてろ!」
Watch it in porn.
>"That's the hundredth time you've said that"
>「それ言われたの100万回目」
It's the millionth time I was asked that

>>1949885
>良くも悪くも相手の色々な面が見えてきたのかな
His was right here.

>>1949885
Kinda agree on >>1949899, as it looks like 良くも悪くも相 is basically "for better or worse"

Revision: http://pastebin.com/7S6ZuzH2

>>1949956
>良くも悪くも相 is basically "for better or worse"
That's what I meant though. I guess it can be interpreted in both ways.

YKA Volume 1 Omake

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!0BIRyBaD!6aWUVEH3sJvSdfGPalio1ZSeVGDiaNXhQAYcmZC8zqc

>>1950065
p169
>Lillyless
Lilyless

p174
>pissed off quite a lot of girl, huh?
girls

>>1949960
There's a different between both and neither.

>>1949384
Second omake revision: http://pastebin.com/DJvZ5Yeb

Took me a while to get the whole Ikunigomakinako-sensei bit.

>>1950072
It's amazing how I always miss this stuff.

Link:
https://mega.nz/#!ZABRGTaJ!VY3yMaSX3niTLi3amoRLmC3hKgfhWWl-hXbHPZVDSRw

>>1950079
All good.

See you in third volume.

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Can I ask for a quick opinion?

Lewd?
http://exhentai.org/g/866589/098920d9fc/

Non-lewd?
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51964806

Pic unrelated.

>>1951563
Lewd, of course.

>>1951563
Lewd, because that art is so cute and it's been a while since we got aoichi

Rounding off the thread with some TsubaHonks (just last page I'm stuck on)
http://pastebin.com/X7Ts0F9h (embed)
http://exhentai.org/g/889939/847cca4256/

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