There needs to be a Marble version of this.
Along with the hurtful version.
You gotta sniff the Marble!
You gotta lick the Marble!
You gotta date the Marble!
YOU GOTTA ¡BE! THE MARBLE!
When will this whole "Marble is just Fluttershy" shit die?
When she stops being a Fluttershy if she were a background horse
Humanized Marble is cute! Cute!
I want to fuck this horse
Fluttershy is actually a social pony who try to overcome her confidence problems. She want to talk and have fun with others and that's why she enjoy Discord the most out of Mane6 (Pinkie too although she still doesn't trust him)
Marble is a shy, quiet, non talkative type who is OK with it and doesn't want to change. Just like Big Mac. And is also why they are a better match than FlutterMac(beside the fact that Fluttershy would also be useless on a farm and on a field)
Would you be her knight and sweep her off her feet and away from a drab life on the rock farm?
Comon there's got to be more love for cutest horse than this.
Apparently not. But I could try to write something tomorrow if this thread still exists until then.
Do it mate, do it for her.
Now to wait on marbleshy fics
Given how much more in season continuity we have these days, hoping we get to see her again in S6.
>(I'm watchin' you boy)
>Aren't you going to eat anything?
>(Oh... He's gonna hate it)
>(Choke! Choke! Choke!)
>Gypsum is a good source of calcium - you look like you could use some.
We really need a Marble and/or limestone version of this.
>You look at her limp body
>And you know that expression
>Those body movements
>Fight or flight's purpose is to drive you away from danger
>Away from displeasure
>But when you can't move
>When you're stuck
>It's usually called a panic attack
>This is apparently true for these horses as well
>Your observation stems from the gray, straight mane, pony who’s vibrating, twitching, crying, and drooling on your floor
>Her eyes close tightly and rip themselves back open; her body facing the indecision of fight or flight
>Her mind is probably racing for ways out; her throat pushing up to her mouth, every muscle in her body clenching into a noose
>Your body ends up trying to kill itself in its inability to decide
>Her legs kick out like a comforted dog; the irony is certainly not beneath you
>Your smirk and light up a cigarette and begin walking over to her self-contorted body; your dick still drooling seed out of its mouth
>You lift her up by her mane but, her body stays stiff as if rigamortis has set in
>She can't even look at you; her body breaking itself down; her mind separated into its own ethereal reality
>You hope it’s a good one as you hold the pony from one hand and wind up an open palm with your other
>The taught snare drum palm of your hand smashes loudly against her face, blood slowly slipping out of her petite snout
>Her eyes snap back open, her breathing stops, and her mind is frozen, facing her executioner again
>She bites her lip and covers her face, crying and mumbling pleas
>"p-please… no more…?" her soft voice whimpers
>Your excitement rises again, prodding against her floating worn flaps
>However, she still hovers there under your hand, trembling and eating her bottom lip
>You didn't put all this effort not to have a reaction
>She's got at least one more rough fuck in her
>You slam your crotch against her cum soaked fur; the sounds of your dick squishing and stretching her insides, old cum dripping onto the floor, and your grunts fill the room while her jaw drops and her body seizes
>She shrieks a painful yelp when you finally hit the back and then begins going limp, mumbling the words "f-forgive m-me.. I hope thi-this makes you ha-happy…"
>She tries reaching out, longing for an embrace as tears stream down from her eyes and her voice cracks in-between sobs and thrusts from your vicious meat hook
>You keep a flat look and pump her harder, clearly causing her pain as you rub violently through her marehood, deliberately trying to impale through her womb and fuck her very soul
>Despite your animosity however, you admire the melancholic pony’s persistence and recall back to what she’s endured while you slowly swirl two fingers around her unsuspecting tailhole
I think this teaser came off a bit too wordy. I might try to tone it down for the rest but, what do you guys think?
I aint even getting off on this fäm. I'm just an edgy teen who likes to beat up cute ponies that want nothing more then to unconditionally give you their shy, tender love. The best way to get me write something cute is to
write your own you fucking lazy degenerate ^:)
Buddy you can have it, ill even pay her cab fare. But you should at least try to stop being an extremely autistic faggot, you may even move up to just being just an autist. Besides isn't it past your bed time, you do have school tomorrow.
Jesus you guys get defensive easily. Does rape green really trigger you guys that hard? 'Ight I'll post any and all updates by linking or referencing a pastebin.
We ok now or do you still feel the need to berate me?
Here's some constructive criticism. Work on your pacing. This isn't my cup of tea, but to each their own.
As for the scene themselves they just don't really have any emotion behind them. If you're going for anger or hatred use the actions to show as such, if not use speech or maybe a third person narrative.
The post was meant to be a joke fäm. Sorry it wasn't a very good one. I'll keep the sarcasm to a minimum then.
Yea I don't feel too good about myself either. But, since I'm on a roll may as well keep going.
Didn't realize it felt emotionless. Glad to hear that now, I'll work on it.
And yea pacing is easily my biggest weakness next to awkward descriptions. This is more so meant to be a snippet but, after revising, it feels rushed.
Thanks for the input, friend.
>yfw It turns out they're actually cousins
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