Logo Design Criticism

like the stye but dont cut the E under the S and the A under the C...choose different glyphs or change the proportions

>>271680
the C having a bit of space between the A doesnt bother me much, but it does look awkward that the E is buried under both the L and the S. i would definitely consider at least layering the E above the S, but using different glyphs entirely is probably a good idea as well.

The concept is clever, but you need to work on the forms. Right now, it's a bit like a large brain-like shape hovering over a tree stump wearing an innertube.

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>>271680
>>271682
>>271684
COMPLETELY see what you guys mean about the glyphs for the "Candles". It was distracting and hard to read. I exaggerated the perspective and added a couple more candle elements to make it clear. Also changed up my depth on the cloud. Is this looking close to good?

>>271700
looks much better, the highlights that are on the cloud itself look v good, nice job.

>>271700
looks cool, the wick does not really fit the style however...

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>>271728
Thanks for that eye and tip! Fixed the wick, and filled the "Atomic" by bulging in the cloud and removing some cloud-marks.

>>271748
Now we're talking. Keep polishing your curves up, but this is looking tight. You probably already do this, but save this as a duplicate file and don't touch it. I do that in case I've got something really nice, and I end up Frankenstein-ing it all to hell during revision.