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MTSP Thread 16 (C90 Speculation)

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Will it be Fate or another new series?

Also, can anyone provide the OCRs for the untranslated extra chapter from Fate compilation 1? I'm interested at translating it.
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>>4197398
Second tankobon of FATE is highly probable (just my opinion, tough). A few "omake pages" with Rider-san again are also fairly possible, IMHO...

Brand new series would be a very nice surprise, but I think he should first get it over with "Fate" doujins by releasing the second book and then he could concentrate on something totally new.

My hopes for a "decent" Tachibana-san conclusion are still there though, but we all know that he stated in his afterword that the story arc is "pretty much done". However, a nice filler chapter showing us what happened to Yuika & Koharu while Kyouka was getting banged by Curly would be perfect to end the saga...
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If the omake has Illyasviel or Sakura on it, I'll actually make an effort and translate it.
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Why do you like his works? I find them very boring and samesy.
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>>4198343
art style
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>>4197398
Whhaatt? I could swear this is thread #17

OP you gotta remember to link some MTSP books for the majority of guys that first-time here.
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I like the art, especially Kyouka's lewd face.

However, MTSP had one of the worst fanbase in any hentai ever. I think the endless argument between pro and anti-NTR fags either here, 2ch or whatever chinese porn forum there is are utterly retarded. The girls are H-cup titty monsters created by Jin for maximum titillation to the readers. They're not even half good written characters, they made idiotic hentai logic fueled decisions from the get go. Their logic are on par with that bimbo model from Ran Sem. I don't understand how possibly someone could root for them (or root for the rapist for that matter) and argue in an endless loop injecting their own fanfiction, headcannon, etc to sustain a thread. This is even more futile than literature scholars arguing for the last 300 years on whether Hamlet was crazy or not. The answer is IT DOESN'T FUCKING MATTER. The bottom line is Jin is an NTR artist, so if there's any future Tachibana release you can bet your bottom dollar it's gonna be more NTR, because by nature of the media Jin had to draw more sex scenes for the girls in a more compromising position/scenes. Even the author doesn't give a single shit about the grand storyline because it's a run of the mill NTR story, nothing bad and nothing extraordinarily special about it so you guys shouldn't either
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>>4199452
Hamlet...
Read that back in high school and had to analyse Hamlet's state of mind. He isn't really insane per say, what he's seeing is just a physical manifestations of his feelings and how he reacted to it was the source of his insanity and internal confusion.

Anyway, the thread is about the author's works, not just Tachibana-san. It just that it is the most popular work of the author.
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>>4199452
Only one of them is H cup
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>>4199482
Their breasts sizes are stupidly huge. I think Jin was just messing around people.
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So the fanbase is not interested with any translation? Then complains about lack of translations. If you want free translations, someone needs to make a damn effort getting those OCRs.

I'm waiting and my patience is running out.
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someone(any translator) make a gofundme page so we can put money in for the translation for the novel.i'm willing to put down myself some
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>>4200454
also that other website for funding artists.
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>>4200454
Stop this. You guys only bother with the novel because someone actually translated half of it (It's really a rough translation, the translator have really improved a lot if you're reading his new translations). If the translation never existed in the first place, this thread would shut up and accept the reality. I never seen a hentai novel translated before and I don't think we will anytime soon.
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>>4200469
so we shouldn't have the rest of the novel translation? what r u saying? we want the translation finished! if u don't want it, whatever. but the rest of us want it.
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>>4200472
How? From what I seen from the past threads, you guys can't even do anything. Someone in this thread is asking for OCRs...you guys are ignoring him.
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>>4200440
AFAIK the novel was called dibs by shakuganexa 6 months ago, maybe that's why.

>>4200476
Shakuganexa did the first half without OCR, he doesn't need that.
He only needs to finish his exams and we to be patient.
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>>4200635
Bullshit. He's still translating Lustful Berry. He's such a hypocrite piece of shit.
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Stupid fuck.

Are you the usual troll? Post that same page again at least, don't be such a retard ffs.
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i would like sakiko or tachibana
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>>4200472
amen brother
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>>4200440
>RafuRafu
Who or what are you?
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>>4198343
It's the little things. Aside from the rather drawn out psychology Jin also puts in little touches like the fact that when the girls and shota go to the beach, Kyouka wears the keys to her car around her neck. Now, no one really cares about parking issues in a chinese non-animated animation, but it goes to show that Kyouka is a responsible adult which contrasts with how she acts in the lewd scenes. It gives the work a bit more depth.
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>>4203126
Ayyyy..

Kyouka is a backstabbing bitch. She was planning to betray Yuu all along, that's why she had condoms.
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>>4202987
A translator. I only got three days left before I become busy again.
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>>4203509
yeah
they planned to get pregnant from him on this trip, so why she brought condoms ?
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>>4203607
The novel answers that question and other plot-holes as well, don't let the troll tells you otherwise "M-MUH CONTINUITY".


What happened to the blog stuff from Sands?
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>>4203614
They planned? The novel is a retelling of the story, idiots. There is no fucking plot holes that were answered since there are nothing to begin with (The only plot holes I see are the ones the novel created). You guys need to grow up. Jin even said it himself. It's funny people are demanding Jin's blog post to be translated but not his own works. I wonder when they will be translated. Translators will also charge extra for popular works. Sands never even said anything about translating them. I mean would any translator even bother translating comments when he's already busy translating manga?

A translation of the novel would be a waste of time especially you can't fap to them anyway.
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>>4203614
i was talking about the manga...novel and manga are different stories with different endings
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>>4203626
It's not the whole blog of course. That would be retard.

There is a handful of entries that have real importance, that's what we meant.
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>>4203697
Then post it here then you can't be serious asking him to look for the important ones, are you. Most of Jin's blog posts are bullshit anyway. He's not fan or scanlator friendly.
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Eh? I wasn't the one that asked for it, I'm just waiting
But following older threads I remember those handful of entries that were important.

Shakuganexa pamon otherguy or sands sure know the specifics.
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>>4203704
OK, let's break down each of them shall we?
Pamon = Not a translator.
Otherguy = Isn't interested in MTSP and currently working on Okina.
Shakuganexa = Is a translator but only been releasing LUSTFUL FUCKING BERRY for the last 6 months. Not to mention having a grammar and spelling of an elementary schooler. His translations has been tagged as poor grammar.
Sands = Current working on Matome Ban but didn't say about translating anything else related to Jin.
Coresplinter = Has been MIA for a long time now but he is the most reliable in terms of translating Jin's works for years.
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>>4203714
I don't kown them personally They are just guys that circle the thread on a regular basis and their names came to my head
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>>4203714
You have srsly the shittiest attitude I have seen on this board.

>>4203642
Yes and No, because there are questions that the novel solves like the trip condoms and the possibly failed police raid.
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>>4203908
>because there are questions that the novel solves
the manga and the novel had same source, but different routs, different events, characters are different and the novel has it's own plotholes
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I was thinking that the next work jin, would be a spin-off of Tachibana-san
but with her daughter Yukia, many want to Kyouka, but there are more who want to see Yuika in a separate story, as there Pixiv Yuika jobs.
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sooo anybody OCRing yet? cuz i dont know to do it.
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>>4204705
>cuz i dont know to do it.
You download Capture2Text and read its very simple instructions.
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>>4203614
>What happened to the blog stuff from Sands?
I have no idea what you're talking about. Nobody has contacted me about translating blog posts, and I am not translating blog posts.

Matome Ban translation is done by the way, except for some pages missing sfx. But as there is no typesetter it hasn't gotten further than that. Feel free to contact me if you can typeset. Maybe we can get the new C89 stuff out too?
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>>4205081
You're going to translate Jin's C89? How about the novel? Are you doing that too?
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>>4205114
Novel is gigantic compared to a doujin, I rather he does c89.
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>>4205376
But C89 is an addition to the novel.
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Antone has the Navy seal copypasta?
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Hito no Fudoshi's Kaki Hoshu has been novelized by the same publisher who made the Tachibana novel.

If the writer actually retain Lisa's personality and has a deeper conflict between enjoyment and pain (This is a true NTR scenario unlike Tachibana), I'm pretty sure shakuganexa will translate it for us.
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>>4207033
>"Escale series"
>"Lustful Berry "ESCALATE"
Lustful Berry novel confirmed? If it's a series concentrating on NTR doujin series...
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>>4207033
>Hito no Fudoshi's Kaki Hoshu
i hope there will be more yuri action between mother and daughter than in tachibana
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>>4207033
Seeing the previews, the sex scenes are intense. I'll translate the the first few pages and see how it goes. There must be "developments" to keep me interested unlike Tachibana-san.
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>>4205114
>You're going to translate Jin's C89?
I could, if someone steps up to be typesetter. Feel free to volunteer, everyone.

>How about the novel?
I am not doing the novel.
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>>4207095
Where i can find these previews?
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>>4207509
http://blog.livedoor.jp/geek/archives/51518813.html
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>>4207033
chapter 5 fucking when?
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>>4207802 >>4207033
and by that of course I mean chapter 6, since 5 was really short and wasn't mother/daughter
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>>4197516
>Tachibana-san
Am I being deluded for hoping for a vanilla end? Or at the very least something nice for Yuu-kun?
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>>4207846
Logic says you are wrong in both fronts, but hope isn't logical. Good luck mate.
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>>4207680
At least, this novel adaptation seems to have a proper conclusion. Apparently, the guy discovered Risa fucking her PE teacher here and this is the ending.
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>>4209629
And that's it? Lame.
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>>4209735
If there's anal, real emotional conflict and a section dedicated to Risa and BBSM (Big Black Stinky Man) and Risa and her boyfriend. I'll translate this. I need an willing editor though to correct my "poor grammar"...
Rather than chapters, I'll release it section by section.
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>>4209629
>Apparently, the guy discovered Risa fucking her PE teacher here and this is the ending.

So it ends without even telling if he just dumps her and moves on or cries in the corner like your typical NTR profag?
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>>4210045
No, the preview has censored the bottom parts so I can't be sure if it's the actual ending. I think there are a few more pages after it. The novel has its own ending too.

Anyhow, Lisa/Risa is hotter than the stupid Tachibana girls.
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Is she even trying to escape?

This MTSP guy is a cocktease bastard, all of his netorare is nothing more than cheating camouflaged with bullshit.
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>>4210217
He is. The novel Kyouka actually enjoyed her sex with hrbrpsrtner and even gave her number without any threats. No wonder the translator gave up half way through the novel.
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>>4210217
Don't even need to read moon for that question. If you saw any of the older parts you would know 2 things:

-she's probably damning him to hell with her mouth and thoughts.
-her torso is pushing back of her own volition to take his load as deep as possible.

It's all in the body language, she actually needs this sex like air to breath she just doesn't know it yet or just won't say it. Kyouka's modus operandi at it's finest.
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I want a translation so bad that i srsly consider learning japanese.But it is such a struggle the writing system is so complicated
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>>4210217
>mfw i'll never have a 1ft long cock and split my dream woman in two
despair
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>>4211157
Anon, not all hentai manga or doujin gets translated. We either need to pay for it or hope someone translate it for free. I waited about 6 years for one manga to be translated.

Pay for it or shut up.
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>>4211500
>I waited about 6 years for one manga to be translated.
Which one?
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>>4211515
LUSTFUL BERRY #2. The coloured one with voice acting.
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Saw something nice a while ago.
Is the novel being translated in any form?
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is this serie still continued?
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>>4212562
It's probably over. MTSP can't keep recycling Tachibana-san, although he only drew the omake for the novel. Honestly, his C89 is so disappointing since it doesn't explore what happened during the time gaps, I bet the drawing in the omake should have been in the novel but didn't include them so he can release something for C89. Same goes for the C88, the bonus materials are not new.
>>4212496
Maybe translators have noticed his efforts and stop translating his works. Unless he remastered Matome Ban with voice acting LUSTFUL BERRY #2 or animates, I would always be disappointed with whatever he releases.

