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Boku no Yayoi-san Chapter 8 Tentative Translation

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Old thread is here:

>>4072134
https://fgts.jp/h/thread/4072134/

I posted a bunch of pages I translated there and intend to continue with the rest of chapter 8 in this thread. Be warned that I'm heavily relying on machine translations and Japanese online dictionaries, so there's naturally mistakes and I'm occasionally missing details. So please don't start a shit storm if there's something wrong. Anyone who can read Japanese is free to correct my mistakes.

Once I'm done with chapter 8, I may do a few more pages from the remaining chapters I personally deem interesting, but their amount is pretty small (maybe 5 or so).

Here's two files with the OCRd Kanji and text from the previously translated pages. I don't have a script file for the translated text.
Maybe someone could copy my translated text from the previous thread in a pastebin and correct the spelling mistakes and the pages where I mistook who is currently speaking for certain bubbles while he's at it.

>https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYdEFIc3d3WFp4aTA/view?usp=sharing

>https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYUHhMVzNNMEtmOEU/view?usp=sharing

I'll post the first page of chapter 8 today (could also be the last page of chapter 7), and starting tomorrow 2 - 5 pages per day until I'm done.
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>>4083875
No Archive anymore, so just 3 days for anyone to save those translations or they gone forever.
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>>4083894
Why? Fgts still works fine.
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Page 197:

(Hiro's thoughts after he saw Yayoi fucking Hebitsuka in chapter 7)

>In retrospect, this was certainly the turning point.

>What I saw was the confirmation for this "uncomfortable feeling" I had.

>Knowing it was scary.
>However, I was still unaware of her true feelings.

>I closed my eyes and didn't talk about it. I wanted to "have faith" in her.

>I believed in her.

>I didn't want to see it.

>And...

The next page has very little text, so I'll post it shortly.
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>>4083927
>When the sun set on that day, my scenery changed completely...

>"Please..."

>"Let me close the door..."
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but the chapter 7 hasn't been done.
did i missed or you saving it for last?

>>4083927
share the ocr bruh
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does anyone know where I can download the earlier chapters? or the fakku ones?
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>>4083933
Not he's just doing chapter 8. He had no plans wasting time on other chapters. He already gave us the ending anyway. That's what the people wanted.
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>>4083936
Speak for yourself, we always wanted chapter 5 to 8.
5 being optional because OVA, but not the others.
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>>4083933
No, I will only translate chapter 8. I wanted to personally know how this ended. I'm not interested in more sex scenes of Yayoi fucking the bastard.

I shared the OCR for the pages so far in the OP. It's a hassle to update the files all the time, so you will get the rest of chapter 8 once I'm done.

Well, I'll give you the OCR for these two pages now, as an exception.

Page 198:

その夜を境に

僕の風景は 一 変した…

お願い...


は閉めさせて...

Page 197:

思い返せば
確かに

おかしな点は
いくつもぁった

けれど僕は
その「違和感」を
確かめよぅと
しなかつた

知るのが怖い

そんな自分の
本心にすら
無自覚のまま

「信じる」という
言葉を盾に
その事にフタを
しさしまった

信じていた

見たくなかった

そして-
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>>4083937
Be thankful you get anything instead of making more demands. It's all the same shit in the other chapters.

>"This sex feels so good."
>"You're mine now. Ehehhe"
>I want to protect Hiro. That's why I'm doing this!
>I'm so sorry for being a whore. I love you, Hiro.
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>>4083931
only two lines and i know this is not the same yayoi; she utterly tamed already.

we should assume she had a change of heart somewhere on chp.7 or this is her since chap.6 end?
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>>4083941
She's constantly on drugs and at the end of chapter 6 she said the cliched "I want your sperm! Come inside me!" bla bla
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>>4083939
- read 6, she said her "protection" was useless to begin with.
- she's acting like she belongs to him tbh
- semen > drugs > protecting hiro
- "love you" is on 8, not before
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>>4083947
So you can read Moon runes? Then please correct the mistakes I made previously. You can see the pages in the archive.

She said at the end of chapter 6 that fucking him was a stupid way to protect Hiro (which is true). I still don't understand why she never went to the police or called the old gang to beat the shit out of Hebitsuka.
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>>4083949
Her last line was "from now on i cant think anymore"
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>>4083982
That's pretty close to "I stopped thinking."

I wrote if I was unsure about certain phrases on most pages, so I would be grateful if someone cleared them up.
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>>4083455
>not ntr
>no blackmail, drugs or mind control
>harem series about shotacon cakes
You can't be serious.
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>>4083937
Anon translator is working so hard and you people aren't doing anything. People like you only demand, not help. I'm a translator myself and I don't see any point on helping a ungrateful community much less work on a generic manga. If a translator asked for help, people just ignore him. It's a motivation killer.
Someone could have OCR other chapters, edit the translated texts on the pages, etc but I don't think anyone here will do that. Then, the work of this anon will be forgotten...
And after 6 months people will start asking again about the ending.
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>>4084014
It's the same for the MTSP and Nude Beach thread. People demand and don't do anything.
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>>4084015
People should look at The Tit Translation Project thread. It has produced 10 translations because the people in there helps.
Just a reminder, translations can be improved.
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>>4084014
Some of the troll comments from NTR fags in the other thread really pissed me off, tbh.

Part of me is doing this out of personal interest, the other part because I want to finish things I already started.
I'm not even asking for much except for people correcting the mistakes I made and save the script on another site.
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>>4084015
95% of people cant help on nothing at all even if they wanted anyways
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>>4084021
I don't think it would be that hard to copy paste most of the text I produced, correct the few spelling mistakes and cases where I said that I mixed up who was talking (so e.g. "I" instead of "you") and save them in a .txt or pastebin.
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Extrapolating made-up crap about sales and market profitability of netorare was totally uncalled for.

That kind of nonsense always gonna end wrong (because we don't know shit) and triggering fags.
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>>4084022
cant even change the 'i' for 'you' if they cant read moons, so yes 95% if not higher
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>>4084025
I said that I made this mistake and where shortly after two pages, though. Editing posts is sadly impossible here.
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I'll post a few more pages in a while.

In the mean time, have some perfectly sung German. I can vow for that as a native speaker.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rzJ0dcj3W-8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ivd8I-lHi1A
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>>4083931
Page 199:

>"What did you say?"

>"You still want to hide? That's completely unnecessary."

>"But... this"

>"What if Hiro sees this?!"

>"We're completely visible when someone passes here..."

>"Don't worry about that."
>"He left the house anyway."

>"He did this a lot in this past week."

>"To be honest, I wouldn't care at all if we were seen."

>"Ah... I... no..."

>"If you like, we could have sex right in front of him when he's here."

>"No. Stop it... He absolutely musn't see this!"

>"You idiot. I made a joke."

>"Were you scared?"
(Not sure here:
いちいち
ビビってんじゃ
ね一ょポケ)

>"Hey, your crotch is getting more lively!"
>"Your pussy was tightening up when I said this!"
(or something along those lines:
ォラ
も っ と股開け!!
マんコにプチ込んで
やっからょォ)

That page had a lot of text.

Apparently Yayoi didn't notice that Hiro was watching her in chapter 7 and said "Hiro" at the last page of that chapter because she was feeling guilty, not because she saw him.

She's really stupid if she thinks that he still didn't catch on.
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>>4084368
She saw him looking but forgot later on.
Who would not after 10 orgasms in a row? She probably saw the dead guy too.
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>>4084433
Dead guy?
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>>4084368
Page 200:

>I exited the stage and was degraded to a mere spectator.

>"Hey. You're dripping wet, right? You bitch."

>"It's... good."
>"I... feel so goood."

>"Your pussy is practically overflowing because of my dick."

>"Do you feel so good whenever I'm thrusting in and out of you?"

>"It's... very good."

>"My pussy feels amazing when you're scratching my walls with your dick."

>"Ahh..."

>"I'm cumming. I'm cumming!"

>I understood the situation even without an explanation from Yayoi-san.


The dialogue during the sex scenes is the same like in pretty much every other H-Manga or doujin. Feels tedious to translate.
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>>4084450
do it
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>>4084450
Page 201:

>This utter stranger was acting like he owned the place even though he didn't even have permission to stay here from the landlord.

>"Now you can have control over your body."

>"Where do you want it next? You can decide where I ejaculate now."

>"My... ass."

>"My asshole..."

>"A... Anal sex..."

>"I want in the usual spot... With anal sex..."

>>4084455
I don't understand.
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>>4084466
Page 202:

>Yayoi-san's body was indulging in sex whether it was day or night without ever closing the curtains.

>They also did in the corridor...

>The entrance...

>The kitchen...

>And even the living room.

>They did it everywhere in the house.

>This bestial smell was left all over the place...

>"Ngghh..."

>"Ahh... I'm about to cum..."
(Could be something else, but doesn't really matter anyway
キ キマ つたア

イ イイ卜コ キマ つた)

Yayoi looks almost as ugly as Hebitsuka in this chapter.
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>>4084487
wut? gotta be kidding anon.
She looks hotter than ever in her life.
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>>4084487
>move all around house leg-locked
>grinding so hard her teeth are about to break
damn...
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>>4084492
You just have bad taste. That's all.

Are you by chance the same guy that said the women in the After School story are more retarded than Yayoi?
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>>4084494
Whoever said that has good taste.
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>>4084494
yaoi looks unsatisfied and the kid is damn pitiful.
no wonder they got blacked.
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>>4084494
>>4084368
What's the deal with the musical notes ?

Yayoi has them with Hiro and Hebitsuka has them with Yayoi.
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And the cigar too...

There is one scene of Yayoi smoking with hiro and tanned dude each.

Have you worked those parts, anon-san?
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>>4084487
Page 203:

>"Ahh... I'm cumming."

>"I'm cumming. I'm cumming."

>"Again... I'm cumming again."

>While I couldn't do anything...

>The only thing I could do was watch.

>I bated my breath and concealed my footsteps.

>I erased the signs that I was a pathetic onlooker...

