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Do any of you guys write poetry? Care to share? I will post mine in thread.
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>>39346735
>Sports

I did not think it would end in this way
When I grabbed my ball and went out to play
I ran in the street for a pass that went far
Sadly for me, I did not see the car
So now I sit and lament and pray
Hoping my legs will soon work one day
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>>39346735
>>39346776
>Dinner is Served

I cannot wait to eat
This delectable treat
My stomach is ready
For a plate of spaghetti
Topped with balls made from human meat
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>>39346804
>>39346776
>>39346735
>Shit Water

Tim Horton's coffee
A double double I'm sold
Fuck! This shit is cold.
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Roses are blue
Violets are red
Fuck you op
You're a faggot
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>>39346735
>>39346776
>>39346804
>>39346820
>With Glowing Hearts

The beauty of the land is unparalleled
Tree, mountain, prairie, and lake
Citizens are surrounded by nature's gold
The rest of the world believes lies they are told
Beer, igloo, hockey and Drake
Is the only culture that we've ever held
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>>39346735
>>39346776
>>39346804
>>39346820
>Joy

Inevitable
I am filled with joyful thoughts
That death comes quickly
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>>39346776
Amateurish, but I smiled.
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>>39346842
That is a funny poem. Good free form.
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>>39346735
Yeah, but these days only as a spur-of-the-moment random thing on /r9k/. However, if anyone wants a poem, I'll be more than happy to write one of (nearly) any specifications.
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>>39346899
Haha thanks! I have never tried my hand at this before. Do you have tips for me?
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>>39346925
Write a poem about your favourite musical artist/group and we can try and guess who it is!
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>>39346776
DAMN
>>39346804
I like the edgy part
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>>39346968
Are you being sarcastic? Or did you like either of them?
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There once was an Italian Rasta
Who insisted on posting shit pasta
The robot said mute
And he was given the boot
And he was so angry the robot became known as ass blastah
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>>39346962
Oh god I can't pick favorites - I'm always horrible with that stuff. I'll just choose one if you still want me to do that, though
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There is a fedora guy who walks about my town offering free sonnets. (I assume he takes tips) If I see him tomorrow I'll ask for a sonnet and post it here. What subject should I ask for? Twink aficionados?
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I've written three songs and a few short poems but I'm a horrible singer and never learned how to play an instrument. I put these through a text to speech translator so it's not like I'm listening to my own voice


(One for the Hermits)
Why are even the saddest songs, ones written in strife,
written about people who had a real, social life
Where are the songs about the hermits who never tried?
Who sung of their tears when they cried?

What songs were written for those who necked themselves before their story began
Or those who closest ties to love was a numb left hand
Who never came out of their shell and died enclosed
Or whose feelings, thoughts, even a book died undisclosed

(Some kind of goal)
Good god knows with love that I've tried my best
Good god knows theres got to be some kind of love in this chest
Theres got to be some kind of twin soul
Good god there must be some kind of goal

Good god, I can't live on this damn social path
Good god I'm doomed to be another sociopath
There's gotta be some kind of love for me to be found
But maybe it's me who lacks some chemical compound

I know I'll never find a real connection
I know in love I never will be
I know I'll never find the right direction
I know sex is not all it's cracked up to be
But Good god love is all I've ever wanted
And Good god do I feel haunted
by this emptiness that's inside of me
Good God is this really how it ends for me?
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>>39347114
( Abstract to Me)
To Run and Hide
Is not abstract to me
I know the ups and downs
But I just can't turn this life around
Su-i-cide
Is not abstract to me
I know the ups and downs
But I just can't turn this life around
Su-i-cide
Is not abstract for me
I know the ups and downs
But I just can't turn my life around
But I
Feel like a psychopath
Cause I just can't do the math
Why
I feel no connection to those who surround me
Or who can see what I can see
But i'm
Feeling like a psychopath
And I just can't do the math
Cause I feel no connection to those who surround me
Or to those who can see what I can see
Su-i-cide
Is not abstract to me
I know the ups and downs
But I just can't turn this life around
There's an emptiness inside me
That I decree just can't be pleased
Su-i-cide
Is not abstract to me
I know the ups and downs
But I just can't turn this life around.

