So... this is a logo I've been working on The proyect name is Hive:The Ultimate Network. There are other vversions of the logo you can check, its basicly just a change in the lettering order. Thoughts please.
Ver.2
>>289636
the offcenter letters are triggering me the most.
just my 2 cent
Ver.3
Ver.4
The last one.
>>289638
I'll correct that, I also have to animate it. This are just sketches made in like 5 minutes.
I'm not sure the similar weight between the lines and the type is working for you. I'd try making the lines a little lighter. That way, you'll gain a level, the type will come forward a little.
>>289658
Thanks, thanks a lot.
Why is the upper part at the 'i' open?
Why does the black background have soft edges?
>>289636
i kinda like this one but it feels like missing something maybe make the outlines thicker only on the inside (almost like draplin logos -pic) also have you tried a version with the on the side or below the logo? or one without the black think in the hexagons filled instead of the background which i don't think adds anything
>>289699
*the text on the right side
>>289692
I tought the soft edges were a good detail. Changing them to sharp because you are not the first one who says that.
It's open on top to break the simetry...
>>289699
Thank you so much for this, I'll check it. Also try moving the text as you suggested. Thanks~
>>289636
maybe sketch out different ideas on paper, rather than going all digital first, the perspective looks really weird here, and the black 'cube' doesn't give the white lines enough space to work well,
>>289707
Haha didn't had paper with me.
Yup I'm removing the black hex, but the logo has to work over a black background. I'll be doing new sketches taking all of this considerations. :)
>>289711
Don't look for the final product yet. Sketch out different ideas, very roughly, quickly, and see what you like the most, then start off from there.