>"Well then. We'll go outside for a little..."

>"Yeah..."
>"Take care."


Hiro looks almost as drugged and pathetic as Yayoi here. Should have just listened to his parents and left that bitch alone who apparently still thinks she can fool him.

That's the last page for today.


>>4084499
So it was either yourself or you're a blatant NTR fag as well. Good to know who I do this for.
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>>4084507
>boku no yayoi-san thread
>calls out ntrfags
lel
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>>4084505
Musical notes normally indicate when someone is arrogant and talks like a retard. Or they are used when someone teases another character. Most of the time it's the former, though.

>>4084506
If you read the first chapters, Yayoi says there that she sometimes smokes after sex to relax and didn't do that in over 5 years.
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>>4084508
Yeah, so what? NTR is one of the worst fetishes out there imo and the behavior of NTR fags doesn't help its reputation at all.

I thought translating chapter 8 would help me understand how this could lead to a "happy" ending, but it's just horrible writing.
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>>4084505
hiro is inferior to yayoi and she knows it; same way yayoi is hebitsuka's woman.

the music sign tells you who calls the shots and who's the bitch in the relationship.
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>>4084511
But we knew that since the beginning, right? It was just an ass-pull.

Oh well it fits too. The dude wasn't planning on live there forever, just have vengeance on yayoi and her husband using hiro as proxy.

Some ntr dudes are smarter. He could have resurrected the gang with him on top instead of dying gunned down.
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>help me understand how this could lead to a "happy" ending
the guy left
thats your reason
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>>4084516
The gang hated him and beat the shit out of him and that wouldn't change just because he drugged and broke Yayoi.

I wonder how he could even survive these 5 years without landingi n prison or turning up dead.
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>>4084507
Page 204 has very little text so I decided to translate it today still.

>This house...

>I couldn't call it my home anymore. I didn't belong there after what I did...

>"This place... is really nice today..."
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>>4084521
Hanekawa?
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>>4084524
What?
>>
bottom panel

Why cant I find parks like that in my city.
And what's with Yayoi robe?
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she's pregnant thats what happens.
her hips and breasts look more puffy than usual
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There's around 25 pages left. I think I'll do 5 each tomorrow and the day after that and then continue on Sunday.

Did anyone start to save the translated text in a file?
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>>4084527
>And what's with Yayoi robe?
she's wearing a jacket, with nothing else on besides her fishnets
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>>4084501
You know that this was his first time and he got significantly better later, right?

She even wet herself in chapter 2.

Hiro could satisfy her, it's just that Hebitsuka broke his will to do so and Yayoi made no effort to change that either, instead going along with his stupid idea to cuck himself at the end.
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>>4084633
all of them improve and all of them aren't good enough
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>>4084651
I'm certain Hiro would not be worse than the random guy at the end he called over and who was just lying there.
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>>4083875
I remember this one.
It was the first time I read NTR withotu knowing the meaning of that tag.

After the first or second chapter the story when to shit and they never translated the rest. I found the plot so fucking stupid I was unable to believe what I was reading.

[spoiler]now I can't stop reading ntr[/spoiler]
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>>4084817
NTR plots are almost always stupid as fuck. My suspension of disbelief prevents me from taking them seriously most of the time.
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>>4084850
Yes. Most of the time the plot is bad. But the art is almost always the best.

I can barely count with one hand, NTR plots that are good, and I mean the creator put effort in the script.
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>>4084853
Yeah, that's the dilemma. The authors make up their incompetent storytelling with the art. Some are bad at both, though (e.g. Sanbun Kyoden).

There's a few NTR with good story telling in these two threads:

>>4055172

>>4060845

Takenoko Seijin is one of the few Mangaka that is talented in both departments and Takatsu made a tankobon where all of the people who get NTRed deserve it for a change.
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>>4084860
>Mashiraga Aki
I'm interested in his works. Musa was good and is already translated. Matsuri looks good, someone should translate it. I didn't like ending of Fork in the Road.
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>>4084868
I didn't actually mean to refer to that artist specifically, just the thread in general, but he's better than most.
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>>4084817
welcome aboard
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>>4084521
Page 205:

>"Oh yeah."

>"They say that a large crowd gathers here even when it's raining."

>"Others only come to spectate."

>"All of the people here come to do nasty and dirty things."

>"Supply and deman is balanced tightly thanks to that."

>"Now take off your jacket."

>"I know that you've been waiting for this."

>"You know, I'm something like a celebrity here."
(he could also refer to Yayoi as a celebrity, I'm not sure. Wouldn't make sense when it's her first time there, though
ココじゃ今や
お前もちょ つとした
有名人だからな)

Yeah, if it didn't happen already, that's where logic was thrown out the window. Japan is pretty much the last country in the world where such parks could exist.
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>>4084959
Page 206:

>"Hey... the drugs."

>"Give me the drugs."

>"This thing... I can't take it when I'm sober."

>"Is that so? ...Geez."

>"You're still a selfish princess."

>"Here..."

>"You know how to take it."

So Yayoi is pretty much on drugs 24 / 7 and a total wreck.
Can't stoop much lower than gulping down drugs from a dick that looks like it has STDs in public.
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>>4084964
She won't do it, right?
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>>4084966
Man, just look at the raws or wait a bit and you would see that she's even lower scum than Hebitsuka at this point. She even asked for it herself.
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>>4084964
God damn it, Yayoi might be the most beautiful woman Tsukino has ever drawn, specially now.
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>>4084964
Page 207:

>"You're gulping it down excitingly as if you were drinking beer."

>"Did you like it that much? The taste of my piss, that is."

>"I got used to it, more or less..."

>"I think I drank more than a litre by it now..."

>"Come here."

>"It's time to start the show / It's show time."

Yayoi is literally drinking his piss. I'm disgusted.
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>>4084983
Are you trolling or is your taste really that horrible? Her looks are vomit- inducing.

Here's the raw for anyone interested, by the way:

http://nhentai.net/g/128037/
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>>4084991
No trolling.

It's because of the impregnation.
Full-fledged women are the best.
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>>4084996
So you have objectively bad taste.

You can't even see her being pregnant because of the time frame. At the end of chapter 5 she said that it's her third time betraying Hiro and coming home late, in chapter 7 Hebitsuka said that he had sex with her for over a month and here in chapter 8 they said that Hiro often went outside this past week (after he first caught them). So she's around 2 months pregnant, 3 at max. You barely see anything at that stage of pregnancy.
That makes the end even more face palm worthy with her saying that it was too late for abortion. Tsukino Jyogi fucked up the logic and story telling big time here.

Page 208 gives me a slight problem. Do the thought bubbles at the bottom right come before or after the ones on the middle left?
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>>4085001
こんな場所で

他人に毘られ
ながらセックス
するなんて

でも
あの子に見られる

ココの方が

暗がりの中でも

4人・・・?いえ
5人は見てるわね

ようになんか
なりたくも

今日は
特に

視線が
熱い
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>>4085001
don'k know mate.
whichever that makes more sense?
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>>4085005
So it's first the panel n the bottom right, then the ones on the left? Okay.

Your OCR is missing quite a few lines, btw.
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>>4085001
Pregnancy can be felt after just 2 weeks when the nipples and tits harden up, same time Yayoi's vagina begins to engorge with blood.

It's a entire different level. Step up.
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>>4085001
Page 208:

>In such a place...

>I'm having sex while other people can see me.

>However, compared to being seen by Hiro...

>It's still better to do it here instead. Much better...!

>Even in the dark, I felt their stares.

>Is it four people? No, I think five people are watching us.

>I don't want people to see me in this state.

>I can feel their stares piercing me right now.

It could also be that the line that she doesn't want to be seen actually comes before her feeling the stares in the dark, but it doesn't make much difference, I think.
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>>4085013
Step up with what? My point still stands that the story is stupid and it's a total ass pull that Yayoi didn't abort with the excuse that it's too late.

And don't tell me you seriously think that her vagina looks messed up because of her pregnancy, not because of pearl dick and the drugs.
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>>4085021
Page 209:

>I... can feel it!

>My womb... feels so strange... because of the... drugs...

"Hey Hey"

>"You're pretty lively today."

>"Did you awaken to pleasure even though you're so shamefully exposed?"

>"Let's see..."

>"I wonder how you will react now..."

>"I have spotted someone you might know. Let's show him your true colours."
(I think:
お前に絡み っ い てる
視線の正体つて
ヤッにょ)

>"Hey! You can't hide forever!

>"Stop playing hide and seek already!"
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So in the end she fell in love with pearl dick right?
Or atleast with his penis?
>>
Is this available somewhere for purchase?
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>>4085059
Page 210:

>"I can see where your right hand is."

>"Don't even try to deny what you were doing right now?!"

>"Ya...Yayoi...san"

I wonder if Hiro is drugged as well with his fucked up expression.
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>>4085072
In DMM
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>>4085063
No, she said that she loves Hiro later on, but got addicted to sex and basically became a whore.

>>4085072
On Amazon.jp, for example.
Why would you waste money for this when there are so many better H-Manga such as pretty much everything else from the author?

I will continue translating tomorrow.
However, I can't OCR the text in the upper right bubble on the next page because it's handwritten. I could try to manually copy it, but I don't think that would turn out well.

I'd appreciate it if someone else posted the text from that bubble in this thread.
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>>4085024
is hentai, just fucking relax and enjoy the ride
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>>4085063
Yes Yayoi fell for him as she surrendered her womb and accepted to carry his children.
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>>4085063
There is a reason why she didn't abort anon.
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>>4085111
The reason is retarded Hentai logic and that Tsukino Jyogi is a hack.

