Hey. I'm trying to get into a graphic design school and one of the preliminary assignments is to do 25 pictograms for a sports centre. I would love to get some critique. (We had two days to do three assignments, this is one of them, so I don't have time to "git gud". I just need quick, constructive critique, even if its shit.)
They're cool but be careful with the smaller space of white between legs and shit like that. In smaller reproductions in paper or wathever might be impossible to see them. U know what I mean?
Also, the cash register looks very graphic?
>>275868
That looks like some IBM PC-DOS Clipart. I swear I had something similar on my IBM computer.
they aren't complete shit. they do show effort you just need to focus on shape edges and try to be more consistent with your spacing.
try to keep the mentality that these should be able to function on any scale size.
>>275868
look at the olympic pictograms (particularly otl aicher's munich ones) for quick inspiration! i can't critique -- i don't know enough about them or the project!
>>276465
I second this, Otl Aicher's work at the Munich '72 olympics is very inspirational.