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Logo Critique

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Whats up /gd ive been trying to improve my creativity and general design skills

here is a logo for a water bottling company who sell flavoured rain water. my design idea comes from a rain droplet being the hammer head and the the "forged" part being the flavour of choice. hope you like it =) also ignore the background and drop shadow, the logo is just the blue
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op here i should have mentioned the bottling company is named Rain Forged"
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>>278685
here's a tip: never place the name of the company inside the logo. aside from that i don't really like it desu it feels too old. maybe just make an aesthetically pleasing water drop that seems like iron/metal and place the name below all in lowercase possibly with a modern font and good kerning.
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>>278685
Idea is good, execution is bad.

Needs to be simplified, it looks very boring an old. Of course do what >>278690 said and take the type out of the logo and choose a better typeface. Colours need work too.
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good idea and not bad drawings but the typography needs work and it seems like too much is going on.

keep the rain drop as the hammer head, thats a good starting point but i would rework the rest of it.
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thanks for the feedback as for the colour scheme it was just to make it pop from the background and in my opinion white and black dont do it justice

ill work something out with the typography and such will post results when i get time to do so
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>impact
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