She outright said after the time skip that it was too late for surgery even though her belly didn't even really show in chapter 8.
Stop coming up with other bullshit.
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>>4085114
She can't abort because that's Hebitsuka's baby and she cant reject him.
>>
Retarded over the top trash like this is the reason why i prefer my h untranslated.
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>>4085119
good, now gtfo
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>>4085119
Whats wrong? cant handle the NTR?
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>>4085119
Grow up, you are not 12 anymore to self insert anymore.
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>>4085119
Finally a non NTR fag that agrees this is utterly retarded.
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>>4085134
What kind of Netorare you like?
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>>4085134
Actually i'm a NTRfag

>>4085127
Nice projection m8

>>4085124
Probably more than you but this is just worth an aneurism. The usually short mindbreak/blackmail doujins are far more enjoyable than this overdramatic crap.
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>>4083875
its not certain the baby belong to pearl-dick. It is possible to belong to the main male character. He has cum in her many times. Just how reliable could a female tell when their menstrual cycle is?
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Ask your mother (no pun)
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>>4085143
The ones that are more realistic.
The only one I'm really invested in is Netoraserare.
Takenoko Seijin is also good. Itou Eight isn't bad either. NTR by Takatsu doesn't have any dramatic suffering. And I like some subtle reverse NTR.

http://exhentai.org/g/791861/9b08764f0f/
http://exhentai.org/g/828660/1289e92ed8/
http://exhentai.org/g/814075/b349608117/
http://exhentai.org/g/832265/338219b359/

>>4085146
That was already discussed in the previous thread. With the provided time frame she either got immediately pregnant after she first had sex with Hebitsuka or Hiro's sperm impregnated her that was still in her womb. She said that her dangerous day would come soon in chapter 2.
Also, the daughter is totally into Hamburgers, just like Hiro. Could have inherited that from him.
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>>4085155
>literally picks the most non-sense one
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>>4085161
What? Netoraserare? Still miles better than this crap. And you shouldn't judge before it's actually over. Shikishiro can still pull the story around.
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>>4085155
>The ones that are more realistic.
You fail to realize that not every doujin/manga has to be realistic.
The kind of ntr that boku no yayoi-san are the usual mindbreak ntr types. They are always have a simple plot that deliver a "bad end" where the love interest is taking away from the MC.

Everyone have something they don't like or ignore in NTR. For me if the plot has an appdevice or hypnosis, I just skip that because I don't like that kind of plot.

You just don't like the mindbreak type NTR
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>>4085171
Yeah, because mindbreak and rape victims getting to love sex is extremely far fetched. That's almost every NTR out there, though and it's done to death.

Shame that you skip something good as this:
http://exhentai.org/g/836767/26324b283a/

Unlike most other NTR, this story is self- ware of its ridiculousness and adds humor to it.
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>>4085182
that is barely ntr since the point of view is from the kid stealing away, not the other way around. is Netori.
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>>4085187
I know that. Chapter 3 is from the POV of another brat that gets his mom stolen, though.

My point is: Boku no Yayoi tries to be a serious story, but fails miserably because logical flaws are abundant. Takatsu / King's App knows the story is retarded and just runs with it.

Most NTR tries to be serious, but fails because it's always the same unrealistic tropes. That's why I'm tired of them.
I either want something that falls out of the norm and is closer to reality or something that is aware of the tropes and plays with them in a humoristic way.
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>>4085191
We get it, you are a pussy.
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>>4085196
No, I just have some standards. Way to be disrespectful towards other opinions.
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>>4085203
>Expecting anything else from teenager & neckbeard paradise
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P U S S I E S
U
S
S
I
E
S
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>>4085203
>No, I just have some standards.
You need bad art to appreciate the good one. This is literally a rule of life, it apply to everything
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>>4085086
So no one can OCR that bubble or read it and write it down here? That's a shame.
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>>4085452
I can't read moonrunes, I can't help you, sorry m8
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>>4085086
Page 211:

>"He was watching us for quite some time. It was only a matter of time before he would be caught."
(That's the first bubble. I copied most of it manually save for one Kanji I wasn't sure of. I think I got the gist of it)

>"Now you're in deep shit, little fellow..."

>"I know that you were spying on us all the time."
(or something like that:
お前の行動なんざ
こちとら全部
お見通しだっつの)

>"Yayoi-"
>"Your brother-in-law must have a lot of guts to follow us this far."

>"So I was right that you two have already done it with each other?!"

>"Nevertheless, this guy is nothing more than a mosquito to me."

>"I wouldn't have thought we would meet at this remote place."

>"Well, little pervert."

>"Today, you can worship Yayoi to your heart's content."

>"You look as if you were a lost puppy."

>"You're desperately clinging to your cock as if your life depends on it."

>"I will treat you to a feast now!"

It's nauseating how much shit Hebitsuka is talking. Guys like him would be long dead or rotting in prison at this point if he weren't in a Hentai.
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>>4085671
Why is he doing that to yayoi anyway? Revenge for something?
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>>4085691
Yayoi is a fine woman.
Not reason enough?
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>>4085691
Because he's a stupid fuck that can't get over the fact that he was kicked out of the gang of Hiro's brother for being an asshole.

I can't help it, but page 211 and what he's saying there is pretty ironic.
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>>4084513
If Hiro's inferior, why does Hebitsuka have to rely on drugging Yayoi and putting beads in his dick before he can please her? Hiro didn't need any of that shit, and he was a total virgin before all this.
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Time is gold.

And he doesn't want to please Yayoi anon, he wants to break her.
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>>4085671
Page 212:

>"Hey..."
>"Listen closely, brother-in-law"

>"To this filthy sound her womb is making in the back of her pussy!"

>"No... stop it..."

>"Don't listen... to this strange sound..."

>"So now you're ashamed, eh."

>"This guy watched us many times already."

>"You just weren't aware of it, Yayoi-"

>"In fact, he did it daily..."
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>>4085701
Could you please stop shitposting and repating the same stuff over and over? You're just wasting the post count. I want to get this done before reaching the limit.
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>>4085708
So he knew? Good to know logic in this hentai is grounded.

What doesn't make sense is how Yayoi right breast is slightly deformed compared with the other, or just me noticed that?
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>>4085708
>clit and nipple piercing

Oh wow, since when did she had those?

Shes literally a disgusting whore now. I love it
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>>4085711
Since the moment she pledged to become his woman, which the fuckheads above love to forget was entirely of her own volition and before any kind of drug.

And yes, we love it.
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>>4085716
>hentai logic at its finest
not that i hate it tho
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>>4085716
>Since the moment she pledged to become his woman
Which chapter was that
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>spoonfeed

>>>/out/
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>>4085708
It's not brother in law in a sense of family.

But I'm a "hey, bro, can you see this?" Kind of thing.
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>>4085725
?

>>4085710
>What doesn't make sense is how Yayoi right breast is slightly deformed compared with the other
pregnancy probably
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>>4085708
Page 213:

>"Is... that so..."

>"Hey. Look here!"

>"That's some fashionable accesory."
>"That was a gift from me."

>"But she rather complained about it instead of being pleased."
>"She said something along the lines of not being able to show her naked body to her boyfriend anymore after putting it on."

>"After that, I pierced her clitoris."

>"She was screaming in pain when I did that."
>"That's when her mind broke and she swore to me in tears / while she cried..."

>"That she would never..."

>"...Have sex with her boyfriend again!"

What a load of crap this is.
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>>4084964
How the hell was she able to had a normal kid despite consuming drugs during months of pregnancy?
That shit fucks up the fetus.
Is Tsukino actually retarded to think fetus are inmune to drugs?
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>>4085731
I'm fairly sure that he said "brother-in-law", not bro. He was actually talking to Yayoi and telling her that her brother-in-law could listen to the sounds, but that sounds a bit unnatural in English.

>>4085716
She didn't pledge to become his woman, idiot. She told him to cum inside and that she wants his sperm, that's it. Stop shitposting.
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>>4085735
>Is Tsukino actually retarded to think fetus are inmune to drugs?

The entire last chapter is retarded and abundant with flaws. Yet people still defend this turd and say it's popular.
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>>4085734
Tsukino Jyogi can draw excellent eyes...shame is drawing elsewhere are mediocore. It's pretty meh to me. It feels everything is halfass...
Hebitsuka should have been more arrogant and bullying, being direct to the wimpy kid to his insults.
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>>4085738
if you don't like this manga, why are you still here anon?

You are not going to change anyone point of view while being irascible.
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>>4085734
>What a load of crap this is.

Whats wrong?
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>>4085735
They were aphrodisiac.
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>>4085746
He has standards.
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>>4085754
>reading NTR
>having standards

Not possible
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No bully

>>4085203
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>>4085734
Page 214:

>"No... I was just... pretending..."

>"I didn't... really... mean it..."

>"Huh?! I thought you did."

>"I'll have to spur you on more."

"And I thought that you committed to me. In fact you're a cheeky little princess and tricked me."

>"I thought that I conquered you, but you're just cold- hearted and pretended."
(Not sure:
最初のうちこそ
勇美しかったが
あとは何とも
あつけなかつたぜ )

>"Anyhow. This woman..."

>"She complained about her brother-in-law."

>"Do you want to decribe how? Yayoi..."

>"What did you say about the guy when we first had sex?"

>"Such a... thing"

>"... I don't want to say it..."

>"Be honest now!"

>"Or do you want me to use force?"
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>>4085755
It is possible. I'm not a NTR reader per se. I liked Tsukino Jyogi's other works, though.
Besides, I finish things I started.

My main fetishes are elsewhere.
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>>4085810
A little correction:
>She complained about her brother-in-law.

I think I misinterpreted that. Actually it's more something like:

>"The reason she's having sex with me has to do with her brother-in-law"
>"Tell him how, Yayoi."

Sorry.
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>>4085810
this is too much fun

>"Or do you want me to use force?"
>next panel pokes her pussy
what's he trying to convey?
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>>4085810
Page 215:

>"To protect you... I thought I could protect you this way..."

>"I wanted you to be safe..."

>"Hiro... I just wanted to protect you..."

>"This woman isn't very clever."

>"She believed this bullshit and now her pussy is all worn out and deteriorated because of that."

>"No matter her reasons, her body still turned out this way."

>"Here. Just look at the state of her vagina."

>"Nooo!"
>"Not now!"

