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Give critiques on my logo plz. Does it look professionally

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Give critiques on my logo plz.

Does it look professionally representable?
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>>284541
it looks like an app icon not a logo but it could look good with a classic style like the royal or emblem designs.
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>>284547
I cannot into logos

I Get what you mean by emblem though..Like a crest. I was thinking of adding the golden branches (what are they called )
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Its more true to flat design like this. But like my compadre above said, it looks more like an app icon.
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>>284541
i hate every thing about it, stop doing circular logos or with a frame
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>>284541
You literally slapped the stupid liberty torch on graph paper
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>>284541
it's shit

delete the circle
delete the grid
make it a front view
use only one color
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>>284541
Too bright imo.

I also don't know if you are using the grid to help you with alignment or if it's apart of the logo, but i'd remove it.
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>>284541
The color scheme isn't terrible, but it isn't good. I'd start with making the flame more golden and perhaps not as monotonous, I would also work on the asymmetry because goddamn is that a turnoff
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>>284541
>>285397
>>284561
looks reminiscent of the Feudalism games

>>284551
I am enjoying the vignette and color scheme.
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>>284799
This anon's phrasing may make him sound like a troll to the incompetent designer but it's the best, most concise advice in the thread.
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Flame could be a bit more detailed, looks too cartoonish for me.
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>>285397
Improved upon this. Made the torch itself symmetrical and disconnected the flame.
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Just did a rough job, but you could simplify it like this and it would look more like a logo I think
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>>285978
>>285982
read this you fucking retards
>>284799
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Nobody's touched on this, but the horizontal bars on the torch have different perspectives... The bottom one should be nearly flat.
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