You need to attend to class, realize what design is, then try to sell something.
More importantly, if you don't trust our judgement try landing a job as a designer in any studio and see.
This take on harsh criticism makes you look stupid. We now you are an amateur. Now we know that you're also clueless.
My take is that design isn't for you if you can't take honest critique. You are not made for the job.
2/10 i hate the design. its derivative and it sucks. try to come up with something more original.
also "bam" doesnt really go with "be water my friend". those two are evoking completely different emotional states. consider using some other quote
1. The black for the background fan is inconsistent with the black you chose for the Bruce Lee silhouette. You can def tell it is a copy and paste job.
2. It just generally looks like chit. As soon as you look at it it looks like it was a cheap walmart poster.
3. It has too much going on. The focus should be bruce lee, but instead you distract the eye with the fan, the paint splatter, and the chinese looking font. So the eye can never really pick a spot to focus on.