quick question

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DELIL in a new dress

>>310801
no, nazis kept their stuff symmetric and correctly aligned.
>DEVK
>wannabe a slayer album cover
>wannabe a joy division album cover
make up your mind

also, if you are going to use those ugly gradients, use a higher color depth so you don't get those scan-line-sort-of-thingy

>>310801
No, but that doesn't stop it from being pretty awful

>>310801
DEUs Vult

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>>310804
What specifically isn't correctly aligned?
And almost everything is symmetric. All of it is at the same angle and aligned to the same grid.

>>310803
You can clearly see the v and the l are two different characters. Also the fact that you pointed it out shows that you know exactly what it's supposed to spell.

>>310804
Not based on either I don't even no what joy division is. It's based on an old arcade video game title.

Also how would you get 'k' the letters are equally spaced so you can tell where a new one starts and another ends?

I don't know why the bit depth is off on this though. It looks normal on my PC. Maybe I stuffed up the save settings or its a 4chan thing.


Ok someone explain to me how to make this look better? I tried to follow design "rules" but still bad feedback. Apart from gradients, I know designers hate them but everyone loves them irl.

>>310801
What is devic? Are you missing an e?

>DEVK
>DEVIC
>DELIL
this is everything but "DEVIL"

>>310801
Looks like a communist greek restaurant desu.