I really feel like this could be improved, but I'm stuck.

>>309911
learn typography, then learn how to design logos

Re-do the whole fucking thing. Jesus christ I hope that's not going to a client any time soon.

The Colors used don't fit well together. You could read about picking color pallettes and then decide what to do.This is important, learning what colors to use. Also, the font looks out of place. Try reading about typography, then try again. The Bird part looks decent, except for the back of the bird - try to keep the line at a constant thickness.

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>>309945
I really tried.

>>310009
substantial improvement from the first one, still not really a great logo though. serviceable if you don't really care about your brand, but it's not going to turn heads

>>309911
fix the font and circles and you're set

>>309911
font is way too cluttered, it's also ugly. What are you even using, Arial Narrow?!