/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #156

When are you going to show us your comic?

>>12688701
umm...

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>>12688690
I like it. You wouldn't a kasha, right?
http://youtu.be/r97XfbNs1MU

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0UhxNCxGNyM

Experimenting a little with some guitar effects.
Is it okay for taking it easy?

I miss these threads.

>>12688900
I missed them too. Glad they're back.

>>12688900
Hot zombie, dude.

>>12688900
...and what happened here?

>>12689025
It was R-18, check the archive to view it.

>>12688900
Stop censoring, weeb.

>>12688900
You should consider uploading NSFW content to external hosts like imgur or puu.sh and then linking it here, rather than posting the image here directly.

>>12688900
You forgot to censor the nipples.

>>12689217
That's not very Japanese.

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>>12688900
Don't do lewd things with a Yoshika.

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It's nice there's a new thread. that AGDG place is full of weirdos.

I made some layers to the water. It's a very quick concept to try it out but so far it looks okay for how quickly I threw it together.

I just have a few more things to really get going and I should have a test area people can play with soon.

>>12689375
What is this?

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>>12689384

My jellyfish game.

>>12689390
Cute, is the artwork yours? I don't know if you've gotten that far yet but I'd make the camera follow behind the character a bit to smooth out its movement.

>>12689398

do you mean that it anticipates where he's moving and shows more area in that direction or lags behind him? It used to lag behind him but someone said it was giving them motion sickness so I eased up on it.

and yeah so far I've made everything myself. The programming is hard and the music might be even harder but I think I shall survive.

>>12689406
That it shoud lag behind him, doesn't have to be by much to get rid of the jerkyness.

Looks good so far, keep it up!

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*fwosh*
this is the best I can do today, flu is killing me please sens help

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Tried working on a background for once.

>>12689445
Is this an OC (don't steal)?

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A wild gorilla appears.

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Anything particularly wrong with this?

>>12689495
She's from Shiki her name's Sunako

>>12689602
The lines in the middle of the road are off.

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Sorry, it's a little lewd.

>>12689689
It's marvelous.

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>>12689602
The buildings looks like this. And the blue lamp post looks disproportionate.

>>12689689
Which pantsu are those?

>>12689707
Thanks.
>>12689752
I didn't have anyone in mind. But it's probably safe to assume it's a young (possibly little) girl.

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>>12689800
The color scheme reminds me of someone.

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>>12689623
>>12689495
she is cute

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>>12689815
She's cute, yet creepy loli vampire.

>>12689918
I want take to a walk in the park and to a nice bistro to talk about oscar wilde and then watching the stars and then hug hard

>>12689445
Draw your flu as a cute girl. It will be cured then.

I want to sell fan comics at a convention but I don't know what's popular anymore. Can anyone with an ear to the ground tell me what is the new hot shit?

>>12690155
When in doubt, gay furry

>>12690160
Not him, and I don't look at them, but those people who post images of those big muscle bara furry comics they got from conventions alway make me laugh.

>>12690155
Monstergirl is the new furry
Kancolle is the new Strike Witches.

Do something with that, like a doujinshi about a ghost ship monstergirl.

Or make some stuff based off otome games and fujoshit.

>>12688701
>anal day

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Toramaru is a girl?

>>12689689
Cute.

>>12689918
Is this copic and digital? Super pretty.

>>12690375
Shucks.
i.imgur.com/3DoFakZ.png

>>12690379
>shemale, not futa
Gay.
Still pretty good.

Here's a short song I made last week: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/30614076/mp3/jarski_new__.mp3

>>12690669
Sounds like a megaman's intro stage song.

>>12689689
Your linework makes this look extremely traced.

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>>12689634
>>12689730
I redid the linework on the buildings. Does it look semi-acceptable now

>>12690669
what the fuck is that voice sample from?

>>12690939
The real question is what for. There is no need for it.

>>12691134
He or another person used it extensively in another track. I wanna know what it's from. Is it a thing?

>>12690375

Those are nice shapes in the arms. The hands are really good too. Although the p0n0s looks weird. it looks too wide and flat.

>>12690253
I wish there was never a new Strike Witches.
I'm still waiting for season 3.

>>12690821
I think the lines on the road should be equidistant and not as fat

>>12690375
Why i can't draw like that with the tablet?

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>>12689390
This is cool, I like it

I've been working on a VN for over a year now and I have 2600 pictures from Japan to use as backgrounds, but I'm not sure whether to keep them like this, use an oil effect, or have them drawn

>>12692735
>working on a VN for over a year now
I smell disaster

>>12692735
why do you even need them to be from japan? are you a weeaboo?