I want to hear Yuika's screams as the guy destroyed her pussy!
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>>4212574
the last chapter was the mother right?
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http://strawpoll.me/7045123
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>>4212716
What's Orcosoft ?
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>>4207680
Please translate this manga. It's a new series and it's already killing Netoraserare. The sex scenes are amazing as of Jin drew them.
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>>4212887
http://blog.livedoor.jp/geek/archives/51519111.html
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>>4212716
NOVELLLLL@! second half

>MTSP's C90
What? that's on August
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>>4210217
Kyouka is low-tier slut as expected.

Only Koharu-chan knows how to make a stand against the dude(s)
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Why would anyone have a hardon for Koharu? She's a toddler in a woman's body
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>>4197398
This is the perfect breasts shape and size.
>>4213413
This is what a comedy breasts look like.
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>>4213615
You are just jelly because Yuika got the .mind breaking development
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>>4213529
This.
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>>4214039
I'll write a about Yuika's development:
Yuika was humiliated and was really hurt by his partner. Her body was tired and her breasts were sagging. She tried to fightback during the orgy but become/turned sensitive and she felt weakness all over her body (weakness is pleasure since the guys brags about fucking her so much every week he can't even remember how much = He was mocking Kyouka's partner but the Koharu's partner retorted he fuck Koharu so much to the point she was begging him to have sex).

When the guy kissed her, she didn't even struggled. During their first encounter, she slapped him, now she was helpless. The guy treated Yuika like a slave, he pulled her hair and he fully thrusted his dick instead her mouth and she didn't even struggled. (Contrast this to their first meeting, Yuika was in control, never really performed a deep throat and even used her teeth at times = pretending she such at blowjobs).

She physically fought back during their first meeting. She slapped him, used her teeth, pushing him, scratching his back, etc. While she still tried to fight back during the orgy at a certain extent, whenever the guy moves faster or deeper, Yuika felt to good to struggle. (Compared to heir first encounter, she actually pass out because she struggled and tried to resist the guy, like pushing him, contracting her pussy harder [I suck at describing) and keep moving around and switching sex positions hoping to make the guy tired).
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Is this a pasta from old thread? I want the Koharu one.
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>>4214262
How much of this are facts?
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>>4214262
Hell0 shakuganexa.

>>4214788
Around half or a little less. He's a known yukia lover that makes him biased
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>>4214882
Biased? I don't he is. It seems like an accurate description to me unless he is exaggerating details which he apparently likes to do to piss YUU FAGS!
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>>4210217
There's so many editions and side stories and revisions it's hard to keep track, which one was this one in?
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>>4215282
The one where they have sex?
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There should be only two: the complete manga and the novel.

Laziness and a general lack of money has left us with the current disarray.
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>>4214262
This is very accurate. There is some exaggeration but no lies. All of these are facts.
>>4215294
What can we do anything it? It really sucks.
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there should be a thread about tanaka aji

MTSP is old and busted
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Gotta wonder, was that their first time visiting that beach?

I kind of remember someone saying they go every summer but the 2 groups never met before....

Isn't that a plothole ?
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>>4215358
Yuika said they used to go to that beach when children.
Something like Kyoka on her thirties, the girls with 9yo, and fifteen years old Curly and co.
Still it's just a comment, beaches can be big-ass sized.
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I want a tl of c88 and c89 of MTSP and Carn so bad but i got no money and no skillz
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>>4216660
You have no skills?
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>>4216660
OCRs/Scripting is the payment for translators. If you can get me the scripts for CARN, I will translate it since I'm working on a work of his.
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>>4216669
any decent guide available for OCRs/Scripting?
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>>4217194
The Capture2Text Sourceforge page (http://capture2text.sourceforge.net) is all you need and KanjiTomo for characters that C2T can't recognize. Both are easy to use, it just take effort and time.

Scripting/OCRing doesn't need to be 100% accurate since the translator will also check the scans but they will be times they may use a online dictionary if they do not recognize the character.
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Japs eternal casting for the live-action

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>>4218138
I can't believe they are actually threads full of bullshit and fantasy about an artist who struggles to deliver. He needs to go back to Sakiko and delve further in Sakiko's fall to pleasure. Plus Sakiko is the perfect MILF.
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>>4218306
55000 of them if we want to get accurate
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>>4218306
2ch is text only and prone to spaming
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>>4218306
It will take a Sakiko-san sequel showing more of Sakiko's training as shown in this page or a Yuika solo involving that "kinky friend" of the musclular guy to revive my interest on MTSP.
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>>4218537
Jin already delivered. You all forget he personally scripted the basics of the novel scenarios

top is redundant
middle was done with Kyoka using the two-piece bikini
bottom is novel epilogue
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>>4218547
Sakiko is hotter than Kyouka. Seriously, Kyouka's breasts are so massive Jin can't even draw them consistently in the manga. Same goes for Koharu too.
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>>4218549
And how does that affect the number of scenes? Te tachibana book appeals to cowtits lovers obvious.
Sakiko was darker cuz she became a slave to the cock and in perpetual suffering.
I dont like those stories that much, its better when the girl(s) path ends in consensual-ish sex.
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>>4218537
"kinky friend" of the musclular guy
who? you mean the gay bar they mentioned at the deluxe hotel.
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>>4218560
Gay bar? I don't remember any gay bars being mentioned anyway in the Tachibana series. Is that the fan fiction that the chinese invented again?

I'm talking about the friend of Yuika's partner who is apparently a sadist and will treat Yuika like a bitch.
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>>4218537
Sakiko-san was depressing
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>>4218572
Tachibana-san will be more depressing when Yuu finds out about that video, which is implied that he will in the future. Tachibana-san ending is just more subtle.
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>>4218567
I remember a gay bar right before the orgy. Fat penis dude did the mention.
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What are the best english versions of the Tachibana books and where can I get them?
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>>4218577
Sakiko-san leaves you feeling bad with yourself
Tachibana-san gets you pumped like doing ex
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>>4218590
http://nhentai.net/g/115996/
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>>4218584
Where? Manga or Novel? Why would a gay bar be doing in a hotel? Is that in the japanese version too?
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>>4218593
Thanks.
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>>4218596
Gay bar was "a place for your little friend(yuu) to have some fun too, because we have claimed all of your bodies and he must be starving" or something. They said that before the orgy.
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>>4218601
Is this a badly translated joke from the chinese translation of the novel? I don't get it. Why would Yuu go to a gay bar if the girls can still have sex with him.

This seems fanfiction to me since it's so out of place. Did any of the girls responded back?
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>>4218612
Nope.
Yukia frowned a little, Koharu stood mute(prolly wet herself) and Kyouka went pale so the leader shouted orders to the guys to shut their traps because they were scaring his woman.
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>>4218612
Do you need an specific quote for that? where are your deduction skills?
It's crystal clear they are having very little sex with Yuu with lights off. Their loyalties are with someone else now.
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I'm thinking about retranslating and "adapting" the manga to add emotions in the words of the characters and recheck the general translation. Do you guys think it's worth it? Say it in the poll.
http://strawpoll.me/7103195
>>4218630
Maybe with Koharu. But Yuika and Kyouka still cares about Yuu and there isn't a sex ban in the novel. They may not enjoy it with him but that doesn't mean they are not doing it with him.
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>>4218648
Are you Sands? I'm not familiar with your body of work , give us examples please
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>>4218657
I'm not him. Nevermind, I'm having one of those "I want to do it" spasms again. Does anyone have any OCRs of anything? I don't care of it's the C89 or C88 or the Chikan chapter. Jin has a massive fanbase, probably more than the fags from the okina thread and netoraserare thread combined but full of beggars who can't be asked to do anything. I feel so sorry for this guy >>4197398. He wants to do a translation but you guys can't provide any favors. If anyone has post it here and I'll translate it. Someone will have to typeset it though.

I guess I'll just translate that Mika IDOLM@STER doujin I saw on exhentai today.
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Shakuganexa isn't around so much as before but please talk to him

[email protected] or [email protected]
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>>4218704
I know the guys from the group received "donation OCRs" from some anons back in the day.
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moar japan casting. Yukya?
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>>4218764
Source? Seems decent.
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>>4218879
2ch, its an ongoing thing for years
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>>4218764
Any JAV code / nyaa.se magnet link for this?
Pls anon
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they are just 2chn casting proposals for tachibana as anon above said it. We don't post it here because it gets deleted i think
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>>4219011
>>4218926
>>4218764
This three are novel Yukia I'm almost sure
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>>4218963
sugoi
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That's some nice Yukias.

Still, this old but highly accurate novel epilogue is the best thing 2ch gave me.
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>>4218764
This is perfect. After the orgy, the guy will be treating her like this.
>>4218704
I agree. For example, this page could include some enhancements like tsundere language on Yuika.
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>>4219283
I would agree if it wasn't for his hand. The real Yukia need no pulling, she by her own rocks her hips as if trying to crush the guy's balls.
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>>4219309
You could make it more NTR like while still preserving the meaning, it shouldn't be hard:

"I'm really sorry Yuu... But right now, my body is simply uncontrollable..."
Having sex with them just feels so good...
So it's really impossible for me to continue pretending anymore..."

Also, I want to point out something:
"I'm being filmed... so...
Whatever I say will be recorded..."

The line is fine but I get the feeling it doesn't capture the actual meaning of the scene. I would completely exercise my creativity here and preserve he meaning in my own words like this:

"What's the point of asking me...?!
You just want to humiliate me by forcing me to admit my real feelings while being filmed...
Whatever I say will be recorded and I won't fell for..."

Then add this sentence in the white space below the next panel:
"But I just can't hold it in anymore..."
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>>4219351
Nicve. needs less words and a bit of proof-reading.

I'm novice to hentai but whats up with that girl?

>>4218963 and >>4219283 blonde I understand their drool and melt on sex but how can the black haired stay so calm and nonchalant about all? she's taking a dick inside for hours without movement and not going mad.

Or is the guy small? maybe she's a cripple from waist down, doesn't looks like! I always thought the battle was over once you get penetrated,
, Just what is she??!!?
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about tachibana san?

Is tachibana a slut?
Is she swallow this guy cum?
She dont want yuu anymore?
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>>4219381
>>4219520
Poor english-kun, welcome back.

Yeah yukia is strong and beautiful.
Bad things happened to her, but even after all we know, she is still the one with better chances of sticking to Yuu's side, even in a life without sex in the future.
Might become a slave to the guy and/or her own pleasure, but her heart stays pure.
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Assholes in charge of hentai animation can't raise the quality enough for Jin to make a contract with them.

Shame
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i found This
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>>4220113
>nothing on pixiv
sauce?
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>>4220113
Can't imagine her doing that. Maybe Koharu or the mindbroken Yuika from the novel (Her partner is a sadist after all). Koharu will probably be like Narika from BTH, acting all tsundere. I want a Tachibanas gangbang next chapter. There's hardly any double penetration sex in Jin's works. He's probably to bored to draw such.

