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Please critique my logo. I am brand new to the graphic design

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Please critique my logo. I am brand new to the graphic design field and am designing a logo for a microbrewery that is called Molon Poto (Come and Drink It), which is a play of words on Molon Labe (Came and Take It).
Most everything is Greek based but I am in severe need of critique. Thank you.
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not too bad, could look better with better image qaulity
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here some advice
- don't use color until the design is almost finished.
- never include the name on the logotype
- for logos always use a vector software
- never use strokes around logos unless it's something related to sports
- research the history of the company (write down everything important)
- research the competition company's logos
- once you think you're on the right path download some mockups (graphic burger, vk, etc) and show it to the client for opinions.

pic is 3 mins in photoshop editing your pics. the concepts aren't that bad but the execution is very amateur-ish.

also read this
https://u.teknik.io/n5DF7.pdf
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>>268332
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>>268324
MOLON ΡΩΤΟ
in greek this would be read like
Molon roto.

Keep the Μολών Ποτό.
And don't overdo it with the spartan helmet and wheats.
I would think keeping the jug, and maybe a single strand of wheat going on top of it with the name under the strand would be nice.
Black jug, golden-yellowish wheat/brand name
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>>268333
Now we're talking
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Thes poli duleia akoma
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>>268333
you made it worse
you need to simplify this shit more
why is molon small caps and poto lowercase?
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>>268555
not op i'm >>268332 i made that within a couple of mins in ps as an example of different variations for the pics op posted. and i don't even know what molon or poto means.
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