Hey /gd/ I'm just getting into graphic design. Critique

Its pretty cool for the first try! You need to try to get some more shapes contrast and get all the details to the minimum

>>280528
not bad at all for a beginner, there's definitely room for improvement, but you're on the right path

You've got a good eye for color. Areas to improve: Typography, form, and shading, in that order. "Flat" is a style, and you'll get better faster if you practice foundational techniques before experimenting with style.

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>>280528
Colors on notepad look a little too saturated but is fine on pencil because it's small. Maybe pull it back on such a large surface area. Phone looks good but careful of the stretched font. The cup looks flatter than the style intends, maybe add just one level of shading on the rim. Also a gradated background is a good way to establish space

other than that the pencil looks great. Everything else should match the quality of that

did you remember to add 2 sugars to my coffee?

Looks good, >>280583 i agree with this guy tho

It's not bad, but a few things to note. The stretched font is slightly noticeable for the phone. Also, the "slide to unlock" looks a little misaligned. Pencil is good. The coffee's circles seem to look slightly uneven, including the handle. Other than that, nice try.