>"It's leaking out! All of it!"

>"It's coming out... right in front of... Hiro!"

At least the author seems to be aware that the story is retarded.
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>>4085928
Hiro is the author self-insert.
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That's it for today. I'll continue on Sunday, probably. There's around 15 pages left.

Have some Sekko Boys in the mean time:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFTG6Lq1l9k

Oh, and please keep the post count relatively low. I don't want to start another thread or be done when this thread is already on page 10.
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chop chop
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>>4085929
Care to elaborate?
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I'm really hoping someone type sets this when its done. I doubt jewcob will pick this up anyway since its intense ntr.
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>>4086778
Nobody will make that effort because this is not a real translation.
We are just trying to satisfy our curiosity.
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>>4084983
>"beauty is nothing without a sense of loss"
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>>4085820
Finishing something just because you started, especially something as petty as a bad hentai, is a terrible reason to continue. If you recognize something is bad, you should leave it alone.
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>>4086787
dude shut up already
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>>4086787
You will think otherwise when you leave your basement and get a real work
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>>4086787
Eh, you're probably right. Still, even though it doesn't seem that way, I somewhat enjoy doing this. Not because of the content of the pages, but rather because it gives me the chance to learn a bit more Japanese. I definitely picked up more Kana than I could read before and some Kanji as well.

Also, I learned what つ (Tsu) means That sign indicates consonant gemination and Japanese apparently like to use it at the end of sentences as well to emphasize them.

Overall, the story is extremely stupid and doesn't win any awards whatsoever, yet I'm somewhat amused by it. The longer I'm doing this, the less I can take it seriously. I even got some chuckles out of a few pages.
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>>4086778
>>4086780
just how hard is just to post the jewcuck version here?
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>>4086966
What do you mean? The first 4 chapters were fan translated and Fakku didn't do anything with it afterwards aside from purging it from other sites.

The first 4 chapters in English are here:
http://nhentai.net/g/111330/
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Another note: The drugs Yayoi took apparently have to be dissolved and she always did that by drinking the piss of the bastard. I wonder where Tsukino Jyogi got that bullshit from.
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>>4085753
Still drugs, those shit had secondary effects that's why the gang kicked him out.
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>>4085810
Man he is one ugly fucker
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>>4086973
>Japan
>Drugs
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>>4085928
Aren't you doing the missing pages?
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>>4087786
Tomorrow, he said
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>>4087786
I don't have access to the necessary programs until Sunday.
Glad that some people still care, apparently.
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>>4087839
Nice work We are waiting bro.
Once last pages are done you can come back to chapter 5 and the missing stuff.

Half the work is done already. Thanks.
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>>4088190
I won't do the entire rest. Way too much hassle for what it's worth.

I may just do a few pages I personally think are interesting. Something in the range of 5 to 10 pages, not much more.
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>>4088190
Uhhhh that sounds bad.

First drugs use, cigarette scene, first half of ch7 basically

But why not all if so much its done already? It's only gonna drive fans crazy with speculation. Finish it please even 2 pages/day is good.
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>>4088206
I intend to translate the few pages in chapter 7 where Yayoi took drugs, the ones with thought bubbles that were focused on her piercings and a few of previous chapters with Hiro's thoughts. Basically pages that seem important. 30+ pages of the same shit talking by Hebitsuka and Yayoi screaming about her orgasms isn't worth it.
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>>4088206
Speculation!? People already know the fucking ending.
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>>4088234
So what? we knew the end since november. It's been more than 14+ months since chapter 5 was published.

We want to know everything about it if possible. Now more than ever nobody is gonna pay for 30-40 more random pages here and there.

If we don't get it now, its probably never gonna get done. And for real Never.
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you forgot even if someone wants to pay nobody is gonna accept because of jews
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>>4088323
What books Fakku releases has almost nothing to do with them having translations or not. They just spit out whichever makes the most money for them.
Most of their releases were already fully or partially translated, but the people on their site still buy it. This partial translation doesn't affect the probability of the title being released in English at all.

Why do you so desperately want all of it translated? The majority of the pages are typical Hentai talk like everywhere else that doesn't add much to the mediocre story.
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>>4088459
Are you nuts? Anons have waited this for over a year of course he (we) are gonna want fully know what happens not "summaries" or "probably this" bullcrap again.
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>>4088463
No, I'm not nuts. I just don't want to waste even more time on this. Why should I want to translate 50 pages of Hebitsuka talking shit? You know the gist of the story by now, most of the talking during the sex scenes doesn't add to it. Just read the dialogue from previously translated chapters. It's pretty much the same like in every other H-Manga.
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>>4088465
That's a disappointment
>>
Didn't this h-manga end like a year ago? Was it just never translated?
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>>4088500
Indeed, and it never will be since translator-san is gonna do last chapter and forget 5-6-7 & the extras.
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today is the day
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>>4088726
I'm on it already.

>>4088502
I already said that I couldn't even do the two bonus pages if I wanted to.
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>>4085928
Page 216 took me pretty long because I had to copy half of the text manually (the OCR program fails when the background isn't completely white or black):

>"I'm cumming..."

>"Aaahhhhh..."

>Yayoi-san!

>She was climaxing...

>She shrieked like a spider.
(I think there's better idioms, but that's the literal translation)

>Drool was dripping from her mouth...

>So much squirting...

>I never saw something like that, not even in AV-

>Th... This is... such an intense orgasm from Yayoi

>Yayoi-san...has fallen...

>Yayoi-san... and her pussy (or just Yayoi's pussy?) has fallen completely!
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>>4088797
>(or just Yayoi's pussy?)

This is obviously a note by me, not part of the actual text.
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>>4088797
Page 217:

>"I'm... going crazy."

>"I feel like..."

>"I'll lose my mind from this."

>"As I thought... There's no doubt about it."

>"You guys are an interesting couple"
(actually you are very interesting brother and sister-in-law)

>"Or rather... You fit perfectly for each other."

>"This woman is the same as you."

>"To get this excited in this abnormal situation..."

>"Brother-in-law... Listen."
>"Look at the miserable state of the one you love."

>Yayoi is...

>...just like me?!

>"There's nowhere to run, Yayoi."
(or "escaping is useless, Yayoi")

>"You have to confess if you want to further go mad."
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>>4088847
>>4088797
WHATS HAPPENING TO YAYOI !!!???
>>
and this shit has a vanilla ending after all this?

fucking lol, japan.
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>>4088860
She's evolving
>>
Damn she's a fine beautiful woman.
Hebitsuka is an idiot for not coming back to pound her big round belly until passing out.
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>>4088872
You're saying the same things over and over again.
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what the actual fuck?
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>>4088847
>"Sex... He forced me to have sex with him."

>"He said that... if I didn't, a terrible fate... would await you, Hiro..."

>"We did it... so many times..."

>"That's... how I... eventually turned out this way..."

>"Even my womb... and my ass... so many times... he fucked them over and over again..."

>"This... this man..."

>"His... penis covered with warts... really..."

>"It was impossible for me to go against it..."

>"My vagina..."

>"Was captivated by it..."

>"It is incomparable to yours, Hiro..."
>"It's totally different..."

>"Even for an adult... It's awesome..."
(or "even compared to other adults...")

Really so much stupid H-Logic.
>>
His cock is truly a widow killer as he said at the start
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lel, this hentai is so bad and so good
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>>4088963
What a pervert.
This is Christian board.
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>>4088963
I reported you.

I translated page 219 in the other thread, but I realized that I made some mistakes because of incorrectly OCRing it. It will come shortly.
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>>4088936
Page 219:

>"So, Yayoi..."

>"What happened eventually?"

>"S... Sex... Because of this cheating sex..."

>"I thought it would... just be... sex..."

>"But because I had this much sex with someone other than Hiro, I...!"

>"No!"
>"I can't say it!"

>"Please stop it."
>"Anything but that. Don't make me say it!"

>"Shut up! I won't let it end here!"

>"Scream what happened, Yayoi!"

>"Aahh..."
>"I got pregnanttt."
>"I conceived your childdd!"

Apparently Yayoi really is retarded. Her not aborting for some stupid aspull like "it was too late" when you can't even see her belly and it's less than 3 months is so stupid.
And don't come up with that "she wanted his child", NTR fags.
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I'll continue tomorrow. Just one thing:

The first thought bubble on the next page (220) says:

>"Hiro... I love you..."

And it's "愛してる" (aishiteru) which is much stronger than "大好き" (daisuki), so she really means it from the bottom of her heart.
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>>4088969
Honestly you can stop now. Boku no Yayoi is already translated and uncensored by Fakku. They have many Wani mangas that are ready to be released but is being hold back on purpose. Apparently their subscription is like a Kickstarter stretch goals and only after a specific number of subscribers is reached, a group of mangas will be released.
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>>4089003
Where did you get this information from?

I'll do the last 10 pages regardless. I'll just hold off with the few pages from the remaining ones in that case.
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>>4088993
>"I conceived your childdd!"
when did she gave birth?

>>4089000
didn't she said "i cant think anymore" a while ago. Plus drugs.

>>4089003
stupid fuck
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>>4089006
conceive = getting pregnant, not giving birth.
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>>4089005
I "explored" the website. I saw covers of NTR2, Boku no Yayoi, Michael Keikaku and another Distance cover during my search. While this seems to be bullshit, I did saw uncensored pages of NTR2 and Michael Keikaku. I'm not sure about Boku no Yayoi though.
Also, Jewcob is apparently very willing to release any Wani manga so long as there is demand on it. He is reluctant that Rape/NTR theme Mangas may be risky, he is OK as long as people want it (Like Hanafuda). Maybe people should create an thread for Boku no Yayoi and start campaigning in the Fakku threads. Most people here think publishers are demons. Many manga like Takemiya's Evergreen was released from individual suggestions.
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>>4088993
Fuck it, I can still do that little text today.

Page 220:

>Hiro... I love you...

>Hiro... You are the only one I love!

>"Because of... all that I have done..."
>"there... is now a baby..."
>"... in my belly."

