Your Personal logos

>>276132
*generic

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Jut sold this one recently. Actually proud of it. What do you think?

>>276151
the color doesn't mesh well with the tropical theme.

>>276153
The actual logo is just plain black and white, this is a variant

>>276154
oh, silly me. other than that, it's pretty solid.

>>276151
I like it.

>>276151
The cuts in the palm tree are way too thin, and won't translate at all when scaled down. The palm fronds should have cuts along the outside where they merge with the circle, or shouldn't extend past the circle at all. The lines leading from the trunks to the edge of the circle are unnecessary. Overall, it's really cluttered.

>>276132
I think I would like it more without the raised J.

>>276151
is this an eyeball?!?...plus...the font conflicts with the "theme"

>>276167

This is a valid concern, offset the gap between the bark a little more and you're in good shape.

>>276151
I think more space is needed between the M and the palm trees, also more space in the cuts of the trees, also font is rounded when the M is extremely sharp, kind of weird. Also the direction of the logo is kind of all over the place due to the number of elements.

Aside from that I think it's pretty cool

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Thoughts?

>>276709
how do you create that dripping pixel effect?

>>276710
It's called pixel sorting. Kinda hard to do, but you can download the Photoshop action for free.

>>276709
nice meme

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My logo for past few years.

>>276712
?

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Here's mine, recently redesigned it.

>>276713
That's a good one. I like the simplicity of it.

>>276709
ugly

Just made this for a client

Open for honest criticism

Just made this for client
Open for honest criticism

>>276796
>>276797
>>276798
First time posting?

>>276798
That low quality dog is a bit weird on the higher quality text.
Also this looks more like a high quality barbers colour choice, not a pet shops.

>>276709
I like the effort put into this but if this is a logo, this will not work. If this is a t-shirt design, yeah i can see it working. As a logo this breaks many rules of logo design which wouldn't make it a versatile logo.

>>276827
I have a black and white version on my computer, which I guess would be the better "logo"

>>276793
Thanks for the thoughtful insight you have provided which will help me improve as a graphic designer.

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I just cant decide

>>276857
middle

>>276857
Middle defineltely

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>>276858
>>276859
Thanks!! You just lift a weight from my back

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Top is WIP new.

Bottom is current.

I do a lot of raw vector output design.

>>276132 (OP)

bad, like real bad.

>>276151
breaks in palm tree need increasing.

>>276709
Is that a logo?

The art is cool, it's amateur city as a logo.

>>276713

I just hope you have the access to clientele to support that type of vapid corporate approach to self branding.

>>276769
nope.
>>276798
You are a designer who owns a dog grooming service?

It's OK, a little difficult to reproduce in cut vinyl.

>>276857
All are garbage, go back to the fundamentals, work like this is the mark of an amateur.

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1st graphic for a friend
With hope of selling homemade pommade online

Asked me to come up with a graphic

Honest criticism is best
I've been doing graphic design more of photo editing really

I'm new to this field
Not as experienced
I love it And I want to learn

Please to destroy me
Constructive criticism is all I seek here

Thank you

>>276899
font doesn't mesh with the woodcut design of the image
Don't drop shadow the "Slime"
Would be neat if the neck (?) of the snail came in front of the circle
The "organic pommade" bit is good, maybe see if you can get a slightly thicker cut though?
Please change the font, keep away from distressed fonts.

I'd suggest working in monotone before you add any colour. Use a black background and do everything in white.

>>276709
looks cool for a piece of art but not for a logo

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My personal logo and the first one that I've done and actually like, what do you think guys? Is it shit?

>>276899
Don't blur the word slug, you can't fucking blur words on a logo, get rid of that shadow behind slime and use other font for "Organic Pommade" and you can keep the Slug and Slime font but don't use that texture effect thingy on them

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Here is one I am thinking about using on quadcopter racing site.

>>277152
This would've been slightly acceptable 15 years ago
For starters get rid of the reflection, don't use those fucking shades effects on the GG

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random playing around

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>>277156
You need to be at least 18 to post on 4chan.

>>277152
>1996 reflection
lol

>>276892
Post yours, faggot

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Reposting from the ded critique thread. My attempt at a personal logo. Thoughts? Too simple? Scrap and restart?

>>277160
Fugly. Trash and format hard drive.

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Thoughts?

>>277193
Also, does anyone have any good ideas for an online food business? Anything without a fucking fork and knife?