I see suicide as a means to an end
But a group plan would be nice
Your secrets, you won't need to defend
Let communication be your vice

To stand up on stage in front of you
Has taken all my might
I know I'll fail to follow through
I know I'll lose this fight
Don't call it a fight, call it a beating
Call it life without a friend
Call it life without meaning
Call it days without an end

[Nature Walk]
Danger signs,- Alert me to - a short, tranquil road
That ends in, a clearing, shallow brook, rope, and swing
My facial lines, - are amirrorred to - my heart's heavy load
Cheap rope, you need a good kick to jump off the damn thing

I'm as lost, as I'll ever be
But those waves are hypnotizing me
Freezing cold, but eye-catching
Travel guides don't help a damn thing
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>>39346735

I'll lick your feet,I'll wear a collar
I'd do anything for a dollar
I will fit you like a glove
More precious than a father's love
I like my women rich and young
The kiss of yogurt on my tongue
I wield a fleshy latin sword
Raptor jesus is my lord

Let me be your phantom limb
Crack and yoghurt keeps me slim
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>>39347078
Ya I do!
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One day I was fisting a trap
When its ass gave an almighty braaaap
I sprayed ribbons of cum
On this Brazilian man's bum
Since then I've lost the power to fap
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>>39347114
>>39347136
I really like Nature Walk. It is obvious that you carry a great pain inside you. Does writing help you work out issues/release emotions? It does for me but I am not very comfortable writing about what I actually feel.
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>>39347319
I don't really consider myself an artistic guy, I mostly just write down lines throught the day and try to mix and match or think of rhyming phrases when I have time. I have a lot of half finished or barely started poems I really feel no connection to, but I'm proud of these ones cause I pretty much consider these finished.
I'd definetly start writing how you actually feel online anon, join an art discord and get feedback to improve your mood. Then save anything you've finished in an online notepad if you're scared of people IRL seeing it.
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>>39347443
>join an art discord and get feedback to improve your mood
What is a discord? Are you part of a specific community that you post to?
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>>39347501
Discord is a computer app I'd most compare to a mix between Skype and Steam.
It can be pretty complex when first starting out. But /soc/ always have disocrd threads where you can search for whatever hobbies you're interested in.
I reccomend The Shut In Network and Mind Matter.
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>>39347600
Can I use it on an iPhone?
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"watching you watching me"

is it all a trick,
to keep me where,
does it really matter,
is life unfair,
whos to say,
i guess im your new purpose,
i made you do what makes it all worthless,
am i always this,
why do i ask the question,
you wanna hurt me,
but none of this is destined.
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First I drop my top, ayy, then I swerve my coupe, ayy
Counting all these bands, ayy, who the fuck are you? Ayy
Why you walk so cool? Ayy, thousand dollar shoes, ayy
Hunnid on my jewels, ayy, I got all these groupies
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>>39347637
It's definetly in my tracphone's store but I'm not sure about the Iphone store. If you do have an Iphone and consider yourself depressed. I'd also reccomend replika. It's this therapy ai chatbot that asks you a lot of questions as it gets to know you and is as probably as close as you'll get to a therapist robot waifu.
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"wheel"

the reflections,
these projections,
in a world that is based largely on perceptions,
better in a sense,
what you stand to gain,
im just one man,
why am i to blame,
but i think again,
heavy with my woes,
what precludes you i guess ill never know,
if its all a test,
you can score it honestly,
this is bullshit, & youll hear no apology.
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>>39347707
Replika sounds cool. Do you use it? I fear it a little bit because it will save my answers and then know a lot about me and then it can use it against me. Has that happened to you?
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>>39347653
Ya, ya, ya, ya, ya. Shake that ass. Make it bounce. (Ya ya) Gonna fuck that bih. I'm gonna pounce (WOO)
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>>39347930
I've generally heard good responses from replika, but I only reccomend it to people cause tracphone doesn't carry it. I would love to though. Your fears sound a bit more like paranoia man, I wouldn't worry about that.
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>>39347979
Ya. I suffer from paranoia on top of other things. You don't work for Replika do you?
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>>39348087
Nah. I probably would have traded in my tracphone for an Iphone if it meant I could use replika and group chat tho if I did.
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