>"Because I had so much sex..."

>"Now... I have... the baby of this man... in my womb."

>"I'm sorry... Hiro..."

>"I'm a bad woman..."

>"I'm really sorry"

Apparently not sorry or clever enough to use birth control or abortion...
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>>4089046
Also, why didn't she say the "I love you" out loud? I don't get it.

>>4089022
Good to know. Would be interesting to see how this would sell on their website and how much hate comments there would be. Probably a lot. That would also shut up NTR fags about proclaiming this being popular.
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>>4089046
>im sorry
>i love you
>but i will still fuck this guy in front of you
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>>4089050
IT is popular mr fagget
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>>4089095
Not as popular as his other stories if you go from the reviews. Seriously, the story is a mess.
Very nice of you to insult me when you wouldn't even get the meaning of these pages if I didn't waste my time on this.

And others are so ungrateful they call me out for not translating chapters 5 to 7 as well, when ch. 5 is already mostly in the OVA and the other two barely have story relevance.
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>>4089298
Hentai 'reviews' are pretty stupid.
Repeating 100 more times this book is bad or well received means jackshit
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>>4089398
You can still compare them to Tsukino's other books, and in that regard it's doing worse.

Good reviews and selling numbers are positively correlated, and it's the same way the other way around.
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>>4089400
Because you can show even remotely accurate sale numbers, right?
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>>4089402
No, but 2.5 stars on average (half of them being 1 star) and being his lowest rated book aside from his maid story that got loads of 1-star reviews because of bad censorship, don't speak for high poularity. Same thing on DMM: 2 stars for the OVA.
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>>4089414
Uhu 10 reviews over a sample of ~4000.
Sounds trustworthy.
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>caring for amazon jp ratings
A whole new level of retard
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>>4089419
so what can you show that it IS poular? Nothing. Bad reviews are a bad sign for sales numbers.

>>4089422
Ad hominem, no arguments. 0/10
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>>4089424
Same nonsense. Talk in personal terms because you know nothing dude.
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>Arguing and getting mad over some low tier manga
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Seems like most people outside of 4chan dont like this, why is it liked here though?
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>>4089430
Naah nterorare is just worth talking more than avg
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>>4089432
Probably because it attract lots of NTR fags compared to other sites.
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>>4089438
>>4089432
It's a netorare thread of a long awaited netorare book
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>>4083931
>>4084368
>>4084507
>>4085059
>>4085810
>>4089046
TYVM fam.
Great book and great job, you should go pro.
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>>4089442
This is a thread for the translation of chaper 8, not a NTR thread in general.

And 4chan and by extension sadpanda having more NTR fags than average is pretty much true from my experience. A comment I made on one of the Netoraregatari doujins on sadpanda about the story being stupid and that Araragi is acting completely OOC got downvoted to death there, but pretty much the same comment got loads of upvotes on Pururin.
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>>4089446
No, I won't do that. I'm just good at using different dictionaries and make out the meaning of garbled sentences that machine translations spit out.

Not as good as a real translation since I'm missing details, but sufficient to get the meaning.
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4chan and panda netorare stronk
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>Netoraregatari
Damn I hope we can get sequel for c89.
One of the few stories that delivers both art and story wise.
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>>4089456
See? That's exactly what I mean. That doujin series is completely retarded, but people on here still praise it.
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>>4089466
It's really good tbh.
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>>4089466
OP try to OCR this if you got bored with that Yaoi shit
http://exhentai.org/g/692525/7987e4becc/
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>>4089470
You go OCR that and share the scripts with OP
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>>4089472
give me a good ocr soft and i will do it.
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>>4089470
I won't. I'm not really a fan of NTR in general and I need around 15 - 30 minutes for OCR per page, unless there's very little text. I won't invest over 30 hours in this.

I'll start with the next pages soon. I think I should be done tomorrow or Wednesday.
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>>4089470
>>4089477
Also, there's a summary of the plot and its 80 page sequel here:
http://exhentai.org/g/692532/1563e6b5b8/
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>>4089476
Capture2Text
I.R.I.S Readiris
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>>4089472
I don't want to translate it either way. You can do it for yourself if you have the script. 2 or 3 different translation tools and a dictionary is enough to get the meaning.

And I think Mashiraga Aki deserves better either way. He's one of the few NTR authors that doesn't write facepalm- worty stories.
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>>4089486
Readiris (and ABBYY) are bad and take a long time. I would say KanjiTomo, Capture2text and e.Typist.
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>>4089046
Page 221:

The speech bubbles are

>"Aahh"
>"Aahhh"
a bunch of times in the upper panel and
>"Haahh"
in the other panels.
It's a bit weird that they are written once in Hiragana and in Katakana for the entire rest.

The thought bubbles:

>I... I love you...!

>I love you, Yayoi-san...

>Even now...

>I still love you, Yayoi-san!

So they both think the same thing, but neither say it out loud.
>>
bad timing
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>>4089529
Page 222:

>"Gahaha..."
Don't know what this is: >イイザマだぜ
(Probably some onomatopoeia that he's laughing)

>"Even while the sister-in-law you love so much confessed to you in tears, you were still able to cum so much."

>"All right, Hiromichi..."
(Is that his full name?)
>"I'll give you something special today."

>"In consideration of your spirit, I'll lend you her asshole."

>"Do you want to fuck it...?"

I wonder why at no point they even thought to beat the shit out of him. Even if he's stronger, it's 2 vs 1. And Yayoi could have called the old gang members a long time ago already.
Well, there's no logic to be found here anyway.
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>>4089602
Page 223:

A bunch of

>"Hah..."

on this page.
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>>4089606
Page 224:

>"Haa"

>"Yayoi-san's asshole..."

>"It was obviously well-trained."

>"It accepted me without any resistance whatsoever..."
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>>4089610
Oops, everything except the "Haa" is only thought, so scrap the quotation marks for the sentences.
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>>4089602
this is great
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>>4089610
Page 225:

>"Oohhh"

>"Your pussy became more lively when your beloved brother-in-law penetrated your asshole."

>"Your womb is desperately aching for my cock juice. I will give you as much as you want."

>"Right, Yayoi?"

>"You're sucking me in, right?"
(I'm not sure on this line. Would appreciate someone helping out with this:
吸 い つく相手
間違えてんぞ?)

>"I... I can't help it?!"

>"I just got used to it"
(or addicted)

>"Of course my womb is reacting to it when there's a cock right in front of it?!"

>"Of course I factored this in already. I just like the way you behave"

>"Your reaction is as good as I expected."

>"It's really a beautiful view."

>"It's this spectacle I wanted to see."

He's truly shit talking 24/7.

The page gave me problems because sometimes this was written:
>じ
but what's actually correct would be this:
>し

It's probably supposed to indicate that Yayoi stutters, that's why she pronounces the words stronger.
>>
That's it for today.
I'll probably be done tomorrow. I'll check if I made OCR mistakes with the pages in the previous thread and try to correct them afterwards.

I'll post the rest of the chapter again regardless.
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>>4089645
You are the man anon.
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>>4089646
Seriously, thanks anon. Some of us just like NTR because we enjoy seeing the girl fall from grace into corruption. Most NTR stories are truly shit and unbelievable anyways but man do they have the best scenes out there which make great fap material to see a girl's expression in sheer ecstasy.
>>
Enjoyed this thoroughly, thanks based OP.
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>>4088993
May she doesn't believe in abortions.
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>>4089786
Wrong. It's explicitly stated in the epilogue that "it was too late for surgery / abortion and the only thing she could still do was giving birth", which is a load of crap.

Also, her womb is completely empty in these internal shots aside from Hebitsuka's semen.
I could forgive the latter, but the first is just horribly bad writing.
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>>4089880
Or she's a genius and know her child is Hiro's
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>>4089891
No, she's retarded. See what she said here.
>>4088993
>>4089046

She believes she eventually got pregnant after weeks of fucking by Hebitsuka, not immediately from the first time with him or even from Hiro.

The Hamburgers still make me think it's Hiro's though.
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>>4089893
Who she's talking about is very ambiguous. If the translation is accurate, she could be referring to Hebitsuka or Hiro. If this is the Jyogi's saving grace (dual meaning of sentences) well it's not that bad. He told us who's the true father of the child and we never realize it
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>>4089897
I'm very sure she talks about Hebitsuka having impregnated here on these two pages, not Hiro. She wouldn't say something like that she's sorry and that she got pregnant because she had this much sex with him otherwise.
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>>4089897
Stop being in denial about it, anon.
>>
Why did pearl dick stop fucking and leave her?
Is it because her holes were torn up too much?
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>>4089912
I'll see if something changes after having translated the last few pages, but for me it's just that he was happy with her turning into a disgusting whore and her training (for whatever) being complete.

>>4089911
He may be in denial about what Yayoi said, but not necessarily about the child being Hiro's.
>>
What was the cause of dead of the big bro?
Do you think he was killed by the cunt?

That would be maximum NTR
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>>4089937
Do you mean Hebitsuka with cunt? No, definitely not. First, that would have been mentionend and he would rot away in prison for life if that was the case. He was thrown out of the gang and not around anymore when Hiro's brother died.
It was probably an accident or something.
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>>4089937
The cuck killed himself on the streets.
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>>4089964
He wasn't a cuck. And suicide wasn't mentioned either.
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>>4089943
There is no need to be explicit, Hebitsuka is on a revenge spree, what if it was something implicit in an old chapter?
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>>4090010
Hiro's brother died 5 years ago, Hebitsuka was thrown out of the gang and left town years before that. And why should he wait 5 years to fuck Yayoi after killing her brother?

There is no murder. Yayoi and Hiro would have reacted totally different to the death of him otherwise.
>>
The only reason Hebitsuka didn't killed him is because Tsukino Joygi pussied out on the ending.

Should have been the cherry on top.
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>>4090012
>Alpha of the gang dies, still waits 5 years then starts his revenge on the girl and kid
Wow, Hebitsuka is really a loser.
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>>4090013
Please go and stay go.
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>>4090015
You think a random kill gangbanger goes to the news front page anon?