>>4214262
Believe it or not, this is actually 100% true.
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>>4220147
>>nothing on pixiv
more like you suck at pixiv
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>>4220151
http://www.pixiv.net/search.php?s_mode=s_tag_full&word=MTSP

nothing
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>>4220113
0 yens?
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>>4220113
source?
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>>4220474
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=55818801
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Anyone has Jin's contribution for Orcsoft's Aisai Nikki special magazine? I can't find it anywhere.
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>>4220812
I have literally no idea what are you talking about.
Post all your clues and/or related info.
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fan made tachibana 3d hentai

http://livedoor.blogimg.jp/ntrblog2/imgs/5/2/52c84f79.jpg

too bad there is no voice acting
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>>4221242
Plot summary?
Manga, novel, or new universe?
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>>4221246

haven't watched it yet, but it looks like follow the novel
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>>4221242
Any link to the blog entry?
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>>4221262
http://ntrblog.com/archives/1054009107.html
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>>4221242
>>4221246
>>4221255
Who gived a fuck about a fan made 3D Illusion made movie? This is FAN FICTION. It's not canon or even related to Jin. Don't even request for a translation for this because it will only piss off potential translators more. Idiots.
>>4221242
I wonder why? Can't you think or do we have to spoonfeed it to you like a baby?
>>4221238
The one where the girl is being molested. It's only 2 pages long and is untranslated.
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>>4221242

A nice try, but not enough to satisfy the fanbase.

You want a REALLY AWESOME 3D version of "Tachibana-san" or even better of "Sakiko-san" story ? Then there's only ONE GUY who could do it : Umemaro 3D himself.
He's one of the best busty characters animators out there and he's been in business for more than 10 years as a 3D dojin animator.
Our best bet would be to send him a REQUEST about it.
If he says NO, then I guess our second choice could be none other than ONAGI. That guy has been doing some really impressive parodies of "Dead or Alive" and his "Soul Calibur" parody featuring Ivy was really stunning !
Plus, he speaks ENGLISH, so... ;-)
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>>4221333
Stupid fuck, you sound a lot like the retard troll that lurks this thread. No more replies for you.
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>>4221405
Troll? I'm just saying a lot of fans here needs to get their priorities right. Which would you prefer to be translated? A awful fanmade 3D hentai or the actual works of Jin? I'm also concerned that idiots like you will try to make up stuff from the video and present it as facts in this thread. Jin has one of the biggest fanbase around but he doesn't seem to be popular to translators, why is that? It's because his fans are crazy and perfectionists. Any translator would be frighten if every word of their translations is being scrutinize and debated by idiots. Most of you haven't realize it yet but QBTranslations really played it safe when translating the third chapter.
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http://www.xvideos.com/video17408171/javsd.net_-_fanfiction-movie-_-interlude
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what does it mean *playing it safe*?
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>>4221481
A barebone translation with application to the context. QBTranslation's version lack such application and while it has improvements, it still has faults and it is not perfect. In Coresplinter's version like the ending is translated better than QB's. Other than the first chapter, all the other chapters have major faults in them that's why we someone SKILLED to recheck the translations.
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The plot is retarded.
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>>4221521
And who's that skilled guy you talking about?
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>>4221653
No one in particular. We need a translator that has credibility and has high knowledge of Japanese. Maybe someone who has a lot of experience in translating manga.
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>>4221521
>top right
That's an award winning performance. Nobody would guess they are thinking of big large cocks behind those smiles.
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>>4218704
You wanna help? What's your contact mail?
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>>4222146
Just post any scripts that needs TL in here. I want to show to the idiots in here how easy it is to translate if you put in real effort instead of throwing money around.
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おーし
少しは
馴染んできた
んじゃねえかな?

胸もバカでない
けど お尻も
おっきいもんね
私より
楽かも

お前ずっと
ムリつってた
もんなあ

しっかしこれ
このカラダで
感度良いつったら
相当稼げるわ

この体位はンイツじゃ
一生できないだろうから
オレとヤったこと
忘れるなよ

分かったか?

ふえ?
あ・・・分かり・・・ました

よーし
イイ子だ
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あとがき

読んでくださった方、買ってくださった方、ありがとうございました

ということで、夏に遼坂家総集編と一緒に出される予定だったオマケ本です
元々は挿絵に加えて、ピンポイントに描きたい箇所だけ何点か加えるだけの
予定だったんですが、構成のバランスなどを考え始めてしまい
増えに増えてこんなことになりました

イベントCGの差分作成の練習も兼ねるはずだったんですが、
CG形式と漫画原稿形式では手順も管理も違うので、
あまり意味はありませんでしたね

そしてイベント二連続でまっとうな新作が無くて済みません
次は…次は大丈夫です…と、思います
もう繋ぎのネタもありませんので背水です

それでは、また次の作品で
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>>4222610
>>4222612
Cool. I'll translate these once I'm off work.
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まあ
おっきいけどさ・・・
入ってきたとき
ビックリはしたし

けど別に大した
ことない・・・

って思ったのに・・・

奥・・・叩かれると
シビれてくる・・・
お腹の深いとこ
やば・・・いの・・・
溜まってくる感じ・・・

あ・・・ヤベ・・・
ゴメン昨日から
すっげガマン
してっからもう・・・
う・・・
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>>4222615
looking forward to see the results of your hard work! Thanks for helping out!
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>>4212716
Almost everyone wants the novel, will you do it bit by bit?
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>>4222678
You're useless. You should start from the first page, not pick and select pages to test his skills.
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>>4218764
WHO THE FUCK IS THIS GOOD LORD
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>>4222792
Yua Sakuya
INU-047
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>>4222751
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>>4222678
Okkii Is the I ...
when I came
to surprised the separately big deal But ... never ... but I thought if back ... beaten ... come been Sibi deep stomach Toko Yaba ... Ino ... accumulated come feel ... Oh ... valley ... I'm sorry from yesterday Sugge endure another ... because began to jar ...
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>>4222678
top
>"I'll never lose to something like a mere cock !!"
bottom
>"turns out... I did lose"
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>>4221521

Can dsomeone expla>>4221521

Can someone explain me the top left part? I tried to think they get pregned, but doesn't make sense with the "Did you had it?" "No" part, I think I need someone to explain me what did they mean.
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>>4222912
>>4222925
Could we stop this. Anyone who is not a translator, fuck off and shut up. Starting from now. This thread is technically a translation thread. Let the translators translate the OCRs, not idiots like you.

This is easy to translate, beginner level. I'm not going to bother since someone is doing them. The only thing I'm going to say is the monologue doesn't belong whom who've been expecting.
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>>4222935
Their periods

Yukia "You had them?"
Koharu "...no..."
Yukia "i see.. i didn't as well.. mom as well"
Koharu "I..."
Yukia "Yes... please"
Other bubbles are from Kyouka

The mysterious one is Koharu. She was about to spill the beans(maybe the sisters are dating the guys) or just wants to keep the baby because... well, just because it hers.
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>>4222944
The translation needs to be tighter. Not a single chapter aside from the vanilla chapter has "perfect" translation.

Koharu's "I" could also be translated as "I"'m", which certainly confirms her pregnancy.
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if you want to translate the novel - just translate the orgy-chapter - it's culmination of the novel, results of trainings and yuika's final fall, and it didn't even had many illustrations
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>>4222964
No one is gonna translate the novel. Pay for a commission if you want.
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>>4222944
Stop interpreting fanfiction into it again.
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>>4222944
>>4222949
Thanks, now it makes some sense with the fact that they got pregned.
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>>4222993
Mr fagget, you seem to be against the girls doing the right thing = choosing a life with great sex instead of a useless shota.
Next time you'll post the phone call again and say the arrest thing is set in stone or some crap.
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>>4223060
Actually that's the ending of the manga. The guys got their asses busted in prison. The phone call is an undeniable proof the guys were arrested. The manga has ended. Why are you making stuff up? The ending doesn't need to be a happy ending, in fact the ending in Yaribeya Hen is tell us everything we need. Yes, the arrest thing is set in stone since the manga is complete, Jin already told that himself.

The novel is its own timeline. C89 is the proof of that. We all know the ending with the novel.
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Hey, let's send two beautiful young women with big breasts to take down a group of dudes that love to trick, rape and mind-break beautiful young women with big breasts. Sounds really really smart plan.

And both women are pretty much clones of yukia and koharu.

Jeez... I wonder what might go wrong?
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>>4223070
Cut the bullshit. The answer is in the manga. Stop denying it already. The novel already has an ending that will satisfy NTR fags.

Honestly, the novel has nothing to do with the manga other than the characters.
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>>4223084
are you coresplinter or a friend of his by any chance? there is no reason to be that much of a contrarian clown over a bad translation, unless you are deliberately trolling that's it.
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>>4223070
You're pulling stuff from your ass anyway. I already debunked every single pro NTR ending argument using facts from the actual manga.

The bad translations of the manga is partly responsible for people's wild imaginations. I think even QB purposefully fuck up his translation to justify his commission fee, there's just so many little mistakes. Even the novel has "add ons". shakuganexa made Yuika's and Yuu relationship more than it actually is and he seemed to trimmed some of Koharu's sex scenes for some unknown reason. For a beginner, I'm impressed he could do this much...
Talk about being bias. I cannot wait to rip the new translation of the matome ban chapter.
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>>4221521
Also, this is Coresplinter's version of the ending and it is a lot better than QB's. There are doujins where you could have the creativity in how you translate something because of the context. But in cases, where one cannot determine the context of what is being said, it is best to perform a bare translation withot changing any of the punctuations or structure of the text.
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>>4223093
I forget to mention the DM translation of the manga. Chapter 2 was a complete translation wreck, it's so bad and very sloppy. Good thing it's free because if someone commissioned it, that person wasted his money.
>>4223089
Don't be mean on translators. That guy has contributed to this community more than you could every have.
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>>4223101
>Don't be mean on translators. That guy has contributed to this community more than you could every have.
Perhaps. I have a different opinion. Either way, it's been a long time since the old translations of yaribeya and matome have been replaced.
Doujin-moe was bad too but their mistakes are in the middle and beginning of it, not on the later parts, that's why coresplinter will always looks more faulty.

There is no excuse for >>4223065 >>4223084 trying to spin things with the previous stuff when Sands already delivered on the last part.
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>>4223111
so what did Sands tell you again regarding the manga ending? i am curious.
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>>4223111
Who retranslated it? A ghost? Maybe a Yokai? Or maybe Baka Koharu?
Coresplinter's translation of the ending is perfect... The guys got arrested. There is proof of that in art and I don't think a retranslation can change that.

I think I know the angle you're aiming at but Coresplinter's translation is perfect at that too. Yuu will get his hands on the DVD in the future.

Who is this Sands anyway? Is he really credible? Or is he another fucking CGRASCAL? Now you made a claim, let's see how it stands in scrutiny.
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>who's sands
Oh christ are this guys for real? What a way to be disrespectful and ignorant about what this threads are about and what the guys of the group have done or tried to do at least. Go read the archives on your own if you really have to spur that stupidity, don't expect to be spoon-fed by us. Eat a dick.
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>>4223139
In exhentai, he has no releases. Except for the coming tachibana retranslation, he has no doujins or manga chapters translated to his name. Is his skills the same as coresplinter's and shakuganexa, two incompetent and ESL translators? From what I read in the Okina thread, he's simply a contributor and a backup translator. I wonder if we will receive another HORRIBLE TRANSLATION again.
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>>4222610
>>4222612
>>4222678
So, the new guy kept his word?
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>>4222925
Nothing gets me harder than Yukia being Yukia

>>4222993
>>4222995
Women don't get pregnant from legitimate rape. If they got like that it's because they wanted their children, no excuses.

>>4223065
>he thinks abortion will happen after the tremendous effort it took for everyone to achieve the goal
Wishful thinking. They will all bear strong babies, specially Yukia.
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>>4223673
What goal dumbass? They will abort because they don't give a fuck about the child. Maybe Koharu is afraid but they will go through with it. Women don't go pregnant with legitimate rape? Why is that? Can't you think? How many times did the guys cum inside the Tachibanas? 10 for each girl?

