today was the first time i went into adobe illustrate with the

>>281350
Looks like some shit that people make when they get gimp.

Seriously though, did you even put any thought into this?

>>281350
I think its good
You showed light and shadow, scale, some dynamics. Space stuff is cool.

>>281350
mediocre-lack of imagination-be more playful-work it on photoshop-don´t show it again-

>>281350
>>281364
it litteraly couldnt be worse.

but its your first piece. Go do some tutorials.

Lens flare is awful. Holy crap, no offense man, but you screwed up. This isn't good at all, it's like you used the tool without knowing how to use it properly and accordingly.

>>281351
What this anon said, It's like if I went into adobe illustrator, made some circles, added gradients and shadows to them, and then add a lens flare.

I'm taking Digital Media Design at college, the professor said to never use the lens flare. Hope this helps.

>>281350
work on gradient first, think lens flare later

the fact that people make something like this, look at it and decide to go on the internet to share it baffles my mind