>>4090018
But I'm staying.
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>>4089645
Page 226:

>"Hey, Hiro."

>"Her ass is the most you will get!"
(Not entirely sure:
せいぜい肉壁
コスってやんな!!)

>"How does your cock feel in there?!"

>"Haa... Haa..."

>"Ya... Yayoi-san feels so soft..."

>"Yayoi-san's ass... feels as soft as a pussy..."

>"Say something about it, Yayoi-"

>"Tell him why that is so."

>"That's because... I was fucked so much..."

>"Because... my asshole was fucked so much and because of the drugs I took..."

>"...My asshole widened"
(or "it got larger")

>"My asshole... got way too biggg"

>"B... But because of that, I can feel it really good."

>"I can feel you entering my meat walls, Hiro..."
(more literally it's "mucous membrane", but that feels weird)

>"The cock of my favorite Hiro..."
>>
I decided to put a name on for this thread. I wouldn't feel very comfortable if this translation would only be contributed to "Anonymous". It's the name of one of my favorite characters.

And no, it's not from One Piece.
>>
>"That's because... I was fucked so much..."
I see the word for love or kawaii, lovely,
twice
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>>4090077
Does getting fucked in the ass a lot make it softer?
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>>4090079
That is "to make love" so = fuck

>>4090080
That's what it says.
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>>4090077
Page 227:

>"What... Already?"
>"That's all you've got?"

>"This is why you're just a little brat with almost no experience..."
>"You don't have any endurance."

>"Just as I expected from your runny nose, you reach your climax and spurt your semen way too fast."
(or something like that:
鼻水みてエな
精液ごときで
臨界迎えてんじゃ
ねーよコ ラ)

>"I can show you how to give her a little bit more pleasure."

>"What shall we do, Yayoi?"
>"I know that your pussy can't endure anymore."

>"Uuhhh...!"
>"I can't stand it anymooore..."

>"Sperm... I want you to shoot semen in my womb as well."

Doesn't make much sense to me how Hiro is a quickshot here when he came right before that and had way more endurance in previous chapters.
Well, fuck logic.
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>>4090113
Thats because he gets more excited seeing Yayoi getting fucked and being ecstatic like that

Basically, hes a cuck
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>>4090113
Is he cumming in her brain?
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>>4090018
>>4090077
>>4090078
are you the same guy by chance?
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>>4090134
Problem?
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>>4090113
Damn, he really made her his woman, body and soul, eh?

I love/hate when that happens.
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>>4090113
Page 228:

>"E... ejaculate..."
>"Shemen..."
>"Give me your shemen..."

>"Your shemen..."
>"Let me taste it..."

>"Well, I'll give you plenty of it."

>"Compared to yours... his (semen) was useless."

>"Yours is thicker and stronger..."

>"Shoot out... your strong and thick shemen in my womb..."

>"It's useless... if it isn't yours."

>"My womb... is waiting for you to spurt it out..."

>>4090134
Yes, isn't that obvious?
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>>4090141
No, her soul belongs to Hiro
>>
>Shemen
are you okay anon?
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>>4090158
>Being this new to hentai
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>>4090158
She's slurring her words.
>>
She's just openly admitting the same submission >>4085716 she already did months back on 6.
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>>4090165
More like weeks, not months.
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>>4089046
>>4088993
>only this little bit at final chapter
But the extra pages have the kanji for pregnancy.....
Doesn't look like the house either, maybe a love hotel?

A damn shame OCR software won't work over color. Now i'm angry.
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>>4090145
Page 229:

>Yayoi-san...

>She... kissed him... and rolled around her tongue...

>"Shperm... Give it to me..."

>"Your shperm... inside my pussy..."

>While their tongues entangled... she pleaded to him...

>She entreated him to ejaculate inside her uterus while desperately kissing him...

>It was not only her mouth above...

>But also her mouth down below-

>I could feel through the meat walls how her womb was sticking to his penis and sucked him in...

>She... was completely enslaved by him...

>Her pussy invited him in...

>In this way... Yayoi-san's pussy was disciplined... and she became his woman...
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>>4090172
I can OCR the narration text and could try to transcribe the dialogue manually save for the more complicated Kanji but it's a shit ton of text and probably not worth it. It looks like the bath room of the house to me.

There's one page left, then I'm done. I'll check if I made big mistakes for the last pages and then post them again.
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>>4090203
>literally twice the girth
They never stood a chance...

>mfw I'll never have a woman suck my dick in with her womb
why even live?
>>
>all that tongue description
he can't even see her face

>feel the meat walls
we x-rays now?

>shperm
>shemen
do you even English, motherfucker?
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>>4090213
I already said that she's slurring, dipshit. Ever read other Hentai?

I'm just translating this as best as I can, yet there's still ungrateful cunts like you.
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>>4090213
>do you even English, motherfucker?
Is this your first time reading mindbreak hentai ?
>>
It's the same troll since two threads ago, don't reply to him.

Most of us are busy fapping to even write TY based anon
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>>4090203
Page 230:

>"Mmhh..."
>"Mmphh..."
>"Puuhh..."

>"Aahh..."

>"Savor it."

>He... he started ejaculating...!

>He... squirted it out mercilessly...

>...into her womb... even though she was pregnant.

>He... spurted out such a large amount anyway... and made her womb drink it!

The text says she's pregnant, but there's nothing that indicates it in her womb.

>>4090224
People really fap to this? I didn't since chapter 3.

And I actually started to use a name, even if people didn't realize it.
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>>4090229
Top panel the boy looks particular pitiful.
Like half their size or less.
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>>4090229
>People really fap to this?
Why do you think people are still here and asked for a new thread after the first one died?

Why do you think some people are begging you to make the rest of the chapters?

Just saying
>>
>People really fap to this?
Bruh this thread reeks of man juice.
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>>4090229
I get they are mocking him but he was same height as Yayoi on first chapters.

>He... he started ejaculating...!
Oh shit first I thought Yayoi was saying this but its Hiro.
That's gotta be... as if he was the one being cummed inside!
An otherworldly feeling for sure..
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>>4090253
He also didn't come within a minute in the first chapters. Pretty awful.
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>>4090229
Page 231:

>"Hey, Yayoi."
>"Do you have something to say to your boyfriend / lover?"

>"Mhh..."
>"Fuuhh..."
>"I... I love you!
>"Hiro... I love you!"

>"But... The dick of this bastard..."

>"His... dick and his semen, I..."

>"I lost against it..."

>"My love for you was soiled by this mannn..."

I think it's better than the first time around, right?


>"Hiro... I was soiled by this person."
>"Hiro... He recently..."
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>>4090262
Oops, disregard the last two lines.

I'll post the remainder tomorrow. Maybe I'll change a few lines slightly with my new knowledge. I learned quite a lot from this experience.

Also, that's the guy I got my name from:

Good night.
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>>4090264
Many thanks.
>>
>>4090264
Thanks as always
>>
You da real MVP OP
>>
>>4090264
Good work
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>>4090262
Page 232:

>"It feels good..."
>"Yayoi's..."

>"Yayoi's ass..."
>"It feels extremely pleasant."

>"It's... all because of him."
>"Thanks to him... Hiro"

>"Because of this vile beast..."
>"I... am completely trained."
>"Because he tortured and disciplined me so much...."

>"Your anus feels just like a pussy..."
>"It became so wet and tight... Yayoi-san..."

>"To my regret... Yayoi- san was stolen from me..."
(More literally "I was Netorare'd")

"That's... I..."
"At first... I tried to resist him..."
>"But... It was in vain."

>"This sex is amazing...."
>"It's not just your pussy or ass..."
>"Your heart, body and soul as well..."
>"All of it was defiled..."

What a weird conversation...
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>>4090609
Who says those last four lines?
>>
>>4090624
Hiro, obviously.
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>>4090609
>"I was Netorare'd"
Gotta be a first time ever I hear an MC saying that.
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>>4090609
Whay don't he just pull her off and just beet the shit out of him
>>
>>4090642
Yayoi would probably kick Hiro in the balls if he tried to unplug her.
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>>4090609
Page 233:

>"It's absolutely useless unless it's him..."

>"Now... only he... can make me orgasm."

>"Good... Hey."
>"I'll give you another shot."

>"Ng... Fuu..."
>"It's... cute..."

>"Hiro's ejaculation..."
>"Even though it's lovely..."
>"It's absurd..."

>"Such an ejaculation... can't satisfy me..."

>"Your ejaculation... can't compete... to the one in my vagina."

Obviously, the amount of cum is the most important thing to make a woman orgasm.

>>4090642
Because stupid H-Logic.
If there was an ounce of logic here, Yayoi would have called the cops or her old gang to beat the shit out of him instead of becoming his sex slave. Same thing goes for aborting.
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>>4090648
Stop talking shit.

She begged Hebitsuka to stop this already, but he didn't listen.
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>>4090649

Page 234:

Bunch of

>"Haa..."
and
>"Hee..."
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>>4090649
I would love to see that police report
>>
>>4090651
>>4090649
>>4090113
>>4089606
>>4089602
Why all the NTR mangas/doujins always have the best anal scenes? That asshole is hella obscene and delicious
>>
>>4090652
He raped and drugged girls years ago, and he still deals with these illegal drugs. Also, he threatened to use violence against Hiro. That's enough to put him under surveillance and get him in jail as soon as he approaches Hiro.

Instead, we get the cliched "use your body as a sex slave to protect him"
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>>4090651
Page 235:

>"Ha... Ha..."
>"My pussy..."

>"It... feels sho goood..."

>"This... this semen... I love it."

>"My vagina... feels like it's melting..."
>"There's so much of it sticking inside me."

>"Don't... Don't look..."
>"...Hiro..."

>"I... don't want you to see this..."

>"This... semen is... flowing into my pussy..."

>"I'm... having an orgasm... because of this semen..."
>"So please... don't look at my pussy now..."

>"Ha... Ha..."
>"It's delicious..."