Or have you seen anything somewhat creative that worked with a 'food' theme?
I'd be really grateful, guys

>>277194
what about a spoon

Trying to make a logo for an Alternative/Reggae Band anyone can help me find some inspirations?

>>277197
Ah, just had an idea with some circle ending in an arrow looking like a plate and then some fork&knife idk

>>277214
weed, rasta hair vector, the flag, vector instrument,

>>276892
You know design is all subjective right...
How about you post something that you do like.

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>>276132

>>276888
Oh i remember you! The faggot with a logo inside his logo. Keep it up!

>>277193
Looks pretty good, but I'm not sure it would appeal to most people looking for a designer. What is it you do?

Also what kind of name is Diamonds Bastards? Sounds fucking weird.

>>277516
hahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahah

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>>276132

What is your superpower?

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>>277524

>>277535
is Pyramid Head launching a new tape business?

>>277592
Not a bad start, but either get rid of or redo the "design" part, looks like ass. Strokes looks awful, make em go away.

That's my opinion anyway.

>>277592
The 'm' needs to be closer the the 'j'. the circle and the letters shouldn't have different weights
also this >>277675

>>276151
This is a really nice design man.
Goodjob!

>>277592
So fucking trashy.

Some of you guys are frightfully unaware of the magnitude of your inadequacy.

>>276892
What a twat

>>277972
looks like a nazi flag

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>>277675
>>277682
Good criticism, thank you
>>277865
Care to be a little more constructive?

>>277997
Maybe that's the point?

If yes 14/88, will Sing heil under.

>>276713
ahole is all i can see

>>276132
>>276151
>>276713
>>277156
>>277555
>>277972
>>278034
Circle circle circle circle.

>>278075
>pissed off that people are using a shape
yowza

>>276151
>>276709
>>276857
>>276888
>>277193

Looks really nice mates

>>277972
nazi 9gag

>>276151
Love it. Though tropical green background might be better.

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Made those two ones, tell me which one you prefer (my initials are GC)

>>278193
don't really like any of those the first one seems like ch maybe make the lines thicker and avoid color until the shapes seems right.

>>278193

Neither

>>278208
This

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Logo at top, plus two variants that I like but never use.

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This is for a tournament that me and some friends are organizing. It's a pun between GENESIS 3 (a Melee tournament) and frenzy but in spanish

>>278216
Makes me think of the Bluetooth logo

>>278193
Yikes

>>278216
Looks shite

>>278228
Nope nope nope NOPE

>>277146
Looks like from the fucking 70s

>>277146
Looks like Cartoon Network fucked a fish

>>278425
Is ok-ish.
Did you try leaving out the white circle?

>>277152
Disgusting

>>276888
This has to die. Waaaaaay too much

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>>278425
Change the font for your letters. Something about its blockiness or thin stroke makes it just look muddled. A quick google search for "monogram" found me the attached image and I feel its more what you're going after

>>276888
Top is way better. Lose the hatch for a solid fill

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This is my personal logo, what do you guys think? It says "Art"

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>>276132 based on what my first name means. been using it since 2015-ish

>>278476
Are you a fucking camping Store or what???

>>278474

Looks really neat but I couldn't tell what it said until you told me

try different colours, or different shades

>>278216

I like these especially bottom left

>>278476
is your name Cliff?

>>278498
kek

>>278485
I don't get it. Are you a film director? Because the font looks like it belongs on the side of a snowmobile/PWC/motorcycle.

>>278495
Thanks! I'll try it.

>>277193
curious if thats a font or not

>>278216
do the bottom left without the circle.

>>278474
is this one of those logos that can be flipped around and still read the same thing? pretty neat.

>>278534
oh hey it is. neat.

>>278621
loljk

quite a few fun ideas in this thread.
Nothing with a real 'WoW' effect to me though.

Hell, mine is not better either.
I always wanted a letter logo but. try combining a 'V and an Y' or even a single 'Y' that doesnt look generic as fuck...

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>>278783
There it goes. Ignore the errors. I just loosely snapped multiple triangles together for demonstration.

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>>278469
I sell a lot of straight vector designs for packaging, etching, carving, CNCing and such. So I think the logo does a good job promoting my niche.

>>278476

my emblem in halo 3 desu

>>278216
>Reverse Amuro symbol

>>278785
The illustration doesn't quite match the type. The thin lines look out of proportion with the thicker lines on the 2nd one. It feels a bit off balance because of the diagonal lines on the sides. I kinda wish trademark was fully spelled out.

