How much description is too much?
I'm working on my first novel and throwing everything on the page with the idea that I can edit it down later. But it makes me wonder if there's a limit on how much description to include (like the surroundings, what my characters are seeing and feeling).
I don't want to lose my readers, have them nodding off or putting the book down because I get lost in the weeds.
What's your opinion, /lit/? Do you like a lot of description to get you into the story, or do you prefer sparse description (a la Hemingway)?
>>8442318
If the prose is dank enough, you can do anything. Don't worry about plot-plebs
>getting dust in your vag and butt
>getting body fluids/excretions on your book covers
>sitting naked on a pile of books while reading
Why?
>>8442398
Likes and shares, my /lit/zen friendo
Just completed learning Latin completely, what should I read in Lingua Latina now that I know Latin fully and perfectly?
Thanks.
>>8442112
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civitas dei?
amores?
de re publica?
Shoot guys
>>8442112
looking for best edition of the Aeneid translated into German
pls respond
Post characters that are literally you.
>>8442084
Are you a qt grill?
>>8442099
no, i'm morbidly obese and balding due to a thyroid problem and i have cystic acne and facial hair
>tfw too /woke/ for /lit/
>>8441839
I'll be /woke/ with you bb.
What are your thoughts on the Committee of 300?for sharing a thread with someone who acknowledges their existence you're going to die soon
Have you read his book Quantum Psychology?
>>8441839
post me more books that wake you up like a rooster in the morning
Whats the weirdest shit you've seen wrote by the previous owner of a used book you've purchased?
>writing in a book
absolutely disgusting; positively satanic, bleugh!
I once found an old paperback copy of the Last Days of Socrates where someone had underlined EVERY SINGLE LINE. and not just in the text either, they'd underlined every line of the pages about Also Available In Penguin Classics too.
>>8441906
That's hilarious I'm gonna start doing this in bookstores to old philosophy books.
Besides the obvious (pic related), what are the best novels to come out of Scotland?
>>8441395
?? It's Irish, you fucking moron
>>8441395
The Kong JAMES BIBLE
fuck you
best covers in lit
>>8441183
bought this specifically for that cover.
minimalism boners everywhere.
>>8441183
>hey guys let's not even waste money on a cover artist for our cheap mass produced paperback, we'll save a bit that way and it's just going in bulk to schools where the kids won't give a fuck about it anyway
>omg so aesthetic
>>8441197
shut the fuck up you phony
Anyone else really excited for Alan Moore's Jerusalem? I was a huge fan of Voice of the Fire and I can't wait for the new work. Very Ian Sinclair.
Hope it's good, but from what I've read about it, I'm expecting an overwrought chore.
>>8441127
Do you think that in the sense that it's going to be unnecessarily dense or that it's going to go on more than it needs to in a pretentious way?
I don't discount your opinion, Moore is known to ramble but I feel like the years of build up have edited it down to the good bits.
>>8441127
>I'm expecting an overwrought chore
this
>>8441149
>it's going to be unnecessarily dense or that it's going to go on more than it needs to in a pretentious way
and this
Moore is primarily a comic author, a medium where saccharine and ostentation are embraced and although I've never read his novels I have my doubts that he'll break away from his usual shock and psychological turbulence. He set out to write a tome, and that alone makes me feel as though it will be overwrought. I'm sure his reddit audience will love it, I would doubt that it's aimed at us, I'm sure it will be critically successful and hailed as a classic "from the genius behind Watchmen"
As far as artistic merit, I hope to be pleasantly surprised.
lmao J R is an absolute madman!
Mr. Gibbs is drunk as fuck.
this shit is a riot. good call gaddos. this book is killin me rofl.
so true lmao!
Ikr
XD
ayyyyyyy lmao bast is getting taken for the ride of his life all because J R lent him $10 lmaooooooo
>summer is over
>come back to /lit/
>I'm excited and actually put on a suit and some cologne for the occasion
>clear throat to prepare my mid-Atlantic accent
>there are still 6 threads on DFW, pol nazis, newfags
>no more gays, Catholics or communists
What the fuck happened to a once great community? This fucking sucks
>>8440663
Can someone explain what /lit was like when it was good? I've been here for a few years but it's always been the same consistent shit fest. Was there a golden age of /lit?
>>8440675
Every board says this shit anon. Don't be fooled.
4chan has always been cancerous, more so after it became famous. The tumor will never go away.
>read some poetry
>"I can do this shit too"
Finished three poems and for some reason I feel more suicidal that I used to be.
>>8440658
Yeah thats how it is at first. Youll probably get through another 200 bad ones before theres one you really like.
>>8440662
This. It's actually a good sign that you hate your first work, people who love any old shit they put on the page will never improve.
>had had
>>8440553
If it's good enough for the cornfather it's good enough for me.
>>8440553
>that that
i hadn't had cancer in my system before i saw this thread.
Why the fuck does he like reading so much?
He talks about it like reading great writers is the most awe-inspiring experience in life, but I don't really get that at all. When I read Shakespeare or Don Quixote, I'm just like, "Yeah this is prety cool" but I don't see why he thinks they're so amazing. He doesn't explain himself in interviews very well. Does he talk about this better in his books?
>>8440162
>awe-inspiring experience in life
It is
>>8440162
Bloom is right. I think you belong back on /mu/, friend.
>>8440185
Well how do I know he's right? I'm honestly ready to learn how to appreciate books better. English class in school was a joke, so I didn't really have a chance to appreciate it by education.
ITT: We read our favourite piece of literature (poem, prose, lyrics, etc.) or anything that you want to read aloud, really.
vocaroo.com
I'll start:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1PsSSIlkefv
>You, by Lang Leav
(Excuse the shite mic).
>>8440061
nice voice, anon. Read slower next time :^)
>>8440133
>checked
Thanks, anon. Will do.
iBump.
What do you like to use for a bookmark?
>>8439907
Other books I'm reading. My entire library is nested like this and I can't find the bottom anymore.
>>8439907
Index cards
>>8439907
Usually scrap bits of paper because I always lose them.
That's when I'm not folding the fuck out of the corners of my pages, of course.