>"My vagina... is so full."

>"It is over... Yayoi."

>"... Your training is completed."

Yayoi is ashamed what a whore she became and doesn't want Hiro to see her in this pathetic state.
>>
>>4090678
>"It is over... Yayoi."

>"... Your training is completed."


Kek'd
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>>4090678
Looks like the semen is all what you need to make her orgasm. Kek.
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>>4090649
>Obviously, the amount of cum is the most important thing to make a woman orgasm
Nobody is gonna try to refute this
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>>4090678
>Your training is completed
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Everything about this gets me mad
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>>4090678
Page 236:

>That was the end of it.
>After that night...

>Hebitsuka disappeared without a trace.

>It's been 5 months since he left.

>He perfectly accomplished his revenge.

>Concerning me...
>I missed the opurtunity for surgery / abortion.
>The only thing I could still do was giving birth to this baby in my stomach.

This page is full of bullshit. Her belly didn't even really show at the park. Tsukino Jyogi is a hack.
And don't come up with "she wanted the baby". She clearly regrets it and doesn't want it, but Tsukino's bad writing prevented her to abort.

>>4090683
That was sarcasm, actually.
>>
>>4090689
>still has piercings

She loves him
>>
>>4090689
>Her belly didn't even really show at the park.
If you want to take reality, not every pregnant woman belly grow at the same rate.
Some women even keep ovulating while they are pregnant.
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>>4090690
Touch think so
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>>4090689
Page 237:

>However, my body changed.

>It is impossible for me to forget this intense sex I experienced.

>My body still itches from time to time.

>Intermittently, a strong desire is taking hold of me.

>I don't know if it's because of his dick or whether it's the aftereffects of the drugs I took.

>Maybe... It's both.

>"Yayoi-san"

>"A friend came to visit."

>"Is that so?"

>"Well..."
>"Bring him up here, then."

>>4090690
Keep your bullshit to yourself.

She said "Aishiteru" to Hiro and still called Hebitsuka a bastard at the park. It's just bullshit all around.

Still, more bullshit incoming at the next page.
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>>4090692
I already said that with the provided time frame, she was 2 months pregnant, 3 at max. 4 if you're really stretching it. That is still not too late for abortion.
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>>4090699
>thinking of his dick 24/7 even after 5 months
>has kept the piercings because they were a gift from him
>not love

>She said "Aishiteru" to Hiro and still called Hebitsuka a bastard at the park

She only said that so that Hiro wouldnt kill himself
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>>4090701
>She only said that so that Hiro wouldnt kill himself
She loves Hiro, but she doesn't love his cock
>>
>>4090701
Her keeping the piercings is due to stupid H-Logic, like the entire story. She loves Hiro from the bottom of her heart, and hated Hebitsuka till the very end.
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>>4090702
No, she said that she loves his dick here, but unfortunately because her body changed, it couldn't satisfy her anymore.
You could also translate it to "my favorite dick of Hiro", not just "the dick of my favorite Hiro". Wasn't sure which one is correct.
>>4090077
>>
>>4090699
>"a friend came to visit"

More like I brought a friend over.
>>
>>4090706
the things you say =/= the way you act

Fuck off little white cuck, I'm not a shitposter
>>
>>4090706
Are you planning to do any other doujin or hentai manga?
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>>4090704
Should she take that shit off because she is having a kid
>>
>>4090708
>Not a shitposter
>Uses ad hominem and insults the hand that feeds him

I hate cunts like you. I really do.
>>
>>4090714
I just said I'm not a shitposter
>>
>>4090715
To quote yourself:

>the things you say =/= the way you act
>>
>>4090721
>To quote yourself:
>Her keeping the piercings is due to stupid H-Logic, like the entire story. She loves Hiro from the bottom of her heart, and hated Hebitsuka till the very end.

>the things you say =/= the way you act
>>
Translator-san, your training is completed
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>>4090699
Page 238:

>"Ahh.. Ahh..."
>"So good..."

>"This is great."

>"This cock..."
>"It's so good."

>"Ha... Ha..."
>"This is awesome."
(Or "I see this often", but that doesn't fit that well, I think. よく見て)

>"Look at how your cock is going in and out of my pussy."

>"You can cum as much as you want?!"

>"Ahh... Ahh..."
>"Ihh... Ihh..."

>"I'm cumming..."
>"My pussy is cumming..."

>"Ihh..."
>"Yayoi-san..."

>"Your ahegao face looks great..."

>"It must feel good to do it with his cock."

>"You slovenly stick out your tongue and you're drooling."

>"Yayoi-san... You're so sexy."

>"You're so beautiful when you have sex."

>"You're so erotic and beautiful."

Doesn't make any sense to me why Hiro voluntarily became a cuck when he was perfectly fine fucking her at the park.

>>4090707
So you can read Japanese? You're welcome to correct other mistakes. This one doesn't really change much in the story.
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>>4090727
What do you mean? That I got better?

>>4090711
Yes.

>>4090709
No, not really. Are you people content with this amateurish translation?
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>>4090732
>Are you people content with this amateurish translation?
Here? Yes
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>>4090730
Page 239:

>"You look exhausted."
>"The guy today was fantastic, right?"

>"Yeah..."

>"I had to hold back a little because of the baby in my belly."

>"I think it would have kicked me if I went at it more violently."

>"So... How about you?"
>"Did you like it?"

>"Yup..."
>"I came 4 times."

>This is... the arrangement between Hiro and me.

>"Well then... I'll make something to eat."

>"I would like to have some Hamburgers."

Yeah, real BS. Hiro obviously isn't impotent, so it doesn't make any sense why he doesn't fuck her herself. Doesn't look too traumatized to do it either.
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>>4090739
>Doesn't look too traumatized to do it either
He literally has no face until "I came 4 times". Hiro is traumatized as fuck
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>>4090739
Page 240:

>Ever since that night...
>We never had sex again. Not even once.

>Instead...

>Hiro occasionally brings friends over.

>We are both fully aware that this is wrong.

>Yet we accepted this twisted relationship of ours.

>"So, how's the food?"
>"Mmh. It's really delicious."

>All of this is unmistakably my fault.

>That night...
>I made this boy cry and broke his heart.

>But still...

>"You should hit the hay soon."

>"I will prepare the futon."

>"Ah.. I'll help you with that."

She should have tried to help him with his cuck fetish instead of going along with it. That only makes it worse.
See Netoraserare.
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>>4090741
That's just the art style. There's loads of pages where characters don't have faces in Tsukino's books.

They both don't have them at the next page either, for example.
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>>4090756
>That's just the art style.
maybe, but it seem is not just art style.
Their relationship is broken, that's why they don't have faces anymore when they are together. But I'm going to reread everything to see faceless faces before the park scene and are unrelated to the ntr aspect of the manga
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>>4090754
Page 241:

>Even though I gave up my ring...
>I couldn't bring myself to leave this house.

>The reason for this was Hiro.
>He detained me here...

>He said: "Please stay with me in this house."

>I think that at the very least... I want to do anything in my power to help him.

>I hope that... over time the inner wounds of this boy will eventually heal...

>"You'll catch a cold if you don't properly cover yourself."

>"Good night..."
>"Yayoi-san..."

That page still makes me a little depressed...
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>>4090758
They are everywhere.
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>>4090767
It's supposed to be
>"I want to do everything in my power to help him"
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>>4090767
Page 242:

>I knew you your whole life.

>Yet to this day, I also hurt you so much.

>Only when we are sleeping, we are connected with our hands.

>I will continue to stay close by your side.

>I won't leave your side... not even by a millimeter...

Yet NTR fags still say she doesn't love him.
>>
>>4090804
Dude you are broken
>>
>>4090815
Go get ntr by someone
>>
>>4090816
That's actually what I would like NTR fags to experience. That would smash their disgusting attitude.
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>>4090804
>Yet NTR fags still say she doesn't love him.
Probably because you are translating, but, you take words to literal.
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>>4090804
Page 244:

>"Hey, Mamaa."
>"What is this weird- looking thing?"

>"Again? You already asked that when we were here last May."
>"How many times will you ask the same questions?"

>"Oh well... This is the grave of your uncle."
>"Your uncle was the older brother of your papa."

>"So... Let's go, Yayoi."

>"Yes.. Darling."

Hiro dropped the "san" and the way Yayoi addresses him is like she is his wife, so they are most likely married. They don't look broken at all to me anymore.

I think the cucking at the end of chapter 8 was a fetish that Hiro eventually grew out of. Them not having other kids would be simply to using condoms or other birth control.
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>>4090830
He' s a pussy and her eyes are semi broken forever.

Cuck end.

No hope for them but perhaps for the little girl.
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>>4090837
The fuck is rong with you
>>
>>4090816
Sure, but most guys will either leave their girlfriend, best the shit of the NTR guy and bully their girl (Rough sex, not slapping or punching her and forget it).
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>>4090840
Beat the shit, I mean.
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>>4090839
Average reading comprehension
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What's the deal in here?
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>>4090842
what's up man did she hurt you that bad
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>>4090830
Page 245:

>"My stomach rumbles. Let's eat once we get back home.

>"What do you want for dinner?"

>"Mmhhh... Hamburgers!"

>"Haha"
>"I already thought so."

>"You really love Hamburgers after all."

>"Next in news..."

>"In the streets of Shinjuku, Tokyo, a man was found dead at the dawn of last night with several stab wounds..."

>"...Several synthetic drugs were seized from his corpse by the police..."

>"...The police men concluded that there is a very high possibility that the man was involved in the production or distribution of the drugs and got caught up in trouble because of that..."
>"further investigation on this matter is planned..."

Sucks that you can't see her face, but her shared love of Hamburgers with Hiro makes me really think she's is child.

And I'm surprised Hebitsuka wasn't murdered sooner.

I guess the epilogue is set somewhere around 5 to 6 years after the last chapter.
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>>4090846
This is a picture of Hiro, Yayoi and Hiro's brother when he was still alive.

