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Kind of at a halt with this design. It's for a podcast type thing called Heart 2 Heart. Any ideas on how I can improve this?
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>>254490
Don't like the typeface senpai.
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Note to consider.
>>254494
This, really. None of the text works, imo.
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>>254490
the colors don't go well with the heart shape, the 2 seems to big and distracting, why type two times heart? the stroke is a mess. start over maybe do some drawings first.
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>>254521
this is actually a really cleaver idea. i suggest you do something with this OP
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still REALLY early on, but before i go any further, does it look too much like the 2 is shitting out the other heart??
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>>254850
leave that idea. it will always look wrong in weight etc.
stick to your first try and keep it symetric.
i have tried something too.
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>>254490
H2
Do it like the water molecule.
We'll discuss payment later.
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>>254866
Well that's not embarrassing or anything.
H2
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>>254850
how about the shadow is a filled heart (with perspective) and the number "2" put inside the empty heart?
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