>>12692781

he's got a really big portfolio of backgrounds to use!

i bet he's got the rights to redistribute them too. 's all good

>>12692781
I've been working on a doujin for two years now and it's looking good.

>>12692781
Worst that could happen is shelving it

>>12692846
>>12692855
I took them

Oh well

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This thing feels too flat, don't know why but I want to blame the hair.

>>12691428
I like my Shou a bit manly, just hard doing so without a pose that can show off her shoulders.

>>12692899
Yeah, having half an unfinished book forever is a soul crushing affair.

>>12692781
I have an unfinished script for a VN that's been laying around on my HD for over a year now that severely needs to be rewritten. I'll go back to it once I finish my current one.

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>>12690821
lane markings should be something like this

>>12692859
You're kidding, right?
Is each panel a full-scale painting?

>>12693453
No. It's just that there have been considerable breaks in between.
The progress has been divided into short sessions too.

>>12692732
I like this picture.

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>>12688690
> Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, cooking, and programming.
>programming

Hey /jp/ I guess I haven't posted on here in a while (I wanted to a few times but there was no thread up for some reason).

For those that don't know, I'm making a loli kidnapping/rape simulator and most of it is randomly generated.

I now actually have a menu and stuff! What do you think, /jp/?

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>>12693710

Here's a gif (excuse the 5fps, it's the gif, not the game - if it was more it wouldn't fit on 4chan) of the game in action.

>>12693710
You can randomly generate maps?
Thats huge, dude. Thats really fuggin cool man.

By the way I'm totally for your game, Ive seen some of the gifs, there should be more devs like you making games that push the moral boundaries and challenge the current climate of the video game industry.

>>12693713
>literally caring a loli to your van right infront of a police car
Thats so hilarious.
It would be cool though if there were enemies of some kind. What if there was a GTA-style bounty system, if you get into trouble, police might try and chase you, I've seen the driving gifs and a car chase would be hilariously fun.

>>12693710
I think you need a goddamned blog and a demo to keep us updated.

>>12693713

You should make a webm!

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>>12693732

The police will chase you. There will be an alert system. Also, if parents see you that could happen too.

There won't be much in the way of combat like GTA though. It will be more turn-based like Pokémon and using a vn-eseque menu-system (pic related).

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>>12693757

I-I don't know how. Plus I'm used to just using LICEcap since it's so easy and usually I don't have to record at 5fps to fit.

Also, the lolis are randomized too (random clothes/colours/even getetics)

The genetics basically every DNA has like 20 genes (will add more later) and right now I've got like 3 for skin colour I think and 5 for hair colour (4 of them being colour pigment, where your total amount of them affects the darkness of your hair and one being a red hue one for redheads) and every gene can be recessive vs dominant. Then for each gene pool (I have Nordic, mid-european, mediternian-europe, hispanic, and asian so far) there's an associated probability for a gene to be dominant vs recessive, so the northern europeans have a lower probability for the hair pigment genes (since the dominant is the darker ones).

Also, for each gene pool I have external .txt files defining some stuff for nationalities/ethnic groups. So for nordic i have Swedish/Norwegian/Finnish. For asian I have Chinese/Japanese. For Hispanic just mexican so far. for mediteranian I have Greek/Italian/Spanish. For mid-European I have English/French/German/Polish/Russian/Ukranian. Some stuff that's defined there (user editable! the user can even add additional ones!) is like a pool for first/last names, so I took the first 20-60 most common or so names for each country/ethnic group and put them in there. So you can rape your very own Yui Takahashi or whatever.

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Excuse the multiple posts but I wanted to post an image for each one and 4chan doesn't support multiple images per post like a lot of other imageboards do.

>>12693720

Yeah, but the insides of buildings aren't generated randomly yet. They're tied to what the outside looks like. I will randomize them later. Here's what the insides of the small vs medium houses look like. (I'll probably remove the basement from the medium house since it looks weird)

>>12693752

I think if I had a blog it would get taken down. I do have a thread on <eight>chan though on their amateur game development board. https://<eight>chan.co/agdg/res/150.html and will probably just remake it if it 404s.

>>12693094
You know, the trick to making drawings with more depth to them is really just adding a good background.

>>12693732
>instead of stopping, it does a uturn and drives down the sidewalk through a lamppost

>>12692732
any chance you'll do some actual lewds with ariane? everyone seems to tiptoe around her and never does anything lewd with her, if they even care.

I think I hate Dan.

>>12693797
Will there be items and things?

I imagine it would be cool if items and things were randomized in location, it would give intensive to look through all those randomized houses, you might find fun things.
even if you dont actually use items, loli-related collectables would add a fun aspect to the game.

