Hey guys Im making a ad to magazine. well its just fun project

Looks nice, but it's very generic. Advertising is about getting something into people's minds. There is nothing that sticks with me here. Also, it isn't 100% clear that it is an energy drink you're selling. At a glance it looks like an ad for motor oil. It should come across as a refreshing drink, not something that makes you think of exhaust fumes.

>>260220
maybe some copy/text would help?

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>>260209
One of the things i keep coming back to gd is to see stuff like this. I've been trying to come up with different ideas to make it better and one thing that's really bothering me is the type/logo "horse-power" it shouldn't really be that big and it shouldn't be touching the right border (also it doesn't need those gradient clean white would make it better).
>>260222
no because the images aren't that interesting. try to learn better composition & photo-manipulation techniques (that blending look really cheap)

Perhaps make the background black and white.

You could play off the horse part and the fact the energy drinks taste literally like horse piss

Needs more horses though