Critique thread, Fusca Sapequinha is my band

>>271307
is it a 1970's hippie band?

>>271311
yep

the type is cool

check the outlines of the car lights.
also to make it look more vintage you could choose some textures. maybe some grungy stuff

The over all look is pretty nice for what type of band you said you had, I think the text colours are a little dark, with the black outline and the dark colour it makes all the letters blend together at a distance.

you want that name highlighted, or do you want the lick bus to catch attention?

i'd rather see the bus lick some crazy shit, and the text be ON the bus or some shit, like Scooby Doo Mystery Machine.

>>271307
Pretty funky, the first think that comes to my mind is a ska/funk/reggae/psychodelic band that sings about fun, drugs and good life.

The typography looks like a 15 year old first attempt at graffiti.

That could use work imo.

>>272480
This

Speaking as a designer that came from a graffiti background. 'Q' looks a lot like an 'R'. Take a look at the type the Fillmore used to use and maybe tweak to look more graffiti like if you really want that style