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>>12694030

There will be some items. Stuff like candies, gifts, chloroform, rope, etc. Oh, and I guess buying clothes for your lolis after you kidnap them. (since I plan to let you take them back to your basement and keep them there where you could rape them more/breed them if they hit puberty/feed(or starve) them, etc)

So far I just have nude / dress / sukumizu from the clothes. No need to add more until I have the core gameplay done first. And as you can see I can easily change colour just in software (actually all the colours - as well as the probability certain lolis will wear certain colours - is all in external .txt files)

I'm not sure how I'll handle tresspassing though. I was thinking that you would mostly go into houses when the parents are away at work to potentially kidnap lolis, or go in and night.

>>12694019
why wouldn't you?

>>12693933
Is that even really him? looks kinda rusty
>>12694019
You should just ignore him, like everyone. hate doesn't hurt enough

>>12694065
that's jadf, since it's on his pixiv too. i wouldn't mind seeing jadf style lewds of ariane.

i remember only one other guy drawing her, but magister quit the internet long ago.

>>12694077
I wonder what he's he doing now.

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Please help me, jay pee. I'm trying to draw giant pillars in front of a library coming from a "below" perspective, but everything is just going wrong.

>>12694202
I'd like to figure out what the shit am I looking at, firstly.

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>>12693789
>>12694058
I've always thought the 'nordic' lolis looked like Puru

>>12694202
Stop putting all of your vantage points off of the page first of all.

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>>12694306
It was cropped, sorry.

>>12694211
Reading comprehension, do you have it?
>giant pillar(s) in front of a library coming from a "below" perspective

>>12694202
Why those red curves though? They don't make any sense, nor are they in perspective despite all the guidelines you are not using.

>>12694325
T-they're supposed to be windows...

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May as well post this too, for general reference

>>12694368
So? Even then they don't make sense.

>>12694386
Then please redline it for me senpai

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Please watch out, everyone!

>>12694316
Sorry, but are you doing this on purpose?

>>12694410
Nice.

>>12694413
Yes, because I am a faggot

Should I just go for normal perspective, or not

No bully pls

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>>12694393
Here you go

>>12694491
this is actually awesome

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>>12694417

>>12694546
Check your aspect ratio.
Your drawing is too tall and too thin.

>>12694410
I don't really get it.

>>12694586
I'll keep that in mind for next time

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>>12694608
Is your monitor image stretched wrong by some chance?
There was one anon that had that issue so all his drawings looked stretched in one direction

>>12694641
That's a possibility. I was just thinking that, actually.I'll fix it.

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>>12694652
I hope this is better.

>>12694680
Still a bit tall but much better

>>12694491
I like you

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>>12693094
Yeah, not something I'd like to continue trying

The main heroine is a loli, of course

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they would like to give them Christmas gift?

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>>12694202
It is like you didn't use references

>>12695629
But I didn't know what to search for, and I wanted to challenge myself

>>12695669
Bottom-up view. The problem with your drawing is that your "camera" is under the ground, so unless there are some stairs, it's impossible to draw. Notice on anon's post >>12695629 that your pillars' base would go approximately where that tower ring is, but in the case of the tower it's possible because there is more tower beneath. Hope I've been clear.

>>12695669
For your information, these type of shots are sometimes coined "worm's eye view". And yeah, >>12694202
your pic is fucked. Stop trying to salvage it and move on.

>>12695693
There is nothing wrong with trying to challenge yourself and learning from your mistakes. Stop with that attitude.

>>12695629
>>12694202
>>12695669
>>/ic/1887927

>>12695833
Either link properly or get out

>>12694202
Your curves need to be arching down. At the moment your curves suggest that the horizon is somewhere between your 4 arcs because they are bending toward the middle. They need to be arching down and arching a lot more than they are.

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>>12694316

>>12696315
Well that's cheap.

>>12696319

gets the job done though

>>12696324
Well you're right about that.

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>went to pixiv chat r-18 category
>drew something lewd
>i cant draw pussy
>asked a friend to draw
>he entered chat then draw a pussycat
>they all mad

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how strong are Ran's tails?

>>12697329
about three fiddy

>>12697329

they're fluffy

>>12696486
>What are you talking about
>you drew a nice pussy on her stomach already
>that hair sucks ass though
>as do those boobs
>also your friend is a dick

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>>12696486

>>12693789

I use OBS to record (it's free) and then I convert the mp4 to webm with the ffmpeg bat thing. this http://ffmpeg.zeranoe.com/builds/

I usually put in something like: ffmpeg -i video.mp4 -c:v libvpx -b:v 800K -an -vf scale=800:-1 video.webm

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>>12697778
seconded. OBS is probably the best free stream out there atm

>>12697329
needs more tho, seems kinda thin

>>12693094
Taper the shoulders + tuck in her left arm? Seems it might be flat cause she looks blocky

any idea what's wrong with the proportion?