This looks rad at first glance. It's decent now but I think this will look better with a little adjustments.

>>277524
this reminds me of the new justice league logo, is it just me?

>>278784
I like it

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>personal logos
>hardly any actual "logos"
>most are just stylized monograms
Can you faggots have an original thought in your head? Make yourself a logo, not just the letters of your first and last name juxtaposed in some way. Prove you're actually creative and not fresh out of high school.

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>>276888
New business cards w/ d/f raised ink.

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>>278930

:-)

eat shit

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>>278949
Not him but
You go eat shit Kid

:-p

>>276132
Congrats your logo look like JL audio

>>276709
If you produce Beats on a YouTube page sure anything else No

>>277193
Once again are you producing trap music

>>278425
Bit coin beta is that you

>>278784
Dope a real logo

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>>278964
Haha it totally does

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>>278923
>>278968
Glad you liked it. Here is the current state of the logo. I included the base grid if it wanst obvious.
A Cyan color had always been in the back of my head and I used it on many drafts. Since my nick is basically made of the same 4 letters it seemed fitting.

Fun Fact: It took me over 200 sketches/drafts initially until I finally decided to go with a shape similar to this one. and another 50 variantions of it over the last year until I finally found the perfect one for my liking.

The fine hairline cut along the color transition goes will with how I want to present the logo. Last thing to do is find a proper typeface that goes with it. Well... already 3 months in on that.

Any suggestions would greatly help. Something masculine but grace and elegant. Available in bold and thin preferred. Probably all Caps.

>>277592
Get rid of the "design" at the bottom. It doesn't fit the general theme. You could also try changing is font

>>279022
Why a hairline cut? I was going to say your previous one was perfect the way it was.

>>279035
>>278034
Thanks though

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been working on this for a little bit. Not sure if I like it or not though

>>279118
Impression:
- Looks like it represents something musical. Intended?

Pros:
- Interesting Concept
- I like how you thought of using roman numbers
- Not stale. Has a dynamic charm.

Cons:
- You cannot mix roman numbers with usual text like that. Without the filename it reads like 'IXXIN' to 99% of the people.
- TO dynamic. Sounds like I making fun of the pros. but No. It's titled to much. Also, Either the typeface has dynamic or the graphical element that carries the logo. If Both should be dynamic thay need to harmonize and be of similar fashion.
- Red outline. Off with it. Think of another way to implement a highlight.

- Typical beginner mistake: Give your Logo room to breathe. 'Clear Space' is the term to look up here.

Solution:
- Back to the conceptual stage.
- Look up how to mix roman numbers into normal Font and make them distinguishable if you want to stick with that.

>>279118
There's absolute no chance anyone would read it other than IXSIN.

>>278476
Blatant copy of beyond the summit

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shitty

>>279053
You were right. Looks better without it on a second glance.
Still looking for a font/typeface that goes well with it for the time being.

>>276863
Caguama jajaja

>>279170
This has to be a joke

http://www.redbubble.com/people/dankentity?asc=u

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Infographic and Data visualisation designer, crit welcome

>>279195
>ab
>uh

>>279193
is alexey brodovitch a joke ?

>>279195
Is it AB or NB?

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>>279195
Makes me think of Pretty Lights

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Mine

M W

>>279266
You are lucky

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>>279267
yes

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this is Mine for a music project

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>>279269
reminds me of these two

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>>279268
It's funny because most of them look like a capeshit logo you would put on your chest, one looking like a cross between StopTech and NIN. The one you settled with looks like a phone carrier logo due to the little droplets but I don't mean that as a negative. Looks like drops of ink in the form of a graphic.

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>>279268
Have a lot more potential IMO

>>279274
It made me think of Sony's Walkman logo for some reason. After checking what the Walkman logo actually is, I have no idea why my brain went there...

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>>279276
Ah, that's what I was thinking of too. Sony Walkman logo. The droplet breaking off from the logo makes me think of a graphic form of digital information, why I previously thought phone carriers.

>>279277
By digital information I mean communication ones traveling through the air wirelessly through signals, tubes and shit.

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>>279212
Just a thought

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Thoughts?

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>>279316

>>279316
I don't really... Get it. The break might be too small? It doesn't really command attention or create focus; it's just kinda... There... For no apparent reason.

>>279316
I agree with the previous poster. Without the filename I wouldn't have guessed it's supposed to mean IH.

