Hipster hapster

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Hipster hapster 2016-09-29 00:49:50 Post No. 284937
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Hipster hapster Anonymous 2016-09-29 00:49:50 Post No. 284937 [Report]

Making a comic about hipster life etc.
In Norwegian, translatee a bit hasty- some spelling misstakes, also non colored spots.
Otherwise, what do you think?

Anonymous 2016-09-29 00:50:11 Post No.284938
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 00:51:15 Post No.284939
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 00:52:34 Post No.284940
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 07:30:56 Post No.284975
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 07:30:56 Post No.284975 [Report]

>>>/ic/

You should practice your anatomy

Anonymous 2016-09-29 08:20:27 Post No.284979
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 08:20:27 Post No.284979 [Report]

holy shit dude what the fuck is this

Anonymous 2016-09-29 10:41:48 Post No.284988
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 10:41:48 Post No.284988 [Report]

>anatomy is off
>these aren't very funny
>quality is low in the both meanings of the word
>not /gd/

overall 0/5

Anonymous 2016-09-29 12:18:24 Post No.284993
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 12:18:24 Post No.284993 [Report]

>>284988
>not /gd/
it is, everything is

Anonymous 2016-09-29 14:26:49 Post No.285001
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 14:26:49 Post No.285001 [Report]

Try >>>/ic/, maybe >>>/co/

Anonymous 2016-09-29 16:30:30 Post No.285009
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Anonymous 2016-09-29 16:30:30 Post No.285009 [Report]

>>285001
ic doesn't want this either I can assure you.

OP work on your drawings and maybe change concept. Questionable Content has the hipster market taken care of, but I'm sure you'll be better at drawing than Jeph Jacques soon.

Anonymous 2016-09-30 01:20:11 Post No.285074
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Anonymous 2016-09-30 01:20:11 Post No.285074 [Report]

>>284937
quit and never try again

Anonymous 2016-10-01 18:24:52 Post No.285230
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Anonymous 2016-10-01 18:24:52 Post No.285230 [Report]

>>284937
>>284938
>>284939
>>284940
These aren't that bad actually. The only I would suggest is to draw the textboxes by hand, as well as handwriting the text to give it more of a Sunday comic feel.

Someone mentioned anatomy but I don't think that is such a big issue. More practice is good of course, but many well known comic strips display horrible anatomy in character design, and it is one of the things that contributes to making it all your own. I already have a feel for some of your characters which is a good thing

Anonymous 2016-10-01 22:16:42 Post No.285239
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Anonymous 2016-10-01 22:16:42 Post No.285239 [Report]

>>284993
No you fucking moron!

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