The novel caters your fantasy. Sucks it's untranslated.
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>>4223567
I'm busy. You can't wait?
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>>4223739
You're right, Yukia being forced to keep the baby in her belly makes a better story and more in-character.
She'll love him once it's born tho? I would pay a small fortune to have her reaction face right after giving birth.
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>>4223788
The Yuika after the orgy will probably do that. The guy is practically abusing her throughout it, not to mention actually wearing such childish bra and panty and taking part is a yuri play.
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>>4221418
>no sound

What's the fucking point ?
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>>4222827
You are going to heaven
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>>4211518
There's voice acting? How come it doesn't come with the files in the torrent?
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>>4224303
Just... Download the file of shakuganexa's website and run the game on your computer.

https://shakuganexa.wordpress.com/2015/07/14/garakuta-shoujo-lustful-berry-2-rain-of-the-end-and-the-beginning-english/

Believe or not, shakuganexa is a passable hacker.
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>>4224309
Here I thought it was in manga format. It says it's almost complete, will he be finishing it up or leaving it as is (would wait if he plans to finish all of it) and is there anything special I need for running it since it's a JP game?
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Say the bros were arrested, put on trial and you guys were the grand jury.

Given what you guys know, was it rape? Y/N?
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A decent Defense would make the women crumble on the stand. Even if the mother tried to save her daughters from the humiliation she'd still likely be forced to admit she ended up liking it, not to mention met up again later.

Unless the guys actually used more force in their videos with other women, no, the guys are guilty of being creepy assholes but not rape.
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>>4197398
>>4197516
>whats next for fate?
>2nd tank

Needs to reach its conclusion with the stronk fat ceo with exquisite taste knocking up rin (ho ho ho) and seiba then starting on rida.

Nothing else is acceptable.

This guy makes the best stronk fat characters.
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I'm sorry, I am a Japanese, but want to know it in poor English abroad what kind of reason it is from that Tachibana is popular
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>>4225819
because MTSP is the best thing ever
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>>4225819
One reason : Koharu-chan 小春-ちゃん
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>>4225551
>she'd still likely be forced to admit she ended up liking it

Not related to the case though. Such line of questionsing(whether the victim "enjoyed" the rape) has been dismissed multiple times IRL trial as normal physical response akin to twitching your knee when your knee tendon got nudged and has no bearing on the accusation. Fact is in modern non 3rd world country court the bros stand no chance, there were blackmails and threat of physical violence involved, end of story.

But then again, if I'm on the jury based on the doujin, the girls were absolutely asking for the D and will probably acquit the bros because they were sending mixed signal, but just to be realistic I'm gonna be on the minority for sure.
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>>4225551
Inconsistent testimonies with yuika and kyouka admitting unable to deny they wanted the dick by the end, and even one of the "victims"(Koharu) head over heels over the accused.

If I was jury, the 3 Tachibanas will be obligated to go trough full pregnancy and delivery so parenthood tests can be properly done and confirm the rape.
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>>4226356
>Inconsistent testimonies with yuika and kyouka admitting unable to deny they wanted the dick by the end, and even one of the "victims"(Koharu) head over heels over the accused.
Unless they have electric dildo up their asses or massively drugged with rape pills, no rape victim worth any salt would admit that. They'll do the bodily function defense which has precedence in previous rape cases. Also even if the video is shown to everyone, the Tachibanas can still use the drug arguments. The bros even boast on camera on drugging the girls

>If I was jury, the 3 Tachibanas will be obligated to go trough full pregnancy and delivery so parenthood tests can be properly done and confirm the rape
You're just doing that out of sadism boner wanting to see the girls pregger and tortured (which my dick kind of want to also). However that kind of reasoning would not fly in court. They can easily abort the babies and DNA test the aborted fetuses
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>>4226369
I agree with him tho; Koharu will undo any trial, the guys are safe.
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>>4226374
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>>4223084
>>4223093
Probably just imagining alternative ending. Maybe anon can imagine Yukia and Koharu as the policewomen
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Good points. On the other hand, the drugs, blackmail and threats would be tricky to prove and undermined by the fact the guys used tricks and manipulation successfully so they never really had to resort to the threats, just suggestions that they would have if they didn't get blowjobs.

My point was more that it would be simple for the defence to suggest these single women were given a sensual massage and one thing lead to another. None of them would admit to their relationships with Yui [and that could potentially be used as a means of manipulating them on the stand to admit they wanted sex with the guys on more than just a physical level].

The defence could argue they were on holiday, enjoyed themselves, even allowing themselves to be taped and then maybe regretted things when they found out they were pregnant weeks later. The women barely resisted and the argument could be made they were in an area where it would have been easy to get help. The guys didn't have weapons and never hit them. The drugs issue would be hard to get over given the girls didn't go to the doctors and therefore it could be argued they simply drank a little too much [but not nearly enough to be incapacitated].

Unless the prosecution could bypass these defenses with tapes [and other testimonies] proving the guys were sexual predators who coerce women into making porn, the guys have too many ways to undermine the girls' credibility in court. They used [likely unrecorded] suggested threats and emotional blackmail and are supported by the women followed them to another room and even one of them met up again later for another long sex romp.
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>>4226460
I guess it depends on how much exactly of the tapes that leak out. If the bros had the chance to tamper and cut some parts they don't like, then they'll prolly get away. However, if the full tapes got confiscated then they're TOAST.

> The drugs issue would be hard to get over given the girls didn't go to the doctors and therefore it could be argued they simply drank a little too much [but not nearly enough to be incapacitated].
The bros were boasting on tapes while fucking the girls on how they drugged them ON CAMERA. Goes something like:
Yuika: It must be the drugs
Rapist: So you know! Touche

>proving the guys were sexual predators who coerce women into making porn
They're "profesional" porn videographers. Shota kid was watching their massage rapey porn before they raped his waifus. It's gonna be very easy to dig out previous rapey porn from the bros and grab more girls/victims to testify against them.

The bros are guiltier than OJ. As long as the jury doesn't consist of woman hating /pol/tards they're toast
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>>4226468
anon... OJ is innocent
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>>4226562
Technically.
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>>4225213
Let me apply what I learn in Criminal Law module in my law course. Under Sexual Offenses Act 2003, Section 1 states the Actus Reus for rape is the penetration of the vagina, anus or mouth and the female does not consent to the penetration. There is penetration on vagina, mouth and anus to the Tachibanas so the Actus Reus for rape is established. The only defense for rape in consent.

The Mens Rea for rape is satisfied if it can be proven:
1. There is an intentional penetration by the defendant.
2. The defendant did not reasonably believed the victim consented to the penetration.
However, it is up to the jury to decide whether a belief is reasonable considering all circumstances and the steps the defendant took to ascertain the victim's consent.

Section 74 states a person can consent if he/she agrees by choice, has the freedom to do so (R v Jheeta) and has the capacity to make that choice (R v Bree).

In any case, there is a evidential presumption against the defendant under Section 75. All the prosecutors need to do is prove that there is one circumstance under Section 75(2) giving rise that the presumption existed at the time of the act and the defendant knew this. The circumstances are:

1. Use or threat of violence on the person by anyone.
2. Use or threat of violence on a third party by anyone.
3. Person is unlawfully detained.
4. Person is asleep or unconscious.
5. Person is unable to communicate consent due to disability.
6. There is substance administered to the person by anyone that can render a person to a state which he/she will be influenced to give consent.

Applying this on the Tachibanas, all existed except 4 and 5 at the time of the rape and the guys knew this. It is up to the guys to raise an issue arguing proper consent may have been and if he does, the prosecution must prove consent is not given.
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Well, the guys would easily get nailed for wiring peoples rooms with cameras without their knowledge. And if the prosecution got the waitress to testify against the guys they'd have multiple charges to bring against them.
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>>4226643
Why are you all applying US laws to this? All of this is set in Japan, where it's pretty much "guilty until proven innocent", especially for rape.
The rapists have no chance of getting away from this whatsoever.
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>>4226643
The women half of the jury will be too jealous of the Tachibanas to consider them anything more than sluts.
The men half will consider the massage dudes total heroes and gives them free pass.
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>>4226803
There are no jury systems for courts in Japan.
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>>4226905
Jury of one then, same thing applies.
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>>4226950
Judges aren't as stupid as your average NTRfag.
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>>4226966
Netorare is the thinking's man fetish. It's only natural for a Japanese judge to be a follower.

Checkmate
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>>4226978
if by thinking you mean delusional then yeah, checkmate.
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>>4226643
So according to you are they going to jail or not?( If they were on U.S. jurisdiction, in japan is different)

>>4226700
>All of this is set in Japan, where it's pretty much "guilty until proven innocent"
What about human rights they dont apply there?
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they rapists
they canon going to jail
the end
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>>4227138
>>4226978
grasping at straws

They all end up as a big family, my non-believer anons
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>>4227136
Prosecution directing the trial at will, police having arbitrary powers of detention and interrogation to coerce a confession, 99% conviction rate, people dying in police custody despite a vastly lower arrest rate than virtually everywhere in the US or Yurop, etc.
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>>4227138
>current year
>still believing this
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>>4227199
enjoy you're headcanon
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>>4227552
drop it
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>"Finally, horribly, some rapists enjoy making their victims' bodies respond to the assault as a sign of dominance. These rapists work to get a physical response from their victims. They have learned how fear and anxiety can correspond to other forms of heightened arousal, and they exploit the connection."
http://www.popsci.com/science/article/2013-05/science-arousal-during-rape

A lot of the studies on rape victims involve self-reported answers and are therefore unreliable.
I honestly believe that all the legal/social shame bullshit behind rape is to mask human's primal nature: to take and be taken. If a woman is raped and she orgasms, it is complete bullshit to turn around and say she didn't consent. She had an orgasm. Put yourselves in her shoes. You're having a FUCKING ORGASM. YOU'RE ENJOYING THE EXPERIENCE. Feeling bad about it later doesn't mean shit. Own your primal desires.

A woman who is raped is damaged goods permanently. It's a hard fact of life. She has been emotionally and physically bonded to 'her' rapist.*
*ever notice how women in particular use the possessive when describing rape incidents? If you're so ashamed why is it YOUR rapist and not the MAN WHO RAPED YOU?

Your body and your mind are not separable here. "Consent" never exists in nature.


"Rape" is a social construct. Forcing yourself on someone and making them orgasm is simply an act of dominance and a natural expression of gender polarity. There is no 'rape' in nature.

This applies for man on woman rape, woman on man rape, and all other gender/non-gender combinations.
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>>4228688
But anon, what you're talking about is nothing more than reactions. If I chop up your head, you will die, dying is the reaction. Complete bullshit.

Isaac Newton's Third Law states every action has a reaction. If the action is rape or sex, orgasm is the reaction but the two actions are different in nature. One is done with consent while the other isn't. It is the actions that define the reactions not the other way around.

Reactions are uncontrollable.
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>>4228704
Consent exist in nature because otherwise, rape and sex will not have contrasting reactions. Orgasm is not the only relevant "reaction", the pain, suffering and feelings that occurred are also reactions as well.

The use of possessives is irrelevant. Using mere words is does not make something a fact. Gender polarity doesn't really exist in nature. All physical differences don't really matter when girls can kill just like guys. Girls can do anything a guy can, the only difference is how they do it in some actions where physical differences mean that girls will do it differently with guys.

