This isn't your average ms paint work, kiddo.
In fact, it got me a contract for 10 more artworks at 10,000 minimum each.
But stay mad and do your flat shadow designs for Indian app developers.
Not only it isn't "ok" in terms of art design, but it's also extremely poorly made in terms of basic technics. I mean cmon, it looks like you just put a photo in some shitty Chinese photo filter app.
i like how you ask for our opinion, then proceed to lash out when we tell you it's complete shit.
I don't believe you.
Also, if you're just going to slap a mapping filter on something, at least use a picture of a high enough resolution that it doesn't get completely wrecked by a bit of stretching.