My idea: Keep that prong thing and add a horizontal line, same thickness as the others, inbetween the lines of the H. My first thought was to make it light grey, but you could add some color alternatively. Bright yellow maybe? Just an idea.

>>279316
Keep the right column identical to the left column. It'll look more like a H.

>>279271

You catch me, good job.

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I'm a sucker for chromatic aberration. Pleb kiddies with sensitive eyes don't like it.

>>279368
this is so shitty lmao

>>279378
You sound jealous af lol

>>279379
why would anyone be jealous of that abomination of a logo?

>>279383
specify exactly why it's poor or hush.

the shittier something is, the easier it is to explain why ...provided you know your stuff.

>>279383
Post yours :)

>>279385
Logos should not have that many colours, specially that close together. It won't work out as a greyscale or in a small size.
Also that E looks terrible. I'm not the same anon but it pisses me off when people think someone is jealous of them when they just don't like something about them.

>>279442
>Logos should not have that many colours
Confirmed for not knowing anything. (see pic related
>that E looks therrible
You're just using ad hominem and not giving reasons why you hate it. You just sound jealous desu

>>279462
It's insane to think a real life and business career oriented board like /gd/ would have shitposting leaking in. Why is this happening?

>>279368
>>279379
>>279386
>>279462
Dude. GTFO.

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>that E looks therrible
>You're just using ad hominem
>ad hominem

>>278531
Just fucking look at the text.
>three S's
>all different
>curious

>>279022
Fuck the hairline cut. Everything else is equidistant, but then that comes in and breaks the form. It's a point of higher detail, so it takes the focus, especially when the logo is this simple.

Font with that? Future Bold? Good luck affording it. Otherwise you can try something like Futura PT, which comes with Adobe CC in TypeKit.

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ライアンラーメン - RyanRamen... ramen business I created for a design project.

>>279368
I like it

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>>279482
Yeah, thanks man. I already removed the cut a few days ago again.

Futura Bold or anything bold in particular, meh, I dunno.
Currently stuck at this. Will try more variations on how to integrate text with it this weekend.

Only need logo+type to be displayed horizontally on landscape formats. Everything else will be logo only.

Any thoughts appreciated

>>279279
looks like a penis octopus

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Initials are AJ

>>279544
Fill in the shapes, sharpen the corners.
Maybe two different colors/tones.

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>>279547

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>>279544
When I first saw it I read a "N" with a diagonal line crossing it. If you didn't point the two letters in your post I would've never guess what it was about..

It feels very lazy m8. Keep playing with the two letters. Why are you going with thin lines and pointy ends? explore different kind of styles or something, pic related its a lazy 5min study I did following your initial "style"...

>>279550
Shit thanks for the feedback m8

I went with thin lines and pointy ends because I didn't play enough with it, it's my first design ever, to be honest.

>>279505
That's a nice font, it's like a Futura Ultra Light.
Have you tried with a hard line between the icon and text, instead of the graduated line?

>>279368
It's not terrible. But what it is this for? Personal logo? The E in the L looks sorta forced. The dot of the i, what for? The bolt doesn't match the style of the rest either, looks very unrefined. Sure, CA looks fun, but either make it more obvious or leave it out. No half way crap

>>279465
I very much agree. Very sad.

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This is my current brand logo. I know no wording or whatnot, I just wanted something of an iconography sort of thing.

I'm a DJ and it's been working out so far so I'm getting cards. I am not very flashy, and very professional, and most cards for performers and artists make me want to vomit. Does anyone have any good examples for some low key card designs? I can do posters and showbills, but I don't know what makes a card good

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>>279741
For a DJ, I'd imagine it's okay to be a bit more flamboyant and expressive. The vomit factor comes from the lack of good design production. It's possible to have an expressive card design that speaks to your DJing personality but still look well made and not a kid's crayon drawing.

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>>279741
If you got some money to invest I would pay a good designer to create you a full identity (matching logo, cards, website, etc). You can do it yourself too, but you need to be talented.

>>279742
>>279756
thanks. I am talented, but as a writer. a good friend of mine does websites and design so I was going to go to him when I figure out what I want

>>279732
>iconography
>pick an incredibly common/generic object
>put it in a circle
>holy fuck I'm a genius

>>277592
its overall bad circle typography trashy typography

>>278193
is this a map for some retro game

>>278621
>im gonna glue my 2 name letters together
dude

>>278784
finally something that i like, naicu anon

>>278930
you're actually right cunt
i want to see your shit

>>279505
>>279022
by far the best logo here gg

>>279544
>>279548
just no man, i believe you are in the right track but still green
these simple thin lines to dont have much presence probably because there is too much space between them

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>>279505
By far my favorite.