Also
>>4090837
Fuck off. I've got enough of assholes you.
>>
>>4090857
*assholes like you.

I'll post the OCR file in a minute.
>>
Here it is:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYWU9fdTQ2SXRyeGc/view?usp=sharing

There may be a few mistakes with "っ" instead of "つ" or the other way around in a few instances, but it should still be helpful.
>>
>child will never know her father
Feels bad man
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>>4090846
She looks older and definitely has epilogue haircut.
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>>4090874
Her dad was an ass but they probably told her if they found out that was him
>>
So is there still interest in a few more select pages from the other chapters? I think it would be something between 5 to 10 pages in total. I will decide on them myself based on what seems important.

I hope I could mostly clear up the misunderstandings with how this story ended save for the most stubborn trolls. Still, I would appreciate someone saving the script externally in a pastebin or txt file.
It's really not that hard to copy paste the text and correct the few spelling mistakes or stuff I pointed out was wrong.
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>>4090880
You did good and fuck them
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>>4090880
Yes anon do all that's missing. Thank you.
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>>4090877
No, that's set years before the story. Hiro is a child there.

>>4090874
It could very well be Hiro. And even if not, better she never sees Hebitsuka's face unless you want something like this:
https://hitomi.la/galleries/837487.html
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>>4090885
I won't. Just half a dozen to a dozen pages. Hebitsuka shit talking over 50 pages is too nauseating for me and doesn't really change the story.

Why do people still call me anon?
Hmpf.
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>>4090730
>Doesn't make any sense to me why Hiro voluntarily became a cuck when he was perfectly fine fucking her at the park.
Hentai logic.

I bet my ass Tsukino was taking the same drugs Yayoi did.

>>4090767
If she really had a bit of heart she would have some shame and leave him so he could find a decent woman, he is still young and she damaged goods.

>>4090804
>Yet NTR fags still say she doesn't love him.
Since when ntrfags use their brain?

>>4090864
Not gonna download this shit but thanks anyway.

>>4090846
Compare her to how looks in pic related to how after the epilogue.


Did the author learned his lesson?
Maybe, maybe not.

But after that mess his mos recent stories were a continuation of an old series and the usual studen x old lady stuff. No long running series.
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>>4090896
>If she really had a bit of heart she would have some shame and leave him so he could find a decent woman, he is still young and she damaged goods.

She said she wanted to leave, but Hiro stopped her and wanted her to stay.
>>
>>4090896
Uhmnn... so salty.
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>>4090900
>She said she wanted to leave, but Hiro stopped her and wanted her to stay.
That's bullshit and you know it, since when she needed permission to do shit behind Hiro's back?

She didn't when she started to fuck with Hebitsuka so why she would have to ask Hiro to leave?

>>4090905
>ntrfag
>>
>>4090908
I think it was more something like that she was about to leave, but Hiro stopped her and begged her to stay. She probably didn't want to break his heart again after he wanted her to be with him.
>>
Last chapter proves Jyogu back out from an NTR ending. BNY originally ended with Hiro leaving the house while Yayoi and Hebitsuka are having sex 24/7 and Yayoi becoming nothing but a fuck toy. Hebitsuka (Apparently a paedophile too) also sexually abuses her daughter which is Hiro's child but he will never know since when thinks it's Hebitsuka's. This is the web ending.
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>>4090914
I doubt it, Hiro goes to work, so she has plenty of time to even pack her stuff and leave without trail.

>>4090918
Nice meme.
But you should know that hentai artist are bound by copyrights and are forbidden from doing works owned by their magazines.
>>
>>4090918
Got a sorce on that
>>
>>4090922
>>4090923
From what I gathered from 2ch, it was from an toranoana.jp illustration card which apparently says NTR ending.
>>
>>4090927
In 2ch they confirmed that in chapter 20 of Netoraserare sempai and wife fucked in the hospital.
What do you think how it turned out to be?
>>
>>4090927
To imitate someone else here:

>2ch as source
Special kind of retard.
>>
>>4090918
Well, if that were true, it would at least confirm my suspicion about who is the father.

And that sounds really like that Shiruka Bakaudon work I linked earlier. She makes all kinds of messed up red-pilled stories.
>>
>>4090935
Well, bonuses and illustration cards are rarely scanned so it will be an urban legend or a myth.
>>
>vanillafags tearing up over a lost cause.
Noice
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>>4090958
Not a ntr ending
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>>4090229
This makes perfectly clear why those two never had sex again. Thanks anon.
>>
>>4090964
the true Netorare never ends.
>>
>>4090935
Bonuses are just extra ilustrations, no contents on the story.

Don't believe those make up lies. You can see them samples on their webstores.
>>
>>4090968
This one did the retard got himself killed
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>>4090966
>anon

Maybe I should just give up.

Has anyone here played the game? Still one of my absolute favorites, especially the OST.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YXlE8ZESSEI

I teared up during that scene.

Main theme is godly, too:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBGgUtd7EdA
>>
>>4090973
Sometimes bonuses are illustrations... Sometimes these are short page chapters. Lie or not someone should ask Jyogi somewhere like his Twitter.
>>
>>4090980
I always thought Vivi is a child in disguise.
>>
>>4090986
Well, he is a child when he's less than 10 years old. Still sucks what happened to him at the end. Didn't even realize who the narrator for the final scene was until years later and what it meant. Very subtle storytelling.
>>
>>4090983
Extra pages are always included in the regular release of the tankobon.

The extra ilustrations are changed depending on the store, google it up, and you can see that it's just 2 one with Yayoi in nurse outfit in a suggestive pose and the other in the outfit she had when Hiro got his mind broken. Both with Tsukino's signature.
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>>4090975
Why us this epilogue so weird?
Unspecified timeskip.
Unspecified relationship.
Unspecified paternity.
>>
>>4090989
Post them.

I only saw one of Yayoi on bikini.
>>
>>4090990
Author didn't know how to end it.

In my opinion the fault goes to both, author and his editor.

Because usually long stories are thought in collaboration.
>>
>>4090964
the delusion is strong in this one
>>
>>4091043
He's just a troll
>>
>>4090739
Maybe he doesnt want that disgusting torn up pussy anymore?
>>
>>4091299
Hm, don't think so. He was very enthusiastic about her ass in the park, at least.

Let's just settle for shitty writing. That's the only valid explanation.
>>
Hiro got cucked hard
Good job anon
>>
>>4091299
I wouldn't touch that shit either, god knows how many AIDS there are on that.
>>
>>4090855
>>4090830
>>4090804
Sugoi, based translator-san.

Waited a long time for this, ty.

Can we expect the bonus next?
>>
Translation backup for the ages

http://pastebin.com/E6iYL0Cm
>http://pastebin.com/E6iYL0Cm
http://pastebin.com/E6iYL0Cm
>http://pastebin.com/E6iYL0Cm
http://pastebin.com/E6iYL0Cm
>>
Here's a file with the script since no one else wanted to do it, apparently. I don't know how to handle pastebins, so at least that could be done by someone else.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYekFsY0hXYmZfZG8/view?usp=sharing
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>>4092780
Oh, someone did it already. Now I feel stupid...

Oh well.
>>
>>4092780
Still, could you change the text on page 214, please?
Here:
>>4085892

And on page 241:
"everything" instead of "anything"

On page 224:
No quotation marks on Hiro's thoughts.

That's it, I think.
>>
Updated file where I also copied the text for the translated pages from chapter 6 and 7 from the previous thread:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwTwLZfCLSaYQXFWb3JJNjQ2aFk/view?usp=sharing
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Well since anon is translating NTR with half ass ending where the Male takes care of another man kid then you should translate fork in the road part 2 also
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>>4092911
No. How many times do I have to say that I'm not a fan of NTR?

I don't really want to translate anything else when there's much better translators out there who have a far better grasp of the Japanese language than me.

I won't elaborate on the matter of paternity and my name again, since it seems to be pointless.
>>
>>4092911
stop begging. Learn moonrunes yourself.
>>
So is there still interest for a few more pages from other chapters? I don't think I will do the bonus pages, unless someone provides me with the OCR for them.

I may start another thread once I have the motivation for it.
>>
>>4093415
If you keep doing other pages, the more people will demand for more. You should spend your time doing a manga or doujin you enjoyed and translate it instead of wasting your time.
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>>4093420
Right. I don't have that high of a motivation either, desu. I think I'll just leave it at that.
It's not like the other chapters change much about the story and ending.
>>
Thanks Vivi for your work on this.
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>>4093591
You're welcome.
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>>4093599
agree, but you gotta stop being a faggot sometimes.
just be more chill and keep getting better


this was a nice thread
>>
>>4093660
Sorry, but my emotions sometimes get the better of me, especially with NTR fags.
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>>4093663
>especially with NTR fags
you should probably stop translating ntr if the genre trigger you so much, because
>Sorry, but my emotions sometimes get the better of me

like I said, learn to chill out, after all you are getting mad at anonymous people on the internet. Is not worth it.

Peace
>>
>>4093667
Well, I did say that I don't plan to continue translating, didn't I?

It's not even necessarily the genre that upsets me, but more so its (mostly) obnoxious fan base.
>>
When is the rest coming?
>>
>>4093694
Just read the thread.
>>
Anyway, if you want a proper translation of the rest, try to ask in the Fakku forums. As someone else already said, they likely already have the uncensored pages and might consider translating it if there is demand.
My translation has inaccuracies and errors, so I would rather have someone competent translate the rest.
>>4089022

For example, someone told me that the first sentence on page 197 is more accurately

>"Thinking back, there were so many signs, but I never tried to confirm the unease I felt."

instead of

>In retrospect, this was certainly the turning point.
>What I saw was the confirmation for this "uncomfortable feeling" I had.

It's still a similar meaning, but I'm missing the point of some sentences.
>>4083927

So just ask Fakku if you want a proper translation instead of this amateurish one.
I'm not a fan of them, but they have the English rights for Wani stuff.

I'm done here, I think.
It was fun, more or less, and I at least learned some things because of it.
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