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Nevermind I cropped and tried reverse search again and I got it!

Thanks!

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Here's the second one

>>2892012
they all have an incorrect cast shadow and incorrect specular

>>2892013

oh good can you fix it and actually help me instead?

>>2892019
He helped by pointing out the mistakes, fix your own shit

That your image doesn't work in perspective?
Parallel lines don't go to the same vanishing point in a mistakeful drawing for example.

>>2891521
This. Linear perspective is pretty much math. There is a right and wrong way that things look in space.

>>2891521
>>2891526
im not getting it
WHY isnt it right? and what makes it right?
i tried reading perspective made easy and that didnt help.

jyyn ayyrso

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>>2891476
Shes... the most beautiful waifu I've ever seen.

>>2891476
those eyeballs, how do they fit?

Maybe if that's what your idea of making it is, anon.

Can't hurt, anon.

>>2890642
You know that's by Ruan Jia right?

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>>2889965
Honestly I see a huge amount of potential here. Like I'm not sure how intentional all the wonky shapes and proportions are, but it's very pleasing to look at. If it is intentional stylization--good job! If it is accidental, then be careful to not train it out of you since I think you naturally have a pleasing way of drawing.

That said, I think some areas are a little bit sloppy and the values are getting a bit muddy. I tried sort of working on top of it a bit, but to be honest this sort of style is not my strongest point. I suggest looking at stuff like Francis Vallejo's life drawings where he has insane values and appeal to his drawings, but also stylizes it in a similar way that I feel you are. Rick Berry might be another good artist for you to take a good look at.

>>2890076
Oh, another artist to check out would be Kent Williams. His life drawings also have a similar feel to what I think you might want to aim towards.

>>2889965

It's crude but If I was horny enough I could probably rub one out to the naked lady. I guess that counts for something?

See you tomorrow ;)

aaaaaaand another one bites the dust

For the love of god, shut up ABD fuck off already

Why are you asking them...? Your friends and family who don't know how to draw don't know shit. I don't know how you didn't come to this conclusion on your own.

If you want actual feedback then post your godawful symbol drawings either here or some other hugbox if you don't want your feefees hurt.

>tfw get no praise
>tfw all I get is /ic/'s shitty advice

>>2882932
/ic/ is a hugbox?

>>2879086
Do commissions. You get gratitude and get paid as well as get better.

Keep going, faggot.
Every artist has sucked shit at the beginning, the only difference between losers and winners is winners don't get discouraged by beginner mistakes.

Just have more realistic expectations. It takes a few years of consistent and deliberate practice before you will have some level of competence. You shouldn't expect to be making amazing artworks in a matter of weeks or months.

Study from multiple different people and combine whatever methods work best for you. Study Loomis but also watch Vilppu and Steve Huston's NMA videos on head construction, and whoever else you like.
The most important thing is that you practice it. Draw a fuckton of heads from imagination, do a bunch of boxes in perspective and carve the head shapes / place the features in them. Don't just read a bunch of shit, try to have fun with your exercises.

>>2891501
*The girl in the green and red is not my oc. I drew her from a ref I found onine.

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Şereflikoçhisarrism

Şereflikoçhisarrism was a movement founded by Structuralists in the late 21st century. Mainly architects: Şereflikoçhisarrists designed houses in the town of Şereflikoçhisar, in Turkey in their innate form, but then recognized some of the thematic components of the environments transcended architectural cohesion. They are heavily influenced by calculus; Şereflikoçhisarists work by inventing unique functions to determine saturation of hues in each piece. Early tools used in the Şereflikoçhisarist Art included mspaint colour-pickers, pastels and acrylics. Subjects were taken from life and then restlessly examined to make sure no two colours were the same.

Sinuous hills and pastoral, overcast skies are the most approachable element of their work. Savoury tangerine colors and carnations are usually abstracted to "invert the cognizance of Turkey", in the words of one leading painter in this understanding.

Typical environmental elements in their paintings are Structural and almost categorically contains an element that can be recognized as circular, i.e a band that stretches across the whole stretched canvas.

Ideologically: most Şereflikoçhisarians embrace a pseudo-Projectivist and Instrumentalist metaphysical viewpoint, which the few admiring conossieurs of the genre have used to reconcile the commonplace montony and stability of the landscapes

(The article I got was Şereflikoçhisa; pic related is David Fox please don't sue)

>>2891123
>student gallery
>"how do I learn to do this?"
Gee, if only there were some school that taught you how. Guess this one will forever be a mystery.

>>2891126
If only I could live there and had money to pay for it. But yeah, everyone is fucking rich.

>>2891123
draw, stop shitposting