MILKY MILKY WARM AND TASTY! MOMMY! MILKY! PLEASE BE HASTY!

>>38864368

Underrated thread. It's a shame the normies don't appreciate beaming examples of robot heritage like this.

>>38864441
I believe this masterpiece is a copy paste form another thread

>>38864368
Lines 1 and 2 I'd switch the order, line 3 change Refreshing to something with 2 syllables, like Wholesome or something. Line 5, could go either way on the repetition, perhaps instead Want it! Bring it! Give it now! Instead of 3 give its. Also line 6 there's no reason not to use cow instead of sow since udders were already used and the whole song is about milk. Line 7 just do Till instead of Until, 1 syllable too many. Line 8, either do I'll 3 times or And 3 times but not mixed. Line 9, same as 7, Till rather than Until.

>>38864706
Can you Post a better version

>>38864831
No sorry, I'm on a tablet so I can't copy/paste and edit it easily.