Alright here's mine. Super basic and don't mind the test colors.

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>>280373
And it's color portable. Hopefully decent.

>>280376
The middle "comb" inside the W seems a bit too thin and deep.

>>280379
I keep thinking the same thing but I measured it at least ten times.

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>>280379
Okay let's try this. So the measurements now of the right vertical stem of the A are same (width) as the height between the middle comb's negative space and the bottom of the W.

>>276151
Hate it. Looks like an eyeball

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>>279157

>>276892
t. 13 year old

>>278216
bottom left is bretty good, but the circle really doesn't add anything

>>278474
that's pretty cool

>>279271
>>279269
also kaytrana

>>279550
Good lord, 5 min?
What program did you use?

>>280373
That middle tine on the w looks shitty, thin too long and off centre.

>>276132

I'm trying to do something with NYS (My initials), but I can't seem to think of a logo that would mesh well. I'm a graphic designer, and was thinking of dropping using my initials as my pen name.

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something something
all crap, but dropping by anyway

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How to smooth curve

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>>280697

>>280700
mine is better

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what do you guys think?

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Opinions? Not really a graphic designer just some dude trying to get a business up and running. The orange wheel is supposed to be a diamond turbo cupwheel that we use at work.

>inb4 aperture science ripoff yeah yeah i know

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>>280697
Old Todoist logo

>>280701
Lolno

This is actually very nice, I like it.

Some things to look out for:
The orange wheel looks liek it isn't properly aligned with the C. Moving it slightly to the left would improve it, I think.
Clean up the edges of the wheel. I can see some dots and orange lines floating around. That should go away if you want to vectorize it properly.

Otherwise I'm really fond of the logo. Good luck, Anon.

God damn.
This >>280739
was meant for >>280708

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I'm just trying to get a logo done for a friend who wants to make a gaming network, i think about going with that kind of linear style tho i'm not quite happy with it, help maybe?

>>280739
Thanks bro, I wear many hats in my company. I actually paid someone to vector it I just don't have the file handy.

I think the problem with the wheel and the c is that the c is not perfectly round so it trows it off.

>>280702
somewhat reminds me of the coca cola logo.

>>280424

I'd move the icon above the type towards the center more.

Even if you're tying to keep the whole "type with block color" thing, the balance is still off.

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Been using this for the last three years and it still works well imo

>>278228
Are you a poorly run porn company?
>>278425
Literally Bitcoin
>>279485
Something weird about the steam and remove the gradient but good otherwise

>>276888
>>278785
Where can I learn to make type like this?

>>280840
why does it have saint peters keys? just some self indulgent shit?

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>>280860

Just dive in bro, mechanical pencil, ruler and paper will get you started. There's also a ton of free content on the web and tons of books on lettering.

>>280860
search doyald young logotype at youtube

>>280424
[i]<>[/i]

>>280869
hp/10

>>280869
hp/HP

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i don't have a personal logo because gd is just a hobby that i haven't monetized yet

still, made this to my >gayming clan

>>280903
that wing is hideous

>>280907
i know, still need to do something better but i suck at vectors (if that wasn't obvious)

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>>280901
>>280902
Is it just because the letters are angled forward?

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>>280918

>>278423
kek, yeah I guess I'll work on the colors to fix that

>>278406
Why? Is it because of the font or something?

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>>276132

>>276888
just reminds me a barnbrook rip off

>>280943
a ddg search didn't lead me to the logo you are referencing, mind posting it?

>>280868
It's a frequently used symbol within the hardcore punk scene, which when we started was our main target audience

>>276711
Cant you just do wind/shear or whatever its called on a layer on top or something

>>278193
THICC

>>276709
What's it like in black and white? At a small size? Used in different contexts like a website, a letterhead, etc? It's cool but not versatile.

>>276713
This is nice.

>>276769
Boring but okay. You should try push it more. I would consider a thicker weight.

>>276798
Bad font selection, not well balanced. The motifs are unrecognisable at a small size (paw prints and dog). You need to simplify this a lot more, and just work with the word Taylors by itself.

>>276857
This is very amateur in execution, but I like that it's a bit different. Try working with a grid or ratios. The shapes just aren't right yet.

