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Anyone have any input on this picture I made?
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OR alternativley, this one?
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>>273375
>>273376
Its unoriginal, simple to make , ugly and doesn't mean anything.

If you want to know what to do, you should start by working on any of the flaws mentioned above.
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WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS
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>>273375
i-it looks nice anon
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Lots of unbalanced white space gives me a sense of unfinished work. But your elements look interesting
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>>273387

this

white space is supposed to have a meaning to work properly
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the colour scheme is nice and the concept isn't too shallow.

shadows on triangles = no
composition = no

the spacing between the shapes is pretty uncomfortable. the distance between each is varying and the two in the corner are far too low on the image.
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Well, was painting part of you process or did you just take someone else's work and turn it into triangles?
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