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>>306093
Why are video game controllers making a basket ball?

>>306093
cool concept but yeah its like there are two worlds:
1 - the flat graphic (obviously digital) controllers
2 - the real world wood texture of the court.

maybe ditch the court (or render it as simplified graphic shapes) and give it a more flat coloured cartoony background?

>>306095
The goal was supposed be an ironic symbol so I contrasted video games with physical activity

>>306109
hmm okay - i mean it kind of works but both are about playing games?

maybe a better contrast would be a pure physical activity like weightlifting?
(the opposite of sitting in front of a console)

>>306109

When I see a basketball made out of console controllers, my mind immediately races to a basketball videogame, and not the opposition of physical activity vs sedentary activity.

>>306145
To elaborate further, a console controller made out of sports material (Balls, helmets, boots, etc) would work better.

>>306146
I got an A+ because I put more effort into this than other people put into theirs

>>306199
Grades mean nothing, especially when they come from effort.

Effort is not going to land you jobs, good practice will.

>>306249
Lol shut the fuck up and be happy for the kid

>>306274
Is that not the point of constructive criticism? Like why feel the need to coddle the kid?

>>306274

Why would I feel happy for someone i have no relation to? I can try offer some advise/help him, if he wants free sympathy he can look somewhere else.

I genuinely don't want to come across as a dick, but I feel constructive criticism is the way to go.

>>306274
This. Especially when your grade relies on your peers doing shitty.

>>306445
>>306445
I mean this >>306249

ironically good design should appear effortless ;)

>>306274
>Lol shut the fuck up and be happy for the kid

First of all. Anon here is trying to prepare him for Reality. highschool does not teach you that.


>>306094

I really hate how you used stroke effect on low res pictures. They look like shit. If this was EVER going to be on a basketball court, it has to look sharp as fuck. What I mean by that is that it needs to be a vector so whoever is going to put this decal on the court can easily blow it up with out it look like a low res shitty design.

Redo it again as a vector, not a raster.

>>306696

Same guy here!

Like really? Are you going to the art institute? Because it really shows. It shows that your teachers don't give a shit since you are at a scam college.

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next time use vectors, this is unacceptable

>>306696
faglan failure dropout detected

>>306775
Apparent naif here, what does 'vector' refer to in this context

>>306822
Just read the sticky, never-mind. Thanks for pointing it out

>>306779
>faglan failure dropout detected

What? Look at this dumb anon here. Way to project hard, son.