>>276888
Kind of cool but too much going on. If you keep improving you'd do well as a letterer or type designer perhaps?

>>278034
This is much better than the first iteration.

>>278784
This is good!

>>279279
This is a nice edit.

>>277516
Design isn't subjective. This isn't art class. Design serves a purpose and you can objectively tell if it's fit for purpose or not. You can also see a big difference between a newbie and someone who does it on a professional scale.

>>276769
I think it would look nicer if they were symmetrical, the G looks wider than the A

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>>277972
Fixed it

>>280908
keep experimenting

▲
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>>280908
If you're using illustrator I recommend just using the ellipse tool and then using the pathfinder to merge/cut away/etc or masks. Only use circles to create the shape if you aren't comfortable using bezier curves with the pen tool. I recommend practising doing bezier curves accurately though, I'm sure youtube would have some useful tutorials - the idea is to use as few anchor points as possible.

>>278621
lame and cheap

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>>276132
Might be a but much to ask but could someone make a logo for a friend of mine?
He goes by the name ''Timeti'' and makes music, so i was hoping someone could whip together something quick, like the name written in some cool 3D or some shit.
Thanks!

>>280082
But they executed it pretty well. Personally, I like it.

>>280849
Someone mind explain to me why gradient must be avoided at all times? Maybe its hard to produce/print somewhere as a logo but idk. I am just starting to learn stuff tho

>>277524
>>277556
>>277555
No one cares about the JUSTice League fucking DCucks

OP is fine

>>278193
THAT'S A PENIS?

>>281215
You're right, this is too much to ask
Pay me

>>277972
kek. Unless you're the Caliphate of the Third Reich, don't use that.
I would try to make a joke about the FG part but all I could think of is "fucking good". End me.

>>279505
Can you at least make the logo the same size as the text, heightwise?

And it seems to me that the logo is closer to the line than the text is, this disturbs me

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Working on simplifying this typography logo. Did it lose some character in the process?

>>281215
I would love to make your friend a logo!

Shoot me a mail: [email protected]

Always happy to help! Don't worry, it's on the house ;)

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>>281215

>>281477
I hope this is fake. It looks like a mom trying to make a boy scout troop a logo with ms paint.

>>281465
it depends on what it's for, if it's an urban/youth thing the top two are better, if it's more of an cooperate urban-ite thing/broader categorized the bottoms best

>>280869
cut some length on that k and it looks like an mid 2000's hip hop album

>>281465
I personally like the top "k", just maybe make the bottom strokes a bit smaller/thinner so the top right stroke is more visible.

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my personal logo
its a D with letters, ATMF put on
kind of

>>281539
Looks like a logo for the Death Star

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>>280082
Yeah. I was going to go with an origami bear as my icon but I felt that it would be less recognized as what it is. My alias is using polygon in its name, and I felt origami would be the best representation of that without feeling like a ripoff of polygon.

pic of what i mean.

>>281539
It's not good, but it would be ok if >>281540 was your objective.

Big picture abstract concepts to tackle.

Fix your aspect ratio, think anywhere from square to eye-proportion, anything outside will suffer no matter how strong it is over all.

Bad weight, it feel top heavy in the wrong way, as in it feels unstable, not balanced, like it's gonna tip and is built poorly.

Too thin, and this is coming from a guy with a thin logo, given the simplistic nature of your logo it needs more weight.

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>All the "logos" are shit
Why am I not surprised

>inb4 post yours

>>281595
thank you

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Made this a couple years ago. Would love to get it put on a hat or something.

>>278216
Lovin bottom left without circle

>>279368
I like this

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Bandcamp logo

r8h8sk8

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This is something i've been working on. Personal Logo

>>281644
You should make this a whole clothing brand!

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>>281487
It's a logo for some of my illustration work. I mainly do a mixture of lowbrow art, vintage cartoon and graffiti style drawings. Not everything I do is about hip hop and graffiti, so the bottom one might be a better, more generalized fit.

>>281534
I might try and make a new K for the bottom version and see how it looks

Asking for some advice, my initials are J V L and I'm kinda lost on how to incorporate them into a goodlooking design. Anyone have any suggestions? I'll do the work myself obviously, just need to get started somehow but I'm stuck

>>281725
you better be running a catering service.

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Needs reworking. Angles are off and it only really works on a dark background.

