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What do you think about it? 2017-07-26 02:49:54 Post No. 315513
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What do you think about it? 2017-07-26 02:49:54 Post No. 315513
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It's a museum logo, and I'm having some trouble with the font, the concepts are: heavy, heritage, and inclusive.
criticism is welcome my friends, thanks
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I forgot to say, the colors are based on the ink used on serigraphy, and the museum is located on a hill
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Thicker Font needed - something to reduce the space between the letters. Try Open Sans Extra Bold
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You messed up over here.
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These details are so subtle that they do not scale well as a logo should and they make the building look like it wasn't thought out. Your logo alltogether doesn't feel confident.
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Even if the details are actually a part of the building, either exaggerate them, or remove them completely.
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I'm not big on the asymmetry. If there is going to be this much of it it needs a balance of some sort. I'd probably recommend bringing the left red ridge down to match the right side. Also would like to see the building a little lower since the red feels wort of overpowering.
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