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2016-09-01 03:59:20 Post No. 281596
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Anonymous 2016-09-01 03:59:20 Post No. 281596 [Report]

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Sorry this is such an amateur question, but how do I achieve a smoother look, like the ones on the right? Does it just take practice to make the lines smoother? I mean, look at the smooth curves on the fucking octopus.

Anonymous 2016-09-01 04:01:27 Post No.281597
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>>281596
Here's what my WIP so far... The lines are jaggedy in some places, and I'd like to know how to get it smoother... Or if there's a technique that would help with this. Thanks so much.

Anonymous 2016-09-01 04:16:14 Post No.281599
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Anonymous 2016-09-01 04:16:14 Post No.281599 [Report]

Oooh I just discovered the smooth pen. Is this what graphic designers primarily use to smoothen artwork?

Anonymous 2016-09-01 04:44:55 Post No.281600
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>>281599

imo it adds too many anchor points. you really should only be doing 1 anchor point for every curve, then use its handles to smooth it out.

Anonymous 2016-09-01 07:31:55 Post No.281610
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>>281600
This, fampai. Or use circles on a grid to get your lines.
https://www.behance.net/gallery/30671987/30-ANIMAL-LOGOS-CHALLENGE

Anonymous 2016-09-01 09:14:06 Post No.281614
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Anonymous 2016-09-01 09:14:06 Post No.281614 [Report]

>>281596
practice

Anonymous 2016-09-01 12:50:41 Post No.281635
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>>281610
>https://www.behance.net/gallery/30671987/30-ANIMAL-LOGOS-CHALLENGE
nice reference. bookmarking, thanks!!

Anonymous 2016-09-01 12:53:59 Post No.281636
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Anonymous 2016-09-01 12:53:59 Post No.281636 [Report]

>>281597
feet should line up, look at examples on the right, you need a hint of symmetry

Anonymous 2016-09-01 13:13:56 Post No.281637
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>>281610
by the way, does he use the circles to help him do the shading/gradient?

>>281636
Will make the change, thanks

Anonymous 2016-09-01 23:45:56 Post No.281722
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Can you guys give me any advice on how to improve/tweak these logos, and which logos you think are the strongest? I'm leaning towards the scribbly sheep and the bottom left, first one. I don't know if I should take out the nostrils or not.

Ty!

Anonymous 2016-09-02 04:48:23 Post No.281751
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Anonymous 2016-09-02 04:48:23 Post No.281751 [Report]

>>281722
Top right is the only one not completely absurd.

Everything else is like, "thumbnails that get destroyed or kept for ironic purposes" tier.

Anonymous 2016-09-02 04:51:15 Post No.281752
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Anonymous 2016-09-02 04:51:15 Post No.281752 [Report]

>>281751
Feedback or ideas on how I can improve some of these designs would be good

Anonymous 2016-09-02 05:01:03 Post No.281754
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Anonymous 2016-09-02 05:01:03 Post No.281754 [Report]

>>281752

They are all systemically the same design, I told you which one was best. The simplest way for you to fix the other designs would be to make them in to the top right one.

Also don't ask people to fix your shit, because they almost always don't know what it needs, since they didn't build it, but definitely listen to what they find WRONG with it.

Anonymous 2016-09-02 07:36:36 Post No.281758
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Anonymous 2016-09-02 07:36:36 Post No.281758 [Report]

>>281754
He just wanted a more descriptive feedback and you started chastising lol

Anonymous 2016-09-02 12:29:34 Post No.281774
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Anonymous 2016-09-02 12:29:34 Post No.281774 [Report]

>>281610
>https://www.behance.net/gallery/30671987/30-ANIMAL-LOGOS-CHALLENGE
How does he do that?

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I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/