How's Your Movie Coming Along?

>30 second intro on a trailer
Keep up the good work dude!

looks pretty dumb. your trailer minus the completely over-the-top music would be a shitty collection of 7 second shots of ugly people.

also if you're going to have a cowboy with a six-shooter tell him to take his fucking phone out of his front pocket first.

>>87114827
Big Jake set in modern times
and whos ugly?

we have Aspergers

>>87114944
>we have Aspergers
aren't you people supposed to be talented

>>87114575
That was pretty bad man...

Change the music. You don't have enough shots for it and it's "too" epic for what you're showing.
That music needs like 2 shots per second.
Tell your bad guy to act with his face. He looks dead inside and don't tell me that was the plan. The guy can't act. The little dude had more range.
Maybe don't put every parents name in the teaser, looks like a family project which it is but you don't want to present it that way.
At least you're in focus and the framing is ok.

Keep up the good work, nice to see people doing it.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7qUNx5_UBbI