Assigment

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>>270544
Even though they're cigarettes and such they still try to have attractive sleek packaging sort of mimicking the old decorated cigar boxes in a way. Your design isn't very appealing and the thick black lines especially so.

You may just want to restart from scratch and go with something a bit more appealing and less generic.

Also that colour isn't very nice on a cigarette package and I'd almost think I'm buying seeds for a new Apple tree or whatever.

Good luck OP!

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>>270546
I know the packaging isn't great, the think lines on the bottom are how the packaging is done around here tho so I reckoned to stay as true to the original. (see pic)

Do you have any idea how I could make them more appealing? Certain styles or effects that would help achieve that? I've got no formal training (which is why I'm applying for this college).

I will look into the colors as well, I used the bank's main color but I could play around with it a bit. Just saying these things to explain my reasoning (and so you know where I'm coming from).

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it anon!

>>270549
You should also look into the correct proportions of a cigarette package, it helps

>>270553
Thanks, it does help a lot! Will post an update in a bit.

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>>270544
You can try to make something that looks more like this.

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>>270561
Yes, but it's not the concept that I'm having difficulty with, it's the execution of it.

What does /gd/ think of this? Using the correct proportions (67mm x 87mm x 23mm)

>>270564
I'm not sure that this concept would get you into college (fellow dutch student).. I kind of like the idea but it depends on what study you're applying for (art/media/design?). So I guess you could share that so that we could judge your work better..

>>270606
Also, work on the text. It's a bit like you're trying too hard to blame the bankers for a lot of things and I'm not sure how good that illuminati stuff works with teachers at an university..

>>270607
aaaand your font is too thin

>>270567
>>270564
>>270544
Don't use hairline fonts, they look like shit in most cases, especially on print.