The last time I checked, psychologists are full of shit. Since when the hell did they start reading the minds of people. For example, Fred's theories on behaviour would be considered pseudo science today like paranormal studies since it has no factual basis other than circumstantial evidence. The only contribution of psychology to society is raising awareness is mental abnormalities.
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>>4228688
webm sauce?
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>>4228728
Learn to use Google, saucefag. It's 2016, you have no excuse anymore.
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>>4228688
But anon we already know they had consent (eventually)
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>>4219011
amazing tits.
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>>4230345
Drugging and blackmailing doesn't count as consent anywhere. Stop with your fanfics.
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>>4230419
Your case won't fly no matter how you spin it.
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>>4230421
Consent under duress is not consent.
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>>4230447
Not even him but :

he whispers in her ear
vs
her screaming for more cock
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>>4230447
>>4230462
Stop trying to rationalize porn with a plot as solid as wet tissue paper. It's just sad. Just masturbate to the tits and move on.
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>>4230519
The plot is more solid that your average anon.
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>>4230523
I know erectile dysfunction was a problem, but not that it was so widespread. Sorry to hear that.

If you want porn with a good plot go read some visual novels. /jp/ has a thread dedicated to them.
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>>4230441
He's just chilling while inside Yuika, not even with a boner, not even fully inside just half. How does that quality as DISTRESS / TORTURE ??

She didn't even lose to him, she lost to herself. You can see the exact moment Yuika swallowed her pride and trade it for pleasure.

This "legal case" has no legs to stand.
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>>4230600
See
>>4230447

Also this:
>>4230553

It's no wonder translators aren't interested in Jin when there's so many idiots in these threads.
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>>4230979
>again
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testing
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>>4232618
Still no progress...
Putang ina, mga tamad and bobo ang mga tao dito sa thread.
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>>4232668
>le phili and proud meme
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>>4232670
Every filipino on this thread, let's wipe out the spanish speaking assholes terrorizing translators in here.
>>4222610
You do not have the right to test someone especially you don't know Japanese.
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>>4230979
Gonna weigh on this one last time.
To go back to the original question- if a jury knew EXACTLY what happened then, Yes, absolutely, it was rape using drugged drinks and coercion, even if they did end up enjoying it.

On the other hand, if the case revolved around testimony and evidence gathered once the charges had been made then, well, the defence could have a field day demanding proof the drinks were drugged, questioning why the women never tried to fight or get help in any real way. Many people would find their reasons for passively going along with the guys' requests pretty weak and the fact they agreed to massages then blowjobs suggestive that they kinda wanted it all along.
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>>4232715
But we saw EXACTLY what happened, that's why we know the bros are safe and free to make sure those babies grow strong.
>>
So many pregnancy fetishists for MTSP when the fact of the matter is he has never drawn a big belly. I don't think he's fond of the idea.
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>>4232715
Good thing Japan uses an inquisitorial tribunal system where 99% of indictments lead to a conviction.
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>>4233224
If anything he loves to finish pregnancies.
Japan stance on abortion is unknown to me.
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>>4234256
You missed the memo where the detectives are screwing things up on their own. http://exhentai.org/s/e723b7c726/888924-210
This arrest thing is a hoax or half-measure only.

>>4234381
Flash news : she got pregnant because they accepted his sperm. Can't rape the willing.

(moving this from the wrong thread)
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>>4234435
You're interpreting things that aren't there and keep talking bullshit.
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>>4234438
which part?
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>>4197398
>>4234435
Yuka superb tightness really backfired on her.

It cockblocked Yuu making his penetration superficial only, also made him cum quick and left her unsatisfied with a few shakes. Plus condoms.

Roided bro on the other hand overpowered her tightness and got heaven pleasure out of her. The more she crushed his raw dick the best it felt for both. Highly addictive.
>>
Thread is dead. No new translations, no new scans, no hope. Maybe I just need to accept the hard fact that despite the popularity of MTSP, no one actually want to work on any of his works. Even a donor project would work.
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>>4235158
Up above there's a guy that requested ocrs to translate. We gave him 3 pages but he didn't reply.
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>>4222678
>>4223788
Why she didn't shut tight her vagina to protect herself and avoid penetration? That's a legit defense method and even causes lost of sexual desire on plenty of rapists.
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>>4233322
Ok which one of you guys was spamming the anti-NTR thread?
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>>4235163
Dude was a hoax

>>4235347
I kind of remember a rape story where the female's womb could actually reject the sperm of men that weren't her chosen one.
Don't know if the semen magically vanished or was just expelled.

IIRC it was a monster girl...
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>>4197398
Is there still no translation for the Rider Omake? This is insane.

I'm working on translating it myself, but my Japanese is pretty shit.
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>>4235566
OCRs?
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>>4235572
I have no idea what that means. Optical Character Recognition?

I have the Japanese script in a text file after spending far too long drawing out each character into an online tool.
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>>4235584
share it please
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>>4235586
Here http://pastebin.com/1qrEGz3z

I also did the other omake pages with adult Saber, Bazzet and that girl from Shirou's school. Sorry if there are any mistakes.

Oh, and sadpanda has the entire compilation uploaded at absurd resolution.
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cool
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>>4235594
Nice to see proactive anons.
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>>4234435
Damn, his art has improved.

>>4235594
Thanks anon
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>>4235594
I may do this. I hope anons here wouldn't mind "in doujin" references and jokes.
>>4222610
Caution: Lazy translation of some bubbles

This sucks. At least resist some more!
I guess she already got used to my huge dick, isn't it? I can't blame her though.

Come to think of it, her breasts are so fucking huge, it's unbelievable! Not only her breasts, but her ass is also magnificent too? Oh well, the bigger the are, the more I love it.

Are you enjoying it? How's my dick compared to the wimp beside us? He can't even break your hymen properly!
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>>4235566
I think we would prefer to see shakuganexa's "self insert myself" translation. Read this and tell me what's wrong with it:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/918576/3e8a1c75c5/
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>>4235594
This is nice.

>>4235705
That guy is such a brute; simple as fuck.
Now I see why he fell for Koharu's charms in the end.
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>>4235705
I thought all of them had petite asses
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>>4234435

From which book is this scene? Can't find it or even remember it.
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>>4235534
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>>4235884
Fanart.

>>4235874
Yuika has no ass. Koharu is plump in all the right places.
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>>4235705
>the waitress stays mute
Are you making this up?
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>>4235934
Can't you read? "Lazy" translation. Whether I'm making this up or not, why don't check? Since they are barely any speech marks, I do not know who's saying it so I'm presuming it's the guy. The important is meaning and I think I got that, although my choice of words may well be poor. I wasn't serious with this anyway.

Fucking complains again. That's what you guys do all time in this thread, why am I so surprised.
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>>4235974
A simple admission would do *sigh*

'omae' is male exclusive
'atashi' is the waitress
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>>4235594
Good we can begin. Let's play a translation game. Next anons must fill out the next three bubbles or otherwise shut the fuck up.

page 1
bubble
うーん...
Seriously...

いつものスーパーじゃ
無理だよなぁ..
Everything on this list are not usually stocked in a super market...

結構あちこち
回らないと
I guess I have to go around town to find these things...
What a bother...

ここって確か...
I thought so...


やっぱり
After all...


ライダー
こんにちは
仕事だったんだな


こんにちは
土郎

ーいえ
いらっしゃいませ

Machine translations is welcome, I'll correct them anyway. I wonder how ridiculous the translations will be.
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>>4236037
>ライダー
>こんにちは
>仕事だったんだな
Rider, hello.
So this is where you work.

>こんにちは
>土郎
Hi, Shirou.

>ーいえ
>いらっしゃいませ
Tell me, what do you need?
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>>4236048

はは ごめん
お客のつもりは
ないんだ
Hahahaha! Sorry! Sorry!
I'm not here to visit as a customer.

ライダーの
綺麗な色の髪が
見えたからつい
I just saw the beautiful purple colour of rider's hair, so I figured you would be here and I came by to visit and talk to you, that's all.

box
...他意はない
のでしょうけれど
Hmm...
He doesn't seem to have any bad intentions...
But then again...

Next lines are Sakura's debut!
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>>4236060
Next lines:

桜はどうしてるかな?
最近あんまり
会える機会がなくてさ

学校と家のことで
少し忙しくしていますね...

貴方に会えないと
ぼやいていますよ
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>>4236062
I'm going to sleep now so I need someone else to take over for about 7 hours. I'll do the rest of the page if anyone haven't done so when I wake up.
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>>4236062
>桜はどうしてるかな?
>最近あんまり
>会える機会がなくてさ
How is Sakura doing?
I have not seen her lately

>学校と家のことで
>少し忙しくしていますね...
School and housework have kept her busy...

>貴方に会えないと
>ぼやいていますよ
She complained too about not meeting you
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>>4236086
>>4236060
WE DO HAVE TRANSLATORS ON THIS THREAD! WHY THE FUCK HAVE YOU GUYS BEEN SILENT ALL THIS TIME!
>>4236086
DON'T WAIT FOR THE OTHER GUY! HURRY UP AND TRANSLATE THE REST!
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>>4236086
HERE YOU GO!

貴方に会えないと
ぼやいていますよ


あ... これは
内密に


ん...
桜は頼まれたら
いくらでも仕事
引き受けちゃい
そうだしなあ
それは貴方のこと
でしょう
また何か厄介ごとに
首を突っ込んでいるのでは
ないですか?

いや
今は特にはー

Page 2
Bubble
ーない...

それぞれすべきことも
あるでしょう
時には
見守ってあげるのも
大事なのでは

...少し前に
一成のヤツにも同じようなことで
お説教されたよ...

仕事中に
ゴメン

桜にも よろしく
言っておいて
もらえるかな

...はい
お任せを

box
...あの言い方では
まるで事情が
分かっているとー...
bubble
...やぁ
ちょっと良いかね
店員さん


トイレを
貸してもらえるかね
なあた
すぐ済むから


まあ...準備が悪いと
ちょっと時間がかかる
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>>4236096
>cumdumpster rin
You had to post the shittiest of Fate girls. Forget it.
>>
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/921532/3df14bfb2d/
C89 is translated by a great translator.
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oh jesus!
fap night
>>
Downloading...!!
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>>4236125
hype
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>>4236125
How many different ends is this whole story going to have?
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>>4236125
Greato
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>>4236125

GLORIOUS
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>>4236125
so, koharu surrendered from the begining ? ... and someone even tried to prove that she is not a retarted slut =_=
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>>4236266
Yuika tried to play hard and got mentally scarred possibly for years. For all her efforts she end up as an abused sex friend crying in regret/pleasure.

I say Koharu was smarter and got in a mutual relationship with the man. They can't keep their hands from each other at the orgy. He even pet her and she smiles back.
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>>4236272
yuika's case is special - she tried to play hard, but subconsciously enjoyed this kind of abuse
koharu doesn't resist and begins to obey and enjoy, when her ' boyfriend ' lies next to them ...a typical ntr-whore
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>>4236274
She's too pure. C89 is short but her novel scene is the real source here.
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>>4236274
I'm sorry when do you see her "obeying"?
All of them enjoy sex btw, even the waitress.
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>>4236278
c89, p48, no ?
yeah, all of them, but yuika and kyouka, at least, did put some resistance
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>>4236282
A 200 lb man is mating pressing Koharu and you want her pull out somehow?
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>>4236282
you mean this
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>>4236282
>a typical ntr-whore
Funny because Yuika was already in that same position.
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>>4236291
>remember this position belongs to us alone
Awww. Jins's idea of romance?
[spoiler]I don't hate it.[/spoiler]
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>>4236291
Koharu is so pure she would fell in love with the first man to be bold and make her a woman leaving his mark all over her.

The boy Yuu failed to fulfill her natural instincts. In fact he failed all of them by mixing harem dreams with reality.

