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How can i make this shit more atmospheric. Gonna cut it apart

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How can i make this shit more atmospheric. Gonna cut it apart for my school's bike club website, don't mind the text.
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I don't know much about design, but I can tell you if I visited a site that looked like that, I'd probably be convinced that it was a joke.
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>mctc bike collective -> earn -> contact
how about making it look like some sort of a map/route, you know, those traditional ones that bikers use?
how you managed to not think of this baffles me
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>>284262
>>284263 <---
This is a web page? what the fuck?
no no no...
This is not a well designed webpage even as a throwaway site.

Those circles at the top leave a lot of space around which is completely pointless and even by themselve those circles are very... out of place?

The menu is very hard to read, too spred out which makes me uncomfortable looking at it and the color of the bar doesn't help that at all.

btw, really bad choice of font for a website, those long texts look horrible and you probably deformed them (resized?).

also the HCTC BIKE COLLECTIVE font looks out of place, don't mix fonts on a website, hardly ever looks good...

the overall look of the bottom part is not horrible, thought the flying trees around the bottom of the blue bubble really draw my attention, which is bad, drop at least the bottom 2 trees there.

I would probably also make the gradient orange->light slightly stronger, though the resolution is quite small on the image, so I can't really judge that.

as a poster, it would almost work with a few edits, but as a website, no. if you are up for it, maybe you can make a few modifications and post again?
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>>284262
Earn free lube? Sign me right up
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Get rid of the circles, as said previously they won't add to your design. Google some fonts that look nice on web pages, nothing is worse than going to a page to only find poorly selected font texts. I do like the idea of adding a map aspect of it, I think it would add nicely to your design.
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Seriously thanks for the feedback. Gonna edit it up get back to you all.
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