Creative Share Thread

https://youtu.be/39kkVrPAhc8

latest demo track feedback and criticisms welcome

>>39445391
>>39445391
just put my newest album out on soundcloud https://soundcloud.com/defcatofficial/sets/fervor-1

>>39445502

Akida is some mean shit my man going through your other tracks now liking it!

>>39445502

also anything to say about this >>39445435


its me

>>39445435
Sounds pretty good imo. It would probably sound better if you could record the instrumentals and vocals separately. And would probably have more potential with more instruments (for example in a band)

>>39445502
EDM isn't really my thing, but it sounds cool.


I'm just a random guy rating people's music

>>39445435
I think singer louder would work better with the way you are playing guitar in this tune. Otherwise nice work.

>>39445502
Reminds me of the matrix soundtrack, in a good way.

>>39445435
I like the idea of the song and i think the guitar is well executed (some errors and silenece here and there but that may be intentional, no idea) but i'm more into really emotional shit.
I'm not going to tell you what to do but i would like to see you breaking while singing, try that out. I can give you some examples if you wish.

>>39445788

sure an example would be nice thanks for the feedback

>>39445750

I'll try thanks for the feedback


>>39445663

thanks for the feedback man i'll be re recording it soon so stay tuned!

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https://clyp.it/wkd5dsue

Playing some more light-hearted sounds for a change, see what you think.

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>had no interest in creative shit last year
>this year have experimented with writing
>am doing 3D modelling tutorials right now

Creative shit is fun desu.

>>39445829

yeah I'm feeling the happy vibes anon

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>>39445391
>working on a webcomic with an artist friend

This is going to be fun. I'm doing the story and he's doing the art. Been working on this for 5 years, approached him about it 6 months ago and he said yes. Been watching the anime bakuman which is basically the same thing without the qt girls. I can show some sketches I made for some pages if people want. This is how much he's done of page 1.

>>39445502
This is good. Got me bopping in my chair. Don't lose that creative talent man. Kinda cyberpunk. Love the vibe

>>39445435
I can dig this, lyrics are good, guitar is pretty good too. Good job.

>>39445502
Sounds like something I'd vibe to while programming or something. Nice work.

>>39445829
This sounds pretty dope. Happy folk guitar is comfy. I like it.

>>39446104
That looks pretty, anon.

I threw this album together last year. I'm working on some more stuff. Never advertised it, it's really just a 'yelling in to the void' type project.

https://takotsubo-cardiomyopathy.bandcamp.com/track/the-walls-2

>>39446327

The Walls

The fading effect on the end of the song is real nice I enjoyed that

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https://soundcloud.com/candy-paint-68853204
>trap

not new but just a place to dump my shitting ideas: https://soundcloud.com/jordanachin

>>39446471
Bruh this is f i r e

>>39446545
Your RiffRaff tone is sick, what are you using?

>>39446471
This is some good original shit here.

>>39446643
Tele in drop C# into fulltone ocd into jcm 2000

https://youtu.be/g9bdhGngpPc

new song looking for feedback rate / criticize

>>39446545

>>39446643

seconded on that tone being killer

>>39446471

xans was good listening to the rest now man keep at it

>>39446104

show us the sketches anon i like the look so far

>>39445788

give me the examples of breaking in singing god damn it :D

>>39447317
Shit i forgot and i was even looking at the thread. I was going to record two-headed boy and sing it as emotional as possible but i am scared of posting it.
This one should do the work though.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vr7gRZ5A1NE

>>39445391
Created some pieces in the past https://soundcloud.com/bulai-bogdan

What do u guys think? May do some in the future, but I have no motivation whatsoever.

>>39447714

that's some comfy stuff I especially like the last march nice marching song haha

any opinions on this >>39446778


its me

>>39447844
I think I have heard this before in a similar thread. It would help a lot if your voice was louder and you need to articulate the lyrics better. The melody is good. Perhaps take some vocal lessons.

https://soundcloud.com/namaenashi/hum-2
just experimenting with a few samples right now. I want to make an album and actually put some vocals on my tracks, but never get around to it.

>>39447912

nah you won't have heard it before first time i linked it just uploaded it today :P

Thanks for the feedback

>>39447976

damn that was nice man I look forward to your future projects

Get around to it you lazy beaner

What do you think of my track if I may be so audacious to ask?

>>39446778

is me

>>39448032
A bit more progression and some more complex lyrics would do wonders for this track. I actually adore the sort of rough and unassuming format this song is in. Kind of reminds me of jack johnson's older work. Keep it up.

>>39448128

thanks man I'll keep that in mind if I choose to re record it I'll try complexify it and add in some new progressions

will try my best, a subscribe would be appreciated if you enjoy the songs :P

Is writing ok?

Here's a start of a short story I'm working on:
justpaste(it/1as1u)

>>39448304

sure man, ur link is fked tho got another one?

>>39448336
Replace ( with . and delete ), spam filter didn't let me through otherwise

>>39445391

https://soundcloud.com/ultratoast/bumbum

>>39448304

like it so far man keep at it

>>39448389

if you tried to make a proper song it would be lit as fuck mate the beat behind that meme was immense

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2vjekqju90iq7f7/ok%20yes.flac?dl=0

its so flat ..
pls tell me what to add next cuz i'm super uncreative

>>39449154

Waht is this man I don't have drop box

Dark ambient music I made a long time ago
https://selfishdream.bandcamp.com/album/observatory

>>39449642

I like newly worn flesh it's extra daunting makes me feel a sense of impending doom

good stuff man I'll listen to the rest of it

any thoughts on my track?

>>39446778

https://soundcloud.com/youngkingler/f-r-e-e-yung-milo-x-quad-l-type-beat

Can I get some feedback on this song? The title isn't serious, but I do like the beat itself.

>>39449738

feel like you could build up to a more speedy section where something drops

What you've got is a good baseline but it needs that extra omph a drop or fast section would give it some diversity in my opinion

any thoughts on my track?

>>39446778

>>39449773
I think the guitar playing and lyrics are nice, however I'm personally not really feeling the singing. Nothing wrong with your voice, but I think it would sound great if you sounded more energetic.

Thanks for the feedback btw.

>>39449928

thanks for the feedback man, I'll keep that in mind and try put more fire into my voice

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https://soundcloud.com/nondrowsy

I make awful music with almost anyone(mostly /mu/ people)

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>>39448389
>last track was 6 years ago

a practice wave track i guess
I'm probably not even going to mix it
https://clyp.it/vppwzetz

>>39450467

that was chill mayne

I wrote a short film script about Frankenstein's Monster as a 12 year-old being bullied in school.
https://www.docdroid.net/86eWxmA/what-youre-made-of-updated.pdf