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>>2692186
he looks kinda sad

>>2692186
What's the point of the stand if he's going to look down still?

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It's been like this for 2 years

>>2697964
*these

>>2697965
/thread

>>2697964
pencil not even sharpened, no eraser, shitty pen?
Can't tell if you're trying to actually challenge yourself or are just broke.

wheres the option for I only come to /ic/ to shitpost and troll hiring artists threads?

>>2696556
>other

OP here, im suprised digital is not winning

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>>2694033
If you dont give a fuck about making a presentable picture, no on will give a shit about looking at it.

Scan it. Resize. Post.

If you dont have a scanner, take a decent picture with your phone. Transfer to PC, flip it and resize and then upload.

Stop being an ignorant arrogang piece of shit.

(also that drawing is shit, bad lines, bad design. Go to the beginner thread.)

PS: Pic related.

>>2694044
Wizdom.

>>2694033
Is it really this hard to clean your keyboard you fucking disgusting mouth breathing fucking cancer of mankind.

Mediocre but better than most the retards who make their own thread.

You still shouldn't make your own thread.

>>2693301
no, looks flat

>>2693301
She has a little bit of mexico on her face right there.

You should look at manga and anime from that era then. That's the best references you'll get. This means hitting up a library or a bookstore.

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>>2692296
I have lots of manga from the era, especially from Tezuka and his disciples, but not how to draw books.

Like, I have a book from the 1930s on how to draw rubber hose animation written by the master of that style- Bill Nolan. I can't believe with how popular manga was in the 60s and 70s nobody wrote a how to draw book.

there are no books other than shitty ones like in your OP image because drawing manga, in whatever style, is something japanese feed on as they grow from childhood into adolescence. When they finally decide to draw their own manga, the style they choose to depict their world with is an amalgamation of every influence, swimming in their subconscious. Not to mention, japanese humor is fucking weird. Japanese tropes in general are really awkward when emulated by a western artist. Even koreans try to copy it and its definitely not manga. There's manhwa that isn't bad, but it definitely isn't manga.

>>2699344
look at the inktober or drawlloween threads

>>2699346
just did. was hoping for some other stuff thats not necessarily month-themed i guess

>inktober
>halloween draw challenge
>char design / illustration challenge
>no one participating in any of them
>"hey guys, got any drawing challenges other than those?"

Come on.

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4' X 5'

>>2697619

This is nice.

>>2697632
>>2697635

these look like really good doodles from a high schooler's notebook.

What's your budget?

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I'd be fine with paying a fair price. I am open to discuss it, over IM or Facebook if you want.

>>2699296
>If this is against this boards rules, let me know.

Why didn't you read the rules before posting anon? If you're aware that it "might" break the rules, you should check them to make sure.

Good job at embarrassing yourself you fucking retard

>>2699248
That's your work?

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>>2699248

Yes. Exercises should only supplement your work, even learning "fundamentals".
Also pick other book, "Fun with Pencil" is easily the worst written Loomis book and it doesn't help that he is very dated now.
What you want to get first is "Keys to Drawing" by Dodson.

But remember, always - first your own complete drawings, and only then - books. Remember that how you approach drawing and learning is more important than milleage.

Still - draw. Draw a ton. And try to bring out your own creativity in every work you do. Make notes to yourself. Try to make art something that comes right from within you.

>>2699250
No, it's something I look up to and want to replicate the style eventually

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Takato Yamamoto is pretty good, I also like his more grotesque art, unfortunately all the images I tried finding are relatively small.

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it is really hard to find good quality pics of his art, posting a few that i have

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>you have 44 followers

>>2679289
Most people have under 5 million followers

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>you don't even have a blog or a handle or any online presence

stop drawing on lined paper.....also /beg/....
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read the sticky....

It was done on a whim during class. I didn't have printer paper. I used to have copic markers and stuff but sold them to pay for tuition, so I used whatever color tools I had. I want to focus on the skills rather than the tools. I didn't like how the hands and the camera lens for the arms came out. I always have a hard time with proportion because of it.

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IN THIS ORDER, LEARN:

>/////Construction/////
Your drawing has little structure, so it comes off as sloppy and ill planned, as well as feeling absurdly 2D.

>/////ANATOMY/////
Self explanatory. You had some luck with baggy pants and long sleeves, but even then it's clear that you don't have an understanding of the human body.

>/////PERSPECTIVE/////
You do not understand how to translate spacial relationships from 3D to 2D. Will help with that "camera lense" problem.

As for the design and concept, it's pretty highschool. TA is a great band, but bringing that into what you're doing is not interesting or original. Conceptual stuff like that CAN be learned here/ in this type of environment, but you're better off exploring the arts as a whole and further advancing and maturing your own tastes.

Also, don't make a thread for yourself. We don't have it in the sticky, WHICH WE SHOULD (cough mods cough), but now you know. Also read the sticky, it has all the information you need to address the issues stated above.

God speed anon.

PS A ream of printer paper isn't that expensive, quit making excuses

Being honest?

You focused purely on mimicking an anime-esque face while neglecting everything else

Do some anatomy studies, hand studies, fur studies, studies, studies, studies, and more studies

>>2696280
Same quality with a smaller head.
Care to post your drawing from 2015-present?

>>2696292
>*your drawings from

>>2697800
Think of what you want to draw.
Try to draw it.
Analyse problems.
Research how to improve them.
Try to draw it again with what you now know.
Repeat.

>>2697802
something tells me that if he's daydreaming about being good and posting about it on ic

he has little to no drive of actually putting in the work