>>281790
it could look better with the simple v and the crown on top

>>278785
it looks awesome, but really, really hard to read. The "R"s read like "K"s

>>281873

It's the word more than the letters.

peregrine
Peregrine
PEREGRINE

It's an unnatural english word.

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>>277152
My 2 cents on your project...

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Been brainstorming over a logo for a company called rainyhalo for quite some time, but I can't fucking come up with anything. Getting an aneurysm here. This is what I came up with after a previous few hipster drawn logos of a raindrop character with a halo.

>>281982
What about halo that acts as a cloud and rain falls down from it?

>>281986
Tried that too but didn't really work. Also tried a cloud with a halo and pretty everything else in that regard. I think I'll either go for full typography or a logo that isn't that literal.

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One I made for a YouTube thing I've barely got the discipline to actually keep up.

As to others:

>>276132
A bit generic, and I agree with >>278075 that circles generally look fairly boring, though obviously with some alteration they can work.

>>276769
Firstly, tiny file. Secondly, it's just not very eye-catching and reminds me too much of something you'd see on some godawfully expensive purse.

>>276857
Funny enough, of those three I'd pick the right one. Something about the visual weight and being less topheavy than middle, plus the form appeals to me more.

>>276899
Snail looks good, don't blur font, maybe add some actual slime trail in there.

>>277146
Not shit, but I personally would try to round it out a bit more. I assume it's ALGO, but if it's just ALG separate the eye from the rest.

>>277160
I don't exactly know how to read this one, is it DA Christopher? I would recommend to lose the light box and use the same grey as the top part for the Christopher text so you don't have to use a dark backdrop.

>>277193
Cool beans, but if that's gonna be a logo on any windows or anything it's gonna be a bitch to do in cut vinyl.

>>277524
Looks pretty good, but the disparity between the angle of the bottom of the L and the flatness of the J is fucking with me. I'd go flat rather than make the J match.

>>278034
Pretty good, definite improvement. From a thumbnail view, though, the text being off-center by only a little bit looks like a mistake. I vote either center it completely or offset it more.

>>278216
Bottom left is dope. Also agree with unnecessary circle comments.

>>278228
Eh, get matching font for all the words, lose the weird lines or make them solid, shift the lettering around a bit. It's cluttered.

>>278474
Love me some ambigrams. Good shit.

>>278485
Thing that stands out the most is how I don't like the bottom font. Red line doesn't really add much, and its shape is all fucky.

>>278785
I am a fucking fan of this one. Text a bit hard to read though.

>>281995
Your type has personality, but I really think you should consider removing how the top row interacts with the bottom row. The weaving and overlapping in the top row is a bit much. Maybe there is a way of simplifying it without losing the humor?

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>>281995

It's aesthetically pretty *up close*, but it took me about 15 seconds to figure out the top word was "mostly" - it reads "morty"

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>>276132
not mine but a logo i made for a friend his initials are JQ

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>>281769
I came up with this

>>277194
Steamy Pie.
mmmmm, pie.

>>278216
Bottom right and replace the circle with an equally heavy weighted upside down pentagon.

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>>282269
A bit too busy; Try an inverted version.


>>282484
Gradients are a NO.


>>282505
Just looks like M.

>>282737
Good lord no, get rid of the halftone bullshit.

>>282775
Question: why are gradients bad in a logo? I'm new to this.

>>282776
Banding. Also gradients for logos are bad if they have a transparent background as some printed objects will have a white border around the fading gradient and it will look like shit.


Some gradients are alright, but it should be extremely subtle. Take logos like VW and such for example. Their digital logos are good with a nice little touch; but anything printed, or embroidered into clothing will be a simple two to three toned logo.

Keep it simple = Keeping it easy.

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>>282775
>Welcome to San Andreas I'm CJ from Grove Street.

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Tips? Not sure

>>282931
I think this is pretty cool, desu

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>>281986
Did another take at this. Not sure about the font.

>>283141
Cool thanks senpai... I don't design that much anymore, been years. It needs some minor adjustments.

Still got more ideas.

How do you guys practice logo design? I mean you need a good name before you can really play with the design. Random company name generator?

>>283189
You could do that, or think of names yourself.
After all it's good to not just be a designer but a problemsolver in general. Make fictional projects or read briefs for projects on fiverr or something. Please don't submit them though, you'll take our jerbs.

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>>283168
Tips or seething critiques?
I'm ready to die.

>>283311
it's like you chose to ignore all the conventions of modern logo design at the same time