Criticism of others album artwork? We post album/ EP/ mixtape covers you designed and others give criticisms. I'll start.
The title handwriting makes me uncomfortable, you should try different hand styles so search for one that's more readable, less annoying to look at. Loosen up on the 3D gimmick, It's okay to use it for the photo but it's over kill with the artist name and album name.
I've recently made this one for a project I'm currently working on. Each track having its own cover. I can post more if wanted.