Had he picked one alone before the trip, he had a real chance of getting into that girl's heart for good.
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>>4236276
Koharu never had a chance anyway...
She got nailed with further aphrodisiac. Seems Jin really retconned stuff too.
The funny thing is, Yuika's USB would have nailed all of them in prison even if it is only their sex video with Yuu.
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>>4236286
nope, just put some resistance, at least verbally
>>4236292
i'm talking about the novel
and yuika is big m-slut, all her "resistance" just for further "punishment"
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>>4236600
Yuika didn't embrace the guy
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I officially don't care what happens with Yuu now. Just send him to some American university for 5 years ffs!

This two degenerates are too god damn perfect for each other, and the same for Yuka and Koharu. MTSP gotta keep the 2 groups forever entwined.
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>>4236637
>I officially don't care what happens with Yuu now.

Nobody should care. In the novel version Yuu is a petty, selfish, ungrateful bastard who doesn't even love any of the girls. Kyouka also blatantly said that she has no feelings for Yuu, if shaku's translation is to be believed.
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>>4236641
Let's bash the translators more, OK? So they won't translate MTSP works again. Even the translator of the omake admitted having difficulties in translating C89, that translator has a N1 and much more experience than shakuganexa.

>Posted on 06 April 2016, 06:46 UTC by: >N04h PMScore +90
>Sorry about the translation of some of the dialogue.
>Even I had trouble understanding some of the lines since I don't know the original material very well.

I think someone already reviewed shakuganexa's translation and stated that it has a details missing in sentence structure and very unrefined. The first chapter is barely readable although the translation has improved in the next two chapters. That's why he wanted to retranslate it again.
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Can anyone understand the bottom part? What's going on here?
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>>4236675
>>4236669
Sands could do it better on the hard parts; seems more patient and already did the matome. He could recognize who's talking and towards who.
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>>4236675
A wild guess: The bottom zone has 5 bubbles right-to-left.

- The first four are from a random couple that just happened to hear koharu's moans and are bewildered by it.

- The last one is Curly and belongs to the trio talking on next page.
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>>4236683
No he won't. The translation is as raw as it could have. Sands doesn't even have an N1 or any qualifications. We are talking about one of the top 5 hentai translators currently alive. Unless the characters have accents, it's impossible to know who's talking to who.
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>>4236637
>I officially don't care what happens with Yuu now.
Because he has a small dick, like every generic MC in every generic NTR ever?
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>>4236683
Also guys, sands is coresplinter level. His translation will probably be another screwjob.
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>>4236710
Remember.
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>>4236710
>>4236696
Without bashing anyone or praising them to heaven, Sands is good (I have seen what he can do first hand) and N04h >>4236669 admitted he couldn't grasp the meaning of certain pages (the text-only ones).

Maybe it was worked in a rush overnight, only he knows.
Anyway, most of the Omake is now done thanks to N04h and Herzer, we will have to figure out the obscure parts by ourselves.
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>>4236704
He knows and we know he doesn't deserve them.
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>>4236720
The translation is clear. N04h admitted not knowing the context but not the meaning. The translation is as it is in japanese. Please don't tell me that guy is planning to mix details of the story into the translations because it would not simply work especially on the text only pages. These two pages are new.

We are talking about someone who is experienced than this Sands guy you trust so much. Plus you admitted yourself you don't know japanese so how could you know if he's good or not. Is he rewriting instead of translating? Could you please make sure you're not ruining the series again with awful translations or rewrites. Accusations can damage a translator's credibility even if they are baseless.
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>>4236736
The point is that it doesn't need literal translation but interpretation.
A japanese child could understand perfectly without problems but we english speakers obviously need clarification.
Prolly only a skilled translator could do it.. Not a pure text translator but a japanese speaker one.
>>
Im new here.

Can anyone tldr me this story?
I get that the 3 girls liked the guy/mc?.
they got drugged and raped?
they started accepting the 3 guys.
they got pregnant and didnt abort.
if all of this is correct,what's happening with our mc now,how did this story end and do they still love the mc?
and do they still see the 3 guys or did they get arrested or something?
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>>4236738
This is very very dangerous. Even the Japanese struggle to decipher the meaning in their 2CH debates. Interpretations are not accurate and literal translation is a must for no context or vague dialogues. Do not fucking dare to interpret a dialogue because you will destroy the meaning. In fact, could you just stop working on the series since you may well be destroying it with fan fictions. Fuck you Pamon or Sands or who the fuck you are for trying to ruining this series. We do not want your shitty interpretations. You do not even know shit about Japanese so how you could make stupid claims is beyond me.

I respect shakuganexa's decision to drop the novel because I know that deep inside him, even if he refused to admit it, he was having a really hard time translating the sex scenes. I'm gonna blow his cover now and say he really struggled translating the sex scenes of the novel. In fact, he omitted specific details like actions between Yuu's penis and the girl's vaginas and the reaction of the girls labia. That is not to say he is a bad translator but doujins rarely go to detail physical interactions during sex.
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>>4236763
>liked
they LOVE the mc

>pregnancy
>abort
>arrest
throw a coin
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>>4236769
I'm saying this as a N3 student. Shaku was simply choose the wrong time to start translating. He is far too inexperienced when he started translating the novel.
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>>4236769
Take a breath dude, you sound on edge.
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>>4236728
>he doesn't deserve them.
They're all whores in the novel anyway. Especially that retarded Koharu people like to defend all the time.
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>>4236812
She's a cute, A CUTE !!
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>>4236812
Koharu "pee" on Yuu's face in the novel...
Just kidding, the guy fuck Koharu while carrying her above Yuu's face and sweat, fluids and pre cum was dripping in his face. Waitress loved Koharu too and had a real yuri play with her.
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>>4236817
I don't care if rapists love that retard.
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>>4236819
Koharu and the muscleman are like a couple in the novel. Their sex scenes during the orgy are pure vanilla, no resistance or struggle, just lots of kissing, breast sucking and sex.
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>>4236822
Not a couple until they say *i love you* or she leg-locks.
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>>4236822
In fact, Koharu was moving by herself and cuddling her partner, she never does this with Yuu I think. Of course, she also does leg locks...even during her first sex with the guy. She does say "I love his huge dick and it was three times the size of Yuu" and said "We can't lose to my sister" then she become more proactive in the orgy. She lift her skirts before the guy told her and her panties was already soaking wet before the orgy started.
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>>4236830
I remember the other 4 leave the scene while Koharu is sitting on the big guy's lap.
No penetration tho, I think they were just catching up.
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>>4236834
That's when the guy was sucking Koharu's breast and groping them softly. She never struggled.
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>>4236838
And she was caressing his balls, but no penetration tho.
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>>4236839
The sex came after but isn't that Vania enough for you? Yuika or Kyouka never did that to their partners. The love is mutual.
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>>4236841
*vanilla
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>>4236830
>she was cuddling her partner
how can a woman do that?

>>4236841
By your definition Yuika is in love with blonde guy.
She's the only one who french kissed him of her own will, twice.
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>>4236846
The guy forced her to do so. Koharu did that with her partner as well voluntarily. Yuika was resisting all the way through until the guy pull her nipples and pinch them super hard and mocking her.
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>>4236841
Stop making NTR into Vanilla. Just because she's a retard and accepts being a toy doesn't make this Vanilla.
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>>4236847
You can't fool me. I matched this with the novel translation.
Yuka kissed him for a very long time right after bottom panel, he didn't say a word.
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>>4236849
Because he was teasing the end of her pussy + ovulation + a tight embrace + leg-locking + he's handsome.

She kissed him with her body not with her heart.
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>>4236847
yuika and blonde guy
KISU キス
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>>4236847
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>>4236849
Novel translation? It doesn't exist. It doesn't really count if she is still under the influence of the sex drugs, very fatigue and close to passing out and the guy restrained her. Look how he was holding her head, he forced her. Yuika lost her first womb virginity to the guy. Like a lot of people said, Yuika suffered the most during her solo sex scene. She was forced to have french kisses but it was hardly voluntary.

But during the orgy it was different, Yuika was moaning whenever the guy punch her womb. By then, Yuika was a full fledged bitch, her saggy breasts are a mark of a slave.
>>4236848
It's true, Koharu loved her partner.

It confirmed that Yuu's dick can't even reach Yuika's womb.
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>>4236869
Koharu and Kyouka took drinks on the massage and karaoke.
But Yuika took nothing, that's why she beated the blonde guy the first rounds.
Eventually he overcome her will power and her body, but it was all him from the beginning.
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>>4236849
This really needs shakuganexa scanning treatment because the scans are super contrasted. The asshole who scan this didn't even use black paper.

I really want to see Yuika with her saggy breasts. Can someone photoshop this image of hers with a saggy breasts version and pierced nipples version? Thanks!
>>4236872
She passed out though. The guy kept cumming as in the omake so she never beat the guy despite what a lot claim.
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>>4236879
>thanks for that
what a whore
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>>4236879
More than porn actress they are all super models
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>>4236879
Shakuganexa summon ritual
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>>4236913
Too busy playing with Beat Blades Narika.
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>>4236869
>>4236879
>saggy breasts

I thought it was debunked as artifact of the Chinese translation. I'm not even sure what's real and what's not anymore, because I can't read any of the fucking wiggles but I'm so tired of all this back and forth; how come there's so many headcannons, interpretations, and fanfiction from a presumably fairly straightforward and simple entry level fap smut read. It's not that we're trying to translate Haruhi Murakami's work.
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>>4236669
>Let's bash the translators more, OK? So they won't translate MTSP works again
How am I bashing any translation? I'm just saying from the single English translation we have, from reading it Yuu is a selfish ungrateful bastard. I brought the believability of the translation as a caveat because I know many people don't like it for reasons that beyond me, I'm sorry I can't into moon.

>I think someone already reviewed shakuganexa's translation and stated that it has a details missing in sentence structure and very unrefined.
Source? Are you spreading unfounded rumor and meta fanfiction again?
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>>4236943
Shakuganexa translation of novel doesn't lack details. Instead, it has too many details even to the point that some stuff barely implied he extrapolated to great extents.
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>>4236946
Okay, do you have any evidence to back your claim? Like quote a page where he translated wrong, or if you're >>4236669 and said "someone already reviewed" please show that review work.

Sorry I'm not trying to call you out, but the headcannon injection into the meta-interpretation of questioning all the translations we had is out of control, with many anons, presumably some of them are trolling going back and forth endlessly and it is frustrating to the non-moon reader to know what the fuck is really happening
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>>4236950
Maybe something like this? >>4235711
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>>4236950
>>4236946
>>4236943
It's called creative direction you doofus.

Nothing to bash anyone for.

Feel free to request him a "prime translation" though.

I would welcome it too.
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For Kyouka and all the Tachibana bitches, pic related is how you do it. How fucking hard is it?
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>>4236959
Low test. The brute dude would have her on the ground before she could finish.
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>>4236959
THIS is how you do it. And yes, it's hard.
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>>4236953
>Haru will be masturbating from sex videos like those doujins by Carn (Otome Dori), Fatalpulse (Fleshness and his Code Geass doujin) and Darabuchi (LOVERS).

What about it? He made me laugh with that one. That's what you call creative license and it was well used here.
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Posted on 25 March 2016, 15:48 UTC by: Hinagiku KatsuraScore +136
@shakuganaexa
No offense but I've seen some of your translations. The pattern I see is that a few details get lost in your translation and you try to make it up by observing the story. Not saying it's a bad thing of course, but you do lose some details when you translate. You sometimes also failed to know who actually said the lines.