>>12697876
>atm
/jp/ is not a chatroom or twitter. Please use proper english.

>>12697941
pls don't do disgusting greentext on /jp/.

>>12697876
I've only ever used OBS and I've always wondered how Xsplit is compared to it. Anyone know?

>>12697876
her legs seem short and her head is big (unless that's what you were trying for). was it done in drawr?

>>12698309
Short legs and big head are authentically Japanese proportions.

>>12698309
nah, photoshop. just suck at proportions lol

can't seem to find references for back poses, any ideas?

>>12698363
there's posemaniacs, deviantart has plenty of stock images. i also have some model sets if you'd want those (but it's not all back poses). look up proportion charts (like loomis for example) if you're having troubles.

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A Remilia in progress

>>12698411
Very cute
I like your rendering too

>>12698411
Cute indeed.
I'm slightly concerned about the placement of her neck on the shoulders, but it's nothing too noticeable.

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I put the internals from the mockup in >>12693797 into the game and made the new bigger house model be generated and did some other things like that!

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>>12699140

...aaaand a more complete version (with random debug-draw-mode-stuff to show it has collision bounds in there too)

>>12699350
Please, please, post those gifs where you run over a shitton of lolis to test performance. I regret not having saved it every day.

>>12698411
Sharp, I like this.

vivian http://i.imgur.com/ZZb5lXr.png

Today I was going for perfect and elegant.

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1seOq6xPwrX

>>12700644
Meh, I was hoping to see the futa cock of a different Vivian.

>>12701725

Vivian from the young ones?

>>12700916
You've gotten better, although it doesn't really sound perfect and elegant. You should consider dropping the MS synth.

>>12700916
Intense. I like it!
Some more drums would add to its radness, since it's all very MIDI-y.

Ah, finally found the new thread.

How is everyone doing on their pieces for the new music compilation? We've passed the first half of November, and it might be good to make both a reminder and a status update. So currently, we have one piece in the dropbox. Also, one (or two, I can't really tell) anons have expressed interest in joining but have not mailed yet so I can give them access to the dropbox. I should note, though, that while dropbox should make things easier, I wouldn't mind if you just submitted works through me by emailing them to me instead of joining the dropbox, and I'll upload them for you. No worries.

If I can remember correctly, we are trying to shoot for this year's Winter Comiket am I right? I mean, date-wise as a deadline - we're not actually going to go there to distribute the compilation.

As a reminder, this compilation is open for any music submissions and we may also need album art for release.

If you have any questions or if yo want to join, you can post them here or mail me at [email protected]

Take it easy.

>>12702129
>we may also need album art for release.
Any specifics you want?

>>12702201
Well, no one ever really agreed what "should" be the album theme or art. We just asked the artists how they feel about the album in a "/jp/" sort-of-way and they just did their stuff. If I were to make a generalization, though, based on https://www.dropbox.com/sh/7vymrf03krqs545/xMtFnbHOQo (first compilation), as well as the would-have-been art of the second, there only recurring theme is "cute girl". Not that you need to adhere to anything, though.

As for more technical specifications, what would be good to have is, primarily an "Album Cover" type of art. In a similar way to the old ones with the project name.

As a secondary thing, it would be great to have art for the "Back Cover" with the track list. You can, again, look to the first project for two examples - both really well done, I must say.

From last thread:
>12661770
I'm almost finished getting a Soundiron Chorus Pack. I'll still try and figure out how to use it, so in the meanwhile, have an older track:

https://soundcloud.com/vapor-hands/kodoku-no-musume

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>>12702250
I've always liked your music, dude

>>12702415
Thank you very much. That's very encouraging.

anyone know any good anime commissioners?

>>12702473
What the fuck are you talking about?

>>12702486:
He's talking commision work for "anime"-drawings

>>12702534
Or maybe he wants to commission an entire anime.

>>12702560
kek

>>12702473

I'm the /jp/ anime commissioner, what is it that you want?

>>12700916
Do you have a soundcloud or anything similar?

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>>12699632
>Please, please, post those gifs where you run over a shitton of lolis to test performance. I regret not having saved it every day.

o-ok

Do you really have time to be here? Isn't that Kadokawa on the phone, demanding their daily blowjob?