Portfolio critique thread

>>276667
most of it is acceptable. not too creative and simple photoshopwork not much graphics in all. dont really like this stockphoto aesthetic. scored some good clients tho
scored some good clients.

>>276667
I'd give it a perfect 5/7

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>>276740
>1/?

2/?

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>>276741

3/?

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>>276742

4/?

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>>276743

5/? (WIP)

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>>276744

6/?

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Looking for an entry level web designer / front-end developer job so I made this.

http://andis.work

>>276756
meh to the extreme. nothing seriously bad. But if you have zero experience with real clients AND zero creative design ideas, Im not sure how you're gonna make it

>>276756
Back to top button doesn't work.

>>276667
tu portafolio me gusta
Algun tip para un novato?

>>276756
It all looks the same.

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Main color scheme is the blue from the title. Should I make all buttons red or is the light blue buttons in this case (the header) okay?

>sidenote: not concerned with emphasizing graphic design abilities in site presentation. i do gd on the side but primarily aimed at law/essays

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versus this, for example

https://www.behance.net/michaeldesigns

thoughts?

>>277982
I like it.

In my opinion your strongest works are Skyline Vapor, Breach, Fit, and maybe Jack. Even still these have a few issues i will point out.

Skyline Vapor- love the strong type setting, color palette, and composition. It's all laid out in a very presentable manner. My gripe with it is that i didn't know this was a vape company until i saw the store page website layout all the way at the bottom. It speaks too much corporate business and not the target demographic. I thought it was just some enterprise. I think this is mostly due to the vague tag lines and unrelated imagery. A guy in a business suite, a skyscraper, vape use too subtle... i had no idea what it was about at first glance. Some of the type is hard to read or gets cut off. I was reading GC on the business card. Strong work but it need to be clarified.

Breach- Love the textural work here, good dynamic composition, just overall great. Good job!

Fit- Great action, communicates the subject visually, good color palette. Good, could see it posted everywhere.

Jack- Interesting concept but i feel it's a little lacking because of how cluttered the scenes become. The original visual language that made samurai jack great gets lost in translation.

now onto the weak stuff...

Arias & Piñeiro - terrible logo. looks like a bunch of squiggles.

Tiki-Taka - crude lettering, the colors work but the logo looks like it was made by 2 year old.

Photoshop progress 2014 - 2016 - compositionally and perspective wise it's terrible. execution wise it's poor. Shows your skill set but you over worked it in a bad way.


other projects are meh. Strong photoshop work though!

>>277989
Thanks for going through every single one, much appreciated. Can't argue with any of that, I've gotten similar feedback on a few of the projects. And thanks for being blunt on the ones that sucked.

The two logos are there because I haven't done much other work for actual companies. I think I'll remove them soon.

>>277996
You shouldn't remove them, rework them. You have to showcase a wide gamut of skills/ideas.You can't just rely on photoshop composites, however strong they are.

>>277982
get a profile picture. keep in mind to dial down the hyper appeal. good luck

>>276667
>http://andis.work
I recognize that template

>>278004
what do you mean 'hyper appeal'?

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>>276744
nice

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https://www.behance.net/dziniashowcase
I'm still learning, doing freelance past 5 years .

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Making this poster for my room. Rate it gd/

>>278882
is this a joke?

Would you mix 2D and 3D onto the same thumbnail page split in categories or put them on seperate subpages?

Also, what is the be-all-end-all thumbnail tile setup in your opinion. Squares, actual ratios, other? Can you post an example of what great portfolio design looks like. Web based obviously.

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>>278906
Yeh man,
SNOWBALL.

>>278882
waste of wall.

https://www.behance.net/kayehol

i'm a beginner, making mostly concerts posters