For example, this page of yours: http://exhentai.org/s/4ab660d13b/862567-19
Third panel: "ぶっ壊してやる"
You wrote: "Someone save me... please don't hurt me..."
When in fact that line actually means: "We will break you." or "We'll break the shit outta you."
Which means not only did you translate it incorrectly, you also got the speaker wrong.

Just wanted to let you know since I only translated this manga because someone else didn't translate it correctly right here: http://exhentai.org/g/916464/9048f9f5f5/
Had you gone ahead and translated it, I might need to translate it again either way.

Of course, we're all learning and I'm not here to start a fight. I'm just letting you know some small mistakes you made.
Posted on 25 March 2016, 16:48 UTC by: shakuganaexaScore +44[Edit]
@Hinagiku Katsura
Thanks for the feedback! I love receiving criticisms from other translators since I know I'm not perfect! Truth to be told, I confess changing that line since I wanted to add a monologue to the girl before she got gangbanged.
Since my learning of Japanese was literally a crash course (I have only started learning February last year and about 70% are self studied), I still have a lot of things to learn and improve on. Thanks for translating this series again. I feel more comfortable reading in English than in Japanese.
Posted on 25 March 2016, 16:53 UTC by: Hinagiku Katsura
@shakuganaexa
No worries, man. I can tell from your translations that you have been improving after each release. Keep it up! We all can only get better through gaining more experiences. :)
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>>4236950
Here you go: >>4236974
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>>4236974
Constructive critics? great.

Plenty of translators love to season their works to make them personal.

So we need a "prime translation" after all.
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>>4236978
A prime translation and then a flavored-shakuganexa translation (I heard he favors Yuika).
Where do we sign?
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Hey, reposting from >>4237002

I wish Tachibana-san was more clear. I have so many questions that have answers hinted at, but are never actually answered.

Was the sex with the kid actually awful and they were just pretending to like it?

Did the girls actually get addicted to the D, or was it just a one night thing?

Why did the mother go back to the guy after the one night?
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So something interesting I just noticed because I'm an idiot who glossed over pages Jin previously drew:

So there's the end monologue by Shota where he sees Kyouka go out (to the hotel with Curly in Matome Ban). At the end of the previous scene where Kyouka pulls off from Curly she redresses in her white bra/panties.

Then Curly attempts to get her to have sex with him in the car and it cuts to Shota's day because Jin ran out of time or whatever.

When Kyouka returns and goes to the shower, Yuu finds her panties are stained with cum. Which, okay, may indicate that she did do it with Curly later (since those panties are pretty clean last we saw them right before Kyouka's enema scene), but these panties and bra are black. Same design and pattern, but different color.

So... Jin made a boo boo? Or maybe he can milk this franchise a bit more for more tears?
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>>4237007
easy mode

Was the sex with the kid actually awful and they were just pretending to like it?
before trip: felt "good"
after trip: he will never satisfy them anymore

Did the girls actually get addicted to the D, or was it just a one night thing?
koharu: yes, openly
yuika: yes, secretly
kyouka: yes, after the date

Why did the mother go back to the guy after the one night?
before the date: threats
mid-date: because she wants him
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>>4237029
easier mode

When Kyouka returns and goes to the shower, Yuu finds her panties are stained with cum.
this part was an hallucination, his fears playing with him
if he really went inside the same would have happened but w/white panties.
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>>4237034

>this part was an hallucination
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Is Yuu's dick small for his size or is he just a small dude in general?
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>>4237054
Yuika answered this (not that she needed to)
Basically all question self-answer in the book itself and some in the novel.
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>>4236637

>But I'm also proud about the height of the head!

What the fuck does that mean? He's proud to have a mushroom top?
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This dude has basically the thickest dick in the world >>4226428

>>4237061
He has the same head as the other guy but in a 30cm dick
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Hey guys, someone on /a/ told me the arrest plan was more of a hail mary and not set in stone as the original translation suggested.

is it real ?
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Shit i lost the thread
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pruned...
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>>4237093
Eehh... no need to let us know. the script was done by Sands and he lurks the shiwasu no okina thread.

http://pastebin.com/w5qeT3pL
http://pastebin.com/r3wgWuvq

Make your own judgment but it's definitely more complete that the original from 2014
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We know about the Sands script but isn't finished iirc
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>>4237061
Novel Kyouka always kept talking about his monster head driving her insides crazy
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>>4236964
This traumatized me more than anything in the world.
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>>4237029
lol you don't have to apologize for re-reading a Mtsp doujin here.
All of us have done multiple reading for plenty of years.
There are not that many either only 20 i think
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>>4237030
The guys were arrested. That thing is set in stone. Anyone who can read will know this. There is one solid evidence from chapter one that support the DVD shopkeepers claim.
>>4237104
How much of these are interpretations instead or translations?
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>>4236964
Is Sakiko perfect girl. The Tachibanas except Yuika have abnormal breasts sizes that will only get them ridicule.
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>>4237295
Yuika becoming gyaru and homeless after her partner got bored of her since she is a plain girl. Partner made her a gyaru for fun and wasn't serious on her (the guy is a pettanko lover! Plot twist!) Homeless because Kyouka quit her job and is staring in brutal AVs together with Koharu like K CUP MILF being fucked by a bull! and their house is sold by the guys. Yuu discovered everything and left.
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>>4237341
Wrong pic.
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Brute was trying to fuck her pee hole. Imagine him doing that, Koharu will die!
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>>4237348
No he wasnt, its just that out of the three guys; he has the fattest dick so he has problem putting it in
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>>4237284
>That thing is set in stone.
We know it isn't even if you refuse to see it.
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>>4237348
F A T _ C O C K
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>>4237403
It is. Jin told us. The novel is another timeline.
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>>4237284
I understand after being mislead to believe for so much time that this arrest thing was a sure thing but "now" a faithful translation catches onto details that make your your beliefs tremble will put You and the NTR haters in super denial phase...
But come the fuck on man.. Sands delivered his script three or four months ago, you gotta have to accept it someday.

Besides , its freaking MTSP !!! What were you expecting? Making the reader SUFFER is his real expertise.

Best case scenario it means there's a story to tell and find out how the plot unfolds, which he may very well be saving for the future sequel volume.

>>4237427
You are mixing topics anon. The Sands stuff applies to manga only.
He sadi so himself on credits page: "there are no more fillers materials" so you just take this knowledge and wait for News like the rest of us.
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>>4237434
What JLPT grade does this Sands guy have?
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>>4237434
>which he may very well be saving for the future sequel volume.
You still believe that will ever happen.
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>>4237496
Jin could stop all back at 2011.

Spoiler alert: he doesn't want to.
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>>4237348
In the 1% chance any of you guys get laid someday, remember penetrating the urethra is a poor choice. Aim lower.
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>>4237104
>>4237110
The script is finished, except for some sfx. I posted a notice about in one of the previous threads. I also asked if someone could volunteer to do typesetting, but got no replies despite the seemingly large number of people wanting to see this. That's where the project is stuck at the moment.
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>>4237552
Just post it in pastebin and someone will pick it up or put up a bounty in exhentai.
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Does anyone speak spanish here? I want someone to to act as a intermediary so Matome Ban will be released uncensored. I'm willing to recheck and refine the translation of previous chapters as well if this guy agrees to decensor the manga. The guy's name Xhtianx and was willing to decensor the series not too while ago.
https://mangahx.wordpress.com
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>>4237561
Well, proofreading (not typesetting) is being done atm.
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>>4237552
B-but we have no skills Sands-sama
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>>4237567
Then throw in script editing too. Someone here has to have at least 25000 credits in exhentai to start a bounty.
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It's still not entirely clear to me. Are there different continuities, like first two chapters vs novel vs C89 material, or not?
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>>4237030
idk, he seemed interested in improving himself at the end. if he emerges from beta nip teenager mode he can be a good lover without 8" length or 7" girth.

lol who am i kidding, he's probably gonna get heart shattered in every timeline.
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>>4237785
>Are there different continuities
Yes, there's two continuities: the novel version and the manga version. They share a lot in common, but not only are the events from the beach onward different, but also the characterization of the girls is quite different (and much more cliche'd) in the novel than it was in the manga. C89 material is for the novel version.
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>>4237434
>Sands delivered his script three or four months ago, you gotta have to accept it someday.
What's the tldr difference on the new translation? Any ink? I missed the thread. Probably one should put the script OP for next thread.
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>>4237910
here >>4237104
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>>4237884
I see particularly the psychology of each girl and guy exactly the same.
We get to see a new dimension of each person involved, it's not a contradiction.
Making consistent universes and characters is always being MTSP strong point.
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>>4237794
>he's probably gonna get heart shattered
As basically all the Mc in every Ntr. Once they penetrate the main house he jsut need a month of observing to become a sex master himself. History of hentai tells us he's just gonna sit in a corner and fap alone but there's always hope.
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>>4237794
Unless he can have sex with one of the girls 1800 times, he has no chance on becoming a sex master.
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>>4237941
EP stands for enjoyment points.
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>>4237943
>ep110
who are they?
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>>4237941
sounds like a lot of fucking
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>>4237943
And the stars?
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>>4236736
>>4237104

Not sure when but this page looks like the dudes simply don't care anymore about doing whatever they were doing before in their lives.

Their sole objective in life now is getting into the tachiban's lifes bodies and minds and never let go.

I'm not a betting man but right here and now i say pic related shows the bros level of careful craftiness and deception as if Jin was preparing himself and telling you to learn from this and forecast events for the manga.

Add it to the translation script it all ends sending the policewomen plan to t he greyest of zones.
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>>4237974
That woman is a police, do you think she will go to the guys place alone? If it's a arrest, and if the woman is high up the ladder, the swat or at least a group of police will be the one that will raid them, especially that they are a syndicate. Are you guys stupid?

Craftiness, my ass but the Tachibanas are just idiots.
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>>4237980
Also, the novel's plot is not related to the manga, that's why it has its own ending. Look at Kaki Hoshuu's novel adaptation, it has its own ending even though the manga is still continuing. Tachibana-san is over, the novel only extended its shelf life and we are thankful for that.

Only an hentai adaptation can make Jin draw for the series again.
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>>4237980

That's the main point of the matome phone call, to show the flaw in the policewoman character.

By the dudes level of planning and patience they show >>4236736 a scapegoat for emergencies isn't farfetched.

Honestly we all should have know this for years. The japanese knew it and the chinese too but we got lost in translation.
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>>4237993
We are talking about the police here... Their rape department will probably be doing the investigation so even if the policewoman got raped, the fucking swat will raid the Inn.

There is no lost in translation or bullshit like that, you're pulling stuff from your asshole now. Notice the "we" not "I"? The girls may just a duo that's going to do the" tossing a brick wall to get the jade gem" of the thirty six strategems? No? The ending of matome ban or yaribeya hen is clear that the guys were arrested.

You sound arrogant but coresplinter's translation is fine. You are thinking of sex but you have no basis for it but fantasy. The translation doesn't even change anything, other than fuel speculation. Highlighting the woman's flaw my ass but how about her partner with glasses? Don't you think she will take even more precautions knowing the gung ho nature of her partner? Fucking hell, it's just a dialogue not a fact. Remember, in hentai all dialogue are part of the story but not all dialogue are significant to the story.

>>4236736 does not show anything. It only shows how stupid the Tachibana is not to have report it to the police. Yuika's USB containing the sex videos of Yuu is enough to land the guys in prison. They even have the phone of one of the guys and could easily make a case for trespassing and blackmail of they go in their house. But that's in the novel not the manga.
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>>4238008
You are just getting upset because what you thought as a fact is no more and it never was to begin with.

Why are you trying to blame us or the novel or new translator?

