what d'you think, is it good?

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>>302442
got this palette also

>>302442
Looks quite good but you missed the deadline for this kind of stuff by about ehhhh 2 months and like 10 days.

Personally the only things I'd change is make all the shapes a bit more freeform like the characters, they're geometric at the moment which is kinda stiff; and potentially rethink the title typeface. Other than that, great.

>>302450
Graduation.

>>302460
What this dude said. I'd either loosen up the clouds/circles a bit, or tighten up human forms. Personally, I'd suggest the latter, but that's me.

Top-notch color balance and I love the style, but a few things irk me:
• Change the font. If you absolutely _must_ keep it, at least fix the kerning.
• All clouds are copies of each other. It would seem more professional if you drew them individually.

Otherwise 5/5. Simple but beautiful, contemporary and strange in its own right. Nice to see Good Shit™ on /gd/ for the longest time.

>>302513
ty dude, gotta use this font, so ill work up the kerning a lil bit.

I like it besides that the clouds look like pasted circles, use the ones you got now as a template and draw them over with a pentool, so they are a bit more dynamic, but not too much though..

Nice flat design, but the banner from the second palette is a little bit too cyan, I think...

GJ

>>302442
Those eyes look a bit creepy dude make them look a bit rounder

>>302442
Oddly reminds me of loco roco, I like it.