It was the old translation that missed details, japanese is hard to catch on details you know. Bad luck for you.

Bringing stuff like juriy and judges, swat operation, raids, court trials, that's the real fantasy.

The meat of the story is power play in sex, willpower, and carnal desires, nothing more.

Why do you think jin made the policewomen look like perfect doppelgangers of yuika and koharu.
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>>4238011
Perfect doppelgangers of Koharu and Yuika? Now that's fantasy.

Ad hominem? I'm not blaming anyone but you guys forgot the ending? >>4221521. The guys got arrested. Matome Ban is proof of that. Bringing swats, police or raids is OK since that's what exactly happened. Why are you guys denying it?
The novel is immature, the manga is mature. Anyone actually understand the ending?
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>>4238016
The arrest is a fact. Jin even gave you proof of that with the police conversation and you're still denying it. Such delusions and hope.
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>>4238011
The new translation would only add detail. It won't change anything. The arrest is a fact >>4221521 hasn't been debunked. It's the ending.
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>>4238016
Ad hominen anon one of this days you are gonna have to learn there is more that blank and white only
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>>4238027
The ending is clear on this. Why are you denying or not even trying to challenge it? Deep inside you, you know it's the ending. Jin even said he wanted to give the novel a different ending since a lot of NTR fans are demanding it.

Keep dreaming. The Sands translation will only keep discussions like this from going on, it's stupidity. Where is your proof the arrest never took place? The arrest ending is more solid than what you think.
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>>4238029
>The Sands translation will only keep discussions like this from going on, it's stupidity.
so you prefer feigning ignorance? ok

>Jin even said he wanted to give the novel a different ending since a lot of NTR fans are demanding it
nice fanfiction

Adhominen dude are you the troll alwasy pesters this threads?
Nobody told that your father or mother isn't who you thought your whole life FFS man.
The ending of a 5yo NTR story ended up being more dark and less soft that what you believed. not thnaks to us but to a crude translation that wasn't refined.
And it's not even a fact the arrest isnt a fact but somehow the discovery of a missing detail and the possibility of not being a fact is driving you nuts beyond reason.
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>>4237974
>It was the old translation that missed details
What details? I read >>4237104 and it seems like about the same translation. Can you elaborate? I'm not that triggered vanilla guy, but it seems like you guys are bickering over nothing.

Again, just a friendly reminder to everyone in this thread that this is a novel about titty monsters getting fucked by faceless dudes with footlong dicks. The girls are not your family members or waifus, they exist in a one off OC doujin just to get fucked. There is no reason to get triggered one way or another, you guys have too much emotional investment for reason I can't understand.
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>>4238048
QBTranslation or Coresplinter's translation of the ending is fine. Even, Shakuganexa's squeeze the shit out of the dialogue translation would come up with a very similar translation with the arrest conversation fully intact..

It's not a fan fiction, check his blog or hongfire for the translation (Core also translated that). i haven't even pull out my hidden proof yet, because if I did, you wouldn't even be able to deny it anymore.

Every since chapter two, the ending remains the same. Even yaribeya-hen and matome ban uses the exact same ending with the only change being the abortion hints and yet the conversation about the dudes being arrested never changed in all three version of the endings. Now can you debunk the ending? You can't can you? Your only argument is the existence of a new translation on the police conversation but even if Sands translate the ending, the arrest dialogue will still be there. The ending is clear and matome ban only made it clearer. The arrest is a fact and it's you who can't accept it.
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>>4236927
Please do your thing with the scripts >>4237104 just like in Lustful Berry. The way you translate monologues, referencing parts of the story without destroying the meaning of the dialogue is really a unique skill. Man, following your translation of lustful berry, I can feel passion and emotions especially in the monologues but why don't you do the same for tachibana? You like the series don't you?

While sands translation is good, I feel the wording and structure of the translation is flat.
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>>4238073
i haven't even pull out my hidden proof yet,
gross
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>>4238066
Dont think so man

This troll here
>>4238029
>>4238018
>>4238022
>>4238016
>>4238008
>>4237980
is going bananas over nothing new

In fact im sure he doesnt give a crap he's only trolling for the sake of trolling
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>>4238029
>Jin even said he wanted to give the novel a different ending since a lot of NTR fans are demanding it.
What a blatant lie.
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>>4238195
>>4238194
>Every since chapter two, the ending remains the same. Even yaribeya-hen and matome ban uses the exact same ending with the only change being the abortion hints and yet the conversation about the dudes being arrested never changed in all three version of the endings. Now can you debunk the ending? You can't can you? Your only argument is the existence of a new translation on the police conversation but even if Sands translate the ending, the arrest dialogue will still be there. The ending is clear and matome ban only made it clearer. The arrest is a fact and it's you who can't accept it.

That's my hidden proof. You can't debunk that can you? That basically proves the arrest happen. You cannot deny or dispute this and that Kyouka's conversation only reinforces this not discredit it.

You're the one trolling. You're not even arguing points anymore. At least defend your opinion or try to rebut. You're the symbol of the idiots polluting this thread with speculations that are pure fantasy and no basis. Can you even discuss? Sands translation have no effect on the ending, especially that it existed way back in chapter 2. You're a disgrace in this thread.

Zeezo who translated chapter 2 for Doujin-moe.us have this to say with the ending and this is will probably another massive slap in the face for arrest denials:

@Majora's Mask
no, not really. The video he's watching at the beginning of part 1 is not the video of Kyoka, but it's a video made from the same guys who in part 2 end up screwing the three girls. He just ends up fantasizing about being in a similar situation with her (pretty ironic considering what happens in part 2). The reason why the protagonist seems to recall the place where they're staying at "familiar" is because he already saw that inn in the previous DVD serie he borrowed from the store where he gets his regular porn fix.

Your turn to respond.
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>>4238215
Ending version 1
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>>4238138
>>4237571
But guys, I told you the proof-reading is being done for now.

>>4238066
>What details?
Stuff from the first page basically.
I realized the thing as soon as reading it the first time too. To put it simple: it highlights the policewomen character flaws as someone said above.

The women are just moving unilaterally and out of schedule. We talked a little bout it with Sands too, in short the cops are confident and/or reckless, nothing more (nothing else either).
I'm not gonna meddle in whatever fightinh you want to have, each take his own conclusion from it.
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>>4238215
Not even him but i don't see what anyone could answer to this. You are just quoting yourself and calling it proof.
>That's my hidden proof.
>You're a disgrace in this thread.
>Insults for the thousand time
*sigh*

Going to sleep for now, need to work later and I don't see this going anywhere. Next thread will try to OP something nice as >>4237910 said.
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>>4238270
>>Insults for the thousand time
I didn't see any insults there, nor do you try to actually argue with him. So same thing like always.
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>>4238270
he's a retard
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>>4238315
and not of the cute type
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>Jin even said he wanted to give the novel a different ending since a lot of NTR fans are demanding it.

Annnddd.... anon caved. How unexpected.
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>>4238260
This is not flaw or a mistake. It's stupidity. They can arrest the guys and obtain the warrant of arrest after arresting them. Maybe that's what she meant and the girl said be careful because it could have some nasty consequences. At the end of the day, it's your interpretation and your reading of much between the lines. Do you know how police works, there is no individual investigation. Investigations are done by teams but a handler may be assigned to the case to communicate with the victim.
All you have is interpretations so don't act as if it is a fact because it's not. Debunk the ending.
>>4238326
ちなみに製作にあたりルート選択はお任せした部分ありますが、その上でのプロットは自分が書きました。
そこからの肉付け作業で生じるイメージとの差に最初は戸惑いましたが、
考えてもみれば他の方のプロットを頂いて漫画を描いたとして
全体の雰囲気を本人のように再現するのは軽い慣らし程度では不可能です。
今回の経験は本当に勉強になりましたが、その部分を試行錯誤するために
執筆を担当していただいた先生には大変ご負担をおかけしてしまいました… orz
By the way the decision of making the route this way was written by myself (Translator note: Basic plot maybe?)
Although there may be a little confusion between these two works I tried to make the drawings as representative of the new plot as possible. I'm sure trying to expand on the plot I've written all on my own was quite difficult and alot of trial and error had to have gone into it so I would like to apologize for all the trouble I've given to the writer of the novel.

Translation by Coresplinter.
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>>4238260
>>4237348
>c89 release
>koharu x fat guy confirmed
>arrest plan is likely a fail
>final translation in the way
Great success !

You guys brought me back to life after a shitty week.
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Help me guys my boner is out of control!

In fact I might need to see a doctor about it
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>>4238407
>Arrest is likely to fail
>>4238236 debunks that possibility. The arrest is a success. If it isn't, why didn't Jin retconned the ending? It's so clear yet you guys seem to be hypnotized to ignore such a fact.
Why don't we asked that random translation thread in g.e-hentai.org?
>>4238260
Who is proofreading this? You? Someone who knows nothing about japanese. I think shakuganexa should be the one who proofread the script since he knows Japanese and boy, he can translate as good as anyone at the top when he's serious.

You fucking whore. Fuck you. How dare you blame the translation effort of the hongfire community which you used to be part of. Let me remind you it is you who insisted to translate the series in the first place. Now, you're a simple lackey and an asskisser. You hide under a false name because you're ashamed to confront your past, xanagu. You're like shakuganexa, spreading your own interpretations and fantasies only here, not in hongfire. At least he had he balls to apologize personally. You fucking asshole. You're the worst.
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>>4238439
You should have linked to it directly: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=48923

Most people here are way too lazy to actually find it.
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>>4238439
What is this?

No, literally, what is wrong with you? You are so full of hate.
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>>4238463
that Pamon the asskisses is getting too full of himself now. I think I can speak for everyone in hongfire that we work our hardest in the translation of the two chapters. We're sorry if we are good enough but think about the feelings of the people involve. It hurts , you know and we have feelings too.

You people always blame us. We become a scapegoat.
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>>4238439
I never felt compelled to fill a report before this, you should feel proud.
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>>4238439
way to blow your load
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>>4237348
What a change to how their relationship ends.

That's a doujin with happy ending I would like to read about.

But cruel god Jin never cared much about Haru (to my dislike)
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>>4238260
>But guys, I told you the proof-reading is being done for now.
Ughhh..... i can almost taste it
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>>4238439
Da fuq
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>>4238260
So nothing concrete happened after all.

IMO everything was a setup for his eventual sequel spinoff appendix where Cops vs Bros match will be the center piece.
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>>4238549
>Nothing concrete happens.
Totally ignores the ending >>4238236, that is a concrete as you can get.
Why the fuck would the police even bother having sex with the guys when they can just storm the...

Why haven't I realize it before...
The proof was right in my face all along. That police scene is the same scene in yaribeya hen. That's all the proof I need to show the arrest ending actually occurred. This means the scene in matome ban is just an extended version of that conversation. Mystery solved, everyone. I see that's why Jin mention on the afterword that the story is pretty much finished in yaribeya hen. This arrest ending is irrefutable with this. No matter how much proofreading this guy>>4238260, it won't change anything. Holy shit.
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>>4238566
The KO punch for the anti arrest fags.
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4238566
Who put sand in his vagina?
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>>4238420
Super cold shower might help but I won't blame you if it doesn't.

>>4238549
YEs I want a sequel of the cops going down. And maybe one of the bros going down too, the young blonde was my least favorite. Whatever the result it must be one hell of a fight.
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>>4238671
>>4238260
So what are we getting this year?

The registration time for comiket already passed on March so he must have decided already but his blog is still empty.

What's the comiket page to look for the cut?
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>arrest was fixed to struggle since 2 years ago
JJIIIIINNNNNN..!!!!
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